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2024-2025学年上学期广东省潮州市高二年级期末试题
应用文二次学案教师版
【真题再现】
假定你是李华,计划今年寒假和笔友Tom去杭州西湖游玩,但现在因故不得不取消这一计划。请你给Tom写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示歉意;
2. 说明原因;
3. 期待回复。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答卷的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom,
I hope this letter finds you well.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【框架搭建】
首段:表达歉意 + 明确取消计划(约 25 词)
首句:承接开头问候,直接表达深切歉意(用 “deepest apologies” 强化诚意);
第二句:明确告知核心信息(无法按计划寒假同游杭州西湖),不绕弯子,让对方快速知晓重点。
正文:说明取消原因 + 强调友谊(约 40 词)
层次 1:原因阐述(具体合理,有说服力)
核心原因:被选中代表学校参加比赛,需大量准备和练习;
补充说明:强调机会的稀缺性(“once-in-a-lifetime opportunity”),让对方理解决策的必要性。
层次 2:情感共鸣(避免让对方觉得被忽视)
表达对友谊的重视(“Your friendship means a lot to me”);
传递内心遗憾(“with a heavy heart”),体现真诚态度,缓解对方可能的不快。
尾段:提议未来计划 + 期待回复(约 15 词)
首句:表达希望未来重启计划的意愿,给对方积极预期;
收尾句:用常用邮件结尾表达(“Looking forward to hearing from you soon”),礼貌且自然。
【邮件核心表达】
1. 致歉与取消计划
I’m writing to offer my deepest apologies for canceling our planned trip to West Lake. 我写信是为取消我们计划好的西湖之行,表达最深切的歉意。
Unfortunately, I can’t visit Hangzhou with you this winter vacation as we agreed. 很遗憾,我无法按约定在今年寒假和你同游杭州。
I feel terrible about breaking our plan, but something unexpected has come up. 打破约定我深感愧疚,但突发了一件事。
2. 说明原因
I’ve been selected to represent our school in a contest, which requires lots of preparation. 我被选中代表学校参加一场比赛,这需要大量准备。
It’s a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity that I can’t miss. 这是一个千载难逢的机会,我不能错过。
The contest will take up most of my winter vacation, leaving no time for our trip. 比赛会占据我寒假的大部分时间,没时间进行我们的旅行了。
3. 强调友谊与期待未来
Your friendship is extremely important to me, and I hate to let you down. 你的友谊对我至关重要,我不想让你失望。
I sincerely hope we can reschedule our trip to West Lake sometime later. 我真诚希望我们能改期,之后再去西湖游玩。
Looking forward to your reply and hoping you can understand my situation. 期待你的回复,希望你能理解我的处境。
【话题词汇】
apologize - 道歉
deepest apologies - 深切歉意
cancel - 取消
planned trip - 计划好的旅行
West Lake - 西湖
Hangzhou - 杭州
winter vacation - 寒假
represent - 代表
contest - 比赛
preparation - 准备
practice - 练习
once-in-a-lifetime - 千载难逢的
opportunity - 机会
friendship - 友谊
mean a lot - 意义重大
heavy heart - 沉重的心情
unexpected - 意外的
reschedule - 重新安排
resume the plan - 重启计划
situation - 处境
understand - 理解
disappointment - 失望
regret - 遗憾
miss - 错过
take up time - 占用时间
write to - 写信给
hear from - 收到…… 的来信
agree - 约定
break the plan - 打破计划
sincere - 真诚的
【高频表达式 + 话题词汇整合】
1. I hope this letter finds you well. I’m writing to express my deepest apologies for canceling our winter vacation trip to West Lake. (希望你一切安好。我写信是为取消我们寒假的西湖之行,表达最深切的歉意。)
2. Unfortunately, I can’t fulfill our plan to visit Hangzhou together as something unexpected has happened. (很遗憾,由于突发状况,我无法兑现和你同游杭州的约定。)
3. I’ve been chosen to represent our school in a contest, which needs plenty of preparations and daily practice. (我被选中代表学校参加一场比赛,这需要大量准备和日常练习。)
4. It’s a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity for me, so I have to prioritize it. (这对我来说是千载难逢的机会,所以我必须优先考虑它。)
5. Your friendship means a lot to me, and I feel really guilty about letting you down. (你的友谊对我意义重大,让你失望我深感愧疚。)
6. I share this news with a heavy heart, knowing how much we were both looking forward to the trip. (我怀着沉重的心情告诉你这个消息,知道我们都对这次旅行充满期待。)
7. I sincerely hope we can reschedule our trip to West Lake when we both have free time. (我真诚希望我们能在双方都有空时,重新安排西湖之行。)
8. Please understand my situation and accept my sincere apologies. (请理解我的处境,接受我真诚的道歉。)
9. The contest will occupy most of my winter vacation, leaving me no time for our planned journey. (比赛会占据我寒假的大部分时间,让我没时间进行我们计划好的旅行。)
10. Looking forward to your reply and hoping our friendship won’t be affected by this. (期待你的回复,希望我们的友谊不会因此受到影响。)
【参考范文】
Dear Tom,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to express my deepest apologies for not being able to visit West Lake in Hangzhou with you this winter vacation as we have planned.
The reason for this unexpected turn of events is that I have been selected to participate in a contest on behalf of our school, which requires plenty of preparations and practice. This is a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity for me and I hope you can support my decision. Your friendship means a lot to me, and it is with a heavy heart that I share this news.
However, I do hope that we can resume our plan in the future. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
中文翻译
亲爱的汤姆:
希望你一切安好。我写信是为了表达我最深切的歉意,我无法按我们的计划,在今年寒假和你一起去杭州西湖游玩了。
这个突发状况的原因是,我被选中代表学校参加一场比赛,这需要大量的准备和练习。对我来说,这是一个千载难逢的机会,希望你能支持我的决定。你的友谊对我意义重大,我怀着沉重的心情告诉你这个消息。
不过,我真心希望我们未来能重启这个计划。期待早日收到你的回复。
此致,
李华
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2024-2025学年上学期广东省潮州市高二年级期末试题
应用文二次学案学生版
【真题再现】
假定你是李华,计划今年寒假和笔友Tom去杭州西湖游玩,但现在因故不得不取消这一计划。请你给Tom写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示歉意;
2. 说明原因;
3. 期待回复。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答卷的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom,
I hope this letter finds you well.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【框架搭建】
首段
表达歉意:
明确取消计划:
正文
说明取消原因:
强调友谊:
末段
提议未来计划:
期待回复:
【邮件核心表达】
1. 致歉与取消计划
I’m writing to offer my deepest apologies for canceling our planned trip to West Lake. 我写信是为取消我们计划好的西湖之行,表达最深切的歉意。
Unfortunately, I can’t visit Hangzhou with you this winter vacation as we agreed. 很遗憾,我无法按约定在今年寒假和你同游杭州。
I feel terrible about breaking our plan, but something unexpected has come up. 打破约定我深感愧疚,但突发了一件事。
2. 说明原因
I’ve been selected to represent our school in a contest, which requires lots of preparation. 我被选中代表学校参加一场比赛,这需要大量准备。
It’s a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity that I can’t miss. 这是一个千载难逢的机会,我不能错过。
The contest will take up most of my winter vacation, leaving no time for our trip. 比赛会占据我寒假的大部分时间,没时间进行我们的旅行了。
3. 强调友谊与期待未来
Your friendship is extremely important to me, and I hate to let you down. 你的友谊对我至关重要,我不想让你失望。
I sincerely hope we can reschedule our trip to West Lake sometime later. 我真诚希望我们能改期,之后再去西湖游玩。
Looking forward to your reply and hoping you can understand my situation. 期待你的回复,希望你能理解我的处境。
【话题词汇】
道歉
真诚的
深切歉意
打破计划
取消
约定
计划好的旅行
收到...的来信
西湖
写信给
杭州
占用时间
寒假
错过
代表
遗憾
比赛
失望
准备
理解
练习
处境
千载难逢的
重启计划
机会
重新安排
友谊
意外的
意义重大的
沉重的心情
【高频表达式 + 话题词汇整合】
1. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (希望你一切安好。我写信是为取消我们寒假的西湖之行,表达最深切的歉意。)
2. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. (很遗憾,由于突发状况,我无法兑现和你同游杭州的约定。)
3. _______________________________________________________________________________. (我被选中代表学校参加一场比赛,这需要大量准备和日常练习。)
4. ______________________________________________________________________________. (这对我来说是千载难逢的机会,所以我必须优先考虑它。)
5. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. (你的友谊对我意义重大,让你失望我深感愧疚。)
6. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. (我怀着沉重的心情告诉你这个消息,知道我们都对这次旅行充满期待。)
7. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. (我真诚希望我们能在双方都有空时,重新安排西湖之行。)
8. _____________________________________________________________________________. (请理解我的处境,接受我真诚的道歉。)
9. _____________________________________________________________________________. (比赛会占据我寒假的大部分时间,让我没时间进行我们计划好的旅行。)
10. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. (期待你的回复,希望我们的友谊不会因此受到影响。)
【参考范文】
Dear Tom,
I hope this letter ______________. I am writing ____________ my deepest apologies for not being able to visit West Lake in Hangzhou with you this winter vacation ___________________.
The reason for this _________________ of events is that I have _______________ to _____________ a contest ______________ our school, which ___________ plenty of preparations and practice. This is a _________________ opportunity for me and I hope you can support my decision. Your friendship _______________ to me, and it is __________________ that I share this news.
However, I do hope that we can ____________ our plan in the future. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
中文翻译
亲爱的汤姆:
希望你一切安好。我写信是为了表达我最深切的歉意,我无法按我们的计划,在今年寒假和你一起去杭州西湖游玩了。
这个突发状况的原因是,我被选中代表学校参加一场比赛,这需要大量的准备和练习。对我来说,这是一个千载难逢的机会,希望你能支持我的决定。你的友谊对我意义重大,我怀着沉重的心情告诉你这个消息。
不过,我真心希望我们未来能重启这个计划。期待早日收到你的回复。
此致,
李华
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