题型25 读后续写话题之家庭亲情类（题型专练）（全国通用）2026年高考英语二轮复习讲练测

题型25 读后续写话题之家庭亲情类目录 第一部分 题型解码 高屋建瓴，掌握全局 第二部分 考向破译 微观解剖，精细教学 典例引领 方法透视 变式演练 考向01 破冰·理解之桥 考向02换位·担当之责 考向03 求同·共生之智 第三部分 综合巩固 整合应用，模拟实战 主题解读 家庭亲情类故事是高考读后续写的核心题材之一。与侧重于“完善自我”的个人成长类故事不同，亲情类故事的内核在于 “润滑关系” ：它描绘一个年轻的心灵，如何通过一个关键的家庭生活事件，打破陈旧的情感模式，完成从“自我”到“我们”的视角转换，最终实现家庭情感联结的深化、修复或升华。 这类故事万变不离其宗，通常遵循一个从“隔阂”到“联结”的经典叙事弧光： 1. 关系的常态与裂隙：故事始于一种家庭关系的非常态。这可能表现为情感上的疏离（如叛逆、误解）、责任上的失衡（如一味索取），或观念上的冲突（如代际差异）。这种裂隙构成了故事的情感张力起点。 2. 事件的触发与观察：一个具体的家庭日常事件（如一次意外的发现、一场突然的困难、一次激烈的争执）打破平静。这个事件的核心作用，是迫使或促使主人公真正去观察、关注家人的状态，而不再视其为背景。 3. 情感的转折与行动：这是续写的核心。重点在于刻画主人公 “内心认知” 的转折（如从抱怨到心疼，从忽视到理解）以及随之而来的、指向家人的具体行动（如一次主动的沟通、一个笨拙的帮助、一份用心的礼物）。行动是内在情感变化的外在证明。 4. 联结的重建与升华：故事结尾，问题或许未必完全解决，但家庭成员间的情感距离被拉近，理解与爱以新的方式流动。主人公收获的并非个人奖赏，而是一种更宝贵的关系资产：如更深厚的 信任、更有效的沟通方式，或对“家”之含义的深刻体悟。 常见情节&主题句式 考向01 破冰·理解之桥 一、 常见情节与主题归纳 这类故事的核心情节是：主人公因习惯、叛逆或年龄代沟，长期忽视或误解家人的情感与付出，处于一种情感上的“漠视”或“隔阂”状态。后通过一个偶然发现的关键细节或事件，内心受到强烈冲击，从而真正“看见”并理解了家人的处境与深爱，最终主动打破坚冰，实现情感的共鸣与靠近。 常见情节： 1. 发现沉默的付出：无意间看到父亲深夜加班疲惫的背影、母亲记账本上为自己节省的开销、祖父母珍藏的自己儿时的旧物。 2. 重读“严厉”的深意：因学业冲突后，发现老师发给家长的鼓励短信；在叛逆顶嘴后，目睹母亲偷偷流泪的瞬间。 3. 领悟“唠叨”的牵挂：离家住校或远行时，在某个孤独瞬间，突然理解了那些日常叮嘱背后的牵挂与爱。 4. 体验父母的角色：短暂承担家庭责任（如照顾弟妹、料理一日三餐），亲身体会到其中的繁琐与辛劳。 核心主题：故事旨在刻画从 “自我中心”到“换位思考” 的情感飞跃，核心是领悟理解、感恩与共情的真谛。成长的标志不是个人取得了什么成就，而是内心能够装下对他人的体察与关怀，认识到爱常藏在无声的细节中。 二、 续写思路：聚焦“看见”与“心桥” 构思此类故事，关键在于细腻、可信地呈现主人公认知被颠覆的瞬间及后续的情感转变。可遵循以下三步： 第一步：定位“情感冰点”与“固化认知” 首先，明确原文中主人公与家人之间的具体隔阂是什么。是认为父亲冷漠不苟言笑？是觉得母亲唠叨且不理解自己？还是将祖辈的节俭视为过时？同时，要明确主人公在此认知下的习惯性行为，如回避交流、不耐烦的回应、漠不关心等。 第二步：设计“触发细节”与“内心地震”——这是续写的灵魂。 1. 触发细节具体化、感官化：这个细节必须是一个主人公亲眼所见、亲耳所闻或亲身触碰的具体事物，而非抽象说教。例如： 视觉：父亲鬓角的白发、母亲手上新增的裂口、家人为你留着一盏灯的窗口。 听觉：深夜父母压低声音的谈话、一声无奈的叹息。 触觉：接过父亲递来的生活费时，碰到他粗糙的手掌。 物品：一本旧的日记、一张褪色的全家福、一份为你保留的礼物。 2. 内心挣扎过程化：这是描写的重点。不能直接跳到“我懂了”，要详细刻画从震惊、怀疑、到回忆串联、再到愧疚与顿悟的完整心理链条。例如：“我从未注意到……”→“难道一直以来我都……”→“那些我曾抱怨的瞬间，原来都是……” 第三步：落实“破冰行动”与“感悟升华” 1. 行动是理解的证明：描写主人公基于新认知做出的具体、细微且充满情感的行动。这可能不是一个隆重的道歉，而可能是一句迟疑的关心、一次主动的帮忙、一个笨拙的拥抱，或一份用心的小礼物。行动虽小，但需与之前的“冷漠”形成鲜明对比。 2. 感悟要点明“关系”的转变：结尾的升华应强调关系的修复与升温。主人公领悟到，真正的理解让“家”的感觉变得更加真实和温暖。可以用环境描写烘托此氛围，如“阳光洒进房间，曾经无形的隔阂似乎也随之消融”。 1、 必备优秀句式 1. 句式用途：描写不经意间注意到那个颠覆性细节的瞬间。 句型结构：For the first time, I really noticed that ... 例句：For the first time, I really noticed the deep wrinkles around my father's eyes and the slight tremble in his hands as he handed me the book. 翻译：我第一次真正注意到父亲眼角的深深皱纹，以及他把书递给我时，手上那轻微的颤抖。 2. 句式用途：刻画回忆涌现，将往日片段重新解读时的愧疚感。 句型结构：A flood of memories rushed back, each one now appearing in a completely different light. 例句：A flood of memories rushed back, each one now appearing in a completely different light — her early mornings, her constant reminders, all were silent proofs of her endless love. 翻译：记忆如潮水般涌回，每一段如今都显得完全不同——她清晨的忙碌，她不停的叮嘱，原来都是她无尽之爱的无声证明。 3. 句式用途：表达内心坚冰消融，情感决堤的瞬间。 句型结构：Something inside me melted, and all ……. I had been holding onto just washed away. 例句：Something inside me melted, and all the indifference I had been holding onto just washed away, replaced by an overwhelming urge to hug her. 翻译：我内心的某些东西融化了，所有我曾坚持的冷漠都被冲刷殆尽，取而代之的是一种想拥抱她的强烈冲动。 4. 句式用途：描写基于理解所采取的、尝试性破冰的细微行动。 句型结构：With a heart full of mixed emotions, I found myself + doing (动词-ing)... 例句：With a heart full of mixed emotions, I found myself walking into the kitchen and offering, in a voice barely above a whisper, “Mom, let me help with the dishes.” 翻译：怀着百感交集的心情，我不知不觉地走进厨房，用几乎细不可闻的声音提议道：“妈，让我来洗碗吧。” 5. 句式用途：升华主题，点明“理解”对关系的重新定义。 句型结构：It was at that moment that I fully understood that love isn't always loud; sometimes, it's the silent language that speaks the loudest in our hearts. 例句：It was at that moment that I fully understood that …..; sometimes, it's……... 翻译：正是在那一刻，我完全明白了，爱不总是喧哗的；有时，无声的语言在我们心中最为响亮。 6. 句式用途：用环境描写映衬关系破冰后温暖、和谐的氛围。 句型结构：The early sunlight streaming in, the whole family was bathed in a newfound warmth and understanding. 例句：The early sunlight streaming in, the whole family was bathed in a newfound warmth and understanding. 翻译：清晨的阳光洒进来，全家人都沐浴在一种崭新的温暖与理解之中。 考向02 换位·担当之责 一、 常见情节与主题归纳 这类故事的核心情节是：主人公长期习惯于被家人呵护、视为重心，在某种触发下（如目睹家人的脆弱、家庭突逢变化），内心产生强烈震动，角色认知发生根本转变。从被动的“受庇者”和“索取者”，主动尝试为家庭分担压力、承担责任，在笨拙但真诚的实践中，完成个人成长与家庭责任的对接。 常见情节： 1. 危机下的主动扛起：家庭突遇经济压力、主要照顾者（如父母一方）生病或受伤，主人公主动承担家务、照顾弟妹、甚至尝试寻找兼职。 2. 岁月中的自觉接力：注意到父母日渐增多的白发、放缓的脚步或力不从心的瞬间，主人公开始默默接手以往由父母操劳的重活、琐事。 3. 为承诺的自我挑战：为了兑现对家人的一个重要承诺（如“考上好大学”、“学会这项技能”），挑战自己原本畏惧或能力不及的事情，动力源于让家人欣慰。 4. 修复过失的责任承担：因自己的过失给家庭带来麻烦或损失（如损坏贵重物品），不是逃避，而是想方设法通过自己的努力进行弥补。 核心主题：故事旨在刻画从 “被爱”到“去爱”、从 “接受”到“给予” 的角色升华，核心是体悟责任、牺牲与家族纽带的真谛。成长的标志是肩膀能扛起重量，内心能从家庭视角思考问题，懂得爱不仅是享受温暖，更是创造温暖。 二、 续写思路：聚焦“触发”与“扛起” 构思此类故事，关键在于将“担当”化为一系列具体、甚至略显笨拙的行动，并展现其中真实的心理重量。可遵循以下三步： 第一步：定位“依赖常态”与“触发情境” 首先，明确原文中主人公所处的 “被照顾者”舒适区是什么（如：只需专心学习、家务从不沾手、凡事有父母兜底）。然后，精准定位打破这种常态的具体情境：是外部危机（如父亲扭伤腰），还是一个让父母显露出疲态与脆弱的瞬间（如母亲在沙发上睡着）？这是角色转换的起点。 第二步：描绘“心理转向”与“行动尝试”——这是续写的核心。 1. 心理转向具体化：描写主人公从 “震惊/心疼”到“愧疚/思考”再到“决心行动” 的完整心理链条。重点不是抽象地“想担当”，而是具体地“想做什么来分担”。例如：“看到妈妈揉着酸痛的肩膀，一个念头击中了我：如果我能……是不是就能……” 2. 行动尝试过程化、波折化：这是重中之重。必须详细描写主人公生疏、吃力甚至遭遇挫败的行动过程。 细节要真实：第一次做饭的手忙脚乱、照顾哭闹弟妹的无措、兼职工作中的委屈与疲惫。 波折要合理：把菜炒糊、搞砸任务被批评、因兼顾责任而影响学业产生焦虑。正是这些“不容易”，才让“担当”显得真实可贵。 第三步：展现“成长印记”与“关系升华” 1. 成长体现在“能力”与“心态”：结局不必是问题被完美解决。成长应体现在：主人公掌握了新技能，更重要的是，他/她对“责任”二字有了切肤之感，理解了父母平日的付出。可以描写一个对比细节，如“曾经觉得轻飘飘的‘辛苦’二字，如今有了沉甸甸的重量”。 2. 升华要点明“共同体”意识：主人公领悟到，家是一个需要所有成员共同支撑的“我们”，而自己已成为其中有力的一份子。家庭关系从单向呵护，升级为双向扶持。 三、 必备优秀句式 1. 句式用途：描写目睹家人困境，内心受到冲击并决心改变的瞬间。 句型结构：Looking at ..., a strong sense of responsibility surged within me, and I knew …….. 例句：Looking at my mother's exhausted face as she slept on the couch, a strong sense of responsibility surged within me, and I knew I had to do something to lighten her burden. 翻译：看着母亲在沙发上睡着时疲惫的脸庞，一股强烈的责任感在我心中涌起，我知道我必须做点什么来减轻她的负担。 2. 句式用途：刻画初次尝试承担责任时的笨拙与决心。 句型结构：With clumsy but determined hands, I set about + doing... 例句：With clumsy but determined hands, I set about preparing dinner, following the recipe on my phone with intense concentration. 翻译：我用一双笨拙但坚定的手，开始准备晚餐，全神贯注地照着手机上的菜谱操作。 3. 句式用途：描写在担当过程中遇到挫折、感到身心俱疲的时刻。 句型结构：There were moments when ..., and I felt like giving up. But the thought of ... kept me going. 例句：There were moments when the baby wouldn't stop crying and my homework piled up, and I felt like giving up. But the thought of my mother's trusting smile kept me going. 翻译：有些时刻，宝宝哭闹不止，我的作业堆积如山，我几乎想要放弃。但一想到母亲信任的微笑，我就又坚持了下去。 4. 句式用途：表达通过亲身经历，真正理解了家人往日辛苦后的深刻感悟。 句型结构：Only after ... did I begin to understand the true meaning of ..., and appreciate how much ... had been doing for us. 例句：Only after standing in the kitchen for three hours did I begin to understand the true meaning of “a home-cooked meal”, and appreciate how much my mother had been doing for us day after day. 翻译：只有在厨房站了三个小时后，我才开始明白“一顿家常便饭”的真正含义，也才体会到母亲日复一日为我们付出了多少。 5. 句式用途：升华主题，点明“担当”对自我成长与家庭意义的重新定义。 句型结构：This experience taught me that……..; it's about ……... 例句：This experience taught me that growing up isn't just about getting taller; it's about your shoulders becoming strong enough to share the weight of the family. 翻译：这段经历让我明白，成长不仅仅是长高，更是让你的肩膀变得足够强壮，能够分担家庭的重量。 6. 句式用途：描写担当行动后，家人认可或关系变得紧密的温暖瞬间。 句型结构：When ... placed a hand on my shoulder and said, “...”, I felt a warmth that no words could describe. 例句：When my father placed a hand on my shoulder and said, “Son, you've really helped out,” I felt a warmth that no words could describe. 翻译：当父亲把手放在我的肩上说：“儿子，你真的帮上大忙了。”时，我感到一种难以言喻的温暖。 考向03 求同·共生之智 一、常见情节与主题归纳 这类故事的核心情节是：主人公与家人因价值观、生活方式或人生重大选择产生根本性的分歧与冲突，双方各执己见，关系陷入僵局。冲突并非源于误解或缺乏爱，而是源于时代、阅历或个人追求的不同。故事最终并非以一方说服另一方告终，而是主人公通过反思，领悟到爱的更高形式是尊重差异、接纳不完美，从而找到在分歧中共存、在爱中和解的智慧，实现关系的动态平衡与升华。 常见情节： 1．选择之争：在文理分科、大学专业、职业道路或婚姻对象等重大人生选择上，与父母的期望发生激烈冲突。 2. 观念之隙：因消费观念（节俭vs时尚）、娱乐方式（传统vs新兴）、审美或生活方式的不同而产生日常摩擦与互不理解。 3. 习惯之扰：无法忍受家人的生活习惯（如父亲囤积旧物、祖辈的过度节俭），将其视为需要“纠正”的问题。 4. 重组家庭的磨合：与继父母、新出生的弟妹因情感份额、家庭规则调整而产生隔阂与抗拒。 核心主题：故事旨在超越简单的“对错”之争，刻画从 “对抗”与“改造” 到 “尊重”与“共存” 的心智成熟，核心是领悟包容、边界与爱的本质。成长的标志是认识到家人是彼此独立的个体，而家的凝聚力正在于能容纳这些差异，实现“和而不同”。 二、 续写思路：聚焦“冲突”与“和解智慧” 构思此类故事，关键在于不简化冲突，也不提供“万能解药”，而是描绘一条通向情感共鸣的“第三条道路”。可遵循以下三步： 第一步：定位“冲突核心”与“情感困局” 首先，明确原文中矛盾的具体焦点是什么？是关乎未来的“人生选择”，还是关乎当下的“生活方式”？其次，明确双方（尤其是主人公）的核心诉求与情感软肋。例如，主人公坚持选艺术，诉求是“自我实现”，软肋是“怕被否定价值”；父母坚持选理科，诉求是“孩子未来安稳”，软肋是“怕孩子吃苦”。冲突是表层，深层是爱的不同表达方式在碰撞。 第二步：设计“反思契机”与“认知升维”——这是续写的关键。 1. 契机需超越输赢：触发反思的不应是对方“认错”，而应是一个让主人公跳出自身立场，看到对方处境或爱之本源的契机。例如： 外部参照：看到其他家庭的类似矛盾与悲剧，或看到他人对自家亲情的羡慕。 历史重现：发现父母年轻时也曾为梦想抗争的旧物，理解他们的选择有其时代局限性。 爱的回溯：在激烈争吵后，发现对方仍默默做着关爱自己的小事（如热着饭菜、悄悄查资料）。 2. 升维在于“理解因由，未必认同选择”：反思的重点不是“他们是对的”，而是 “我理解了他们的恐惧、他们的爱从何而来” 。认知从“你们为什么不支持我？”升维为“我看到了你们为什么这样坚持，这背后同样是爱，只是形式不同。” 第三步：落实“和解行动”与“共生领悟” 1. 行动是寻求“最大公约数”：和解行动不是放弃自我，而是主动沟通，寻求双方都能接受的“中间路径”。例如，不是放弃艺术，而是提出“我先打好文化课基础，同时用假期精进画技证明自己”；不是要求父亲改变习惯，而是为自己划定一个“不干涉区”，并为他整理出安全的储物空间。 2. 领悟要点明“爱的容器”：最终的升华应认识到，家之所以为家，就在于它能作为一个包容差异的容器。真正的强大不是消除差异，而是在知晓差异后，依然选择用爱联结。关系从“要求一致”的紧绷，走向 “尊重不同”的松弛与深厚。 三、 必备优秀句式 1. 句式用途：描写因根本观念不同而产生的激烈内心冲突与痛苦。 句型结构：A fierce battle raged inside me between my desire for ... and my fear of hurting ... 例句：A fierce battle raged inside me between my desire for my own future and my fear of hurting my parents' deepest hopes. 翻译：一场激烈的战争在我内心爆发，一边是我对自己未来的渴望，另一边是我对伤害父母最深期望的恐惧。 2. 句式用途：刻画跳出自我视角，开始理解对方立场根源的瞬间。 句型结构：It suddenly dawned on me that behind their stubborn opposition lay not a desire to control, but a deep-seated fear for ... 例句：It suddenly dawned on me that behind their stubborn opposition lay not a desire to control, but a deep-seated fear for my stability in an uncertain world. 翻译：我突然意识到，他们固执反对的背后，并非控制欲，而是对这个不确定的世界里我能否安稳生活的深深担忧。 3. 句式用途：表达在冲突后放下“输赢执念”，准备寻求沟通的内心转变。 句型结构：I realized this wasn't a war to be won, but a bridge to be built. The first step had to be mine. 例句：I realized this wasn't a war to be won, but a bridge to be built. The first step had to be mine. 翻译：我意识到这不是一场要打赢的战争，而是一座需要搭建的桥梁。第一步必须由我迈出。 4. 句式用途：描写提出折中方案、寻求共识的主动沟通。 句型结构：Taking a deep breath, I said, “I understand why you... Could we perhaps find a middle ground where I... while also...?” 例句：Taking a deep breath, I said, “I understand why you worry. Could we perhaps find a middle ground where I pursue this major, while also minoring in a more practical field you suggest?” 翻译：我深吸一口气，说道：“我理解你们的担忧。我们能否找到一个折中方案，让我攻读这个专业，同时辅修一个你们建议的更实用的领域？” 5. 句式用途：升华主题，点明“共生”智慧对家庭关系的重新定义。 句型结构：That day, I learned that the strongest family bonds are not those without differences, but those that can stretch and hold firm even when we pull in different directions. 例句：That day, I learned that the strongest family bonds are not those without differences, but those that can stretch and hold firm even when we pull in different directions. 翻译：那天我懂得了，最牢固的家庭纽带并非毫无差异，而是即使我们朝向不同方向用力，它也能延展并牢牢维系。 6. 句式用途：描绘达成谅解后，一种更成熟、更轻松的家庭氛围。 句型结构：The air in the room felt …….now, not because…….., but because ……….. 例句：The air in the room felt clearer now, not because the problem had vanished, but because we had finally made room for each other's truths to coexist. 翻译：房间里的空气似乎清新了，不是因为问题消失了，而是因为我们终于为彼此的真实腾出了共存的空间。 考向01 破冰·理解之桥 【例1-1】( 2026届浙江省嘉兴市高三上学期一模英语试题)Olly Powell’s seventh birthday wish to become invisible came true a week later with the birth of his sister, Lily. Initially, the power felt like a brilliant secret. He could slip into the kitchen for an extra biscuit unnoticed, and he loved listening from the hallway as his parents chatted amusedly about “that little mouse”. It was magic! However, the joy was gone when Lily finally came home from the hospital. The reality was nothing like he had expected. Now, he often stood invisible in the hall. His request for swimming lessons was gently declined by his parents, who were busy with Lily. Being a big brother was the worst thing in the world. A deep sense of being unseen settled in his heart. Feeling left out, he made a decision. “I bet they’d love to see me at school,” he thought. He struggled to open the front door and stepped outside. The street was quiet in the morning. He walked on, each step heavy with a desperate, unspoken hope that someone would finally see him and call him back. His journey ended when a sharp bark from Mrs. Cooper’s little dog, Teddy, made him look up. “Olly? You aren’t here on your own, are you?” Mrs. Cooper called out, her kind face filled with concern. She led him gently into her garden and phoned his father — who apologised for being so tied up with the new baby. To pass the time while waiting, Mrs. Cooper showed Olly the incubator (孵化器) where several eggs were kept. When he pointed out a fine crack (裂缝) on one of them, she explained it was a promising sign. Noticing Teddy waiting patiently by the door, she added softly that the eggs currently required a great deal of her attention — much like Lily — but Teddy understood he was still her good boy. Just then, a faint sound came from the cracked shell. Olly leaned in, then looked up at Mrs. Cooper and Teddy, and for the first time all morning he did not feel quite so alone. 注意： (1) 续写词数应为150左右; (2) 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Minutes later, Dad arrived, relieved to see Olly safe and sound. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Back home, Mum stood waiting with Lily asleep in her arms. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Paragraph 1: Minutes later, Dad arrived, relieved to see Olly safe and sound. He knelt down and pulled Olly into a tight hug. “I’m so sorry I’ve been too busy with Lily to notice how you feel,” Dad said softly. On the way home, Dad listened carefully as Olly talked about the eggs and Teddy. Dad nodded and said, “You’re right — Teddy’s still important, just like you. Being a big brother doesn’t mean you’re unseen.” Olly felt a warm glow in his heart as he held Dad’s hand. Paragraph 2: Back home, Mum stood waiting with Lily asleep in her arms. She smiled and walked over to hug Olly. “Mrs. Cooper told us about the egg,” Mum said. She led Olly to the sofa and placed Lily gently in his arms. Olly froze at first, then smiled as Lily’s tiny hand grasped his finger. “You’re the best big brother,” Mum whispered. That night, Dad put an extra biscuit by Olly’s plate. Olly knew he’d never be “invisible” again — he was a beloved brother, and that was magic too. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了7岁的Olly因妹妹Lily出生后父母精力转移，产生“被忽视的隐形感”，赌气独自外出后被邻居Cooper夫人收留，在观察孵化器里的鸡蛋和Cooper夫人的话语中获得慰藉，最终父亲前来接他的故事。 【详解】1. 段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“几分钟后，爸爸到了，看到Olly平安无事，他松了一口气。”可知，第一段可描写父亲的愧疚与道歉、Olly分享外出经历、父亲用Teddy的例子安抚Olly，点明“哥哥的身份不代表被忽视”，缓解Olly的负面情绪。 ②由第二段首句内容“回到家，妈妈抱着熟睡的Lily在等着。”可知，第二段可描写母亲的温柔回应、让Olly抱Lily的互动场景、Olly感受到的亲情，以及当晚父母用行体现对他的重视，让Olly彻底摆脱“隐形感”。 2. 续写线索：父亲接Olly——父亲道歉——Olly分享经历——父亲安抚——回家见母亲——抱Lily互动——母亲肯定——当晚获重视——摆脱“隐形感” 一、 与考向框架的匹配度分析 1. 情节与主题 高度匹配：这是 “领悟‘被爱’形式变化” 的情节变体。奥利的困境不是家人不爱他，而是新生儿妹妹的到来改变了家庭关爱的表现形式和分配，让他误读为“被忽视”和“变得隐形”。核心冲突是对爱的感知与期待产生了隔阂。 主题精准：故事最终指向从 “自我中心的失落” 到 “换位思考的理解” 的飞跃。奥利领悟到，爱并未消失，只是需要在新角色（哥哥）中重新定位，而家人的关怀始终存在。 2. 续写思路的落实 第一步：定位“情感冰点”与“固化认知”清晰。 情感冰点：奥利认为父母因妹妹莉莉而“看不见”自己，内心充满失落与被遗忘感（“Being a big brother was the worst...”）。 固化认知：他认为“被看见”的方式必须是父母像从前一样围着自己转。他的应对行为是消极躲避（站在走廊）和极端测试（独自出门以期被找回）。 第二步：“触发细节”与“内心地震”设计巧妙，但可更深刻。 触发细节：库珀夫人用孵化鸡蛋需要全心投入来类比父母对新生儿的照顾，并用小狗泰迪依然被爱来暗示奥利的家庭地位未变。这个类比是绝佳的“认知桥梁”。 可优化处：范文对奥利听到这个类比时的内心震撼（“内心地震”）描写略显平缓。可以强化他从“生物本能”理解到“家庭之爱”的豁然开朗感。 第三步：“破冰行动”与“感悟升华”完整到位。 破冰行动：父亲道歉、倾听、肯定（“你依然重要”），母亲让他拥抱妹妹、赋予新身份（“最好的哥哥”）。行动具体、双向，直击其心结。 感悟升华：结尾“他再也不会‘隐形’”与开头的“超能力”形成闭环，将对爱的理解升华为在家庭角色变化中确认自身独特价值。 写｜作｜技｜巧 1. 设置一个“颠覆性细节”：构思一个让主人公亲眼目睹、亲手触碰的具体事物作为引爆点（如：父亲药盒里的病历、母亲深夜未关的台灯、祖母修补多次的旧手套）。用特写描写它，让它与主人公的固有认知产生剧烈冲突。 2. 描写“内心认知链的断裂与重组”：这是核心。紧接着“看见”之后，用2-3句话刻画心理过程：“震惊”（这不可能！）→ “回溯”（难道那些往事……）→ “颠覆”（原来我一直错怪了……）。这是情感转折的关键证据。 3. 用一个“反向小动作”证明破冰：设计一个与故事开头冷漠行为完全相反的细微动作作为结局（如：曾甩开的手现在轻轻拉住衣角；曾紧闭的房门如今留了一条缝；曾沉默的嘴里挤出一句“妈，汤很好喝”）。动作越小，越显真挚。 易｜错｜提｜醒 1. ❌ 转变靠“说教”，而非“发现”：避免让家人直接说“我为你付出了多少”，或让老师、邻居来一番大道理点醒。理解必须源于主人公自己的“看见”和“想通”，外力只能是提供细节的线索。 2. ❌ 触发细节太“俗”或太“假”：避免用“突然看到父母的白发”这种万能但乏味的细节，或“偶然捡到父母写的感人日记”这种过于刻意的安排。细节应新颖、真实、与人物性格和家庭背景紧密相关。 3. ❌ 只有心理活动，没有关系互动：杜绝全文都是“我很感动，我明白了”的内心独白。转变必须通过一个指向家人的、具体的新行为来落地，让读者看到关系的暖流开始重新流动。 【变式1-1】(2026届浙江省浙江省“9+1”联盟高三上学期一模联考)Sara’s fingertips brushed gently across the family photo wall, tracing the memories of a time that felt increasingly distant. The edges of her sixth-birthday photo had long faded, most of it hidden behind her little brother Tom’s grinning preschool portrait. Her childhood photos were squeezed into the upper corner, nearly replaced by Tom’s new ones — his chubby face clutching a cake on his first birthday, his tiny figure with a small schoolbag on his first day of kindergarten, and even a recent one where he was proudly holding a crayon drawing. Ever since Tom was born three years ago, Mom and Dad’s world seemed to completely revolve around him. Dinner table conversations, which used to include her school stories, now centered on his newly learned words and silly little tricks. Then tonight, as Sara was finally grasping her quadratic equations (二次方程式), Tom’s toy train crashed with a “clatter” into her math book, scattering pencil bits all over the neatly written formulas. Frustration boiled over. Sara yelled, “Can’t you keep him under control?” Mom, looking exhausted, only sighed and rubbed her forehead, “He’s only four, honey. Just be more patient.” Retreating to her bedroom, Sara felt the weight of the silence around her. Moonlight spilled over her college dream board, a collection of university logos and inspirational quotes. Right in the center, over her dream school’s logo, was Tom’s glittery gold star sticker, stuck there during one of his unsupervised (无人看管的) adventures. Down the hallway, his happy screams as he played with Dad danced under the crack of her door, and hot, silent tears rolled down her cheeks. She then remembered last month: Dad had promised to come to her award ceremony but stayed home to take care of a slightly feverish Tom. The empty seat by the podium still stung. “Your grades are slipping lately,” her teacher’s concerned voice echoed in her memory, “Is everything all right at home?” Later, at midnight, Sara tiptoed past Tom’s room. The familiar smell of baby powder lingered; the small blue bed, once hers, was now covered in rocket stickers, and the nightlight by the bed cast a warm yellow glow. A twinge of guilt flickered, then faded — Mom had canceled her long-awaited music camp just last week, saying Tom’s new preschool fees were too high. The “Registration Canceled” email flashed in her mind, solidifying her decision. On the kitchen table, next to half-eaten toast, she left a note, “I’m leaving. Don’t look for me.” 注意： 1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。 Paragraph1: As dawn was just breaking, Mom’s cry woke the whole house when she found the note. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph2: Ultimately, they found Sara curled up on a bench at the bus station, shivering in the cold. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 考向02 换位·担当之责 【例2-1】(24-25高三上·安徽阜阳·期末)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Sophia, a college student, had always been close to her grandmother, Lily. They shared a special bond, and despite the distance, they remained in constant communication through letters and phone calls. Lily had been a constant source of inspiration and encouragement for Sophia, guiding her through the challenges of her academic journey. As Sophia was busy preparing for her final exams, she received a letter from her mother, informing her that Lily had been hospitalized due to a sudden illness. The news struck Sophia with a mixture of concern and sadness, as she had always looked up to her grandmother as a source of strength. Feeling concerned and anxious, Sophia decided to make the long journey back home to visit her grandmother. She knew that her exams were important, but she also understood that her family needed her support during this difficult time. When she arrived at the hospital, she was relieved to see Lily in stable condition but visibly weakened. Over the next few days, Sophia spent every spare moment at her grandmother’s bedside, offering her support and comfort. The hospital staff and other family members were amazed at the strong bond between them, which seemed to transcend (超越) their generational differences. As they spent time together, Lily shared stories from her youth, recounting her own experiences in college and the challenges she had faced. She spoke of her passion for learning, the friendships she had established, and the importance of resilience (韧性) in overcoming obstacles. She also offered valuable life lessons and wisdom, reminding Sophia of the importance of maintaining a balance between her academic pursuits and personal relationships. Their conversations deepened the connection between them, and Sophia felt grateful for the opportunity to learn from her grandmother’s experiences. Throughout her stay, Sophia also took on the responsibility of helping her mother care for Lily, assisting with her medical appointments and ensuring that her needs were met. The experience allowed her to develop a newfound appreciation for the sacrifices her mother and grandmother had made for their family. As she returned to college, she carried with her a deep sense of gratitude and determination to make them proud. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Inspired by her grandmother’s words, Sophia made a promise to herself. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ A few weeks after returning to college, Sophia received a package from her grandmother. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】   Inspired by her grandmother’s words, Sophia made a promise to herself. She promised to prioritize her relationships and make a conscious effort to stay connected with her loved ones, especially her family members. While she understood the importance of her studies, she realized that her relationships were equally, if not more, valuable in shaping her life. She also decided to visit her grandmother more frequently, cherishing the time they had together and making the most of the opportunity to learn from her wisdom. A few weeks after returning to college, Sophia received a package from her grandmother. Inside, she found a beautifully scarf (围巾), accompanied by a heartfelt note from Lily. In the note, her grandmother expressed her love and appreciation for Sophia’s visit, and shared her pride in seeing her granddaughter grow into a compassionate and driven young woman. The scarf, along with the note, served as a touchable reminder of their special bond and the moving story between two family members, strengthening the importance of love, connection, and the invaluable lessons passed down through generations. 【导语】文章以人物为线索展开，讲述了大学生Sophia与她祖母Lily之间深厚的情感纽带，以及在Lily突然生病住院时，Sophia决定放下学业，长途跋涉回家陪伴祖母的感人故事。在医院里，Sophia不仅为祖母提供了支持和安慰，还与祖母共度时光，聆听了祖母年轻时的故事和人生经验，这些交流加深了她们之间的联系，并让Sophia从祖母的经历中学到了宝贵的人生课程。同时，Sophia也承担起了帮助母亲照顾祖母的责任，这一经历让她对母亲和祖母为家庭所做出的牺牲有了新的认识和感激。最终，Sophia带着深深的感激之情和决心回到学校，立志要让家人为她骄傲。 【详解】1.段落续写 ①由第一段首句内容“受祖母话语的启发，索菲亚对自己许下了一个承诺。”可知，第一段可描写承诺的具体内容。 ②由第二段首句内容“回到大学几周后，索菲亚收到了祖母寄来的一个包裹。”可知，第二段可描写包裹里的东西以及这些东西给家庭关系带来的影响。 2.续写线索：意识到人际关系的重要性——决定经常看祖母——收到围巾和便条——强化家庭纽带 一、 与考向框架的匹配度分析 1. 情节与主题 高度匹配：这是典型的 “危机下的主动扛起” 情节。家庭（以祖母为核心）突遇健康危机，主人公主动中断个人重要事务（备考），回归家庭场域，承担起情感慰藉与辅助照护的责任。 主题精准：故事完整展现了从 “被给予者”（接受祖母的鼓励）到 “给予者”与“承接者” 的双重转变。核心不仅是生活上的短暂帮忙，更是通过聆听与陪伴，实现了家族精神与责任感的代际传承。 2. 续写思路的落实 第一步：定位“依赖常态”与“触发情境”清晰。 依赖常态：索菲亚一直是接受祖母精神鼓舞的一方（“constant source of inspiration”）。 触发情境：祖母的突然住院，构成了一个情感与责任的双重危机，打破了原有的远距离精神支持模式，将她推入需要亲身在场、提供实质性支持的境地。 第二步：“心理转向”与“行动尝试”描写充分。 心理转向：她意识到“家人此刻需要我”，在学业与亲情间做出了优先选择。这本身就是“担当”的起点。 行动尝试：原文已详细描写了她在医院的具体行动——“spent every spare moment at bedside”，“helping her mother care for Lily”。这些行动具体、务实，体现了担当的实践性。 第三步：“成长印记”与“关系升华”有待深化。 成长印记：原文提到她获得了“newfound appreciation”（新的认识），范文续写则侧重于她“做出承诺”。然而，“担当”所带来的内在力量感和角色认知的彻底转变，可以刻画得更深刻。 关系升华：关系从单向的“被引导”转变为双向的“对话”与“共担”，并指向未来的“传承”。范文通过围巾和信件来体现，是合理的。 写｜作｜技｜巧 1. 设计一个“脆弱的证据”：构思一个让主人公亲眼看见家人“需要帮助”的明确信号（如：父亲揉腰的皱眉、母亲面对账单的沉默叹息、祖父母使用智能设备时的无助）。这个信号需直接、具体，打破家人一贯的“超人”形象。 2. 描写“从笨拙到坚持”的行动链：担当的核心是 “做” 。必须详细描写主人公首次尝试时的生疏、遇到的困难以及如何调整（如：第一次做饭烧焦了锅，查阅菜谱后重做；照顾弟妹时手忙脚乱，慢慢找到节奏）。过程的笨拙感是责任感的真实刻度。 3. 用“对比与交接”升华成长：结尾通过一个与故事开头形成对比的细节（如：曾觉得轻飘的“辛苦”二字如今有了重量；曾由父母全权负责的事，现在自己能分担一部分），来暗示“支撑者”角色的确立。感悟应指向 “我成为了家庭运转中可被依靠的一环”。 易｜错｜提｜醒 1. ❌ 担当过程太“顺”或太“英雄”：避免把责任承担写得轻松自如、一次成功。没有挫折、狼狈和坚持的责任，缺乏真实感和重量感。要敢于描写主人公的吃力、出错和疲惫。 2. ❌ 动机源于外部压力或奖赏：避免让主人公的担当仅仅是因为“父母要求”或“做了有奖励”。真正的换位担当，应源于内心自发的“心疼”与“不忍”，是看到家人脆弱后油然而生的情感驱动。 3. ❌ 成长感悟空洞，未触及角色转变：不要只写“我体会到了父母的辛苦”。感悟必须深化为对自我在家庭中角色认知的根本改变（如：“我不再只是这个家的客人，而是它的维护者之一。”）。 【变式2-1】(25-26高三上·湖南部分学校联考·月考)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Benjamin was a high school student who lived with his grandma. His dad had to travel a lot for work, so he was rarely at home. Grandma was the one who woke Benjamin up every morning, made his favorite breakfast, and listened to him talk about school life after dinner. Benjamin loved Grandma very much, and she was his most important person. One morning during the summer vacation, Grandma suddenly felt very weak. She tried to stand up but fell back on the sofa. Benjamin was scared. He quickly called his dad. When his dad arrived, he carried Grandma to the car and rushed to the hospital. The doctor said Grandma needed to stay in the hospital for a few days to get better. His dad filled out all the hospital forms and stayed with them until evening. Just then, his dad’s phone rang. It was his boss. The boss said there was an important project to discuss, and his dad had to go to another city right away. His dad looked at Grandma in the hospital bed, then at Benjamin. He frowned (皱眉) and said, “I don’t know what to do. I need to take care of your grandma, but I can’t lose my job either.” Benjamin saw the worry in his dad’s eyes. He took a deep breath and said, “Dad, let me take care of Grandma. I can bring her meals, help her walk, and call the nurse if she needs anything. I’ ll also read some books in the hospital.” At first, his dad didn’t agree. He said, “You’ re still in high school. It’s too hard for you.” But Benjamin kept trying to persuade him. “Dad, I’m not a little kid anymore. I can do this. And if there’s a problem, I’ ll call you right away,” After talking for a long time, his dad finally nodded. He patted Benjamin’s shoulder and said, “Okay, but you must tell me everything every day.” 注意： (1)续写词数应为150个左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Then, Benjamin looked after his grandma with great care. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ After seven days, Grandma felt much better, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 考向03 求同·共生之智 【例3-1】(25-26高三上·山西·期中)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Mom sat at the kitchen table. Through the window blinds, sunlight cast thin striped shadows on the school list, with Rolf School topping the “fame” ranking. For years, she’d dreamed of Otto, her eleven-year-old son, going there. But her eyes kept drifting to another school’s name, Caulfield School, written in Otto’s messy handwriting with a tiny star: his favorite school. Otto had talked about Caulfield School for weeks: the outdoor pool to swim in after class, French lessons that weren’t just textbooks, and the history club’s fun ancient history role-plays. Most of all, he’d talked excitedly about the robotics program, holding a crumpled cardboard robot he’d made: “Mom, they let students build from the very beginning. Real motors, real wires! I could join the city robot contest!” Mom stirred her tea slowly, the spoon tapping the mug. She recalled her teenage years when she couldn’t go to her dream art school. Her mother told her that it wasn’t practical, and she persuaded her into giving up the idea. Now, her heart ached. She also thought of Otto’s teacher’s note last week: “He’s brilliant with his hands. Let him create, not just memorize.” She remembered last weekend, when Otto was spreading Caulfield School’s poster on the floor, tracing role-play photos, eyes shining like he was already there. She decided to give Otto the power to shape his own future. In the meantime, she would try to gradually loosen her control over Otto and give him a bit more independence. Because if there was one thing she could be absolutely certain of, it’s this: Otto would do best at the school he wanted to go. That night, Otto approached his mom, holding a DIY robot toy in his hand. “Mom, you’ll like this — not all their homework is on a screen,” he said quietly. Mom met his wide hopeful eyes. “I just want what’s best for you,” she said, though the “best” didn’t mean the same for her and Otto. Otto stepped closer, small hands wrapping her arm. “Caulfield School is best for me. I can make robots, learn history by acting and swim there. Please, Mom.” 注意： 1. 所续写短文的词数应为150个左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Mom fixed her eyes on Otto for a moment. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ A month later, Mom attended Otto’s first school activity for parents at Caulfield School. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】   Paragraph 1: Mom fixed her eyes on Otto for a moment. She pulled Otto into a tight hug, his robot toy pressing gently between them. The next morning, she filled out Caulfield School’s application, mailed it right away, and then set the school ranking list aside. That week, she watched Otto sit at his desk after school, drawing robot designs and reading history books with great interest. Sometimes he would pause and say, “Mom, wait till you see the ancient history role-play I’m in!” His bright, genuine smile made her realize she’d finally made the right choice for him.   Paragraph 2: A month later, Mom attended Otto’s first school activity for parents at Caulfield School. She stood in the school yard, watching Otto dressed in an ancient-style costume for the history club’s role-play. He was grinning as he acted out a scene from old times. Later, he proudly showed her his robot project, parts of which were made in the school’s robotics lab. “We’re entering a competition soon“ he said, his eyes full of excitement. On their way home, Otto talked excitedly about his French lesson and how he’d swum in the outdoor pool that afternoon. Mom smiled to herself, “This is the best future I could have ever wished for my son.” 【导语】本文围绕妈妈和奥托对学校选择的事展开。妈妈梦想让奥托去名声排名第一的罗尔夫学校，而奥托心仪的是考尔菲尔德学校，他向妈妈列举了考尔菲尔德学校的种种优点，如课后可使用的室外游泳池、有趣的法语课、历史俱乐部的角色扮演以及机器人项目等。妈妈回想起自己年少时没能去梦想的艺术学校，又考虑到奥托老师的评价以及奥托对考尔菲尔德学校的热情，决定让奥托自己选择未来，同时尝试逐步给予他更多独立空间。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句 “妈妈凝视了奥托一会儿。” 可知，此段应描写妈妈做出决定后的行动。她拥抱奥托，第二天为奥托填写考尔菲尔德学校的申请表并寄出，之后看到奥托对未来学校相关活动的积极准备，通过奥托的笑容确认自己的选择是正确的。 ②由第二段首句 “一个月后，妈妈参加了奥托在考尔菲尔德学校的第一次家长活动。” 可知，该段可描述妈妈在活动中的所见所闻。看到奥托穿着古装进行历史角色扮演，之后奥托又自豪展示机器人项目，并分享法语课和游泳的经历，妈妈觉得这就是她曾希望儿子拥有的最好未来。 2.续写线索：妈妈做决定并确认选择（妈妈凝视奥托后做决定，看到奥托积极准备，因他的笑容确认选择正确）—— 参加活动见证成长（妈妈参加活动，看到奥托展示历史和机器人项目，听他分享法语课和游泳，妈妈认可这个选择） 一、 与考向框架的匹配度分析 1. 情节与主题 高度匹配：这是经典的 “人生选择之争” 。冲突核心并非不爱，而是两代人对于何为“最好未来”的认知差异：母亲基于“声望”与“实用”（Rolf School），儿子基于“兴趣”与“热爱”（Caulfield School）。这直接触及价值观层面。主题精准：故事最终超越了“听妈的还是听你的”这种二元对立，指向了更高维度的和解：爱是尊重对方作为一个独立个体的生命热情，并帮助其实现。这完美契合“共生之智”的内涵。 2. 续写思路的落实 第一步：定位“冲突核心”与“情感困局”清晰。 冲突核心：对“best”（最好）的定义不同。母亲的“best”源于自身未竟梦想的补偿和对传统成功路径的依赖；儿子的“best”源于内在天赋（动手能力强）与真实热情（机器人、历史）。 情感困局：母亲的爱表现为“焦虑与控制”（希望规划儿子人生），儿子的爱表现为“渴求认可与自主”。双方都困在自己的视角里。 第二步：“反思契机”设计深刻，源于自身伤痛。 契机并非外部说教：母亲的关键转折，源于唤醒自身“未能就读艺术学校”的终身遗憾。这种“己所不欲”的痛楚，让她实现了关键的换位思考：“我是否正在成为当年我母亲那样的人？” 这是极高明的“反思契机”设计。 第三步：“和解行动”与“共生领悟”落实到位。 和解行动：母亲的选择（填申请表、搁置排名表）是放弃控制权，移交选择权。这不是妥协，而是基于理解的尊重。 共生领悟：范文通过母亲在校园活动中看到儿子眼里的光，领悟到 “这才是我能为儿子期许的最好未来” 。她的“best”定义被更新、拓宽，与儿子的“best”实现了融合与共生。 写｜作｜技｜巧 1. 设置一个具体的“分歧场景”：构思一场展现核心价值观对立的具体对话或事件（如对一份“不务正业”工作的看法）。对话中要呈现双方各自的逻辑与情感软肋，让冲突“真实可感”，而非泛泛而谈。 2. 设计一次“认知升维”的顿悟：这是关键。为主人公（通常是年轻一方）设计一个契机，使其跳出“对错之争”，看到分歧背后对方未被言明的恐惧、爱与时代局限性（例如：争执后，发现父亲偷偷查阅自己心仪专业的资料）。顿悟的焦点应是 “我理解了你的恐惧，因此我尊重你的坚持”。 3. 用一个“和解仪式”确认新关系：设计一个象征性的行动来标志关系的转型（如：将争执的志愿表折成纸船放入水中；主动为对方的习惯留出空间；用对方的逻辑来论证自己的选择）。这个行动需表明：差异被接纳，关系优先于输赢。 易｜错｜提｜醒 1. ❌ 制造“虚假妥协”或“强行一致”：避免让一方突然“想通”然后完全认同另一方，或安排一个外部事件（如比赛获奖）证明“孩子是对的”来迫使父母低头。真正的共生是“和而不同”，应在保留差异的前提下达成和解。 2. ❌ 用“第三方说教”解决核心冲突：禁止让老师、邻居或某本书突然出现，讲一番大道理直接点醒双方。认知升维必须源于主人公自身的观察、反思与情感触动，外力只能提供思考的线索。 3. ❌ 升华时空泛，脱离具体冲突：不要用“我懂得了包容的伟大”这样万能的句子结尾。升华必须回扣故事中具体的分歧点（如：“那天我明白了，最好的爱不是为你铺路，而是当你选择丛林时，为你备好一双结实的靴子。”）。 【变式3-1】(25-26高三·华大新高考联盟·期中)阅读下面的材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Chuck Harris and his parents lived in the oldest house in his neighborhood. The house was spacious but unsafe. But Chuck’s dad never wanted to sell it or build a new one because it was part of our family,”as he said. While the neighbors pulled down their houses and bult new ones, Chuck’s father was stubborn and attached to the place. When Chuck was 12 and was laughed at by neighbor’s children because of the old house, he turned to his father, and asked why they didn’t move to a new house, arguing it would save money and made more sense to just move to a new place than fixing this one. “Besides, the other kids would stop teasing me,” the boy continued. But his father replied that the house held family memories and hoped Chuck would continue to pass it down to further generations. Chuck nodded his head in agreement. When he turned 22, his father died in a car accident, leaving Chuck heartbroken. He didn’t have anyone else. So he threw himself into work to help distract him and allow him to move on. For a few years,he was so focused that he didn’t even notice how run-dowmn his house was. But at some point, he couldn’t ignore it anymore. Things got worse when his friends made fun of him after seeing his house. “Alright, that’s enough!” he thought. “I’m sorry, dad, but I’m done with this piece of trash. I’ve got to sell this house.” When he made an inquiry around the house before attempting to sel it, he noticed one of the beams (横梁) fell to the ground floor. Chuck had to change the floor in that room. Tearing down the old boards，he accidentally saw a wooden door under them. Chuck was surprised because he’d never seen it before. He knew every part, every corner of this house. “But actually, I don’t,” he told himself. “OK, let’s see what’s inside,” he said and pushed open the door. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右; 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 He saw a ladder (梯子)leading to a small basement room. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Feeling like in a museum,Chuck got an idea. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ A （2025届湖北省高中名校联盟高三下学期第四次联合测评英语试题）阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Suzi wanted to go to a beach party. It was going to be the best party of the year, perhaps the best party of her life. But her mom had said no. Suzi was desperate and protested, “But everyone is going.” “I don’t care who’s going,” replied her mother. “Even if the Queen of England were going, you are still not going.” Suzi was disappointed and even heartbroken. Sunday dinner came around and Suzi's grandmother joined the family for the meal, as she nearly always did on Sunday. Gran noticed how unhappy Suzi had been looking during the meal but didn’t say a thing. It was Suzi's turn to wash up and Gran said, “Let me help you,” while the rest of the family shifted into the living room to watch a video. In the kitchen, Gran knew what had happened and said, “If you were her, what would your objections be?” Suzi hadn’t stopped to think about her mom’s side. After learning that some adults were going to be there, Gran said to Suzi, “Your mother is concerned and doesn’t want anything to happen to you?” “Nothing will happen,” objected Suzi. “Maybe you’re right,” said Gran, “but maybe Mom’s worried in case it could. You know, when your mother was your age, we used to negotiate about something. If she was going out somewhere, I would ask what time she wanted me to pick her up. She would always add an hour or two to it, saying maybe eleven or twelve o’clock, thinking I wouldn’t know what she was doing. I’d tell her that was far too late and that I wanted her home by nine. She’d object and we’d both come to a compromise (折中) at ten or ten-thirty, which was around what both of us had been thinking all along.” “That way, neither of us was the winner or loser; that way, she got to have time out as she wanted and I got to see her home at a reasonable time. By finding a compromise, we both got something, though maybe not completely, of what we wanted.” 注意: （1）续写词数应为150个左右; （2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 After hearing Gran’s story, Suzi felt lost in thought. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ With Gran’s encouragement, Suzi quietly went to her mom’s room and knocked softly. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ B (25-26高三上·广西联考·期中)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Lynn was sad as she tried to remove a stain (污渍) from her new T-shirt. Her sister April had ruined her Saturday morning. Lynn had pushed April onto a table, spilling juice all over the floor. Her mother blamed April without listening, and April, unfairly grounded, took revenge (报复) by spilling coffee on Lynn’s T-shirt. Lynn thought April should be punished, remembering how April had poured glue on her seat in class the week before. Lynn couldn’t have been happier to see her sister suffer. This chain of revenge had been going on forever between the two girls ever since there had been too much stress in eighth grade. And then their mom was always on her phone and taking business trips. Sometimes she seemed to have disappeared off the face of the Earth, hardly having time to stay with her family. Lynn thought about the past. She remembered how peaceful she and April had been in third grade and how their family used to spend time together. She felt sad. She gave up cleaning her T-shirt and decided it was time to stop fighting with her sister. So, Lynn changed into a new T-shirt, took a deep breath and entered her sister’s room. April looked confused for a second wondering why her sister was here. “Do you want to conquer the world?” Lynn asked. She didn’t actually mean to conquer the world, but when the two girls were little, they challenged themselves to climb a pretty high rock at the back of their house inside a small wood. And when they got to the top, they would’ve “conquered the world”. The sisters hadn’t actually managed to do that yet, and they stopped trying since it looked a bit stupid for teenagers to climb a rock. After that, they basically forgot about the whole thing.注意： (1)续写词数应为150个左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 April looked puzzled for a second, and then laughed. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ And the method they used worked! ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ C (25-26高三上·山东潍坊·期中)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Coach Dad On a November afternoon in Belmont, my five-year-old son Jack asked me to go for a walk. Not a big moment for most dads, but it felt good to be asked by him. As we walked along the street, thoughts rose in my heart: Nothing was more important to me than being a good father. But more and more these days, I asked myself, “Was I?” I’m a business consultant, helping companies develop employees into successful teams. It was the work meant for me. If only I felt that same confidence as a father. I wondered why I always felt like something was missing between us. Yet I wasn’t completely clueless. They say your parenting style is shaped by how your parents raised you, and my role models weren’t perfect. But I wasn’t like my dad. Jack meant everything to me. Reaching the end of the street, we found my friend Rick playing basketball with his son. “Hey, John, want to shoot a few?” Rick said, holding up the basketball. I shook my head. “Not really my game,” I said. Rick passed the ball to Jack and walked over to me. “I can hardly get Jack to do anything fun with me. How do you manage it, Rick?” I asked. “I try to make what’s important to my kid important to me, even if it’s just shooting a few baskets,” he replied. Easy for him, I thought. He likes playing sports while I know nothing about it. On our way home, Jack said, “Dad, our Family Basketball Day at school is this coming Friday. I really want to play. It would be so much fun! Can we, please?” I recalled how badly I’d wanted my dad to be there for me and decided to follow Rick’s advice. That night, after getting Jack to bed, I sat at the computer and filled out the application. That’s when I noticed a box at the bottom asking, “Would you like to coach?” Before I could think twice, I clicked YES and hit SEND． “That’s awesome!” Jack cheered when I told him the next day. 注意： (1)续写词数应为150个左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Then came our first practice. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I searched the web for coaching tips. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ D (2026届浙江省精诚联盟高三上学期一模英语试题) 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 “Do you notice anything different?” I asked my daughter one sunny spring afternoon. “Not really,” she responded while glancing around the living room and into the kitchen. “What am I missing?” That got the wheels spinning in my head, paving the way for me to eventually take a big step out of my comfort zone. For as long as I could remember, I’d never believed my house was clean enough to invite friends over. So, whenever we were expecting company, I tired myself out to make certain the house was spotless. I cleaned so thoroughly that I ended up too tired mentally and physically to enjoy their company. A great example was the time I offered to host a baby shower for my granddaughter and her husband. Realizing we would be inviting guests from both sides of the family, I was fearful as to how people might view my house. It was quite a lovely house, but I was still obsessed (着迷) with having everything perfect. Of course, I wanted my kitchen floor to look as bright and clean as possible. So, while all the windows and doors in the house were shut, I mixed ammonia (氨水) and bleach (漂白剂), got down on my hands and knees, and scrubbed (擦洗) away. Within a matter of moments, I began to feel rather short of breath. Realizing that combination of cleaning products had likely released poisonous gas, I opened all the windows immediately. But I continued cleaning the floors until they were shining. The house must look perfect. As time passed, I realized I was caught between a rock and a hard place—no unnecessary anxiety or exhausting housecleaning, but also a lovely home with no visitors. It had to be fate (命运) the day my daughter stopped by and said, “What am I missing?” I’d just finished up a week of thorough spring cleaning that included washing all the windows, both inside and out, shampooing the carpet, scrubbing the kitchen floor and polishing the furniture. To me, the house shone with springtime cleanliness. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 If my daughter missed it, would anyone else notice it? _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I took a big step and started inviting friends to stop by _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ E (2026届山东省实验中学高三上学期12月第三次诊断英语试题)阅读下列文章，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The Garden Project That Bonded Us When Dad announced we would transform the overgrown backyard into a vegetable garden, I rolled my eyes while Tom, my 12-year-old little brother, cheered. “It’s a waste of time,” I complained, scrolling through my phone. “We could just buy vegetables from the supermarket.” Tom, however, had always dreamed of growing his own tomatoes—especially since Mom’s birthday was only three months away, and he’d been talking about picking fresh tomatoes to make her favorite pasta sauce. Dad smiled, handing us a list, “Lily, you’ll handle planning the layout (布局) and buying seedlings (幼苗). Tom, you’ re in charge of clearing the weeds and digging the soil. Teamwork makes the dream work” He paused, glancing at the calendar on the wall where Mom’s birthday was circled in red. “Three months is quite enough for those potato seedlings to bear fruit—perfect timing if we get started now.” The first weekend, conflict erupted. I spent hours researching online but forgot to buy the seedlings, comforting myself “too busy with homework.” Tom was pulling weeds for hours, sweating profusely. Several days later, he marched into the garden expecting to find rows of seedlings, only to be met with empty yard, and then exploded with anger, shouting “You didn’t even do your basic job I’m doing all the hard work while you’re sitting on the couch Look！ My gloves are worn out” I fired back, “Digging is easy My part requires intelligence, not just brute force” We refused to speak to each other, leaving the half-cleared yard in chaos. Dad didn’t intervene immediately; instead, he left a note on the kitchen table, “Labor teaches us responsibility, and teamwork means supporting each other, not blaming.” That night, I couldn’t sleep, remembering how Tom had helped me fix my bike last year, even though he’d had a fever. Meanwhile, Tom lay in his room staring at the layout paper I threw to him earlier that week, recalling the way I’d lingered over the layout drawings many times, saying, “Mom will definitely love it.” The next morning, I woke up at dawn, grabbed my wallet, and raced to the store. I came back with not just tomato seedlings but also a new pair of gardening gloves for Tom. 注意：（1）续写词数应为150个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Para. 1: Tom was already in the backyard when I arrived. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Para. 2: Finally, the big day came—Mom’s birthday. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ F (25-26高三上·重庆九龙坡区重庆育才中学校·月考)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文， It was the elderly woman’s birthday. She got up early to be ready for the post. From the second floor flat she could see the postman when he came down the street, and the little boy from the ground floor brought up her letters or parcels on the rare occasions when anything came. Today she was sure there would be something. Linda wouldn’t forget her mother’s birthday, even if she seldom wrote at other times. Of course Linda was busy. Her husband had been made Mayor, and Linda herself had got a medal for her work for the aged. The elderly woman was eighty today. She had put on her best dress. Perhaps-perhaps Linda might come. After all, eighty was a special birthday, another decade lived or endured just as you chose to look at it. Even if Linda did not come, she would send a present. The elderly woman was sure of that. Two spots of color brightened her cheeks. She was excited like a child. She would enjoy her day. Yesterday Mrs. Morrison, whom Linda had arranged to light the fire and give the elderly woman her breakfast, had given the flat an extra clean, and today she had brought a card and a bunch of marigolds when she came to do the breakfast. Mrs. Grant downstairs had made a cake, and in the afternoon she was going down there to tea. The little boy, Johnnie, had been up with a packet of mints, and said he wouldn’t go out to play until the post had come. “I guess you’ll get lots and lots of presents,” he said, “I did last week when I was six.” The elderly woman wondered what the present would be. A pair of slippers perhaps. Or a new scarf. A scarf would be lovely. Blue is such a pretty color. Or a table lamp. Or a book, a travel book, with pictures, or a little clock, with clear black numbers. So many lovely things. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 The elderly woman stood by the window, watching. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ She opened the envelope. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ G (25-26高三上·湖南湘一名校联盟·期中)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Under my influence, my son Bob was fascinated with baseball and we often played together in our spare time. However, on a sunny day, I found myself wrapped up in my own world. I was comfortably seated on the sofa, drinking cool beer and attentively watching a live baseball game on TV. The excitement of the match had me completely absorbed. Suddenly, Bob burst into the room, his face lit up with excitement. “Dad, Dad, teach me how to catch the ball” he shouted, his eyes wide with anticipation. Without taking my eyes off the screen, I casually replied, “In a bit, Bob. Let me finish this round. Come back in five minutes. “Bob agreed and ran out of the room joyfully. Five minutes later, Bob returned. “Dad, let’s go Let’s play catch now” he shouted, his enthusiasm visible. But the game was still in full swing, and I was absorbed in the action. “Wait, son. The game isn’t over yet. Come back in another five minutes,” I said. Bob’s shoulders trembled (颤抖) a little, and disappointment flashed in his eyes, but he nodded and left the room again. I felt a sense of guilt, but I was too caught up in the game to pay much attention to it. When Bob came back a third time, I just opened another beer with no intention of moving. I glanced at a magazine on the coffee table. Its cover featured a large map of the world with a portrait of a famous person on the back. In a moment of frustration, I tore the cover into several pieces and threw them on the table. “Put this world map back together, and then we’ ll play catch. Don’t bother me until you’re done,” I said, hoping this would keep him occupied for a long time. Bob looked at me, his eyes filled with tears. He picked up the pieces and walked into another room, saying, “Okay, Dad. I won’t bother you until it’s done.” 主意：1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Surprisingly, Bob returned soon with the complete map. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ A wave of shame washed over me before I made a quick decision. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ H 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 When I was seventeen, I stayed with my little brother Cheng alone for the first time. Our parents hurried to another city to take care of my grandma, who had a serious illness, and left eight-year-old Cheng with me. Before they left, they gave me the keys and some money. Everything was fine. In the evening, Cheng was at the dining table, drawing a face on an egg for a school project. I helped him sharpen his pencils, and he suddenly asked, “Brother, what if the egg breaks?” I replied, “Then just draw another one.” As soon as I said that, the egg rolled off the table and broke. Cheng started to cry. I picked up the broken pieces and gave him the last egg from the fridge, saying, “Don’t cry. Let’s draw it together.” To cheer him up, I suggested we make a “capsule” for the new egg. We gathered old boxes and colored paper. We stuffed cotton inside the box. Cheng decorated it with silver paper while I colored the cotton blue to make it look like the night sky. After an hour, we had a shiny capsule, and Cheng gently placed the egg inside. Dinner was simple — tomato and egg noodles. Cheng insisted on placing the capsule in the middle of the table with an empty bowl for it. I pretended to pour some soup into the bowl for the egg. Cheng ate with sauce all over his face and whispered, “Brother, what if Grandma’s illness is serious?” I comforted him, “Everything will be fine.” He nodded, tears rolling down his cheeks. At 8:00 pm, I told Cheng to take a bath. In the bathroom, I washed his hair, and he suddenly wiped the water from my forehead, saying, “Brother, you seem like an adult.” My heart felt warm. “I’ll cook breakfast for us tomorrow morning,” he continued. “After the breakfast, I want to speak to Grandma.” 注意： (1)续写词数应为150个左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 At 4 am the next day, I was woken by soft footsteps. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Seeing me looking at him, Cheng smiled at me. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I (2026届江西省高三上学期高考仿真模拟考试（二）)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Michael saw it all. For a whole year, the cold war between his father and uncle had hung over their family like a winter fog that wouldn’t go away. It all started because of an old toolbox — made by hand by Grandpa’s father, and both brothers really loved it. When Dad and Uncle Thomas were boys, they’d crowded around Grandpa at that toolbox every weekend and did many interesting things. It was more than a toolbox — it’s what holds their most precious childhood memories. After Grandpa died, Uncle Thomas took it home to fix it up, but Dad thought he was keeping it for himself. “You always take the best things first,” Dad said angrily. Uncle Thomas said right back, “At least I’m not letting it go bad!” After that, doors were shut hard, and they never spoke again. Dad used to laugh so loudly that the neighbours would knock on the wall. But now he moved around like a shadow— mornings were quiet without the sound of his favourite coffee cup; evenings were spent looking at the dark fireplace without a word, where he and Uncle Thomas once roasted bread at Christmas. One weekend afternoon, Michael found his dad on the porch (门廊) looking at an old photo. It showed Dad and Uncle Thomas standing side by side at the workbench, big smiles on their faces. “Why don’t you call Uncle Thomas?” Michael asked. His father said in a low voice, “Some things can’t be fixed, son.” But Michael didn’t agree. He had seen his mum mend his torn jumper with a needle and thread, and he knew Auntie Lucy still called Mum to ask how Dad was doing. Maybe broken relationships just needed someone to try and make them better. The next day, Michael found his dad’s old lunchbox, the very one Grandpa had given to Dad and Uncle Thomas when they were teenagers, and that the two brothers had even shared when they worked together. Michael then went to the market and bought all of Uncle Thomas’s favourite foods with his pocket money: warm meat pies, hot sauce, and sweet biscuits. Even though his shirt got dirty and his shoes muddy, Michael was happy seeing the lunchbox full. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Standing at Uncle Thomas’s door, Michael’s heart was beating fast. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ A few minutes later, the doorbell rang again. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ J (25-26高三上·广东深圳·期中)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Mrs. Thompson often reminded her daughter, Amy, that helping with housework was not only a responsibility, but also a way of showing care for the family. But to Amy, household chores were a tiresome burden and a waste of her precious time. Every time her mother asked her to wash the dishes after dinner, Amy would protest, “It’s unfair! Why should I have to do the dishes?” Usually, Mrs. Thompson would sigh and do it herself. One Monday evening, as Amy got up from the table, Mrs. Thompson began coughing violently and her face grew very pale. “I’m not feeling well,” she said and went to her bedroom without even mentioning the dishes. Amy was about to leave the dirty plates in the sink as usual, but something stopped her. She remembered her mother’s tired eyes and weak voice, and it struck her how tired her mother had looked lately — doing a demanding job and taking care of the household all by herself. Quietly, Amy walked her mother to her room, and then returned to the kitchen. She stared at the mountain of dishes, took a deep breath, and rolled up her sleeves. Just as she was drying the last plate, she heard a gentle voice from behind. “Amy?” Mrs. Thompson, who was standing in the doorway, her eyes wide with surprise and warmth, said very gently. Amy turned around and, feeling a little embarrassed, she mumbled, “Well... Since you’re not feeling well, I thought I’d help out tonight.” “Thank you, sweetheart,” Mrs. Thompson said very gently. “That means a lot to me.” That night, as Amy lay in bed, she couldn’t stop thinking about the gentleness in her mother’s voice. “Maybe, Mom was right,” Amy thought. “Doing housework isn’t just a chore. It is a way to show love.” 注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Before sleeping, Amy set the clock 40 minutes earlier. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ As time went on, Amy’s attitude to household work began to change. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ K (25-26高三上·四川绵阳中学·月考)阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事. Jenny was the only child in her home. She had a quarrel with her mother that afternoon and she ran out of the house angrily. She couldn’t help crying sadly when she thought of the scolding from her mother. Having wandered aimlessly in the street for hours, she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat, but it was not even possible for her, since she had nothing with her. She stood beside a stand for a while, watching the middle-aged seller busy doing his business. However, with no money in hand, she sighed and had to leave. The seller behind the stand noticed the young girl and asked, “Hey, girl, you want to have the noodles?” “Oh, yes...but I don’t have money on me...” she replied. “That’s nothing. I’ll treat you today,” said the man, “Come in.” The seller brought her a bowl of noodles, whose smell was so attractive. Jenny thanked the man and started to gobble(狼吞虎咽) up the delicious food...then cried silently. “What is it?” asked the man kindly. “Nothing, actually I was moved by your kindness!” said Jenny as she wiped her tears, “Even a stranger on the street will give me a bowl of noodles, while my mother drove me out of the house. She showed no care for me. She is so mean and cruel!” Hearing the words, the seller smiled “Girl, do you really think so? I only gave you a bowl of noodles and you thanked me a lot. But it is your mother who has raised you since you were a baby. Can you number the times that she has cooked for you? Have you expressed your thanks to her?” Jenny sat there, speechless and numb with shock; she remembered her mother’s familiar face and weathered hands. “Why did I not think of that? A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel grateful, but I have never thanked my mum for what she has done for me.” On the way home, Jenny made up her mind to make an apology to her mother for her rudeness as soon as she arrived home. 注意： 1.所续写短文的词数应为120左右； 2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。 Paragraph 1: Approaching the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Her mother came back home, which called her mind back. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2 / 2 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 题型25 读后续写话题之家庭亲情类目录 第一部分 题型解码 高屋建瓴，掌握全局 第二部分 考向破译 微观解剖，精细教学 典例引领 方法透视 变式演练 考向01 破冰·理解之桥 考向02换位·担当之责 考向03 求同·共生之智 第三部分 综合巩固 整合应用，模拟实战 主题解读 家庭亲情类故事是高考读后续写的核心题材之一。与侧重于“完善自我”的个人成长类故事不同，亲情类故事的内核在于 “润滑关系” ：它描绘一个年轻的心灵，如何通过一个关键的家庭生活事件，打破陈旧的情感模式，完成从“自我”到“我们”的视角转换，最终实现家庭情感联结的深化、修复或升华。 这类故事万变不离其宗，通常遵循一个从“隔阂”到“联结”的经典叙事弧光： 1. 关系的常态与裂隙：故事始于一种家庭关系的非常态。这可能表现为情感上的疏离（如叛逆、误解）、责任上的失衡（如一味索取），或观念上的冲突（如代际差异）。这种裂隙构成了故事的情感张力起点。 2. 事件的触发与观察：一个具体的家庭日常事件（如一次意外的发现、一场突然的困难、一次激烈的争执）打破平静。这个事件的核心作用，是迫使或促使主人公真正去观察、关注家人的状态，而不再视其为背景。 3. 情感的转折与行动：这是续写的核心。重点在于刻画主人公 “内心认知” 的转折（如从抱怨到心疼，从忽视到理解）以及随之而来的、指向家人的具体行动（如一次主动的沟通、一个笨拙的帮助、一份用心的礼物）。行动是内在情感变化的外在证明。 4. 联结的重建与升华：故事结尾，问题或许未必完全解决，但家庭成员间的情感距离被拉近，理解与爱以新的方式流动。主人公收获的并非个人奖赏，而是一种更宝贵的关系资产：如更深厚的 信任、更有效的沟通方式，或对“家”之含义的深刻体悟。 常见情节&主题句式 考向01 破冰·理解之桥 一、 常见情节与主题归纳 这类故事的核心情节是：主人公因习惯、叛逆或年龄代沟，长期忽视或误解家人的情感与付出，处于一种情感上的“漠视”或“隔阂”状态。后通过一个偶然发现的关键细节或事件，内心受到强烈冲击，从而真正“看见”并理解了家人的处境与深爱，最终主动打破坚冰，实现情感的共鸣与靠近。 常见情节： 1. 发现沉默的付出：无意间看到父亲深夜加班疲惫的背影、母亲记账本上为自己节省的开销、祖父母珍藏的自己儿时的旧物。 2. 重读“严厉”的深意：因学业冲突后，发现老师发给家长的鼓励短信；在叛逆顶嘴后，目睹母亲偷偷流泪的瞬间。 3. 领悟“唠叨”的牵挂：离家住校或远行时，在某个孤独瞬间，突然理解了那些日常叮嘱背后的牵挂与爱。 4. 体验父母的角色：短暂承担家庭责任（如照顾弟妹、料理一日三餐），亲身体会到其中的繁琐与辛劳。 核心主题：故事旨在刻画从 “自我中心”到“换位思考” 的情感飞跃，核心是领悟理解、感恩与共情的真谛。成长的标志不是个人取得了什么成就，而是内心能够装下对他人的体察与关怀，认识到爱常藏在无声的细节中。 二、 续写思路：聚焦“看见”与“心桥” 构思此类故事，关键在于细腻、可信地呈现主人公认知被颠覆的瞬间及后续的情感转变。可遵循以下三步： 第一步：定位“情感冰点”与“固化认知” 首先，明确原文中主人公与家人之间的具体隔阂是什么。是认为父亲冷漠不苟言笑？是觉得母亲唠叨且不理解自己？还是将祖辈的节俭视为过时？同时，要明确主人公在此认知下的习惯性行为，如回避交流、不耐烦的回应、漠不关心等。 第二步：设计“触发细节”与“内心地震”——这是续写的灵魂。 1. 触发细节具体化、感官化：这个细节必须是一个主人公亲眼所见、亲耳所闻或亲身触碰的具体事物，而非抽象说教。例如： 视觉：父亲鬓角的白发、母亲手上新增的裂口、家人为你留着一盏灯的窗口。 听觉：深夜父母压低声音的谈话、一声无奈的叹息。 触觉：接过父亲递来的生活费时，碰到他粗糙的手掌。 物品：一本旧的日记、一张褪色的全家福、一份为你保留的礼物。 2. 内心挣扎过程化：这是描写的重点。不能直接跳到“我懂了”，要详细刻画从震惊、怀疑、到回忆串联、再到愧疚与顿悟的完整心理链条。例如：“我从未注意到……”→“难道一直以来我都……”→“那些我曾抱怨的瞬间，原来都是……” 第三步：落实“破冰行动”与“感悟升华” 1. 行动是理解的证明：描写主人公基于新认知做出的具体、细微且充满情感的行动。这可能不是一个隆重的道歉，而可能是一句迟疑的关心、一次主动的帮忙、一个笨拙的拥抱，或一份用心的小礼物。行动虽小，但需与之前的“冷漠”形成鲜明对比。 2. 感悟要点明“关系”的转变：结尾的升华应强调关系的修复与升温。主人公领悟到，真正的理解让“家”的感觉变得更加真实和温暖。可以用环境描写烘托此氛围，如“阳光洒进房间，曾经无形的隔阂似乎也随之消融”。 1、 必备优秀句式 1. 句式用途：描写不经意间注意到那个颠覆性细节的瞬间。 句型结构：For the first time, I really noticed that ... 例句：For the first time, I really noticed the deep wrinkles around my father's eyes and the slight tremble in his hands as he handed me the book. 翻译：我第一次真正注意到父亲眼角的深深皱纹，以及他把书递给我时，手上那轻微的颤抖。 2. 句式用途：刻画回忆涌现，将往日片段重新解读时的愧疚感。 句型结构：A flood of memories rushed back, each one now appearing in a completely different light. 例句：A flood of memories rushed back, each one now appearing in a completely different light — her early mornings, her constant reminders, all were silent proofs of her endless love. 翻译：记忆如潮水般涌回，每一段如今都显得完全不同——她清晨的忙碌，她不停的叮嘱，原来都是她无尽之爱的无声证明。 3. 句式用途：表达内心坚冰消融，情感决堤的瞬间。 句型结构：Something inside me melted, and all ……. I had been holding onto just washed away. 例句：Something inside me melted, and all the indifference I had been holding onto just washed away, replaced by an overwhelming urge to hug her. 翻译：我内心的某些东西融化了，所有我曾坚持的冷漠都被冲刷殆尽，取而代之的是一种想拥抱她的强烈冲动。 4. 句式用途：描写基于理解所采取的、尝试性破冰的细微行动。 句型结构：With a heart full of mixed emotions, I found myself + doing (动词-ing)... 例句：With a heart full of mixed emotions, I found myself walking into the kitchen and offering, in a voice barely above a whisper, “Mom, let me help with the dishes.” 翻译：怀着百感交集的心情，我不知不觉地走进厨房，用几乎细不可闻的声音提议道：“妈，让我来洗碗吧。” 5. 句式用途：升华主题，点明“理解”对关系的重新定义。 句型结构：It was at that moment that I fully understood that love isn't always loud; sometimes, it's the silent language that speaks the loudest in our hearts. 例句：It was at that moment that I fully understood that …..; sometimes, it's……... 翻译：正是在那一刻，我完全明白了，爱不总是喧哗的；有时，无声的语言在我们心中最为响亮。 6. 句式用途：用环境描写映衬关系破冰后温暖、和谐的氛围。 句型结构：The early sunlight streaming in, the whole family was bathed in a newfound warmth and understanding. 例句：The early sunlight streaming in, the whole family was bathed in a newfound warmth and understanding. 翻译：清晨的阳光洒进来，全家人都沐浴在一种崭新的温暖与理解之中。 考向02 换位·担当之责 一、 常见情节与主题归纳 这类故事的核心情节是：主人公长期习惯于被家人呵护、视为重心，在某种触发下（如目睹家人的脆弱、家庭突逢变化），内心产生强烈震动，角色认知发生根本转变。从被动的“受庇者”和“索取者”，主动尝试为家庭分担压力、承担责任，在笨拙但真诚的实践中，完成个人成长与家庭责任的对接。 常见情节： 1. 危机下的主动扛起：家庭突遇经济压力、主要照顾者（如父母一方）生病或受伤，主人公主动承担家务、照顾弟妹、甚至尝试寻找兼职。 2. 岁月中的自觉接力：注意到父母日渐增多的白发、放缓的脚步或力不从心的瞬间，主人公开始默默接手以往由父母操劳的重活、琐事。 3. 为承诺的自我挑战：为了兑现对家人的一个重要承诺（如“考上好大学”、“学会这项技能”），挑战自己原本畏惧或能力不及的事情，动力源于让家人欣慰。 4. 修复过失的责任承担：因自己的过失给家庭带来麻烦或损失（如损坏贵重物品），不是逃避，而是想方设法通过自己的努力进行弥补。 核心主题：故事旨在刻画从 “被爱”到“去爱”、从 “接受”到“给予” 的角色升华，核心是体悟责任、牺牲与家族纽带的真谛。成长的标志是肩膀能扛起重量，内心能从家庭视角思考问题，懂得爱不仅是享受温暖，更是创造温暖。 二、 续写思路：聚焦“触发”与“扛起” 构思此类故事，关键在于将“担当”化为一系列具体、甚至略显笨拙的行动，并展现其中真实的心理重量。可遵循以下三步： 第一步：定位“依赖常态”与“触发情境” 首先，明确原文中主人公所处的 “被照顾者”舒适区是什么（如：只需专心学习、家务从不沾手、凡事有父母兜底）。然后，精准定位打破这种常态的具体情境：是外部危机（如父亲扭伤腰），还是一个让父母显露出疲态与脆弱的瞬间（如母亲在沙发上睡着）？这是角色转换的起点。 第二步：描绘“心理转向”与“行动尝试”——这是续写的核心。 1. 心理转向具体化：描写主人公从 “震惊/心疼”到“愧疚/思考”再到“决心行动” 的完整心理链条。重点不是抽象地“想担当”，而是具体地“想做什么来分担”。例如：“看到妈妈揉着酸痛的肩膀，一个念头击中了我：如果我能……是不是就能……” 2. 行动尝试过程化、波折化：这是重中之重。必须详细描写主人公生疏、吃力甚至遭遇挫败的行动过程。 细节要真实：第一次做饭的手忙脚乱、照顾哭闹弟妹的无措、兼职工作中的委屈与疲惫。 波折要合理：把菜炒糊、搞砸任务被批评、因兼顾责任而影响学业产生焦虑。正是这些“不容易”，才让“担当”显得真实可贵。 第三步：展现“成长印记”与“关系升华” 1. 成长体现在“能力”与“心态”：结局不必是问题被完美解决。成长应体现在：主人公掌握了新技能，更重要的是，他/她对“责任”二字有了切肤之感，理解了父母平日的付出。可以描写一个对比细节，如“曾经觉得轻飘飘的‘辛苦’二字，如今有了沉甸甸的重量”。 2. 升华要点明“共同体”意识：主人公领悟到，家是一个需要所有成员共同支撑的“我们”，而自己已成为其中有力的一份子。家庭关系从单向呵护，升级为双向扶持。 三、 必备优秀句式 1. 句式用途：描写目睹家人困境，内心受到冲击并决心改变的瞬间。 句型结构：Looking at ..., a strong sense of responsibility surged within me, and I knew …….. 例句：Looking at my mother's exhausted face as she slept on the couch, a strong sense of responsibility surged within me, and I knew I had to do something to lighten her burden. 翻译：看着母亲在沙发上睡着时疲惫的脸庞，一股强烈的责任感在我心中涌起，我知道我必须做点什么来减轻她的负担。 2. 句式用途：刻画初次尝试承担责任时的笨拙与决心。 句型结构：With clumsy but determined hands, I set about + doing... 例句：With clumsy but determined hands, I set about preparing dinner, following the recipe on my phone with intense concentration. 翻译：我用一双笨拙但坚定的手，开始准备晚餐，全神贯注地照着手机上的菜谱操作。 3. 句式用途：描写在担当过程中遇到挫折、感到身心俱疲的时刻。 句型结构：There were moments when ..., and I felt like giving up. But the thought of ... kept me going. 例句：There were moments when the baby wouldn't stop crying and my homework piled up, and I felt like giving up. But the thought of my mother's trusting smile kept me going. 翻译：有些时刻，宝宝哭闹不止，我的作业堆积如山，我几乎想要放弃。但一想到母亲信任的微笑，我就又坚持了下去。 4. 句式用途：表达通过亲身经历，真正理解了家人往日辛苦后的深刻感悟。 句型结构：Only after ... did I begin to understand the true meaning of ..., and appreciate how much ... had been doing for us. 例句：Only after standing in the kitchen for three hours did I begin to understand the true meaning of “a home-cooked meal”, and appreciate how much my mother had been doing for us day after day. 翻译：只有在厨房站了三个小时后，我才开始明白“一顿家常便饭”的真正含义，也才体会到母亲日复一日为我们付出了多少。 5. 句式用途：升华主题，点明“担当”对自我成长与家庭意义的重新定义。 句型结构：This experience taught me that……..; it's about ……... 例句：This experience taught me that growing up isn't just about getting taller; it's about your shoulders becoming strong enough to share the weight of the family. 翻译：这段经历让我明白，成长不仅仅是长高，更是让你的肩膀变得足够强壮，能够分担家庭的重量。 6. 句式用途：描写担当行动后，家人认可或关系变得紧密的温暖瞬间。 句型结构：When ... placed a hand on my shoulder and said, “...”, I felt a warmth that no words could describe. 例句：When my father placed a hand on my shoulder and said, “Son, you've really helped out,” I felt a warmth that no words could describe. 翻译：当父亲把手放在我的肩上说：“儿子，你真的帮上大忙了。”时，我感到一种难以言喻的温暖。 考向03 求同·共生之智 一、常见情节与主题归纳 这类故事的核心情节是：主人公与家人因价值观、生活方式或人生重大选择产生根本性的分歧与冲突，双方各执己见，关系陷入僵局。冲突并非源于误解或缺乏爱，而是源于时代、阅历或个人追求的不同。故事最终并非以一方说服另一方告终，而是主人公通过反思，领悟到爱的更高形式是尊重差异、接纳不完美，从而找到在分歧中共存、在爱中和解的智慧，实现关系的动态平衡与升华。 常见情节： 1．选择之争：在文理分科、大学专业、职业道路或婚姻对象等重大人生选择上，与父母的期望发生激烈冲突。 2. 观念之隙：因消费观念（节俭vs时尚）、娱乐方式（传统vs新兴）、审美或生活方式的不同而产生日常摩擦与互不理解。 3. 习惯之扰：无法忍受家人的生活习惯（如父亲囤积旧物、祖辈的过度节俭），将其视为需要“纠正”的问题。 4. 重组家庭的磨合：与继父母、新出生的弟妹因情感份额、家庭规则调整而产生隔阂与抗拒。 核心主题：故事旨在超越简单的“对错”之争，刻画从 “对抗”与“改造” 到 “尊重”与“共存” 的心智成熟，核心是领悟包容、边界与爱的本质。成长的标志是认识到家人是彼此独立的个体，而家的凝聚力正在于能容纳这些差异，实现“和而不同”。 二、 续写思路：聚焦“冲突”与“和解智慧” 构思此类故事，关键在于不简化冲突，也不提供“万能解药”，而是描绘一条通向情感共鸣的“第三条道路”。可遵循以下三步： 第一步：定位“冲突核心”与“情感困局” 首先，明确原文中矛盾的具体焦点是什么？是关乎未来的“人生选择”，还是关乎当下的“生活方式”？其次，明确双方（尤其是主人公）的核心诉求与情感软肋。例如，主人公坚持选艺术，诉求是“自我实现”，软肋是“怕被否定价值”；父母坚持选理科，诉求是“孩子未来安稳”，软肋是“怕孩子吃苦”。冲突是表层，深层是爱的不同表达方式在碰撞。 第二步：设计“反思契机”与“认知升维”——这是续写的关键。 1. 契机需超越输赢：触发反思的不应是对方“认错”，而应是一个让主人公跳出自身立场，看到对方处境或爱之本源的契机。例如： 外部参照：看到其他家庭的类似矛盾与悲剧，或看到他人对自家亲情的羡慕。 历史重现：发现父母年轻时也曾为梦想抗争的旧物，理解他们的选择有其时代局限性。 爱的回溯：在激烈争吵后，发现对方仍默默做着关爱自己的小事（如热着饭菜、悄悄查资料）。 2. 升维在于“理解因由，未必认同选择”：反思的重点不是“他们是对的”，而是 “我理解了他们的恐惧、他们的爱从何而来” 。认知从“你们为什么不支持我？”升维为“我看到了你们为什么这样坚持，这背后同样是爱，只是形式不同。” 第三步：落实“和解行动”与“共生领悟” 1. 行动是寻求“最大公约数”：和解行动不是放弃自我，而是主动沟通，寻求双方都能接受的“中间路径”。例如，不是放弃艺术，而是提出“我先打好文化课基础，同时用假期精进画技证明自己”；不是要求父亲改变习惯，而是为自己划定一个“不干涉区”，并为他整理出安全的储物空间。 2. 领悟要点明“爱的容器”：最终的升华应认识到，家之所以为家，就在于它能作为一个包容差异的容器。真正的强大不是消除差异，而是在知晓差异后，依然选择用爱联结。关系从“要求一致”的紧绷，走向 “尊重不同”的松弛与深厚。 三、 必备优秀句式 1. 句式用途：描写因根本观念不同而产生的激烈内心冲突与痛苦。 句型结构：A fierce battle raged inside me between my desire for ... and my fear of hurting ... 例句：A fierce battle raged inside me between my desire for my own future and my fear of hurting my parents' deepest hopes. 翻译：一场激烈的战争在我内心爆发，一边是我对自己未来的渴望，另一边是我对伤害父母最深期望的恐惧。 2. 句式用途：刻画跳出自我视角，开始理解对方立场根源的瞬间。 句型结构：It suddenly dawned on me that behind their stubborn opposition lay not a desire to control, but a deep-seated fear for ... 例句：It suddenly dawned on me that behind their stubborn opposition lay not a desire to control, but a deep-seated fear for my stability in an uncertain world. 翻译：我突然意识到，他们固执反对的背后，并非控制欲，而是对这个不确定的世界里我能否安稳生活的深深担忧。 3. 句式用途：表达在冲突后放下“输赢执念”，准备寻求沟通的内心转变。 句型结构：I realized this wasn't a war to be won, but a bridge to be built. The first step had to be mine. 例句：I realized this wasn't a war to be won, but a bridge to be built. The first step had to be mine. 翻译：我意识到这不是一场要打赢的战争，而是一座需要搭建的桥梁。第一步必须由我迈出。 4. 句式用途：描写提出折中方案、寻求共识的主动沟通。 句型结构：Taking a deep breath, I said, “I understand why you... Could we perhaps find a middle ground where I... while also...?” 例句：Taking a deep breath, I said, “I understand why you worry. Could we perhaps find a middle ground where I pursue this major, while also minoring in a more practical field you suggest?” 翻译：我深吸一口气，说道：“我理解你们的担忧。我们能否找到一个折中方案，让我攻读这个专业，同时辅修一个你们建议的更实用的领域？” 5. 句式用途：升华主题，点明“共生”智慧对家庭关系的重新定义。 句型结构：That day, I learned that the strongest family bonds are not those without differences, but those that can stretch and hold firm even when we pull in different directions. 例句：That day, I learned that the strongest family bonds are not those without differences, but those that can stretch and hold firm even when we pull in different directions. 翻译：那天我懂得了，最牢固的家庭纽带并非毫无差异，而是即使我们朝向不同方向用力，它也能延展并牢牢维系。 6. 句式用途：描绘达成谅解后，一种更成熟、更轻松的家庭氛围。 句型结构：The air in the room felt …….now, not because…….., but because ……….. 例句：The air in the room felt clearer now, not because the problem had vanished, but because we had finally made room for each other's truths to coexist. 翻译：房间里的空气似乎清新了，不是因为问题消失了，而是因为我们终于为彼此的真实腾出了共存的空间。 考向01 破冰·理解之桥 【例1-1】( 2026届浙江省嘉兴市高三上学期一模英语试题)Olly Powell’s seventh birthday wish to become invisible came true a week later with the birth of his sister, Lily. Initially, the power felt like a brilliant secret. He could slip into the kitchen for an extra biscuit unnoticed, and he loved listening from the hallway as his parents chatted amusedly about “that little mouse”. It was magic! However, the joy was gone when Lily finally came home from the hospital. The reality was nothing like he had expected. Now, he often stood invisible in the hall. His request for swimming lessons was gently declined by his parents, who were busy with Lily. Being a big brother was the worst thing in the world. A deep sense of being unseen settled in his heart. Feeling left out, he made a decision. “I bet they’d love to see me at school,” he thought. He struggled to open the front door and stepped outside. The street was quiet in the morning. He walked on, each step heavy with a desperate, unspoken hope that someone would finally see him and call him back. His journey ended when a sharp bark from Mrs. Cooper’s little dog, Teddy, made him look up. “Olly? You aren’t here on your own, are you?” Mrs. Cooper called out, her kind face filled with concern. She led him gently into her garden and phoned his father — who apologised for being so tied up with the new baby. To pass the time while waiting, Mrs. Cooper showed Olly the incubator (孵化器) where several eggs were kept. When he pointed out a fine crack (裂缝) on one of them, she explained it was a promising sign. Noticing Teddy waiting patiently by the door, she added softly that the eggs currently required a great deal of her attention — much like Lily — but Teddy understood he was still her good boy. Just then, a faint sound came from the cracked shell. Olly leaned in, then looked up at Mrs. Cooper and Teddy, and for the first time all morning he did not feel quite so alone. 注意： (1) 续写词数应为150左右; (2) 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Minutes later, Dad arrived, relieved to see Olly safe and sound. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Back home, Mum stood waiting with Lily asleep in her arms. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Paragraph 1: Minutes later, Dad arrived, relieved to see Olly safe and sound. He knelt down and pulled Olly into a tight hug. “I’m so sorry I’ve been too busy with Lily to notice how you feel,” Dad said softly. On the way home, Dad listened carefully as Olly talked about the eggs and Teddy. Dad nodded and said, “You’re right — Teddy’s still important, just like you. Being a big brother doesn’t mean you’re unseen.” Olly felt a warm glow in his heart as he held Dad’s hand. Paragraph 2: Back home, Mum stood waiting with Lily asleep in her arms. She smiled and walked over to hug Olly. “Mrs. Cooper told us about the egg,” Mum said. She led Olly to the sofa and placed Lily gently in his arms. Olly froze at first, then smiled as Lily’s tiny hand grasped his finger. “You’re the best big brother,” Mum whispered. That night, Dad put an extra biscuit by Olly’s plate. Olly knew he’d never be “invisible” again — he was a beloved brother, and that was magic too. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了7岁的Olly因妹妹Lily出生后父母精力转移，产生“被忽视的隐形感”，赌气独自外出后被邻居Cooper夫人收留，在观察孵化器里的鸡蛋和Cooper夫人的话语中获得慰藉，最终父亲前来接他的故事。 【详解】1. 段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“几分钟后，爸爸到了，看到Olly平安无事，他松了一口气。”可知，第一段可描写父亲的愧疚与道歉、Olly分享外出经历、父亲用Teddy的例子安抚Olly，点明“哥哥的身份不代表被忽视”，缓解Olly的负面情绪。 ②由第二段首句内容“回到家，妈妈抱着熟睡的Lily在等着。”可知，第二段可描写母亲的温柔回应、让Olly抱Lily的互动场景、Olly感受到的亲情，以及当晚父母用行体现对他的重视，让Olly彻底摆脱“隐形感”。 2. 续写线索：父亲接Olly——父亲道歉——Olly分享经历——父亲安抚——回家见母亲——抱Lily互动——母亲肯定——当晚获重视——摆脱“隐形感” 一、 与考向框架的匹配度分析 1. 情节与主题 高度匹配：这是 “领悟‘被爱’形式变化” 的情节变体。奥利的困境不是家人不爱他，而是新生儿妹妹的到来改变了家庭关爱的表现形式和分配，让他误读为“被忽视”和“变得隐形”。核心冲突是对爱的感知与期待产生了隔阂。 主题精准：故事最终指向从 “自我中心的失落” 到 “换位思考的理解” 的飞跃。奥利领悟到，爱并未消失，只是需要在新角色（哥哥）中重新定位，而家人的关怀始终存在。 2. 续写思路的落实 第一步：定位“情感冰点”与“固化认知”清晰。 情感冰点：奥利认为父母因妹妹莉莉而“看不见”自己，内心充满失落与被遗忘感（“Being a big brother was the worst...”）。 固化认知：他认为“被看见”的方式必须是父母像从前一样围着自己转。他的应对行为是消极躲避（站在走廊）和极端测试（独自出门以期被找回）。 第二步：“触发细节”与“内心地震”设计巧妙，但可更深刻。 触发细节：库珀夫人用孵化鸡蛋需要全心投入来类比父母对新生儿的照顾，并用小狗泰迪依然被爱来暗示奥利的家庭地位未变。这个类比是绝佳的“认知桥梁”。 可优化处：范文对奥利听到这个类比时的内心震撼（“内心地震”）描写略显平缓。可以强化他从“生物本能”理解到“家庭之爱”的豁然开朗感。 第三步：“破冰行动”与“感悟升华”完整到位。 破冰行动：父亲道歉、倾听、肯定（“你依然重要”），母亲让他拥抱妹妹、赋予新身份（“最好的哥哥”）。行动具体、双向，直击其心结。 感悟升华：结尾“他再也不会‘隐形’”与开头的“超能力”形成闭环，将对爱的理解升华为在家庭角色变化中确认自身独特价值。 写｜作｜技｜巧 1. 设置一个“颠覆性细节”：构思一个让主人公亲眼目睹、亲手触碰的具体事物作为引爆点（如：父亲药盒里的病历、母亲深夜未关的台灯、祖母修补多次的旧手套）。用特写描写它，让它与主人公的固有认知产生剧烈冲突。 2. 描写“内心认知链的断裂与重组”：这是核心。紧接着“看见”之后，用2-3句话刻画心理过程：“震惊”（这不可能！）→ “回溯”（难道那些往事……）→ “颠覆”（原来我一直错怪了……）。这是情感转折的关键证据。 3. 用一个“反向小动作”证明破冰：设计一个与故事开头冷漠行为完全相反的细微动作作为结局（如：曾甩开的手现在轻轻拉住衣角；曾紧闭的房门如今留了一条缝；曾沉默的嘴里挤出一句“妈，汤很好喝”）。动作越小，越显真挚。 易｜错｜提｜醒 1. ❌ 转变靠“说教”，而非“发现”：避免让家人直接说“我为你付出了多少”，或让老师、邻居来一番大道理点醒。理解必须源于主人公自己的“看见”和“想通”，外力只能是提供细节的线索。 2. ❌ 触发细节太“俗”或太“假”：避免用“突然看到父母的白发”这种万能但乏味的细节，或“偶然捡到父母写的感人日记”这种过于刻意的安排。细节应新颖、真实、与人物性格和家庭背景紧密相关。 3. ❌ 只有心理活动，没有关系互动：杜绝全文都是“我很感动，我明白了”的内心独白。转变必须通过一个指向家人的、具体的新行为来落地，让读者看到关系的暖流开始重新流动。 【变式1-1】(2026届浙江省浙江省“9+1”联盟高三上学期一模联考)Sara’s fingertips brushed gently across the family photo wall, tracing the memories of a time that felt increasingly distant. The edges of her sixth-birthday photo had long faded, most of it hidden behind her little brother Tom’s grinning preschool portrait. Her childhood photos were squeezed into the upper corner, nearly replaced by Tom’s new ones — his chubby face clutching a cake on his first birthday, his tiny figure with a small schoolbag on his first day of kindergarten, and even a recent one where he was proudly holding a crayon drawing. Ever since Tom was born three years ago, Mom and Dad’s world seemed to completely revolve around him. Dinner table conversations, which used to include her school stories, now centered on his newly learned words and silly little tricks. Then tonight, as Sara was finally grasping her quadratic equations (二次方程式), Tom’s toy train crashed with a “clatter” into her math book, scattering pencil bits all over the neatly written formulas. Frustration boiled over. Sara yelled, “Can’t you keep him under control?” Mom, looking exhausted, only sighed and rubbed her forehead, “He’s only four, honey. Just be more patient.” Retreating to her bedroom, Sara felt the weight of the silence around her. Moonlight spilled over her college dream board, a collection of university logos and inspirational quotes. Right in the center, over her dream school’s logo, was Tom’s glittery gold star sticker, stuck there during one of his unsupervised (无人看管的) adventures. Down the hallway, his happy screams as he played with Dad danced under the crack of her door, and hot, silent tears rolled down her cheeks. She then remembered last month: Dad had promised to come to her award ceremony but stayed home to take care of a slightly feverish Tom. The empty seat by the podium still stung. “Your grades are slipping lately,” her teacher’s concerned voice echoed in her memory, “Is everything all right at home?” Later, at midnight, Sara tiptoed past Tom’s room. The familiar smell of baby powder lingered; the small blue bed, once hers, was now covered in rocket stickers, and the nightlight by the bed cast a warm yellow glow. A twinge of guilt flickered, then faded — Mom had canceled her long-awaited music camp just last week, saying Tom’s new preschool fees were too high. The “Registration Canceled” email flashed in her mind, solidifying her decision. On the kitchen table, next to half-eaten toast, she left a note, “I’m leaving. Don’t look for me.” 注意： 1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。 Paragraph1: As dawn was just breaking, Mom’s cry woke the whole house when she found the note. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph2: Ultimately, they found Sara curled up on a bench at the bus station, shivering in the cold. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version As dawn was just breaking, Mom’s cry woke the whole house when she found the note. Her trembling fingers crumpled the paper as she sank to the floor, a choked sob escaping her lips. Dad rushed in, his face pale with panic, while Tom’s whimpers turned to loud cries, his small hands clutching Mom’s sleeve. Guilt washed over them like a tidal wave as they finally realized how lonely Sara must have felt. With hands shaking uncontrollably, Mom whispered, “We have to find her.” They scrambled into the chilly dawn. Dad frantically called her name while Mom scanned the empty park, their desperate cries echoing through the misty streets. Ultimately, they found Sara curled up on a bench at the bus station, shivering in the cold. Her arms wrapped tightly around her knees, she looked up with red-rimmed eyes as her parents approached. Mom rushed to envelop her in a warm embrace, tears streaming down her face. “We’re so sorry, sweetheart,” Dad said, his voice thick with emotion. In that fragile moment surrounded by the warmth she had thought was lost, the ice around Sara’s heart began to melt. She finally understood that family isn’t defined by perfection, but by the courage to mend what’s broken. Only by weathering storms together can a family truly strengthen its bonds, transforming fractures into the very foundation of a deeper connection. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了自从弟弟出生以来，Sara就感到被父母忽视、冷落，心中非常孤独、难过，最终留下字条后离家出走。父母在看到字条后疯狂地寻找Sara，终于在车站找到了她。父母真诚的道歉和关爱融化了Sara冰冷的心，同时也对家人有了更深的理解。 【详解】1. 段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“天刚蒙蒙亮，妈妈发现纸条时的哭喊声惊醒了全家人。”可知，该段可描述父母在得知Sara离家出走后的反应及寻找过程。 ②由第二段首句内容“最终，他们在公交车站的长椅上发现了蜷缩成一团、冻得瑟瑟发抖的Sara。”可知，该段可描述父母找到Sara后双方的表现，以及Sara对家人的理解。 2. 续写线索：妈妈的哭喊——妈妈的反应——爸爸的反应——疯狂寻找——找到了Sara——Sara的状态——妈妈的行为——爸爸的道歉——感受到了温暖——理解、点题。 3. 词汇激活： 行为类： ①逃离：escape/flee from ②紧握、紧抓：clutch/clasp ③抖动、晃动：tremble/shake ④修理、修补：mend/repair ⑤加强、强化：strengthen/enhance 情绪类： ①恐慌、惊慌：panic/terror ②绝望的、无望的：desperate/hopeless 【点睛】【高分句型1】Guilt washed over them like a tidal wave as they finally realized how lonely Sara must have felt. (运用了以连词as引导的时间状语从句和连接副词how引导的宾语从句。) 【高分句型2】Only by weathering storms together can a family truly strengthen its bonds, transforming fractures into the very foundation of a deeper connection. (运用了以only+状语开头的倒装句，以及现在分词作伴随状语。) 考向02 换位·担当之责 【例2-1】(24-25高三上·安徽阜阳·期末)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Sophia, a college student, had always been close to her grandmother, Lily. They shared a special bond, and despite the distance, they remained in constant communication through letters and phone calls. Lily had been a constant source of inspiration and encouragement for Sophia, guiding her through the challenges of her academic journey. As Sophia was busy preparing for her final exams, she received a letter from her mother, informing her that Lily had been hospitalized due to a sudden illness. The news struck Sophia with a mixture of concern and sadness, as she had always looked up to her grandmother as a source of strength. Feeling concerned and anxious, Sophia decided to make the long journey back home to visit her grandmother. She knew that her exams were important, but she also understood that her family needed her support during this difficult time. When she arrived at the hospital, she was relieved to see Lily in stable condition but visibly weakened. Over the next few days, Sophia spent every spare moment at her grandmother’s bedside, offering her support and comfort. The hospital staff and other family members were amazed at the strong bond between them, which seemed to transcend (超越) their generational differences. As they spent time together, Lily shared stories from her youth, recounting her own experiences in college and the challenges she had faced. She spoke of her passion for learning, the friendships she had established, and the importance of resilience (韧性) in overcoming obstacles. She also offered valuable life lessons and wisdom, reminding Sophia of the importance of maintaining a balance between her academic pursuits and personal relationships. Their conversations deepened the connection between them, and Sophia felt grateful for the opportunity to learn from her grandmother’s experiences. Throughout her stay, Sophia also took on the responsibility of helping her mother care for Lily, assisting with her medical appointments and ensuring that her needs were met. The experience allowed her to develop a newfound appreciation for the sacrifices her mother and grandmother had made for their family. As she returned to college, she carried with her a deep sense of gratitude and determination to make them proud. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Inspired by her grandmother’s words, Sophia made a promise to herself. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ A few weeks after returning to college, Sophia received a package from her grandmother. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】   Inspired by her grandmother’s words, Sophia made a promise to herself. She promised to prioritize her relationships and make a conscious effort to stay connected with her loved ones, especially her family members. While she understood the importance of her studies, she realized that her relationships were equally, if not more, valuable in shaping her life. She also decided to visit her grandmother more frequently, cherishing the time they had together and making the most of the opportunity to learn from her wisdom. A few weeks after returning to college, Sophia received a package from her grandmother. Inside, she found a beautifully scarf (围巾), accompanied by a heartfelt note from Lily. In the note, her grandmother expressed her love and appreciation for Sophia’s visit, and shared her pride in seeing her granddaughter grow into a compassionate and driven young woman. The scarf, along with the note, served as a touchable reminder of their special bond and the moving story between two family members, strengthening the importance of love, connection, and the invaluable lessons passed down through generations. 【导语】文章以人物为线索展开，讲述了大学生Sophia与她祖母Lily之间深厚的情感纽带，以及在Lily突然生病住院时，Sophia决定放下学业，长途跋涉回家陪伴祖母的感人故事。在医院里，Sophia不仅为祖母提供了支持和安慰，还与祖母共度时光，聆听了祖母年轻时的故事和人生经验，这些交流加深了她们之间的联系，并让Sophia从祖母的经历中学到了宝贵的人生课程。同时，Sophia也承担起了帮助母亲照顾祖母的责任，这一经历让她对母亲和祖母为家庭所做出的牺牲有了新的认识和感激。最终，Sophia带着深深的感激之情和决心回到学校，立志要让家人为她骄傲。 【详解】1.段落续写 ①由第一段首句内容“受祖母话语的启发，索菲亚对自己许下了一个承诺。”可知，第一段可描写承诺的具体内容。 ②由第二段首句内容“回到大学几周后，索菲亚收到了祖母寄来的一个包裹。”可知，第二段可描写包裹里的东西以及这些东西给家庭关系带来的影响。 2.续写线索：意识到人际关系的重要性——决定经常看祖母——收到围巾和便条——强化家庭纽带 一、 与考向框架的匹配度分析 1. 情节与主题 高度匹配：这是典型的 “危机下的主动扛起” 情节。家庭（以祖母为核心）突遇健康危机，主人公主动中断个人重要事务（备考），回归家庭场域，承担起情感慰藉与辅助照护的责任。 主题精准：故事完整展现了从 “被给予者”（接受祖母的鼓励）到 “给予者”与“承接者” 的双重转变。核心不仅是生活上的短暂帮忙，更是通过聆听与陪伴，实现了家族精神与责任感的代际传承。 2. 续写思路的落实 第一步：定位“依赖常态”与“触发情境”清晰。 依赖常态：索菲亚一直是接受祖母精神鼓舞的一方（“constant source of inspiration”）。 触发情境：祖母的突然住院，构成了一个情感与责任的双重危机，打破了原有的远距离精神支持模式，将她推入需要亲身在场、提供实质性支持的境地。 第二步：“心理转向”与“行动尝试”描写充分。 心理转向：她意识到“家人此刻需要我”，在学业与亲情间做出了优先选择。这本身就是“担当”的起点。 行动尝试：原文已详细描写了她在医院的具体行动——“spent every spare moment at bedside”，“helping her mother care for Lily”。这些行动具体、务实，体现了担当的实践性。 第三步：“成长印记”与“关系升华”有待深化。 成长印记：原文提到她获得了“newfound appreciation”（新的认识），范文续写则侧重于她“做出承诺”。然而，“担当”所带来的内在力量感和角色认知的彻底转变，可以刻画得更深刻。 关系升华：关系从单向的“被引导”转变为双向的“对话”与“共担”，并指向未来的“传承”。范文通过围巾和信件来体现，是合理的。 写｜作｜技｜巧 1. 设计一个“脆弱的证据”：构思一个让主人公亲眼看见家人“需要帮助”的明确信号（如：父亲揉腰的皱眉、母亲面对账单的沉默叹息、祖父母使用智能设备时的无助）。这个信号需直接、具体，打破家人一贯的“超人”形象。 2. 描写“从笨拙到坚持”的行动链：担当的核心是 “做” 。必须详细描写主人公首次尝试时的生疏、遇到的困难以及如何调整（如：第一次做饭烧焦了锅，查阅菜谱后重做；照顾弟妹时手忙脚乱，慢慢找到节奏）。过程的笨拙感是责任感的真实刻度。 3. 用“对比与交接”升华成长：结尾通过一个与故事开头形成对比的细节（如：曾觉得轻飘的“辛苦”二字如今有了重量；曾由父母全权负责的事，现在自己能分担一部分），来暗示“支撑者”角色的确立。感悟应指向 “我成为了家庭运转中可被依靠的一环”。 易｜错｜提｜醒 1. ❌ 担当过程太“顺”或太“英雄”：避免把责任承担写得轻松自如、一次成功。没有挫折、狼狈和坚持的责任，缺乏真实感和重量感。要敢于描写主人公的吃力、出错和疲惫。 2. ❌ 动机源于外部压力或奖赏：避免让主人公的担当仅仅是因为“父母要求”或“做了有奖励”。真正的换位担当，应源于内心自发的“心疼”与“不忍”，是看到家人脆弱后油然而生的情感驱动。 3. ❌ 成长感悟空洞，未触及角色转变：不要只写“我体会到了父母的辛苦”。感悟必须深化为对自我在家庭中角色认知的根本改变（如：“我不再只是这个家的客人，而是它的维护者之一。”）。 【变式2-1】(25-26高三上·湖南部分学校联考·月考)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Benjamin was a high school student who lived with his grandma. His dad had to travel a lot for work, so he was rarely at home. Grandma was the one who woke Benjamin up every morning, made his favorite breakfast, and listened to him talk about school life after dinner. Benjamin loved Grandma very much, and she was his most important person. One morning during the summer vacation, Grandma suddenly felt very weak. She tried to stand up but fell back on the sofa. Benjamin was scared. He quickly called his dad. When his dad arrived, he carried Grandma to the car and rushed to the hospital. The doctor said Grandma needed to stay in the hospital for a few days to get better. His dad filled out all the hospital forms and stayed with them until evening. Just then, his dad’s phone rang. It was his boss. The boss said there was an important project to discuss, and his dad had to go to another city right away. His dad looked at Grandma in the hospital bed, then at Benjamin. He frowned (皱眉) and said, “I don’t know what to do. I need to take care of your grandma, but I can’t lose my job either.” Benjamin saw the worry in his dad’s eyes. He took a deep breath and said, “Dad, let me take care of Grandma. I can bring her meals, help her walk, and call the nurse if she needs anything. I’ ll also read some books in the hospital.” At first, his dad didn’t agree. He said, “You’ re still in high school. It’s too hard for you.” But Benjamin kept trying to persuade him. “Dad, I’m not a little kid anymore. I can do this. And if there’s a problem, I’ ll call you right away,” After talking for a long time, his dad finally nodded. He patted Benjamin’s shoulder and said, “Okay, but you must tell me everything every day.” 注意： (1)续写词数应为150个左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Then, Benjamin looked after his grandma with great care. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ After seven days, Grandma felt much better, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Then, Benjamin looked after his grandma with great care. He bought fresh milk from the shop near the hospital, and then took it to Grandma. He helped Grandma sit up and fed her slowly. When Grandma felt bored, he read storybooks to her —— they were the same booksGrandma used to read to him when he was little. In the afternoon, he read his books on the chair next to the bed. Whenever Grandma wanted to walk around, he held her arm carefully to keep her steady. The nurses all praised Benjamin for being a good boy. After seven days, Grandma felt much better. When his dad came back, he saw Grandma smiling and Benjamin helping her fold clothes. His dad’s eyes were wet. He walked over and hugged Benjamin tightly. “Thank you, my boy. You did such a great job.” Benjamin smiled and said,“It’s what I should do. Grandma takes care of me every day, so I want to take care of her too.” That week, Benjamin learned that being brave isn’t about not being scared; it’s about doing what needs to be done even when it’s hard. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了高中生本杰明与奶奶相依为命，暑假时奶奶突发重病住院。恰逢父亲因工作需紧急出差，本杰明主动说服父亲，独自细心照料奶奶的饮食起居、读书解闷。七天后奶奶康复，本杰明也领悟到：勇敢并非无畏，而是即便艰难也会践行该做的事。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“然后，本杰明非常小心地照顾他的奶奶。”可知，第一段可描写本杰明悉心照顾奶奶的过程。 ②由第二段首句内容“七天后，奶奶感觉好多了。”可知，第二段可描写在本杰明的照顾下奶奶身体恢复很好以及爸爸表扬了本杰明的行为。 2.续写线索：小心地照顾奶奶——照顾奶奶的具体过程——奶奶感觉好多了——爸爸回来了——表扬了本杰明——感悟 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①走过去：walked over /went over ②拥抱：hugged /embraced ③照顾：take care of /look after 情绪类 ①害怕的：scared / fearful ②小心地：carefully / with caution 【点睛】[高分句型1] When his dad came back, he saw Grandma smiling and Benjamin helping her fold clothes.（运用了When引导的时间状语从句。） [高分句型2] That week, Benjamin learned that being brave isn’t about not being scared; it’s about doing what needs to be done even when it’s hard.（运用了that引导的宾语从句以及what引导的宾语从句。） 考向03 求同·共生之智 【例3-1】(25-26高三上·山西·期中)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Mom sat at the kitchen table. Through the window blinds, sunlight cast thin striped shadows on the school list, with Rolf School topping the “fame” ranking. For years, she’d dreamed of Otto, her eleven-year-old son, going there. But her eyes kept drifting to another school’s name, Caulfield School, written in Otto’s messy handwriting with a tiny star: his favorite school. Otto had talked about Caulfield School for weeks: the outdoor pool to swim in after class, French lessons that weren’t just textbooks, and the history club’s fun ancient history role-plays. Most of all, he’d talked excitedly about the robotics program, holding a crumpled cardboard robot he’d made: “Mom, they let students build from the very beginning. Real motors, real wires! I could join the city robot contest!” Mom stirred her tea slowly, the spoon tapping the mug. She recalled her teenage years when she couldn’t go to her dream art school. Her mother told her that it wasn’t practical, and she persuaded her into giving up the idea. Now, her heart ached. She also thought of Otto’s teacher’s note last week: “He’s brilliant with his hands. Let him create, not just memorize.” She remembered last weekend, when Otto was spreading Caulfield School’s poster on the floor, tracing role-play photos, eyes shining like he was already there. She decided to give Otto the power to shape his own future. In the meantime, she would try to gradually loosen her control over Otto and give him a bit more independence. Because if there was one thing she could be absolutely certain of, it’s this: Otto would do best at the school he wanted to go. That night, Otto approached his mom, holding a DIY robot toy in his hand. “Mom, you’ll like this — not all their homework is on a screen,” he said quietly. Mom met his wide hopeful eyes. “I just want what’s best for you,” she said, though the “best” didn’t mean the same for her and Otto. Otto stepped closer, small hands wrapping her arm. “Caulfield School is best for me. I can make robots, learn history by acting and swim there. Please, Mom.” 注意： 1. 所续写短文的词数应为150个左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Mom fixed her eyes on Otto for a moment. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ A month later, Mom attended Otto’s first school activity for parents at Caulfield School. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】   Paragraph 1: Mom fixed her eyes on Otto for a moment. She pulled Otto into a tight hug, his robot toy pressing gently between them. The next morning, she filled out Caulfield School’s application, mailed it right away, and then set the school ranking list aside. That week, she watched Otto sit at his desk after school, drawing robot designs and reading history books with great interest. Sometimes he would pause and say, “Mom, wait till you see the ancient history role-play I’m in!” His bright, genuine smile made her realize she’d finally made the right choice for him.   Paragraph 2: A month later, Mom attended Otto’s first school activity for parents at Caulfield School. She stood in the school yard, watching Otto dressed in an ancient-style costume for the history club’s role-play. He was grinning as he acted out a scene from old times. Later, he proudly showed her his robot project, parts of which were made in the school’s robotics lab. “We’re entering a competition soon“ he said, his eyes full of excitement. On their way home, Otto talked excitedly about his French lesson and how he’d swum in the outdoor pool that afternoon. Mom smiled to herself, “This is the best future I could have ever wished for my son.” 【导语】本文围绕妈妈和奥托对学校选择的事展开。妈妈梦想让奥托去名声排名第一的罗尔夫学校，而奥托心仪的是考尔菲尔德学校，他向妈妈列举了考尔菲尔德学校的种种优点，如课后可使用的室外游泳池、有趣的法语课、历史俱乐部的角色扮演以及机器人项目等。妈妈回想起自己年少时没能去梦想的艺术学校，又考虑到奥托老师的评价以及奥托对考尔菲尔德学校的热情，决定让奥托自己选择未来，同时尝试逐步给予他更多独立空间。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句 “妈妈凝视了奥托一会儿。” 可知，此段应描写妈妈做出决定后的行动。她拥抱奥托，第二天为奥托填写考尔菲尔德学校的申请表并寄出，之后看到奥托对未来学校相关活动的积极准备，通过奥托的笑容确认自己的选择是正确的。 ②由第二段首句 “一个月后，妈妈参加了奥托在考尔菲尔德学校的第一次家长活动。” 可知，该段可描述妈妈在活动中的所见所闻。看到奥托穿着古装进行历史角色扮演，之后奥托又自豪展示机器人项目，并分享法语课和游泳的经历，妈妈觉得这就是她曾希望儿子拥有的最好未来。 2.续写线索：妈妈做决定并确认选择（妈妈凝视奥托后做决定，看到奥托积极准备，因他的笑容确认选择正确）—— 参加活动见证成长（妈妈参加活动，看到奥托展示历史和机器人项目，听他分享法语课和游泳，妈妈认可这个选择） 一、 与考向框架的匹配度分析 1. 情节与主题 高度匹配：这是经典的 “人生选择之争” 。冲突核心并非不爱，而是两代人对于何为“最好未来”的认知差异：母亲基于“声望”与“实用”（Rolf School），儿子基于“兴趣”与“热爱”（Caulfield School）。这直接触及价值观层面。主题精准：故事最终超越了“听妈的还是听你的”这种二元对立，指向了更高维度的和解：爱是尊重对方作为一个独立个体的生命热情，并帮助其实现。这完美契合“共生之智”的内涵。 2. 续写思路的落实 第一步：定位“冲突核心”与“情感困局”清晰。 冲突核心：对“best”（最好）的定义不同。母亲的“best”源于自身未竟梦想的补偿和对传统成功路径的依赖；儿子的“best”源于内在天赋（动手能力强）与真实热情（机器人、历史）。 情感困局：母亲的爱表现为“焦虑与控制”（希望规划儿子人生），儿子的爱表现为“渴求认可与自主”。双方都困在自己的视角里。 第二步：“反思契机”设计深刻，源于自身伤痛。 契机并非外部说教：母亲的关键转折，源于唤醒自身“未能就读艺术学校”的终身遗憾。这种“己所不欲”的痛楚，让她实现了关键的换位思考：“我是否正在成为当年我母亲那样的人？” 这是极高明的“反思契机”设计。 第三步：“和解行动”与“共生领悟”落实到位。 和解行动：母亲的选择（填申请表、搁置排名表）是放弃控制权，移交选择权。这不是妥协，而是基于理解的尊重。 共生领悟：范文通过母亲在校园活动中看到儿子眼里的光，领悟到 “这才是我能为儿子期许的最好未来” 。她的“best”定义被更新、拓宽，与儿子的“best”实现了融合与共生。 写｜作｜技｜巧 1. 设置一个具体的“分歧场景”：构思一场展现核心价值观对立的具体对话或事件（如对一份“不务正业”工作的看法）。对话中要呈现双方各自的逻辑与情感软肋，让冲突“真实可感”，而非泛泛而谈。 2. 设计一次“认知升维”的顿悟：这是关键。为主人公（通常是年轻一方）设计一个契机，使其跳出“对错之争”，看到分歧背后对方未被言明的恐惧、爱与时代局限性（例如：争执后，发现父亲偷偷查阅自己心仪专业的资料）。顿悟的焦点应是 “我理解了你的恐惧，因此我尊重你的坚持”。 3. 用一个“和解仪式”确认新关系：设计一个象征性的行动来标志关系的转型（如：将争执的志愿表折成纸船放入水中；主动为对方的习惯留出空间；用对方的逻辑来论证自己的选择）。这个行动需表明：差异被接纳，关系优先于输赢。 易｜错｜提｜醒 1. ❌ 制造“虚假妥协”或“强行一致”：避免让一方突然“想通”然后完全认同另一方，或安排一个外部事件（如比赛获奖）证明“孩子是对的”来迫使父母低头。真正的共生是“和而不同”，应在保留差异的前提下达成和解。 2. ❌ 用“第三方说教”解决核心冲突：禁止让老师、邻居或某本书突然出现，讲一番大道理直接点醒双方。认知升维必须源于主人公自身的观察、反思与情感触动，外力只能提供思考的线索。 3. ❌ 升华时空泛，脱离具体冲突：不要用“我懂得了包容的伟大”这样万能的句子结尾。升华必须回扣故事中具体的分歧点（如：“那天我明白了，最好的爱不是为你铺路，而是当你选择丛林时，为你备好一双结实的靴子。”）。 【变式3-1】(25-26高三·华大新高考联盟·期中)阅读下面的材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Chuck Harris and his parents lived in the oldest house in his neighborhood. The house was spacious but unsafe. But Chuck’s dad never wanted to sell it or build a new one because it was part of our family,”as he said. While the neighbors pulled down their houses and bult new ones, Chuck’s father was stubborn and attached to the place. When Chuck was 12 and was laughed at by neighbor’s children because of the old house, he turned to his father, and asked why they didn’t move to a new house, arguing it would save money and made more sense to just move to a new place than fixing this one. “Besides, the other kids would stop teasing me,” the boy continued. But his father replied that the house held family memories and hoped Chuck would continue to pass it down to further generations. Chuck nodded his head in agreement. When he turned 22, his father died in a car accident, leaving Chuck heartbroken. He didn’t have anyone else. So he threw himself into work to help distract him and allow him to move on. For a few years,he was so focused that he didn’t even notice how run-dowmn his house was. But at some point, he couldn’t ignore it anymore. Things got worse when his friends made fun of him after seeing his house. “Alright, that’s enough!” he thought. “I’m sorry, dad, but I’m done with this piece of trash. I’ve got to sell this house.” When he made an inquiry around the house before attempting to sel it, he noticed one of the beams (横梁) fell to the ground floor. Chuck had to change the floor in that room. Tearing down the old boards，he accidentally saw a wooden door under them. Chuck was surprised because he’d never seen it before. He knew every part, every corner of this house. “But actually, I don’t,” he told himself. “OK, let’s see what’s inside,” he said and pushed open the door. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右; 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 He saw a ladder (梯子)leading to a small basement room. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Feeling like in a museum,Chuck got an idea. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】     He saw a ladder (梯子) leading to a smnall basement room. After hesitating only a moment, Chuck climbed down, his pulse quickening with each movement. As his feet touched the ground, the beam of light revealed a small, time-capsule-like room filled with relics of the past-yellowed newspapers, an antique typewriter, some carefully arranged artifacts, and most surprisingly, an old-fashioned trunk with his family name carved on the side. It seemed as if the room had been preserved just for this moment.     Feeling like in a museum, Chuck got an idea. He opened his house as a real museum, which served as not only an honor to his father’s legacy, but also a perfect guest room for friends who’d once mocked the house. The news spread fast, and he quickly got many visitors. They took photographs, chatted and admired what was shown in front of them. Tears welled in Chuck’s eyes. For the first time in years, the old place didn’t feel like a burden-it was a gift. “The house wasn’t just a stubborn attachment, but a treasure passed down,” he thought to himself. He made a promise to pass it down to his kids. 【导语】本文讲述年轻时的Chuck因老屋老旧不受欢迎，与父亲产生分歧，但父亲坚持保留承载家族记忆的老屋。父亲去世后，Chuck一度想卖掉老屋，但在翻修时意外发现隐藏地下室及充满历史遗物的时间胶囊。他最终将老屋改造成博物馆，既传承了父亲的心愿，也获得了尊重，并决定将这份家传宝藏留给后代。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“他看到一架梯子通向地下室的一个小房间。”可知，第一段可描写Chuck顺着梯子进入地下室，发现充满旧物的小房间，这些旧物似乎在等待他的到来。 ②由第二段首句内容“感觉像在博物馆里，Chuck有了一个主意。”可知，第二段可描写Chuck受到启发，决定将房子改造成博物馆，消息传开后吸引众多参观者，他由此感悟到房子是传家宝，并决心传给孩子。 2.续写线索： 发现梯子——进入地下室——看到旧物——受到启发——改造房子——迎来参观者——感悟房子价值——决心传承 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①充满：be filled with/be full of/be packed with ②感悟：think to oneself/realize/understand ③传承：pass down/hand down/carry on 情绪类 ①惊讶：surprisingly/amazingly/astonishingly ②感激：tears well in one’s eyes/tears stream down one’s face 【点睛】[高分句型1]. As his feet touched the ground, the beam of light revealed a small, time-capsule-like room filled with relics of the past-yellowed newspapers, an antique typewriter, some carefully arranged artifacts, and most surprisingly, an old-fashioned trunk with his family name carved on the side. （使用过去分词作后置定语以及with的复合结构） [高分句型2]. He opened his house as a real museum, which served as not only an honor to his father’s legacy, but also a perfect guest room for friends who’d once mocked the house.（使用which引导非限制性定语从句以及who引导限制性定语从句） A （2025届湖北省高中名校联盟高三下学期第四次联合测评英语试题）阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Suzi wanted to go to a beach party. It was going to be the best party of the year, perhaps the best party of her life. But her mom had said no. Suzi was desperate and protested, “But everyone is going.” “I don’t care who’s going,” replied her mother. “Even if the Queen of England were going, you are still not going.” Suzi was disappointed and even heartbroken. Sunday dinner came around and Suzi's grandmother joined the family for the meal, as she nearly always did on Sunday. Gran noticed how unhappy Suzi had been looking during the meal but didn’t say a thing. It was Suzi's turn to wash up and Gran said, “Let me help you,” while the rest of the family shifted into the living room to watch a video. In the kitchen, Gran knew what had happened and said, “If you were her, what would your objections be?” Suzi hadn’t stopped to think about her mom’s side. After learning that some adults were going to be there, Gran said to Suzi, “Your mother is concerned and doesn’t want anything to happen to you?” “Nothing will happen,” objected Suzi. “Maybe you’re right,” said Gran, “but maybe Mom’s worried in case it could. You know, when your mother was your age, we used to negotiate about something. If she was going out somewhere, I would ask what time she wanted me to pick her up. She would always add an hour or two to it, saying maybe eleven or twelve o’clock, thinking I wouldn’t know what she was doing. I’d tell her that was far too late and that I wanted her home by nine. She’d object and we’d both come to a compromise (折中) at ten or ten-thirty, which was around what both of us had been thinking all along.” “That way, neither of us was the winner or loser; that way, she got to have time out as she wanted and I got to see her home at a reasonable time. By finding a compromise, we both got something, though maybe not completely, of what we wanted.” 注意: （1）续写词数应为150个左右; （2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 After hearing Gran’s story, Suzi felt lost in thought. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ With Gran’s encouragement, Suzi quietly went to her mom’s room and knocked softly. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】After hearing Gran’s story, Suzi felt lost in thought. She began to understand that her mom’s concern wasn’t just about fun, but about her safety and responsibility. Gran had helped her realize that sometimes the best solutions come from seeing things from both sides. Suzi didn’t want her mom to feel like she needed to constantly monitor her, but she also wanted to show that she could be responsible. Gran, noticing her deep reflection, suggested, “Why don’t you talk to your mom? Maybe she’ll listen.” With Gran’s encouragement, Suzi quietly went to her mom’s room and knocked softly. Her mom looked up, surprised, but smiled when she saw Suzi. “Mom, I really want to go to the party, but I understand you’re worried,” Suzi said. Her mom sighed, her expression softening. “I just want you to be safe,” she replied. They talked about their concerns and reached an agreement: Suzi could go, but she’d check in regularly. As Suzi left her mom’s room, a warm feeling filled her. She knew their bond was stronger than before. 【导语】文章以人物为线索展开，讲述了苏西想去参加一场沙滩派对，她认为这将是今年最好的派对，或许是她人生中最好的派对，但妈妈却不同意，苏西感到绝望并抗议。周日晚餐时奶奶来了，注意到苏西不开心。在厨房，奶奶让苏西换位思考妈妈的立场，还讲述了自己和苏西妈妈过去的类似经历，通过协商妥协，双方都能得到一些自己想要的东西，告诉苏西在这件事上可以和妈妈达成妥协。 【详解】1.段落续写 ①由第一段首句内容“听了奶奶的故事后，苏西陷入了沉思。”可知，第一段可描写苏西沉思的内容以及奶奶提出的建议。 ②由第二段首句内容“在奶奶的鼓励下，苏西悄悄地走进妈妈的房间，轻轻地敲了敲门。”可知，第二段可描写苏西和妈妈交流的过程以及经过这件事以后，她们的关系更紧密了。 2.续写线索：沉思——提出建议——母女交流——关系加强 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①理解：understand/comprehend ②帮助：help/assist ③意识到：realize/be aware of ④想要做某事：want to do sth/would like to do sth 情绪类 ①感到惊讶的：surprised/astonished ②担心的：worried/concerned 【点睛】[高分句型1] Suzi didn’t want her mom to feel like she needed to constantly monitor her, but she also wanted to show that she could be responsible.（运用了that引导宾语从句） [高分句型2] Her mom looked up, surprised, but smiled when she saw Suzi.（运用了when引导时间状语从句） B (25-26高三上·广西联考·期中)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Lynn was sad as she tried to remove a stain (污渍) from her new T-shirt. Her sister April had ruined her Saturday morning. Lynn had pushed April onto a table, spilling juice all over the floor. Her mother blamed April without listening, and April, unfairly grounded, took revenge (报复) by spilling coffee on Lynn’s T-shirt. Lynn thought April should be punished, remembering how April had poured glue on her seat in class the week before. Lynn couldn’t have been happier to see her sister suffer. This chain of revenge had been going on forever between the two girls ever since there had been too much stress in eighth grade. And then their mom was always on her phone and taking business trips. Sometimes she seemed to have disappeared off the face of the Earth, hardly having time to stay with her family. Lynn thought about the past. She remembered how peaceful she and April had been in third grade and how their family used to spend time together. She felt sad. She gave up cleaning her T-shirt and decided it was time to stop fighting with her sister. So, Lynn changed into a new T-shirt, took a deep breath and entered her sister’s room. April looked confused for a second wondering why her sister was here. “Do you want to conquer the world?” Lynn asked. She didn’t actually mean to conquer the world, but when the two girls were little, they challenged themselves to climb a pretty high rock at the back of their house inside a small wood. And when they got to the top, they would’ve “conquered the world”. The sisters hadn’t actually managed to do that yet, and they stopped trying since it looked a bit stupid for teenagers to climb a rock. After that, they basically forgot about the whole thing.注意： (1)续写词数应为150个左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 April looked puzzled for a second, and then laughed. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ And the method they used worked! ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 April looked puzzled for a second, and then laughed. "You still remember that silly rock?" she said, anger fading in her eyes. Lynn nodded shyly. "I miss our friendship, not fights," she whispered. April softened, staring at the stained T-shirt guiltily. "Sorry about your shirt," she mumbled. Lynn shook her head. "Let’s finish what we started," she said, grabbing April’s hand. They walked to the backyard, chatting about old memories. Climbing the rock was tough, but they pulled, pushed and cheered each other on. Their laughter echoed, replacing long-held tension. And the method they used worked! The revenge chain broke. Whenever annoyed, they’d recall the rock adventure. Their mom noticed the change, putting down her phone and planning a family trip. Lynn and April learned to listen and forgive instead of blaming. The stained T-shirt reminded them of silly fights, but more of the day they reconnected. They didn’t just conquer the rock—they conquered anger and rediscovered sisterly joy. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Lynn因妹妹April将咖啡洒在她的新T恤上而感到伤心，回忆起两人从三年级时的亲密无间到如今因学业压力和母亲忙碌而频繁互相报复的过往。Lynn决定停止争斗，主动找April重温儿时挑战攀爬后院岩石的回忆，试图修复姐妹关系。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“April愣了一下，然后笑了。”可知，第一段可描写姐妹俩重温儿时挑战攀爬后院岩石的回忆，在攀爬过程中互相鼓励，笑声驱散了长久以来的紧张气氛。 ②由第二段首句内容“她们的方法奏效了！”可知，第二段可描写复仇循环被彻底打破后，姐妹俩如何以新的方式处理矛盾，母亲如何因家庭氛围的改善而调整自己的行为，以及这次经历给整个家庭带来的深远影响。 2.续写线索： April笑容初现——Lynn真诚表白——April愧疚道歉——姐妹携手攀岩——回忆如潮涌——复仇链断裂——母亲察觉变化——家庭旅行计划——学会倾听与宽容——重拾姐妹欢愉 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①消失：fade/disappear ②抓住：grab/seize ③回想：recall/reflect on 情绪类 ①羞愧地：guiltily/shamefully ②恼怒的：annoyed/irritated 【点睛】【高分句型1】April softened, staring at the stained T-shirt guiltily.（运用了现在分词作状语） 【高分句型2】“Let’s finish what we started,” she said, grabbing April’s hand.（运用了what引导的宾语从句以及现在分词作状语） C (25-26高三上·山东潍坊·期中)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Coach Dad On a November afternoon in Belmont, my five-year-old son Jack asked me to go for a walk. Not a big moment for most dads, but it felt good to be asked by him. As we walked along the street, thoughts rose in my heart: Nothing was more important to me than being a good father. But more and more these days, I asked myself, “Was I?” I’m a business consultant, helping companies develop employees into successful teams. It was the work meant for me. If only I felt that same confidence as a father. I wondered why I always felt like something was missing between us. Yet I wasn’t completely clueless. They say your parenting style is shaped by how your parents raised you, and my role models weren’t perfect. But I wasn’t like my dad. Jack meant everything to me. Reaching the end of the street, we found my friend Rick playing basketball with his son. “Hey, John, want to shoot a few?” Rick said, holding up the basketball. I shook my head. “Not really my game,” I said. Rick passed the ball to Jack and walked over to me. “I can hardly get Jack to do anything fun with me. How do you manage it, Rick?” I asked. “I try to make what’s important to my kid important to me, even if it’s just shooting a few baskets,” he replied. Easy for him, I thought. He likes playing sports while I know nothing about it. On our way home, Jack said, “Dad, our Family Basketball Day at school is this coming Friday. I really want to play. It would be so much fun! Can we, please?” I recalled how badly I’d wanted my dad to be there for me and decided to follow Rick’s advice. That night, after getting Jack to bed, I sat at the computer and filled out the application. That’s when I noticed a box at the bottom asking, “Would you like to coach?” Before I could think twice, I clicked YES and hit SEND． “That’s awesome!” Jack cheered when I told him the next day. 注意： (1)续写词数应为150个左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Then came our first practice. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I searched the web for coaching tips. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Then came our first practice. Not so awesome. I had the kids in our team gather around. Eight eager faces stared up at me. “Welcome to our first practice. We’re going to have fun!” They looked at me blankly. Did they realize I had no idea what I was doing? “Let’s shoot some baskets,” I proceeded to demonstrate without success... three times! Worse still, I didn’t have a whistle. My kids were wandering around aimlessly. Even Jack seemed lost. A wave of embarrassment washed over me. “I’ve made a huge mistake,” I thought to myself. “I’m just going to disappoint Jack.” I couldn’t let that happen. I had to find a way to cheer him up, no matter what. I searched the web for coaching tips. One stood out: success comes when your heart is in the right place. Suddenly, everything clicked. My father had given me qualities that served me well at work; now, they would help me focus on what mattered to Jack. I dove into learning basketball basics, not forgetting to get myself a whistle. The next practice, I gathered my team and said, “Follow your heart; things work out!” I patiently walked them through the basics and modeled the movements. A flow of passing and shooting on court. Then a shot banked in. “Dad, I did it!” Jack jumped for joy. I ran over, gave him a high five and lifted him up. For me, this moment was everything. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了身为商业顾问的父亲，为满足儿子Jack的愿望，克服自身对篮球的无知，主动担任学校家庭篮球日教练，在学习与实践中拉近父子距离、实现自我成长的故事。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“紧接着就是我们的第一次训练。”以及第二段首句内容“我上网搜索了教练技巧。”可知，第一段可描写第一次训练以失败告终。 ②由第二段首句内容“我上网搜索了教练技巧。”可知，第二段可描写作者搜索了教练技巧，最终成功带领孩子们完成了篮球训练。 2.续写线索：第一次训练如期而至——可知，面对着孩子们期待的小脸，作者却完全不知道应该做什么——作者感到非常无措，同时也很尴尬——于是，作者上网搜索了教练技巧——作者明白了唯有用心才能成功——于是，作者开始学习篮球知识——第二次训练时，作者胸有成竹，成功带领孩子们完成了篮球训练 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①玩得开心：have fun/ enjoy one’s time ②袭来：wash/sweep/strike ③专注于：focus on/ concentrate on 情绪类 ①耐心地：patiently/ with patience ②高兴：joy/ delight 【点睛】【高分句型1】One stood out: success comes when your heart is in the right place.（运用了when引导的状语从句） 【高分句型2】My father had given me qualities that served me well at work; now, they would help me focus on what mattered to Jack.（运用了that引导的定语从句和what引导的宾语从句） D (2026届浙江省精诚联盟高三上学期一模英语试题) 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 “Do you notice anything different?” I asked my daughter one sunny spring afternoon. “Not really,” she responded while glancing around the living room and into the kitchen. “What am I missing?” That got the wheels spinning in my head, paving the way for me to eventually take a big step out of my comfort zone. For as long as I could remember, I’d never believed my house was clean enough to invite friends over. So, whenever we were expecting company, I tired myself out to make certain the house was spotless. I cleaned so thoroughly that I ended up too tired mentally and physically to enjoy their company. A great example was the time I offered to host a baby shower for my granddaughter and her husband. Realizing we would be inviting guests from both sides of the family, I was fearful as to how people might view my house. It was quite a lovely house, but I was still obsessed (着迷) with having everything perfect. Of course, I wanted my kitchen floor to look as bright and clean as possible. So, while all the windows and doors in the house were shut, I mixed ammonia (氨水) and bleach (漂白剂), got down on my hands and knees, and scrubbed (擦洗) away. Within a matter of moments, I began to feel rather short of breath. Realizing that combination of cleaning products had likely released poisonous gas, I opened all the windows immediately. But I continued cleaning the floors until they were shining. The house must look perfect. As time passed, I realized I was caught between a rock and a hard place—no unnecessary anxiety or exhausting housecleaning, but also a lovely home with no visitors. It had to be fate (命运) the day my daughter stopped by and said, “What am I missing?” I’d just finished up a week of thorough spring cleaning that included washing all the windows, both inside and out, shampooing the carpet, scrubbing the kitchen floor and polishing the furniture. To me, the house shone with springtime cleanliness. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 If my daughter missed it, would anyone else notice it? _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I took a big step and started inviting friends to stop by _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 If my daughter missed it, would anyone else notice it? Maybe my guests likewise didn’t pay much attention to how spotless my house appeared after I’d worked so hard to prepare for their visits. I thought about the times I’d visited friends. Although we always had a good time, not once could I recall how clean or messy their homes looked. We were more interested in talking and laughing — actually enjoying ourselves. Eventually, I began to feel more comfortable that it wasn’t my house my friends were coming to see: it was my family and me. I took a big step and started inviting friends to stop by. Surprisingly, I looked forward to their visits. Of course, I tidied things up a bit when company was expected, but I definitely did not exhaust myself by trying to surpass what was already perfect. The change was liberating. I began to fully enjoy the company of my friends, both mentally and physically. What a blessing it was to finally accept that we had a lovely, welcoming home where everyone could have a good time—and nobody appreciated that more than me. 【导语】本文是一篇记叙文。作者曾因过度追求完美清洁而害怕邀请朋友，导致无法享受社交。在女儿提问后，作者反思并克服了焦虑，开始轻松招待朋友，发现大家更重视情谊而非环境，从此享受生活，学会接纳不完美。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“如果我的女儿没注意到，其他人会注意到吗？”可知，第一段可描写作者对客人是否关注家居清洁的疑虑。 ②由第二段首句内容“我迈出了大步，开始邀请朋友上门。”可知，第二段可描写作者开始邀请朋友并享受友谊的经过。 2.续写线索： 疑虑——转变——接纳——享受——感悟 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①关注：pay attention to / focus on / concentrate on ②期待：look forward to / anticipate / expect ③享受：enjoy / relish / savor 情绪类 ①舒适的：comfortable / at ease / relaxed ②感激的：appreciated / grateful / thankful 【点睛】[高分句型1] Although we always had a good time, not once could I recall how clean or messy their homes looked.（although引导的让步状语从句，以及not once置于句首引起的部分倒装） [高分句型2] What a blessing it was to finally accept that we had a lovely, welcoming home where everyone could have a good time — and nobody appreciated that more than me.（运用that引导的宾语从句以及where引导定语从句） E (2026届山东省实验中学高三上学期12月第三次诊断英语试题)阅读下列文章，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The Garden Project That Bonded Us When Dad announced we would transform the overgrown backyard into a vegetable garden, I rolled my eyes while Tom, my 12-year-old little brother, cheered. “It’s a waste of time,” I complained, scrolling through my phone. “We could just buy vegetables from the supermarket.” Tom, however, had always dreamed of growing his own tomatoes—especially since Mom’s birthday was only three months away, and he’d been talking about picking fresh tomatoes to make her favorite pasta sauce. Dad smiled, handing us a list, “Lily, you’ll handle planning the layout (布局) and buying seedlings (幼苗). Tom, you’ re in charge of clearing the weeds and digging the soil. Teamwork makes the dream work” He paused, glancing at the calendar on the wall where Mom’s birthday was circled in red. “Three months is quite enough for those potato seedlings to bear fruit—perfect timing if we get started now.” The first weekend, conflict erupted. I spent hours researching online but forgot to buy the seedlings, comforting myself “too busy with homework.” Tom was pulling weeds for hours, sweating profusely. Several days later, he marched into the garden expecting to find rows of seedlings, only to be met with empty yard, and then exploded with anger, shouting “You didn’t even do your basic job I’m doing all the hard work while you’re sitting on the couch Look！ My gloves are worn out” I fired back, “Digging is easy My part requires intelligence, not just brute force” We refused to speak to each other, leaving the half-cleared yard in chaos. Dad didn’t intervene immediately; instead, he left a note on the kitchen table, “Labor teaches us responsibility, and teamwork means supporting each other, not blaming.” That night, I couldn’t sleep, remembering how Tom had helped me fix my bike last year, even though he’d had a fever. Meanwhile, Tom lay in his room staring at the layout paper I threw to him earlier that week, recalling the way I’d lingered over the layout drawings many times, saying, “Mom will definitely love it.” The next morning, I woke up at dawn, grabbed my wallet, and raced to the store. I came back with not just tomato seedlings but also a new pair of gardening gloves for Tom. 注意：（1）续写词数应为150个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Para. 1: Tom was already in the backyard when I arrived. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Para. 2: Finally, the big day came—Mom’s birthday. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Tom was already in the backyard when I arrived. I approached quietly, holding out the gloves and seedlings. “Sorry I messed up earlier, I shouldn’t have been rude to you.” I mumbled. Tom turned around, with a faint surprise crossing his face. He took them readily and grinned, “That’s all right. Let’s get started.” Together, we planted the seedlings, him digging neat holes and me arranging them according to the layout. Sweat dripped down our faces, but laughter replaced our earlier misunderstanding as we helped each other. We waited, hopeful for a little miracle to take root. Finally, the big day came — Mom’s birthday. We led her to the garden, where ripe tomatoes hung thick and heavy on the branches. Mom hugged us tightly, tears blurring her vision, “This is the best birthday gift — seeing you two work together.” Dad, together with us, picked some fresh tomatoes to make sauce. We enjoyed it, chatting and laughing joyfully. Teamwork and understanding didn’t just grow plants, they bonded our hearts closer and wove our family closer. Family love is a gift far sweeter than any sauce, a memory we would cherish forever. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述父亲提议将杂草丛生的后院改造成菜园，作者负责规划布局和购买幼苗，弟弟汤姆负责清理杂草和挖土，目标是赶在母亲生日时种出蔬菜。首个周末，因作者忘记买幼苗，两人发生冲突。当晚，姐弟俩回忆起对方的好，第二天，作者一早去买了幼苗和手套。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“我到的时候，汤姆已经在后院了”可知，第一段续写应围绕姐弟俩和好后一起劳作展开，描述作者道歉，汤姆接受，两人分工协作种植幼苗，充满欢笑，期待植物生根成长。 ②由第二段首句内容“终于，那个重要的日子来临了 —— 妈妈的生日”可知，第二段续写要展现母亲生日当天，菜园成果丰硕，大家一起采摘番茄做酱，一家人欢乐相聚，突出团队合作和理解拉近家人关系，是最珍贵的礼物。 2.续写线索：作者道歉——汤姆接受——两人分工种幼苗——充满欢笑期待收获——母亲生日看到菜园成果感动——家人摘番茄做酱欢乐相聚——感悟团队合作和家庭之爱。 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①接近：approach /get close to ②咧嘴笑：grin /beam ③拥抱：hug /embrace 情绪类 ①欢乐地：joyfully /merrily ②紧紧地：tightly /firmly 【点睛】【高分句型 1】I approached quietly, holding out the gloves and seedlings.（运用现在分词短语 holding out the gloves and seedlings作伴随状语） 【高分句型 2】Mom hugged us tightly, tears blurring her vision, “This is the best birthday gift—seeing you two work together.”（运用独立主格结构） F (25-26高三上·重庆九龙坡区重庆育才中学校·月考)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文， It was the elderly woman’s birthday. She got up early to be ready for the post. From the second floor flat she could see the postman when he came down the street, and the little boy from the ground floor brought up her letters or parcels on the rare occasions when anything came. Today she was sure there would be something. Linda wouldn’t forget her mother’s birthday, even if she seldom wrote at other times. Of course Linda was busy. Her husband had been made Mayor, and Linda herself had got a medal for her work for the aged. The elderly woman was eighty today. She had put on her best dress. Perhaps-perhaps Linda might come. After all, eighty was a special birthday, another decade lived or endured just as you chose to look at it. Even if Linda did not come, she would send a present. The elderly woman was sure of that. Two spots of color brightened her cheeks. She was excited like a child. She would enjoy her day. Yesterday Mrs. Morrison, whom Linda had arranged to light the fire and give the elderly woman her breakfast, had given the flat an extra clean, and today she had brought a card and a bunch of marigolds when she came to do the breakfast. Mrs. Grant downstairs had made a cake, and in the afternoon she was going down there to tea. The little boy, Johnnie, had been up with a packet of mints, and said he wouldn’t go out to play until the post had come. “I guess you’ll get lots and lots of presents,” he said, “I did last week when I was six.” The elderly woman wondered what the present would be. A pair of slippers perhaps. Or a new scarf. A scarf would be lovely. Blue is such a pretty color. Or a table lamp. Or a book, a travel book, with pictures, or a little clock, with clear black numbers. So many lovely things. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 The elderly woman stood by the window, watching. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ She opened the envelope. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】     The elderly woman stood by the window, watching. Her heart pounded as the postman turned the corner, with his bag slung over his shoulder. Johnnie, the little boy from downstairs, dashed out to meet him, his eager voice carrying up to her window. The postman handed him a single envelope, and Johnnie raced back inside. Moments later, his small footsteps echoed on the stairs. “It’s for you!” he announced, holding out the envelope. Her hands trembled as she took it — Linda’s handwriting! But the envelope felt too light; where was the parcel? Doubt flickered, but she quickly dismissed it.     She opened the envelope. “Dear mum, sorry to have let you down so many times whether on your birthdays or other occasions. I got a medal for my work for the aged, but I don’t think I deserve it because so long I’ve neglected the most lovely aged person in my life, who needs my care and company. I know it’s time to ...” Reading the letter, the old lady couldn’t help but sob. Tears ran down her cheeks and dropped onto the letter. Just at that moment, familiar steps drew closer and without doubt, the old lady knew that her most cherished present was finally coming. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，文章讲述了在八十岁生日当天，一位老妇人因期待女儿Linda的礼物和探望而充满喜悦，但最终只收到一封解释女儿因忙碌而无法探访的信，导致她感到深深的失望与孤独，直到听到熟悉的脚步声，才意识到女儿即将到来。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“老妇人站在窗边看着”可知，第一段可描写老妇人看到邮递员到来，小男孩取信后，她拿到信时原本期待又因信轻而心生怀疑，但仍抱有希望的心理。 ②由第二段首句内容“她打开信封”可知，第二段可描写老妇人打开信封后，先看到看似敷衍内容而失望，读下去却发现女儿深刻反思，最后听到熟悉脚步声，意识到期待已久的礼物（女儿到来）即将实现的惊喜转变。 2.续写线索： 期待——拿到信——怀疑——打开信——失望转惊喜——脚步声近 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①拿着：hold/take/grasp ②拿出：hold out/take out ③忽视：neglect/ignore 情绪类 ①双手颤抖：hands tremble/quiver/shiver ②流泪：tears ran down/roll down 【点睛】[高分句型1]. Her heart pounded as the postman turned the corner, with his bag slung over his shoulder. （句中含有as引导时间状语从句以及with的复合结构） [高分句型2]. I got a medal for my work for the aged, but I don’t think I deserve it because so long I’ve neglected the most lovely aged person in my life, who needs my care and company.（关系代词who引导非限制性定语从句） G (25-26高三上·湖南湘一名校联盟·期中)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Under my influence, my son Bob was fascinated with baseball and we often played together in our spare time. However, on a sunny day, I found myself wrapped up in my own world. I was comfortably seated on the sofa, drinking cool beer and attentively watching a live baseball game on TV. The excitement of the match had me completely absorbed. Suddenly, Bob burst into the room, his face lit up with excitement. “Dad, Dad, teach me how to catch the ball” he shouted, his eyes wide with anticipation. Without taking my eyes off the screen, I casually replied, “In a bit, Bob. Let me finish this round. Come back in five minutes. “Bob agreed and ran out of the room joyfully. Five minutes later, Bob returned. “Dad, let’s go Let’s play catch now” he shouted, his enthusiasm visible. But the game was still in full swing, and I was absorbed in the action. “Wait, son. The game isn’t over yet. Come back in another five minutes,” I said. Bob’s shoulders trembled (颤抖) a little, and disappointment flashed in his eyes, but he nodded and left the room again. I felt a sense of guilt, but I was too caught up in the game to pay much attention to it. When Bob came back a third time, I just opened another beer with no intention of moving. I glanced at a magazine on the coffee table. Its cover featured a large map of the world with a portrait of a famous person on the back. In a moment of frustration, I tore the cover into several pieces and threw them on the table. “Put this world map back together, and then we’ ll play catch. Don’t bother me until you’re done,” I said, hoping this would keep him occupied for a long time. Bob looked at me, his eyes filled with tears. He picked up the pieces and walked into another room, saying, “Okay, Dad. I won’t bother you until it’s done.” 主意：1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Surprisingly, Bob returned soon with the complete map. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ A wave of shame washed over me before I made a quick decision. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Surprisingly, Bob returned soon with the complete map. I stared at it in shock, unable to believe my eyes. “How did you finish it so quickly?” I asked. Bob wiped his tears and said softly, “The portrait on the back of the map helped. I just put the person’s face together first, and the map followed easily.” His simple words hit me like a hammer. I realized how casually I had treated his eager requests and how much I had hurt him. A wave of shame washed over me before I made a quick decision. I turned off the TV, put down my beer, and took Bob’s small hand. “I’m so sorry, son. I shouldn’t have kept you waiting and treated you like that,” I said sincerely. “Let’s go play catch right now, and I’ll teach you everything I know.” Bob’s eyes lit up again, and a big smile spread across his face. We ran to the backyard, and under the warm sun, the sound of our laughter and the thud of the ball filled the air. That day, I learned that nothing is more important than cherishing the time with loved ones. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开。作者爱打棒球且常与儿子鲍勃一起玩。一日作者沉迷于电视转播的棒球赛，鲍勃多次请求一起玩接球游戏，作者却用拼地图的任务打发他，鲍勃含泪接受。 【详解】1.段落续写 ①由第一段句首内容“令人惊讶的是，鲍勃很快就带着完整的地图回来了。”可知，第一段可以描写作者看到鲍勃快速完成地图后的震惊与疑惑，通过与鲍勃的对话揭示地图快速完成的原因，进而引发作者对自己之前忽视、伤害鲍勃行为的反思与愧疚。 ②由第二段句首内容“一阵羞愧感涌上心头，我立刻做了决定。”可知，第二段可以描写作者向鲍勃真诚道歉的过程，以及作者主动关掉电视、放下啤酒，兑现陪伴鲍勃玩耍的承诺，通过二人在庭院中欢乐互动的场景，升华“珍惜与亲人相处时光”的文章主旨。 2.续写线索：鲍勃快速带回完整地图——作者震惊疑惑并询问原因——鲍勃解释地图背面肖像的助力——作者反思自身行为并深感愧疚——作者真诚道歉并主动陪伴鲍勃——欢乐互动，领悟珍惜亲情的真谛 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①擦眼泪：wipe his tears/dry his eyes/rub away tears ②意识到：realize/be aware ③关掉电视：turn off the TV/switch off the television 情绪类 ①震惊：in shock/be astounded/be stunned ②真诚地：sincerely/heartfelt/genuinely 【点睛】【高分句型1】A wave of shame washed over me before I made a quick decision. (运用了before引导的时间状语从句) 【高分句型2】Let’s go play catch right now, and I’ll teach you everything I know. (运用了省略引导词that的定语从句) H 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 When I was seventeen, I stayed with my little brother Cheng alone for the first time. Our parents hurried to another city to take care of my grandma, who had a serious illness, and left eight-year-old Cheng with me. Before they left, they gave me the keys and some money. Everything was fine. In the evening, Cheng was at the dining table, drawing a face on an egg for a school project. I helped him sharpen his pencils, and he suddenly asked, “Brother, what if the egg breaks?” I replied, “Then just draw another one.” As soon as I said that, the egg rolled off the table and broke. Cheng started to cry. I picked up the broken pieces and gave him the last egg from the fridge, saying, “Don’t cry. Let’s draw it together.” To cheer him up, I suggested we make a “capsule” for the new egg. We gathered old boxes and colored paper. We stuffed cotton inside the box. Cheng decorated it with silver paper while I colored the cotton blue to make it look like the night sky. After an hour, we had a shiny capsule, and Cheng gently placed the egg inside. Dinner was simple — tomato and egg noodles. Cheng insisted on placing the capsule in the middle of the table with an empty bowl for it. I pretended to pour some soup into the bowl for the egg. Cheng ate with sauce all over his face and whispered, “Brother, what if Grandma’s illness is serious?” I comforted him, “Everything will be fine.” He nodded, tears rolling down his cheeks. At 8:00 pm, I told Cheng to take a bath. In the bathroom, I washed his hair, and he suddenly wiped the water from my forehead, saying, “Brother, you seem like an adult.” My heart felt warm. “I’ll cook breakfast for us tomorrow morning,” he continued. “After the breakfast, I want to speak to Grandma.” 注意： (1)续写词数应为150个左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 At 4 am the next day, I was woken by soft footsteps. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Seeing me looking at him, Cheng smiled at me. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文： At 4 am the next day, I was woken by soft footsteps. Cheng stood by my bed, holding the capsule. “Brother, I dreamt the egg flew to Grandma’s hospital room, and she smiled. Then she got better.” I hugged him and the box. The moon outside was calm. I told him, “Let’s keep the egg flying. In the morning, we’ll call Grandma.” He fell asleep against my shoulder. At dawn, I heard noises from the kitchen. I walked to the kitchen and found Cheng trying to crack an egg into a bowl. Seeing me looking at him, Cheng smiled at me. I walked to help him. When the pancakes were done, he said, “Brother, you eat first.” I took a bite, hugging him tightly. After the breakfast, we called Grandma. Cheng told her about his dream. On the other end, her weak but happy voice said, “Cheng’s egg is amazing. I dreamt it was dancing by my bed, and I felt so happy. I ate an extra bowl of porridge.” Cheng smiled and ran into my arms, laughing like a beam of light. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者17岁时，因父母要照顾生病的奶奶，第一次独自照顾8岁的弟弟Cheng。Cheng在学校项目中画鸡蛋，鸡蛋不慎掉落摔碎，作者安慰他并一起制作了一个“胶囊”保护新鸡蛋。晚餐时，Cheng担心奶奶的病情，作者安慰他。晚上Cheng说作者像大人一样，并表示要为作者做早餐，还要和奶奶通话。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“第二天凌晨4点，我被轻柔的脚步声吵醒。”可知，第一段可描写Cheng拿着胶囊站在作者床边，说他梦到鸡蛋飞到奶奶病房，奶奶笑了，然后病就好了。作者安慰他，提议早上给奶奶打电话，Cheng靠在作者肩膀上睡着了。 ②由第二段首句内容“看到我在看他，Cheng对我笑了笑。”可知，第二段可描写作者走进厨房帮Cheng做早餐，早餐后他们给奶奶打电话，Cheng告诉奶奶他的梦，奶奶说自己也梦到鸡蛋在床边跳舞，很开心，还多吃了粥。Cheng笑着跑进作者怀里。 2.续写线索：Cheng讲述梦境——作者安慰提议—— Cheng睡着——作者帮做早餐——打电话给奶奶——Cheng讲述梦境给奶奶——奶奶回应——Cheng开心 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①打电话：call Grandma / phone Grandma / get in touch with Grandma ②咬一口：take a bite/eat a small piece/take a nibble ③紧紧拥抱：hug tightly / hold closely / embrace warmly 情绪类 ①开心的：happy/joyful/overjoyed ②令人吃惊的：amazing/astonishing 【点睛】【高分句型1】When the pancakes were done, he said, “Brother, you eat first.” (运用了连接词when引导的时间状语从句) 【高分句型2】I dreamt it was dancing by my bed, and I felt so happy. (运用了省略了连接词that的宾语从句) I (2026届江西省高三上学期高考仿真模拟考试（二）)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Michael saw it all. For a whole year, the cold war between his father and uncle had hung over their family like a winter fog that wouldn’t go away. It all started because of an old toolbox — made by hand by Grandpa’s father, and both brothers really loved it. When Dad and Uncle Thomas were boys, they’d crowded around Grandpa at that toolbox every weekend and did many interesting things. It was more than a toolbox — it’s what holds their most precious childhood memories. After Grandpa died, Uncle Thomas took it home to fix it up, but Dad thought he was keeping it for himself. “You always take the best things first,” Dad said angrily. Uncle Thomas said right back, “At least I’m not letting it go bad!” After that, doors were shut hard, and they never spoke again. Dad used to laugh so loudly that the neighbours would knock on the wall. But now he moved around like a shadow— mornings were quiet without the sound of his favourite coffee cup; evenings were spent looking at the dark fireplace without a word, where he and Uncle Thomas once roasted bread at Christmas. One weekend afternoon, Michael found his dad on the porch (门廊) looking at an old photo. It showed Dad and Uncle Thomas standing side by side at the workbench, big smiles on their faces. “Why don’t you call Uncle Thomas?” Michael asked. His father said in a low voice, “Some things can’t be fixed, son.” But Michael didn’t agree. He had seen his mum mend his torn jumper with a needle and thread, and he knew Auntie Lucy still called Mum to ask how Dad was doing. Maybe broken relationships just needed someone to try and make them better. The next day, Michael found his dad’s old lunchbox, the very one Grandpa had given to Dad and Uncle Thomas when they were teenagers, and that the two brothers had even shared when they worked together. Michael then went to the market and bought all of Uncle Thomas’s favourite foods with his pocket money: warm meat pies, hot sauce, and sweet biscuits. Even though his shirt got dirty and his shoes muddy, Michael was happy seeing the lunchbox full. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Standing at Uncle Thomas’s door, Michael’s heart was beating fast. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ A few minutes later, the doorbell rang again. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Standing at Uncle Thomas’s door, Michael’s heart was beating fast. He took a deep breath and rang the doorbell, hoping that what he was about to do would work. As he waited, he thought about the lunchbox filled with Uncle Thomas’s favourite foods, which he had carefully prepared. He wondered if Uncle Thomas would be angry or surprised to see him. Just then, the door opened, and Uncle Thomas stood there, looking a little confused. “Michael? What brings you here?” he asked, his voice showing a mix of surprise and curiosity. A few minutes later, the doorbell rang again. This time, it was Dad standing at the door, holding the old toolbox that had caused so much trouble between them. “I thought maybe we could fix this together,” Dad said, looking at Uncle Thomas with a hopeful smile. Uncle Thomas’s eyes widened as he saw the toolbox, and then he smiled too. “You know what? I’ve been missing our times at the workbench,” he said, stepping aside to let Dad in. Michael watched as the two brothers embraced, knowing that his plan had worked and that their family would be whole again. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开。因一个旧工具箱，父亲与叔叔冷战一年，家庭氛围压抑。Michael看到父亲怀念往昔，决定采取行动，他用零花钱买齐叔叔爱吃的食物装满父亲旧饭盒，试图缓和关系。 【详解】1.段落续写 ①由第一段句首内容“Michael站在Thomas叔叔的家门口，心跳得飞快。”可知，第一段可以描写Michael站在叔叔门口时紧张的心理活动，他对于叔叔反应的猜测，以及叔叔开门后的反应。 ②由第二段句首内容“几分钟后，门铃又响了。”可知，第二段可以描写父亲带着旧工具箱到来，叔叔和父亲的和解过程，Michael看到这一幕的感受，最后升华文章的主旨：爱与理解能够修复破裂的关系，让家庭重归和睦。 2.续写线索：Michael紧张等待——叔叔开门感到惊讶——门铃又响了——父亲到来提出和解——叔叔接受并表达怀念——兄弟拥抱家庭和睦——爱与理解修复关系 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①深呼吸：take a deep breath/inhale deeply ②按门铃：ring the doorbell/press the doorbell ③拥抱：embrace/hug/hold each other tightly 情绪类 ①困惑的：confused/perplexed/bewildered ②惊讶的：surprised/astonished 【点睛】【高分句型1】He took a deep breath and rang the doorbell, hoping that what he was about to do would work. (运用了that引导的宾语从句、what引导的主语从句) 【高分句型2】He wondered if Uncle Thomas would be angry or surprised to see him. (运用了if引导的宾语从句) J (25-26高三上·广东深圳·期中)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Mrs. Thompson often reminded her daughter, Amy, that helping with housework was not only a responsibility, but also a way of showing care for the family. But to Amy, household chores were a tiresome burden and a waste of her precious time. Every time her mother asked her to wash the dishes after dinner, Amy would protest, “It’s unfair! Why should I have to do the dishes?” Usually, Mrs. Thompson would sigh and do it herself. One Monday evening, as Amy got up from the table, Mrs. Thompson began coughing violently and her face grew very pale. “I’m not feeling well,” she said and went to her bedroom without even mentioning the dishes. Amy was about to leave the dirty plates in the sink as usual, but something stopped her. She remembered her mother’s tired eyes and weak voice, and it struck her how tired her mother had looked lately — doing a demanding job and taking care of the household all by herself. Quietly, Amy walked her mother to her room, and then returned to the kitchen. She stared at the mountain of dishes, took a deep breath, and rolled up her sleeves. Just as she was drying the last plate, she heard a gentle voice from behind. “Amy?” Mrs. Thompson, who was standing in the doorway, her eyes wide with surprise and warmth, said very gently. Amy turned around and, feeling a little embarrassed, she mumbled, “Well... Since you’re not feeling well, I thought I’d help out tonight.” “Thank you, sweetheart,” Mrs. Thompson said very gently. “That means a lot to me.” That night, as Amy lay in bed, she couldn’t stop thinking about the gentleness in her mother’s voice. “Maybe, Mom was right,” Amy thought. “Doing housework isn’t just a chore. It is a way to show love.” 注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Before sleeping, Amy set the clock 40 minutes earlier. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ As time went on, Amy’s attitude to household work began to change. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version： Before sleeping, Amy set the clock 40 minutes earlier. The next morning, Amy sprang out of bed as soon as the alarm rang and tiptoed into the kitchen. She boiled eggs and made toasts. She even squeezed fresh orange juice on the bread. When her mother came to the kitchen, Amy said cheerfully, “Surprise, Mom! I find I am very good at preparing breakfast! Now, you could rest a bit more until you’re fully recovered.” As time went on, Amy’s attitude to household work began to change. She no longer saw it as a duty but a way to contribute to the family. She took on more tasks — sweeping the floors, tidying the living room, and even joining her mother in the garden on weekends. Mrs. Thompson was overjoyed by the change. What’s more, Amy discovered that working side by side with her mother had become their special time to talk and bond — and their relationship grew closer than ever. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，主要讲述了艾米原本认为做家务是负担，但母亲生病后她主动洗碗，意识到做家务是表达爱的方式的故事。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“睡觉前，艾米把闹钟调早了40分钟。”可知，第一段可描写艾米早起后主动为母亲做早餐，以及母亲的反应。 ②由第二段首句内容“随着时间的推移，艾米对家务的态度开始改变。”可知，第二段可描写艾米对家务态度的具体转变，以及她从中获得的成长和感悟。 2.续写线索： 艾米早起——准备早餐——母亲惊喜——艾米态度转变——主动承担家务——感悟成长 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①踮起脚尖走进厨房：tiptoe into the kitchen/walk into the kitchen on tiptoe ②打扫地板：sweep the floors/clean the floors ③承担任务：take on tasks/undertake tasks/accept tasks 情绪类 ①高兴地：cheerfully/happily/joyfully ②高兴的：overjoyed/delighted/pleased 【点睛】【高分句型1】When her mother came to the kitchen, Amy said cheerfully, “Surprise, Mom! I find I am very good at preparing breakfast!（运用了when引导的时间状语从句） 【高分句型2】What’s more, Amy discovered that working side by side with her mother had become their special time to talk and bond — and their relationship grew closer than ever.（运用了that引导的宾语从句） K (25-26高三上·四川绵阳中学·月考)阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事. Jenny was the only child in her home. She had a quarrel with her mother that afternoon and she ran out of the house angrily. She couldn’t help crying sadly when she thought of the scolding from her mother. Having wandered aimlessly in the street for hours, she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat, but it was not even possible for her, since she had nothing with her. She stood beside a stand for a while, watching the middle-aged seller busy doing his business. However, with no money in hand, she sighed and had to leave. The seller behind the stand noticed the young girl and asked, “Hey, girl, you want to have the noodles?” “Oh, yes...but I don’t have money on me...” she replied. “That’s nothing. I’ll treat you today,” said the man, “Come in.” The seller brought her a bowl of noodles, whose smell was so attractive. Jenny thanked the man and started to gobble(狼吞虎咽) up the delicious food...then cried silently. “What is it?” asked the man kindly. “Nothing, actually I was moved by your kindness!” said Jenny as she wiped her tears, “Even a stranger on the street will give me a bowl of noodles, while my mother drove me out of the house. She showed no care for me. She is so mean and cruel!” Hearing the words, the seller smiled “Girl, do you really think so? I only gave you a bowl of noodles and you thanked me a lot. But it is your mother who has raised you since you were a baby. Can you number the times that she has cooked for you? Have you expressed your thanks to her?” Jenny sat there, speechless and numb with shock; she remembered her mother’s familiar face and weathered hands. “Why did I not think of that? A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel grateful, but I have never thanked my mum for what she has done for me.” On the way home, Jenny made up her mind to make an apology to her mother for her rudeness as soon as she arrived home. 注意： 1.所续写短文的词数应为120左右； 2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。 Paragraph 1: Approaching the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Her mother came back home, which called her mind back. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Approaching the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath. Her heart was pounding with a mix of nervousness and anticipation. She thought about what she would say to her mother, who she had left in anger. As she reached for the doorknob, she realized that the person who had always been there for her, despite her occasional rudeness, was her mother. She remembered all the times her mother had comforted her when she was sad and supported her dreams, which she had taken for granted. Her mother came back home, which called her mind back. Seeing her mother’s tired face, Jenny felt a wave of guilt wash over her. She stepped forward and hugged her mother tightly, saying, “Mom, I’m sorry for my rudeness earlier. I realize now how much you do for me, and I should have thanked you instead of arguing.” Her mother, surprised but pleased, smiled and said, “It’s okay, dear. I love you no matter what, and I'm glad you understand now.” Jenny knew that this was the beginning of a new, more understanding relationship with her mother, one that she would cherish forever. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开。珍妮与母亲争吵后愤然离家，饥饿时得到一位陌生摊主赠送的一碗面条而感动落泪，却抱怨母亲冷漠无情。摊主提醒她母亲多年来的付出，珍妮幡然醒悟，决定回家向母亲道歉。 【详解】1.段落续写 ①由第一段句首内容“走近门口，珍妮深吸了一口气。”可知，第一段可描写珍妮在门口的紧张与期待，她对母亲的回忆。 ②由第二段句首内容“她妈妈回家了，这让她回过神来。”可知，第二段可描写母亲回家后珍妮看到其疲惫面容的愧疚感，她主动拥抱母亲道歉的动作与话语，母女间温情对话的细节。 2.续写线索：走近门口—回忆—意识到自己忽视了母亲的付出—母亲回家—愧疚—拥抱母亲—温情对话—感悟 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①思考：think about/consider/reflect on ②伸手（去够）：reach for/stretch out for/hold out for ③拥抱：hug/embrace 情绪类 ①紧张：nervousness/tension/anxiety ②期待：anticipation/expectation/eagerness 【点睛】【高分句型1】She thought about what she would say to her mother, who she had left in anger. (运用了what引导的宾语从句、who引导的定语从句) 【高分句型2】She remembered all the times her mother had comforted her when she was sad and supported her dreams, which she had taken for granted.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句、which引导的定语从句) 2 / 2 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $