高考题型五 应用文写作(知识必备)-2026年高考英语艺术生文化课考前100天

是…”，是固定搭配。故填Or。 2.how解析：考查疑问词。句意：…我不知道如何去感谢他。 根据句子结构可知，设空处填写的是“疑问词十tod0不定式” 结构作宾语。根据句意可知，h0w意为“如何”，符合句意。故 填how。 3.that解析：考查强调句。此处是强调句型“It was-十被强调部 分十that十句子其他部分”，本句强调的是时间状语。故填 that。 4.press解析：考查祈使句。此题为“祈使句十and十陈述句”结 构，所以用动词原形。故填press。. 5.that解析：考查强调句。此处为强调句型“It was-十被强调部 分十that十句子其他部分”，被强调的是句中的时间状语。故 填that。 第三部分题型策略篇 高考题型五应用文写作 板块一文章营造亮点 [对点练] I.1.Of all the traditional Chinese festivals,I like Mid-Autumn Festival best./There are a lot of traditional festivals in China,of which I like Mid-Autumn Festival best. 2.Chinese people have been celebrating Mid-Autumn Festival for centuries and I like it best. II,1.How I wish I would really have such a superpower. 2.If I had such a superpower,I would do more to help the people on the earth live happily. 板块二合理想象、扩充句式 [对点练] -1.To begin with;focusing on the topics appealing to teenagers 2.As a matter of fact;we are taking advantage of various online programs for further study,which allow us to learn knowledge wherever we are at any time,making it easier to earn a degree 3.who is crazy about reading,learning and helping other people.There is no doubt that there are many things that I can learn from him 4.As we all know;many music masterpieces will be played by a famous band 5.What's more,with a good command of English;which allows me to communicate smoothly with British painting lovers 6.which will greatly help us students know the school's history better and appeal to us to make contributions to our school's development 7.which has become the new landmark in our school;in which table tennis,football as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity 二，l.Seeing the determination in his eyes 2.We can not only read news at home and abroad,but also 一9 get information,send emails and attend online schools 3.what I felt is that I am able to shoulder the responsibility and it makes us stronger and more determined;When faced with the difficulties and failures,I must overcome them 4.It will last two and a half hours;we will be fully absorbed in the attractive and fascinating performances;we will sit on the grass and enjoy the tasty food and drinks provided by sponsors;we also expect to see you on the stage then 5.We are desperately in need of your help;I will e-mail you our training plan soon,hoping you can offer some constructive suggestions regarding it 三、I.l.First;Next;After that;What's more 2.As far as I know;For example;Furthermore;Eventually 3.First and foremost;Additionally;Last but certainly not least 4.First of all/To begin with;Therefore 5.On the one hand;On the other hand 6.In a word/In conclusion/In short/In brief II.1.For one thing 2.For another thing 3.Meanwhile 4.Personally 5.above all 6.Besides 7.In a word Π.1.First of all 2.which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings 3.having a good knowledge of Chinese paintings 4.Last but not least 四、I.Dear Fellow Students, As we all know,the electric bike is the most commonly used and the most practical traffic tool for most people in their life. At present our city is carrying out a campaign,the content of which is that anyone who is riding an electric bike must wear a helmet.The purpose of the campaign is to mitigate the consequence of such a traffic accident and reduce the death rate in an accident. My appeal is that all our students riding electric bikes should wear helmets for the safety of themselves and other people.After all,life is more precious than any other thing. Yours sincerely, Li Hua Ⅱ.Dear Sir/Madam, I'm Li Hua,a middle school student from China, who is studying in London in summer holiday.I'm writing to apply to be a volunteer of the exhibition of traditional Chinese paintings at the local art museum.Here are my advantages. First of all,I am greatly interested in paintings.I have received some professional trainings in my spare time,hoping that I can work as a painter in the future. More importantly,I consider it a good chance to spread Chinese culture and develop my ability.So I think I am 3.At the sight of the snake highly qualified for the job.I would be very grateful if you 4.The cave was dark could give me a chance. 5.Have you ever been on a self-driving trip Looking forward to your reply. 板块二如何营造高潮 Yours, [对点练] Li Hua 1.All of a sudden,she hears a bark coming from around 板块三升级词汇和句式 the corner [对点练] 2.The coach has posted a list of this year's team members on his I.1.difficult->challenging office door 2.develop->promote 3.They call Mary and her sister down to talk with them about 3.bear→out up with their decision 4.met→came across 4.She waits anxiously to hear the names of the winners;And first 5.decided -determined/made up his mind place goes to John 6.causes >gives rise to 板块三 如何描写情绪与情感 7.bored with->fed up with [对点练] 8.More and moreAn increasing number of 1.lit up the whole room 9.didn't listen to->turned a deaf ear to 2.was delighted at 10.I thought of an idea-I came up with an idea/an idea 3.shone like diamonds;in a steady smile occurred to me 4.She burst into tears II.1.My favorite hobby is reading books and newspapers,which 5.hiding her face in her hands have become a necessary part of my daily life. 6.made me extremely annoyed 2.What impressed me most was that they had had 7.get mad at me professional training. 8.suddenly grew serious 3.Having practiced playing basketball for almost two 板块四如何描写心理 months,we strongly desired to be the winner. [对点练] 4.It was not until I met you that I knew real happiness. 1.grew wide with horror 2.greatly annoyed 5.So cold was the weather that we had to stay at home. 3.looked at me,open-mouthed 6.Not until the river was seriously polluted did the local 4.beyond his expectation government realize the problem. 板块五 如何描写环境 7.It's time that we took/should take measures to protect [对点练] endangered animals. 1.the rain had stopped 8.Approaching the city center,we saw a stone statue of 2.on that stormy night about 10 meters in height. 3.Snow covered everything 9.They are not only experienced and knowledgeable,but also 4.enjoying the spring sunshine patient and understanding. 5.it grew hotter and hotter 10.We think it very important to speak more English. 6.walking alone on the beach 高考题型六读后续写 7.a village among the hills 板块一如何写好读后续写的开头 8.stands on a rock [对点练] 9.The lake is situated at 1.Unable to say a word 2.Feeling refreshed “课时作业”答案及解析 第一部分 词汇复习篇 5.regularly 6.tired 7.helpful 话题一学校生活 II.1.into 2.in 3.in 4.for 5.on 6.with IlI.1.has acquired 2.amused 3.appealed 4.bored 第一组 5.decided 6.was devoted 7.Exhausted 8.have gained I.1.preparations 2.amusement 3.energetic 4.exhausted 10艺术生文化课考前100天英语 高考题型五 板块一 文章营造亮点 一、引人入胜的开头 开头一般来说要做到开门见山，使读者了 解要写什么，最好能立刻吸引读者的兴趣。下 面介绍几种开头的常见写法： 1.书信的常用开头法 (2022·新高考全国I卷写作)I am Li Hua,in charge of the English programme “Talk and Talk”of our School Broadcasting Station. 我是李华，负责我们学校广播电台的英语 节目“Talk and Talk”。 (2021·全国乙卷书面表达)It's a great honour for me to stand here and address my speech titled“Be smart online learners'”, 我很荣幸站在这里发表题为“成为聪明的 在线学习者”的演讲。 2.记叙文的常用开头法 (1)故事背景法—交代人物、事件、时间、 地点、背景等 (北京卷书面表达)A week before Earth Day,posters were put up around our school, calling upon us to join in the actions for a greener earth. 地球日的前一周我们学校贴了很多海报， 号召我们加入绿化地球的行动中。 (2)往事追忆法—回忆过去发生的某 件事 (2020·新高考全国I卷写作)Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race,which nearly drew the attention of every student and teacher of our school. 上星期天，我们学校举行了一场非同寻常 的越野赛跑，几乎引起了全校师生的注意。 应用文写作 3.说明文的常用开头法 (1)点明中心法—一开门见山点明所要介 绍的事物 (2021·新高考全国I卷书面表达)For the 10th Anniversary of Youth,as a fan of Youth, I want to share my reading experience. 在《青春》十周年之际，作为《青春》的粉丝， 我想和大家分享我的阅读经历。 (2)引入数据法—一运用数据引出所要论 证的主题 A recent study shows that more than 40% of the students don't have breakfast. 最近的研究表明，有超过40%的学生不吃 早饭。 4.议论文的常用开头法 (1)点明主题法—提出一个观点或论据 作为文章要阐明或论述的主题 (江苏卷书面表达)Li Jiang and Su Hua are discussing what to wear when receiving the British students next month.Li recommends the traditional Chinese dress while Su prefers the school uniform. 李江和苏华正在讨论下个月接待英国学生 时穿什么。李推荐中国传统服装，而苏更喜欢 校服。 (2)引用名言法一摘录或引用某些名人 的名言或常见的习语、谚语作为文章的开头 When it comes to how to succeed,many people may think of the proverb "Where there is a will,there is a way. 当谈及如何成功时，很多人或许会想起谚 语“有志者，事竟成”。 (3)列举实例法—一通过一个实例或现象 引出话题 2 Three years ago,I failed an important exam in my life and became a student in an ordinary school. 三年前，我在人生的一次重要考试中失利， 成为普通学校的一名学生。 5.图画作文的常用开头法 描述图画法—描写图画内容，为下文做 好铺垫 What is illustrated in the picture is that parents expect too much from their child and try every means to encourage her to work harder.However,the daughter feels unhappy, or rather more stressed. 图画里描述的是父母对孩子怀有很高的期 望，想尽一切办法鼓励她更加努力学习。然而， 女儿感到伤心，更确切地说，压力更大了。 二、回味无穷的结尾 结尾有概括全文内容，进一步强调中心思 想、升华主题的作用。主要有以下写法： 1.书信的常用结尾法 (1)表示感谢法 (淅江卷书面表达)Thanks again and wish you a pleasant journey home. 再次感谢你，祝你回家旅途愉快。 (2)表示期待法 (2022·淅江卷书面表达)At last,.I hope our friendship will last forever.Looking forward to your early reply. 最后，我希望我们的友谊将永远长存。期 待您早日回复。 (2021·新高考全国I卷书面表达)I sincerely hope that Youth can make new progress and that more readers will participate in the interaction and share their own stories. 我衷心希望《青春》能有新的进步，希望更 多的读者参与互动，分享自己的故事。 1 第三部分题型策略篇 2.记叙文的常用结尾法 (1)主题升华法 My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but how you make use of it that determines who you are. 我的经历告诉我：不是你被给予了什么，而 是你怎样利用它决定你成为什么样的人。 (2)问题设问法—一通过问答形式总结 全文 Isn't it a pleasure to have great calm in mind while you are reading? 你在阅读时，内心非常平静不是一种快 乐吗？ 3.说明文的常用结尾法 总结全文法一一总结说明的事物，进一步 说明其特征 In a word,changes in our life in the past twenty years have brought us convenience and comfort, 总之，在过去20年里我们生活中的变化给 我们带来了便利和舒适。 4.议论文的常用结尾法 (1)得出结论法一结尾总结全文，得出 结论 (江苏卷书面表达)So the school uniforms are a better choice than the traditional Chinese dress for such an occasion. 因此，在这样的场合，与传统的中国服装相 比，校服是更好的选择。 (2)深化中心法一结尾进一步深化主题 In reality,we should learn from the black pencil:not to mind what others say so long as we are confident in what we have done. 事实上，我们应该向这支黑色铅笔学习：只 要我们对自己做过的事情有信心，就不要去介 意别人说什么。 3 艺术生文化课考前100天英语 (3)提出建议法—结尾提出建议以及应 对措施 I think all of us should mind our behavior in public places.Only in this way can we live in more comfortable and beautiful surroundings. 我认为，我们都应该注意自己在公共场合 的行为。只有这样我们才能生活在更舒服和美 丽的环境中。 (4)引用名言法—结尾用名言总结全文 Anyhow,different cultures,different customs.If you "Do as the Romans do when in Rome",you will enjoy more your stay here. 不管怎么说，不同的文化就有不同的习俗。 如果你能“入乡随俗”，你就会更好地享受这里 的生活。 (5)照应开头法—结尾对开头进行照应 Different ways of traveling can make people happy,but I like traveling by train most, 不同的旅行方式都能让人愉快，但是我最 喜欢乘火车旅行。 【对点练】 I.根据要求，为下面的话题写作设计一个 开头段 假设你是李华，你们学校校报新开设的栏 目“My Favorite Traditional Chinese Festival” 正在开展征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文并 投稿。 1.开门见山式： 2.概括式： Ⅱ.根据要求及首段内容，为下面的话题写 作设计一个结尾段 假如你是李华，你有一种超能力，那么你将 用它来做什么呢？请用英语写一篇短文，说一下 你的打算。 I have been dreaming of having a superpower since my childhood. 1.首尾呼应式： 2.画龙点睛式： 板块二 合理想象、扩充句式 一、添加成分 高考英语书面表达不仅规定了写作内容， 还明确规定了词数，并在评分标准中指出，如果 “词数少于60和多于120的，从总分中减去2 分”。但在实际阅卷过程中，如果词数过少，扣 掉的不只是2分。因为篇幅过短，不能吸引阅 卷老师细看以便查找诸如“高级词汇”“较高级 结构”等加分点，自然影响得分档次。 在试题“注意”中有明确规定：“1.词数80 左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯”。 这里既规定了词数，又指定了充实文章的方法， 即“适当增加细节”。“适当增加细节”中很重要 的一个方法就是—一追加成分。 在要点句基础上适当增加合乎逻辑的附加 成分，如定语（从句）、状语（从句）（如目的、条 件、原因、结果、方式等)、非谓语结构、独立主格 结构、举例等，使表达更丰满，内容更充实，主题 更突出。 【典例】(2020·全国卷Ⅱ写作) 1.(介绍农场情况)这个农场的农作物种类 繁多。 There are a wide range of crops in the farm. ->The farm,located in the suburb of our city,has a wide range of crops such as vegetables and fruit. 【分析】加黑部分是根据语境所追加的成 分，“located in the suburb of our city'”介绍了农 场位于城市郊区；“such as vegetables and fruit” 举例说明农场里有蔬菜和水果，适当增加细节， 使表达更丰满，内容更充实。 2.(提醒演讲参赛选手)要守时、守纪律、讲 卫生。 Please arrive there on time,keep quiet and don't litter around. -Please arrive there on time,for whoever is late won't be allowed to enter.It's bad manners to litter around.And always keep quiet while waiting for your turn. 【分析】原句虽然没有直译所给要点，且 灵活化解了难点，但过于直白、语气较为生硬； 而改写后的句子则进行了拓展，具体明确。“for whoever is late..”提醒参赛选手迟到后果的 严重性；“It's bad manners,.”是用it作形式 主语的句型，指出乱扔东西为不礼貌行为； “while waiting for your turn”是状语从句的省 略形式，对主句进行补充说明。因此，改写后的 句子更充实，更适宜对参赛选手提建议的语境。 3.(演讲注意事项)要面带微笑；要讲慢些， 讲清楚。 Be sure to wear a smile on your face. Besides,remember to speak slowly and clearly. -Be sure to wear a smile on your face when you speak,which will make you relaxed. Besides,remember to speak slowly and clearly so that you can leave a good impression on the audience and judges. 【分析】加黑部分是根据语境所追加的成 分，“which will make you relaxed"指出演讲时 微笑的好处；“so that you can..”为“讲慢些， 讲清楚”的目的，留下好印象是演讲效果之一， 1 第三部分题型策略篇 也是能否获得评委青睐的因素之一。适当增加 与所给信息相关的时间、原因、结果、条件、目的 等成分来表达细节内容，能够使写作流畅、丰 满，达到应有的表达效果。 【对点练】 请发挥合理想象，拓展句子（请注意括号内 提供的语境) 1.(2022·新高考全国I卷写作)（访谈话 题介绍)我们的课程致力于提高学生对国内和 国际事务的理解。 .our programme is committed to enhancing students'understanding of domestic and international affairs. 2.(2021·全国乙卷书面表达)（举例说明） 互联网的快速发展使我们受益匪浅。 we benefit a lot from the rapid pace of the Internet development.For example, 3.(2020·全国卷I书面表达)（描述李华 的品质)我身边最值得尊敬的人是我最好的 朋友。 For me,the most respectable person round me is my best friend Li Hua,a 17-year- old teenager currently studying in my class, 4.(2019·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)（告知将举 办音乐节)我们学校音乐厅将举办一场中国古 典音乐会。 there is a Chinese classical music concert that will be held in the music hall of our school on November 8th. According to the concert poster, 艺术生文化课考前100天英语 5.(2019·全国卷I书面表达)（介绍语言 能力)克服语言障碍。 I can overcome the language barrier, 6.(2018·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)（通知学校 放映电影)这部英文短片主要与我们学校的发 展有关。 The short English film is mainly related to the development of our school, 7.(2018·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)（介绍学校 新体育馆)新体育馆已经建立起来，可在里面举 行许多运动项目。 To begin with,a new stadium has been built up, Moreover,with the stadium set up,a wide range of sports events are able to be held, 二、补加语句 1.列举具体的实例进行补充说明 ①(2020·新高考全国I卷写作)整个路程 非常困难。 The whole course was extremely difficult. -The whole course was extremely difficult,especially the part near the mountain, narrow and rough. ②我想找一个像我一样喜欢旅行的笔友。 I'd like to seek a pen pal who is interested in traveling just like me. ->I'd like to seek a pen pal who is interested in traveling just like me.If possible, we can travel together or share traveling experiences. 2.增添与所写信息相关的神态、动作、心理 描写以及背景渲染等内容 ①(2020·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)这个悲剧故 事的情节是关于孟姜女和她的丈夫的。 1 The plot of the tragic story is about Lady Meng Jiang and her husband. -The plot of the tragic story is about Lady Meng Jiang and her husband,who lived more than 2,000 years ago in ancient China. (背景渲染) ②(2021·浙江卷)我妈妈紧紧地抱着我。 My mom hugged me tightly. ->A little surprised at what I said,my mom hugged me tightly.(心理描写) ③(2022·新高考全国I卷)我紧紧地拥抱 着他。 I hugged him firmly. -I hugged him firmly,patting his back gently..(动作描写) 3.增加相关信息的时间、地点、对象等内容 ①(2021·浙江卷写作)为了丰富学生的课 余生活，我校正在举办学生国画展。 In order to enrich students'after-school life,an exhibition of students'traditional Chinese paintings is being held by our school. >In order to enrich students'after-school life,an exhibition of students'traditional Chinese paintings is being held by our school, which sparks a growing love for traditional art. (增加对象) ②我已经带来了你让我归还的这两本书。 I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return. >I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library.(增加 地点) ③我要和父母一起去超市购物。 I'm going to do some shopping with my parents in the supermarket. ->I'm going to do some shopping with my 66 parents in the supermarket and won't be back until about5:00 in the afternoon.(增加时间) 【典例】 1.(提醒观众注意)要按时进入电影院。 Be sure to enter the theater on time. -Be sure to enter the theater on time. Whoever is late will miss the splendid opening. 【分析】要点句为简单句，补加复合句 “Whoever is late..”,通过指出迟到后果的方 式引起观众的注意，同时，也使得句式多样，表 达丰富多彩。 2.(谈论善款用途)慈善募集来的钱将送给 最急需的人。 The money collected in the charity sale will be sent to those in great need. ->The money collected in the charity sale will be sent to those in great need.This will not only help them get through difficulties,but also give them warmth and happiness. 【分析】通过并列句来增加“较复杂结 构”，同时也是上一句衍生的“效果”：帮助他们 战胜困难，还给予他们温暖和幸福。 【对点练】 请适当补加语句，充实下面写作片段 1.(2022·新高考全国I卷写作)（动作描 写) ,I wiped the tears on his cheeks,promising to keep him company until the end of the competition. 2.(互联网的好处)The Internet is playing a more and more important part in our daily life. 3.(2020·天津卷书面表达)（对成人礼活 动的感受) Through the activity, 第三部分题型策略篇 4.(2019·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)（介绍音乐 节的情况)As scheduled,the festival will start at 9:00 am on August 15th. Additionally, And at the same time Furthermore, 5.(2018·天津卷书面表达)（邀请他参加 比赛的原因) So as the group leader,I sincerely invite you to join us.I am convinced that with our joint efforts we can undoubtedly get good results.What's more, 三、增加过渡 增加过渡是常见的“增加细节”的方法，过 渡性词语和过渡性语句的使用是语言连贯性得 以实现的最常用手段。在句与句之间、段与段 之间恰当地使用一些承上启下的过渡（连接）性 词语，通过合理过渡，可实现语句间的衔接顺 畅。这就需要考生在日常学习中积累背诵常用 的过渡词。例如：表示列举的firstly,secondly, thirdly,finally;表示自己看法的as far as I'm concerned,from my point of view,in my opinion;表示转折的on the contrary,however, every coin has two sides等。 【典例】 1.(话题：家长用车接送学生引起校门口拥 Our traffic department should strengthen management to make the parents obey traffic rules.Our school should appeal to us students to walk or ride a bike to and from school, which is not only friendly to our traffic environment but also is good for students' health. ->In my opinion,the problem can be solved from two aspects.On the one hand,our 艺术生文化课考前100天英语 traffic department should strengthen management to make the parents obey traffic rules.On the other hand,our school should appeal to us students to walk or ride a bike to and from school,which is not only friendly to our traffic environment but also is good for students' health. 【分析】本段作者使用“In my opinion, the problem can be solved from two aspects. 作主题句，其中from two aspects让读者明白作 者提供了两个方面的建议，并以on the one hand,on the other hand进行说明。这些过渡 性词语和过渡句的恰当使用，使文章语言连贯、 过渡自然、浑然一体。 2.(话题：去美国学习英语询问具体问题) I'm concerned with how far it is from the host family to my school.I'm wondering whether a private bedroom will be offered to me.I tend to know if there are any special customs that I should pay attention to.Would you please give me some more suggestions on how to get along well with the host family?I'm sure your advice will benefit me a lot. -Firstly,I'm concerned with how far it is from the host family to my school.Secondly, I'm wondering whether a private bedroom will be offered to me.Furthermore,I tend to know if there are any special customs that I should pay attention to.Last but not least,would you please give me some more suggestions on how to get along well with the host family?I'm sure your advice will benefit me a lot. 【分析】本段作者使用了firstly, secondly,furthermore,last but not least,使文 章层次清晰连贯，彰显了作者的语言功底。 【对点练】 I.用过渡性词汇补全句子 1.(2022·全国乙卷书面表达) (首先)，l8%of the students prefer to read English books. (其次)，listening to English songs is the most popular way.65%of the students consider it as their favorite way in English learning. (然后)，half of the students view watching English movies as the most effective way to practice English. (而且)，l2%of the students choose to visit English-learning websites when enhancing English skills. 2.(2021·全国甲卷书面表达) (据我所知)，traditional Chinese culture, including paper-cutting,guzheng and so on, has its unique characteristics. （比如)， Chinese knots are a symbol of good luck and best wishes. （而且)，guzheng is of great significance to Chinese folk music leading you to a fantastic world of music. (最 后)，I am strongly eager to know which aspects of traditional Chinese culture arouse your curiosity most. 3.(2020·全国卷I书面表达) (首先)，he is good at English,for he has lived in Detroit for half a year as an exchange student. (此外)，no one can deny he gets along well with all our classmates,enjoy a harmonious interpersonal relationship and is always ready to help others. (最后但 也是最重要的是)，he has a lot of life experience,considering that he has been serving as a vice monitor for many years. Hopefully,I could become an outstanding person like Li Hua. 8 4.(2019·全国卷I书面表达) (首先)，I'm a big fan of traditional Chinese paintings (因此)，I am capable of offering visitors detailed explanations on the stories of famous Chinese painters. 5. (一方面)，they can sweep the tombs for the dead. （另一方面)，they can go for a walk in the country in spring when the grass has just turned green. 6. (总之)，success is important, and so is failure,because it's the mother of success Ⅱ.阅读下面短文，从方框中选择适当的过 渡性词语填空 近来，中学生普遍缺乏自我保护意识这一 问题备受关注，请你用英语写一篇短文： 1.概括中学生懂得自我保护的重要性； 2.就如何保护自己谈谈你的看法（至少 两点)。 above all,besides,meanwhile,for one thing,for another thing,personally,in a word Recently,it has been a great public concern that the students lack self-protection awareness. There is a lack of social experience among students and therefore learning how to protect ourselves is of great significance to us all. 1. security comes first.Without security,we can achieve nothing and cannot live up to parents'expectations.2. protecting ourselves contributes to the healthy development of us students,which is associated with the happiness of every family. 3. it also helps to build a more harmonious society. 18 第三部分题型策略篇 4. in order to protect us students,5. we should strengthen our security awareness.6. when accidents occur,we should calm down and turn to teachers or parents for help.The government also plays a leading role in protecting students. 7. only by the combined efforts of every side involved can we live and study in harmony. Ⅲ.请在下面的段落内加上适当的词语或 句子，以充实文章 (2019·全国卷I书面表达)（话题：申请成 为伦敦一家美术馆举办中国画展览的志愿者) 1. having lived in China for sixteen years and having learnt English since I was a child,I have a good command of English and Chinese,2. Besides, 3. I can get foreigners and the locals to know more about them.4. I think I am qualified to be a volunteer. 四、详加描述 详加描述是常见的“增加细节”的方法，这 可以使文章词数达标、内容充实、结构连贯、语 意顺畅。根据提示要求，首先确定主要点和次 要点，然后在主要点上着笔泼墨。除了前面提 到的采用“追加成分”以扩展句子的方式外，还 可把一些主要点分开详述，从而提升这些要点 的分量。 【典例】 下面是一位考生的习作，请进行修改，以充 实文章、突出主题。 家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“我理 想的大学生活”，请根据下列要求和你的畅想完 成短文。 1.专业与课程； 2.老师与同学； 9 艺术生文化课考前100天英语 3.学校活动。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头语已给出，不计入总词数。 I often imagine what my life will be like in my dream university. 【考生习作】（得分7分） I often imagine what my life will be like in my dream university.I'll be admitted to Peking University and major in English.I can choose a variety of courses,such as English Literature. The professors there will be friendly and devoted to their teaching.Besides,I'll have lovely and caring classmates.In our spare time, various activities will be held. 【分析】该文虽然把题千中给出的三个要 点一一列出，结构清晰，还使用了一些高级词 汇，如be admitted to,a variety of,be devoted t0等。然而由于简单罗列要点，全文只有约70 词，且缺少连贯性，未能完全完成试题规定的 任务。 下面是修改完成后的作文，请注意加黑句 子对充实文章、突出主题的作用。 I often imagine what my life will be like in my dream university.As far as I can imagine, I'll be admitted to Peking University,where I'll major in English.I can choose a variety of courses,which will help me improve my spoken English and have a better understanding of foreign cultures. The professors there will be friendly and devoted to their teaching,with whose help not only can I enrich my knowledge but also I can 一1 broaden my horizons.In addition,I'll have lovely and caring classmates.We'll compete in our study and be close friends in our daily life.In our free time,various activities will be held to build up our courage and experience,such as parties and competitions. I'm sure my college life will be rich and colorful. 【分析】修改后的文章篇幅适中(120词)， 要点齐全、内容充实、语言丰富、句式多样、行文 连贯，而且详略得当、主题突出。文中“详加描 述”合情合理（见加黑部分），尤其是最后一句与 文章首句照应，结构显得非常紧凑。 【对点练】 I.下面是一位考生的习作，请进行修改， 以充实文章、突出主题 目前你们市正在开展骑电动车必须戴头盔 的行动。假如你是高中学生李华，你打算给你 校英文报投稿，呼吁同学们响应这项行动，内容 包括： 1.电动自行车为何是人们日常生活中最常 见且最适用的交通工具； 2.为何要开展该项行动； 3.你的呼吁。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：减轻mitigate 【考生习作】 Dear Fellow Students, As we all know,the electric bike is the most commonly used and the most practical traffic tool for most people in their life. The purpose of the campaign is to mitigate the consequence of such a traffic accident and reduce the death rate in an accident. I appeal to all our students to wear helmets for the safety of themselves and other people. Yours sincerely, Li Hua [升格作文] Ⅱ.下面是一位考生的习作，请进行修改， 以充实文章、突出主题 (2019·全国卷I书面表达改编)假定你是 李华，暑期在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办 中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容 包括： 1.写信目的； 2.个人优势； 3.能做的事情。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.结束语已为你写好。 Yours, Li Hua [考生习作] Dear Sir/Madam, I'm Li Hua,a middle school student from China.I'm writing to apply to be a volunteer of the exhibition of traditional Chinese paintings at the local art museum. First of all,I am greatly interested in 一1 第三部分题型策略篇 paintings.More importantly,I consider it a good chance to spread Chinese culture and develop my ability.So I think I am highly qualified for the job. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua [升格作文] 板块三 升级词汇和句式 一、升级高级词汇 1.写作时恰当得体地使用别人可能想不到 的词汇或表达，会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。 DI am very glad to hear from you. >I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you.(全国卷Ⅲ书面表达) 2My job application form and personal resume have been prepared and I sincerely hope you can help me correct them. ->My job application form and personal resume have been prepared and I sincerely hope you can help me polish them.(全国卷I书面 表达) 3I should be free any time after school next week. >I should be available any time after school next week.(全国卷Ⅲ书面表达) 2.写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的词 语，要用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的水平。 用词不同、表达方式迥异，也是高级用法。 DOn hearing the news,some of my