读后续写13大提分句式+对点练 导学案-2026届高三英语二轮复习专项

该高中英语高考复习学案系统梳理了13种写作核心句式，涵盖with复合结构、并列谓语、非谓语等高频考点，按功能逻辑（如伴随描写、动作细化、情绪表达）构建知识体系，通过例句解析与分层对点练设计，引导学生自主归纳句式特征，形成结构化写作表达框架。 亮点在于自主诊断与任务驱动式练习设计，如每种句式后配置6-8道分层对点练，学生通过即时练习诊断句式掌握情况，培养语言运用能力与自主学习能力。学案通过例句仿写、语境应用等活动引导学生内化句式功能，助力教师精准把握学情，实现个性化复习指导，提升学生高考写作表达的准确性与丰富性。

英语写作之读后续写 提分句式+对点精炼 句式1：“with的复合结构”， 即with+宾语+宾补（-ving/-ved/to do/adj./adv/介词短语）——作伴随状语，表伴随。 1. With tears streaming down her face, she thanked him again and again. 她泪流满面，再三感谢他。 2. With all efforts made, it was still in vain. 尽管做了所有努力，一切还是徒劳的。 3. With so much work to finish, she had a tight schedule. 有这么多的工作要完成，她的日程安排得很紧。 4. With my phone dead, I had to look for someone who was willing to help. 由于我的手机没电了，我不得不寻找愿意帮忙的人。 5. With flowers in his hand, he excitedly walked out of the door and ran home as fast as he could. 手里拿着花，他兴奋地走出门，以最快的速度跑回家。 对点练： 1. 那女孩张大了嘴巴，打开(unwrap)了她的礼物盒。(with +宾语+adj.) The girl unwrapped her gift box, with her mouth wide open. 2. 女孩心怦怦直跳（beat wildly），打开了她的礼物盒。(with +宾语+分词) The girl opened her gift box, with her heart beating wildly. 3.  他的妻子伤心极了，眼里满是泪水（full of tears/roll down） His wife was extremely sad, with her eyes full of tears./His wife was extremely sad, with tears rolling down her cheeks. 4. 那个人躺在地上(on the ground)，双手颤抖着(tremble)。 The man lay on the ground, with his hands trembling. 5. 一位帅气的男人站在那里，手里捧着(in his hand)一束(a bunch of)花。 A handsome man stood there, with a bunch of flowers in his hand. 6. Jean哭了，悔恨(regret)和愧疚(guilt)像无止境的潮水(endless tides)一样淹没 （overwhelm)了她。 Jean cried, with regret and guilt overwhelming her like endless tides. 句式2 ：并列谓语，细化动作 A, B and C。 1. The singer glanced at the audience, took a deep breath and began his performance. 歌手扫了观众一眼，深吸了一口气，开始了他的表演。 2. My brother put the wounded eagle on his leg, combed its feathers and murmured to the creature from time to time. 我的弟弟把这只受伤的鹰放到他的腿上，梳理着它的羽毛，时不时地对这个小东西小声地说话。 对点练： 1. 他看到包里的外套后，非常惊讶，然后叫他妈妈出来。 Seeing the coat in the bag, he was extremely surprised and asked his mother to come out. 2. 我走近(approach)爸爸，自豪地拿出我自己的(my own)钱递给(hand)他。 I approached my father, took out my own money proudly and handed it to him. 3. 他站了起来，走到窗前，望着外面的雨（look out at the rain)。 He stood up, walked to the window and looked out at the rain. 4. 他抓起(grab)外套，穿上(put on)鞋子，冲出门去(rush out of the door)。 He grabbed his coat, put on his shoes and rushed out of the door. 5. 她把名单扔到一边（drop)，在桌子旁(at the table)坐下，用手捋了捋头发(run her hands through her hair)。 She dropped the list aside, sat down at the table and ran her hands through her hair. 6. She looked around cautiously, slipped out of bed and tiptoed to the door. 翻译：她小心翼翼地环顾四周，悄悄溜下床，然后踮着脚尖走到门口。 句式3 “句子+-ving/-ved结构”或“-ving/-ved结构+句子”，作 状语，表示伴随, 原因或结果等。 1. Jodie wore her brand-new shoes, waiting for her turn nervously and anxiously. Jodie穿着她崭新的鞋子，紧张不安地等待着轮到她。 2. “Dad, sorry, it was such a mess.” Jeff murmured, lowering his head in shame. “对不起，爸爸，太乱了”，Jeff 小声说道，惭愧地低着头。 3. “Surprise! Happy Mother’s Day, mummy!” they said, throwing their arms into the air. “惊喜！妈妈，母亲节快乐！”他们一边说着，一边高高地扬起双臂。 4.Hearing the news , they burst into cheers.听到这个消息,他们爆发出欢呼声。 5.Frightened by the dog, she didn’t dare to come into the house. （由于）被那只狗吓到了，她不敢进入房子。 6.Caught in the traffic jam, he was late. （由于）交通堵塞，他迟到了。 对点练： 1. Taking (take) a deep breath, I headed to the lounge door. 我深吸一口气，向客厅走去。 2. Sometimes, only a little kindness can light something shining, making (make) the world beautiful and harmonious.有时，仅仅一点点的善意就可以 点亮某个东西，使它闪闪发光，使世界美丽、和谐。 3. Then I saw my name, decorated (decorate) with giant, golden words---- Champion. 随后，我看见了我的名字，装饰着很大的、金色的文字----冠军。 4. 跟着他，我最终安然无恙地（safe and sound)回家了。 翻译：Following him, I went home, safe and sound. 句式4  巧用生动的“无灵主语 ”句（即无生命名词作主语) (情绪描 写万能通用） 一阵/一股 A wave/sense of + 常见的情绪名词 happiness/joy/delight surprise/astonishment shame / anger despair / regret sorrow / horror anxiety / relief satisfaction / disappointment +有灵动词 seized/ took hold of/ flooded over/ swept over/ flased into +sb. one’s mind 1. A strong sense of delight took hold of me the moment I heard the news. 我一听到这个消息，一股强烈的喜悦之情便涌上心头。 2. Jealousy seized her. 她妒火中烧。 3. A great sense of relief flooded over her. 一股巨大的如释重负之感涌上她的心头。 4. A good idea flashes into my mind. 一个好主意突然闪现在我的脑海中。 对点练： 1. A great sense of relief (relieve) and pride flooded over my father. 翻译：一股强烈的如释重负和自豪之情涌上了父亲的心头。 2. Mary turned pale and a wave of horror took hold of her. 翻译：玛丽脸色变得苍白，一阵恐惧涌上心头。 3. 一股喜悦之情（a wave of/ a sense of)涌上我的心头(take hold of / seize)。 A wave of delight took hold of her. 4. 一看见（at the sight of)熊，他就感到一阵强烈的紧张(a strong wave of nervousness)。\ At the sight of the bear, a wave of intense nervousness swept over him. 5. 她甜美的笑容温暖了我的心。 Her sweet smile warmed my heart. 句式5 ：“情感形容词+句子”或“句子+情感形容词” 1. Thrilled and joyful, Jodie hugged her teammates tightly with tears rolling down her face. Jodie 激动而高兴，Jodie紧紧地拥抱着队友，泪水从脸上滑落。 2. Tired and thirsty, he went to the tea house. 又累又渴，他走进了茶室。 3. Frightened, she asked me to go with her. 她非常害怕，让我跟她一起去。 4. I stood there, silent and motionless. 我站在那里，一动不动。 5. Lost in thought, she didn’t seem to notice that everyone was looking at her. 正陷入沉思，她似乎没有注意到所有人都在看着她。 对点练： 1. Eager and excited, the children rushed to the playground for the sports meet. 急切又兴奋，孩子们冲向操场参加运动会。 2. Anxious and nervous，she waited for the interview results. 她焦虑又紧张地等待面试结果。 3. Tired and hungry，the tourist finally arrived at the hotel. 又累又饿，旅客们终于抵达了酒店。 Trapped in the dense mist, I could do nothing but burst into tears, helpless and disappointed. 困在迷雾中，我什么也做不了,只能哭泣,无助又失落。 4. Happy and satisfied，they celebrated their wedding anniversary at home. 他们幸福又满足地在家庆祝结婚纪念日。 5. Frightened and shocked，she couldn’t say a word. 既害怕又震惊，她一句话也说不出来。 6. Disappointed and upset，I felt like floating in an ocean of sadness. 我既 失望又沮丧，感觉像拍漂浮在伤心的海洋中。 句式6 ：主句+which/who引导的定语从句 Eg. 1. Mary opened the door and saw the little girl，who had familiar eyes and black hair. 玛丽打开门看到了小女孩，她有着令她熟悉的眼睛和黑色的头发。 2.It was getting late and my mom wasn’t home yet, which worried me a lot. 天色越来越晚，妈妈还没回家，这令我非常担心。 对点练： 1. 掌声突然响起，这着实(really)让我吃惊(take sb. by surprise/ surprise sb.)。 Suddenly, the applause burst out, which really took me by surprise. 2. 我和同学上个周末参加了一次采摘活动(picking activity)，这次活动给我留 下了深刻的印象(impress sb. deeply/ leave a deep impression on sb.)。 Last weekend, my classmates and I took part in a picking activity, which left a deep impression on me. 3. 他最终实现(achieve)了目标（goal)， 这让他的父母对他的成功感到无比骄 傲(be proud of)。 He achieved his goal finally, which made his parents extremely proud of his success. 4. 在我陷入困境(be in trouble)时她帮了我一把，这使我能够顺利地(smoothly) 度过(get through)艰难时期(difficult time)。 She gave me a hand when I was in trouble, which enabled me to get through the difficult time smoothly. 句式7 ：描写气氛或者氛围的句子。（情感词+ fill +地点） Eg. 1.Worry and anxiety filled the air. 空气中弥漫着忧虑和焦虑。 2. Joy filled the classroom when the teacher announced a surprise holiday. 老师宣布意外放假时，教室里满是喜悦。 3.Sadness filled the old house after the owner passed away.主人去世后， 老房子里弥漫着悲伤。 对点练： 1. 主队(home team)进球(score a goal)时，体育场(stadium)里满是兴奋之情(excitement)。 Excitement filled the stadium when the home team scored a goal. 2. 演员(performer)们准备(prepare to do)上台(stage)时，后台(backstage)充满了紧张(nervousness /tension)的氛围。 Nervousness filled the backstage when the performers prepared to go on stage. 3. 一家人围坐在火炉旁（by the fireplace)，客厅里满是惬意的温暖( cozy warmth)。 Cozy warmth filled the living room as the whole family sat around the fireplace. 4. 在宁静的(quiet)下午，花园里满是和平(peace)。 Peace filled the garden in the quiet afternoon. 句式8：so…that 如此......以至于 (情绪描写+动作描写) 1.兴奋：I was so excited/thrilled that I gave a jump in the air.我动得跳了起来。 2.开心：I was so happy/cheerful that I jumped up and down.我高兴得跳上跳下。 3.感动：I was so moved that I failed to say a word.我感动得一句话也说不出来。 4.悲伤：I was so sad that I hid my face in my hands. 我难受得用手捂住了脸。 5.生气：I was so angry that I failed to say a word. 我气得一句话也说不出。 6.害怕 ：I was so scared/frightened that my palms sweated and my heart pounded. 我害怕得手心汗，心怦怦直跳。 7.羞愧: I was so ashamed that I could feel my face burning. 我羞愧得感觉自己的脸在烧。 升级：倒装  1. So shocked was I that I was frozen to the spot the moment I heard the news. 当我听到消息时候，我太震惊了以至于呆在原地) 2. So moved was I that I failed to say a word. 我感动得一句话也说不出来。 对点练： 1.听到这个好消息， 她激动得止不(couldn’t stop)住咯咯地笑(giggle)。 Hearing the good news, she was so excited that she couldn’t stop giggling. 2.他太累了，一躺在床上(lie down on the bed)就睡着(fall asleep)了。 He was so tired that he fell asleep as soon as he lay down on the bed. 3.她伤心得泪如泉涌（tears well up in one’s eyes) 。 She was so sad that tears welled up in her eyes. 5. 他吓得一句话也说(utter)不出来。 He was so frightened that he couldn’t utter a word. 5.他太尴尬(embarrassed)了以至于满脸(cheek)通红。 He was so embarrassed that his cheeks were red all over. 句式9：副词修饰动词或句子（作状语） Eg.1. Jodie wore her brand-new shoes, waiting for her turn nervously and anxiously. Jodie穿着她崭新的鞋子，紧张不安地等待着轮到她。 2. She stared at me in amazement. 她惊讶地盯着我看。 3.He answered the question with confidence.他充满信心地回答了这个问题。 4.Amazingly, it worked!令人惊讶得是，它起作用了。 对点练： 1. 她快速地朝(towards)终点线(the finish line)跑去，脸上清晰地写满了坚定。 She ran towards the finish line quickly, with determination clearly written on her face. 2. 老人缓缓打开信件，双手因期待而微微颤抖。 The old man opened the letter slowly, his hands trembling with anticipation, his hands slightly trembling with anticipation. 3.幸运的是，我适应(adapt to)了新的环境，一切都很快恢复了正常(return to normal)。 Luckily/Fortunately, I adapted to the new environment and everything returned to normal soon. 4.事实上，他是一个诚实(honest)可靠的(reliable)人(person)。 In fact, he is an honest and reliable person. 5.希望(hopefully)随着(as/with)技术(technology)的进步(improve/improvement)，我们可能有更多便利(convenient)的选择。 Hopefully, with the improvement of technology, we may have more convenient choices. 句式10：强调或倒装 呼应主题常用句式 正是...... ...... 1. It was+被强调部分+that/who... 直到...才.… 1. 强调句:It was only then that sb realized that+主题从句 2. 倒装句:not until+时间状语 did sb realize that+主题从句 某人的话在耳边回响 1. One’s words echoed in one's ears that+主题从句 2. One’s words echoed in one's ears，+ -ving(作状语） Eg.1. It was my mother who taught us to hold a positive attitude to life. 是我的妈妈一直教导我们要对困难保持乐观的态度。 2. It was love that makes the world go around. 正是爱让这个世界生生不息。 3.She said that it was my company and encouragement that not only made her happy but also improved her confidence. 她说正是我的陪伴和鼓励不仅使我快乐而且提高了我的信心 4.Not until then did Jodie realize that luck would always favor her as long as she spared no effort to do it. 直到那时，朱迪才意识到，只要她不遗余力地去做，运气总是会眷顾她。 5.My teacher’s encouraging words still echoed/ lingered/ rang out in my ears that success often favors those who face challenges with a willing heart. 老师鼓励我的话语仍在我耳边回响,成功往往青睐那些积极面对挑战的人。 6. My teacher’s encouraging words still echoed/ lingered/ rang out in my ears，bringing me a glimmer of hope. 老师鼓励我的话语仍在我耳边回响,给我带来一丝希望。 对点练： 1. 正是她的微笑，温暖了每一个遇见她的人。 It was her smile that warmed everyone who met her. 2. 正是他的坚韧不拔(perseverance)帮他克服(overcome)了所有的挑战。 It was his perseverance that helped him overcome all the challenges. 3. 正是我的父亲，总是给我勇气(courage)去追求(pursue)我的梦想。 It was my father who always gave me the courage to pursue my dream. 4. 父亲鼓舞人心的话语在我脑中回响,引领(guide)我度过(through)艰难时刻。 My father’s inspiring words echoed in my ears, guiding me through the difficult times. 句式11：名词性从句之what连接的主语从句(用于突出某个动作的重要或必须) 结构：What I could do/say was to... 1. What we could do was to go back along the previous track. 我们能做的就是慢慢沿着原路回去。 2. Staring at the broken vase, what I could say was nothing but sorry. 盯着破碎的花瓶，我能说的只有抱歉。 对点练： 1. 我能做的就是紧紧(tightly)握住(hold)她的手，试图安慰(comfort)她。 What I could do was to hold her hands tightly, trying to comfort her. 2. 当她突然哭起来(burst into tears)时， 我能立刻(immediately)做的就是给她一个温暖的拥抱。 When she burst into tears, what I could do immediately was to give her a warm hug. 3. 面对这个难题(problem)，我能说的就是我们应该一起解决它。 Facing the problem, what I could say was that we should solve it together. 4. 看到他失望的(disappointed)表情(face/expression)， 我能做的就是尽快(as soon as possible)想出(come up with)一个解决办法。 Seeing his disappointed expression, what I could do was to come up with a solution as soon as possible. 句式12：毫不犹豫/迫不及待做某事 1) without delay/ hesitation/ a second thought毫不犹豫 2) could not/ hardly wait to do sth.迫不及待做某事 1. On a snowy winter morning with the freezing/ bitterly cold water, the young man jumped into the river without delay/ hesitation/ a second thought, reaching for my son. 在一个下雪的冬天早上，水冰冷刺骨，但那个年轻人毫不犹豫/迟疑地跳进水里，伸手去够我儿子。 2. I could hardly wait to inform my mother of this good news. 我迫不及待地想把这个好消息告诉妈妈。 对点练： 1. 当他听到母亲抵达的消息，他迫不及待地赶往（rush to)机场(airport)。 Upon hearing the news that his mother arrived, he rushed to the airport without hesitation. 2. 看到孩子掉进(fall into)河里，他不假思索地跳进去营救。 Seeing a child fall into the river, he jumped in to rescue without hesitation. 3. 志愿者们一抵达灾区(disaster area)就立即展开救援工作(rescue work)。 As soon as the volunteers arrived at the disaster area, they started to do the rescue work without delay. 4. 长途旅行(journey)后，他迫不及待地想回家洗个热水澡(take a hot bath)。 After the long journey, he couldn’t wait to take a hot bath at home. 5. 铃声一响（ring)，学生们就迫不及待地冲出(rush out of)教室。 As soon as the bell rang, the students couldn’t wait to rush out of the classroom. 6. 我们迫不及待地想把这个好消息告诉父母。 We couldn’t wait to tell our parents the good news. 句式13：巧用时间状语，表达情节 时间描写1:“一......就......” as soon as...; the moment/ the minute/ the instant...; immediately/ directly/ instantly...; on/upon+-Ving 1. As soon as I knew I was in the team, it was like I was walking on air. 一得知我加入了这个队，我高兴得像飞上了天。 2. The moment she had gone, I remembered her name. 她一走，我就想起了 她的名字。 3. On arriving home in the evening, I saw “Happy Apple” crying, so desperately.晚上一回到家，我就看见“开心苹果”在哭， 哭得好伤心呀。 对点练： 1. 他一进入(enter)房间，就知道有(there be)什么不对劲(something wrong)了。 Upon entering the room, he knew there was something wrong. 2. 我一闭上眼睛就睡着了(fall asleep)。’ Upon closing my eyes, I fell asleep. 3. 他一回来(return)就有(there be)一封信在等着他。 Upon returning home, there was a letter waiting for him. 时间描写2：at the sight of... 一看到......就......； at the thought of... 一想到......就......； at the mention of... 一提到......就...... Eg. At the sight of her appearance on the stage, the hall rang with thunderous applause. 一看见她出现在舞台上，大厅里就掌声雷动。 I’m hugging myself at the thought of seeing him again so soon. 一想到这么快又能再次见到他，我就喜不自胜。 At the mention of her father who had died two months before, she burst into tears. 一提到她两个月前去世的父亲，她就痛哭起来。 对点练： 1. 看到成绩单(report card)时，他就对自己的努力感到既欣慰(relieved)又自豪。 At the sight of the report card, he felt both relieved and proud of his efforts. 2. 一想到要见他的家人，他就忍不住(can’t help doing)笑了。 At the thought of seeing his family, he couldn’t help smiling. 3. 一提到他的前女友(ex-girlfriend)，他就变得紧张起来。 At the mention of his ex-girlfriend, he got nervous. 时间描写3： ......就在此时/这时...... 1) was/were doing sth. ...when... 正在做某事这时...... 2）...had (just) done sth. ...when... 刚作了某事这时...... ( 正要做某事这时...... )3) was/were about to do sth. when... was/were on the point of doing sth. ...when... Eg. We had just finished our homework when the fire broke out.我们刚做完作业，就在此时火灾发生了。 They were working against time when the bad news arrived. 他们正在争分夺秒地工作，这时坏消息传来了。 The thief was on the point of putting his hand into the lady’s handbag when the bus suddenly stopped. 小偷正要把手伸进那位女士的手提袋中，这时公交车突然停了下来。 对点练： 1. 她正要绝望大哭(burst into tears)时，看到远处(in the distance)救援队伍的 灯光(the light of the rescue team)。 She was about to burst into tears when she saw the light of the rescue team in the distance. 2. 他正在睡觉突然电话铃响了。 He was sleeping when the telephone rang. 3. 他刚走出(step out of)家门，这时就下起了倾盆大雨（pour)。 He had just stepped out of the house when it began to pour/rain cats and dogs. 时间描写4：直到......才...... ...not...until...; It was not until...that... Eg. I didn’t come to myself until one of my classmates patted me on the shoulder. 直到我的一位同学拍了拍我的肩膀，我才回过神来。 It was not until one of my classmates patted me on the shoulder that I came to myself. 直到我的同学拍了一下我的肩膀，我才回过神来。 对点练： 1. 直到他考试不及格(fail)，他才意识(realize)到充分利用(make full use of)时间的 重要性。 He didn’t realize the importance of making full use of time until he failed in the exam. It was not until he failed in the exam that he realized the importance of making full use of time. 2. 直到他当了(become)父亲，他才意识到抚养(raise)一个孩子又多难(how difficult)。 He didn’t realize how difficult it was to raise a child until he became a father. It was not until he became a father that he realized how difficult it was to raise a child. 3. 直到那时(then)我才真正知道(truly know)好朋友的价值(value)。 I didn’t truly know the value of a good friend until then. It was not until then that I truly knew the value of a good friend. 时间描写5：两个动作同时发生 1) S+V... as +S+V... 边......边...... 2) S+V... while doing 在......期间 3) Doing..., S+V... ......时 Eg. He sang loudly as he walked along. 他边向前走边大声歌唱。 Word came yesterday that they were killed while trying to reach the summit.昨天传来消息说，他们在试图登上峰顶时遇难了。 Doing his homework, he fell asleep.他做着功课睡着了。 对点练： 1.他在森林里一边向前走(go forward)，一边偶尔(occasionally)回头看(look behind)。 He occasionally looked behind as he went forward in the forest. 2.他做着功课就睡着了。（while) He fell asleep while doing his homework. 3.等(waiting for)她时，我通过(by)看电视打发时间(kill time)。 Waiting for her, I killed time by watching TV. 时间描写6：两个动作先后发生 “在......之后”：After+S+V.../ After doing /After being done...,...(同主语) Having done / Having being done..., ...(同主语) “说完/说着这些/那些话”：with that /with these words/with those words After she finished the housework, she went out. = After finishing the housework, she went out. 做完家务后，他出去了。 =Having finished the housework, she went out. With these words, he stood up abruptly,determination flashing in his eyes, and strode towards the door, ready to face the challenge ahead.说完这些话，他突然站起身来，眼中闪烁着坚定的光芒，大步朝门口走去，准备迎接面前的挑战。 对点练： 1.派对结束(end)后，他们坐在草坪(lawn)上，聊起(chat about)一起度过(share)欢乐时光(fun moments)。 After the party ended, they sat on the lawn, chatting about the fun moments they shared. 2.他吃完饭后，擦了擦(wipe)嘴，起身(stand up)去洗碗(clean the dishes)。 After finishing the meal, he wiped his mouth and stood up to clean the dishes. 3.雨停(stop)后，孩子们冲出(rush out of)屋子，开始在水坑(puddle)里蹦跳(jump)。 After the rain stopped, the children rushed out of the house and jumped in the puddles. 4.说着这些话，她温柔地对我微笑（smile at sb.)，声音(voice)轻柔(soft)且令人 安心(comforting)，还给了我一个温暖的拥抱，让我所有的烦恼(worry)都烟消云 散(fade away)。 With these words, she smiled gently at me, her voice soft and comforting, and gave me a warm hug, which made all my worries fade aw ( 1 )学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $英语写作之读后续写 提分句式+对点精炼 句式1:“with的复合结构”, 即with+宾语+宾补(-ving/-ved/to do/adj./adv/介词短语)——作伴随状语,表伴随。 1. With tears streaming down her face, she thanked him again and again. 她泪流满面,再三感谢他。 2. With all efforts made, it was still in vain. 尽管做了所有努力,一切还是徒劳的。 3. With so much work to finish, she had a tight schedule. 有这么多的工作要完成,她的日程安排得很紧。 4. With my phone dead, I had to look for someone who was willing to help. 由于我的手机没电了,我不得不寻找愿意帮忙的人。 5. With flowers in his hand, he excitedly walked out of the door and ran home as fast as he could. 手里拿着花,他兴奋地走出门,以最快的速度跑回家。 对点练: 1. 那女孩张大了嘴巴,打开(unwrap)了她的礼物盒。(with +宾语+adj.) _ 2. 女孩心怦怦直跳(beat wildly),打开了她的礼物盒。(with +宾语+分词) _ 3. 他的妻子伤心极了,眼里满是泪水(full of tears/roll down) _ 4. 那个人躺在地上(on the ground),双手颤抖着(tremble)。 _ 5. 一位帅气的男人站在那里,手里捧着(in his hand)一束(a bunch of)花。 _ 6. Jean哭了,悔恨(regret)和愧疚(guilt)像无止境的潮水(endless tides)一样淹没 (overwhelm)了她。 _ 句式2 :并列谓语,细化动作 A, B and C。 1. The singer glanced at the audience, took a deep breath and began his performance. 歌手扫了观众一眼,深吸了一口气,开始了他的表演。 2. My brother put the wounded eagle on his leg, combed its feathers and murmured to the creature from time to time. 我的弟弟把这只受伤的鹰放到他的腿上,梳理着它的羽毛,时不时地对这个小东西小声地说话。 对点练: 1. 他看到包里的外套后,非常惊讶,然后叫他妈妈出来。 Seeing the coat in the bag, he_his mother to come out. 2. 我走近(approach)爸爸,自豪地拿出我自己的(my own)钱递给(hand)他。 _ 3. 他站了起来,走到窗前,望着外面的雨(look out at the rain)。 _ 4. 他抓起(grab)外套,穿上(put on)鞋子,冲出门去(rush out of the door)。 _ 5. 她把名单扔到一边(drop),在桌子旁(at the table)坐下,用手捋了捋头发(run her hands through her hair)。 _ 6. She looked around cautiously, slipped out of bed _ tiptoed to the door. 翻译:_ 句式3 “句子+-ving/-ved结构”或“-ving/-ved结构+句子”,作 状语,表示伴随, 原因或结果等。 1. Jodie wore her brand-new shoes, waiting for her turn nervously and anxiously. Jodie穿着她崭新的鞋子,紧张不安地等待着轮到她。 2. “Dad, sorry, it was such a mess.” Jeff murmured, lowering his head in shame. “对不起,爸爸,太乱了”,Jeff 小声说道,惭愧地低着头。 3. “Surprise! Happy Mother’s Day, mummy!” they said, throwing their arms into the air. “惊喜!妈妈,母亲节快乐!”他们一边说着,一边高高地扬起双臂。 4.Hearing the news , they burst into cheers.听到这个消息,他们爆发出欢呼声。 5.Frightened by the dog, she didn’t dare to come into the house. (由于)被那只狗吓到了,她不敢进入房子。 6.Caught in the traffic jam, he was late. (由于)交通堵塞,他迟到了。 对点练: 1. _(take) a deep breath, I headed to the lounge door. 我深吸一口气,向客厅走去。 2. Sometimes, only a little kindness can light something shining, _ (make) the world beautiful and harmonious.有时,仅仅一点点的善意就可以 点亮某个东西,使它闪闪发光,使世界美丽、和谐。 3. Then I saw my name, _(decorate) with giant, golden words- Champion. 随后,我看见了我的名字,装饰着很大的、金色的文字-冠军。 4. 跟着他,我最终安然无恙地(safe and sound)回家了。 翻译:_ 句式4 巧用生动的“无灵主语 ”句(即无生命名词作主语) (情绪描 写万能通用) 一阵/一股 A wave/sense of + 常见的情绪名词 happiness/joy/delight surprise/astonishment shame / anger despair / regret sorrow / horror anxiety / relief satisfaction / disappointment +有灵动词 seized/ took hold of/ flooded over/ swept over/ flased into +sb. one’s mind 1. A strong sense of delight took hold of me the moment I heard the news. 我一听到这个消息,一股强烈的喜悦之情便涌上心头。 2. Jealousy seized her. 她妒火中烧。 3. A great sense of relief flooded over her. 一股巨大的如释重负之感涌上她的心头。 4. A good idea flashes into my mind. 一个好主意突然闪现在我的脑海中。 对点练: 1. A great sense of _(relieve) and pride flooded over my father. 翻译:_ 2. Mary turned pale and a wave of horror took hold _ her. 翻译:_ 3. 一股喜悦之情(a wave of/ a sense of)涌上我的心头(take hold of / seize)。 _ 4. 一看见(at the sight of)熊,他就感到一阵强烈的紧张(a strong wave of nervousness)。_ 5. 她甜美的笑容温暖了我的心。_ 句式5 :“情感形容词+句子”或“句子+情感形容词” 1. Thrilled and joyful, Jodie hugged her teammates tightly with tears rolling down her face. Jodie 激动而高兴,Jodie紧紧地拥抱着队友,泪水从脸上滑落。 2. Tired and thirsty, he went to the tea house. 又累又渴,他走进了茶室。 3. Frightened, she asked me to go with her. 她非常害怕,让我跟她一起去。 4. I stood there, silent and motionless. 我站在那里,一动不动。 5. Lost in thought, she didn’t seem to notice that everyone was looking at her. 正陷入沉思,她似乎没有注意到所有人都在看着她。 对点练: 1. _, the children rushed to the playground for the sports meet. 急切又兴奋,孩子们冲向操场参加运动会。 2. _,she waited for the interview results. 她焦虑又紧张地等待面试结果。 3. _,the tourist finally arrived at the hotel. 又累又饿,旅客们终于抵达了酒店。 4. Trapped in the dense mist, I could do nothing but burst into tears, _ _. 困在迷雾中,我什么也做不了,只能哭泣,无助又失落。 5. _,they celebrated their wedding anniversary at home. 他们幸福又满足地在家庆祝结婚纪念日。 6. _,she couldn’t say a word. 既害怕又震惊,她一句话也说不出来。 7. _,I felt like floating in an ocean of sadness. 我既 失望又沮丧,感觉像拍漂浮在伤心的海洋中。 句式6 :主句+which/who引导的定语从句 Eg. 1. Mary opened the door and saw the little girl,who had familiar eyes and black hair. 玛丽打开门看到了小女孩,她有着令她熟悉的眼睛和黑色的头发。 2.It was getting late and my mom wasn’t home yet, which worried me a l 天色越来越晚,妈妈还没回家,这令我非常担心。 对点练: 1. 掌声突然响起,这着实(really)让我吃惊(take sb. by surprise/ surprise sb.)。 Suddenly, the applause burst out, _ 2. 我和同学上个周末参加了一次采摘活动(picking activity),这次活动给我留 下了深刻的印象(impress sb. deeply/ leave a deep impression on sb.)。 _ _ 3. 他最终实现(achieve)了目标(goal), 这让他的父母对他的成功感到无比骄 傲(be proud of)。 _ _ 4. 在我陷入困境(be in trouble)时她帮了我一把,这使我能够顺利地(smoothly) 度过(get through)艰难时期(difficult time)。 _ 句式7 :描写气氛或者氛围的句子。(情感词+ fill +地点) Eg. 1.Worry and anxiety filled the air. 空气中弥漫着忧虑和焦虑。 2. Joy filled the classroom when the teacher announced a surprise holiday. 老师宣布意外放假时,教室里满是喜悦。 3.Sadness filled the old house after the owner passed away.主人去世后, 老房子里弥漫着悲伤。 对点练: 1. 主队(home team)进球(score a goal)时,体育场(stadium)里满是兴奋之情(excitement)。 _ _ 2. 演员(performer)们准备(prepare to do)上台(stage)时,后台(backstage)充满了紧张(nervousness /tension)的氛围。 _ _ 3. 一家人围坐在火炉旁(by the fireplace),客厅里满是惬意的温暖( cozy warmth)。 _ _ 4.在宁静的(quiet)下午,花园里满是和平(peace)。_ 句式8:so…that 如此......以至于 (情绪描写+动作描写) 1.兴奋:I was so excited/thrilled that I gave a jump in the air.我动得跳了起来。 2.开心:I was so happy/cheerful that I jumped up and down.我高兴得跳上跳下。 3.感动:I was so moved that I failed to say a word.我感动得一句话也说不出来。 4.悲伤:I was so sad that I hid my face in my hands. 我难受得用手捂住了脸。 5.生气:I was so angry that I failed to say a word. 我气得一句话也说不出。 6.害怕 :I was so scared/frightened that my palms sweated and my heart pounded. 我害怕得手心汗,心怦怦直跳。 7.羞愧: I was so ashamed that I could feel my face burning. 我羞愧得感觉自己的脸在烧。 升级:倒装 1. So shocked was I that I was frozen to the spot the moment I heard the news. 当我听到消息时候,我太震惊了以至于呆在原地) 2. So moved was I that I failed to say a word. 我感动得一句话也说不出来。 对点练: 1.听到这个好消息, 她激动得止不(couldn’t stop)住咯咯地笑(giggle)。 _ 2.他太累了,一躺在床上(lie down on the bed)就睡着(fall asleep)了。 _ 3.她伤心得泪如泉涌(tears well up in one’s eyes) 。 _ 4. 他吓得一句话也说(utter)不出来。 _ 5.他太尴尬(embarrassed)了以至于满脸(cheek)通红。 _ 句式9:副词修饰动词或句子(作状语) Eg.1. Jodie wore her brand-new shoes, waiting for her turn nervously and anxiously. Jodie穿着她崭新的鞋子,紧张不安地等待着轮到她。 2. She stared at me in amazement. 她惊讶地盯着我看。 3.He answered the question with confidence.他充满信心地回答了这个问题。 4.Amazingly, it worked!令人惊讶得是,它起作用了。 对点练: 1. 她快速地朝(towards)终点线(the finish line)跑去,脸上清晰地写满了坚定。 _, with determination _ written on her face. 2. 老人缓缓打开信件,双手因期待而微微颤抖。 _, his hands_ trembling with anticipation. 3.幸运的是,我适应(adapt to)了新的环境,一切都很快恢复了正常(return to normal)。 _ 4.事实上,他是一个诚实(honest)可靠的(reliable)人(person)。 _ 5.希望(hopefully)随着(as/with)技术(technology)的进步(improve/improvement),我们可能有更多便利(convenient)的选择。 _ _ 句式10:强调或倒装 呼应主题常用句式 正是...... ...... 1. It was+被强调部分+that/who... 直到...才.… 1. 强调句:It was only then that sb realized that+主题从句 2. 倒装句:not until+时间状语 did sb realize that+主题从句 某人的话在耳边回响 1. One’s words echoed in one's ears that+主题从句 2. One’s words echoed in one's ears,+ -ving(作状语) Eg.1. It was my mother who taught us to hold a positive attitude to life. 是我的妈妈一直教导我们要对困难保持乐观的态度。 2. It was love that makes the world go around. 正是爱让这个世界生生不息。 3.She said that it was my company and encouragement that not only made her happy but also improved her confidence. 她说正是我的陪伴和鼓励不仅使我快乐而且提高了我的信心 4.Not until then did Jodie realize that luck would always favor her as long as she spared no effort to do it. 直到那时,朱迪才意识到,只要她不遗余力地去做,运气总是会眷顾她。 5.My teacher’s encouraging words still echoed/ lingered/ rang out in my ears that success often favors those who face challenges with a willing heart. 老师鼓励我的话语仍在我耳边回响,成功往往青睐那些积极面对挑战的人。 5. My teacher’s encouraging words still echoed/ lingered/ rang out in my ears,bringing me a glimmer of hope. 老师鼓励我的话语仍在我耳边回响,给我带来一丝希望。 对点练: 1. 正是她的微笑,温暖了每一个遇见她的人。 _ 2. 正是他的坚韧不拔(perseverance)帮他克服(overcome)了所有的挑战。 _ 3. 正是我的父亲,总是给我勇气(courage)去追求(pursue)我的梦想。 _ 4. 父亲鼓舞人心的话语在我脑中回响,引领(guide)我度过(through)艰难时刻。 _ 句式11:名词性从句之what连接的主语从句(用于突出某个动作的重要或必须) 结构:What I could do/say was to... 1. What we could do was to go back along the previous track. 我们能做的就是慢慢沿着原路回去。 2. Staring at the broken vase, what I could say was nothing but sorry. 盯着破碎的花瓶,我能说的只有抱歉。 对点练: 1. 我能做的就是紧紧(tightly)握住(hold)她的手,试图安慰(comfort)她。 _ 2. 当她突然哭起来(burst into tears)时, 我能立刻(immediately)做的就是给她一个温暖的拥抱。 _ _ 3. 面对这个难题(problem),我能说的就是我们应该一起解决它。 _ 4. 看到他失望的(disappointed)表情(face/expression), 我能做的就是尽快(as soon as possible)想出(come up with)一个解决办法。 _ 句式12:毫不犹豫/迫不及待做某事 1) without delay/ hesitation/ a second thought毫不犹豫 2) could not/ hardly wait to do sth.迫不及待做某事 1. On a snowy winter morning with the freezing/ bitterly cold water, the young man jumped into the river without delay/ hesitation/ a second thought, reaching for my son. 在一个下雪的冬天早上,水冰冷刺骨,但那个年轻人毫不犹豫/迟疑地跳进水里,伸手去够我儿子。 2. I could hardly wait to inform my mother of this good news. 我迫不及待地想把这个好消息告诉妈妈。 对点练: 1. 当他听到母亲抵达的消息,他迫不及待地赶往(rush to)机场(airport)。 _ 2. 看到孩子掉进(fall into)河里,他不假思索地跳进去营救。 _ 3. 志愿者们一抵达灾区(disaster area)就立即展开救援工作(rescue work)。 _ 4. 长途旅行(journey)后,他迫不及待地想回家洗个热水澡(take a hot bath)。 _ 5. 铃声一响(ring),学生们就迫不及待地冲出(rush out of)教室。 _ 6. 我们迫不及待地想把这个好消息告诉父母。 句式13:巧用时间状语,表达情节 时间描写1:“一......就......” as soon as...; the moment/ the minute/ the instant...; immediately/ directly/ instantly...; on/upon+-Ving 1. As soon as I knew I was in the team, it was like I was walking on air. 一得知我加入了这个队,我高兴得像飞上了天。 2. The moment she had gone, I remembered her name. 她一走,我就想起了 她的名字。 3. On arriving home in the evening, I saw “Happy Apple” crying, so desperately.晚上一回到家,我就看见“开心苹果”在哭, 哭得好伤心呀。 对点练: 1. 他一进入(enter)房间,就知道有(there be)什么不对劲(something wrong)了。 _ 2. 我一闭上眼睛就睡着了(fall asleep)。’ _ 3. 他一回来(return)就有(there be)一封信在等着他。 _ 时间描写2:at the sight of... 一看到......就......; at the thought of... 一想到......就......; at the mention of... 一提到......就...... Eg. At the sight of her appearance on the stage, the hall rang with thunderous applause. 一看见她出现在舞台上,大厅里就掌声雷动。 I’m hugging myself at the thought of seeing him again so soon. 一想到这么快又能再次见到他,我就喜不自胜。 At the mention of her father who had died two months before, she burst into tears. 一提到她两个月前去世的父亲,她就痛哭起来。 对点练: 1. 看到成绩单(report card)时,他就对自己的努力感到既欣慰(relieved)又自豪。 _ 2. 一想到要见他的家人,他就忍不住(can’t help doing)笑了。 _ 3. 一提到他的前女友(ex-girlfriend),他就变得紧张起来。 _ 时间描写3: ......就在此时/这时...... 1) was/were doing sth. ...when... 正在做某事这时...... 2)...had (just) done sth. ...when... 刚作了某事这时...... ( 正要做某事这时...... )3) was/were about to do sth. when... was/were on the point of doing sth. ...when... Eg. We had just finished our homework when the fire broke out.我们刚做完作业,就在此时火灾发生了。 They were working against time when the bad news arrived. 他们正在争分夺秒地工作,这时坏消息传来了。 The thief was on the point of putting his hand into the lady’s handbag when the bus suddenly stopped. 小偷正要把手伸进那位女士的手提袋中,这时公交车突然停了下来。 对点练: 1. 她正要绝望大哭(burst into tears)时,看到远处(in the distance)救援队伍的 灯光(the light of the rescue team)。 _ 2. 他正在睡觉突然电话铃响了。 _ 3. 他刚走出(step out of)家门,这时就下起了倾盆大雨(pour)。 _ 时间描写4:直到......才...... ...not...until...; It was not until...that... Eg. I didn’t come to myself until one of my classmates patted me on the shoulder. 直到我的一位同学拍了拍我的肩膀,我才回过神来。 It was not until one of my classmates patted me on the shoulder that I came to myself. 直到我的同学拍了一下我的肩膀,我才回过神来。 对点练: 1. 直到他考试不及格(fail),他才意识(realize)到充分利用(make full use of)时间的 重要性。 _ 2. 直到他当了(become)父亲,他才意识到抚养(raise)一个孩子又多难(how difficult)。 _ 3. 直到那时(then)我才真正知道(truly know)好朋友的价值(value)。 _ 时间描写5:两个动作同时发生 1) S+V... as +S+V... 边......边...... 2) S+V... while doing 在......期间 3) Doing..., S+V... ......时 Eg. He sang loudly as he walked along. 他边向前走边大声歌唱。 Word came yesterday that they were killed while trying to reach the summit.昨天传来消息说,他们在试图登上峰顶时遇难了。 Doing his homework, he fell asleep.他做着功课睡着了。 对点练: 1.他在森林里一边向前走(go forward),一边偶尔(occasionally)回头看(look behind)。 _ 2.他做着功课就睡着了。(while) _ 3.等(waiting for)她时,我通过(by)看电视打发时间(kill time)。 _ 时间描写6:两个动作先后发生 “在......之后”:After+S+V.../ After doing /After being done...,...(同主语) Having done / Having being done..., ...(同主语) “说完/说着这些/那些话”:with that /with these words/with those words After she finished the housework, she went out. = After finishing the housework, she went out. 做完家务后,他出去了。 =Having finished the housework, she went out. With these words, he stood up abruptly,determination flashing in his eyes, and strode towards the door, ready to face the challenge ahead.说完这些话,他突然站起身来,眼中闪烁着坚定的光芒,大步朝门口走去,准备迎接面前的挑战。 对点练: 1.派对结束(end)后,他们坐在草坪(lawn)上,聊起(chat about)一起度过(share)欢乐时光(fun moments)。 _ 2.他吃完饭后,擦了擦(wipe)嘴,起身(stand up)去洗碗(clean the dishes)。 _ 3.雨停(stop)后,孩子们冲出(rush out of)屋子,开始在水坑(puddle)里蹦跳(jump)。 _ 4.说着这些话,她温柔地对我微笑(smile at sb.),声音(voice)轻柔(soft)且令人 安心(comforting),还给了我一个温暖的拥抱,让我所有的烦恼(worry)都烟消云 散(fade away)。 _ _ ( 1 )学科网(北京)股份有限公司 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $