内容正文:
话题写作指导
[2019沈阳—说明父母建议的作用,2017沈阳—慈善活动]
?佳句积累
开头
1.Volunteering not only helps others but also offers us a chance to experience life.
2.In my opinion,volunteer activities can spread kindness among people.
3.Nowadays,many teenagers have difficulty in getting on well with their parents.
4.I'm sorry to hear that you had an argument with your parents when dubbing()foreign films
by using mobile apps.
5.Keeping a good relationship with our parents is an important thing.It helps us grow up in a pleasant
environment.
中间
1.In order to raise money for the sick boy,we held a big sale in the playground.The goods included
books,dictionaries,ping-pong bats and baked bread.
2.Cheng Yu and I made an appointment that every Sunday morning we would go to the Children's Hospital
to cheer up the kids.Besides helping them solve some problems in their textbooks,we will wash their
clothes and mop the floor for them.
3.Communication goes two ways:somebody has to talk and somebody has to listen.
4.All of us were happy because we did something good for others.A feeling of satisfaction rose in my
heart.
5.To begin with,we should be honest with others.
6.Being honest and trusting each other can build a solid friendship.
7.When disagreement does happen,it's wise of us to talk about it with each other.
8.What's more,we should be kind to others and offer necessary help to those in trouble.
9.Last but not least,be a good listener.
结尾
1.Many hands make light work.众人拾柴火焰高。
2.Give love and harvest hope.奉献爱心,收获希望。
3.Friendship is like a bottle of wine.The longer it is kept,the better it will be.
⑦典例精讲
众人拾柴火焰高,在我们的日常生活中,团队合作是很重要的。假定你是李辉,某英文网站正在
举行以“We Made It by Teamwork”为题的征文比赛。请你结合自己的经历,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:
(1)团队合作的任务;
(2)团队合作的经历;
(3)你的感想与收获。
注意:
(1)词数80~100,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯:
(3)短文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
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话题读写思维训练·辽宁英语
一战成名新中考
We Made It by Teamwork
Teamwork plays an important role in our daily life.
Step1细审题
审内容:讲述团队合作的经历与收获。
审人称:介绍自己完成的团队合作的任务和表达自己的感想与收获,均应用
人称:介绍团队合
作的经历,即团队人员(包括自己)各自的任务,应用
人称和
人称。
审时态:介绍团队合作过的任务和合作经历,应用
时;表达自己的感想与收获,可用时,
也可用时。
Step2搭框架,扩要点
★开头:要点1→团队合作的任务(raise money for the poor children)
★中间:要点2→团队合作的经历(collect books,.sell books,ask teachers for help)
①
②
③
★结尾:要点3→自己的感想与收获(teamwork is important,work together,has great power)
Step3连接成篇
初阶范文
高阶范文
We Made It by Teamwork
We Made It by Teamwork
Teamwork plays an important role in our
Teamwork plays an important role in our daily
daily life.In one of our school's
life.In one of our school's competitions,I had the
competitions,I with a team had a task-
chance to work with a team to finish a challenging
raising money for the poor children.
task-raising money for the poor children.
Everyone in our team had their own
We divided the task into several parts.Everyone
task.Some of us collected the books we
in our team had their own task.Some of us collected the
didn't need.Some sold them in their own
books we didn't need.Some tried different ways to sell
communities.Others asked teachers for help
them in their own communities.Others turned to
to get more ways to raise money.We finished
teachers for help to get more methods to raise money.We
every task in the end with hard work.
managed to finish every task in the end with patience,
I realized that teamwork is important
understanding and continuous communication.
and working together has great power through
I realized the importance of teamwork and the great
this experience.I think there will be no hard
power of working together through this experience.I
work because of teamwork.
think there will be no hard work because of teamwork.
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?写作攻关
写作1
假定你是李辉,你校校刊英语专栏正在举行主题为“帮助别人,成长自我”的征文活动。请以
"Doing Volunteer Work Makes Me
”为题,根据下列提示,并结合自身经历,写一篇短文投稿至
校刊专栏。
Which volunteer
What did you do?
work did you do?
Doing Volunteer Work
Makes Me
Who did you do the
How do you feel
volunteer work with?
as a volunteer?
注意:
(1)先补全标题;
(2)词数80~100:
(3)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯:
(4)短文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Doing Volunteer Work Makes Me
写作2[2025山西改编
生活中总有很多爱包围着我们,假定你是李辉,市中学生英语报将举行题为“Feel love,learn to
love”的演讲比赛。请用英语写一篇演讲稿参赛,内容包括:
(1)你眼中的爱;
(2)讲述被爱的故事:
(3)你的感受。
注意:
(1)词数80~100,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯:
(3)演讲稿中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Feel love,learn to love
Love means different things to different people.It can be support,encouragement or trust.
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话题读写思维训练·辽宁英语be beaten by failure.I got up early to practice listening,
asked teachers questions actively,and did more reading
exercises.Finally,I made great progress in the next exam.
This experience taught me that with a strong will,we can
overcome all difficulties,just like the bamboo in the rock.
Best wishes,
Li Hui
写作2
I have been a music fan since I was a little girl.Over
the years,music has brought so many beautiful things into
话题11
Passage 1
【核心词句预知】1.…的象征2.凭借巨大的努力和
智慧创造奇迹3.因…而著名4.被提升至5.在
使用中6.分散重量7.陈列:摆开
(正文】1-4ABBD
Passage 2
【核心词句预知】1.报名2.出发3.过去常常
4.季节性活动5.穿着时髦的服装6.摆放7.归结
于…8.日益增长的健康饮食意识9.扎根于…
【正文】1-4BABD
Passage 3
【核心词句预知】1.历史悠久2.坐落于…3.喘口
气4.保护…免受.…5.充当6.传承
【正文】1-5 ABCAB6-10 BCCDB
Passage 4
【核心词句预知】1.把某人当作…2.参加3.使某
人的记忆力大大增强4.对…有深刻了解5.从
…掉下来6.能够做某事7.在某人的一生中
【正文】l.at2.a3.found4.deeper5.was saved
6.to swim 7.successfully 8.me 9.and 10.things
Passage 5
【核心词句预知】1.修建水利工程2.据说…。
3.在河边4.铭记于心
话题12传统
Passage 1
【核心词句预知】1.跟着唱2.中华人民共和国3.浮
现在某人的脑海中4.成形;形成5.放弃6.国家
大事7.某人全身心
【正文】1-4BAAD
Passage 2
【核心词句预知】1.丝绸之路2.交易品3.保护某人
免受…4.…的剩余部分5.在…的统治下
6.达到了鼎盛7.大量的
【正文】1-4ABCA
Passage 3
【核心词句预知】1.总共2.在…生产制造3.首次
4.为我们的国家而献身5.向…学习6.…的发
展7.珍视和平8.采取行动做某事
【正文】1-5 DBDDA6-10 CBCCA
Passage 4
【核心词句预知】1.在…领域2.例如3.指的是
4.密切关注…5.事物的外表6.很养眼
参考答案
一战成名新中考
my life.
Music gives me energy.When I'm tired or stressed,a
piece of lively music can make me refreshed and full of
power.When I am happy,listening to music can make me
more relaxed.
My favorite song is“You Raise Me Up”from
Westlife.I like it because its lyrics are touching and the
melody is beautiful.The singer's voice is also so
charming.It always makes me feel warm and encouraged
whenever I listen to it.
历史与社会
【正文】l.him2.from3.dug4.But5.to plan
题读写思
6.a 7.more 8.Centuries 9.were hidden 10.really
Passage 6
练
【核心词句预知】1.历史遗址2.追溯3.木雕
4.古代生活场景5.研学旅行6.总之:简言之
7.一堆8.提醒某人某事
【正文】J1.was discovered2.earliest3.lived4.as
5.and 6.closely 7.the 8.stones 9.us
10.to connect
Passage 7
【核心词句预知】1.跟着…唱2.把…扔掉3.及
时4.与…聊天5.立即,马上6.从…中得到
警示
【正文J1.They read books and newspapers.
2.He can just remove or cut it.
3.Because it may stop working suddenly.
4.I think it is really convenient.First,it's convenient for
me to correct a mistake.I can just delete it,remove it or
cut it.Second,texts can be stored in my computer.
Third,I can put a beautiful picture,a photo or a form
among the text.(开放性设问,言之有理、言之有物
即可。)
文化与革命文化
【正文】1.an2.To draw3.freely4.and5.ladies
6.became 7.the 8.is used 9.artist's 10.its
Passage 5
【核心词句预知】1.一场残酷的血腥战2.…的关键
3.病倒4.克服困难5.设法做成某事6.达成一致
意见去做某事7.对…有很大影响8.国际关系
9.同时
【正文】l.seventy--ffh2.happened3.to4.but
5.to beat 6.sides 7.was divided 8.strongly 9.an
10.us
Passage 6
【核心词句预知】1.非常重要2.创立;建立3.私塾
4.持久影响力5.集中在…6.制定规则7.塑造中
国的现代化教育体系
【正文】l.examples2.and3.of4.the5.greater
6.believed 7.to guide 8.completely
9.were influenced 10.Their
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