2026届湖北省高三上学期英语八校期中联考读后续写二次开发学案

湖北省2025—2026学年上学期八校期中联考 读后续写二次开发学案教师版 【真题再现】 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was my first long race — a marathon. The wind and the rain chilled (使很冷) me to the bone, but the sun was still not out to warm up the air. The starting gun would go off any second. I was ready. I was 28 and in the best shape of my life. At least, I thought I was. I ran all the time and had already run several races. But none of them was 26.2 miles. The farthest I had run before was only 15 miles. Still, I was young and overconfident and I knew I could do it. The gun went off and the race started. I was excited and the weather became the furthest thing from my mind. I just concentrated on holding my own position among the other runners. I had no real finishing goal in mind, but when I settled into my pace, I soon worked out that I could easily break 4 hours. Within a few miles, I ran past an elderly runner. He must have been over 70 years old and I was surprised he was even in the race. I was even more surprised that he was still ahead of me. He kept to the side of the road, his old legs moving one in front of the other, slowly but stably. I passed him without giving him a second glance or a word of encouragement. I kept moving and had come 15 miles. I was at a pace to beat 4 hours. Then something strange happened. I started to get tired. My goal of 4 hours soon got pushed back to 4:10. Then 4:20. Finally, at about the 20-mile mark, I couldn't run any more. I had to walk. I moved to the side of the road and with difficulty I walked along. I needed a second wind, but it wasn't coming. The rain was back. There was nothing I could do about it but concentrate on putting one foot in front of the other. Then the elderly man passed me. He looked the same as he had earlier, running at the same speed. As he passed, he looked at me and smiled, "Only a few more miles to go. Don't give up now!" 注意： （1）续写词数应为150左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Thinking of being beaten by an elderly man, I moved on. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________。 Paragraph 2: He crossed the finish line ahead of me and I was soon to follow. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________。 【原文翻译】 这是我的第一场长跑 —— 一场马拉松。寒风冷雨刺骨，太阳却迟迟不肯露面，无法回暖空气。发令枪随时都可能响起。我已整装待发。那年我 28 岁，正值体能巅峰。至少，我是这么认为的。我平时经常跑步，也参加过好几次比赛，但没有一次是 26.2 英里的马拉松。我之前跑过的最远距离只有 15 英里。尽管如此，年轻气盛的我满心自负，坚信自己能完成挑战。 发令枪响，比赛开始了。我兴奋不已，恶劣的天气早已抛到九霄云外。我只专注于在其他跑者中稳住自己的位置。我原本没有明确的完赛目标，但当我找到稳定的节奏后，很快就盘算着自己轻松能突破 4 小时大关。 跑了几英里后，我超过了一位老年跑者。他看起来至少 70 岁了，我很惊讶他竟然也来参加比赛，更让我意外的是他居然还跑在我前面。他一直靠路边跑，苍老的双腿交替向前挪动，速度缓慢却沉稳有力。我从他身边跑过，没多看他一眼，也没说一句鼓励的话。 我继续前进，跑完了 15 英里。当时的配速还能冲击 4 小时完赛。可就在这时，奇怪的事情发生了 —— 我开始感到疲惫。4 小时完赛的目标很快被推迟到 4 小时 10 分，接着又变成 4 小时 20 分。最终，跑到大约 20 英里处时，我再也跑不动了，只能步行。 我挪到路边，艰难地往前走。我急需恢复体力，却怎么也提不起劲。雨又开始下了起来，我别无他法，只能集中精力，一步一步往前挪。 就在这时，那位老年跑者从我身边经过。他看起来和之前没什么两样，依旧保持着原来的速度。经过我身边时，他看了看我，微笑着说：“只剩几英里了，现在别放弃啊！” 【写作训练步骤】 一、通读全文，深度解读 读情节 开端：“我” 28 岁，正值体能巅峰，首次参加马拉松比赛。尽管之前最远仅跑过 15 英里，且当天风雨交加、天气寒冷，但 “我” 年轻自负，坚信能完成 26.2 英里的赛程，甚至有望突破 4 小时。 发展：发令枪响后，“我” 专注于保持节奏，兴奋之余忘却了恶劣天气，途中轻松超过一位年过 70 的老年跑者，未予过多关注。跑到 15 英里时，“我” 仍保持破 4 小时的节奏，可随后体力骤降，目标不断延后，20 英里处彻底无法坚持，只能步行。 转折：就在 “我” 艰难步行时，那位老年跑者反超而来，他状态依旧稳定，还微笑着鼓励 “我”“别放弃，只剩几英里了”，这一幕深深触动了 “我”。 高潮：“我” 不愿被老年跑者击败，重新振作继续前进，在坚持中突破体力极限。 续写开端：描写 “我” 被激励后的心理变化（羞愧、不甘转化为动力），调整节奏重新起跑，克服疲惫与风雨，努力追赶老年跑者的身影。 续写结局：阐述老年跑者先冲线，“我” 紧随其后完成比赛，赛后与老人的简短交流，“我” 领悟到马拉松的真谛 —— 不在于速度，而在于坚持，同时学会谦逊，正视自身不足。 读人物 “我”（第一人称叙述者）：年轻气盛、体能出众但自负浮躁，初期轻视老年跑者，遭遇体力瓶颈后一度受挫，在他人鼓励下重拾斗志，最终实现体能与心智的双重成长，变得沉稳谦逊。 老年跑者（引导者角色）：年过 70、身形普通却耐力惊人，沉稳坚毅、友善温和，不疾不徐地坚持自己的节奏，用行动与鼓励点燃 “我” 的斗志，是 “坚持” 与 “谦逊” 的象征。 读时态 全文以一般过去时为主，续写需严格保持一致。 读冲突 外在冲突：恶劣天气（风雨寒冷）与马拉松高强度运动的对抗；“我” 的体力极限与 26.2 英里赛程的矛盾；“我” 与老年跑者之间 “年轻体能” 与 “年长耐力” 的实力较量。 内在冲突：“我” 的自负心态与被老年跑者反超后的羞愧感的碰撞；体力透支后的放弃念头与不服输的斗志的挣扎；对 “速度至上” 的认知与马拉松真正意义的认知冲突。 读情绪发展 兴奋自负→专注投入→体力下滑（焦虑）→疲惫挫败→（被激励）羞愧不甘→坚定坚持→（续写结局）释然敬佩→领悟成长 读主题 坚持的力量（The Power of Perseverance） 谦逊的价值（The Value of Humility） 年龄不是极限（Age Is Not a Barrier） 真正的对手是自己（The Real Opponent Is Oneself） 马拉松的真谛：过程重于速度（The Essence of Marathon: Process Over Speed） 二、【十句五定法】—— 搭建你的写作框架 请根据两个段落的开头语，构思并完成以下句子，以搭建清晰的段落结构。 段落 句子功能 你的句子构思 第一段 1. 接续 Hint1 描述 “我” 被老年跑者反超后的羞愧与不甘，咬紧牙关重新起跑，调整呼吸与步伐，摒弃之前的急躁节奏。 2. 动作 / 心理推进 “我” 任凭雨水打在脸上，肌肉酸痛难忍，却不断回想老人的鼓励与稳定的身影，将其作为前进的动力。 3. 有效过渡 途中 “我” 多次想停下步行，但一想到自己正值壮年却要被年过七旬的老人超越，便咬牙坚持，逐步缩小与老人的距离。 4. 有效衔接 风雨渐小，“我” 的节奏愈发稳定，不再执着于破 4 小时的目标，只专注于 “不放弃” 本身。 5. 段落收束 当看到前方的终点线轮廓时，“我” 心中涌起一股力量，加快脚步向老人的背影追去。 第二段 6. 接续 Hint2 具体描写老人冲线时的场景（从容微笑、观众欢呼），“我” 紧随其后跨过终点线，虽气喘吁吁却满心释然。 7. 情节发展 老人在终点线旁等候 “我”，递来一瓶温水，笑着分享自己的跑步心得（“坚持比速度更重要”）。 8. 主题升华 “我” 终于明白，马拉松不是与他人的竞速，而是与自己的较量，年龄、体能都不是阻碍，唯有坚持方能抵达终点。 9. 结局呈现 “我” 向老人真诚道谢，为自己初期的轻视感到羞愧，同时为这次突破自我的经历感到自豪。 10. 富有余韵的结尾 用一句感悟式句子收尾，回扣主题（如：那场风雨中的马拉松，不仅让我跑完了 26.2 英里，更让我跑过了自负的瓶颈，抵达了成长的彼岸）。 三、【微写作训练】—— 打磨你的语言（中英文对称版） 1. 人物心理描写（Psychological Description） 情绪类型（Emotion Type） 英文词块（English Chunk） 中文释义（Chinese Meaning） 适配情节（Applicable Plot） 自负浮躁（Arrogance & Impetuosity） I felt overconfident, convinced my youth and fitness would easily carry me through. 我满心自负，坚信自己的年轻与体能能轻松撑过全程。 比赛前及初期领先时 I dismissed the elderly runner, thinking his slow pace was no match for mine. 我轻视那位老年跑者，认为他缓慢的步伐根本不是我的对手。 初次超过老人时 羞愧不甘（Shame & Unwillingness） Shame flooded me at the thought of being outrun by a man over 70. 一想到被年过七旬的老人超越，羞愧感席卷全身。 被老人反超后 I was unwilling to admit defeat, my pride pushing me to keep going. 我不愿认输，自尊心驱使着我继续前进。 重新起跑时 释然成长（Relief & Growth） A sense of relief and pride washed over me as I crossed the finish line. 冲过终点线时，一股释然与自豪感涌上心头。 完成比赛时 I realized true victory lies in perseverance, not outpacing others. 我明白，真正的胜利在于坚持，而非超越他人。 领悟主题时 2. 情感描写（Emotional Description） 情感类型（Emotion Type） 英文词块（English Chunk） 中文释义（Chinese Meaning） 适配情节（Applicable Plot） 兴奋投入（Excitement & Engagement） Excitement surged through me as the starting gun fired. 发令枪响，兴奋感席卷全身。 比赛开始时 I was fully absorbed in maintaining my pace, ignoring the cold rain. 我专注于保持节奏，忘却了冰冷的雨水。 比赛初期领先时 疲惫挫败（Exhaustion & Frustration） Fatigue overwhelmed me, and I struggled to take another step. 疲惫感将我淹没，我连再走一步都艰难。 20 英里处体力透支时 Frustration set in as my 4-hour goal slipped further away. 4 小时的目标越来越远，挫败感油然而生。 体力下滑、目标延后时 敬佩感激（Admiration & Gratitude） I felt deep admiration for the elderly runner’s stamina and kindness. 我对老年跑者的耐力与友善深感敬佩。 被老人鼓励后 Gratitude welled up in me for his encouragement that kept me going. 感激之情涌上心头，是他的鼓励让我坚持到底。 赛后与老人交流时 3. 动作描写（Action Description） 动作场景（Action Scene） 英文词块（English Chunk） 中文释义（Chinese Meaning） 适配情节（Applicable Plot） 跑步动作（Running Actions） I settled into a steady pace, arms swinging rhythmically by my sides. 我找到稳定的节奏，手臂在身侧有节奏地摆动。 比赛初期保持节奏时 I gritted my teeth, pushing through the muscle soreness to run again. 我咬紧牙关，克服肌肉酸痛重新起跑。 被老人激励后 My legs trembled with fatigue, but I forced them to move faster. 我的双腿因疲惫颤抖，却仍迫使它们加快速度。 追赶老人时 体力不支（Physical Exhaustion） I stumbled to the side of the road, gasping for breath as I walked. 我踉跄着走到路边，一边步行一边大口喘气。 20 英里处无法跑步时 I wiped the rain and sweat from my forehead, my legs feeling heavy as lead. 我擦去额头的雨水与汗水，双腿沉重如铅。 体力透支严重时 冲线与互动（Finishing & Interaction） The elderly runner crossed the finish line with a calm smile, raising his arms slightly. 老年跑者带着平静的微笑冲过终点线，微微举起双臂。 老人率先冲线时 I stumbled across the finish line, collapsing into a chair as volunteers handed me water. 我踉跄着冲过终点线，瘫坐在椅子上，志愿者递来水。 “我” 完成比赛时 I shook the elderly runner’s hand firmly, thanking him sincerely for his encouragement. 我紧紧握住老年跑者的手，真诚感谢他的鼓励。 赛后致谢时 4. 环境象征描写（Symbolic Environmental Description） 象征意象（Symbolic Image） 英文表达（English Expression） 中文释义（Chinese Meaning） 象征意义（Symbolic Meaning） 风雨（Wind and Rain） The cold wind and rain were not just bad weather—they symbolized the hardships and challenges in the race of life. 冰冷的风雨不仅是恶劣天气，更象征着人生赛道上的艰辛与挑战。 成长路上的困难阻碍 老年跑者的步伐（The Elderly Runner’s Steps） His slow but steady steps represented perseverance and consistency—proving that patience beats speed. 他缓慢却稳定的步伐，象征着坚持与恒心 —— 证明耐心胜过速度。 坚持的力量与沉稳的价值 马拉松赛道（Marathon Track） The 26.2-mile track was more than a race route; it was a journey of self-discovery and growth. 26.2 英里的赛道不仅是比赛路线，更是一场自我发现与成长的旅程。 人生成长的历程 终点线（Finish Line） The finish line was not just the end of the race, but a symbol of overcoming limits and self-transcendence. 终点线不仅是比赛的结束，更是突破极限、实现自我超越的象征。 成长与突破的里程碑 5. 子训练：为故事注入灵魂（Sub-Training: Inject Soul into the Story） 训练一：环境描写・烘托心情（Environmental Description・Highlight Mood） 心情（Mood） 可选词汇（Optional Vocabulary） 英文造句（English Sentence-Making） 中文造句（Chinese Sentence-Making） 自负、坚定（Arrogance & Determination） 凛冽的风（piercing wind）；密集的雨（dense rain）；整齐的脚步声（neat footsteps） The piercing wind and dense rain couldn’t dampen my confidence—my neat footsteps echoed on the road, convinced I’d finish ahead. 凛冽的风和密集的雨无法浇灭我的自信 —— 路上回荡着我整齐的脚步声，坚信自己能领先完赛。 疲惫、挫败（Exhaustion & Frustration） 冰冷的雨水（cold rain）；沉重的步伐（heavy steps）；灰暗的天空（gloomy sky） Cold rain poured down, mixing with sweat as I dragged my heavy steps forward; the gloomy sky seemed to mirror my frustrated mood. 冰冷的雨水倾泻而下，与汗水交织，我拖着沉重的步伐前行；灰暗的天空仿佛映照出我挫败的心情。 坚定、释然（Determination & Relief） 渐弱的风雨（fading wind and rain）；温暖的阳光（warm sunlight）；清晰的终点线（clear finish line） Fading wind and rain gave way to warm sunlight, and the clear finish line ahead filled me with determination—I knew I’d make it. 渐弱的风雨过后，温暖的阳光洒落，前方清晰的终点线让我充满决心 —— 我知道自己能做到。 训练二：人物刻画・于细微处见真情（Character Portrayal・Truth in Details） 抽象描述（Abstract Description） 英文具体表达（Specific English Expression） 中文具体表达（Specific Chinese Expression） 我很自负（I was arrogant） I glanced at the elderly runner out of the corner of my eye, a faint smile of disdain on my lips as I passed him easily. 我用眼角余光瞥了一眼老年跑者，嘴角带着一丝轻蔑的微笑，轻松地从他身边超过。 老人很沉稳（The elderly runner was calm） He kept his eyes straight ahead, his arms swinging gently, and his steps never faltering—even in the cold rain. 他双眼直视前方，手臂轻轻摆动，步伐从未迟疑 —— 即便在冰冷的雨水中。 我很感激（I was grateful） I looked at the elderly runner with tears in my eyes, my voice trembling slightly as I said: “Thank you—your words gave me the strength to keep going.” 我眼里含着泪水看着老年跑者，声音微微颤抖地说：“谢谢 —— 你的话给了我坚持下去的力量。” 仿写示例（Example of Imitation） 英文仿写（English Imitation）：She held the trophy tightly, her hands shaking with excitement, a bright smile spreading across her face as she thanked her teammates. 中文仿写（Chinese Imitation）：她紧紧握着奖杯，双手因兴奋而颤抖，脸上绽放出灿烂的笑容，向队友们致谢。 训练三：情感表达・找到 “高级替身”（Emotional Expression・Find "Advanced Replacements"） 基础词汇（Basic Vocabulary） 高级替换词（Advanced Replacements） 英文例句升级（English Sentence Upgrade） 中文例句升级（Chinese Sentence Upgrade） tired（累的） physically drained（身体透支的）；exhausted to the bone（筋疲力尽的） Original: I was tired after running 20 miles.Upgraded: I was physically drained and exhausted to the bone after running 20 miles, my legs refusing to move forward. 原句：跑了 20 英里后我很累。升级句：跑了 20 英里后，我身体透支、筋疲力尽，双腿再也迈不动一步。 happy（开心的） thrilled with joy（欣喜若狂的）；bursting with pride（满心自豪的） Original: I was happy when I finished the marathon.Upgraded: I was thrilled with joy and bursting with pride when I crossed the finish line, knowing I’d overcome my limits. 原句：完成马拉松时我很开心。升级句：冲过终点线时，我欣喜若狂、满心自豪，知道自己突破了极限。 surprised（惊讶的） astonished（深感惊讶的）；amazed（惊叹的） Original: I was surprised that the elderly runner finished ahead of me.Upgraded: I was astonished and amazed that the elderly runner, over 70, finished ahead of me—his stamina far exceeded my expectations. 原句：老年跑者比我先完赛，我很惊讶。升级句：年过七旬的老年跑者比我先完赛，我深感惊讶与惊叹 —— 他的耐力远超我的预期。 训练四：动作细节・让情感可视化（Action Details・Visualize Emotions） 情境（Situation） 直白版（Plain Version） 细节版英文（Detailed English Version） 细节版中文（Detailed Chinese Version） 被激励后重新起跑 I ran again after being encouraged. I clenched my fists tightly, gritted my teeth, and pushed off the ground with all my strength, my legs burning but my mind focused—determined not to be outdone by the elderly runner. 我紧紧攥紧拳头，咬紧牙关，用尽全身力气蹬地起跑，双腿灼热难耐但意念坚定 —— 决心不被老年跑者击败。 冲过终点线的瞬间 I crossed the finish line. I stumbled forward, my arms outstretched toward the finish line, my breath coming in ragged gasps as I crossed it, tears of relief mixing with rain on my face. 我踉跄着向前扑去，双臂伸向终点线，冲过线时呼吸急促、气喘吁吁，释然的泪水与雨水交织在脸上。 训练五：象征与隐喻・让主题更深刻（Symbolism & Metaphor・Deepen the Theme） 抽象概念（Abstract Concept） 英文象征表达（English Symbolic Expression） 中文象征表达（Chinese Symbolic Expression） 自负的代价（The Cost of Arrogance） My initial arrogance was like a false start in the marathon—making me underestimate the challenge and overlook the strength of others. 我最初的自负，就像马拉松中的抢跑 —— 让我低估了挑战，也忽视了他人的力量。 坚持的力量（The Power of Perseverance） The elderly runner’s steady steps were like a metronome, beating out the rhythm of perseverance—proving that slow and steady wins the race. 老年跑者稳定的步伐，就像一个节拍器，敲出坚持的节奏 —— 证明稳扎稳打方能赢得比赛。 自我超越（Self-Transcendence） Finishing the marathon was not about beating others, but about outrunning the tired, defeated version of myself. 完成马拉松，不在于击败他人，而在于超越那个疲惫、挫败的自己。 四、【微动作训练】—— 让情感在行动中展现 训练一：动作 - 情绪绑定 （请根据中文提示，补全英文句子，完成 “动作 - 情绪” 的精准绑定） 1. 场景：自负领先 英文：I glanced over my shoulder casually (随意地回头瞥了一眼), my lips curling into a faint smile (嘴角勾起一丝浅笑) as I pulled ahead of the elderly runner (逐渐超越老年跑者). 中文：我随意地回头瞥了一眼，嘴角勾起一丝浅笑，逐渐超越了老年跑者。 2. 场景：疲惫挫败 英文：I staggered to a stop (踉跄着停下), hands on my knees (双手撑着膝盖), gasping for breath (大口喘气) as fatigue overwhelmed me (疲惫感将我淹没). 中文：我踉跄着停下，双手撑着膝盖，大口喘气，疲惫感将我淹没。 3. 场景：坚定追赶英文：I straightened my back (挺直脊背), swung my arms vigorously (用力摆动双臂), and pressed forward (奋力向前冲) as the elderly runner’s encouraging smile echoed in my mind (老年跑者鼓励的笑容在脑海中回荡).中文：我挺直脊背，用力摆动双臂，奋力向前冲，老年跑者鼓励的笑容在脑海中回荡。 训练二：细节放大镜 （请将简单的动作，通过添加 1-2 个细节进行升级，使其更具表现力） 1. 原句： I ran past the elderly runner. 细节升级： I quickened my pace slightly (稍微加快步伐), my eyes fixed ahead (目光直视前方) without sparing him a second glance (没再看他一眼), convinced he couldn’t keep up (坚信他跟不上). 2. 原句： The elderly runner encouraged me. 细节升级： He slowed down briefly (短暂放慢速度), turned his head slightly (微微转过头), and smiled warmly (温暖地笑了笑), his voice steady and reassuring (声音平稳而令人安心): “Don’t give up now.” 你的练习： 原句： I thanked the elderly runner.细节升级： I gripped his hand firmly (紧紧握住他的手), my eyes filled with sincerity (眼里满是真诚) as I said (说道): “Thank you—your words gave me the courage to finish.” (你的话给了我完成比赛的勇气) 训练三：综合情景创作 （请运用以上所有技巧，为以下情景创作一个包含微动作描写的句子） 情景：比赛结束一周后，“我” 在公园跑步时再次偶遇老年跑者，主动上前交流，分享自己的感悟。要求：必须包含一个互动动作细节和一个面部表情细节，来表现 “我” 的成长与敬佩。 你的创作：（参考：I waved at him excitedly, jogging over to meet him with a bright smile on my face. I shook his hand firmly, saying, “I’ve been keeping your words in mind—slow and steady really works!” He patted my shoulder gently, his eyes crinkling with joy.） 【微动作训练】参考答案 训练一：动作 - 情绪绑定 我随意地回头瞥了一眼，嘴角勾起一丝浅笑，逐渐超越了老年跑者。I glanced over my shoulder casually, my lips curling into a faint smile as I pulled ahead of the elderly runner. 我踉跄着停下，双手撑着膝盖，大口喘气，疲惫感将我淹没。I staggered to a stop, hands on my knees, gasping for breath as fatigue overwhelmed me. 我挺直脊背，用力摆动双臂，奋力向前冲，老年跑者鼓励的笑容在脑海中回荡。I straightened my back, swung my arms vigorously, and pressed forward as the elderly runner’s encouraging smile echoed in my mind. 训练二：细节放大镜 原句: I ran past the elderly runner.细节升级: I quickened my pace slightly, my eyes fixed ahead without sparing him a second glance, convinced he couldn’t keep up. 原句: The elderly runner encouraged me.细节升级: He slowed down briefly, turned his head slightly, and smiled warmly, his voice steady and reassuring: “Don’t give up now.” 你的练习:原句: I thanked the elderly runner.细节升级: I gripped his hand firmly, my eyes filled with sincerity as I said: “Thank you—your words gave me the courage to finish.” 训练三：综合情景创作 你的创作 (参考示例):I waved at him excitedly, jogging over to meet him with a bright smile on my face. I shook his hand firmly, saying, “I’ve been keeping your words in mind—slow and steady really works!” He patted my shoulder gently, his eyes crinkling with joy. 五、综合训练与范文引导 训练：补全段落 Paragraph 1 Thinking of being beaten by an elderly man, I moved on. As I said, I was young and proud, and this little setback didn't matter much to me. So, I was determined to finish it. The elderly man had run ahead of me, but I could still see him in the distance. I tried to catch up with him, but no matter how hard I tried, I wasn't getting any closer. I would not give in. Soon, I was running at a good pace with my second wind, but the elderly man still stayed just out of my reach. 想到会被一位老人追上，我便继续前行。正如我所说，我当时年轻且自信，这次小小的挫折对我而言并不重要。因此，我决心完成比赛。那位老人已经跑在了我前面，但我仍能在远处看到他。我试图追赶他，但无论我多么努力，都无法靠近。我不会放弃。很快，我凭借第二波体力以良好的速度奔跑，但那位老人依然保持在我无法触及的范围内。 Paragraph 2 He crossed the finish line ahead of me and I was soon to follow. I never had such mixed emotions. I was proud of finishing the marathon, but I was angry with myself for being beaten by the elderly man. It was only later on that I realized how much I admired him. I'll never forget the senior citizen runner who put the proud 28-year-old in his place. Some day I hope to be like him, running marathons in my 70's and passing all those first-timers as they struggle to finish. I'll make sure to give them encouragement. 他率先冲过终点线，我紧随其后。这种复杂心情我从未有过。虽然为完成马拉松而自豪，但因被这位老人超越而自责。直到后来我才意识到自己对他有多么敬佩。那位让28岁骄傲青年认清自我的老年跑者，我将永远铭记。有朝一日，我也希望能像他一样，在七十多岁时跑完马拉松，超越那些奋力冲线的初跑者。我会确保给予他们鼓励。 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 湖北省2025—2026学年上学期八校期中联考 读后续写二次开发学案学生版 【真题再现】 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was my first long race — a marathon. The wind and the rain chilled (使很冷) me to the bone, but the sun was still not out to warm up the air. The starting gun would go off any second. I was ready. I was 28 and in the best shape of my life. At least, I thought I was. I ran all the time and had already run several races. But none of them was 26.2 miles. The farthest I had run before was only 15 miles. Still, I was young and overconfident and I knew I could do it. The gun went off and the race started. I was excited and the weather became the furthest thing from my mind. I just concentrated on holding my own position among the other runners. I had no real finishing goal in mind, but when I settled into my pace, I soon worked out that I could easily break 4 hours. Within a few miles, I ran past an elderly runner. He must have been over 70 years old and I was surprised he was even in the race. I was even more surprised that he was still ahead of me. He kept to the side of the road, his old legs moving one in front of the other, slowly but stably. I passed him without giving him a second glance or a word of encouragement. I kept moving and had come 15 miles. I was at a pace to beat 4 hours. Then something strange happened. I started to get tired. My goal of 4 hours soon got pushed back to 4:10. Then 4:20. Finally, at about the 20-mile mark, I couldn't run any more. I had to walk. I moved to the side of the road and with difficulty I walked along. I needed a second wind, but it wasn't coming. The rain was back. There was nothing I could do about it but concentrate on putting one foot in front of the other. Then the elderly man passed me. He looked the same as he had earlier, running at the same speed. As he passed, he looked at me and smiled, "Only a few more miles to go. Don't give up now!" 注意： （1）续写词数应为150左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Thinking of being beaten by an elderly man, I moved on. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________。 Paragraph 2: He crossed the finish line ahead of me and I was soon to follow. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________。 【原文翻译】 这是我的第一场长跑 —— 一场马拉松。寒风冷雨刺骨，太阳却迟迟不肯露面，无法回暖空气。发令枪随时都可能响起。我已整装待发。那年我 28 岁，正值体能巅峰。至少，我是这么认为的。我平时经常跑步，也参加过好几次比赛，但没有一次是 26.2 英里的马拉松。我之前跑过的最远距离只有 15 英里。尽管如此，年轻气盛的我满心自负，坚信自己能完成挑战。 发令枪响，比赛开始了。我兴奋不已，恶劣的天气早已抛到九霄云外。我只专注于在其他跑者中稳住自己的位置。我原本没有明确的完赛目标，但当我找到稳定的节奏后，很快就盘算着自己轻松能突破 4 小时大关。 跑了几英里后，我超过了一位老年跑者。他看起来至少 70 岁了，我很惊讶他竟然也来参加比赛，更让我意外的是他居然还跑在我前面。他一直靠路边跑，苍老的双腿交替向前挪动，速度缓慢却沉稳有力。我从他身边跑过，没多看他一眼，也没说一句鼓励的话。 我继续前进，跑完了 15 英里。当时的配速还能冲击 4 小时完赛。可就在这时，奇怪的事情发生了 —— 我开始感到疲惫。4 小时完赛的目标很快被推迟到 4 小时 10 分，接着又变成 4 小时 20 分。最终，跑到大约 20 英里处时，我再也跑不动了，只能步行。 我挪到路边，艰难地往前走。我急需恢复体力，却怎么也提不起劲。雨又开始下了起来，我别无他法，只能集中精力，一步一步往前挪。 就在这时，那位老年跑者从我身边经过。他看起来和之前没什么两样，依旧保持着原来的速度。经过我身边时，他看了看我，微笑着说：“只剩几英里了，现在别放弃啊！” 【写作训练步骤】 一、通读全文，深度解读 1. 读情节 开端 发展 转折 续写第一段 续写第二段 2. 读人物 “我” George 女婿 岳父 3. 读时态 全文以________________为主。 4. 读冲突 外在冲突 内在冲突 读情绪发展 兴奋自负→专注投入→体力下滑（焦虑）→疲惫挫败→（被激励）__________→____________→（续写结局）____________→______________ 读主题 _____________________________________________________________________ 二、【十句五定法】—— 搭建你的写作框架 请根据两个段落的开头语，构思并完成以下句子，以搭建清晰的段落结构。 段落 句子功能 你的句子构思 第一段 1. 接续 Hint1 描述 “我” 被老年跑者反超后的_________________________________。 2. 动作 / 心理推进 “我” 任凭雨水打在脸上，肌肉酸痛难忍，却不断回想老人的____________________________，将其作为前进的动力。 3. 有效过渡 途中 “我” 多次想停下步行，但一想到___________________________，便咬牙坚持，逐步缩小与老人的距离。 4. 有效衔接 风雨渐小，“我” 的节奏愈发稳定，_______________________________，只专注于 “不放弃” 本身。 5. 段落收束 当看到前方的终点线轮廓时，“我” 心中___________________________。 第二段 6. 接续 Hint2 具体描写老人冲线时的场景（从容微笑、观众欢呼），“我” 紧随其后___________________________________________。 7. 情节发展 老人在终点线旁等候 “我”，递来一瓶温水，笑着分享____________________________________________________。 8. 主题升华 “我” 终于明白，马拉松不是与他人的竞速，而是____________________________________________________________。 9. 结局呈现 “我” 向老人真诚道谢，为自己初期的轻视感到羞愧，同时_______________________________________。 10. 富有余韵的结尾 用一句感悟式句子收尾，回扣主题（如：______________________________________________________________________）。 三、【微写作训练】—— 打磨你的语言（中英文对称版） 1. 人物心理描写（Psychological Description） 情绪类型（Emotion Type） 英文词块（English Chunk） 中文释义（Chinese Meaning） 适配情节（Applicable Plot） 自负浮躁（Arrogance & Impetuosity） 我满心自负，坚信自己的年轻与体能能轻松撑过全程。 比赛前及初期领先时 我轻视那位老年跑者，认为他缓慢的步伐根本不是我的对手。 初次超过老人时 羞愧不甘（Shame & Unwillingness） 一想到被年过七旬的老人超越，羞愧感席卷全身。 被老人反超后 我不愿认输，自尊心驱使着我继续前进。 重新起跑时 释然成长（Relief & Growth） 冲过终点线时，一股释然与自豪感涌上心头。 完成比赛时 我明白，真正的胜利在于坚持，而非超越他人。 领悟主题时 2. 情感描写（Emotional Description） 情感类型（Emotion Type） 英文词块（English Chunk） 中文释义（Chinese Meaning） 适配情节（Applicable Plot） 兴奋投入（Excitement & Engagement） 发令枪响，兴奋感席卷全身。 比赛开始时 我专注于保持节奏，忘却了冰冷的雨水。 比赛初期领先时 疲惫挫败（Exhaustion & Frustration） 疲惫感将我淹没，我连再走一步都艰难。 20 英里处体力透支时 4 小时的目标越来越远，挫败感油然而生。 体力下滑、目标延后时 敬佩感激（Admiration & Gratitude） 我对老年跑者的耐力与友善深感敬佩。 被老人鼓励后 感激之情涌上心头，是他的鼓励让我坚持到底。 赛后与老人交流时 3. 动作描写（Action Description） 动作场景（Action Scene） 英文词块（English Chunk） 中文释义（Chinese Meaning） 适配情节（Applicable Plot） 跑步动作（Running Actions） 我找到稳定的节奏，手臂在身侧有节奏地摆动。 比赛初期保持节奏时 我咬紧牙关，克服肌肉酸痛重新起跑。 被老人激励后 我的双腿因疲惫颤抖，却仍迫使它们加快速度。 追赶老人时 体力不支（Physical Exhaustion） 我踉跄着走到路边，一边步行一边大口喘气。 20 英里处无法跑步时 我擦去额头的雨水与汗水，双腿沉重如铅。 体力透支严重时 冲线与互动（Finishing & Interaction） 老年跑者带着平静的微笑冲过终点线，微微举起双臂。 老人率先冲线时 我踉跄着冲过终点线，瘫坐在椅子上，志愿者递来水。 “我” 完成比赛时 我紧紧握住老年跑者的手，真诚感谢他的鼓励。 赛后致谢时 4. 环境象征描写（Symbolic Environmental Description） 象征意象（Symbolic Image） 英文表达（English Expression） 中文释义（Chinese Meaning） 象征意义（Symbolic Meaning） 风雨（Wind and Rain） 冰冷的风雨不仅是恶劣天气，更象征着人生赛道上的艰辛与挑战。 成长路上的困难阻碍 老年跑者的步伐（The Elderly Runner’s Steps） 他缓慢却稳定的步伐，象征着坚持与恒心 —— 证明耐心胜过速度。 坚持的力量与沉稳的价值 马拉松赛道（Marathon Track） 26.2 英里的赛道不仅是比赛路线，更是一场自我发现与成长的旅程。 人生成长的历程 终点线（Finish Line） 终点线不仅是比赛的结束，更是突破极限、实现自我超越的象征。 成长与突破的里程碑 5. 子训练：为故事注入灵魂（Sub-Training: Inject Soul into the Story） 训练一：环境描写・烘托心情（Environmental Description・Highlight Mood） 心情（Mood） 可选词汇（Optional Vocabulary） 英文造句（English Sentence-Making） 中文造句（Chinese Sentence-Making） 自负、坚定（Arrogance & Determination） 凛冽的风（piercing wind）；密集的雨（dense rain）；整齐的脚步声（neat footsteps） 凛冽的风和密集的雨无法浇灭我的自信 —— 路上回荡着我整齐的脚步声，坚信自己能领先完赛。 疲惫、挫败（Exhaustion & Frustration） 冰冷的雨水（cold rain）；沉重的步伐（heavy steps）；灰暗的天空（gloomy sky） 冰冷的雨水倾泻而下，与汗水交织，我拖着沉重的步伐前行；灰暗的天空仿佛映照出我挫败的心情。 坚定、释然（Determination & Relief） 渐弱的风雨（fading wind and rain）；温暖的阳光（warm sunlight）；清晰的终点线（clear finish line） 渐弱的风雨过后，温暖的阳光洒落，前方清晰的终点线让我充满决心 —— 我知道自己能做到。 训练二：人物刻画・于细微处见真情（Character Portrayal・Truth in Details） 抽象描述（Abstract Description） 英文具体表达（Specific English Expression） 中文具体表达（Specific Chinese Expression） 我很自负（I was arrogant） 我用眼角余光瞥了一眼老年跑者，嘴角带着一丝轻蔑的微笑，轻松地从他身边超过。 老人很沉稳（The elderly runner was calm） 他双眼直视前方，手臂轻轻摆动，步伐从未迟疑 —— 即便在冰冷的雨水中。 我很感激（I was grateful） 我眼里含着泪水看着老年跑者，声音微微颤抖地说：“谢谢 —— 你的话给了我坚持下去的力量。” 仿写示例（Example of Imitation） 英文仿写（English Imitation）：She held the trophy tightly, her hands shaking with excitement, a bright smile spreading across her face as she thanked her teammates. 中文仿写（Chinese Imitation）：她紧紧握着奖杯，双手因兴奋而颤抖，脸上绽放出灿烂的笑容，向队友们致谢。 训练三：情感表达・找到 “高级替身”（Emotional Expression・Find "Advanced Replacements"） 基础词汇（Basic Vocabulary） 高级替换词（Advanced Replacements） 英文例句升级（English Sentence Upgrade） 中文例句升级（Chinese Sentence Upgrade） tired（累的） physically drained（身体透支的）；exhausted to the bone（筋疲力尽的） Original: I was tired after running 20 miles. Upgraded: 原句：跑了 20 英里后我很累。升级句：跑了 20 英里后，我身体透支、筋疲力尽，双腿再也迈不动一步。 happy（开心的） thrilled with joy（欣喜若狂的）；bursting with pride（满心自豪的） Original: I was happy when I finished the marathon. Upgraded: 原句：完成马拉松时我很开心。升级句：冲过终点线时，我欣喜若狂、满心自豪，知道自己突破了极限。 surprised（惊讶的） astonished（深感惊讶的）；amazed（惊叹的） Original: I was surprised that the elderly runner finished ahead of me. Upgraded: 原句：老年跑者比我先完赛，我很惊讶。升级句：年过七旬的老年跑者比我先完赛，我深感惊讶与惊叹 —— 他的耐力远超我的预期。 训练四：动作细节・让情感可视化（Action Details・Visualize Emotions） 情境（Situation） 直白版（Plain Version） 细节版英文（Detailed English Version） 细节版中文（Detailed Chinese Version） 被激励后重新起跑 I ran again after being encouraged. 我紧紧攥紧拳头，咬紧牙关，用尽全身力气蹬地起跑，双腿灼热难耐但意念坚定 —— 决心不被老年跑者击败。 冲过终点线的瞬间 I crossed the finish line. 我踉跄着向前扑去，双臂伸向终点线，冲过线时呼吸急促、气喘吁吁，释然的泪水与雨水交织在脸上。 训练五：象征与隐喻・让主题更深刻（Symbolism & Metaphor・Deepen the Theme） 抽象概念（Abstract Concept） 英文象征表达（English Symbolic Expression） 中文象征表达（Chinese Symbolic Expression） 自负的代价（The Cost of Arrogance） 我最初的自负，就像马拉松中的抢跑 —— 让我低估了挑战，也忽视了他人的力量。 坚持的力量（The Power of Perseverance） 老年跑者稳定的步伐，就像一个节拍器，敲出坚持的节奏 —— 证明稳扎稳打方能赢得比赛。 自我超越（Self-Transcendence） 完成马拉松，不在于击败他人，而在于超越那个疲惫、挫败的自己。 四、【微动作训练】—— 让情感在行动中展现 训练一：动作 - 情绪绑定 （请根据中文提示，补全英文句子，完成 “动作 - 情绪” 的精准绑定） 1. 场景：自负领先 英文：I ____________________ my shoulder casually (随意地回头瞥了一眼), my lips ____________________________ (嘴角勾起一丝浅笑) as I __________________ the elderly runner (逐渐超越老年跑者). 中文：我随意地回头瞥了一眼，嘴角勾起一丝浅笑，逐渐超越了老年跑者。 2. 场景：疲惫挫败 英文：I ____________________ (踉跄着停下), ____________________(双手撑着膝盖), __________________ (大口喘气) as fatigue overwhelmed me (疲惫感将我淹没). 中文：我踉跄着停下，双手撑着膝盖，大口喘气，疲惫感将我淹没。 3. 场景：坚定追赶英文：I ___________________ (挺直脊背), ______________________________ (用力摆动双臂), and ___________________ (奋力向前冲) as the elderly runner’s encouraging smile echoed in my mind (老年跑者鼓励的笑容在脑海中回荡).中文：我挺直脊背，用力摆动双臂，奋力向前冲，老年跑者鼓励的笑容在脑海中回荡。 训练二：细节放大镜 （请将简单的动作，通过添加 1-2 个细节进行升级，使其更具表现力） 1. 原句： I ran past the elderly runner. 细节升级： I _____________ my pace slightly (稍微加快步伐), my eyes ____________ (目光直视前方) without __________ him a second glance (没再看他一眼), ___________ he couldn’t keep up (坚信他跟不上). 2. 原句： The elderly runner encouraged me. 细节升级： He _____________ briefly (短暂放慢速度), turned his head ___________ (微微转过头), and __________ warmly (温暖地笑了笑), his voice __________________ (声音平稳而令人安心): “Don’t give up now.” 你的练习： 原句： I thanked the elderly runner.细节升级： I gripped his hand firmly (紧紧握住他的手), my eyes filled with sincerity (眼里满是真诚) as I said (说道): “Thank you—your words gave me the courage to finish.” (你的话给了我完成比赛的勇气) 训练三：综合情景创作 （请运用以上所有技巧，为以下情景创作一个包含微动作描写的句子） 情景：比赛结束一周后，“我” 在公园跑步时再次偶遇老年跑者，主动上前交流，分享自己的感悟。要求：必须包含一个互动动作细节和一个面部表情细节，来表现 “我” 的成长与敬佩。 你的创作：（参考：I waved at him excitedly, jogging over to meet him with a bright smile on my face. I shook his hand firmly, saying, “I’ve been keeping your words in mind—slow and steady really works!” He patted my shoulder gently, his eyes crinkling with joy.） 【微动作训练】参考答案 训练一：动作 - 情绪绑定 我随意地回头瞥了一眼，嘴角勾起一丝浅笑，逐渐超越了老年跑者。I glanced over my shoulder casually, my lips curling into a faint smile as I pulled ahead of the elderly runner. 我踉跄着停下，双手撑着膝盖，大口喘气，疲惫感将我淹没。I staggered to a stop, hands on my knees, gasping for breath as fatigue overwhelmed me. 我挺直脊背，用力摆动双臂，奋力向前冲，老年跑者鼓励的笑容在脑海中回荡。I straightened my back, swung my arms vigorously, and pressed forward as the elderly runner’s encouraging smile echoed in my mind. 训练二：细节放大镜 原句: I ran past the elderly runner.细节升级: I quickened my pace slightly, my eyes fixed ahead without sparing him a second glance, convinced he couldn’t keep up. 原句: The elderly runner encouraged me.细节升级: He slowed down briefly, turned his head slightly, and smiled warmly, his voice steady and reassuring: “Don’t give up now.” 你的练习:原句: I thanked the elderly runner.细节升级: I gripped his hand firmly, my eyes filled with sincerity as I said: “Thank you—your words gave me the courage to finish.” 训练三：综合情景创作 你的创作 (参考示例):I waved at him excitedly, jogging over to meet him with a bright smile on my face. I shook his hand firmly, saying, “I’ve been keeping your words in mind—slow and steady really works!” He patted my shoulder gently, his eyes crinkling with joy. 五、综合训练与范文引导 训练：补全段落 Paragraph 1 Thinking of being beaten by an elderly man, I moved on. As I said, I was ______________, and this little setback didn't ____________ to me. So, I was determined to finish it. The elderly man had run _______________ me, but I could still see him _______________. I tried to ______________ him, but no matter how hard I tried, I wasn't getting any closer. I would not__________. Soon, I was running _________________ my second wind, but the elderly man still stayed just ______________. 想到会被一位老人追上，我便继续前行。正如我所说，我当时年轻且自信，这次小小的挫折对我而言并不重要。因此，我决心完成比赛。那位老人已经跑在了我前面，但我仍能在远处看到他。我试图追赶他，但无论我多么努力，都无法靠近。我不会放弃。很快，我凭借第二波体力以良好的速度奔跑，但那位老人依然保持在我无法触及的范围内。 Paragraph 2 He crossed the finish line ahead of me and I was soon to follow. I never had such ____________. I _______________ finishing the marathon, but I was angry with myself for ______________ the elderly man. ________ only later on _____ I realized how much I admired him. I'll never forget the senior citizen runner _______________________________. Some day I hope to be like him, running marathons in my 70's and passing all those first-timers ___ they struggle to finish. I'll make sure ________________. 他率先冲过终点线，我紧随其后。这种复杂心情我从未有过。虽然为完成马拉松而自豪，但因被这位老人超越而自责。直到后来我才意识到自己对他有多么敬佩。那位让28岁骄傲青年认清自我的老年跑者，我将永远铭记。有朝一日，我也希望能像他一样，在七十多岁时跑完马拉松，超越那些奋力冲线的初跑者。我会确保给予他们鼓励。 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $