2026届高考英语读后续写专题复习圣诞急诊室的意外温暖续写导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was an unusually quiet day in the emergency room on December 25. It was quiet except for the nurses standing around the nurses’ station complaining about having to work on Christmas Day. I was a triage nurse (分诊护士) that day and had just been to the waiting room to clean up. Just then, five people walked up to my triage desk — a pale woman with four small children. “Are you all sick?” I asked “Yes,” she said weakly and lowered her head. But when they described their symptoms (症状), things got unclear. Two kids said they had headaches, but there were no usual signs — like holding their heads or keeping them still. Two other children had earaches, but only one could tell me which ear hurt. The mother said she had a cough, but it seemed like she was pretending. I knew something was wrong, but I didn’t say anything. I explained to the mother that the doctor might not see her for a while. She replied, “Take your time; it’s warm here.” She turned, smiled, and led her children into the waiting room. I checked their chart after registering the family. No address — they were homeless. The waiting room was indeed warm. I looked over at the family huddled (蜷缩) by the corner. The youngest child was pointing at the TV and saying something to her mother. I went back to the nurses’ station and mentioned the homeless family in the waiting room. The nurses, who’ d been complaining about working on Christmas, suddenly felt compassion (同情) for the family — they just wanted a warm place on Christmas. Then our team went into action, just like we do during a medical emergency. But this was a Christmas emergency — a special Christmas party was to be held. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。 We were all offered a free meal in the hospital cafeteria on Christmas Day. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ When the party ended, the family walked to the door to leave. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一．文本分析​ 1．角色​ _____________________________ 2．视角：第________人称​ 3．时空线：12 月 25 日急诊室 ---______________ ---______________（提示：补充关键地点，如分诊台、候诊区、医院自助餐厅等）​ 4. 请在文章中将可能的线索都找出来​ Why were the nurses complaining at first?：______________________________________________​ What made the narrator feel "something was wrong" with the family's symptoms?：____________________________________________​ Why did the mother say "it’s warm here" when told the doctor might be late?：_______________________________________​ How did the narrator know the family was homeless?：___________________________________​ What changed the nurses' attitude towards working on Christmas?：_______________________​ What did the nurses decide to do for the family?：__________________________________________________​ What was the youngest child doing in the waiting room?：___________________​ What was the "Christmas emergency" mentioned in the last paragraph?_______________________________________​ 5．情节线​ 圣诞夜急诊室很安静，护士们抱怨加班→无家可归的母子五人前来 “看病”，症状可疑→___________________________________ →____________________________________ →护士们得知真相后决定为他们举办圣诞派对→（续写）我们在医院自助餐厅得到了免费餐食→（续写）派对结束后，一家人准备离开​ 6．情感线​ 护士们：抱怨加班→___________→____________→（续写）__________________​ 母亲：隐忍无助→（得到帮助时）____________→（离开时）______________​ 孩子们：好奇懵懂→（参与派对时）→（离开时）​ “我”（分诊护士）：细心观察→_____________→______________→（续写）________________ 7. 综合以上信息，请用 3-4 句话概括文章大意。（中英各一个）​ 中文：________________________________________________________________________​ 英文：________________________________________________________________________​​ 8. 句式： 定语从句； 转折连词； 并列句； 非谓语动词； 宾语从句； 省略句​​ 9. 本文属于人与他人：_______________________________________ 二、情节构造​ 第一段提示句：We were all offered a free meal in the hospital cafeteria on Christmas Day.​ 衔接句 1——— 对 “free meal” 提问 “护士们如何利用免费餐食为派对做准备？”：How did the nurses use the free meal to prepare for the party?​ 过渡句推演：衔接 1→？←衔接 2​ 衔接句 2——— 对 “the family’s reaction” 提问 “一家人看到派对准备时的反应是什么？”：What was the family’s reaction when they saw the party preparations?​ 第二段提示句：When the party ended, the family walked to the door to leave.​ 衔接句 3——— 对 “leave” 提问 “一家人离开前说了什么或做了什么？”：What did the family say or do before leaving?​ 过渡句推演：衔接 3→？←主题​ 主题：_________________________________（提示：围绕 “善意不分贫富，温暖可抵严寒”“平凡日子里的善意最珍贵” 等核心）​ 三．段落构思​ 第一段：We were all offered a free meal in the hospital cafeteria on Christmas Day.→①__________________→②__________________→③__________________；​ 英文： ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________​ 第二段：When the party ended, the family walked to the door to leave.→④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥__________________。​ 英文： _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一．文本分析​ 1．角色​ “我”（分诊护士）：细心敏锐、富有同情心，善于观察细节，主动为无家可归的家庭传递善意；​ 无家可归的母亲：隐忍坚强、自尊心强，为了给孩子找温暖的地方而谎称生病，内心充满对孩子的关爱；​ 四个孩子：天真懵懂、单纯可爱，对周围事物充满好奇，不懂母亲的难处，只是本能地寻求温暖；​ 其他护士：起初抱怨加班，得知真相后展现出善良与共情，主动为家庭筹备圣诞派对，传递温暖。​ 2．视角：第一人称​ 3．时空线：12 月 25 日急诊室 ---分诊台 ---候诊区 ---医院自助餐厅​ 4. 请在文章中将可能的线索都找出来​ Why were the nurses complaining at first?：They had to work on Christmas Day and wanted to spend the holiday with their families.​ What made the narrator feel "something was wrong" with the family's symptoms?：The symptoms were unclear — the kids with headaches had no usual signs, only one child could specify which ear hurt, and the mother seemed to be pretending to cough.​ Why did the mother say "it’s warm here" when told the doctor might be late?：The family was homeless and just wanted a warm place to stay on Christmas, so she didn’t mind waiting.​ How did the narrator know the family was homeless?：After registering the family, the narrator checked their chart and found there was no address.​ What changed the nurses' attitude towards working on Christmas?：Learning that the family was homeless and only wanted a warm place on Christmas made the nurses feel compassion.​ What did the nurses decide to do for the family?：They decided to hold a special Christmas party for the family.​ What was the youngest child doing in the waiting room?：She was pointing at the TV and saying something to her mother.​ What was the "Christmas emergency" mentioned in the last paragraph?：It was not a medical emergency, but an emergency to help the homeless family — holding a Christmas party to bring them warmth.​ 5．情节线​ 圣诞夜急诊室很安静，护士们抱怨加班→无家可归的母子五人前来 “看病”，症状可疑→“我” 发现他们无家可归，只是想找个温暖的地方→“我” 告知其他护士真相，护士们心生同情→护士们得知真相后决定为他们举办圣诞派对→（续写）我们在医院自助餐厅得到了免费餐食→（续写）派对结束后，一家人准备离开​ 6．情感线​ 护士们：抱怨加班→心生同情→主动付出→收获温暖与满足（续写）​ 母亲：隐忍无助→惊喜与感动（得到帮助时）→感激不已（离开时）​ 孩子们：好奇懵懂→兴奋与快乐（参与派对时）→依依不舍（离开时）​ “我”（分诊护士）：细心观察→心生怜悯→主动传递善意→为善意的传递而欣慰（续写）​ 7. 综合以上信息，请用 3-4 句话概括文章大意。（中英各一个）​ 中文：12 月 25 日圣诞夜，急诊室异常安静，护士们抱怨着加班。一对无家可归的母子五人谎称生病前来求助，只为找个温暖的地方。“我” 发现他们的处境后告知其他护士，原本抱怨的护士们心生同情，决定为这家人举办一场特别的圣诞派对。​ 英文：On Christmas Day (December 25), the emergency room was unusually quiet, with nurses complaining about working overtime. A homeless woman with four children came to the hospital, pretending to be sick just to find a warm place to stay. After the narrator (a triage nurse) discovered their situation and told the other nurses, the nurses who had been complaining felt compassion and decided to hold a special Christmas party for the family.​ 8. 句式：定语从句；转折连词；并列句；非谓语动词；宾语从句；省略句​ 定语从句：The nurses, who’d been complaining about working on Christmas, suddenly felt compassion for the family.​ 转折连词：It was quiet except for the nurses standing around the nurses’ station complaining about having to work on Christmas Day.​ 并列句：She turned, smiled, and led her children into the waiting room.​ 非谓语动词：I was a triage nurse that day and had just been to the waiting room to clean up.​ 宾语从句：I knew something was wrong, but I didn’t say anything.​ 省略句：“Yes,” she said weakly and lowered her head. (省略主语 she)​ 9. 本文属于人与他人：善意互助与温暖传递（陌生人之间的共情与善意，用行动温暖困境中的人）​ 二、情节构造​ 第一段提示句：We were all offered a free meal in the hospital cafeteria on Christmas Day.​ 衔接句 1——— 对 “free meal” 提问 “护士们如何利用免费餐食为派对做准备？”：How did the nurses use the free meal to prepare for the party?​ 过渡句推演：衔接 1→What did the nurses add to the party besides the free meal to make it more festive? ←衔接 2​ 衔接句 2——— 对 “the family’s reaction” 提问 “一家人看到派对准备时的反应是什么？”：What was the family’s reaction when they saw the party preparations?​ 第二段提示句：When the party ended, the family walked to the door to leave.​ 衔接句 3——— 对 “leave” 提问 “一家人离开前说了什么或做了什么？”：What did the family say or do before leaving?​ 过渡句推演：衔接 3→How did the nurses respond to the family’s gratitude? ←主题​ 主题：善意不分身份与场合，即使是陌生人之间的小小善举，也能在寒冷的冬日传递温暖，让节日充满意义；共情与付出，是人与人之间最珍贵的联结。​ 三．段落构思​ 第一段：We were all offered a free meal in the hospital cafeteria on Christmas Day.→①We quickly fetched the meals — turkey, mashed potatoes, and apple pie — and decorated a table in the waiting room with colorful streamers and a small Christmas tree. →②When we invited the family over, the mother’s eyes filled with tears, and the children clapped their hands in excitement. →③They sat around the table, eating slowly and chatting with us, as if they had found a temporary home.；​ 英文：We were all offered a free meal in the hospital cafeteria on Christmas Day. We hurried to get the food — roast turkey, creamy mashed potatoes, and sweet apple pie — and decorated a corner table in the waiting room with bright streamers and a tiny Christmas tree. When we called the family over, the mother’s eyes glistened with tears, and the kids’ faces lit up with excitement, clapping their little hands. They sat down gently, eating quietly while chatting with us about the TV programs the youngest child had watched earlier, looking as if they had found a warm temporary home on this cold Christmas.​ 第二段：When the party ended, the family walked to the door to leave.→④The mother turned around, bowed deeply, and thanked us repeatedly, saying the party was the best Christmas gift she and her children had ever received. →⑤The oldest child handed us a crumpled drawing of five stick figures and a Christmas tree, which they had drawn during the party. →⑥Watching them walk away with smiles on their faces, we nurses felt a deep sense of satisfaction — this Christmas, we didn’t just work overtime, but gave the most precious gift of warmth.。​ 英文：When the party ended, the family walked to the door to leave. The mother turned back, bowed deeply to us, and said with a trembling voice, “Thank you so much. This is the warmest Christmas we’ve ever had.” The oldest child held out a crumpled piece of paper — a drawing of five stick figures (their family) and a small Christmas tree, drawn with crayons they’d found. We waved goodbye to them, and as we watched their figures disappear into the night, none of us regretted working on Christmas. We realized that kindness is the most beautiful holiday decoration, and giving warmth to those in need made this day truly meaningful.​ 第1页/共1页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $