2026届高考英语读后续写专题复习虾钱换来的戒指一份承载感恩的心意续写导学案

该高中英语高考复习学案系统覆盖读后续写专题，将文本分析（角色、线索、情节线）、情节构建（衔接与过渡）、语言表达等核心考点按“文本解构-逻辑梳理-续写实践”层次架构知识网络，通过问题导向设计（如梳理Hiram母亲养家方式等线索问题），引导学生自主分析文本内在逻辑，构建续写思维框架。 亮点在于自主诊断与分层思维培养，文本分析模块设置线索梳理问题链（如Hiram如何赚“虾钱”等具体问题），帮助学生自主定位关键信息，培养思维品质与学习能力。续写前的情节线、情感线自主梳理任务结合衔接句设计，提升语言能力。教师可通过学生的线索分析成果精准把握学情，实现因材施教，有效提升学生读后续写的自主备考能力。

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 “I wish my mother had a ring like those the ladies wear at the hotel,” said Hiram Green to himself one day. Hiram was the son of a fisherman, but the fisherman had died when Hiram was a little boy. Hiram’s mother took on sewing work to earn money to support herself and her son. He helped her when he could re out of school hours, and during vacation time. He had two uncles who had taught him how to catch shrimps. With the money he earned by selling them he could buy things for his own use or pleasure. He had a “bank” almost full of what he called his “shrimp money.” The sight of the flashing diamonds on the hands of some of the summer visitors at the fishing village in which he lived had added a new article to the list of beautiful things his mother would own someday. He had heard that just one single diamond was sometimes worth five hundred dollars or more. This had discouraged him very much. But one day, he happened to pass a shop in the neighboring town and saw a number of diamond rings displayed in the window. He stopped fascinated, and pressed his face against the glass eagerly to see if any prices were marked upon them. Imagine his surprise when he saw upon the largest one a tag marked $4.75. He looked again to see if he had made a mistake. Perhaps it was $475. But no, he knew enough about figures to see that he was right the first time. He went home as fast as he could, and ran up into his bedroom. Then, he opened his “bank” and counted its contents. “Three dollars and twenty-two cents!” he cried. “I’ll have that ring before another week.” Hiram worked early and late for the next few days. He caught more shrimps than he had ever caught in the same length of time, and sold them readily. 注意: 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 At the end of the week he had the sum he desired. ____________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Years after, Hiram learned what he had bought was in fact only glass, and he decided to tell his mother. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一．文本分析​ 1．角色​ _____________________________ 2．视角：第________人称​ 3．时空线：Hiram 的家乡渔村 ---______________ ---______________ 4. 请在文章中将可能的线索都找出来​ How did Hiram's mother support the family after his father died?： ______________________________________________​ How did Hiram earn his "shrimp money"?： ____________________________________________​ What made Hiram want to buy a ring for his mother?： _______________________________________​ Why was Hiram discouraged at first when he thought about buying a diamond ring?：___________________________________​ How much was the ring in the neighboring town's shop marked?： _______________________​ How much money did Hiram have in his "bank" at first?： __________________________________________________​ What did Hiram do to earn the remaining money for the ring?： ___________________​ What did Hiram think the ring was made of? _______________________________________​ 5．情节线​ Hiram 希望母亲拥有像酒店女士那样的戒指→___________________________________→____________________________________ →________________________________→（续写）一周后 Hiram 凑够了想要的钱→（续写）多年后 Hiram 得知戒指其实是玻璃做的，决定告诉母亲​ 6．情感线​ Hiram：对母亲的疼爱→_______________→_______________→（续写）_____________→（续写）_____________​ Mother：勤劳持家的坚韧→（收到戒指时）→（得知真相后）​ 7. 综合以上信息，请用 3-4 句话概括文章大意。（中英各一个）​ 中文： _________________________________________________________________ ​​ 英文： _________________________________________________________________ ​​ 8. 句式： 宾语从句； 非谓语； 感叹句； 同位语； 完全倒装句； 比喻； 夸张​ 9. 本文属于人与他人：_______________________________________ 二、情节构造​ 第一段提示句：At the end of the week he had the sum he desired.​ 衔接句 1——— 对 “the sum he desired” 提问 “Hiram 拿到钱后做了什么？”：What did Hiram do after getting the money he wanted?​ 过渡句推演：衔接 1→？←衔接 2​ 衔接句 2——— 对 “giving the ring to his mother” 提问 “母亲收到戒指时的反应是什么？”：What was the mother's reaction when she received the ring?​ 第二段提示句：Years after, Hiram learned what he had bought was in fact only glass, and he decided to tell his mother.​ 衔接句 3——— 对 “tell his mother” 提问 “Hiram 是如何向母亲说明真相的？”：How did Hiram explain the truth to his mother?​ 过渡句推演：衔接 3→？←主题​ 主题：_________________________________ 三．段落构思​ 第一段：At the end of the week he had the sum he desired. →①__________________→②__________________→③__________________；​ 英文： ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 第二段：Years after, Hiram learned what he had bought was in fact only glass, and he decided to tell his mother. →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥__________________。​ 英文： _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一．文本分析​ 1．角色​ Hiram：孝顺懂事的小男孩，父亲早逝，体谅母亲的辛劳，靠捕虾卖钱攒 “虾钱”，一心想给母亲买戒指，重情义、有毅力。​ Hiram 的母亲：勤劳坚韧的单亲妈妈，丈夫去世后靠缝纫活养家，关爱儿子，朴实善良，重视亲情胜过物质。​ Hiram 的两位叔叔：热心助人，教会 Hiram 捕虾的技能，是 Hiram 赚钱的引路人。​ 镇上商店店主：售卖戒指的商家，其橱窗里的戒指成为推动情节的关键物品。​ 渔村的夏季游客：佩戴钻石戒指，让 Hiram 萌生给母亲买戒指的想法，是情节的触发者。​ 2．视角：第三人称​ 3．时空线：Hiram 的家乡渔村 ---邻镇的商店 ---Hiram 的家​ 4. 请在文章中将可能的线索都找出来​ How did Hiram's mother support the family after his father died?：She took on sewing work to earn money.​ How did Hiram earn his "shrimp money"?：His uncles taught him to catch shrimps, and he sold them to earn the money.​ What made Hiram want to buy a ring for his mother?：He saw the flashing diamonds on the hands of some summer visitors and wished his mother had such a ring.​ Why was Hiram discouraged at first when he thought about buying a diamond ring?：He heard that a single diamond was sometimes worth five hundred dollars or more, which was too expensive for him.​ How much was the ring in the neighboring town's shop marked?：$4.75.​ How much money did Hiram have in his "bank" at first?：Three dollars and twenty-two cents.​ What did Hiram do to earn the remaining money for the ring?：He worked early and late, caught more shrimps than ever before, and sold them readily.​ What did Hiram think the ring was made of?：He thought it was a diamond ring.​ 5．情节线​ Hiram 希望母亲拥有像酒店女士那样的戒指→得知钻石戒指价格昂贵而灰心→偶然在邻镇商店看到标价 $4.75 的 “钻石戒指”→发现自己的 “虾钱” 不够，便努力捕虾赚钱→（续写）一周后 Hiram 凑够了想要的钱→（续写）多年后 Hiram 得知戒指其实是玻璃做的，决定告诉母亲​ 6．情感线​ Hiram：对母亲的疼爱→渴望给母亲买戒指的期盼→得知戒指价格昂贵的灰心→看到低价戒指的惊喜→努力赚钱的执着→（续写）给母亲送戒指的兴奋→（续写）得知真相的愧疚与坦诚​ Mother：勤劳持家的坚韧→收到戒指时的惊喜与感动→得知真相后的欣慰与温暖​ 7. 综合以上信息，请用 3-4 句话概括文章大意。（中英各一个）​ 中文：Hiram 是一名渔夫的儿子，父亲早逝后，母亲靠缝纫养家。他看到渔村夏季游客佩戴的钻石戒指，便希望母亲也能拥有一枚。得知钻石昂贵后他一度灰心，后在邻镇商店发现一枚标价​4.75的“钻石戒指”，于是努力捕虾赚钱，一周后凑够了钱。 英文：Hiram was the son of a fisherman. After his father passed away when he was young, his mother made a living by sewing. When he saw the diamond rings worn by the summer visitors in the fishing village, he wished that his mother could also have one..Discouraged by the high price of real diamonds,he was delighted to find a 4.75 "diamond ring" in a neighboring town and worked hard catching shrimps to earn the money, which he succeeded in doing after a week.​ 8. 句式： 宾语从句：He wished his mother had a ring like those the ladies wear at the hotel.​ 非谓语：With the money he earned by selling them he could buy things for his own use or pleasure.​ 感叹句：Three dollars and twenty-two cents! / I’ll have that ring before another week!​ 同位语：He had a “bank” almost full of what he called his “shrimp money.”​ 完全倒装句：Imagine his surprise when he saw upon the largest one a tag marked $4.75.​ 比喻：The sight of the flashing diamonds on the hands of some summer visitors (comparing diamonds to bright objects).​ 夸张：He caught more shrimps than he had ever caught in the same length of time (emphasizing his hard work).​ 9. 本文属于人与他人：亲情与感恩（子女对母亲的关爱与回报）​ 二、情节构造​ 第一段提示句：At the end of the week he had the sum he desired.​ 衔接句 1——— 对 “the sum he desired” 提问 “Hiram 拿到钱后做了什么？”：What did Hiram do after getting the money he wanted?​ 过渡句推演：衔接 1→How did Hiram give the ring to his mother? ←衔接 2​ 衔接句 2——— 对 “giving the ring to his mother” 提问 “母亲收到戒指时的反应是什么？”：What was the mother's reaction when she received the ring?​ 第二段提示句：Years after, Hiram learned what he had bought was in fact only glass, and he decided to tell his mother.​ 衔接句 3——— 对 “tell his mother” 提问 “Hiram 是如何向母亲说明真相的？”：How did Hiram explain the truth to his mother?​ 过渡句推演：衔接 3→How did the mother respond to the truth? ←主题​ 主题：亲情的珍贵不在于礼物的价值，而在于背后蕴含的真心与爱意，这份感恩与关爱才是最珍贵的财富。​ 三．段落构思​ 第一段：At the end of the week he had the sum he desired.→①He rushed to the neighboring town and bought the ring without hesitation. →②On his way home, he couldn’t help imagining his mother’s happy face when receiving the gift. →③That night, he gave the ring to his mother, telling her it was a "diamond ring" he bought with his shrimp money.；​ 英文：At the end of the week he had the sum he desired. He hurried to the neighboring town and bought the ring without a second thought, clutching it tightly in his hand. On his way back, his heart raced with excitement, imagining how happy his mother would be. That evening, he presented the ring to her gently, saying, "Mom, this is a diamond ring I bought with my shrimp money. I wish you could have something beautiful like the ladies."​ 第二段：Years after, Hiram learned what he had bought was in fact only glass, and he decided to tell his mother.→④He sat beside his mother, feeling guilty, and told her the truth about the ring. →⑤His mother smiled softly, took out the well-preserved ring, and said she had always known it wasn’t a real diamond but cherished it deeply. →⑥Hiram realized that the love and gratitude behind the gift were far more valuable than any real diamond.。​ 英文：Years after, Hiram learned what he had bought was in fact only glass, and he decided to tell his mother. Sitting beside her, he lowered his head guiltily and said, "Mom, I’m sorry I lied to you. The ring isn’t a real diamond—it’s just glass." To his surprise, his mother smiled and took out the ring, which was still well-preserved. "I’ve always known," she said gently, "but it’s the most precious gift I’ve ever received, for it’s filled with your love." Hiram’s eyes grew wet, understanding that true value lies in the heartfelt affection behind a gift.​ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $