Unit 6 The Admirable 高考写作单元训练六课件 -2026届高三英语北师大版必修第二册

高 考 写作单元训练六UNIT 6　THE ADMIRABLE 1 一 文本叙述 Step 1．要点提示(利用本单元知识补全所给英文句子) 1.1969年，屠呦呦被选中成立了一个小组，以找到治愈疟疾的方法，这种疾病每年夺去数百万人的生命。 In 1969，Tu Youyou __________________________________________ malaria—a disease that killed ___________ people every year． was chosen to establish a team to find a cure for millions of 一 文本叙述 Step 1．要点提示(利用本单元知识补全所给英文句子) 2.他们测试了24万多种化学物质但都没有成功之后，屠呦呦研究了古代中医的医学文献，拜访了中医界的专家。 After they tested more than 240，000 chemicals________________，Tu Youyou studied _____________________________ and visited_______________________________ with no success ancient Chinese medical literature experts in traditional Chinese medicine 一 文本叙述 Step 1．要点提示(利用本单元知识补全所给英文句子) 3.屠呦呦和她的团队开始运用现代研究方法，对这些中草药逐一进行研究，这不是一项容易的工作。 Tu Youyou and her team began using modern research methods __________________________________，which was not an easy task． 4.他们资源有限，还没有足够的人手。 They had _________________ and they did not have ____________． to study these Chinese herbs one by one limited resources enough staff 一 文本叙述 Step 1．要点提示(利用本单元知识补全所给英文句子) 5.经过数百次失败的实验，他们最终发现了一种很有希望的化学物质。现在它已经成为世界上抗击疟疾最有效的药物。 After hundreds of __________________，they eventually ______________________，which has now become ____________________________ for fighting malaria. 6.由于她杰出的贡献，屠呦呦已经成为中国第一位获得诺贝尔奖的女科学家。 ________________________，Tu Youyou has become the first Chinese female scientist ______________________． failed experiments came across a promising the world's most effective drug chemical Due to her outstanding contribution to win the Nobel Prize 一 文本叙述 Step 2．衔接成文(利用恰当的过渡衔接词语连句成篇) In 1969，Tu Youyou was chosen to establish a team to find a cure for malaria—a disease that killed millions of people every year．After they tested more than 240，000 chemicals with no success，Tu Youyou studied ancient Chinese medical literature and visited experts in traditional Chinese medicine．Then Tu Youyou and her team began using modern research methods to study these Chinese herbs one by one，which was not an easy task．They had limited resources and they did not have enough staff．However，after hundreds of failed experiments，they eventually came across a promising chemical，which has now become the world's most effective drug for fighting malaria．Due to her outstanding contribution，Tu Youyou has become the first Chinese female scientist to win the Nobel Prize． 二 场景中提升写作技能(黑体部分用本单元词汇表达) 续写微情景 Step 1．第一步　单句写作 1.在一个寒风凛冽的日子,一个可怜的男孩试图通过挨家挨户地推销商品来支付学费。在街上徘徊,他最终选择了放弃。(pay one’s way through school;eventually;give up) On a cold windy day,a poor boy tried to_____________________________ 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　.Wandering on the street,he 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　.  pay his way through school by selling goods door to door eventually chose to give up 二 场景中提升写作技能(黑体部分用本单元词汇表达) 应用文写作 Step 1．单句写作 2.他空空的肚子不断提醒他,他已经好几天没吃东西了,所以他别无选择只能向隔壁人家乞讨一顿饭。(remind sb constantly;have no choice but to do) 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 that for days he hadn’t eaten anything,so 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　for a meal at the next house.  His empty stomach reminded him constantly he had no choice but to beg　 二 场景中提升写作技能(黑体部分用本单元词汇表达) 应用文写作 Step 1．单句写作 3.他犹豫地敲了敲一扇门,想着门打开后该说些什么。然而,当一位慷慨的年轻女子打开门时,他失去了紧张的感觉。(hesitantly;what to say;generous) 　　　 　 he knocked at a door and 　　　　　　　　　　　　when it was opened.However,he lost his nerve________________________________________________. Hesitantly thought about what to say when a generous young woman opened the door 二 场景中提升写作技能(黑体部分用本单元词汇表达) 应用文写作 Step 1．单句写作 4.她看着这个瘦骨嶙峋的男孩,认为他无疑需要一些东西来补充能量,于是她给他端来一杯牛奶。当他离开那所房子时,他不仅感到身体更强壮了,而且对整个人类也增强了信心。(there is no doubt that;not only...but also...) She looked at the bony boy and thought____________________________ 　　　　　　 　　　　　　so she brought him a glass of milk.As he left that house,______________________________________________　　　 there was no doubt that he needed something to give him energy it not only made him feel stronger physically,but it also increased his faith in the whole human race 二 场景中提升写作技能(黑体部分用本单元词汇表达) 应用文写作 Step 2．句式升级 1.用现在分词作伴随状语将句3升级 Hesitantly he knocked at a door,　　　　　　 　　　　 when it was opened.However,he lost his nerve when a generous young woman opened the door.  2.用倒装句将句4升级 She looked at the bony boy and thought there was no doubt that he needed something to give him energy so she brought him a glass of milk.As he left that house,__________________________________________________　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　.  thinking about what to say not only did it make him feel stronger physically,but it also increased his faith in the whole human race 二 场景中提升写作技能(黑体部分用本单元词汇表达) 应用文写作 Step 3．连句成篇(将以上句子连成一篇语言流畅、用词准确、逻辑严密的短文) On a cold windy day,a poor boy tried to pay his way through school by selling goods door to door.Wandering on the street,he eventually chose to give up. His empty stomach reminded him constantly that for days he hadn’t eaten anything,so he had no choice but to beg for a meal at the next house.Hesitantly he knocked at a door, thinking about what to say when it was opened.However, he lost his nerve when a generous young woman opened the door.She looked at the bony boy and thought there was no doubt that he needed something to give him energy so she brought him a glass of milk.As he left that house,not only did it make him feel stronger physically,but it also increased his faith in the whole human race. 三 续写能力--片段描述 Step 1．储备词汇(记牢本单元可用于描写的词汇) 情感描写 admire；honour；respect；passionate；depression；What a shame！；inspiring 动作描写 pick out；protest；award；strike；undertake；gain 环境描写 stage；academy；peaceful 三 续写能力--片段描述Step 2．续写练笔(完成下面的续写片段并背诵) 在我们学院的报告厅，一场颁奖典礼在愉快而祥和的气氛中举行。他们感到很荣幸能得到这些奖项。我如此羡慕台上那些优秀的学生以至于我想象着自己是他们中的一员。然后我意识到我在做什么。多么遗憾啊！一时间，我很消沉。然后，我突然想到，我应该努力学习，以获得站在台上的机会！ In the lecture hall of ___________，___________________________________________________________．They ________________ to be given these prizes． ______________________________________ so much that I imagined myself being one of them．Then I realized what I was doing．_____________！For a while I was _____________．Then _______________________________________________ to stand on the stage！ our academy an award ceremony was held in a happy and peaceful atmosphere felt honoured I admired those excellent students on the stage What a shame in depression it struck me that I should study hard to gain an opportunity 非常感谢收看 15 $