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高 考 写作单元训练五UNIT 5 HUMANS AND NATURE
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一 文本叙述
Step 1.要点提示(利用本单元知识补全所给英文句子)
1.大约三年前,鲍勃遭遇了一次可怕的风暴,这使他的身心受到重创。
About three years ago,Bob experienced a terrible storm,which _______________________.
2.一天,他冒险去那些岛屿捕了更多的鱼,然后遭遇了可怕的风暴。
One day,when he ____________ to the islands and got more fish,he met with a horrible storm.
broke his body
and soul
risked going
一 文本叙述
Step 1.要点提示(利用本单元知识补全所给英文句子)
3.他掉进海里,被推着朝漩涡的方向前进。
He fell into the sea and was pushed ___________________ the whirlpool.
4.鲍勃感觉恶心,但位于漩涡的边缘时,他感到更镇静。
Bob felt sick but when he was ______________ the whirlpool,he felt calmer.
in the direction of
on the edge of
一 文本叙述
Step 1.要点提示(利用本单元知识补全所给英文句子)
5.他做了三个重要的观察。
He _____________________________.
6.基于他的观察,他把自己绑在一个木桶上帮助他幸存下来。
Based on what he had observed,he _______________ a barrel, which _____________________.
made three important observations
tied himself to
helped him
to survive
一 文本叙述
Step 2.衔接成文(利用恰当的过渡衔接词语连句成篇)
About three years ago,Bob experienced a terrible storm,which broke his body and soul.One day,when he risked going to the islands and got more fish,he met with a horrible storm.Unfortunately,he fell into the sea and was pushed in the direction of the whirlpool.Bob felt sick but when he was on the edge of the whirlpool,he felt calmer.After a while,he made three important observations.Based on what he had observed,he tied himself to a barrel,which helped him to survive.
二 场景中提升写作技能(黑体部分用本单元词汇表达) 应用文写作
Step 1.第一步 单句写作
1.海洋污染正成为一个非常严重的问题。我们应该立即采取措施来解决它。每个人都应该努力在这场战斗中发挥自己的作用。(take immediate measures;attempt to do)
Sea pollution is becoming so serious______________________________
.Everyone should_____________________ in the battle.
that we should take immediate
measures to solve it
attempt to play his part
二 场景中提升写作技能(黑体部分用本单元词汇表达) 应用文写作
Step 1.单句写作
2.当然,我们很难靠自己的力量保护所有的海洋动物。(have difficulty [in] doing)
Of course, all the marine animals on our own.
3.因此,在一定程度上,我们需要共同努力,首先应该做的是禁止人们向海洋扔垃圾。此外,制造环保船舶也同样重要。(to a certain extent;be equally important)
Therefore, ,we need to make joint efforts and we should first .Besides,
to make environmentally-friendly ships.
we have difficulty (in) protecting
to a certain extent
ban people from throwing rubbish into the sea
it’s equally important
二 场景中提升写作技能(黑体部分用本单元词汇表达) 应用文写作
Step 1.单句写作
4.在保护海洋的过程中,世界各国都应该承担起责任。(in the process of)
,all the countries throughout the world should take the responsibility.
In the process of sea protection
二 场景中提升写作技能(黑体部分用本单元词汇表达) 应用文写作
Step 2.句式升级
1.用倒装句升级句1
2.用what引导的主语从句改写句3
So serious is sea pollution becoming that we should take immediate measures to solve it.Everyone should attempt to play his part in the battle.
Therefore,to a certain extent,we need to make joint efforts and what should be done first is to ban people from throwing rubbish into the sea.Besides,it’s equally important to make environmentally-friendly ships.
二 场景中提升写作技能(黑体部分用本单元词汇表达) 应用文写作
Step 3.连句成篇(将以上句子连成一篇语言流畅、用词准确、逻辑严密的短文)
So serious is sea pollution becoming that we should take immediate measures to solve it.Everyone should attempt to play his part in the battle.Of course,we have difficulty (in) protecting all the marine animals on our own.Therefore,to a certain extent,we need to make joint efforts and what should be done first is to ban people from throwing rubbish into the sea.Besides,it’s equally important to make environmentally-friendly ships.In the process of sea protection,all the countries throughout the world should take the responsibility.
三 续写能力--片段描述
Step 1.储备词汇(记牢本单元可用于描写的词汇)
情感描写 shocked;frightened;curious;anxiously;cheerful
动作描写 turn one's back(on sb./sth.);escape;observe;rescue;trap;breathe;break down
环境描写 flood;eruption;wave;crowded;landscape;shelter
三 续写能力--片段描述
Step 2续写练笔(完成下面的续写片段并背诵)
大雨倾盆,街道被洪水淹没。John 正在公交站点躲雨,这时他看到一辆汽车在深水中抛锚了。一个孩子好奇地打开车窗观察外面拍打车门的波浪。司机和乘客被困在了车里。吓坏了的母亲想抱着孩子从车里逃出来。突然,她滑倒了,John震惊之余,立刻跑去救援。齐胸深的水让他呼吸困难,但他怎么能对这对溺水的母子置之不理呢?
Marty _____________because he hadn't _________________ for the final examination.Every day he______________________________________.His parents ______________________________ the computer,and the whole family was _______________ rather than ________.One day,Marty_________________________.
The doctor advised him to_________________________________.His father took him to a remote village.Marty had to play with other kids on the playground _________________________________________________.All in all,Marty was having____________________.
felt stressed
revised his lessons
was eager to surf the Internet and chat online
sought to drag him away from
full of
tension
laughter
suffered a pain in the neck
remove his addiction to the Internet
was dusty on sunny days and muddy on rainy days
which
a dynamic lifestyle
It was pouring and ____________________.John was ________________________ at the bus stop when he saw a car ___________________________.A child ____________________________________________ beating the door outside.The driver and the passengers _______________________.________________________________________________ with the child in her arms.Suddenly,she slipped.
__________________________________________.The chest-deep water ____________________________,but how could he ______________________________________?
streets were flooded
taking shelter from the
rain
break down in deep water
opened the window curiously to observe the waves
were trapped in the car
The frightened mother
wanted to escape from the car
Shocked,John immediately came to their rescue
made it
hard for him to breathe
turn his back on the drowning mother
and son
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