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高中英语 读后续写练习与讲解
读后续写16:屋檐下的雨,善意的传递
Grandma always said, "Kindness in life is like rain under the roof. If you help keep someone dry from one drop today, it will run down the roof tiles and quietly fall on the shoulder of someone who needs it tomorrow." I used to think her words were too soft—until last month, I finally caught that "drop of rain" myself.
One day last month, I saw an elderly woman struggle with a walker, carrying bags of food. I was driving north, and she was walking south. I'd seen her before, each time feeling guilty(内疚的)—I didn't offer her a lift. But how could I safely stop in the middle of a busy road to help anyone without blocking the late-afternoon traffic? That was my reasoning. It made my guilt disappear temporarily(暂时地).
Today, however, the guilt got back to me. At that moment, Grandma's words suddenly jumped out, "If the rain waits until you're ready to fall, it won't be able to water the thirsty flowers." Then, I made a U-turn. Slowing down, I rolled down the window and called out, "Need a ride?"
I placed her walker and bags into my car. I helped her into the passenger seat. She thanked me and directed me to go farther south. After a few blocks, we passed under a bridge, where several homeless people lived. She called out to them, "You all come by later. It's spaghetti night tonight."
We continued south, chatting all the way. Her name was Ida. She finally pointed to an old apartment building where she lived. Several rowdy(吵闹的) young men in their early twenties had gathered around the entrance. Some were on motorcycles, and one with long bushy hair was staring at me intently and smiling, which appeared threatening.
I was getting uncomfortable, but Ida seemed fine. Ida seemed to notice my unease(不安), and then she told me the young man was called James and that he was a good boy. After I stopped the car, I helped her unload the bags of food. She thanked me again and gave me a bag of oranges. I drove away as fast as I could. I turned on the radio and played some music.
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Suddenly, I found my phone was missing.
I thanked James and regretted my former thought.
· 读后续写:屋檐下的雨,善意的传递
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Paragraph 1:Suddenly, I found my phone was missing.突然,我发现我的手机不见了。
1. 在那一刻,一种不安感和困惑涌上我的心头。
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2. 我立即停车并在车内仔细地搜寻每个可能性的角落,却没有找到。
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3. 我深吸一口气来让自己冷静,然后试图去回想刚才发生的事情。
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4. 我想到了留着蓬松长发的詹姆斯,他看起来很具有威胁性。
I James with long bushy hair,who appeared threatening.
5. 我暗自思忖:“一定是他偷了我的手机。”(强调句)
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6. 当我掉过头,准备返回时,我看见詹姆斯正骑着摩托车朝我驶来。
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7. 他在我旁边停下并将手机递给我,额头上冒着汗水。
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Paragraph 2:I thanked James and regretted my former thought.我感谢詹姆斯,后悔我以前的想法。
8. 我低声地说:“谢谢你把手机还给我。”
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9. 詹姆斯面带微笑地回复到:“不客气,我只是在传递善意。你在帮伊达卸行李时忘记了手机。”
James ,“ You forgot your phone when helping Ida unload bags.”
10. 当他直视着我的双眼,我低下了头,脸涨得通红,愧疚充斥着我的内心。
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11. 我告诉他,我真的很抱歉认为他偷了我的手机。
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12. 詹姆斯拍了拍我的肩膀,只是笑了笑。
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13. 就是在此刻,我真正明白了“雨滴”且我再也不会通过外貌来评判一个人。(强调句)
the "drop of rain" and I .
· 读后续写:屋檐下的雨,善意的传递
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Paragraph 1:Suddenly, I found my phone was missing.突然,我发现我的手机不见了。
1. 在那一刻,一种不安感和困惑涌上我的心头。
At that moment,a sense of nervousness and confusion welled up in my heart.
2. 我立即停车并在车内仔细地搜寻每个可能性的角落,却没有找到。
I immediately pulled up and searched every possible corner in my car carefully but didn’t find it.
3. 我深吸一口气来让自己冷静,然后试图去回想刚才发生的事情。
I took a deep breath to make myself calm down and attempted to recall what had happened just now.
4. 我想到了留着蓬松长发的詹姆斯,他看起来很具有威胁性。
I thought of James with long bushy hair,who appeared threatening.
5. 我暗自思忖:“一定是他偷了我的手机。”(强调句)
I thought to myself,“It must be he that stole my phone.”
6. 当我掉过头,准备返回时,我看见詹姆斯正骑着摩托车朝我驶来。
When I made a U-turn and was about to return,I saw James riding a motorcycle,approaching me.
7. 他在我旁边停下并将手机递给我,额头上冒着汗水。
He stopped by me and handed the phone to me with sweat on his forehead.
Paragraph 2:I thanked James and regretted my former thought.我感谢詹姆斯,后悔我以前的想法。
8. 我低声地说:“谢谢你把手机还给我。”
I said in a low voice,“Thank you for returning my phone to me.”
9. 詹姆斯面带微笑地回复到:“不客气,我只是在传递善意。你在帮伊达卸行李时忘记了手机。”
James replied with a big smile on his face,“Don’t mention it.I am just passing on kindness.You forgot your phone when helping Ida unload bags.”
10. 当他直视着我的双眼,我低下了头,脸涨得通红,愧疚充斥着我的内心。
When he looked straight into my eyes,I lowered my head with my face flushing and guilt filling my heart.
11. 我告诉他,我真的很抱歉认为他偷了我的手机。
I told him I was so sorry to think he had stolen my phone.
12. 詹姆斯拍了拍我的肩膀,只是笑了笑。
James patted me on the shoulder and just smiled.
13. 就是在此刻,我真正明白了“雨滴”且我再也不会通过外貌来评判一个人。(强调句)
It was at this moment that I really understood the "drop of rain" and I would never judge a person by his appearance.
· 读后续写:屋檐下的雨,善意的传递
参考范文
Paragraph 1:突然,我发现我的手机不见了。在那一刻,一种不安感和困惑涌上我的心头。我立即停车并在车内仔细地搜寻每个可能性的角落,却没有找到。我深吸一口气来让自己冷静,然后试图去回想刚才发生的事情。我想到了留着蓬松长发的詹姆斯,他看起来很具有威胁性。我暗自思忖:“一定是他偷了我的手机。(强调句)”当我掉过头,准备返回时,我看见詹姆斯正骑着摩托车朝我驶来。他在我旁边停下并将手机递给我,额头上冒着汗水。
Suddenly, I found my phone was missing.At that moment,a sense of nervousness and confusion welled up in my heart.I immediately pulled up and searched every possible corner in my car carefully but didn’t find it.I took a deep breath to make myself calm down and attempted to recall what had happened just now.I thought of James with long bushy hair,who appeared threatening.I thought to myself,“It must be he that stole my phone.”When I made a U-turn and was about to return,I saw James riding a motorcycle,approaching me.He stopped by me and handed the phone to me with sweat on his forehead.
Paragraph 2:我感谢詹姆斯,后悔我以前的想法。我低声地说:“谢谢你把手机还给我。”詹姆斯面带微笑地回复到:“不客气,我只是在传递善意。你在帮伊达卸行李时忘记了手机。”当他直视着我的双眼,我低下了头,脸涨得通红,愧疚充斥着我的内心。我告诉他,我真的很抱歉认为他偷了我的手机。詹姆斯拍了拍我的肩膀,只是笑了笑。就是在此刻,我真正明白了“雨滴”且我再也不会通过外貌来评判一个人。(强调句)
I thanked James and regretted my former thought.I said in a low voice,“Thank you for returning my phone to me.”James replied with a big smile on his face,“Don’t mention it.I am just passing on kindness.You forgot your phone when helping Ida unload bags.”When he looked straight into my eyes,I lowered my head with my face flushing and guilt filling my heart.I told him I was so sorry to think he had stolen my phone.James patted me on the shoulder and just smiled.It was at this moment that I really understood the "drop of rain" and I would never judge a person by his appearance.
【主旨大意】:"Kindness in life is like rain under the roof. If you help keep someone dry from one drop today, it will run down the roof tiles and quietly fall on the shoulder of someone who needs it tomorrow." 把生活中的 “善意” 比作 “屋檐下的雨”今天帮一个人挡一滴雨,它会顺着瓦片流下,悄然落在明天需要的人肩头”,则进一步阐释:你当下付出的一次善意,会像雨滴一样在人与人之间流转,最终以不同形式滋养到其他需要的人,形成善意的循环。作者通过亲身经历,理解了奶奶关于善意如屋檐之雨可传递的比喻。作者起初因顾虑未帮助老妇人艾达,后受奶奶话语触动伸出援手,过程中因艾达住处的年轻人詹姆斯的外貌产生不安,最终却因詹姆斯归还其遗失的手机,认识到善意的传递以及不应以第一印象评判他人,深刻体会到善意能在人与人之间流转的道理。
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