内容正文:
一战成名新中考
2.Do you have a dream and why is this your dream?Write 30 words or more.
话题
写作指导
⑦佳句积累
开头
1.A man without dreams is like a bird without wings.
2.Life is full of challenges and hopes.That's why everyone longs for the future
3.Everyone has his or her dream.So do I.My dream is to be a writer,because the beautiful words
always make me drunk.
4.I want to be a scientist like Qian Xuesen in the future.He is one of the heroes who lead China to
develop fast.
中间
1.I have to get a good education and learn a lot of efficient ways to teach children.
2.I will also learn to communicate with others,because communication skills are important for a teacher.
3.If the plan doesn't work,change the plan but not the goal.
4.I would like to train hard and try my best to learn more dancing skills
5.It's necessary for us to work harder to master the basic skills which can make our dreams come true.
6.Prepare seeds,and you will harvest the fruits.Prepare efforts,and you will achieve success.
结尾
1.The life goal is like a light which guides you in the darkness and helps you overcome difficulties.
2.Though it is difficult to make my dream come true,as long as I insist on working hard,nothing will
prevent me from achieving it.
3.I've decided to hold on to my dream until it comes true.
4.The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
⑦典例精讲
假定你是李辉,在上周你校举办的“未来职业体验日”活动中,你尝试了不同的工作(如医生、厨
师、教师、工程师等)。请你根据下列提示给你的英国好友Bian写一封邮件,向他介绍此次活动。
。try different jobs..
。have the chance to.
。learn about.
Future Career
It helped me understand...
Exploration Day
It broadened my mind to...
。Ifelt..
。I dream of.
。I will...
话题读写思维训练·辽宁英语
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注意:
(1)词数80~100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数:
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)邮件中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Brian,
How is everything going?Last week,our school held an activity on the Future Career Exploration
Day.And I really want to share this exciting event with you!
Best wishes,
Li Hui
Step1细审题
审内容:向好友介绍自己上周参加职业体验的活动。
审人称:讲述自己的体验、感受、未来的职业计划,均应用
人称。
审时态:讲述上周的活动体验,应用
时;讲述活动带给自己的感受,可用
时,也可用
时:讲述自己的未来职业计划,可用
时,也可用
时。
Step2搭框架,扩要点
★开头:要点l→自己的话动体验(doctor,chef,firefighter,.designer,learn basic robotics,role-
playing))
①
②
③
④
★中间:要点2→自己的感受(know various career paths,more confident)
①
②
女结尾:要点3→未来职业计划(become,.AI engineer,.director,.player,study.harder)
Step3连接成篇
初阶范文
高阶范文
Dear Brian,
Dear Brian,
How is everything going?Last week,our
How is everything going?Last week,our school
school held an activity on the Future Career
held an activity on the Future Career Exploration
Exploration Day.And I really want to share this
Day.And I really want to share this exciting event
exciting event with you!
with you!
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话题读写思维训练·辽宁英语
一战成名新中考
Firstly,we acted as doctors by using toy
Firstly,we acted as doctors by treating toy
patients.Then,I became a cook in the cooking
patients.Then,I became a cook in the cooking
corner.I made pizza dough there.Thirdly,I
corner and made pizza dough.Most surprisingly,
learned basic robotics in the engineering
the engineering workshop taught me basic robotics!
workshop.Through role-playing,I learned
Through role-playing,I learned communication skills
communication skills in customer service.
in customer service.
I got to know various career paths through
This experience broadened my mind to various
this experience.I felt more confident about
career paths.I felt more confident about choosing my
choosing my future job.I want to become an AI
future job.I dream of becoming an AI engineer,so
engineer,so I will study programming harder
I will make greater efforts to study programming
from now on
from now on.
What about you?Do schools in the UK
What about you?Do schools in the UK have
have similar activities?I hope to hear
similar activities?I'm looking forward to hearing
from you.
from you.
Best wishes,
Best wishes,
Li Hui
Li Hui
?写作攻关
假定你是李辉,本周末英语老师布置的习作题目为“My Dream Job”。请你写一篇短文,简要介
绍你的梦想职业,内容包括:
(1)你的梦想职业;
(2)你为什么要选择这个职业;
(3)你将如何实现这个梦想。
注意:
(1)词数80~100,开头已给出,不计入总词数:
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)短文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
My Dream Job
Everyone has his dream job.
话题读写思维训练·辽宁英语
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Hope you can handle the negative emotions and live a
写作1
pleasant life.
Dear Linda,
Yours,
I'm so sorry to hear that you are in negative
Li Hui
emotions.Don't worry.I can help you.
写作2
Last term,I couldn't understand some basic points in
Every promise means responsibility and action.
Last year,I made a promise to my mum that I would
chemistry,and made several mistakes in an exam.I felt
improve my grades at least 30 scores in total.
down and worried for a week.Later,I communicated with
So,it was time for me to keep my promise.First,I
话
my teacher.She was patient and gentle.She gave me useful
made a study plan in detail and stuck to it every day.
advice on how to study effectively.So you can turn to
Second,I tried to work out every problem by asking my
someone you trust,who can lead you to the bright side.
teachers or friends for help.Third,I reviewed all my
写
Besides,you can do more sports,like running or swimming,
subjects I had learned every week,especially the key
思
which can make you relaxed and help you regain energy.
points.It was hard,but I didn't give up.
By the end of the year,I had made great progress.I
练
Dealing with negative emotions properly is important.It
became more confident than before.At the same time,
helps you solve problems and avoid causing more trouble.
keeping a promise benefited me a lot.
话题6职业启蒙,职业精神
Passage 1
【正文】1-5 ACBDB6-10 ADABD
【核心词句预知】1.跟随某人的步伐2.让某人发疯
【拓展设问】1.D
3.闲坐着4.失去兴趣5.不可能6.参加考试
2.Yes,I dream of being a doctor in the future,because I
7.使某人退缩8.长话短说9.在某事上有天赋
want to help people who are sick to recover.Saving lives
10.到…为止
and making others feel better will bring me joy and
【正文】1-4ADAC
satisfaction..(开放性设问,言之有理、言之有物即可。)
Passage 2
【写作攻关】
【核心词句预知】1.随着…的快速发展2.为…提
My Dream Job
供…3.走进,步入4.满足某人的特殊需求
Everyone has his dream job.And mine is to be an
5.带领某人做某事6.而不是7.同时
environmental engineer in the future.
【正文】1-4BCBD
I choose this job because our planet is facing more and
Passage 3
more environmental problems.Last year,I watched a
【核心词句预知】1.问题的答案2.一…就…
documentary about rivers being polluted,which made me
3.梦想;梦见4.根据,按照5.横渡6.似乎…;
realize how important it is to protect the environment.As an
看起来好像…7.另一方面8.坚持你的梦想
environmental engineer,I will come up with ways to clean
9.对某人来说做某事是不可能的。
polluted water and reduce waste.
【正文】1-4CAEB
To achieve this dream,I will study hard in science and
Passage 4
math now,since they are important for engineering.I also
【核心词句预知】1.紧张地摇头2.用低沉的声音
plan to join the school's environmental club to learn more
3.把…加到…里4.实现某人的梦想5.用…
skills.I believe with hard work,my dream will come true.
填满…6.拥抱真正的自己
话题7劳动实践与创新
Passage 1
Passage 3
【核心词句预知】1.介意做某事2.够不着的地方
【核心词句预知】1.喜欢做某事2.过去常常做某事
3.从开始到结尾4.(时间等)流逝5.收拾,整理
3.以…为食4.跑开5.安装6.被…接受
6.期望…7.一个小小的奖励8.集中于…
L正文】1-5 BACDB6-10 DACBC
【正文】1-4EDCB
【拓展设问】1.D
Passage 2
2.I learn that we should pay attention to the little things
【核心词句预知】1.快节奏的生活2.一种无私的表现
around us.If we are interested in something,we should
3.与…联系/连接4.即使5.亲近感6.增强某
keep to it.Maybe we can use our interests to solve
人的自信心7.把…加到…里8.出错
realistic problems in the future.(开放性设问,言之有
【正文】1-4BAED
理、言之有物即可。)
【拓展设问】I think I can do some house cleaning and Mom
Passage 4
can have a good rest after work.I can also cook some food
【核心词句预知】1.从…掉下来2.想出3.确保
for her,such as fish,tomato noodles,or some juice.(开放
4.如此…以至于…5.从事…6.迫不及待要
性设问,言之有理、言之有物即可。)
做某事7.梦想着…8.毕竟
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参考答案·辽宁英语