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概要、翻译、作文套餐练04
(满分:50分,推荐用时:60分钟)
III. Summary Writing
Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
【来源】2021年上海6月高考英语试卷
Ann Grand:a visual thinker
Ann Grand is a visual thinker.When somebody speaks to her, the words are instantly translated into pictures, like a video in her head. Unlike most people, her thoughts move from video-like images to generalizations and concepts. Furthermore, her memories usually appear in her imagination in order of time, and the image visualized are always specific. For example, if she thinks about a chimney, she sees detailed pictures, like the one in her old house, and then those in her hometown. That one word can turn into a full-length video in her head.Grand’s mind works like the Internet search engine which produces dozens of images of an object a user is searching for.
Visual thinking has enabled Grand to build entire systems in her imagination, which works similarly to a computer program because it can produce three-dimensional design simulations. This was important to her as an equipment designer for the livestock industry. Before she started construction on her designs, she would test-run the equipment in her mind. She formed mental pictures of her designs in every possible situation, with different sizes and breeds of cattle and in different weather conditions. This process made it possible for her to correct mistakes before construction started.
Grand’s mind is also sensitive to details, which was important in her work with cattle. Her sharp awareness of the visual world led to noteworthy observations about animals. She noticed many little things that most people would not consider that scared the cattle. For example, a coat on a fence or a pipe on the floor would frighten them away. Grand’s visualization abilities have also helped her understand the animals she has worked with. This led her to create designs ranging from sweeping, curved fences intended to reduce the stress experienced by animals that were going to be killed to systems for handling sick cattle and pigs.
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【答案】
Ann Grand is a visual thinker, whose mind works like the Internet search engine. Therefore she can build entire systems in her imagination through producing three﹣dimensional design simulations. Grand’s mind is so sensitive to details that she could notice many little things that most people would not consider that scared the cattle. This led her to create kinds of designs.
【导语】本文是一篇说明文。Ann Grand是一位视觉思考者。Ann Grand的大脑就像互联网搜索引擎一样,可以生成用户正在搜索的对象的几十幅图像。Ann Grand的头脑对细节也很敏感,这在她与牛的工作中很重要,并因此创造了许多设计。
【详解】1.要点摘录
①Ann Grand is a visual thinker. Grand’s mind works like the Internet search engine.
②Visual thinking has enabled Grand to build entire systems in her imagination. Because it can produce three-dimensional design simulations.
③Grand’s mind is also sensitive to details. She noticed many little things that most people would not consider that scared the cattle.
④ This led her to create designs ranging from sweeping, curved fences.
2.缜密构思
将第1、3两个要点进行重组,将第2、3两个要点进行整合。
3.遣词造句
Ann Grand is a visual thinker and Grand’s mind works like the Internet search engine.
Grand can build entire systems in her imagination. Because visual thinking can produce three-dimensional design simulations.
Grand’s mind is so sensitive to details that she could notice many little things that most people would not consider that scared the cattle, which led her to create kinds of designs.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Ann Grand is a visual thinker, whose mind works like the Internet search engine. 运用whose引导的非限制性定语从句,表达高级。
【高分句型2】Grand’s mind is so sensitive to details that she could notice many little things that most people would not consider that scared the cattle. 运用so…that引导的结果状语从句以及that引导的定语从句,表达高级。
IV. Translation
Directions: Translate the following sentences into English, using the word given in the brackets.
1.据说这种罕见的食材只有在南美的热带雨林里才能找到。(It)
【来源】上海市南洋中学2025-2026学年高三上学期期中考试英语试题
【答案】It is said that this kind of rare ingredient can only be found in the tropical rainforest in South America.
【详解】考查固定句型和语态。“据说……”用固定句型it is said that...表达,it作形式主语,that引导主语从句,从句的主语“这种罕见的食材”用this kind of rare ingredient表达,“能够”是can,“找到”是find,主语“这种罕见的食材”和find之间为被动关系,结合情态动词can可知,此处用含情态动词的被动语态can be found,地点状语“在南美的热带雨林”用in the tropical rainforest in South America表达。结合其他汉语提示,故翻译为It is said that this kind of rare ingredient can only be found in the tropical rainforest in South America.
2.值得一提的是,本次演唱会不负众望,赢得满堂彩。(What)
【来源】上海市上进才中学2025-2026学年高三上学期期中考试英语试题
【答案】What is worth mentioning is that this concert lived up to everyone’s expectations and received a resounding ovation.
【详解】考查主语从句、表语从句和固定搭配。根据句意和提示,表示“值得一提的是”使用what引导的主语从句,译为what is worth mentioning,其中what引导主语从句,is worth mentioning为系表结构,表示“值得被提及”,作句子主语;表示“本次演唱会不负众望,赢得满堂彩”位于系动词is后,作表语,可使用表语从句,从句中不缺成分,且句意完整,所以使用连接词that引导,表示“本次演唱会不负众望”描述的是过去发生的事情,所以使用一般过去时,表示“本次演唱会”为this concert作从句的主语,表示“不负众望”为 lived up to everyone’s expectations,表示“赢得满堂彩”译为received a resounding ovation,与lived并列,使用and连接并列谓语,保持时态一致,所以表语从句译为that this concert lived up to everyone’s expectations and received a resounding ovation。句首单词首字母大写,故翻译为What is worth mentioning is that this concert lived up to everyone’s expectations and received a resounding ovation.
3.从90年代开始,学校就举办各种艺术节,书法、国画、折纸等中国传统文化课程更是传承至今。 (Since)
【来源】上海市控江、复兴、市西、松二、金山、奉贤六校2025-2026学年高三上学期期中联考英语试卷
【答案】Since the 1990s, the school has hosted a variety of art festivals, and traditional Chinese culture classes, including calligraphy, Chinese painting, and paper folding, have continued to this day.
【详解】考查动词短语、介词短语和时态。“从90年代开始”可译为since the 1990s,作时间状语,句子要用现在完成时态,主语“学校”用the school,谓语“举办”用动词host,用现在完成时态为has hosted,宾语“各种艺术节”译为a variety of art festivals;“书法、国画、折纸等中国传统文化课程更是传承至今”是并列分句,用连词and连接,其主语“书法、国画、折纸等中国传统文化课程”译为traditional Chinese culture classes, including calligraphy, Chinese painting, and paper folding,其中including是介词,意为“包括”,“传承至今”用动词短语continue to this day,描述过去持续到现在的情况,用现在完成时态have continued to this day。综上,全句译为Since the 1990s, the school has hosted a variety of art festivals, and traditional Chinese culture classes, including calligraphy, Chinese painting, and paper folding, have continued to this day.
4.毋庸置疑,那些总是幻想着走捷径、妄想不劳而获,渴望一夜成名的人,最终必然会遭遇失败。(doubt)
【来源】上海市位育中学2025-2026学年高三上学期期中考试英语试题
【答案】There is no doubt that those who always fantasize about taking shortcuts, wish to gain something for nothing and crave instant fame will inevitably encounter failure in the end.
【详解】考查固定句型、定语从句、动词短语和副词。根据句意以及句子的提示词可知,该句应为There is no doubt that…,表示“毋庸置疑……”的固定句型,表示“那些……的人”译为“those who...”,用who引导定语从句修饰先行词those,在该定语从句中,表示“幻想着走捷径”应为动词短语fantasize about taking shortcuts;表示“妄想不劳而获”应为动词短语wish to gain something for nothing;表示“渴望一夜成名”应为动词短语crave instant fame;表示“必然”为副词inevitably;表示“最终遭遇失败”应为动词短语encounter failure in the end;结合句意可知,that从句描述将来的一种趋势,用will do结构。故翻译为There is no doubt that those who always fantasize about taking shortcuts, wish to gain something for nothing and crave instant fame will inevitably encounter failure in the end.
V. Guided Writing
【来源】上海市华东师范大学第二附属中学2025-2026学年高三上学期期中考试英语试题
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是江薇中学高三学生张芯,学校计划引入人形机器人,以优化校园服务、提升学习体验。你校英文报现向全体学生征集建议,希望确定一个最适合引入机器人的岗位。你对此颇感兴趣。请写一封邮件给校报负责老师,内容需包括:
(1) 设置的具体岗位和岗位职责;
(2) 推荐该岗位的理由。
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【答案】
Dear Teacher,
I’m Zhang Xin, a Senior 3 student. I’m writing to suggest introducing a robot as a campus service assistant, which I think will greatly improve our school life.
The robot’s main duties include managing the lost and found — keeping items that students lose and helping owners get them back. It can also guide visitors around our campus and answer simple questions about school rules or facility locations. Additionally, it can remind students of important dates like exam weeks or activity deadlines.
I recommend this role because lost items are common at school, and teachers are often too busy to handle them well. The robot can work all day to provide timely help, which saves everyone’s time. This robot will make our campus service more efficient and convenient.
I hope my suggestion is helpful.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Xin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以高三学生张芯的身份,给校报负责老师写一封邮件,就学校计划引入人形机器人确定岗位一事提出建议,内容涵盖具体岗位、岗位职责及推荐理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
改善:improve → enhance
主要的:main → primary
引导:guide → lead
忙碌的:busy → occupied
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:It can also guide visitors around our campus and answer simple questions about school rules or facility locations.
拓展句:Not only can it guide visitors around our campus, but also it can answer simple questions about school rules or facility locations.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m writing to suggest introducing a robot as a campus service assistant, which I think will greatly improve our school life.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I recommend this role because lost items are common at school, and teachers are often too busy to handle them well.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
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概要、翻译、作文套餐练04
(满分:50分,推荐用时:60分钟)
III. Summary Writing
Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
【来源】2021年上海6月高考英语试卷
Ann Grand:a visual thinker
Ann Grand is a visual thinker.When somebody speaks to her, the words are instantly translated into pictures, like a video in her head. Unlike most people, her thoughts move from video-like images to generalizations and concepts. Furthermore, her memories usually appear in her imagination in order of time, and the image visualized are always specific. For example, if she thinks about a chimney, she sees detailed pictures, like the one in her old house, and then those in her hometown. That one word can turn into a full-length video in her head.Grand’s mind works like the Internet search engine which produces dozens of images of an object a user is searching for.
Visual thinking has enabled Grand to build entire systems in her imagination, which works similarly to a computer program because it can produce three-dimensional design simulations. This was important to her as an equipment designer for the livestock industry. Before she started construction on her designs, she would test-run the equipment in her mind. She formed mental pictures of her designs in every possible situation, with different sizes and breeds of cattle and in different weather conditions. This process made it possible for her to correct mistakes before construction started.
Grand’s mind is also sensitive to details, which was important in her work with cattle. Her sharp awareness of the visual world led to noteworthy observations about animals. She noticed many little things that most people would not consider that scared the cattle. For example, a coat on a fence or a pipe on the floor would frighten them away. Grand’s visualization abilities have also helped her understand the animals she has worked with. This led her to create designs ranging from sweeping, curved fences intended to reduce the stress experienced by animals that were going to be killed to systems for handling sick cattle and pigs.
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IV. Translation
Directions: Translate the following sentences into English, using the word given in the brackets.
1.据说这种罕见的食材只有在南美的热带雨林里才能找到。(It)
【来源】上海市南洋中学2025-2026学年高三上学期期中考试英语试题
2.值得一提的是,本次演唱会不负众望,赢得满堂彩。(What)
【来源】上海市上进才中学2025-2026学年高三上学期期中考试英语试题
3.从90年代开始,学校就举办各种艺术节,书法、国画、折纸等中国传统文化课程更是传承至今。 (Since)
【来源】上海市控江、复兴、市西、松二、金山、奉贤六校2025-2026学年高三上学期期中联考英语试卷
4.毋庸置疑,那些总是幻想着走捷径、妄想不劳而获,渴望一夜成名的人,最终必然会遭遇失败。(doubt)
【来源】上海市位育中学2025-2026学年高三上学期期中考试英语试题
V. Guided Writing
【来源】上海市华东师范大学第二附属中学2025-2026学年高三上学期期中考试英语试题
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是江薇中学高三学生张芯,学校计划引入人形机器人,以优化校园服务、提升学习体验。你校英文报现向全体学生征集建议,希望确定一个最适合引入机器人的岗位。你对此颇感兴趣。请写一封邮件给校报负责老师,内容需包括:
(1) 设置的具体岗位和岗位职责;
(2) 推荐该岗位的理由。
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