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选择性必修第二册
Unit 2
Sports culture
(话题:人与社会之体育)
英语(译林版)
目录
学案一 课前背默
01
学案三 主题写作
03
学案二 课堂讲练
02
学案四 课下集训
04
学案一 课前背默
单词多维背诵
近义:frontier
核心单词(围绕话题——体育)
短语巧学助记
同义:make one's dream come true
同义:on top of the world
联想:shoulder to shoulder 肩并肩地;齐心协力
同义:go extinct
同义:take part in,join in
反义:be different from 与……不同
句式遮挡背诵
语篇词汇串记
提示 速记后请完成“背诵过关检测卷(十八)”
学案二 课堂讲练
participate vi.参加;参与→participant n.参加者;参与者→participation n.参加;参与
Part 1 核心词句——学表达
1
more people will take part in/participate in/ join in the
activities of protecting the oceans
compete vi.竞争;对抗→competition n.竞争;比赛→competitive adj.竞争的;有竞争性的;有竞争力的→competitor n.竞争者
2
compete with/against others to go beyond
ourselves
competing in the 400meter
race
比喻;主旨升华
rank n.地位;级别;行列;军衔;军阶 vt.& vi.把……分等级;使排列成行
3
Learning that you ranked first in the English speech competition held last week
应用文写作之祝贺信
limit n.限度;限制 vt.限制;限定→limited adj.有限的;受限制的→limitless adj.无限的;无尽的→limitation n.范围;限制
4
remark n.[C]谈论,言论 vi.& vt.说起, 评论→remarkable adj.非凡的;显著的
5
we shouldn't remark on/upon
others' private affairs
we shouldn't make remarks/a
remark on/upon others' private affairs
call on sb to do sth 正式邀请某人做某事;请求某人做某事
6
句式:too+adj./adv.+to...
7
I can't/can never stress the significance
of climbing the Great Wall too much
应用文写作之传统文化
句式:wish 后接虚拟语气
8
读后续写之情感+心理描写
How I wished there were
a crack in the floor
读后续写之尴尬心理描写
读后续写之悔恨心理描写
Part 2 阅读词汇——善辨义
(一)多义词辨义
C
D
A
B
A
B
C
(二)构词法猜义——巧借前缀pro推测词义
随堂小练
学案三 主题写作
(一) 应用文写作 [体育精神]
[构建话题语义场]
Learning that you show great interest in the crosscountry running race held
in our school,I'm writing to make remarks on it in detail.
In order to enrich our campus life,our school organized a 5km crosscountry
running race last Sunday,which I actively participated in.
Ninety students from twenty classes competed with each other with the faith
f winning the gold medal.
When approaching the finish line,most of us were too tired to continue,but no one gave up.
After the race,we remarked that the race not only provided a chance for us
to exercise,but also made us more determined.
We do wish that we could participate in more similar activities in the future.
(二) 读后续写 [体育精神+动作细节描写之跑、走、冲(1)]
Determined to build up my strength and strengthen my willpower
gathered all my strength and dashed to the
finish line
学案四 课下集训
阅读单词
1.solidarity
n.团结,齐心协力
2.motto
n.格言,座右铭
3.humanity
n.人类;人性;人道
4.hurdle
n.(pl.hurdles)跨栏赛;栏架;障碍
5.advent
n.(重要事件、人物等的)到来,出现
6.ascend
vi.& vt.上升,升高,登高
7.ankle
n.踝,踝关节
8.constitution
n.体质,身体素质;宪法,章程
9.humility
n.谦逊,谦虚
10.net
n.(the net)球门网;网,网状物
11.Unintentionally
adv.无意地,非故意地
12.council
n.政务委员会,地方议会;市政服务机构
13.backfire
vi.产生事与愿违的不良(或危险)后果
14.venue
n.活动场地
15.towel
n.毛巾,抹布,纸巾
16.literally
adv.真正地,确实地;按字面,字面上
17.iron
n.铁;熨斗 vt.& vi.(用熨斗)熨,烫平
18.boundary
n.边界,分界线
19.session
n.一段时间,一场;会议,开庭;学年
20.celebrity
n.名人;名望
21.league
n.联赛;等级,级别
22.waist
n.腰,腰部;(衣服的)腰部
多义单词——熟词生义
1.rank [熟义]vi.& vt.属于某等级,把……分等级;排列,使排成行n.地位,级别;等级;排,列→[生义]n.军衔;军阶
2.relay [熟义]n.接力赛 vt.转发(信息、消息等)→[生义]vt.播放,转播
3.pour [熟义] vt.& vi.倒,斟;倾倒,倒出;下大雨→[生义]vi.不断涌向
4.joint [熟义]adj.联合的,共同的→[生义]n.关节
多义单词——一词多义
5.demonstrate ①vt.示范,演示 ②vt.证实,证明 ③vt.表现,表露 ④vi.游行示威
6.handle ①n.把手,拉手;柄 ②vt.处理,应付 ③vt.控制,操纵
1.make joint efforts做出共同努力
2.proceed to become the world heavyweight champion继续成为世界重量级拳击冠军
3.light the Olympic flame点燃奥林匹克圣火
4.consistent performance in competitions 比赛中的稳定表现
5.the upward trend for Chinese sport中国体育的上升趋势
6.his fellow workers他的同事们
7.work as an amateur athlete做一名业余运动员
8.tears pouring down his cheeks眼泪从他的脸颊上流下来
9.sports idioms体育习语
10.make an unfair and cruel remark说不公平、残酷的话
拓展单词
1.participate vi.
参加,参与
participation n.
参加,参与
participant n.
参与者
2.compete vi.
参加比赛;竞争
competitor n.
竞争者
competition n.
比赛;竞争
competitive adj.
竞争的;有竞争力的
3.race n.
种族;赛跑
racial adj.
种族的;种族间的
4.diverse adj.
多种多样的,不同的
diversity n.
多样性
5.motivate vt.
激励,激发;成为……的动机,是……的原因
motivation n.
动机;积极性
6.demonstrate vt.
表现,表露;证实,证明;示范,演示
vi.
游行示威
demonstration n.
示范;证明;示威,游行
7.applaud vi.& vt.
称赞,赞许;鼓掌
applause n.
鼓掌;喝彩
8.elect vt.
选举,推选
election n.
选举,推选;当选
9.faith n.
信心;宗教信仰
faithful adj.
忠实的
faithfully adv.
忠诚地,忠实地
10.ambition n.
追求的目标,夙愿;野心,雄心,壮志
ambitious adj.
有雄心的;有野心的
ambitiously adv.
有野心地
11.identify vt.
确定;鉴定
identity n.
身份;同一性
identical adj.
完全同样的
identification n.
鉴定;辨认;确定;身份证明
12.gradual adj.
逐渐的,逐步的
gradually adv.
逐渐地,逐步地
13.limit n.
限度,限制;限量,限额;界限
vt.
限制,限定;限量,减量
limited adj.
有限的
limitless adj.
无限的
limitation n.
范围;限制
14.oppose vt.
反对
opposing adj.
对抗的;相反的
opposed adj.
强烈反对的;截然不同的
opponent n.
对手,竞争者;反对者
15.complain vi.& vt.
抱怨,投诉
complaint n.
抱怨
16.cruel adj.
刻毒伤人的,残酷的
cruelty n.
残酷,残忍
cruelly adv.
残酷地
重点短语
1.realize one's dream 实现梦想
2.track and field 田径运动
3.in the process of 在……过程中
4.walk on air 欢天喜地,得意扬扬
5.side by side 肩并肩地,一起;相互支持
6.pick up 捡起;获得;收拾;取回;收集;不费力地学会
7.find one's way into 偶然来到,无意中处于
8.die out 灭绝
9.bring...back to life 使……复活
10.participate in 参加
11.be identical to 与……一样
12.reflect on 反省
1.It was a Frenchman,Pierre de Coubertin,who brought the Olympics back to life.(强调句型)
是一个名叫皮埃尔·德·顾拜旦的法国人使奥运会重获生机。
2.His dream was that the Olympics would help people of different racial origins and from different cultures live side by side in peace.(that引导表语从句)
他的梦想是奥运会可以帮助不同种族、不同文化的人们和平地生活在一起。
3.I ran my race relaxed and confident,even though my limits were being tested like never before.(even though引导让步状语从句)
我轻松自信地跑着比赛,尽管自己的极限正受到前所未有的考验。
4.If someone makes a bad mistake which unintentionally harms their own interests,they are said to have scored an own goal.(which引导限制性定语从句)
如果某人犯了一个严重的错误,无意中损害了他们自己的利益,他们就被称为“进了乌龙球”。
5.When a boxer is losing badly and is too tired or confused to give up on his or her own,the coach will literally throw a towel into the ring to end the fight.(too...to...)
当一名拳击手输得很惨,并且因太累或思维太混乱而无法自己宣告放弃时,教练就会扔一条毛巾到擂台上,示意比赛结束。
Jack,an amateur sportsman,participated in diverse competitions and demonstrated his ambition and faith.
At the beginning,he took up track and field.He was always the first to do training in the playground.His consistent efforts paid off,ranking first in a halfmarathon.Afterwards,he took an interest in the men's 100meter hurdles,which was difficult to make a breakthrough.But he didn't throw in the towel.In the end,he defeated all the opponents in a match.When rewarded with a prize,he couldn't help bursting into tears.His motto was:Win with humility,lose with grace,and do both with dignity.
Jack was also an unselfish man.He committed himself to doing voluntary work to help people in need and called on others to participate in this kind of activity.Motivated by his spirit,more people began to do the identical cause.He held a firm belief that only by joint efforts and solidarity could we build a more harmonious world.
杰克是一名业余运动员,他参加了各种各样的比赛,展示了他的雄心和信念。
起初,他喜欢田径运动。他一直是第一个在操场上开始训练的人。他一贯的努力得到了回报,在半程马拉松比赛中排名第一。后来,他对难以取得突破的男子100米跨栏产生了兴趣。但他并没有认输。最后,他在一场比赛中击败了所有的对手。当接受颁奖时,他不禁哭了起来。他的座右铭是:胜不骄,败不馁;可论胜败,不可失了尊严。
杰克还是一个无私的人。他致力于做志愿工作,帮助有需要的人,并呼吁其他人参加这类活动。在他的精神的激励下,更多的人开始做同样的事业。他坚信,只有通过共同努力和团结,我们才能建立一个更加和谐的世界。
【用法归纳】
participate in=take part in=join in=be/get involved in 参加
【写作语料】
◎actively participate in school activities积极参加学校活动
◎participate in various instructive activities 参加各种有教育意义的活动
【语境运用】 单句填空/完成句子
①Through (participate) in this project, the students gained valuable handson experience.
②每个人都被鼓励参与讨论,分享他们的想法和观点。
Everyone , sharing their thoughts and opinions.
③(2022·全国甲卷)我衷心希望更多的人能够参与到保护海洋的活动中来。
I sincerely hope that
.
participation
was encouraged to participate in the discussion
【用法归纳】
◎compete in
参加……的比赛;在……方面竞争
◎compete for
为……而竞争
◎compete with/against
和……竞争
【写作语料】
◎compete with/against each other for the gold medal互相竞争争夺金牌
◎hold a lantern riddles competition 举办灯谜比赛
【语境运用】 完成句子
①人生就像一场漫长的竞赛,我们与别人竞争,以超越自己。
Life is like a long race in which we
.
②上周,我参加了我们学校的运动会,参与了400米比赛——一个激动人心和难忘的经历。
Last week, I participated in our school sports meet,
—a thrilling and unforgettable experience.
【用法归纳】
◎the first rank
一流的
◎rank...as...
把……评为……;认为……是……
◎rank high/first
名列前茅/第一
【写作语料】
◎hold a high rank in the organization 在组织中担任高职
◎rank first in a recent English speech contest在最近的一次英语演讲比赛中排名第一
◎a person of high rank 地位高的人
【语境运用】 词义辨析/单句填空/完成句子
①He was soon promoted to the rank of captain.词义:
②The university consistently ranks the top institutions in the country.
③They rank him a realistic painter,who has gained a good reputation.
④得知你在上周举行的英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖,我写信表示衷心的祝贺。
,
I am writing to express my sincere congratulations.
军衔;军阶
among
as
【用法归纳】
◎set a limit to/on
限制……
◎beyond the limit
超过限度
◎without limit
无限制地
◎limit...to...
把……限定在……范围内
【写作语料】
◎limit the use of plastic bags限制使用塑料袋
◎limited natural resources 有限的自然资源
◎have limitless potential拥有无限潜力
【语境运用】 完成句子
①(2024·全国甲卷)它们让人们无限制地旅行,让我们更容易在繁忙的街道上穿梭。
, making it easier to navigate busy streets.
②我建议我们要限制我们上网的时间。
I recommend that we .
③老师决定将讨论限定在小说的关键主题上,以保持课堂的专注。
The teacher decided in the novel to keep the class focused.
They allow people to travel without limit
should set a limit to/limit the time we spend online
to limit the discussion to key themes
【用法归纳】
◎make remarks/a remark on/upon/about...
就……发表评论/意见
◎remark on/upon
对……进行评论
【写作语料】
◎demonstrate a remarkable ability to adapt to new situations 展现出适应新环境的非凡能力
◎a bitter remark 一句尖酸刻薄的话
【语境运用】 一句多译
我们都同意他提出的建议:不要评论别人的私事。
①We are all in favor of his suggestion that
.(remark v.)
②We are all in favor of his suggestion that
.(remark n.)
【用法归纳】
◎call up
给……打电话;使想起
◎call off
取消
◎call for
要求;需要;去接某人
◎call at
停靠;(短时间)停留
◎call in
邀请;请来
◎call on/upon
拜访(某人);号召;需求
【写作语料】
A poster was put up around our school, calling on us to join in the activity for a greener earth.我们学校周围贴了一张海报,号召我们参加绿色地球活动。
called up memories of our first spring outing
【语境运用】 语段填空
我最好的朋友打电话给我,告诉我她的工作会议被取消了。所以我们约好了去她家吃晚饭。当我拜访我最好的朋友时,我看到了她家里的一张照片,回想起了我们的第一次春游。
My best friend ① to tell me her work conference ② .So we made an appointment to eat dinner at her home.When I ③ ,I caught sight of a picture at her home which ④ .
called me up
was called off
called on my best friend
【教材原句】 When a boxer is losing badly and is too tired or confused to give up on his or her own,the coach will literally throw a towel into the ring to end the fight.当一名拳击手输得很惨,并且因太累或思维太混乱而无法自己宣告放弃时,教练就会扔一条毛巾到擂台上,示意比赛结束。
【用法归纳】
◎too+adj./adv.(for sb)+to do sth 表示否定的意义,意为“太……而不能……”。
◎当“too...to...”结构用来修饰表达人的态度、情绪倾向的形容词,如anxious,eager,glad,happy,pleased,ready,willing等时,表示肯定意义,意为“非常”。
◎“too...to...”结构和never,not等否定副词连用时,表示肯定意义,意为“无论……也不过分;越……越好”。
◎can never/can't/cannot与too,too much,enough连用时,表示肯定意义,意为“再……也不过分”。
【佳句背诵】
①As the old saying goes,“It's never too late to learn.”
正如谚语所说,“活到老,学到老。”
②I'm too happy to describe my feelings in words.我高兴得无法用语言表达我的感受。
③We cannot express our gratitude enough for your help during this difficult time.
在这段艰难的日子里,我们对你提供的帮助感激万分。
【仿写借鉴】
我非常高兴地得知您对长城感兴趣。长城太壮观而不容错过。正如一句老话所说:“不到长城非好汉。”因此,我再怎么强调爬长城的意义都不为过。
you are keen on the Great Wall.The Great Wall is ② .Just as an old saying goes,“He who does not reach the Great Wall is not a true man.”So ③
.
I am too pleased to learn that
too spectacular to miss
【教材原句】 Thankfully, goalposts do not really move—but when a player scores an own goal,he or she might wish they did.谢天谢地,门柱并不会真的移动——但当球员踢进乌龙球时,他或她说不定会希望球柱真能移动。
【用法归纳】
◎wish后跟从句时常用虚拟语气,表示不太现实或不太可能实现的愿望。
◎wish后面从句中的谓语动词形式为:
①did/were(表示与现在事实相反)
②had done/been(表示与过去事实相反)
③would/could/might+动词原形(表示与将来事实相反)
【佳句背诵】
①It is pouring now.How I wish I didn't have to go to work today!
现在正下着滂沱大雨。我真希望今天不用上班!
②Afterward, embarrassed, she wished she hadn't said anything.
随后,她感到很尴尬,希望自己什么都没说过。
③He stood up,hugged his parents and forced a smile,saying,“I do wish that I would/could/might leave for my university tomorrow.”
他站起来,紧紧地拥抱着他的父母,挤出一丝笑容,说道:“我的确希望我明天去大学。”
【仿写借鉴】
①我窘迫地站在那里,脸涨得通红。我多么希望地板上有一个裂缝,这样我就可以藏在里面了。
I stood there awkwardly,with my face blushing.
so that I could hide myself in it.
②我站在那里,默默地流着悔恨的泪水,我希望我没对爸爸说过如此刻薄的话。
I stood there,shedding tears of regret in silence and I wished that .
I hadn't said such sharp words to my father
1.demonstrate
A.vt.示范,演示 B.vi.游行示威 C.vt.表现,表露 D.vt.证实,证明
①You need to demonstrate more selfcontrol.
②This was demonstrated in a laboratory experiment with rats.
③At the Chinese art festival, there are different stands where artists demonstrate their skills and teach the visitors.
④They are demonstrating in favour of free higher education.
v.播放,转播
2.handle
A.n.把手,拉手;柄 B.vt.处理,应付 C.vt.控制,操纵
①I turned the handle and found the door was open.
②We all have to learn to handle stress.
③In the beginning, I didn't know how to handle such a large car.
3.猜测句中加黑部分的词性和汉语意思
①People have been pouring into stadiums since the days of ancient Greece.
②He is seriously ill,and this condition can lead to severe joint pain.
③The game was relayed by satellite to audience all over the world.
vi.不断涌向
n.关节
前缀pro:含义主要有①向前,向前面(forward, in front of, before) ②支持,赞成(in favor of, supporting)
本单元:proceed vi.进行;前进;(沿特定路线)行进;(尤指打断后)继续说
1.The author's prologue expressed gratitude to those who supported her throughout the writing process.
[词义]pro(向前)+logue(话)→prologue
2.The company adopted proenvironment policies, such as reducing waste and investing in renewable energy.
[词义]pro (支持)+environment(环境)→proenvironment
n.序言,开场白
adj.支持环保的
3.The scientist proposed a new theory to explain the unusual behavior of the particles.
[词义]pro(向前)+pose(放置)→propose
4.The government implemented proactive measures to prevent the spread of infectious diseases.
[词义]pro(向前)+active(积极的)→proactive
5.The professor provided profound insights into the historical events that shaped modern society.
[词义]pro(向前)+found(基础)→profound
vt.提议,建议
adj.积极主动的
adj.深刻的,意义深远的
单句语法填空
1.The witness said he was too frightened (remember) what had happened then.
2.To sum up,I sincerely call on you not (involve) yourself in politics.
3.The teacher persuaded many students in his class to participate the crosscountry running race organized by the school.
4.The boy who was in poverty studied day and night to compete the scholarship.
to remember
to involve
in
to
was elected
to
5.It was the two witnesses gave the accurate evidence to the police.
6.We shouldn't complain being poor because many families are much worse off than we are.
7.If your words aren't consistent your behaviour,you will be investigated.
8.It is so urgent;nevertheless,the police command that all the drivers should limit the speed of their cars 60km per hour on this road.
9.After Lincoln (elect)President of the US in 1860,they rented the house and sold most of their furniture.
10.Only the person who has faith in himself is able to be faithful others.
who/that
about
with
(2020·新高考Ⅰ改编)假定你是李华,你的好友Bob对上周日你校举办的5千米越野赛跑活动很感兴趣,请你写信告诉他活动的相关内容,内容包括:
1.介绍活动;
2.活动反响。
1.体育精神
①show sportsmanship 展现体育精神
②overcome challenges 克服挑战
③maintain a positive attitude 保持积极态度
④respect opponents 尊重对手
⑤celebrate victories 庆祝胜利
⑥learn from defeats 从失败中学习
⑦inspire others 激励他人
⑧set goals 设定目标
⑨foster camaraderie 促进友谊
⑩make us more determined让我们意志更加坚定
2.比赛准备
⑪train hard 努力训练
⑫participate in tournaments 参加锦标赛
⑬support teammates 支持队友
⑭stay focused 保持专注
⑮maintain fitness 保持身体健康
⑯balance practice and rest 平衡训练与休息
3.体育活动
⑰enrich our campus life丰富我们的校园生活
⑱provide a chance for us to exercise提供了锻炼身体的机会
⑲engage in physical activities 参与体育活动
⑳join a sports team 加入运动队
㉑compete at a high level 在高水平上竞争
㉒promote healthy lifestyles 推广健康生活方式
㉓share experience 共享经验
㉔appreciate the spirit of competition 欣赏竞争精神
㉕show great interest in the crosscountry running race对越野跑步比赛表现出极大的兴趣
用本单元知识和上栏词块翻译句子
1.得知你对我校举办的越野跑步比赛表现出极大的兴趣,我现在写信对此作详细评述。(现在分词短语作状语)
2.为了丰富我们的校园生活,我们学校上周日组织了一场5千米越野跑步比赛,我积极参加了这场比赛。(非限制性定语从句)
3.来自二十个班的九十名学生怀着赢得金牌的信念相互竞争。
4.当接近终点线时,我们大多数人都累得不能继续跑下去,但没有人放弃。(too...to...,状语从句的省略)
5.比赛结束后,我们评价这次比赛不仅为我们提供了锻炼身体的机会,而且让我们意志更加坚定。 (not only...but also...)
6.我们确实希望我们今后能参与更多类似的活动。(wish)
Ⅰ.教材语料积累
词汇
[人物描写] solidarity n.团结,齐心协力 joint adj.联合的,共同的 faith n.信心;宗教信仰 fellow adj.同类的,同情况的,同伴的 n.同辈,同类;男人,家伙 ankle n.踝,踝关节 opponent n.对手,竞争者;反对者
[动作描写] participate vi.参加,参与 compete vi.参加比赛;竞争 applaud vt.& vi.称赞,赞许;鼓掌 rank vi.& vt.属于某等级,把……分等级;排列,使排成行 complain vi.& vt.抱怨,投诉
佳句
1.His dream was that the Olympics would help people of different racial origins and from different cultures live side by side in peace.(人物描写)
2.He came to public attention during the 1960 Rome Olympics,when he won the light heavyweight gold medal for the USA,demonstrating great talent and personality in the process.(人物描写)
3.Sport is challenging and so is life.However,when you are thrown a curveball,do not throw in the towel—work hard,be careful not to score an own goal,and you are sure to make it!(主旨升华)
Ⅱ.拓展语料背诵
单词
1.run v.& n.跑;移动;(使)流动
2.dash v.& n.飞奔;猛冲
3.rush v.& n.猛冲
4.charge v.猛冲
5.dart v.飞奔
6.hurry v.匆忙,赶快
7.storm v.气呼呼地疾走;闯;冲
8.stumble v.跌跌撞撞地走
词块
1.rush off/away like an arrow 像箭一样跑开
2.dash straight into...直接冲进……
3.rush/charge towards...like an arrow像箭一样冲向……
4.make a running step back跑着后退
5.dash back匆忙返回
6.storm into/out of...冲进/冲出……
句型
1.With his feet bleeding,the man stumbled forward through the darkness as if drunk.
那人脚上流着血,跌跌撞撞地在黑暗中前进,好像喝醉了似的。 (状语从句的省略)
2.She stormed into my office waving a newspaper.
她挥舞着一张报纸怒气冲冲地闯进我的办公室。(现在分词短语作状语)
3.With tears streaming down his face,he ran towards his mother,throwing himself into her arms.
泪水顺着他的脸颊流淌,他向母亲跑去,扑进她的怀里。(with复合结构)
4.Tired out,I felt my legs were heavy like iceblocks and couldn't make it to the finish line.
我累坏了,我觉得我的腿像冰块一样沉重,无法到达终点线。(比喻)
句型
5.With his heart in his throat,he rushed/charged towards the burning building like an arrow.
他的心都提到嗓子眼儿了,他像箭一样冲向燃烧的大楼。(比喻)
6.With a smile on his face,he charged towards his friends,happy to see them.
他面带微笑,朝他的朋友们冲去,很高兴见到他们。(形容词短语作状语)
7.I was so tired and my legs were heavy like iceblocks,but I gathered all my strength and dashed to the finish line.我太累了,腿像冰块一样沉重,但我还是竭尽全力,朝终点线冲去。(so...that...)
Ⅲ.语料综合运用
我决心增强自身力量和意志力,报名参加了城市半程马拉松比赛。经过几天的艰苦训练,我终于迎来了这重要的一天。比赛开始时,我很放松,像箭一样冲在人群前面。然而,当跑到最后五英里时,我的腿像冰块一样重,所以我不得不拖着腿,跌跌撞撞地向前走,好像喝醉了一样。我正要放弃时,突然听到有人激动地为我加油。我竭尽全力,冲到了终点线。接着传来我的朋友们激动的尖叫声。在意识到我做到了时,喜悦的泪水顺着我的脸颊流了下来。我微笑着冲向我的朋友,紧紧地拥抱着他们。
tears of joy streamed down my cheeks
charged towards my friends
(形容词短语作状语),I signed up for the city halfmarathon.Having trained hard for days,I was finally greeted with the big day.At the beginning of the competition,I was at ease and relaxed,② (比喻).However,when it came to the last five miles,my legs were heavy like iceblocks,so I had to drag my legs,③ (现在分词短语作状语,状语从句的省略).I ④ I heard some people excitedly cheering for me.I ⑤
.Then came the excited screams from my friends.When I realized I had made it,⑥ (无灵主语).With a smile on my face, I ⑦ ,hugging them tightly.
rushing in front of the crowd like an arrow
stumbling forward as if drunk
was about to give up when
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