内容正文:
Ernest Shackleton was a great polar explorer who had been enthusiastic about polar exploration and led three British expeditions to the Antarctic throughout his life.Below are some of his expedition experiences and achievements.
He was one of the leading figures during the Heroic Age of Antarctic Exploration.His third expedition to the Antarctic was as extraordinary as a great miracle.Faced with tough polar conditions,he didn’t abandon his team and firmly resolved to lead them to go out of difficulty.If there hadn’t been his wise
leadership,he and his team wouldn’t have survived after
more than 700 days in the polar region.
I was inspired by his spirit,realizing that we must have courage and perseverance when facing any difficulties.
1.按要求用表“哭”的表达补全以下各句,并背诵(2020·新高考Ⅰ卷读后续写“爆米花计划”)
①他看到爆米花,泪眼模糊。
When he saw the popcorn, tears misted his eyes/his eyes grew misty. (简单句)
②他的母亲站在门口,高兴得流下了眼泪。
His mother, standing at the door, cried/shed tears of joy. (简单句)
③“你们太好了”,她哽咽着说道,“太谢谢你们了”。
How kind you are! she said in a choked voice. Thank you very much. (语言描写)
④很快爆米花都卖完了,他紧紧攥着赚来的钱,觉得眼睛湿润了。
Soon all the popcorn was sold out. Holding tightly the money earned, he felt his eyes watered. (简单句)
⑤一想到Meredith一家的帮助,他流下了感激的泪水。
At the thought of the help of the Merediths’, he found tears of gratitude streaming down his face.
【参考范文】
When he saw the popcorn, tears misted his eyes/his eyes grew misty. His mother, standing at the door, cried/shed tears of joy. How kind you are! she said in a choked voice. Thank you very much. Soon all the popcorn was sold out. Holding tightly the money earned, he felt his eyes watered. At the thought of the help of the Merediths’, he found tears of gratitude streaming down his face.
1.用表“哭”的表达补全以下各句,并背诵
①汤姆捉弄我,把我弄哭了。我的两只眼睛哭得又红又肿。
Tom teased me, making me burst into tears. My eyes were both red and swollen from crying. (分词短语作状语)
②我羞愧难忍,扑到床上,自己哭着睡着了。
Ashamed, I threw myself onto the bed and cried myself to sleep. (简单句)
③汤姆来了,哭得很伤心,请求我原谅他。
Tom came, cried his eyes out, and begged me to forgive him. (简单句)
Tom came, crying his eyes out and begging me to forgive him. (分词短语作状语)
④他满脸泪水,浑身颤抖。
His face was wet with tears and he was trembling. (简单句)
⑤我恼怒地说:“伤心地哭也没用,你不能取笑我。”
I said in an annoyed voice, It’s no use crying bitterly. You couldn’t make fun of me. (简单句)
⑥我赶快离开了,因为我不想在其他人面前失控大哭。
I left quickly, not wanting to break down in front of others. (分词短语作状语)
【参考范文】
Tom teased me, making me burst into tears. My eyes were both red and swollen from crying. Ashamed, I threw myself onto the bed and cried myself to sleep. Later, Tom came, crying his eyes out and begging me to forgive him.His face was wet with tears and he was trembling. I said in an annoyed voice, It’s no use crying bitterly. You couldn’t make fun of me. After that, I left quickly, not wanting to break down in front of others.
Tom and Mary were a young couple ①who were enthusiastic about wild exploration(定语从句).One day when going through a thick jungle,the wife,Mary got seriously injured in the ankle.Worse still,it began to rain.At first,②Tom took Mary’s arm,trying to support her along the way,but soon they found it didn’t work.The pain was so intense ③that they had to abandon their plan.When the rain became heavier and the sun was setting,④their heart also began to sink.⑤Bitter and frightened(形容词短语作状语),Mary almost broke down.Tom tried to comfort her,⑥throwing his arms around his wife gently(分词短语作状语).Tightly grabbing Tom’s arm,Mary gradually calmed down and ⑦ resolved to face the difficulty bravely.
Fortunately,they managed to call the rangers before losing signal.What they should do next was to ⑧make some fire to avoid being frozen to death on such a bitter night.Afterwards,they had nothing to do but wait patiently.⑨Gathering his wife into his arms,Tom heard some roars of helicopter.He immediately rose to his feet and ⑩waved his arms violently,shouting loudly “Help!Help!” in extreme excitement.
汤姆和玛丽是一对热衷于野外探险的年轻夫妇。一天,在穿过茂密的丛林时,妻子玛丽的脚踝受了重伤。更糟糕的是,天开始下雨了。起初,汤姆挽着玛丽的胳膊,试图一路扶着她走,但很快他们发现这不管用。玛丽的脚太疼了他们不得不放弃他们的计划。当雨下得更大,太阳落山时,他们的心也开始下沉。玛丽又痛苦又害怕,几乎崩溃了。汤姆温柔地搂着妻子试图安慰她。玛丽紧紧抓住汤姆的胳膊,渐渐平静下来,决心勇敢地面对困难。幸运的是,他们设法在失去信号之前给护林员打了电话。他们接下来应该做的是生火,以免在这样一个寒冷的夜晚被冻死。之后,他们只能耐心等待。汤姆把妻子抱在怀里,听到了直升机的轰鸣声。他立即站起来,猛烈地挥舞着手臂,极度激动地大声喊道:“救命!救命!”
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高考英语作文增分训练九
一、应用文增分练
假如你是李华,向某英文报纸《伟人介绍》栏目投稿。简要介绍英国极地探险家——欧内斯特·沙克尔顿Ernest Shackleton1874-1922。其主要成就如下:英国极地探险家,曾带领英国探险队三次前往南极洲,是南极探险英雄时代的主要人物之一。在他第三次带领探险队奔赴南极探险时,他与“坚忍号”的船员们在极地700多天的求生经历,创造了20世纪一次伟大的生还奇迹。
完成句子
1.欧内斯特·沙克尔顿是一位伟大的极地探险家,他对极地探险充满热情,一生带领英国探险队三次前往南极洲。(be enthusiastic about;定语从句)
2.以下是他的一些探险经历和成就。(全部倒装句)
3.他的第三次南极探险是一个非凡的奇迹。(as...as...)
4.面对严峻的极地条件,他没有放弃他的团队,坚定地带领他们走出困境。(abandon;resolve)
5.如果没有他的英明领导,他和他的团队就不会在极地待了700多天后还能活下来。(if引导虚拟条件句)
组句成篇
把以上句子用适当的过渡词语和过渡句组成一篇80词左右的短文。
二、读后续写增分练
动作描写之“哭泣”(二)
形容词
misty泪眼模糊的; watery眼泪汪汪的; tearful含泪的
动词
sob啜泣; weep哭泣,流泪; cry哭泣
短语
①be close to tears快哭了; ②with a lump in one’s throat喉咙哽咽; ③eyes cloud with tears泪眼模糊; ④tears well up in one’s eyes热泪盈眶; ⑤be filled with/be full of tears热泪盈眶; ⑥be wet with tears/be in tears泪流满面; ⑦bring a tear to sb.’s eye使某人哭泣; ⑧shed tears of joy喜极而泣
1.按要求用表“哭”的表达补全以下各句,并背诵(2020·新高考Ⅰ卷读后续写“爆米花计划”)
①他看到爆米花,泪眼模糊。
When he saw the popcorn, _____________________________________________. (简单句)
②他的母亲站在门口,高兴得流下了眼泪。
His mother, standing at the door, _____________________________________________. (简单句)
③“你们太好了”,她哽咽着说道,“太谢谢你们了”。
How kind you are! _____________________________________________. Thank you very much. (语言描写)
④很快爆米花都卖完了,他紧紧攥着赚来的钱,觉得眼睛湿润了。
_____________________________________________. (简单句)
⑤一想到Meredith一家的帮助,他流下了感激的泪水。
_____________________________________________.
2.将以上各句合并成小短文并背诵成文,注意使用合适的衔接过渡词汇
1.用表“哭”的表达补全以下各句,并背诵
①汤姆捉弄我,把我弄哭了。我的两只眼睛哭得又红又肿。
Tom teased me, _____________________________________________. _____________________________________________. (分词短语作状语)
②我羞愧难忍,扑到床上,自己哭着睡着了。
Ashamed, I threw myself onto the bed and _____________________________________________. (简单句)
③汤姆来了,哭得很伤心,请求我原谅他。
Tom came, _____________________________________________, and begged me to forgive him. (简单句)
Tom came, _____________________________________________. (分词短语作状语)
④他满脸泪水,浑身颤抖。
_____________________________________________ and he was trembling. (简单句)
⑤我恼怒地说:“伤心地哭也没用,你不能取笑我。”
I said in an annoyed voice, _____________________________________________. You couldn’t make fun of me. (简单句)
⑥我赶快离开了,因为我不想在其他人面前失控大哭。
I left quickly, not _____________________________________________. (分词短语作状语)
2.将以上各句合并成小短文并背诵成文,注意使用合适的衔接过渡词汇
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