高考英语作文增分训练八-2026届高三英语一轮复习

该高中英语高考复习学案聚焦应用文与读后续写两大作文核心题型，将应用文句式训练（如固定句型完成）、篇章组构与读后续写动作描写词汇（“笑”“哭泣”）、句子补全及短文合并分层整合，通过高中英语学习任务单设计，引导学生从基础句式到语篇应用自主梳理考点，构建从语言要素到语篇表达的能力框架。 亮点在于自测诊断与语篇能力进阶设计，如应用文设置5个核心句式完成题及组句成篇任务，读后续写提供动作描写词汇表并要求补全句子、合并短文，培养学生的语言能力与思维品质。学生可通过句式完成度和短文连贯性自主诊断薄弱点，教师能依据练习反馈实施精准指导，助力学生形成个性化写作提升路径。

There is little doubt that a great many human activities have caused great damage to our earth mother.Here，on behalf of the students’council，I make a suggestion that we students should make some contributions to environmental conservation. It’s (high) time that we took/should take various methods to protect the earth from pollution.To build a more harmonious and sustainable society，we have launched a campaign named “Earth Guardian”，which is aimed at taking effective and practical measures to protect the environment.Those who are interested in the campaign must submit your application and relevant materials before October 1st. I sincerely hope that you can seize the precious chance and join us immediately. 1.按要求用表“笑”的表达补全以下各句,并背诵(2021·浙江卷读后续写“头困在南瓜中的女孩”) ①我像困兽一样大声呼救,几乎把自己震聋了。我多么希望我没把头伸进南瓜里! Like a caged animal, I screamed for help, nearly deafening myself. How I wish I had never forced my head inside the pumpkin!  ②烦人的是,我弟弟们的大笑声和我妹妹咯咯的笑声从外面传到了我的耳中。 Annoyingly, roars of laughter of my brothers and giggles of my sister reached my ears from outside. (无灵主语句)  ③爸爸哈哈笑着抓起一把刀,小心翼翼地把南瓜切开。 Ha, ha, ha. laughing, Dad grabbed a knife and carefully cut the pumpkin open. ④我出来的时候下巴酸痛,脖子僵硬,嘴里甚至有一粒南瓜子。 I emerged with a sore chin, my neck stiff and I even got a seed in my mouth.  ⑤“你做到了!”妈妈大笑一声。她拍下了我整个出糗的过程。 You made it! Mom laughed a loud laugh. She was actually filming my whole embarrassment.  【参考范文】　 Like a caged animal, I screamed for help, nearly deafening myself. How I wish I had never forced my head inside the pumpkin! Annoyingly, roars of laughter of my brothers and giggles of my sister reached my ears from outside. Ha, ha, ha. laughing, Dad grabbed a knife and carefully cut the pumpkin open. I emerged with a sore chin, my neck stiff and I even got a seed in my mouth. You made it! Mom laughed a loud laugh. She was actually filming my whole embarrassment. 1.按要求用表“哭”的表达补全以下各句,并背诵 ①听到这个消息女孩心痛如绞,她眼泪哗哗地哭了起来。 When the girl heard the news, her heart ached, and she cried with a burst of tears. (简单句)  ②她痛苦地抽泣着,品尝着脸上流下的咸咸的泪水。 She sobbed bitterly, tasting the salt from the tears that streamed/rolled/poured down her face. (定语从句)  ③过了一会儿她抬起头,双眼哭得又红又肿。 After a while she looked up, her eyes red and swollen from crying. (独立主格结构)  ④她一张口说话,泪水再次从眼中涌出。 Tears welled up in her eyes again as she started to speak. (简单句)  ⑤他忍住泪水,说服她休息一下。 He held/fought back his tears and persuaded her to have a rest. (简单句)  ⑥她回到自己屋中,哭着睡着了。 When she returned to her room, she cried herself to sleep.  ⑦他静静地站在她的房间外,泪水顺着脸颊淌下来。 He stood silently outside her room, tears rolling/streaming/pouring/flowing down his cheeks. (独立主格)  【参考范文】　 When the girl heard the news, her heart ached, and she cried with a burst of tears. She sobbed bitterly, tasting the salt from the tears that streamed down her face. And after a while she looked up, her eyes red and swollen from crying. However, tears welled up in her eyes again as she started to speak. He held/fought back his tears and persuaded her to have a rest. When she returned to her room, she cried herself to sleep. He stood silently outside her room, tears rolling/streaming/pouring/flowing down his cheeks. On an early spring morning ①when the snow hadn’t melted completely(定语从句)，my brother and I were having a walk along the country track when a little cat ②lying on the dry straw(分词短语作后置定语) attracted our eyes.Out of curiosity，③we tiptoed to it slowly.We thought it would ④spring to its feet and flee away seeing us.But the cat just struggled to its feet，⑤releasing some weak and painful moans(分词短语作状语)．Approaching closer，we found in surprise that the little cat ⑥got seriously injured in one of its legs and was badly in need of medical help.Not knowing what to do，⑦we planted our feet firmly to the spot for a moment and then decided that we should take it home；⑧otherwise it would die in the cold weather. 早春的一个早晨，雪还没有完全融化，我和哥哥正在乡间小路上散步，一只躺在干稻草上的小猫吸引了我们的目光。出于好奇，我们慢慢地踮着脚尖走向它。我们以为它看到我们会跳起来逃跑，但猫只是挣扎着站起来，发出一些虚弱而痛苦的呻吟。走近时，我们惊讶地发现，这只小猫的一条腿受了重伤，急需医疗救助。不知道该怎么办，我们牢牢地在原地站了一会儿，然后决定把它带回家，否则它会在寒冷的天气里死去。 $ 高考英语作文增分训练八 一、应用文增分练 假定你是李华，你校学生会即将举办一次以“Earth Guardian”为主题的环境保护运动，请你代表学生会写一封倡议信，倡导大家积极参与该活动，内容包括： 1.地球环境的现状； 2.该运动的目的和要求； 3.号召大家积极参加。 完成句子 1．毫无疑问，许多人类活动对我们的地球母亲造成了巨大的伤害。(There is little doubt that...) 2．在这里，我代表学生会提出建议，我们学生应该为环境保护做出一些贡献。(on behalf of；that引导的同位语从句；conservation) 3．为了建设一个更加和谐和可持续的社会，我们发起了一项名为“地球卫士”的运动，旨在采取有效和切实可行的措施来保护环境。(harmonious；sustainable；campaign；which引导的定语从句) 4．对该活动感兴趣的人必须在10月1日之前提交你的申请和相关材料。(submit；定语从句) 5．我真诚地希望你能抓住这个宝贵的机会，立即加入我们。(seize) 组句成篇 把以上句子用适当的过渡词语和过渡句组成一篇80词左右的短文。 二、读后续写增分练 1.动作描写之“笑” (二) 名/动词 ①grin咧嘴笑; ②giggle咯咯地笑;傻笑; ③roar大笑; ④chuckle偷笑 动词短语 ①break into a wide grin绽放出大大的笑容; ②grin with delight高兴地咧嘴笑; ③burst into laughter/burst out laughing大笑; ④explode with laughter哄堂大笑; ⑤scream/roar with laughter放声大笑; ⑥laugh/grin from ear to ear笑得合不拢嘴; ⑦howl with laughter狂笑; ⑧laugh a loud laugh大笑一声 名词短语 ①a burst of laughter一阵大笑; ②roars of laughter大笑 1.按要求用表“笑”的表达补全以下各句,并背诵(2021·浙江卷读后续写“头困在南瓜中的女孩”) ①我像困兽一样大声呼救,几乎把自己震聋了。我多么希望我没把头伸进南瓜里! __________________________________________________________________________________________. ②烦人的是,我弟弟们的大笑声和我妹妹咯咯的笑声从外面传到了我的耳中。 Annoyingly, _____________________________________________. (无灵主语句)  ③爸爸哈哈笑着抓起一把刀,小心翼翼地把南瓜切开。 Ha, ha, ha. _____________________________________________, Dad grabbed a knife and carefully cut the pumpkin open. ④我出来的时候下巴酸痛,脖子僵硬,嘴里甚至有一粒南瓜子。 _____________________________________________ and I even got a seed in my mouth.  ⑤“你做到了!”妈妈大笑一声。她拍下了我整个出糗的过程。 You made it! Mom _____________________________________________. She was actually filming my whole embarrassment.  2.将以上各句合并成小短文并背诵成文,注意使用合适的衔接过渡词汇 2.动作描写之“哭泣”(一) tears ①hold/fight back tears抑制住泪水; ②burst into tears/burst out crying放声大哭; ③tears roll/run/stream/flow down one􀆳s cheeks泪水滑落脸颊 cry等 ①cry bitter/lonely tears流下痛苦/孤独的泪水; ②cry one􀆳s eyes/heart out痛哭流涕; ③cry oneself to sleep哭到睡着; ④eyes be red and swollen from crying眼睛肿红; ⑤break down (因情绪失去控制而)情不自禁哭起来; ⑥a good long cry痛痛快快哭一场 1.按要求用表“哭”的表达补全以下各句,并背诵 ①听到这个消息女孩心痛如绞,她眼泪哗哗地哭了起来。 When the girl heard the news, her heart ached, and _____________________________________________. (简单句)  ②她痛苦地抽泣着,品尝着脸上流下的咸咸的泪水。 _____________________________________________, tasting the salt from the tears _____________________________________________. (定语从句)  ③过了一会儿她抬起头,双眼哭得又红又肿。 After a while she looked up, _____________________________________________. (独立主格结构)  ④她一张口说话,泪水再次从眼中涌出。 _____________________________________________ as she started to speak. (简单句)  ⑤他忍住泪水,说服她休息一下。 _____________________________________________ and persuaded her to have a rest. (简单句)  ⑥她回到自己屋中,哭着睡着了。 When she returned to her room, _____________________________________________.  ⑦他静静地站在她的房间外,泪水顺着脸颊淌下来。 He stood silently outside her room, _____________________________________________. (独立主格)  2.将以上各句合并成小短文并背诵成文,注意使用合适的衔接过渡词汇 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $