内容正文:
建议信
【思维导图】
建议信是作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议,以便让对方接受自己的想法、主张并解决有关问题。建议信可以写给个人,就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法或观点;也可以写给某个组织或者机构,就改进其服务等提出建议或忠告。具体写作结构如下:
【词汇积累】
take...into account/consideration考虑
in addition to除...之外
ask for sb.’s advice征求某人的建议
give sb. advice/ suggestions on…在…方面给某人建议
make/offer some suggestions/advice提出一些建议
adopt/accept/follow/take up my advice/suggestions接受我的建议
as far as I’m concerned/personally在我看来
be beneficial/be of benefit to sb.对某人有益
find my suggestions/advice helpful/practical觉得我的建议有益/实用
develop good habits培养好的习惯
lift one’s spirits振奋某人的精神
an effective way一个有效的方式
raise/improve working efficiency 提高工作效率
reduce harmful behaviors 减少有害行为
have positive effects on 对……有积极的影响
needless to say ... 不必说……
It's a good idea to do sth 做某事是个好主意
【常用表达】
1.开篇地道自然
(1)I’m happy to receive your letter and know...
我很高兴收到你的信并了解到……
(2)I’m very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on...Here are a few suggestions.
我很高兴收到你的来信,询问我关于……的建议。下面是(我的)一些建议。
(3)I know you have trouble in...I am writing to give you some suggestions.
我知道你在……方面有困难。我写信的目的是给你一些建议/忠告。
2.中间丰实亮眼
(1)My suggestions are as follows.
我的建议如下。
(2)Another suggestion is that you should...
另一个建议是你应该……
(3)I strongly suggest/advise/recommend that you should...
我强烈建议你……
(4)Personally,it would be wise to take the following action.
在我看来,采取如下行动会是明智的。
(5)If you want...,...would be the best choice.
如果你想……,……将是最好的选择。
3.结尾锦上添花
(1)I hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you.
我希望我的建议对你有益。
(2)I hope you’ll soon feel better and carry on as normal.
我希望很快你能感觉好一些,一切如常。
【万能模板1】
Dear_________(称呼),
l have received your letter saying that you have difficulty in困难/问题).Therefore, I am writing this letter with the intention of giving your some suggestions about how to_________________(引出对方需要建议的主题).
First of all, it is highly suggested that you should_________________.(建议一) so that you can(理由). Additionally,as is known to all,( )is of great importance. Thus,it is necessary that you should_________________(建议二). What's more, aiming to_________________(理由), it is essential that you(建议三). Eventually, It is high time that you got should (建议四), which helps_________________(理由四).
l hope that you will take my suggestions into serious account / consideration.am looking forward to your reply_________________(表达愿望).
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【万能模板2】
Dear ___________ (建议对象)
You have asked me for my advice on how to ________________________(对方的寻求建议内容). I’d like to offer some suggestions for you.
First of all, it is of great importance to ____________________________(建议1), as you can _________________________________(理由1). Then, it also helps to ____________________________(理由2). Besides, it should be a good idea to __________________________(建议2),because by doing sth _____________________________(理由3). You can also ________________________(建议1). I’m convinced ___________________________(预测可能的结果).
Please take my proposals into consideration. I hope you will find them useful.
Yours sincerely,
_________(写信人)
【真题典例】
(2023新课标I&II卷)假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括;
1. 说明问题;
2. 提出建议
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇是应用文写作,要求考生给外教写一封邮件,告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。
【佳作展现】
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class. The reasons are as follows.
To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.
My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together.
Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【赏析】
1. 词汇积累
首先:to begin with → first of all
提高:improve → progress
建议:suggestion → advice
选择:choose → select
2句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.
拓展句:My suggestion is that we are supposed to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.
3.高分句式
[句1]
This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve.(运用了现在分词作状语)
[句2]
Besides, Students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.(运用了省略句和who引导定语从句)
【举一反三】
1.(2023年北京卷)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动,他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
(1)活动形式;
(2)活动内容。
注意:(1)词数100左右;
(2)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【佳作展现】
Dear Jim,
Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions.
I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding of “Green Beijing” through getting involved in different activities by themselves. You can showcase garbage classification on site, plant trees and publicize sharing economy, which will all fit into the theme of “Green Beijing”.
Hopefully, you will get some inspiration from my suggestions. Wish you success.
Yours,
Li Hua
2.假定你是李华,你的好朋友Jim是一名高三学生。在最近的一次来信中,Jim提到因为书写不够美观、整洁,在多次英语考试中他的作文得分都不理想,这是他目前最大的困扰。请你给Jim回信并针对他的问题提出建议。内容包括:
1.理解和安慰;
2.你的建议。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【佳作展现】
Dear Jim,
Hearing your upset about your English handwriting which has posed an influence on your writing scores,I feel deeply concerned.Don’t be too worried,for it is common among your peers.
I have a deep understanding of your trouble.From my point of view,the situation might be caused by inadequate practice and incorrect methods of practice.Here are my suggestions.Initially,it is essential that you practise strokes and letters while watching a demo video or with a copybook.Then,you can arrange a fixed period every day for further practice.Finally,put it into practice in the tests and make adjustments when necessary.
Take action now and I believe I will witness your gradual progress and final success.
Yours,
Li Hua
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建议信
【思维导图】
建议信是作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议,以便让对方接受自己的想法、主张并解决有关问题。建议信可以写给个人,就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法或观点;也可以写给某个组织或者机构,就改进其服务等提出建议或忠告。具体写作结构如下:
【词汇积累】
___________________考虑
___________________除...之外
___________________征求某人的建议
___________________在…方面给某人建议
___________________提出一些建议
___________________接受我的建议
___________________在我看来
___________________对某人有益
___________________觉得我的建议有益/实用
___________________培养好的习惯
___________________振奋某人的精神
___________________一个有效的方式
___________________提高工作效率
___________________减少有害行为
___________________对……有积极的影响
___________________不必说……
___________________ 做某事是个好主意
【常用表达】
1.开篇地道自然
(1)I’m happy to receive your letter and know...
我很高兴收到你的信并了解到……
(2)I’m very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on...Here are a few suggestions.
我很高兴收到你的来信,询问我关于……的建议。下面是(我的)一些建议。
(3)I know you have trouble in...I am writing to give you some suggestions.
我知道你在……方面有困难。我写信的目的是给你一些建议/忠告。
2.中间丰实亮眼
(1)My suggestions are as follows.
我的建议如下。
(2)Another suggestion is that you should...
另一个建议是你应该……
(3)I strongly suggest/advise/recommend that you should...
我强烈建议你……
(4)Personally,it would be wise to take the following action.
在我看来,采取如下行动会是明智的。
(5)If you want...,...would be the best choice.
如果你想……,……将是最好的选择。
3.结尾锦上添花
(1)I hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you.
我希望我的建议对你有益。
(2)I hope you’ll soon feel better and carry on as normal.
我希望很快你能感觉好一些,一切如常。
【万能模板1】
Dear_________(称呼),
l have received your letter saying that you have difficulty in困难/问题).Therefore, I am writing this letter with the intention of giving your some suggestions about how to_________________(引出对方需要建议的主题).
First of all, it is highly suggested that you should_________________.(建议一) so that you can(理由). Additionally,as is known to all,( )is of great importance. Thus,it is necessary that you should_________________(建议二). What's more, aiming to_________________(理由), it is essential that you(建议三). Eventually, It is high time that you got should (建议四), which helps_________________(理由四).
l hope that you will take my suggestions into serious account / consideration.am looking forward to your reply_________________(表达愿望).
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【万能模板2】
Dear ___________ (建议对象)
You have asked me for my advice on how to ________________________(对方的寻求建议内容). I’d like to offer some suggestions for you.
First of all, it is of great importance to ____________________________(建议1), as you can _________________________________(理由1). Then, it also helps to ____________________________(理由2). Besides, it should be a good idea to __________________________(建议2),because by doing sth _____________________________(理由3). You can also ________________________(建议1). I’m convinced ___________________________(预测可能的结果).
Please take my proposals into consideration. I hope you will find them useful.
Yours sincerely,
_________(写信人)
【真题典例】
(2023新课标I&II卷)假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括;
1. 说明问题;
2. 提出建议
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【举一反三】
1.(2023年北京卷)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动,他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
(1)活动形式;
(2)活动内容。
注意:(1)词数100左右;
(2)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
2.假定你是李华,你的好朋友Jim是一名高三学生。在最近的一次来信中,Jim提到因为书写不够美观、整洁,在多次英语考试中他的作文得分都不理想,这是他目前最大的困扰。请你给Jim回信并针对他的问题提出建议。内容包括:
1.理解和安慰;
2.你的建议。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
学科网(北京)股份有限公司
$