摘要:
该高中英语高考复习学案系统梳理了感谢信写作专题,将结构框架(思维导图)、常用表达(开篇/中间/结尾分类)、万能模板等核心考点按“认知-积累-应用”逻辑构建知识网络,通过问题链(如“如何用不同句式强化感谢诚意”)和任务单(整理个性化表达库)引导学生自主推导写作规律,形成应用文写作的结构化认知体系。
亮点在于“诊断-应用-反思”三阶自主学习设计,如开篇设置感谢信结构要素填空诊断题,学生根据错误匹配基础巩固(常用表达句式默写)或综合提升(真题典例仿写)路径,培养语言能力与学习能力素养。每个模块配有“表达句式分类表”和“写作反思日志”,帮助学生建立个性化表达体系,教师可通过日志分析精准指导,真正实现因材施教。
内容正文:
感谢信
【思维导图】
感谢信是向帮助、关心和支持过自己的集体或个人表示感谢的信件。在收到别人的邀请、受到别人的表扬或帮助后,被邀请者、被表扬者或被帮助者往往需要写一封感谢信。具体写作结构如下:
【常用表达】
1.开篇地道自然
(1)I am writing to express my sincere thanks for...
我写这封信是为了表达我对……的真诚感谢。
(2)I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for...
在这封信中我要为……向你表达我诚挚的谢意。
(3)Thank you so much for...you sent me.It’s one of the most wonderful...I have ever got.
非常感谢你给我寄来的……。这是我收到过的最好的……之一。
2.中间丰实亮眼
(1)Without your help,I would not have been...
没有你的帮助,我就不会成为……
(2)It is thanks to your help that I have made rapid progress in...
正是多亏了你的帮助,我在……方面有了飞速的进步。
(3)But for your help,I would not have made so much progress in...
要是没有你的帮助,我在……方面不会取得如此大的进步。
(4)Whenever I have difficulties in...,you are the one who I will turn to first.
每当我在……方面遇到困难时,你就是我首先要求助的人。
3.结尾锦上添花
(1)Your kindness and help will always be remembered by me.
我将永远铭记你的善意和帮助。
(2)Thanks again for your help and I’m sincerely looking forward to your coming.
再次感谢你的帮助,我真诚地期待你的到来。
⑶Please do not hesitate to let me know if there is anything I could do to pay you back.如果我能做些什么来回报你,请不要犹豫尽管告诉我。
⑷My true gratitude is beyond the words’ description./Words fail to express my gratitude deep in my heart./No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am.我真正的感激之情无法用言语来形容。/言语无法表达我内心深处的感激之情。
【万能模板】
Dear ___________ (感谢对象)
How is everything going?(熟悉的人之间简单打招呼)/ I'm Li Hua, ______________.(用于正式的感谢信中自我介绍). I’m writing this email to express my gratitude for your help.
First of all,thank you for ____________________(感谢理由1).Without your help,I would not have made such great progress in English learning(感谢理由2).Besides, during the competition, ___________________(具体的细节)
I wish you all the best in the future and have a good journey!
Yours,
Li Hua
【真题典例】
(2009·山东·高考真题)假设你是李华,曾在美国学习半年,现已回国。你想联系你的美国老师Mr. Smith,但没有其联系方式。请根据以下要点给你的美国同学Tom写一封信:
1. 感谢Tom对你英语学习的帮助;
2. 询问Mr. Smith的近况并索要其联系方式;
3. 邀请Tom在春节期间来中国感受中国文化。
注意:1. 词数120-150; 2. 可适当增加细节。
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【举一反三】
1.(2019年浙江卷)假定你是李华,经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示感谢;
2. 回顾Alex对你的帮助;
3. 临别祝愿。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.(2023·广东茂名大联考)假定你是李华,你收到了英国朋友Mike寄来的英文诗歌选集。请给他写一封感谢信,内容包括:
1.表示感谢;
2.回赠礼物;
3.你的祝愿。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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感谢信
【思维导图】
感谢信是向帮助、关心和支持过自己的集体或个人表示感谢的信件。在收到别人的邀请、受到别人的表扬或帮助后,被邀请者、被表扬者或被帮助者往往需要写一封感谢信。具体写作结构如下:
【常用表达】
1.开篇地道自然
(1)I am writing to express my sincere thanks for...
我写这封信是为了表达我对……的真诚感谢。
(2)I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for...
在这封信中我要为……向你表达我诚挚的谢意。
(3)Thank you so much for...you sent me.It’s one of the most wonderful...I have ever got.
非常感谢你给我寄来的……。这是我收到过的最好的……之一。
2.中间丰实亮眼
(1)Without your help,I would not have been...
没有你的帮助,我就不会成为……
(2)It is thanks to your help that I have made rapid progress in...
正是多亏了你的帮助,我在……方面有了飞速的进步。
(3)But for your help,I would not have made so much progress in...
要是没有你的帮助,我在……方面不会取得如此大的进步。
(4)Whenever I have difficulties in...,you are the one who I will turn to first.
每当我在……方面遇到困难时,你就是我首先要求助的人。
3.结尾锦上添花
(1)Your kindness and help will always be remembered by me.
我将永远铭记你的善意和帮助。
(2)Thanks again for your help and I’m sincerely looking forward to your coming.
再次感谢你的帮助,我真诚地期待你的到来。
⑶Please do not hesitate to let me know if there is anything I could do to pay you back.如果我能做些什么来回报你,请不要犹豫尽管告诉我。
⑷My true gratitude is beyond the words’ description./Words fail to express my gratitude deep in my heart./No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am.我真正的感激之情无法用言语来形容。/言语无法表达我内心深处的感激之情。
【万能模板】
Dear ___________ (感谢对象)
How is everything going?(熟悉的人之间简单打招呼)/ I'm Li Hua, ______________.(用于正式的感谢信中自我介绍). I’m writing this email to express my gratitude for your help.
First of all,thank you for ____________________(感谢理由1).Without your help,I would not have made such great progress in English learning(感谢理由2).Besides, during the competition, ___________________(具体的细节)
I wish you all the best in the future and have a good journey!
Yours,
Li Hua
【真题典例】
(2009·山东·高考真题)假设你是李华,曾在美国学习半年,现已回国。你想联系你的美国老师Mr. Smith,但没有其联系方式。请根据以下要点给你的美国同学Tom写一封信:
1. 感谢Tom对你英语学习的帮助;
2. 询问Mr. Smith的近况并索要其联系方式;
3. 邀请Tom在春节期间来中国感受中国文化。
注意:1. 词数120-150; 2. 可适当增加细节。
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【导读】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国同学Tom写一封信,询问老师Mr. Smith的联系方式。
【佳作展现】
Dear Tom,
I am now back China and sound. In this letter I would like to convey my heartfelt appreciation to you for your kind assistance in my English learning when I was in New York. Additionally, your generous help and tender care made me feel warmly welcomed and transformed my first American trip into a unforgettable memory.
I have been missing our English professor, Mr. Smith whose unusual cast of mind, wide and varied knowledge, together with a singular personal charm, combined to exert a strong influence on me. What about him recently? I desire to contact him for some suggestions on improving my listening ability. However, his email address is not available. So would you mind delivering it to me via the online mailbox?
I am more than delighted to invite you to join us to celebrate the Spring Festival-Chinese Lunar New Year so that I can repay your friendship. You can partner with me to have a try in lion dances, which is extremely exciting. And the grand lantern festival parade will be bound to impress you. I assure you that you would enjoy visiting here as I did at you home.
With my best regards!Yours cordially,
Li Hua
【赏析】
1.词汇积累
表达:convey→express
此外:Additionally→What’s more
渴望:desire to→be eager to
一定:be bound to→be sure to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I desire to contact him for some suggestions on improving my listening ability. However, his email address is not available.
拓展句:I desire to contact him for some suggestions on improving my listening ability, but his email address is not available.
【高分句式】
【句1】In this letter I would like to convey my heartfelt appreciation to you for your kind assistance in my English learning when I was in New York.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
【句2】I am more than delighted to invite you to join us to celebrate the Spring Festival-Chinese Lunar New Year so that I can repay your friendship.(运用了so that引导的目的状语从句)
【举一反三】
1.(2019年浙江卷)假定你是李华,经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示感谢;
2. 回顾Alex对你的帮助;
3. 临别祝愿。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【佳作展现】
Dear Alex,
Learning that you’re leaving for the United States soon, I’m eagerly writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your help.
Honestly speaking, it’s so nice of you to offer me a class of practical learning skills. Under your professional guidance, I have made such unbelievable progress in English. It’s indeed a pleasant surprise for me to even rank first in a recent English speech contest. Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence. No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am.
Thanks again and wish you a pleasant journey home.
Yours,
Li Hua
2.(2023·广东茂名大联考)假定你是李华,你收到了英国朋友Mike寄来的英文诗歌选集。请给他写一封感谢信,内容包括:
1.表示感谢;
2.回赠礼物;
3.你的祝愿。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【佳作展现】
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to receive the book “A Collection of English Poems”.Thank you for such a lovely gift as I have been expecting for a long time.
I know you are interested in traditional Chinese culture,especially Beijing opera,and therefore I will send a Beijing Opera facial makeup to you.Different types of facial makeup are based on a certain personality,temperament or some special types of figures for the use of certain colors.I hope you will like the facial makeup.
Expecting you to come to China and experience the rich culture in person.
Yours,
Li Hua
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