专题09 写作满分范文（期末真题汇编，上海专用）七年级英语上学期

专题09 写作满分范文 1．(24-25七上·上海闵行区·期末)Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文。）日记常被用来记录生活，抒发感想。请结合生活中你或你的家人、朋友遇到的一次困难或一个问题，写一篇日记，谈谈你是如何将其巧妙地解决的，以及从中学到了什么。 日记需包含以下内容： 1. What happened? 2. How did I feel? 3. What do I learn from it? （注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、、校名及其他相关信息，否则不于评分。） _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Thursday, January 2nd Today I was stuck on a math problem. It seemed so hard that I didn’t know where to start. I felt very confused. I tried for hours but still couldn’t solve it. Then, I decided to ask my teacher for help. She explained it to me step by step and gave me some tips. With her help, I finally understood it and solved it by myself. I felt so happy and proud. This experience taught me that when I face difficulties, I should keep trying and ask for help if needed. 【详解】[总体分析]   ① 题材：本文为一篇日记；   ② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”；   ③ 提示：提示问题已给出，注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，完善表述内容。   [写作步骤]   第一步，介绍自己遇到的问题；   第二步，介绍自己是如何成功解决的；   第三步，表达自己的感受和收获。 [亮点词汇] ①ask sb for help向某人寻求帮助   ②step by step一步一步地 [高分句型]   ①It seemed so hard that I didn’t know where to start.（so...that引导的结果状语从句）   ②This experience taught me that when I face difficulties, I should keep trying and ask for help if needed.（that引导的宾语从句；when引导的时间状语从句；if引导的条件状语从句） 2．(24-25七上·上海（虹口宝山黄埔松江）·期末)Write at least 50 words according to the given situation（根据以下情境写一篇不少于50个词的短文，标点符号不占格） 本学期，同学们学习了6个单元，每个单元包含一个阅读语篇（标题如下）。你最喜欢哪一个语篇？说明你喜欢该语篇的理由。 单元 阅读语篇 1 Solar stickers to power the world 2 A winning mascot 3 Amazing dabbawalas 4 Smart homes 5 “Sealed book” classic return s to the screen 6 The lifeblood of cities __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： This semester, we learned six units, each with an interesting reading passage. My favorite passage is “Smart homes.” I really enjoyed it because it showed me how technology can make our lives easier and more convenient. I learned about how smart homes can control lights, temperature, and even security systems with just a few commands. It made me excited to think about the possibilities of living in a house that can “think” for itself. I also liked how the passage explained the benefits of smart homes. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：根据题目要求谈谈最喜欢的语篇及原因，注意字数要求。 [写作步骤] 第一步，首先介绍自己最喜欢的语篇； 第二步，说明喜欢的理由和从中学到了什么； 第三步，介绍学习感想。 [亮点词汇] ①convenient便利 ②learn about了解 ③think about 思考 [高分句型] ①I really enjoyed it because it showed me how technology can make our lives easier and more convenient.（because引导的原因状语从句） ②I learned about how smart homes can control lights, temperature, and even security systems with just a few commands.（宾语从句） 3．(24-25七上·上海进才中学北校·期末)请你发挥想象力，设想一个你将来想要从事的职业，并简要介绍它的工作内容、技能与社会价值。请以“My Future Job”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文。Suggested questions: What job would you like to do in the future? What will you do in this job? What skills will you have? How important will the job be? _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文： My Future Job My future job is to be an environmental engineer. I will design clean energy systems like solar or wind to reduce pollution.I need to work hard at school to learn scientific and creative skills. This job is important because it helps protect our planet and makes life better for everyone. I hope to make the world greener through my work. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材： 本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时态”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，不得遗漏，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明主题，介绍自己愿意从事的职业； 第二步，描述工作内容和所需技能； 第三步，阐述社会价值并表达个人愿景。 [亮点词汇] ①an environmental engineer一名环境工程师 ②reduce pollution减少污染 ③protect our planet保护我们的星球 ④make life better让生活更美好 [高分句型] ①This job is important because it helps protect our planet and makes life better for everyone.（because引导的原因状语从句） 4．(24-25七上·上海建平中学西校·期末)Write a passage of at least 60 words according to the requirement. Write about “Learning from an experience”. You must include the following questions. (1) What happened? (2) What did you learn from it?/What have you learned from it? Learning from an experience ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 Learning from an experience Last month, I volunteered at an old people’s home. I read newspapers and sang songs for the elderly. They smiled happily and held my hands tightly. This experience taught me that helping others can bring real joy. I also learned that we should care more about the old. Now, I often visit them with my classmates. Let’s help others and make the world warmer. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开门见山说明事件（时间、地点、活动）； 第二步：具体描述经历细节（为老人做的事、他们的反应）； 第三步：总结学到的道理（帮助他人的意义、关爱老人的重要性）。 [亮点词汇] ①tightly紧紧地 ②care for关心 ③experience经历 [高分句型] ①They smiled happily and held my hands tightly.（and连接并列短语） ②This experience taught me that helping others can bring real joy.（that引导的宾语从句） ③Let’s help others and make the world warmer.（祈使句） 5．(24-25七上·上海浦东名校·期末)Write at least 60 words on the following situation.（根据情景，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格） 假设你是Joe，上个周末，你第一次尝试做小老师，帮助了你的同学Molly，教会了她不会读的英文单词，请你在朋友圈以文字的形式把你这次小老师的经历记录下来，说说具体的经过以及你的感想。 Moments Joe _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文                                                                                   Moments      Last weekend was unforgettable for me. I tried being a little teacher for the first time to help Molly, my classmate. She couldn’t read some English words, so I taught her patiently. I explained the pronunciation and practiced with her repeatedly. Finally, she managed to read them. I was so happy and learned that helping others is rewarding. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇朋友圈记录文，属于小作文类型，记录自己首次当小老师帮助同学的经历； ②时态：以“一般过去时”为主，描述上个周末发生的具体事件； ③提示：写作要点涵盖经历的时间、事件、具体过程及个人感想，叙事完整且情感真实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点明经历的时间和核心事件； 第二步，具体阐述帮助的过程，包括同学的问题、自己的教学行动、及最终结果； 第三步，表达个人感想，说明从经历中领悟到帮助他人的意义。 [亮点词汇] ①unforgettable难忘的 ②patiently耐心地 ③pronunciation发音 ④repeatedly反复地 ⑤rewarding有意义的，值得的 [高分句型] ①I tried being a little teacher for the first time to help Molly, my classmate.(同位语my classmate补充说明Molly身份，使表达更清晰) ②I was so happy and learned that helping others is rewarding.(that引导宾语从句，点明经历的感悟) 1．(24-25七上·上海浦东新区第四教育属·期末)The International Film Festival is coming. Your school is going to choose a film for you to watch. Can you introduce your favorite film to your schoolmates? Write at least 50 words about the topic “My favourite film”. (以“我最喜欢的电影”为题写一篇不少于 50字的短文。） ●Which film is your favourite? ●What type of film is it? ●What is the film about? ●Why do you like the film? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Favourite Film My favourite film is Lion King. Now I’d like to share it with you. It’s an animated film. It’s about a young lion named Simba who becomes the king of the Pride Lands after many adventures. I like this film because the characters are very interesting and the story is full of excitement. The music is also amazing. It teaches us about bravery, friendship, and family. I think that everyone should watch Lion King. It’s a film that stays with you forever. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括4个问题要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一、三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山：介绍自己最喜欢的电影名字； 第二步，具体介绍电影的类型、其主要内容以及喜欢的理由； 第三步，呼吁大家观看这部电影。 [亮点词汇] ①be full of 充满 ②share sth. with sb. 与某人分享某物 [高分句型] ①I think that everyone should watch Lion King. (宾语从句) ②It’s a film that stays with you forever. (that引导的限制性定语从句) 2．(24-25七上·上海普陀区·期末)假如你是李华，请你谈谈你理想中的智能之家。文章需要包括你的主题句(topic sentence)和支撑观点的句子(supporting sentences)，且两者可以相互印证。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 In recent years, a smart home has become increasingly popular. I am fortunate enough to have a smart home, which makes my life more convenient. The smart thermostat is my favourite thing. It can ensure that the temperature is always comfortable so that I can focus on my study. At the same time, It can learn my habits and adjust the temperature. Another product is a smart speaker. It looks like a small can. Every morning, I say, “Play my favourite song.” And it starts playing music right away. Sometimes, it can also tell me funny stories. I’m so happy. It makes my life more interesting. There is a smart refrigerator in my house. It’s not just a normal fridge. It has a big screen on the door. I can see what’s inside without opening it. For example, when I want a yogurt, look at the screen and find it easily. It can also remind my mom when the food is going to be bad. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“主题句和支撑观点的句子”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。直接引出智能生活给自己的影响； 第二步，具体阐述智能之家有什么；并写出理由。 [亮点词汇] ①be fortunate enough to 足够幸运做 ②focus on 集中在 ③look like 看上去像 [高分句型] ①I am fortunate enough to have a smart home, which makes my life more convenient.（which引导的非限制性定语从句） ②It can ensure that the temperature is always comfortable so that I can focus on my study. （that引导的宾语从句） ③For example, when I want a yogurt, look at the screen and find it easily.（when引导的时间状语从句） 3．(24-25七上·上海欣竹中学·期末)Write at least 60 words on the topic “My favourite mountain/ river”. Decide to write about your favourite mountain/ river. 作文需包含以下内容：1. What is your favourite mountain/ river? 2. List at least two reasons why you like it. 3. How do you feel about it? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My favorite river is the Yangtze River. It is the longest river in China and one of the most important rivers in the world. I like the Yangtze River for several reasons. Firstly, it has a rich history and culture. Along the river, there are many ancient cities and historical sites, which tell the story of China’s long history. Secondly, the scenery along the Yangtze River is breathtaking. From the majestic Three Gorges to the vast plains, every part of it shows the beauty of nature. When I think about the Yangtze River, I feel a deep sense of pride. It’s not just a river, but a symbol of our nation’s spirit. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，先引出主题，介绍自己最喜欢的山或河； 第二步，介绍喜欢它的原因； 第三步，书写结束语，表达对于它的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①the Yangtze River 长江 ②historical sites 历史遗迹 ③scenery 风景 ④breathtaking 惊人的，壮观的 ⑤Three Gorges 三峡 ⑥a symbol of ……的象征 [高分句型] ①Along the river, there are many ancient cities and historical sites, which tell the story of China’s long history.（which引导的非限制性定语从句） ②When I think about the Yangtze River, I feel a deep sense of pride.（when引导的时间状语从句） 4．(24-25七上·上海第三女子初级中学·期末)假设你是初中生李华，你正在参加一个为期2天的冬令营(a 2-day winter camp)。以下是你的日程表，请写一封明信片给你的朋友Tina，明信片须包含以下内容： 1. 你参加过的最喜欢的一项活动，并简述理由。 2. 你在冬令营的收获或感受。 Day 1 Morning Hiking Afternoon Ice fishing Evening Star Photography (Taking photos of stars) Day 2 Morning Mountain biking Afternoon Snowball fighting Evening Outdoor Music Evening Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. 注意： 1. 卷面整洁，书写端正； 2. 标点符号不占格； 3. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。 Dear Tina, I hope this postcard finds you well! _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Tina,       I hope this postcard finds you well! I am currently participating in a 2-day winter camp. The activities included hiking, ice fishing, star photography, mountain biking, snowball fighting, and an outdoor music evening.     My favorite activity was the evening star photography on Day 1 because it was magical to capture the night sky. This camp has taught me the importance of teamwork. Whether it was hiking or snowball fighting, every activity required us to work together and overcome challenges. I also made new friends and learned about different cultures from them.    I can’t wait to share more stories with you when I return!   Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总述冬令营的活动； 第二步，介绍自己最喜欢的一项活动及原因，自己的收获和感受； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①participate in参加 ②require sb to do sth要求某人做某事 ③can’t wait to do sth迫不及待做某事 ④share sth with sb与某人分享某事 [高分句型] ①My favorite activity was the evening star photography on Day 1 because it was magical to capture the night sky. (because引导原因状语从句) ②I can’t wait to share more stories with you when I return! (when引导时间状语从句) 5．(24-25七上·上海普陀区·期末)李华非常喜欢动画片和科幻类电影， 他的好朋友张明知道他的喜好， 为他挑选了一部电影并邀请李华一起去观看。 Task1 假如你是李华， 问张明三个关于这部电影的问题 (至少两个指向电影要素)： 1.____________________________________? 2.____________________________________? 3.____________________________________? Task2 假如你是张明， 请你向李华简要介绍这部挑选的电影。写不少于50词的短文 (注意：短文中不得出现个人校名及其他相关信息，不得照抄阅读原文，否则不予评分。) (以下海报供参考) ... ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Task 1 1. What’s the name of the movie 2. Who are the main actors 3. When and where are we going to watch it Task 2 例文 I know you love animations and sci-fi movies, so I picked a great one for us to watch! It’s called “The Wandering Earth.” This movie is a Chinese science fiction film that tells the story of how humanity tries to move the Earth out of its orbit to avoid a collision with the expanding Sun. The main actors include Wu Jing, Qu Chuxiao, and Li Guangjie. They play a team of brave people who work together to save the Earth. I think you’ll really enjoy it because it has amazing special effects and an exciting story. It’s a must-watch for any sci-fi fan! 【详解】Task 1 开放性试题，言之有理即可。例如，可询问“这部电影叫什么名字”“主要演员是谁”以及“我们什么时候在哪里看”，即1. What’s the name of the movie 2. Who are the main actors 3. When and where are we going to watch it。故填1. What’s the name of the movie 2. Who are the main actors 3. When and where are we going to watch it。 Task 2 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：本文主要是向李华简要介绍这部挑选的电影，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍这部电影的名字； 第二步，详细介绍这部电影； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①try to do sth.尽力做某事 ②work together团结合作 [高分句型] ①This movie is a Chinese science fiction film that tells the story of how humanity tries to move the Earth out of its orbit to avoid a collision with the expanding Sun. (定语从句) ②I think you’ll really enjoy it because it has amazing special effects and an exciting story. (宾语从句，原因状语从句) 1 / 2 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 专题09 写作满分范文 1．(24-25七上·上海闵行区·期末)Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文。）日记常被用来记录生活，抒发感想。请结合生活中你或你的家人、朋友遇到的一次困难或一个问题，写一篇日记，谈谈你是如何将其巧妙地解决的，以及从中学到了什么。 日记需包含以下内容： 1. What happened? 2. How did I feel? 3. What do I learn from it? （注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、、校名及其他相关信息，否则不于评分。） _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．(24-25七上·上海（虹口宝山黄埔松江）·期末)Write at least 50 words according to the given situation（根据以下情境写一篇不少于50个词的短文，标点符号不占格） 本学期，同学们学习了6个单元，每个单元包含一个阅读语篇（标题如下）。你最喜欢哪一个语篇？说明你喜欢该语篇的理由。 单元 阅读语篇 1 Solar stickers to power the world 2 A winning mascot 3 Amazing dabbawalas 4 Smart homes 5 “Sealed book” classic return s to the screen 6 The lifeblood of cities __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．(24-25七上·上海进才中学北校·期末)请你发挥想象力，设想一个你将来想要从事的职业，并简要介绍它的工作内容、技能与社会价值。请以“My Future Job”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文。Suggested questions: What job would you like to do in the future? What will you do in this job? What skills will you have? How important will the job be? _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．(24-25七上·上海建平中学西校·期末)Write a passage of at least 60 words according to the requirement. Write about “Learning from an experience”. You must include the following questions. (1) What happened? (2) What did you learn from it?/What have you learned from it? Learning from an experience ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．(24-25七上·上海浦东名校·期末)Write at least 60 words on the following situation.（根据情景，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格） 假设你是Joe，上个周末，你第一次尝试做小老师，帮助了你的同学Molly，教会了她不会读的英文单词，请你在朋友圈以文字的形式把你这次小老师的经历记录下来，说说具体的经过以及你的感想。 Moments Joe _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1．(24-25七上·上海浦东新区第四教育属·期末)The International Film Festival is coming. Your school is going to choose a film for you to watch. Can you introduce your favorite film to your schoolmates? Write at least 50 words about the topic “My favourite film”. (以“我最喜欢的电影”为题写一篇不少于 50字的短文。） ●Which film is your favourite? ●What type of film is it? ●What is the film about? ●Why do you like the film? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．(24-25七上·上海普陀区·期末)假如你是李华，请你谈谈你理想中的智能之家。文章需要包括你的主题句(topic sentence)和支撑观点的句子(supporting sentences)，且两者可以相互印证。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．(24-25七上·上海欣竹中学·期末)Write at least 60 words on the topic “My favourite mountain/ river”. Decide to write about your favourite mountain/ river. 作文需包含以下内容：1. What is your favourite mountain/ river? 2. List at least two reasons why you like it. 3. How do you feel about it? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．(24-25七上·上海第三女子初级中学·期末)假设你是初中生李华，你正在参加一个为期2天的冬令营(a 2-day winter camp)。以下是你的日程表，请写一封明信片给你的朋友Tina，明信片须包含以下内容： 1. 你参加过的最喜欢的一项活动，并简述理由。 2. 你在冬令营的收获或感受。 Day 1 Morning Hiking Afternoon Ice fishing Evening Star Photography (Taking photos of stars) Day 2 Morning Mountain biking Afternoon Snowball fighting Evening Outdoor Music Evening Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. 注意： 1. 卷面整洁，书写端正； 2. 标点符号不占格； 3. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。 Dear Tina, I hope this postcard finds you well! _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 5．(24-25七上·上海普陀区·期末)李华非常喜欢动画片和科幻类电影， 他的好朋友张明知道他的喜好， 为他挑选了一部电影并邀请李华一起去观看。 Task1 假如你是李华， 问张明三个关于这部电影的问题 (至少两个指向电影要素)： 1.____________________________________? 2.____________________________________? 3.____________________________________? Task2 假如你是张明， 请你向李华简要介绍这部挑选的电影。写不少于50词的短文 (注意：短文中不得出现个人校名及其他相关信息，不得照抄阅读原文，否则不予评分。) (以下海报供参考) ... ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1 / 2 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $