专题10 书面表达（期末真题汇编，天津专用）八年级英语上学期

专题10 书面表达 主题01 书信写作 （24-25学年八年级上·部分区·期末） 86．假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，给你的笔友David用英文写一封邮件，介绍一下你的学习和生活情况。 （1）周一到周五去学校上学。 （2）上午要在八点前到校，不能迟到。 （3）中午在学校吃午饭。 （4）下午有一小时的运动时间。 （5）晚上要做家庭作业。 （6）周六和周日不上学，你会…… 要求： （1）词数：70—80个。 （2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear David, How is everything going? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Do you have something to share? Looking forward to your reply! Yours, Li Hua （24-25学年八年级上·河东区·期末） 76．假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Tim春节期间想来天津，来信询问关于春节需要注意的礼仪及风俗习惯。请你根据下列表格提示用英语回信。 some traditions mustn’t/can’t/had better not On the first day of the Spring Festival use red paper for hongbao do any cleaning; break anything During the Spring Festival month eat lots of jiaozi cut your hair 要求： (1) 词数80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 (2) 行文连贯，可以适当发挥。 Dear Tim, I’m glad to hear from you. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wish. Yours, Li Hua （24-25学年八年级上·河西区·期末） 71．你的笔友（Nick）给你（李华）来信说寒假要来天津玩，请根据要点提示给他写一封80词左右的回信，说明你的想法。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 要点：（1）介绍天津的地理位置； （2）介绍天津冬天的气候和适合进行的活动； （3）告诉他来天津旅游的最好季节，并说明原因； （4）写出你给他的旅游建议。 Dear Nick, I’m very happy that you want to come to Tianjin during the winter holiday. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 主题02 短文投稿 （24-25学年八年级上·河北区·期末） 66．假如你是李华，你校正在开展“地震科普知识宣传进校园”主题教育活动，学校网站现征集题为What to do in an earthquake的稿件，请你根据以下内容要点，用英语写一篇短文投稿。 （1）在学校内：躲在课桌下方，远离窗户；当地面停止晃动时迅速离开教学楼；走出去，在操场上集合；保持冷静，要勇敢。 （2）在学校外：不要站在路灯附近或者电线下面；远离建筑物；去最近的公园或广场，但要远离大桥和树木。 （3）你认为…… 要求： （1）词数：70~90个； （2）题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数； （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 参考词汇：集合gather What to do in an earthquake Although we have little or no idea when an earthquake will happen, we should know ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （24-25学年八年级上·红桥区·期末） 71．上周英语课学习围绕主题“A famous story”展开，请你根据以下内容提示，写一篇英语短文，讲述《爱丽丝漫游奇境记》开头比较经典的片段。 1. 爱丽丝和姐姐坐在河边。 2. 姐姐在看书，爱丽丝无事可做。 3. 突然，爱丽丝看见一只带手表的白兔从旁边跑了过去。 4. 她站起来，追着兔子跑过田野。 5. 她跟着兔子跳下了洞，落到了一些干树叶上。 要求：1. 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 2. 词数：80字左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 3. 书写工整占1分。 参考词汇：追逐run after    下跌go down Last week, we learned Module 7 A famous story in English classes. Today, I will retell the story. One day, Alice was ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Now imagine what will happen next. 主题03 演讲稿 （24-25学年八年级上·九十中学·期末） 66．        6月5日是世界环境保护日，你校组织以“Being a volunteer of going green”为题的英语演讲比赛。假如李明参加比赛，请你以李明的名义写一篇英语演讲稿推荐自己，内容如下： 品质 助人为乐，善良，有礼貌 爱好 旅游，阅读，锻炼 事迹 做过环保志愿者，为WWF筹集过资金 感悟 地球是我们唯一的家园 不应乱扔垃圾，必须保护环境 措施 ……（至少两点） 要求：（1）要点完整，可适当发挥，使句子通顺、连贯；       （2）正确使用时态，语法正确，书写整洁；       （3）100词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Being a volunteer of going green Hello, everyone. I’m Li Ming. I want to be a volunteer of going green. I’m glad to make a speech here. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thank you for listening! 主题01 书信写作 （24-25学年八年级上·滨海新区·期末） 66．假如你叫滨滨，最近你班转来了一名外省市的学生新新。请你给他写一段话，简介一下滨海新区概况及其“文化地标”——滨海图书馆！ 要点如下： (1) 滨海新区位于天津的东南部，大约有两百万人口； (2) 滨海新区临近渤海，很多人喜欢吃海鲜； (3) 滨海图书馆是一座现代化的图书馆，是中国最美图书馆之一； (4) 滨海图书馆里藏书很多。去年暑假，你经常和朋友们去那里读书； (5) 你希望…… 要求： (1) 词数：80～100个。 (2) 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 (3) 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 参考词汇：渤海the Bohai Sea    海鲜seafood    滨海图书馆Binhai Library Dear Xinxin, I’m Binbin. I’d like to tell you something about our hometown—Binhai New Area. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Binbin （24-25学年八年级上·南开区·期末） 61．假如你是李华，你的朋友Tony要在寒假来天津游玩，请你根据以下信息给他写一封电子邮件，介绍你的家乡天津，并欢迎他来天津。 （1）天津有大约600年的历史，位于中国东部，有1300多万人口； （2）天津比以前更繁华，交通更方便，有优质的公共服务； （3）可以乘船游海河，去茶馆听相声，体验天津老百姓的生活； （4）天津的冬天很冷，你需要注意保暖； （5）补充一条你的建议。 参考词汇：海河 Haihe River 相声 cross talk 要求：（1）词数：80词左右。包含以上所有要点，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 （2）字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清楚。 （3）开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tony, I know that you will come to Tianjin to spend your winter holiday. I’d like to introduce my hometown to you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （24-25学年八年级上·西青区·期末） 66．你的笔友(Jenny) 给你(Mary) 来信说打算寒假来天津玩，请你给她写一封80词左右的回信说明你的想法。已给出部分不计入总词数。 提示： 1. 天津的冬天寒冷而干燥，气温通常在零度以下。 2. 冬天有时候会下雪，可以去滑雪。 3. 天津之眼是游览的最佳景点，从天津之眼上可以看到天津的大部分区域。 4. 可以体验春节，了解中国传统习俗。 5. 建议：带相机，穿暖和的衣服。 要求： (1) 词数：80词左右。 (2) 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 参考词汇：传统习俗traditional customs   去滑雪go skiing Dear Jenny, I’m very happy that you want to come to Tianjin during your winter holiday. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Mary （24-25学年八年级上·耀华中学·期末） 66．中小学生的安全一直是广大家长关注的问题。假设你是王伟，你的英国笔友David来信询问你们学校在假期对学生的要求。请你根据以下要点用英语给他回一封邮件。 要点：1. 家庭安全。小心用电用火，外出时关好门窗； 2. 自身安全。不要独自去河里、湖里滑冰、游泳； 3. 补充至少一条。 要求：1. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 内容须包括以上要点，可适当发挥。 Dear David, I’m very glad to receive your e-mail. Now let me tell you our school’s safety rules for our holiday. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Wang Wei （24-25学年八年级上·五十五中学·期末） 66．假设你叫王林，你的一位外国朋友Tony要来中国参观，你给他介绍一下中国人的生活习惯。请根据下列提示给Tony发一封电子邮件。要点提示： 1. 车辆都靠右行驶，出行可以选择乘坐公交或地铁，步行或骑自行车是最健康的方式。 2. 人们一般每天吃三顿饭，没有下午茶，家人通常在一起吃晚餐。   3. 参加聚会经常带些小礼物，收到礼物用双手接，不要马上打开。 4. 中国人很友好…… 要求： 1. 词数在80词左右，短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 2. 所有要点提示必须用完，不得逐字翻译。 3. 字迹工整，卷面整洁。 4. 不得用真实姓名。 Dear Tony, I am very happy to hear that you will come to visit China. Now let me tell you some manners and customs. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Wang Lin / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 专题10 书面表达 主题01 书信写作 （24-25学年八年级上·部分区·期末） 86．假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，给你的笔友David用英文写一封邮件，介绍一下你的学习和生活情况。 （1）周一到周五去学校上学。 （2）上午要在八点前到校，不能迟到。 （3）中午在学校吃午饭。 （4）下午有一小时的运动时间。 （5）晚上要做家庭作业。 （6）周六和周日不上学，你会…… 要求： （1）词数：70—80个。 （2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear David, How is everything going? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Do you have something to share? Looking forward to your reply! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear David, How is everything going? I hope this email finds you well. I wanted to tell you a bit about my school and daily life. From Monday to Friday, I go to school. I need to be there before 8 a.m. in the morning; being late is not allowed. We have classes and in the middle of the day, I have lunch at school. It’s quite tasty! In the afternoon, we get an hour for sports, which I really enjoy. After school, I have homework to do in the evening. On Saturdays and Sundays, I don’t go to school. Instead, I usually spend time with my family, sometimes going for a picnic or visiting relatives. I also like to read books and watch movies to relax. Do you have something to share? Looking forward to your reply! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括周一到周五的学习安排和周六周日的活动，考生应注意不要遗漏这些要点，并可以适当添加细节，使描述更加生动。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。开头已经给出“How is everything going?”，这里可以紧接着表达写邮件的目的，即分享自己的学习和生活情况； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。描述周一到周五的学习情况，包括到校时间、午餐安排、下午的运动时间以及晚上的家庭作业；描述周六和周日的活动安排，这部分可以发挥，比如提到参加兴趣班、与家人共度时光、进行户外活动等； 第三步，书写结语。表达对David的期待，希望他能回信分享他的生活，与“Looking forward to your reply!”相呼应。 [亮点词汇] ①from Monday to Friday从周一到周五 ②be allowed被允许 ③in the middle of在……中间 ④spend time with与……共度时光 [高分句型] In the afternoon, we get an hour for sports, which I really enjoy.（定语从句） （24-25学年八年级上·河东区·期末） 76．假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Tim春节期间想来天津，来信询问关于春节需要注意的礼仪及风俗习惯。请你根据下列表格提示用英语回信。 some traditions mustn’t/can’t/had better not On the first day of the Spring Festival use red paper for hongbao do any cleaning; break anything During the Spring Festival month eat lots of jiaozi cut your hair 要求： (1) 词数80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 (2) 行文连贯，可以适当发挥。 Dear Tim, I’m glad to hear from you. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wish. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Tim,     I’m glad to hear from you. During the Spring Festival, there are some traditions you should know. On the first day, people use red paper for hongbao,which is a symbol of good luck and prosperity. However, you mustn’t do any cleaning or break anything because it might sweep away good fortune. During the Spring Festival month, people usually eat lots of jiaozi, a delicious kind of dumpling. However, it is often said you had better not cut your hair, as it is believed to lead to a loss of wealth. People also visit relatives and friends and send each other good wishes. Enjoy your visit to Tianjin. I believe you will have a great time here.     Best wish. Yours,   Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是书信； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写作意图。借用“春节期间，有一些习俗你应该知道。”来引出重点介绍的内容。 第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——春节第一天、春节期间的传统习俗及必须做或不能做的事情等均要一一阐述。 第三步：书写结语。表达“我相信你会在这里度过愉快的时光。”的美好祝福。 [亮点词汇] ①a symbol of……的象征 ②sweep away扫走 ③have a great time玩得开心 [高分句型] ①On the first day, people use red paper for hongbao, which is a symbol of good luck and prosperity. (定语从句） ②I believe you will have a great time here. (宾语从句) （24-25学年八年级上·河西区·期末） 71．你的笔友（Nick）给你（李华）来信说寒假要来天津玩，请根据要点提示给他写一封80词左右的回信，说明你的想法。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 要点：（1）介绍天津的地理位置； （2）介绍天津冬天的气候和适合进行的活动； （3）告诉他来天津旅游的最好季节，并说明原因； （4）写出你给他的旅游建议。 Dear Nick, I’m very happy that you want to come to Tianjin during the winter holiday. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Nick, I’m very happy that you want to come to Tianjin during the winter holiday. Tianjin is a beautiful and modern city on the east coast of China. Winter is the coldest season of the year. Sometimes it snows and the temperature is below zero. However, you can go skating in the park and build a snowman. You can also experience the Chinese Spring Festival to know more about Chinese culture. I think the best season to come to Tianjin is in autumn. It is neither too cold nor too hot. The green leaves start to turn gold, then brown. Bring your camera so you can take photos of the autumn trees. I’m sure you will have a wonderful time here. Hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，借用文章已给开头，介绍天津地理位置； 第二步，推荐最佳旅游季节并解释原因， 并介绍天津冬季的气候及适合的活动； 第三步，补充给出旅游建议，并收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①neither…nor既不……也不 ②take photos拍照 [高分句型] ①I think the best season to come to Tianjin is in autumn.（宾语从句） ②Bring your camera so you can take photos of the autumn trees.（祈使句） 主题02 短文投稿 （24-25学年八年级上·河北区·期末） 66．假如你是李华，你校正在开展“地震科普知识宣传进校园”主题教育活动，学校网站现征集题为What to do in an earthquake的稿件，请你根据以下内容要点，用英语写一篇短文投稿。 （1）在学校内：躲在课桌下方，远离窗户；当地面停止晃动时迅速离开教学楼；走出去，在操场上集合；保持冷静，要勇敢。 （2）在学校外：不要站在路灯附近或者电线下面；远离建筑物；去最近的公园或广场，但要远离大桥和树木。 （3）你认为…… 要求： （1）词数：70~90个； （2）题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数； （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 参考词汇：集合gather What to do in an earthquake Although we have little or no idea when an earthquake will happen, we should know ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 What to do in an earthquake Although we have little or no idea when an earthquake will happen, we should know how to protect ourselves. If we are in school, we should hide under desks and stay away from windows. When the ground stops shaking, leave the building quickly and gather on the playground. Always keep calm and be brave. If we are outside, we should avoid standing near street lights or under electric lines. Stay away from buildings and go to the nearest park or square, keeping clear of bridges and trees. I believe that knowing how to respond during an earthquake can help save lives. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍地震来了在校内校外应该做什么； 第二步，介绍自己的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①stay away from远离 ②keep calm保持冷静 [高分句型] ①When the ground stops shaking, leave the building quickly and gather on the playground.（时间状语从句） ②Stay away from buildings and go to the nearest park or square, keeping clear of bridges and trees.（祈使句） （24-25学年八年级上·红桥区·期末） 71．上周英语课学习围绕主题“A famous story”展开，请你根据以下内容提示，写一篇英语短文，讲述《爱丽丝漫游奇境记》开头比较经典的片段。 1. 爱丽丝和姐姐坐在河边。 2. 姐姐在看书，爱丽丝无事可做。 3. 突然，爱丽丝看见一只带手表的白兔从旁边跑了过去。 4. 她站起来，追着兔子跑过田野。 5. 她跟着兔子跳下了洞，落到了一些干树叶上。 要求：1. 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 2. 词数：80字左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 3. 书写工整占1分。 参考词汇：追逐run after    下跌go down Last week, we learned Module 7 A famous story in English classes. Today, I will retell the story. One day, Alice was ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Now imagine what will happen next. 【答案】 Last week, we learned Module 7 A famous story in English classes. Today, I will retell the story. One day, Alice was sitting by the river with her sister. Her sister was reading a book, but Alice was bored because she had nothing to do. Suddenly, Alice saw a white rabbit with a watch running past them. She stood up and followed the rabbit across the field. The rabbit disappeared down a rabbit hole, and Alice followed it. She jumped down a hole after the rabbit and landed on a pile of dry leaves. This was how her amazing adventure started. Now imagine what will happen next. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般过去时； ③提示：根据提示内容讲述《爱丽丝漫游奇境记》开头比较经典的片段，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，根据提示内容详细讲述《爱丽丝漫游奇境记》开头比较经典的片段； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①stand up站起来 ②see sb. doing sth.看见某人在做某事 [高分句型] ①but Alice was bored because she had nothing to do. (原因状语从句) ②This was how her amazing adventure started. (表语从句) 主题03 演讲稿 （24-25学年八年级上·九十中学·期末） 66．        6月5日是世界环境保护日，你校组织以“Being a volunteer of going green”为题的英语演讲比赛。假如李明参加比赛，请你以李明的名义写一篇英语演讲稿推荐自己，内容如下： 品质 助人为乐，善良，有礼貌 爱好 旅游，阅读，锻炼 事迹 做过环保志愿者，为WWF筹集过资金 感悟 地球是我们唯一的家园 不应乱扔垃圾，必须保护环境 措施 ……（至少两点） 要求：（1）要点完整，可适当发挥，使句子通顺、连贯；       （2）正确使用时态，语法正确，书写整洁；       （3）100词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Being a volunteer of going green Hello, everyone. I’m Li Ming. I want to be a volunteer of going green. I’m glad to make a speech here. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thank you for listening! 【答案】 Being a volunteer of going green Hello, everyone. I’m Li Ming. I want to be a volunteer of going green. I’m glad to make a speech here. I’m kind to others. I’m willing to help others any time. I know the importance of good manners. In my free time, I like travelling, reading and exercising. I have ever worked as a volunteer for protecting the environment. I have also organized a charity show to raise money for WWF. Earth is our only home. We shouldn’t drop the litter carelessly. I think it’s necessary for everyone to protect the environment. If we work together, we can make the world a better place. If I can be a volunteer, I can do many things for our environment. I can save water by taking shorter showers and turning off the tap when we brush our teeth. I can separate waste into different groups so that it can be recycled. I must try my best to make a big difference to the Earth. Thank you for listening! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：本文的主要时态是“一般现在时”； ③提示：按照题目表格内的内容完成本篇书面表达，注意不能遗漏要点，可适当发挥；要使用正确的时态和表达方法，使句子通顺、连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍个人品质、爱好 、及参与过的环保活动； 第二步，描述对世界环境保护的感受； 第三步，陈述至少两条保护环境的措施。 [亮点词汇] ①be willing to 愿意做某事 ②good manners 良好的礼仪 ③organize a charity show 组织一次慈善演出 ④separate...into... 把……分成…… ⑤make a difference to 对……造成影响 [高分句型] ①I think it’s necessary for everyone to protect the environment. (宾语从句；it is+形容词+for sb to do sth.) ②If we work together, we can make the world a better place．(if引导条件状语从句) 主题01 书信写作 （24-25学年八年级上·滨海新区·期末） 66．假如你叫滨滨，最近你班转来了一名外省市的学生新新。请你给他写一段话，简介一下滨海新区概况及其“文化地标”——滨海图书馆！ 要点如下： (1) 滨海新区位于天津的东南部，大约有两百万人口； (2) 滨海新区临近渤海，很多人喜欢吃海鲜； (3) 滨海图书馆是一座现代化的图书馆，是中国最美图书馆之一； (4) 滨海图书馆里藏书很多。去年暑假，你经常和朋友们去那里读书； (5) 你希望…… 要求： (1) 词数：80～100个。 (2) 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 (3) 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 参考词汇：渤海the Bohai Sea    海鲜seafood    滨海图书馆Binhai Library Dear Xinxin, I’m Binbin. I’d like to tell you something about our hometown—Binhai New Area. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Binbin 【答案】 Dear Xinxin, I’m Binbin. I’d like to tell you something about our hometown—Binhai New Area. It’s located in the southeast of Tianjin, with a population of about two million people. Binhai New Area is close to the Bohai Sea, and many people here enjoy eating fresh seafood. One of our cultural landmarks is the Binhai Library, a modern library, and it’s considered one of the most beautiful libraries in China. It houses a large number of books, and last summer vacation, I often went there with my friends to read. I believe you’ll like it here. I hope we can go to Binhai Library together soon! Yours, Binbin 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍滨海新区的地理位置、人口等情况； 第二步，介绍滨海图书馆，包括外观、馆藏和自己在图书馆的活动等； 第三步，表达自己的希望。 [亮点词汇] ①be located in坐落于 ②be close to靠近 [高分句型] ①Binhai New Area is close to the Bohai Sea, and many people here enjoy eating fresh seafood. (并列句) ②I hope we can go to Binhai Library together soon! (宾语从句) （24-25学年八年级上·南开区·期末） 61．假如你是李华，你的朋友Tony要在寒假来天津游玩，请你根据以下信息给他写一封电子邮件，介绍你的家乡天津，并欢迎他来天津。 （1）天津有大约600年的历史，位于中国东部，有1300多万人口； （2）天津比以前更繁华，交通更方便，有优质的公共服务； （3）可以乘船游海河，去茶馆听相声，体验天津老百姓的生活； （4）天津的冬天很冷，你需要注意保暖； （5）补充一条你的建议。 参考词汇：海河 Haihe River 相声 cross talk 要求：（1）词数：80词左右。包含以上所有要点，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 （2）字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清楚。 （3）开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tony, I know that you will come to Tianjin to spend your winter holiday. I’d like to introduce my hometown to you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Tony,    I know that you will come to Tianjin to spend your winter holiday. I’d like to introduce my hometown to you. Tianjin has a history of about 600 years and is located in eastern China with a population of over 13 million. It is more prosperous than before, with convenient transportation and excellent public services. You can take a boat trip on the Haihe River and visit teahouses to listen to cross talk, experiencing the local life. The winter in Tianjin is very cold, so please keep warm. Additionally, I suggest visiting the Tianjin Eye for a panoramic view of the city.    Yours,    Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。    [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出即将介绍天津的话题； 第二步，具体阐述天津的历史、人口、繁华程度、交通便利性及公共服务； 第三步，提出游玩建议，包括乘船游海河、听相声、注意保暖等； 第四步，补充个人建议，如参观天津之眼。    [亮点词汇] ①prosperous繁华的 ②convenient transportation便利的交通 ③excellent public services优质的公共服务    [高分句型] ①Tianjin has a history of about 600 years and is located in eastern China with a population of over 13 million. (with复合结构) ②You can take a boat trip on the Haihe River and visit teahouses to listen to cross talk, experiencing the local life. (动词不定式作目的状语) （24-25学年八年级上·西青区·期末） 66．你的笔友(Jenny) 给你(Mary) 来信说打算寒假来天津玩，请你给她写一封80词左右的回信说明你的想法。已给出部分不计入总词数。 提示： 1. 天津的冬天寒冷而干燥，气温通常在零度以下。 2. 冬天有时候会下雪，可以去滑雪。 3. 天津之眼是游览的最佳景点，从天津之眼上可以看到天津的大部分区域。 4. 可以体验春节，了解中国传统习俗。 5. 建议：带相机，穿暖和的衣服。 要求： (1) 词数：80词左右。 (2) 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 参考词汇：传统习俗traditional customs   去滑雪go skiing Dear Jenny, I’m very happy that you want to come to Tianjin during your winter holiday. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Mary 【答案】 Dear Jenny, I’m very happy that you want to come to Tianjin during your winter holiday. Let me tell you something about it. The winter in Tianjin is cold and dry, with the temperature usually below zero. Don’t forget to wear your warm clothes. It snows from time to time, so you can go skiing. The best place to visit is the Tianjin Eye, because you can see the most parts of the city from it. What’s more, you’ll have the chance to experience the Spring Festival and know Chinese traditional customs. I suggest you bring your camera to take beautiful pictures. I’m looking forward to seeing you. Hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Mary 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：应包含提示内容，并适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表示收到对方来信的心情； 第二步，围绕天气、景点等介绍天津； 第三步，表示期待对方的回信。 [亮点词汇] ①from time to time时不时地 ②What’s more更重要的是 ③have the chance to do sth.有机会做某事 [高分句型] ①Don’t forget to wear your warm clothes.（祈使句） ②I suggest you bring your camera to take beautiful pictures.（宾语从句） （24-25学年八年级上·耀华中学·期末） 66．中小学生的安全一直是广大家长关注的问题。假设你是王伟，你的英国笔友David来信询问你们学校在假期对学生的要求。请你根据以下要点用英语给他回一封邮件。 要点：1. 家庭安全。小心用电用火，外出时关好门窗； 2. 自身安全。不要独自去河里、湖里滑冰、游泳； 3. 补充至少一条。 要求：1. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 内容须包括以上要点，可适当发挥。 Dear David, I’m very glad to receive your e-mail. Now let me tell you our school’s safety rules for our holiday. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Wang Wei 【答案】 Dear David, I’m very glad to receive your e-mail. Now let me tell you our school’s safety rules for our holiday. First, we should be careful with electricity and fire at home. And we must close the doors and windows when we go out. Second, we are not allowed to go skating or swimming alone in rivers or lakes. Besides, we should also pay attention to traffic safety and follow the traffic rules. Also, we are told to be careful with strangers. We shouldn’t talk to them or go anywhere with them without our parents’ permission. I think these rules are necessary as safety comes first. Have a good summer holiday! Yours, Wang Wei 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封邮件； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，具体阐述学校在假期对学生的要求； 第三步，书写结语，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①be careful with小心 ②be allowed to do sth.被允许做某事 ③pay attention to注意 [高分句型] ①And we must close the doors and windows when we go out. (时间状语从句) ②I think these rules are necessary as safety comes first. (宾语从句) （24-25学年八年级上·五十五中学·期末） 66．假设你叫王林，你的一位外国朋友Tony要来中国参观，你给他介绍一下中国人的生活习惯。请根据下列提示给Tony发一封电子邮件。要点提示： 1. 车辆都靠右行驶，出行可以选择乘坐公交或地铁，步行或骑自行车是最健康的方式。 2. 人们一般每天吃三顿饭，没有下午茶，家人通常在一起吃晚餐。   3. 参加聚会经常带些小礼物，收到礼物用双手接，不要马上打开。 4. 中国人很友好…… 要求： 1. 词数在80词左右，短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 2. 所有要点提示必须用完，不得逐字翻译。 3. 字迹工整，卷面整洁。 4. 不得用真实姓名。 Dear Tony, I am very happy to hear that you will come to visit China. Now let me tell you some manners and customs. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Wang Lin 【答案】 Dear Tony, I am very happy to hear that you will come to visit China. Now let me tell you some manners and customs. First of all, in China, vehicles drive on the right side of the road. When going out, you can choose to take buses or subways. What’s more, walking and cycling are the healthiest ways to travel. Secondly, people generally have three meals a day. There is no afternoon tea. Family members usually have dinner together. It’s a great time for family reunion and communication. When it comes to parties, it’s a common practice to bring some small gifts. When you receive a gift, you should take it with both hands and don’t open it immediately. It’s considered polite. In addition, Chinese people are very friendly. They are always ready to help others. You will surely feel welcome and warm during your stay here. I hope you will have a wonderful trip in China. If you have any questions, please feel free to let me know. Best regards. Yours, Wang Lin 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括所列4个方面的提示要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第二、三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，告知一些习俗和礼仪； 第二步，依据要点提示，逐一介绍礼仪和习俗，适当拓展； 第三步，书写总结，表达期待。 [亮点词汇] ①in addition 另外，此外 ②feel free to do sth. 随意做某事 [高分句型] ①I hope you will have a wonderful trip in China. (宾语从句) ②What’s more, walking and cycling are the healthiest ways to travel. (动名词作主语) / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $