内容正文:
专题08 书面表达
主题01 人与社会——家乡和社会变迁
1.(24-25九年级上·福建福州·阶段检测)随着社会的快速发展,我们的生活发生着巨大的变化,尤其是在居住环境、交通、购物、休闲活动等方面。John是你的一位美国朋友,他是一名不折不扣的“中国迷”,尤其对近些年来中国的变化非常感兴趣。请你以“The Great Changes Have Taken Place Around Me”为题,写一篇短文向他详细介绍这些变化。
Feeling
…
注意事项:
(1)必须包含所有图中提示信息,可适当发挥,词数80左右;
(2)意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
(3)请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
The Great Changes Have Taken Place Around me
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____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.(25-26九年级上·福建福州·阶段检测)作为全国文明城市福州的市民,我们为我们的家乡福州感到骄傲与自豪。假如你是李杰,你的英国朋友Peter下个月要来福州游玩,请你根据以下信息,写一封信给他,简单介绍一下我们的家乡。词数80左右。
My hometown
basic
information
location:
in the southeast of...
population:
more than 1.3 million
history:
over 5 thousand years
places of interest:
Mount Gu; Zhenhai Tower;
The Three Lanes and Seven Alleys
changes
high buildings,
ring roads
…
注意事项:
(1)必须包含提示内容,并适当发挥,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
(3)请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
参考词汇:attract v. 吸引
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to hear that you’ll come for a visit to Fuzhou. Now let me tell you something about it.
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____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Jie
3.(25-26九年级上·湖北省直辖县级单位·阶段检测)近几年来,随着国家的快速发展,我们居住的城市发生了很大变化,人们的生活方式也相应地改变,同时也带来一些环境问题。请根据以下提示,以“Changes of My City”为题,写一篇英语作文,讲述城市的变化及人民生活水平的提高并写出你对城市未来的期望。
In the past
Now
Transportation
buses, bikes
e-bikes, e-cars, subway
Life services
Leisure activity
shop in markets, watch TV at home, play cards..
online shopping, play in community squares, travel abroad
Living environment
dirty rivers, few trees
clean, flowers...
Problem and expectation(期望)
……
要求
1)内容完整,意思连贯语句通顺,书写规范;
2)字数80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Changes of My City
In recent years, with the rapid development of our country, great changes have taken place in the city we live in.
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4.(25-26九年级上·福建莆田·期中)学校的英文报正开展“赞美家乡”主题征文,请你以“Amazing Putian”为题,结合以下图示,写一篇短文投稿。
提示词: improve; keep in touch with; proud
Living conditions:
bright; comfortable
Public transportation:
convenient; excellent
Communication:
easier; quicker
Environment:
beautiful; clean
要求:
1. 短文必须包含所有要点,可恰当发挥;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 词数在80词左右 (开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Amazing Putian
Putian is a lovable and livable place. It’s my great honor to tell you the great changes about it.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5.(25-26九年级上·福建漳州·期中)国庆假期,来自外地的朋友小明来漳州游玩。和他一起漫步在清澈的九龙江畔,他由衷地赞叹:“现在的漳州真是水清岸绿,像个大花园!跟以前听说的情况完全不一样了。”请你作为家乡的小主人,以“My Greener Hometown”为题,结合下图信息,向小明介绍一下近几年漳州所发生的变化,并谈谈我们还能为家乡的环保做些什么。
In the past
Now
Changes
dirty
clean, clear
small, crowded
tall, bright
How to make Zhangzhou more beautiful?
Your advice: 1、...2、...3、...
注意事项:1.必须包含以上信息,且适当发挥;
2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3.词数:80词左右;
4.请勿在文章中出现师生姓名、校名。
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____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________主题02 人与自然——环境保护
6.(25-26九年级上·福建三明·期中)勤俭节约是我国的传统美德,最近学校正在举行“三节”(节水,节电,节粮)的主题活动。所以我们应该从身边的点滴做起,节约能源。你是如何做的?请结合自己的生活日常,写一篇如何节约能源的小短文。
内容要点:
参考词汇:
don’t take, turn off, cut down, electricity, instead of
写作要求:80词左右,文章开头已给(不计入词数)文章必须包括提示全部内容,并适当发挥,书写工整。
要求:
How to save energy
It is important to save energy in our daily life. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7.(25-26九年级上·福建福州·期中)假如你是李华,在校园和日常生活中,常常看到一些不环保的行为。作为学生,应该在校园和家里做什么才能成为环保小使者,为环境保护做出一份贡献呢?请以How to Contribute to a Greener World为题写一篇演讲稿,字数80左右。
注意:以下提示词须全部用上。
How to Contribute to a Greener World
At school
1. turn off lights when.....
2. use both sides of paper
3. not spit
At home
1. turn off the tap after washing hands
2. not use disposable cups
3. sort rubbish
注意事项:
1.必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名及校名。
How to Contribute to a Greener World
It’s my honor to give a speech here on how to contribute to a Greener World.
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8.(25-26九年级上·福建泉州·期中)假设你是李华,上周六你校环保社团开展了以“Green School Day”为主题的实践活动。请结合以下提示,用英语给朋友Judy写一封邮件,分享活动的目的、内容、感受以及你的校园环保行动计划。词数80左右。
注意事项:
1.必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Judy,
How’s it going? I would like to tell you something about our Green School Day.
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Yours,
Li Hua
9.(25-26九年级上·福建福州·期中)近年来,零浪费(zero-waste)作为一种环保生活方式,引起全球关注。假设你是李华,你校英语角将组织以“How to be a zero-waste citizen (公民)”为题的英语演讲比赛,请根据以下导图写一篇英文演讲稿,号召大家积极参与环保行动。词数80词左右。
注意事项:
1. 内容包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥,举例说明相关建议。
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范。
3. 文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. As we know, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thank you for your listening!
10.(25-26九年级上·福建莆田·期中)地球是我们的家园,我们应该好好保护它。我国正在积极推进“碳达峰、碳中和”,作为中学生,我们应该怎样践行低碳生活呢?请你根据下面内容,用英文写一篇短文。词数80左右。
注意事项:
1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
How to Make Our Earth Better
The earth is our home.
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____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________If everyone can have a low-carbon lifestyle, our earth will be better and better.
主题03 人与自我——实践品质与工匠精神
11.(25-26九年级上·河南商丘·期中)“苟日新,日日新,又日新”古有四大发明,今有科技创新,从造纸术、指南针到移动支付、高速铁路,以及生活中常见的篮球、电视、手表等,都给我们的生活带来了改变和便利,假设你学校正在举办科技节,请你以“My Favorite Invention”为题用英语写一则演讲稿,介绍你最喜欢的发明。
写作提示:1. What is your favorite invention?
2. What is it used for?
3. Why do you like it best?
写作要求:1.文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校的名称;
2.词数100左右。
My Favorite Invention
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____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________12.(25-26九年级上·福建南平·阶段检测)假如你是李华,你的学校正在开展“To Be An Inventor”的英语征文活动。请你根据提示,写一篇英语短文投稿。词数80左右。
Why to be an inventor?
change the world, make our lives better…
How to be an inventor?
study hard, think creatively…
1. 必须包含所有提示的信息,可适当发挥;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。
To Be An Inventor
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____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________13.(24-25九年级上·福建莆田·期末)2024年12月,“2024年十大流行语”出炉。其中,数智化、未来产业等词汇跃居榜首,一方面展现了生活中科技的无所不在,另一方面也揭示了新兴产业与未来科技的广阔前景。假如你们学校正在举办校园创客节,你受邀参加以“科技改变生活”为主题的演讲比赛,请你根据以下信息,用英文写一篇短文,介绍身边的科技及优点。
要求:
1. 必须包括以上要点,可适当发挥。语句通顺、意思连贯,书写规范。
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。
3. 80词左右,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone!
It’s a great honor for me to speak here. The rapid development of science and technology has brought great changes to our life.
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____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’s all for my speech. Thank you.
14.(25-26九年级上·河南郑州·期中)生活中,许多发明都在悄然改变着我们的生活。假如你是九年级学生张明,你校英语校刊将举办以“A Great Invention That Changed My Life”为主题的征文活动。请根据以下写作提示和要求写一篇短文参加活动,讲述一项改变了你生活的伟大发明。
写作提示:
1. What is this invention?
2. How does it change your life?
3. What do you think of this invention?
写作要求:
1.文中须包含以上写作提示中的所有信息,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.词数100左右。
A Great Invention That Changed My Life
People have made many amazing inventions. The one that has brought a big change to my life is________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
15.(25-26九年级上·河南周口·期末)题目: 假设你是李华,你校将举办一场主题为“发明改变生活”的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下提示,写一篇演讲稿。
提示:介绍一项你认为最重要的发明(如:互联网、手机、高铁等)。说明它为什么重要,以及它如何改变了人们的生活。谈谈你对未来发明的期望。
要求:词数:90~110词。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone!
I’m Li Hua. It’s my honor to stand here to give a speech. My topic is “Inventions Change Our Lives”.
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专题08 书面表达
主题01 人与社会——家乡和社会变迁
1. The Great Changes Have Taken Place Around Me
参考范文:
The Great Changes Have Taken Place Around Me
With the rapid development of society, great changes have taken place around me, especially in living environment, transportation, shopping and leisure activities.
In the past, people lived in small houses. Now, many tall buildings have been built. For transportation, in the old days, people mainly rode bicycles. But now, there are various means of transportation like planes, trains and cars. When it comes to shopping, people used to go to small shops. Now, large supermarkets are everywhere, making shopping more convenient. In terms of leisure activities, people used to listen to the radio or play chess. Now, people can surf the Internet, travel and do many other interesting things.
I feel very happy and lucky to live in such a wonderful time. I believe our life will become better and better in the future.
2. 给 Peter 的信(介绍福州)
参考范文:
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to hear that you’ll come for a visit to Fuzhou. Now let me tell you something about it.
Fuzhou lies in the southeast of China. The population of Fuzhou is more than 1.3 million. Fuzhou has a long history of over 5 thousand years. Many places of interest are worth visiting, such as Mount Gu, Zhenhai Tower and The Three Lanes and Seven Alleys.
Great changes have taken place in Fuzhou. More and more ring roads have appeared and buildings in Fuzhou are becoming taller and brighter. There have been lots of shopping malls.
I’m looking forward to meeting you in my hometown.
Yours,
Li Jie
3. Changes of My City
参考范文:
Changes of My City
In recent years, with the rapid development of our country, great changes have taken place in the city we live in.
In the past, people went out by buses or bikes. Now, e-bikes, e-cars and subways are common. People used to shop in markets and watch TV at home. But now they enjoy online shopping, play in community squares and even travel abroad. Besides, rivers were dirty and there were few trees. Now the city is clean with many flowers.
But pollution from traffic is still a problem. I hope our city will become greener and more beautiful. I believe everyone will live a happier life here.
4. Amazing Putian
参考范文:
Amazing Putian
Putian is a lovable and livable place. It’s my great honor to tell you the great changes about it. First, people live a comfortable life in taller and brighter buildings. Second, our public transportation is excellent and convenient. Buses and taxis can take you to any part of the city if you like. Third, communication is easier and quicker. People can keep in touch with friends and relatives by telephone, cellphone and so on. Last but not least, the environment in Putian is beautiful and clean. There is no doubt that my hometown will become more and more beautiful. I am proud of my hometown.
5. My Greener Hometown
参考范文:
My Greener Hometown
Welcome to Zhangzhou, Xiaoming. In recent years, our hometown has changed a lot.
In the past, the rivers were dirty. Now, they are clean and clear. The old buildings were small and crowded. But now, there are many tall and bright buildings. To make Zhangzhou more beautiful, we can plant more flowers and trees. We must throw rubbish into bins. Also, we can go to school or work by bike or on foot.
Zhangzhou is getting greener. Let’s do our best to make it more beautiful.
主题 02 人与自然 —— 环境保护
6. How to save energy
参考范文:
How to save energy
It’s important to save energy in our daily life. I have some good ways to save energy.
First, I ride a bike to school. I don’t take the bus often. Second, I remember to turn off the lights to save electricity when I leave the classroom. Third, I collect empty bottles and waste paper for recycling to cut down waste. When I am not using water, I turn off the tap. Besides, I never waste food and we should take care of trees. Also, I sort rubbish and use cloth bags instead of plastic bags.
I will try my best to save energy.
7. How to Contribute to a Greener World
参考范文:
How to Contribute to a Greener World
It’s my honor to give a speech here on how to contribute to a Greener World. As students, we should take action in our daily life.
At school, we must turn off lights when leaving classrooms. We need to use both sides of paper. Also, we should not spit anywhere. At home, remember to turn off the tap after washing hands. We’d better not use disposable cups. It is important to sort rubbish in our free time. We can also tell more friends to join us.
Small actions make a big difference. Let’s work together to protect our environment.
8. 给 Judy 的邮件(介绍 Green School Day)
参考范文:
Dear Judy,
How’s it going? I would like to tell you something about our Green School Day.
Our school environmental club held this activity last Saturday. The purpose of it was to raise our environmental awareness. We did many things on that day. First, we listened to a speech about protecting the earth. Then, we watched some videos about pollution. Finally, we made posters to call on others to join us.
I felt it was a really meaningful experience. As for my plans, I will ride a bike to school instead of taking a car. I will also try my best to save water and paper in our school.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
9. How to be a zero-waste citizen(演讲稿)
参考范文:
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. As we know, zero-waste has become a popular green lifestyle. Today, we are facing serious problems of pollution and waste, so it is necessary to live a zero-waste life to protect our earth.
Here is some advice on how to be a zero-waste citizen. First, we should choose environmentally friendly products, such as using cloth bags instead of plastic ones. Second, we can recycle or reuse old books and bottles. Besides, we’d better finish all our food every meal to avoid food waste.
Small changes make a big difference. Let’s take action right now!
Thank you for your listening!
10. How to Make Our Earth Better
参考范文:
How to Make Our Earth Better
The earth is our home. As middle school students, it is our duty to live a low-carbon life to protect it. Here are some useful tips.
First, we should reduce pollution. We can sort rubbish and never throw litter around. Second, it is necessary to save energy. We had better turn off the lights to save electricity. When going out, we can choose to walk or ride a bike instead of taking cars. Finally, remember to reuse things, such as taking cloth bags instead of plastic bags when shopping.
If everyone can have a low-carbon lifestyle, our earth will be better and better.
主题 03 人与自我 —— 实践品质与工匠精神
11. My Favorite Invention(演讲稿)
参考范文:
My Favorite Invention
Good morning, everyone! My favorite invention is the smartphone.
It is used for many things—making calls, taking photos, navigating, and searching for information. During the pandemic, it even helped me take online classes.
Why do I like it best? First, it connects me with my family and friends anytime, anywhere. Second, it gives me quick access to knowledge, helping me learn new things every day. As the saying goes, “Renew yourself daily.” The smartphone truly makes that possible.
Inventions like this show us that human creativity is powerful. I hope one day I can create something useful too!
Thank you!
12. To Be An Inventor
参考范文:
To Be An Inventor
I dream of being an inventor because inventors can change the world and make our lives better. Many great inventions like smartphones have made communication easier and more convenient.
To become an inventor, I need to study hard, especially in science and math, as they are the foundation of invention. I also should think creatively and observe carefully in daily life, since good ideas often come from real needs.
I hope my future inventions can help people solve problems and bring more happiness to the world.
13. 科技改变生活(演讲稿)
参考范文:
Hello, everyone!
It’s a great honor for me to speak here. The rapid development of science and technology has brought great changes to our life.
Smart phones, robots, high-speed trains and electric cars are just a few examples of how technology is shaping our world. With smart phones, we can shop, learn and connect with others anytime, anywhere. Robots help with housework and homework, saving us time and energy. High-speed trains make travel faster and more comfortable, bringing distant places closer. Electric cars not only save energy but also protect the environment.
These technologies make life more convenient, efficient and sustainable. Let’s embrace the power of technology and create a better future together.
That’s all for my speech. Thank you.
14. A Great Invention That Changed My Life
参考范文:
A Great Invention That Changed My Life
People have made many amazing inventions. The one that has brought a big change to my life is the Internet.
The Internet is playing an important part in our daily life. It is useful to me in many ways. First of all, it can help me with my homework. I can find almost everything I need online. Secondly, it can make my life much easier. For example, I can shop and chat online. Finally, it can help me keep in touch with my friends. Through the Internet, I can make friends with people from all over the world.
The Internet makes my life more colorful and convenient. I’m sure it will bring even more changes to my life in the future.
15. 发明改变生活(演讲稿)
参考范文:
Good morning, everyone!
I’m Li Hua. It’s my honor to stand here to give a speech. My topic is “Inventions Change Our Lives”.
I believe the most important invention is the Internet. Firstly, it makes information easy to get. We can learn anything online quickly and clearly. It also helps us know the world better without going out. Secondly, it helps us connect with our friends far away through video calls. Life becomes more convenient. For example, we can shop and study at home.
In the future, I hope inventions will make our cities greener and solve some problems like pollution. I also hope more useful inventions will appear. Let’s welcome a better life brought by new inventions!
Thank you!
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专题08 书面表达
主题01 人与社会——家乡和社会变迁
1.(24-25九年级上·福建福州·阶段检测)随着社会的快速发展,我们的生活发生着巨大的变化,尤其是在居住环境、交通、购物、休闲活动等方面。John是你的一位美国朋友,他是一名不折不扣的“中国迷”,尤其对近些年来中国的变化非常感兴趣。请你以“The Great Changes Have Taken Place Around Me”为题,写一篇短文向他详细介绍这些变化。
Feeling
…
注意事项:
(1)必须包含所有图中提示信息,可适当发挥,词数80左右;
(2)意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
(3)请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
The Great Changes Have Taken Place Around me
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____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文
The Great Changes Have Taken Place Around Me With the rapid development of society, great changes have taken place around me, especially in living environment, transportation, shopping and leisure activities.
In the past, people lived in small houses. Now, many tall buildings have been built. For transportation, in the old days, people mainly rode bicycles. But now, there are various means of transportation like planes, trains and cars. When it comes to shopping, people used to go to small shops. Now, large supermarkets are everywhere, making shopping more convenient. In terms of leisure activities, people used to listen to the radio or play chess. Now, people can surf the Internet, travel and do many other interesting things.
I feel very happy and lucky to live in such a wonderful time. I believe our life will become better and better in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇看图作文;
②时态:以现在完成时、一般过去时和一般现在时为主;
③提示:文章围绕 “身边的巨大变化” 展开,清晰涵盖居住环境、交通、购物、休闲活动四个维度的对比,逻辑连贯,细节丰富,突出了 “变化” 这一核心要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题;
第二步,按 “过去——现在” 的对比结构,分别阐述四个维度的具体变化:;
第三步,结尾抒发个人感受,表达对当下生活的喜悦与幸运,并展望未来生活越来越好。
[亮点词汇]
①with the rapid development of随着…… 的快速发展
②in the past 在过去
③in terms of 就……而言
[高分句型]
①Now, large supermarkets are everywhere, making shopping more convenient.(现在分词短语作结果状语)
②I believe our life will become better and better in the future.(省略that的宾语从句)
2.(25-26九年级上·福建福州·阶段检测)作为全国文明城市福州的市民,我们为我们的家乡福州感到骄傲与自豪。假如你是李杰,你的英国朋友Peter下个月要来福州游玩,请你根据以下信息,写一封信给他,简单介绍一下我们的家乡。词数80左右。
My hometown
basic
information
location:
in the southeast of...
population:
more than 1.3 million
history:
over 5 thousand years
places of interest:
Mount Gu; Zhenhai Tower;
The Three Lanes and Seven Alleys
changes
high buildings,
ring roads
…
注意事项:
(1)必须包含提示内容,并适当发挥,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
(3)请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
参考词汇:attract v. 吸引
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to hear that you’ll come for a visit to Fuzhou. Now let me tell you something about it.
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____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Jie
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to hear that you’ll come for a visit to Fuzhou. Now let me tell you something about it.
Fuzhou lies in the southeast of China. The population of Fuzhou is more than 1.3 million. Fuzhou has a long history of over 5 thousand years. Many places of interest are worth visiting, such as Mount Gu, Zhenhai Tower and The Three Lanes and Seven Alleys.
Great changes have taken place in Fuzhou. More and more ring roads have appeared and buildings in Fuzhou are becoming taller and brighter. There have been lots of shopping malls.
I’m looking forward to meeting you in my hometown.
Yours,
Li Jie
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:城市介绍类应用文,以一般现在时为主,少量现在完成时辅助体现城市变化
明确要点:城市基本信息(地理位置、人口、历史)、城市名胜景点、城市发展变化、文末期待邀约
确定人称:第三人称(Fuzhou/It)为主,结尾使用第一人称(I/my)
注意事项:客观介绍城市特色,语句简洁地道,时态混用准确,内容贴合主题,无多余冗余信息
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:整体介绍福州基础概况,涵盖地理位置、人口、悠久历史及知名名胜古迹
主体段:重点阐述福州的城市发展巨变,从交通、建筑、商业配套三个维度展开说明
结尾段:抒发个人情感,发出邀约,收束全文,升华对家乡的热爱之情
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:城市基础概况
位置描述:in the southeast of China/in the southeastern part of China/located in East China’s Fujian Province
人口描述:the population of...is more than 1.3 million/has a population of over 1.3 million/with a population exceeding 1.3 million
历史描述:has a long history of over 5 thousand years/boast a time-honored history of more than 5,000 years/possess a history of five millennia
要点二:城市名胜景点
景点列举:Mount Gu/Zhenhai Tower/The Three Lanes and Seven Alleys/famous scenic spots/ historical relics/tourist attractions
景点评价:be worth visiting/be well-known for its scenery/attract countless tourists/be a must-visit place
要点三:城市发展变化
变化总述:Great changes have taken place/Tremendous changes have happened/The city has witnessed great development
交通建筑:more and more ring roads/taller and brighter buildings/numerous urban roads/modern high-rise buildings/spacious and bright architectures
商业配套:lots of shopping malls/a great number of commercial centers/shopping plazas and supermarkets
要点四:结尾情感表达
期待邀约:look forward to meeting you in my hometown/expect your arrival in my hometown/ welcome you to visit Fuzhou
3.(25-26九年级上·湖北省直辖县级单位·阶段检测)近几年来,随着国家的快速发展,我们居住的城市发生了很大变化,人们的生活方式也相应地改变,同时也带来一些环境问题。请根据以下提示,以“Changes of My City”为题,写一篇英语作文,讲述城市的变化及人民生活水平的提高并写出你对城市未来的期望。
In the past
Now
Transportation
buses, bikes
e-bikes, e-cars, subway
Life services
Leisure activity
shop in markets, watch TV at home, play cards..
online shopping, play in community squares, travel abroad
Living environment
dirty rivers, few trees
clean, flowers...
Problem and expectation(期望)
……
要求
1)内容完整,意思连贯语句通顺,书写规范;
2)字数80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Changes of My City
In recent years, with the rapid development of our country, great changes have taken place in the city we live in.
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【答案】
例文:
Changes of My City In recent years, with the rapid development of our country, great changes have taken place in the city we live in.
In the past, people went out by buses or bikes. Now, e-bikes, e-cars and subways are common. People used to shop in markets and watch TV at home. But now they enjoy online shopping, play in community squares and even travel abroad. Besides, rivers were dirty and there were few trees. Now the city is clean with many flowers.
But pollution from traffic is still a problem. I hope our city will become greener and more beautiful. I believe everyone will live a happier life here.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:说明文,以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。
明确要点:对比过去和现在在交通、生活服务和居住环境上的变化,指出问题并表达对城市未来的期望。
确定人称:第三人称和第一人称(I)
注意事项:字数80词左右。
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:总述城市发生了巨大变化。
主体段:分三个方面(交通、生活服务/休闲、居住环境)进行对比描述。
结尾段:指出问题并表达期望。
[第三步,要点展开]
要点一:对比交通的变化
交通的变化:In the past, people went out by buses or bikes. Now, e-bikes, e-cars and subways are common./means of transport/convenient/It has made our travel more efficient./Smart traffic offers us more choices.
要点二:对比生活服务的变化
生活服务的变化:People used to shop in markets and watch TV at home. But now they enjoy online shopping, play in community squares and even travel abroad./online shopping and square dancing are popular today/play in community squares/travel abroad/daily life/leisure activities/People’s lifestyles have changed a lot./Online shopping has become a new trend.
要点三:对比居住环境的变化
居住环境的变化:Besides, rivers were dirty and there were few trees. Now the city is clean with many flowers./living conditions/surroundings/fresh air/The city now looks like a big garden.
要点四:指出问题并表达期望
问题:pollution from traffic is still a problem/traffic brings some environmental problems
期待:I hope our city will become greener and more beautiful. I believe everyone will live a happier life here./It is important to protect the environment./I dream of living in a city with clean and beautiful surroundings.
4.(25-26九年级上·福建莆田·期中)学校的英文报正开展“赞美家乡”主题征文,请你以“Amazing Putian”为题,结合以下图示,写一篇短文投稿。
提示词: improve; keep in touch with; proud
Living conditions:
bright; comfortable
Public transportation:
convenient; excellent
Communication:
easier; quicker
Environment:
beautiful; clean
要求:
1. 短文必须包含所有要点,可恰当发挥;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 词数在80词左右 (开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Amazing Putian
Putian is a lovable and livable place. It’s my great honor to tell you the great changes about it.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Amazing Putian
Putian is a lovable and livable place. It’s my great honor to tell you the great changes about it. First, people live a comfortable life in taller and brighter buildings. Second, our public transportation is excellent and convenient. Buses and taxis can take you to any part of the city if you like. Third, communication is easier and quicker. People can keep in touch with friends and relatives by telephone, cellphone and so on. Last but not least, the environment in Putian is beautiful and clean. There is no doubt that my hometown will become more and more beautiful. I am proud of my hometown.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,引出话题;
第二步,根据提示介绍自己的家乡;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①honor荣幸
②public transportation公共交通
③convenient便利的
④keep in touch with…与……保持联系
⑤last but not least最后但并非最不重要
[高分句型]
There is no doubt that my hometown will become more and more beautiful. (that引导同位语从句)
5.(25-26九年级上·福建漳州·期中)国庆假期,来自外地的朋友小明来漳州游玩。和他一起漫步在清澈的九龙江畔,他由衷地赞叹:“现在的漳州真是水清岸绿,像个大花园!跟以前听说的情况完全不一样了。”请你作为家乡的小主人,以“My Greener Hometown”为题,结合下图信息,向小明介绍一下近几年漳州所发生的变化,并谈谈我们还能为家乡的环保做些什么。
In the past
Now
Changes
dirty
clean, clear
small, crowded
tall, bright
How to make Zhangzhou more beautiful?
Your advice: 1、...2、...3、...
注意事项:1.必须包含以上信息,且适当发挥;
2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3.词数:80词左右;
4.请勿在文章中出现师生姓名、校名。
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____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文:
My Greener Hometown
Welcome to Zhangzhou, Xiaoming. In recent years, our hometown has changed a lot.
In the past, the rivers were dirty. Now, they are clean and clear. The old buildings were small and crowded. But now, there are many tall and bright buildings. To make Zhangzhou more beautiful, we can plant more flowers and trees. We must throw rubbish into bins. Also, we can go to school or work by bike or on foot.
Zhangzhou is getting greener. Let’s do our best to make it more beautiful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材: 本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏对家乡过去和现在变化的描述要点,适当增加细节,使文章重点突出。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开头直接点明主题,总体介绍家乡的变化;
第二步:具体介绍家乡过去和现在的变化,包括河流、建筑等方面,还说明了让家乡更美的做法;
第三步:总结全文,呼吁大家为家乡更美努力。
[亮点词汇]
①in recent years近年来
②clean and clear干净清澈
③small and crowded又小又拥挤
④tall and bright高大明亮
⑤throw rubbish into bins把垃圾扔进垃圾桶
[高分句型]
①In the past, the rivers were dirty. Now, they are clean and clear. (通过对比过去和现在河流的状态,突出变化。)
②To make Zhangzhou more beautiful, we can plant more flowers and trees. (动词不定式作目的状语,表明做某事的目的。)
主题02 人与自然——环境保护
6.(25-26九年级上·福建三明·期中)勤俭节约是我国的传统美德,最近学校正在举行“三节”(节水,节电,节粮)的主题活动。所以我们应该从身边的点滴做起,节约能源。你是如何做的?请结合自己的生活日常,写一篇如何节约能源的小短文。
内容要点:
参考词汇:
don’t take, turn off, cut down, electricity, instead of
写作要求:80词左右,文章开头已给(不计入词数)文章必须包括提示全部内容,并适当发挥,书写工整。
要求:
How to save energy
It is important to save energy in our daily life. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文
How to save energy
It’s important to save energy in our daily life. I have some good ways to save energy.
First, I ride a bike to school. I don’t take the bus often. Second, I remember to turn off the lights to save electricity when I leave the classroom. Third, I collect empty bottles and waste paper for recycling to cut down waste. When I am not using water, I turn off the tap. Besides, I never waste food and we should take care of trees. Also, I sort rubbish and use cloth bags instead of plastic bags.
I will try my best to save energy.
【详解】[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:观点介绍类说明文,以一般现在时为主
明确要点:节约能源的多项做法,用参考短语don’t take/turn off/cut down/electricity/instead of
确定人称:第一人称(I/my)
注意事项:不得透露真实姓名和学校名称,80词左右
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:总起句,点明日常生活节约能源十分重要
主体段:依次介绍自身节约能源的几项具体行动,嵌入全部参考短语
结尾段:表明节能决心,升华节约能源的主题
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:绿色出行
出行选择:ride a bike/take the bus/public transport
行动描述:ride a bike to school/don’t take the bus/avoid driving cars
要点二:节约用电
用电行动:turn off the lights/leave the classroom/turn off electrical appliances
作用效果:save electricity/reduce power waste
要点三:回收利用
回收物品:empty bottles/waste paper
行动描述:collect empty bottles/for recycling
作用效果:cut down waste/reuse waste materials/recycle rubbish
要点四:节约用水
用水行为:turn off the tap/turn off the water tap
作用效果:save plenty of water/prevent water waste
要点五:爱惜粮食与爱护树木
日常做法:waste food/take care of trees
行动描述:never waste food/take care of trees
作用效果:form good habits/protect our environment
要点六:垃圾分类,布袋代替塑料袋
行动描述:sort rubbish/use cloth bags instead of plastic bags
作用效果:cut down pollution/reduce plastic waste/protect the environment
7.(25-26九年级上·福建福州·期中)假如你是李华,在校园和日常生活中,常常看到一些不环保的行为。作为学生,应该在校园和家里做什么才能成为环保小使者,为环境保护做出一份贡献呢?请以How to Contribute to a Greener World为题写一篇演讲稿,字数80左右。
注意:以下提示词须全部用上。
How to Contribute to a Greener World
At school
1. turn off lights when.....
2. use both sides of paper
3. not spit
At home
1. turn off the tap after washing hands
2. not use disposable cups
3. sort rubbish
注意事项:
1.必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名及校名。
How to Contribute to a Greener World
It’s my honor to give a speech here on how to contribute to a Greener World.
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【答案】
【参考范文】
How to Contribute to a Greener World
It’s my honor to give a speech here on how to contribute to a Greener World. As students, we should take action in our daily life.
At school, we must turn off lights when leaving classrooms. We need to use both sides of paper. Also, we should not spit anywhere. At home, remember to turn off the tap after washing hands. We’d better not use disposable cups. It is important to sort rubbish in our free time. We can also tell more friends to join us.
Small actions make a big difference. Let’s work together to protect our environment.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:演讲稿,以一般现在时为主
明确要点:校园与家里的环保行动,争做环保小使者
确定人称:第一人称(we/our)
注意事项:不得透露真实姓名和学校名称;词数80左右;全部提示信息必须用上
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:承接已给出的开头,引出环保主题,点明学生要行动起来
主体段:分学校、家庭两个方面,详细列举具体的环保做法
结尾段:总结全文,呼吁大家一起保护环境
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:在学校的环保行为
关灯:turn off lights when leaving classrooms/switch off lights when going out of classrooms等
纸张利用:use both sides of paper/make full use of every piece of paper等
禁止随地吐痰:not spit anywhere/never spit in public places等
要点二:在家的环保行为
随手关水龙头:turn off the tap after washing hands/shut off the tap after hand‑washing等
不使用一次性杯子:not use disposable cups/avoid using disposable cups等
垃圾分类:sort rubbish/sort out different kinds of waste等
要点三:号召他人参与环保
呼吁朋友加入:tell more friends to join us/ask more classmates to take part等
行动的意义:Small actions make a big difference/Tiny actions can bring great changes等
号召共同保护环境:protect our environment together/work together for our environment等
8.(25-26九年级上·福建泉州·期中)假设你是李华,上周六你校环保社团开展了以“Green School Day”为主题的实践活动。请结合以下提示,用英语给朋友Judy写一封邮件,分享活动的目的、内容、感受以及你的校园环保行动计划。词数80左右。
注意事项:
1.必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Judy,
How’s it going? I would like to tell you something about our Green School Day.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Judy,
How’s it going? I would like to tell you something about our Green School Day.
Our school environmental club held this activity last Saturday. The purpose of it was to raise our environmental awareness. We did many things on that day. First, we listened to a speech about protecting the earth. Then, we watched some videos about pollution. Finally, we made posters to call on others to join us.
I felt it was a really meaningful experience. As for my plans, I will ride a bike to school instead of taking a car. I will also try my best to save water and paper in our school.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】写作步骤:
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:书信/邮件,用一般过去时(活动)和一般将来时(计划)为主
明确要点:根据思维导图,包含活动目的、活动内容、个人感受、个人计划
确定人称:第一人称(I/we/my)
注意事项:不得使用真实姓名、校名、地名;词数80左右(开头已给出不计入总词数)
[第二步:构思布局]
书信体四段式结构:
开头段:已给出(问候+引出话题)
主体段一:介绍活动目的和活动内容(按顺序展开)
主体段二:表达个人感受
主体段三:说明自己的校园环保行动计划
结尾段:表达期待回复
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:活动目的
raise environmental awareness/protect the earth
句型:The purpose of it was to...
要点二:活动内容
listen to a speech about protecting the earth
watch some videos about pollution
make posters to call on others to join us
顺序词:First...Then...Finally...
要点三:个人感受
meaningful/educational/helpful
I felt it was a really meaningful experience.
I learned a lot from it.
要点四:个人计划
出行:ride a bike to school instead of taking a car
节约:save water and paper/turn off lights
其他:use both sides of paper/bring a reusable bag
句型:I will.../I plan to.../I am going to...
要点五:结尾
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours, Li Hua
9.(25-26九年级上·福建福州·期中)近年来,零浪费(zero-waste)作为一种环保生活方式,引起全球关注。假设你是李华,你校英语角将组织以“How to be a zero-waste citizen (公民)”为题的英语演讲比赛,请根据以下导图写一篇英文演讲稿,号召大家积极参与环保行动。词数80词左右。
注意事项:
1. 内容包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥,举例说明相关建议。
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范。
3. 文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. As we know, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thank you for your listening!
【答案】例文
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. As we know, zero-waste has become a popular green lifestyle. Today, we are facing serious problems of pollution and waste, so it is necessary to live a zero-waste life to protect our earth.
Here is some advice on how to be a zero-waste citizen. First, we should choose environmentally friendly products, such as using cloth bags instead of plastic ones. Second, we can recycle or reuse old books and bottles. Besides, we’d better finish all our food every meal to avoid food waste.
Small changes make a big difference. Let’s take action right now!
Thank you for your listening!
【详解】[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:应用文,主要使用一般现在时,辅以祈使句
明确要点:践行零浪费生活的重要性、成为零浪费公民的具体建议、发出积极行动的号召
确定人称:第一人称(I/we)为主
注意事项:必须包含导图中的所有提示信息,并适当举例拓展;词数80左右(开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数)
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:承接给出的开头,阐述零浪费生活方式的背景与面临的环境挑战(重要性)
主体段:从选用环保产品、资源循环利用、避免食物浪费等方面提出具体建议
结尾段:发出号召,呼吁大家从小事做起,积极参与环保行动
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:零浪费生活的重要性
环境问题:face serious problems of pollution and waste/environmental challenges等
环保意义:protect our earth/make our living environment better/save resources等
要点二:践行零浪费的建议
环保产品:choose environmentally friendly products/use cloth bags instead of plastic ones等
回收利用:recycle or reuse old books and bottles/use both sides of paper等
自主拓展:finish all food every meal/avoid food waste/save water and electricity/take public transportation等
要点三:总结与号召
行动号召:small changes make a big difference/take action right now/be a zero-waste citizen/make contributions to the earth等
10.(25-26九年级上·福建莆田·期中)地球是我们的家园,我们应该好好保护它。我国正在积极推进“碳达峰、碳中和”,作为中学生,我们应该怎样践行低碳生活呢?请你根据下面内容,用英文写一篇短文。词数80左右。
注意事项:
1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
How to Make Our Earth Better
The earth is our home.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________If everyone can have a low-carbon lifestyle, our earth will be better and better.
【答案】参考范文
How to Make Our Earth Better
The earth is our home. As middle school students, it is our duty to live a low-carbon life to protect it. Here are some useful tips.
First, we should reduce pollution. We can sort rubbish and never throw litter around. Second, it is necessary to save energy. We had better turn off the lights to save electricity. When going out, we can choose to walk or ride a bike instead of taking cars. Finally, remember to reuse things, such as taking cloth bags instead of plastic bags when shopping.
If everyone can have a low-carbon lifestyle, our earth will be better and better.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:说明文,主要介绍中学生如何践行低碳生活以保护地球,全文以一般现在时为主,提出建议时多使用情态动词(should, can)及祈使句
明确要点:承接已给出的开头点题、从减少污染(垃圾分类与处理)、节约能源(节水节电、绿色出行)、物品再利用(减少塑料袋使用)三个维度详细阐述具体做法、自然过渡至给出的结尾句
确定人称:以第一人称(we/our)为主
注意事项:必须包含思维导图中的所有提示信息;已给出的开头与结尾不计入总词数;词数80左右
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:紧密承接已给出的开头句,点明中学生践行低碳生活以保护地球的责任,引出具体建议
主体段:运用First, Second, Finally等连接词,分别从减少污染、节约能源和物品再利用三个层面给出切实可行的中学生低碳生活措施
结尾段:自然衔接给出的结尾句,总结并号召共同行动
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:承接点题与引出建议
承接引题:As middle school students, it is our duty to live a low-carbon life to protect it/Here are some useful tips/we should take action to protect our environment/there are many things we can do to make a difference等
要点二:践行低碳生活的具体措施
减少污染:First, we should reduce pollution/We can sort rubbish and never throw litter around/stop polluting the air/pick up garbage in the park/keep our environment clean and tidy等
节约能源:Second, it is necessary to save energy/We had better turn off the lights to save electricity/When going out, we can choose to walk or ride a bike instead of taking cars/turn off the tap in time/save water/use green transport等
物品再利用:Finally, remember to reuse things, such as taking cloth bags instead of plastic bags when shopping/reuse paper and textbooks/recycle plastic bottles/say no to plastic bags等
要点三:总结升华(衔接结尾)
结尾号召:If everyone can have a low-carbon lifestyle, our earth will be better and better/let's make a difference together/our earth needs our care/protect the environment for a greener future等
主题03 人与自我——实践品质与工匠精神
11.(25-26九年级上·河南商丘·期中)“苟日新,日日新,又日新”古有四大发明,今有科技创新,从造纸术、指南针到移动支付、高速铁路,以及生活中常见的篮球、电视、手表等,都给我们的生活带来了改变和便利,假设你学校正在举办科技节,请你以“My Favorite Invention”为题用英语写一则演讲稿,介绍你最喜欢的发明。
写作提示:1. What is your favorite invention?
2. What is it used for?
3. Why do you like it best?
写作要求:1.文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校的名称;
2.词数100左右。
My Favorite Invention
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____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文:
My Favorite Invention
Good morning, everyone! My favorite invention is the smartphone.
It is used for many things—making calls, taking photos, navigating, and searching for information. During the pandemic, it even helped me take online classes.
Why do I like it best? First, it connects me with my family and friends anytime, anywhere. Second, it gives me quick access to knowledge, helping me learn new things every day. As the saying goes, “Renew yourself daily.” The smartphone truly makes that possible.
Inventions like this show us that human creativity is powerful. I hope one day I can create something useful too!
Thank you!
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:演讲稿,以一般现在时为主,需包含问候语和结束语
明确要点:最喜欢的发明(是什么)、用途(用于什么)、喜爱原因(为什么)
确定人称:第一人称(I/my)
注意事项:不得透露真实姓名和学校名称;词数100左右
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:问候语,点明最喜欢的发明
主体段:介绍发明的用途及喜爱的原因(分点阐述)
结尾段:总结感想,表达愿望,致谢
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:最喜欢的发明
发明选择:smartphone/computer/television/paper/compass/watch/basketball/mobile payment/high-speed railway等
要点二:用途描述
功能列举:making calls, taking photos, navigating, searching for information, taking online classes/watching videos/sending messages/telling time/playing sports/traveling fast/paying for goods等
要点三:喜爱原因
原因分层:connects me with family and friends/gives me quick access to knowledge/helps me learn new things every day/makes life convenient/saves time/brings fun/opens up the world/improves efficiency等
引用名句:As the saying goes, “Renew yourself daily.”/“Necessity is the mother of invention.”等
结尾升华:human creativity is powerful/hope one day I can create something useful/inventions change the world/technology makes a better life等
12.(25-26九年级上·福建南平·阶段检测)假如你是李华,你的学校正在开展“To Be An Inventor”的英语征文活动。请你根据提示,写一篇英语短文投稿。词数80左右。
Why to be an inventor?
change the world, make our lives better…
How to be an inventor?
study hard, think creatively…
1. 必须包含所有提示的信息,可适当发挥;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。
To Be An Inventor
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____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】参考范文
To Be An Inventor
I dream of being an inventor because inventors can change the world and make our lives better. Many great inventions like smartphones have made communication easier and more convenient.
To become an inventor, I need to study hard, especially in science and math, as they are the foundation of invention. I also should think creatively and observe carefully in daily life, since good ideas often come from real needs.
I hope my future inventions can help people solve problems and bring more happiness to the world.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:以一般现在时为主;
③提示:以“To Be An Inventor”为题,阐述成为发明家的原因、实现理想的方法,并表达对未来发明的期望,需控制词数约80词,且不出现真实信息。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开篇点题,说明梦想是成为发明家,并阐述原因(改变世界、改善生活);
第二步:分述成为发明家的具体做法(努力学习学科知识、创造性思考、细心观察生活);
第三步:结尾表达期望,希望未来的发明能帮助他人、带来快乐。
[亮点词汇]
①foundation基础
②creatively创造性地
③observe观察
[高分句型]
①I dream of being an inventor because inventors can change the world and make our lives better.(because引导的原因状语从句)
②To become an inventor, I need to study hard, especially in science and math, as they are the foundation of invention.(as引导的原因状语从句)
13.(24-25九年级上·福建莆田·期末)2024年12月,“2024年十大流行语”出炉。其中,数智化、未来产业等词汇跃居榜首,一方面展现了生活中科技的无所不在,另一方面也揭示了新兴产业与未来科技的广阔前景。假如你们学校正在举办校园创客节,你受邀参加以“科技改变生活”为主题的演讲比赛,请你根据以下信息,用英文写一篇短文,介绍身边的科技及优点。
要求:
1. 必须包括以上要点,可适当发挥。语句通顺、意思连贯,书写规范。
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。
3. 80词左右,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone!
It’s a great honor for me to speak here. The rapid development of science and technology has brought great changes to our life.
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____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’s all for my speech. Thank you.
【答案】
范文:
Hello, everyone!
It’s a great honor for me to speak here. The rapid development of science and technology has brought great changes to our life.
Smart phones, robots, high-speed trains and electric cars are just a few examples of how technology is shaping our world. With smart phones, we can shop, learn and connect with others anytime, anywhere. Robots help with housework and homework, saving us time and energy. High-speed trains make travel faster and more comfortable, bringing distant places closer. Electric cars not only save energy but also protect the environment.
These technologies make life more convenient, efficient and sustainable. Let’s embrace the power of technology and create a better future together.
That’s all for my speech. Thank you.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:主要使用一般现在时;
③提示:需围绕“科技改变生活”主题,结合所给关键词(smart robots, electric cars等)说明科技应用及其优点,语言正式流畅,具有演讲的感染力和号召力。
[写作步骤]
第一步,问候并引入主题,强调科技带来的巨大变化;
第二步,列举四种典型科技产品(智能手机、机器人、高铁、电动汽车);
第三步,分别说明各项科技带来的具体便利与优点;
第四步,总结科技对生活的积极影响;
第五步,发出倡议,展望未来,结束演讲。
[亮点词汇]
①rapid development快速发展
②shape our world塑造我们的世界
③save time and energy节省时间和精力
④protect the environment保护环境
[高分句型]
①Smart phones, robots, high-speed trains and electric cars are just a few examples of how technology is shaping our world. (how引导宾语从句,现在进行时表示持续影响)
②With smart phones, we can shop, learn and connect with others anytime, anywhere. (介词with表方式,并列动词原形)
③Electric cars not only save energy but also protect the environment. (not only…but also…连接并列谓语)
④Let’s embrace the power of technology and create a better future together. (祈使句发出倡议,并列动词原形)
14.(25-26九年级上·河南郑州·期中)生活中,许多发明都在悄然改变着我们的生活。假如你是九年级学生张明,你校英语校刊将举办以“A Great Invention That Changed My Life”为主题的征文活动。请根据以下写作提示和要求写一篇短文参加活动,讲述一项改变了你生活的伟大发明。
写作提示:
1. What is this invention?
2. How does it change your life?
3. What do you think of this invention?
写作要求:
1.文中须包含以上写作提示中的所有信息,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.词数100左右。
A Great Invention That Changed My Life
People have made many amazing inventions. The one that has brought a big change to my life is________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
A Great Invention That Changed My Life
People have made many amazing inventions. The one that has brought a big change to my life is the Internet.
The Internet is playing an important part in our daily life. It is useful to me in many ways. First of all, it can help me with my homework. I can find almost everything I need online. Secondly, it can make my life much easier. For example, I can shop and chat online. Finally, it can help me keep in touch with my friends. Through the Internet, I can make friends with people from all over the world.
The Internet makes my life more colorful and convenient. I’m sure it will bring even more changes to my life in the future.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:介绍类说明文,时态以一般现在时为主
明确要点:一项改变生活的伟大发明;它是如何改变生活的;对该发明的看法
确定人称:第一人称(I/my)
注意事项:文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;词数100左右
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:承接给定开头,直接点明改变生活的伟大发明是什么
主体段:具体阐述该发明是如何改变生活的
结尾段:总结对该发明的看法
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:改变生活的伟大发明
发明选择:the Internet/smartphone/computer/high-speed train等
要点二:发明如何改变生活
学习用途:help me with my homework/help me learn English online every day/search for useful information等
生活便利:make my life much easier/shop and chat online/connect me with the world/help me keep in touch with my friends等
放松娱乐:listen to music to relax/bring me a lot of fun in my free time/watch movies to relax等
要点三:对该发明的看法
评价与建议:make my life more colorful and convenient/a useful tool/use it wisely/shouldn’t spend too much time on it等
15.(25-26九年级上·河南周口·期末)题目: 假设你是李华,你校将举办一场主题为“发明改变生活”的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下提示,写一篇演讲稿。
提示:介绍一项你认为最重要的发明(如:互联网、手机、高铁等)。说明它为什么重要,以及它如何改变了人们的生活。谈谈你对未来发明的期望。
要求:词数:90~110词。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone!
I’m Li Hua. It’s my honor to stand here to give a speech. My topic is “Inventions Change Our Lives”.
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____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
例文
Good morning, everyone!
I’m Li Hua. It’s my honor to stand here to give a speech. My topic is “Inventions Change Our Lives”.
I believe the most important invention is the Internet. Firstly, it makes information easy to get. We can learn anything online quickly and clearly. It also helps us know the world better without going out. Secondly, it helps us connect with our friends far away through video calls. Life becomes more convenient. For example, we can shop and study at home.
In the future, I hope inventions will make our cities greener and solve some problems like pollution. I also hope more useful inventions will appear. Let’s welcome a better life brought by new inventions!
Thank you!
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:演讲稿,用一般现在时为主
明确要点:最重要的发明(互联网),互联网的作用,对未来发明的期待
确定人称:第一人称(I/my)
注意事项:语言简洁明了,符合演讲场景,语气真诚自然
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:问候听众,自我介绍,点明演讲主题
主体段:明确最重要的发明(互联网),分点说明其作用,结合实例补充
结尾段:表达对未来发明的期待,总结升华,致谢听众
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:最重要的发明
发明选择:the Internet/the computer/the mobile phone/the electric light等
开篇表达:I believe the most important invention is.../In my opinion, the most meaningful invention is.../As far as I’m concerned, the greatest invention is...等
要点二:发明的作用
作用描述1:makes information easy to get/helps us get information quickly/lets us know more about the world等
具体说明1:We can learn anything online./We can search for all kinds of information we need online./We can broaden our horizons through the Internet.等
作用描述2:helps us connect with friends far away/lets us keep in touch with relatives and friends easily/bridges the distance between people等
具体方式:through video calls/by chatting online/through WeChat or QQ等
作用描述3:makes life more convenient/brings great convenience to our daily life/saves us a lot of time等
实例说明:shop and study at home/order food online/work at home/have online classes等
要点三:对未来发明的期待
期待表达:I hope inventions will.../I look forward to inventions that can.../I wish future inventions would...等
具体期待:make our cities greener and solve problems like pollution/help protect the environment/solve energy problems/improve our quality of life等
要点四:结尾表达
总结升华:Let's welcome a better life brought by new inventions!/Let's look forward to a brighter future with more great inventions./New inventions will surely make our world a better place.等
致谢表达:Thank you!/Thank you for listening!/Thank you for your attention.等
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