2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---倒霉的周一,海滩遇险记 导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I’m not known to be a particularly lucky person. Raffles (抽奖), t-shirt cannons, radio calls, random roommate selections — none of these ever seem to work out in my favor. But my fortune seemed to hit an all-time low last Monday. The day started nice enough. I went to work, got off at five and decided to head to the beach. It was sweltering hot, and I knew the cool waters of Lake Michigan would help wash away my sweat. The first sign of trouble was when my cellphone navigation stopped working properly and showed the wrong directions. I was new to the area and didn’t quite know my way around yet, so I ended up taking a wrong turn and driving through a web of neighborhoods, turning a 10-minute drive into a 40-minute one. But fine, I get lost often. I made it to the beach eventually. Took a quick dip in the water, had a bite of the butter paneer I had picked up earlier. I made it back to my car, pulling some clothes out to change into. As I headed to the restroom, I realized I had forgotten a shirt. So I walked back, tugged on the handle and realized with horror that my keys were sitting in the passenger seat of my car. I called AAA (American Automobile Association). As it turns out, I don’t have an AAA membership. I called my parents and they anxiously tried to figure out how to add me to their card, while my phone battery was at 21% and dropping. I called AAA again, and they informed me that they would be there in about an hour and a half, which seemed like a long time as I sat on top of the trunk of my car. The sun was lowering in the sky and the parking lot was emptying out. I heard thunder, and I saw people exiting the beach at an increasing rate. When I checked my weather app, I saw an alarming update: a heat advisory (预警), a 100% chance of a lightning storm, and a tornado warning. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Fearful and alone, I stood frozen as thunder rolled closer. ________________________________________________________________________________ The kind lady drove me through the pounding rain toward a nearby Starbucks. ________________________________________________________________________________ 文本分析 1．角色：_____________________________ 2．视角：第________人称 3．时空线：from work---______________ ---the beach parking lot 4. 请在文章中将可能的线索都找出来。 What's the narrator's usual luck like?： ______________________________________________ Why did the narrator go to the beach?： ____________________________________________ What troubles did the narrator meet on the way to the beach?： _______________________ What was the terrible thing that happened after the narrator went to the beach?： ___________________________________ What problem did the narrator face when calling AAA for the first time?： _______________________ How long would AAA take to arrive after the second call?： __________________________________________________ What weather conditions were coming according to the weather app?： ___________________ What was the narrator's situation when thunder rolled closer?： _______________________________________ 5． 情节线：我向来运气不好，上周一再陷低谷。 →____________ →______________ →___________________→（续写）雷声渐近，我又怕又孤独，僵在原地。一位善良的女士开车带我穿过瓢泼大雨去附近的星巴克。 6．情感线：I：frustrated→___________→___________→___________（续写）→___________（续写） 7. 综合以上信息，请用3-4句话概括文章大意。（中英各一个） 中文： ______________________________________________________________ 英文： ______________________________________________________________ 8.句式：宾语从句；非谓语；感叹句；同位语；完全倒装句；比喻；夸张 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文属于人与自我、人与环境： _______________________________________ 情节构造 第一段提示句：Fearful and alone, I stood frozen as thunder rolled closer. 衔接句1———对前面的"weather app warning"提问“现场环境如何？”： What's the on-site environment like? 现场环境：乌云迅速笼罩天空，阳光完全消失，天地间一片昏暗。狂风呼啸着卷起沙滩上的沙粒和杂物，雨点密集地砸下来，瞬间打湿衣物。 过渡句推演：衔接1→______？______←衔接2 衔接句2———对"The kind lady"提问“谁会出现帮助我？”：Who will appear to help me? 出现的帮助者：一位看起来约四十岁的陌生女士，她刚从海滩收拾东西准备离开。她注意到我独自站在车旁，被暴雨困住，且神情慌乱，于是主动停车询问情况，伸出援手。 第二段提示句：The kind lady drove me through the pounding rain toward a nearby Starbucks. 衔接3———对"drove me to Starbucks"提问“到星巴克后发生了什么？”：What happened after arriving at Starbucks? 到星巴克后发生的事：女士先给我递了纸巾擦去身上的雨水，然后帮我点了热饮暖身，还拿出手机充电器让我给即将关机的手机充电。我们聊起了我被困的缘由，她耐心安慰我，告诉我这种天气下等待救援是最安全的。期间，我联系上 AAA 确认了救援时间，女士一直陪着我，没有急于离开。 过渡句推演：衔接3→_____？_____←主题 主题：_________________________________ 段落构思 第一段：雷声渐近，我又怕又孤独，僵在原地。→①__________________→②__________________→③__________________； 英文： ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 第二段：一位善良的女士开车带我穿过瓢泼大雨去附近的星巴克。→④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥__________________。 英文： _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 文本分析 1． 角色：The narrator（主角）、the narrator’s parents、the kind lady（续写出现）、AAA staff 2． 视角：第一人称 3．时空线：from work---on the way to the beach ---the beach parking lot 4．线索答案： What's the narrator's usual luck like?：Not good. Raffles, t-shirt cannons, radio calls and random roommate selections never work out in his/her favor. Why did the narrator go to the beach?：It was sweltering hot, and he/she wanted to cool down in the waters of Lake Michigan and wash away sweat. What troubles did the narrator meet on the way to the beach?：Cellphone navigation didn’t work properly, showed wrong directions, leading to a wrong turn and a 40-minute drive instead of 10 minutes. What was the terrible thing that happened after the narrator went to the beach?：He/she forgot keys in the passenger seat and locked the car. What problem did the narrator face when calling AAA for the first time?：He/she didn’t have an AAA membership. How long would AAA take to arrive after the second call?：About an hour and a half. What weather conditions were coming according to the weather app?：A heat advisory, a 100% chance of a lightning storm, and a tornado warning. What was the narrator's situation when thunder rolled closer?：Fearful, alone, stuck in the emptying parking lot with a dying phone battery. 5．情节线：我向来运气不好，上周一再陷低谷。→下班决定去海滩避暑，导航出错绕路→到达海滩后不慎将钥匙锁在车内→联系 AAA 无果，手机没电，还收到恶劣天气预警→（续写）雷声渐近，我又怕又孤独，僵在原地。一位善良的女士开车带我穿过瓢泼大雨去附近的星巴克。 6．情感线：I：frustrated→anxious→fearful→desperate（续写）→grateful（续写） 7．文章大意：中文：向来运气不佳的 “我”，上周一下班后想去密歇根湖海滩避暑。途中导航出错绕了远路，到达后又不慎将钥匙锁在车内。“我” 没有 AAA 会员，联系救援需等一个半小时，手机电量告急，此时还收到高温、雷暴和龙卷风预警，陷入困境。英文：The narrator, who is usually unlucky, decided to go to Lake Michigan beach to cool down after work last Monday. On the way, the navigation failed, making him/her take a detour. After arriving, he/she accidentally locked the keys in the car. Without an AAA membership, the narrator had to wait an hour and a half for rescue, with a dying phone battery. Meanwhile, a heat advisory, lightning storm and tornado warning were issued, leaving him/her in trouble. 8．句式示例： 宾语从句：I knew the cool waters of Lake Michigan would help wash away my sweat. 非谓语：Turning a 10-minute drive into a 40-minute one. 感叹句：What terrible luck I had that day! 同位语：Raffles, t-shirt cannons, radio calls, random roommate selections — none of these ever seem to work out in my favor. 完全倒装：There came a sudden thunderclap that made me jump. 比喻：The parking lot was like a deserted island as people left in a hurry. 夸张：My phone battery was dropping so fast that it felt like it would die in a minute. 9．本文属于人与自我、人与环境：面对困境时的意外温暖与自我救赎 情节构造 主题：困境中的善意能驱散无助，运气虽差但人间有爱 段落构思 第一段：雷声渐近，我又怕又孤独，僵在原地。→①雨点开始砸落，手机仅剩 5% 电量自动关机→②我抱紧双臂发抖，看着空荡荡的停车场愈发绝望→③一辆白色轿车停下，车窗降下，一位面带关切的女士询问我的情况； 英文：Raindrops began to pound down, and my phone died automatically with only 5% battery left. I hugged my arms tightly, trembling as I watched the emptying parking lot, feeling more and more desperate. Suddenly, a white car pulled over, the window rolled down, and a lady with a concerned look asked me what had happened. 第二段：一位善良的女士开车带我穿过瓢泼大雨去附近的星巴克。→④她递来干毛巾和热水，耐心听我讲述困境→⑤得知我在等 AAA，她主动帮我联系确认救援进度→⑥雨停时救援赶到，我向她再三道谢，明白即使运气不佳，也总会有善意温暖前行的路。 英文：She handed me a dry towel and hot water, listening patiently to my troubles. Knowing I was waiting for AAA, she took the initiative to call and confirm the rescue progress for me. When the rain stopped and the rescue arrived, I thanked her repeatedly. I realized that even if luck isn’t on my side, there will always be kindness to warm the way forward. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $