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2025学年11月广州市南沙区第一学期高三英语中段教学质量检测
应用文二次学案学生版
【真题再现】
假定你是李华,外教 Tom 计划于下周六到人民公园(People's Park)进行春游活动(spring outing),现面向全班同学征集活动内容建议。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.具体活动;
2.你的理由; 注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
一、写作任务解读
场景:外教 Tom 计划下周六组织全班同学到人民公园(People’s Park)开展______(提示:春季户外集体活动,填核心名词),现面向全班征集活动内容建议。
身份:学生李华
写作要求:给 Tom 写一封邮件,需包含 2 个核心要点(+,提示:分别填 “具体内容” 和 “原因说明” 相关短语),词数 80 词左右,格式正确。
二、写作思路拆解(主动思考・表格填空)
段落
核心功能(学生填空)
写作要点(学生补全关键信息)
首段
1. ______(提示:引入话题的功能,如 “开启话题”)2. ______(提示:表明写信意图的功能)
1. 表达对______(提示:指上文的春季活动)的期待;2. 说明写信是为了______(提示:核心动作,如 “提供活动想法”)。
正文
1. ______(提示:呈现具体内容的功能)2. ______(提示:解释合理性的功能)
1. 提出______个具体活动(提示:填数字,2-3 为宜,如 “2”),例如______、(提示:填活动名称,如 “摄影比赛”);2. 每个活动搭配 1 个理由,可从、、(提示:填理由维度,如 “教育意义”“互动效果”)展开。
尾段
1. ______(提示:总结价值的功能)2. ______(提示:表达合作态度的功能)
1. 强调建议能让春游更______(提示:填形容词,如 “有意义”“有趣”);2. 邀请 Tom______(提示:填动作,如 “反馈意见”),并表示愿意______(提示:填协助行为,如 “帮忙规划”)。
三、核心词汇词块默写训练(带提示词)
1. 活动类(根据提示默写英文)
提示词(中文 / 场景描述)
英文默写
检查核对(教师 / 自查)
1. 春季的户外集体活动,常去公园、郊外(4 个词)
spring outing
2. 拍摄公园植物、鸟类的比赛(6 个词)
nature photography contest
3. 大家一起分享食物的户外用餐活动(2 个词)
group picnic
4. 增强团队协作的游戏(3 个词)
team-building games
5. 多人接力完成的跑步游戏(2 个词)
relay races
6. 探索自然、寻找特定事物的游戏(2 个词)
scavenger hunt
2. 意义类(根据提示默写英文)
提示词(中文 / 功能描述)
英文默写
检查核对(教师 / 自查)
1. 让人印象深刻、难以忘记的经历(2 个词)
memorable experience
2. 创造新想法、新作品的能力(1 个词)
creativity
3. 团队成员一起合作完成任务的行为(1 个词)
teamwork
4. 与人交流、互动的能力(3 个词)
communication skills
5. 提升对自然环境的欣赏和重视(3 个词)
environmental appreciation
6. 让活动更有教育价值的特性(2 个词)
educational value
3. 连接与表达类(根据提示默写英文)
提示词(中文 / 用法)
英文默写
检查核对(教师 / 自查)
1. 提出想法或建议(2 个词,动词短语)
offer suggestions
2. 使某物变得更强、更好(1 个词,动词)
enhance
3. 培养、促进(如友谊、能力,1 个词,动词)
foster
4. 与…… 相契合、相匹配(2 个词,动词短语)
align with
5. 目的是、旨在(2 个词,动词短语)
aim to
四、高频句式仿写(设空・主动替换)
1. 活动建议开头句式
原句:Organizing a nature photography contest would be a wonderful idea.
仿写结构:Organizing [______](提示:填活动名称,如 “scavenger hunt”)would be a great choice.
你的仿写:________________________________________________________________
2. 活动意义表达句式
原句:It allows students to capture memorable experiences and express their creativity.
仿写结构:It allows us to [ ](提示:填具体动作 1,如 “explore local plants”)and [ ](提示:填具体动作 2,如 “practice teamwork”).
你的仿写:________________________________________________________________
3. 活动作用描述句式
原句:A group picnic would provide a relaxing way for everyone to bond.
仿写结构:[ ](提示:填活动名称,如 “Team games”)would provide a [](提示:填形容词,如 “fun”“exciting”)way for everyone to [______](提示:填核心作用,如 “interact”).
你的仿写:________________________________________________________________
4. 多活动连接句式
原句:First, organizing a contest is great; then, a picnic can help us bond.
仿写结构:[ ](提示:填连接词,如 “First”“Firstly”), [ ](提示:填第一个活动及作用); [ ](提示:填连接词,如 “Then”“Next”), [ ](提示:填第二个活动及作用).
你的仿写:________________________________________________________________
五、进阶句式训练(复杂句式・设空应用)
1. 含定语从句的活动意义句(突出活动细节)
进阶结构:We can organize [](提示:填活动名称,如 “a nature exploration”), which helps us [](提示:填活动作用,如 “learn about local flora and fauna”)and makes the outing more meaningful.
你的练习:________________________________________________________________
2. 含目的状语从句的建议句(明确活动目标)
进阶结构:To [ ](提示:填活动目标,如 “enhance our teamwork”), we’d better add [ ](提示:填活动名称,如 “relay races”), as it can let everyone work together to finish a task.
你的练习:________________________________________________________________
3. 含 “not only...but also...” 的并列意义句(强调多重价值)
进阶结构:A photography contest is good because it not only [ ](提示:填第一个价值,如 “trains our observation skills”)but also [ ](提示:填第二个价值,如 “lets us record beautiful moments”).
你的练习:________________________________________________________________
六、范文填空题(综合应用・自查巩固)
Dear Tom,
I’m Li Hua, and I’m really eager to join your 1. __________(提示:填 “春游”,4 个词)to People’s Park next Saturday. I’m writing to 2. __________(提示:填 “提出建议”,2 个词)some specific activities, hoping to make the outing more engaging and enjoyable.
__________(提示:填连接词,如 “First”), organizing a 4. __________(提示:填 “自然摄影比赛”,6 个词)would be wonderful. It allows us to capture 5. __________(提示:填 “难忘的经历”,2 个词)and express our 6. __________(提示:填 “创造力”,1 个词)by taking photos of plants, birds or scenery in the park. 7. __________(提示:填连接词,如 “Then”), a 8. __________(提示:填 “集体野餐”,2 个词)would provide a relaxing way for everyone to 9. __________(提示:填 “增进感情”,1 个词)and share snacks. 10. __________(提示:填连接词,如 “Additionally”), team-building games like relay races can 11. __________(提示:填 “增强”,1 个词)our 12. __________(提示:填 “团队合作”,1 个词)and communication skills. These activities also let us appreciate nature, making the outing more meaningful.
I hope my suggestions are helpful. I’d be happy to help with planning if needed. Looking forward to your thoughts!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
一、写作任务解读(参考答案)
场景:外教 Tom 计划下周六组织全班同学到人民公园(People’s Park)开展spring outing(提示:春季户外集体活动,填核心名词),现面向全班征集活动内容建议。
身份:学生李华
写作要求:给 Tom 写一封邮件,需包含 2 个核心要点(specific activities+reasons for the suggestions,提示:分别填 “具体内容” 和 “原因说明” 相关短语),词数 80 词左右,格式正确。
二、写作思路拆解(主动思考・表格填空参考答案)
段落
核心功能(学生填空・参考答案)
写作要点(学生补全关键信息・参考答案)
首段
1. 开启话题(提示:引入话题的功能,如 “开启话题”)2. 表明意图(提示:表明写信意图的功能)
1. 表达对the spring outing(提示:指上文的春季活动)的期待;2. 说明写信是为了offer some activity ideas(提示:核心动作,如 “提供活动想法”)。
正文
1. 呈现具体活动(提示:呈现具体内容的功能)2. 解释活动理由(提示:解释合理性的功能)
1. 提出2个具体活动(提示:填数字,2-3 为宜,如 “2”),例如a nature photography contest、a group picnic(提示:填活动名称,如 “摄影比赛”);2. 每个活动搭配 1 个理由,可从educational value、social interaction、adaptability to the park(提示:填理由维度,如 “教育意义”“互动效果”)展开。
尾段
1. 总结活动价值(提示:总结价值的功能)2. 表达合作态度(提示:表达合作态度的功能)
1. 强调建议能让春游更meaningful and enjoyable(提示:填形容词,如 “有意义”“有趣”);2. 邀请 Tomshare his thoughts(提示:填动作,如 “反馈意见”),并表示愿意assist with planning(提示:填协助行为,如 “帮忙规划”)。
三、核心词汇词块默写训练(带提示词・参考答案)
1. 活动类(根据提示默写英文・参考答案)
提示词(中文 / 场景描述)
英文默写(参考答案)
检查核对(教师 / 自查)
1. 春季的户外集体活动,常去公园、郊外(4 个词)
spring outing
spring outing
2. 拍摄公园植物、鸟类的比赛(6 个词)
nature photography contest
nature photography contest
3. 大家一起分享食物的户外用餐活动(2 个词)
group picnic
group picnic
4. 增强团队协作的游戏(3 个词)
team-building games
team-building games
5. 多人接力完成的跑步游戏(2 个词)
relay races
relay races
6. 探索自然、寻找特定事物的游戏(2 个词)
scavenger hunt
scavenger hunt
2. 意义类(根据提示默写英文・参考答案)
提示词(中文 / 功能描述)
英文默写(参考答案)
检查核对(教师 / 自查)
1. 让人印象深刻、难以忘记的经历(2 个词)
memorable experience
memorable experience
2. 创造新想法、新作品的能力(1 个词)
creativity
creativity
3. 团队成员一起合作完成任务的行为(1 个词)
teamwork
teamwork
4. 与人交流、互动的能力(3 个词)
communication skills
communication skills
5. 提升对自然环境的欣赏和重视(3 个词)
environmental appreciation
environmental appreciation
6. 让活动更有教育价值的特性(2 个词)
educational value
educational value
3. 连接与表达类(根据提示默写英文・参考答案)
提示词(中文 / 用法)
英文默写(参考答案)
检查核对(教师 / 自查)
1. 提出想法或建议(2 个词,动词短语)
offer suggestions
offer suggestions
2. 使某物变得更强、更好(1 个词,动词)
enhance
enhance
3. 培养、促进(如友谊、能力,1 个词,动词)
foster
foster
4. 与…… 相契合、相匹配(2 个词,动词短语)
align with
align with
5. 目的是、旨在(2 个词,动词短语)
aim to
aim to
四、高频句式仿写(设空・主动替换・参考答案)
1. 活动建议开头句式
原句:Organizing a nature photography contest would be a wonderful idea.
仿写结构:Organizing [______](提示:填活动名称,如 “scavenger hunt”)would be a great choice.
你的仿写(参考答案):Organizing a scavenger hunt would be a great choice.
2. 活动意义表达句式
原句:It allows students to capture memorable experiences and express their creativity.
仿写结构:It allows us to [](提示:填具体动作 1,如 “explore local plants”)and [](提示:填具体动作 2,如 “practice teamwork”).
你的仿写(参考答案):It allows us to explore local plants and practice teamwork.
3. 活动作用描述句式
原句:A group picnic would provide a relaxing way for everyone to bond.
仿写结构:[](提示:填活动名称,如 “Team games”)would provide a [](提示:填形容词,如 “fun”“exciting”)way for everyone to [______](提示:填核心作用,如 “interact”).
你的仿写(参考答案):Team games would provide an exciting way for everyone to interact.
4. 多活动连接句式
原句:First, organizing a contest is great; then, a picnic can help us bond.
仿写结构:[](提示:填连接词,如 “First”“Firstly”), [](提示:填第一个活动及作用); [](提示:填连接词,如 “Then”“Next”), [](提示:填第二个活动及作用).
你的仿写(参考答案):First, organizing a nature photography contest can train our observation skills; Then, a group picnic can enhance our social interaction.
五、进阶句式训练(复杂句式・设空应用・参考答案)
1. 含定语从句的活动意义句(突出活动细节)
进阶结构:We can organize [](提示:填活动名称,如 “a nature exploration”), which helps us [](提示:填活动作用,如 “learn about local flora and fauna”)and makes the outing more meaningful.
你的练习(参考答案):We can organize a nature exploration, which helps us learn about local flora and fauna and makes the outing more meaningful.
2. 含目的状语从句的建议句(明确活动目标)
进阶结构:To [](提示:填活动目标,如 “enhance our teamwork”), we’d better add [](提示:填活动名称,如 “relay races”), as it can let everyone work together to finish a task.
你的练习(参考答案):To enhance our teamwork, we’d better add relay races, as it can let everyone work together to finish a task.
3. 含 “not only...but also...” 的并列意义句(强调多重价值)
进阶结构:A photography contest is good because it not only [](提示:填第一个价值,如 “trains our observation skills”)but also [](提示:填第二个价值,如 “lets us record beautiful moments”).
你的练习(参考答案):A photography contest is good because it not only trains our observation skills but also lets us record beautiful moments of spring.
六、范文填空题(综合应用・自查巩固・参考答案)
Dear Tom,
I’m Li Hua, and I’m really eager to join your 1. spring outing(提示:填 “春游”,4 个词)to People’s Park next Saturday. I’m writing to 2. offer(提示:填 “提出建议”,2 个词)some specific activities, hoping to make the outing more engaging and enjoyable.
First(提示:填连接词,如 “First”), organizing a 4. nature photography contest(提示:填 “自然摄影比赛”,6 个词)would be wonderful. It allows us to capture 5. memorable experiences(提示:填 “难忘的经历”,2 个词)and express our 6. creativity(提示:填 “创造力”,1 个词)by taking photos of plants, birds or scenery in the park. 7. Then(提示:填连接词,如 “Then”), a 8. group picnic(提示:填 “集体野餐”,2 个词)would provide a relaxing way for everyone to 9. bond(提示:填 “增进感情”,1 个词)and share snacks. 10. Additionally(提示:填连接词,如 “Additionally”), team-building games like relay races can 11. enhance(提示:填 “增强”,1 个词)our 12. teamwork(提示:填 “团队合作”,1 个词)and communication skills. These activities also let us appreciate nature, making the outing more meaningful.
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2025学年11月广州市南沙区第一学期高三英语中段教学质量检测
应用文二次学案教师版
【真题再现】
假定你是李华,外教 Tom 计划于下周六到人民公园(People's Park)进行春游活动(spring outing),现面向全班同学征集活动内容建议。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.具体活动;
2.你的理由; 注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
框架搭建
首段:背景引入 + 写信目的
1. 首句直接提及Tom发起的春游活动(spring outing to People’s Park),并表达参与兴趣。
2. 明确表明写信目的:提出具体活动建议,为集体活动贡献想法。
正文:分层次说明建议内容及理由
层次1:提出核心活动建议**
1. 建议开展“自然摄影比赛”(nature photography contest),鼓励同学们拍摄公园中的植物、鸟类或风景。
2. 补充建议集体野餐(group picnic)和团队游戏(如接力赛或猜词游戏)。
层次2:逐项说明理由
1. 教育意义:摄影比赛能锻炼观察力,同时学习自然知识,贴合户外教育目标。
2. 促进互动:集体野餐和游戏能加强同学间的交流,增强团队凝聚力。
3. 适应环境:人民公园空间开阔,适合开展低强度活动,且无需复杂设备。
尾段:总结呼吁 + 开放态度
1. 总结建议的可行性,强调活动能丰富春游体验。
2. 邀请Tom反馈意见,表示愿意进一步讨论细节,体现合作意愿。
词汇+框架整合:【话题词汇】
1. spring outing - 春游
2. activity suggestions - 活动建议
3. team-building games - 团队建设游戏
4. picnic - 野餐
5. nature observation - 自然观察
6. photography session - 摄影活动
7. outdoor sports - 户外运动
8. environmental cleanup - 环境清理
9. cultural exchange - 文化交流
10. group discussion - 小组讨论
11. relaxation - 放松
12. fun and enjoyment - 乐趣与享受
13. physical exercise - 体育锻炼
14. social interaction - 社交互动
15. scenic spot - 景点
16. teamwork - 团队合作
17. creativity - 创造力
18. communication skills - 沟通技巧
19. healthy lifestyle - 健康生活方式
20. bonding opportunity - 增进感情的机会
21. planning - 计划
22. participation - 参与
23. enjoyment - 享受
24. motivation - 动力
25. memorable experience - 难忘的经历
26. preparation - 准备
27. involvement - 参与度
28. enthusiasm - 热情
29. collaboration - 协作
30. refreshment - refreshment(点心/茶点)
【高频表达式 + 话题词汇整合】
1. Organizing team-building games can enhance teamwork and communication skills among students.(组织团队建设游戏可以增强学生之间的团队合作和沟通技巧。)
2. A picnic would provide a relaxing and enjoyable way for everyone to bond and share food together.(野餐将为每个人提供一个放松和愉快的方式来增进感情并分享食物。)
3. Nature observation activities could encourage appreciation for the environment and promote a healthy lifestyle.(自然观察活动可以鼓励大家对环境的欣赏并促进健康的生活方式。)
4. Including a photography session would allow students to capture memorable experiences and express their creativity.(加入摄影活动可以让学生记录难忘的经历并表达他们的创造力。)
5. Outdoor sports like frisbee or soccer are great for physical exercise and fun during the spring outing.(户外运动如飞盘或足球非常适合在春游期间进行体育锻炼和娱乐。)
6. An environmental cleanup activity would teach responsibility and care for public spaces like People's Park.(环境清理活动可以教导大家对人民公园等公共空间的责任感和关爱。)
7. Cultural exchange through group discussions can improve social interaction and broaden perspectives.(通过小组讨论进行文化交流可以改善社交互动并拓宽视野。)
8. These suggestions aim to boost participation and enthusiasm, making the outing more engaging for all.(这些建议旨在提高参与度和热情,使春游对所有人更具吸引力。)
9. Proper planning and preparation will ensure a smooth and successful spring outing with high involvement.(适当的计划和准备将确保春游顺利进行且参与度高,取得成功。)
10. Combining fun activities with learning opportunities will create motivation and a memorable experience for everyone.(将有趣的活动与学习机会结合将为每个人创造动力和难忘的经历。)
参考范文1 :Dear Tom,
I’m Li Hua, and I’m really eager to join your spring outing to People’s Park next Saturday. I’m writing to offer some specific activity suggestions, hoping to make the group activity more engaging and enjoyable.
First, organizing a nature photography contest would be a wonderful idea. Including a photography session would allow students to capture memorable experiences and express their creativity by taking photos of the park’s unique plants, birds, or beautiful scenery. Then, a group picnic would provide a relaxing way for everyone to bond and share food together, which can also strengthen social interaction. Additionally, organizing team-building games like relay races or frisbee would enhance teamwork and communication skills among us, boosting our enthusiasm. Nature observation activities could also encourage appreciation for the environment and promote a healthy lifestyle, making the outing more meaningful.
These suggestions aim to combine fun with learning, creating a memorable experience for all. I’d be happy to help with planning if needed. Looking forward to your thoughts!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
词汇+框架整合2 :话题词汇(30个)
1. Spring outing 春游
2. Activity proposal活动建议
3. Team-building games 团队建设游戏
4. Scavenger hunt 寻宝游戏
5. Picnic arrangements 野餐安排
6. Nature exploration 自然探索
7. Cultural exchange 文化交流
8. Interactive sessions 互动环节
9. Relaxation zones 休闲区域
10. Photography spots拍照点
11. Environmental awareness 环保意识
12. Group dynamics 团队氛围
13. Participant engagement 参与者投入度
14. Recreational activities 娱乐活动
15. Scenic routes风景路线
16. Ice-breaking exercises 破冰活动
17. Creative workshops 创意工作坊
18. Local flora and fauna 当地动植物
19. Sustainability practices 可持续实践
20. Collaborative tasks 协作任务
21. Outdoor fitness 户外健身
22. Mindfulness exercises 正念练习
23. Community bonding 团体凝聚力
24. Leisure time 休闲时间
25. Guided tours 导览游览
26. Skill-sharing 技能分享
27. Refreshment breaks 茶歇时间
28. Feedback collection 意见收集
29. Logistical planning 后勤规划
30. Memorable experience 难忘体验
高频表达式 + 话题词汇整合(15句)
1. I propose organizing a scavenger hunt to enhance participant engagement and team dynamics.
(我建议组织寻宝游戏,以提升参与者投入度和团队氛围。)
2. Incorporating nature exploration would align perfectly with the spring outing theme.
(加入自然探索环节将完全契合春游主题。)
3. A picnic arrangement could provide a relaxed setting for cultural exchange.
(野餐安排可为文化交流提供轻松的环境。)
4. Interactive sessions, such as skill-sharing workshops, would foster community bonding.
(互动环节,如技能分享工作坊,能增强团体凝聚力。)
5. Selecting scenic routes for guided tours would maximize the recreational experience.
(选择风景路线进行导览游览能优化娱乐体验。)
6. Including mindfulness exercises would offer a refreshing break during the outing.
(加入正念练习可为春游期间提供焕然一新的休息时间。)
7. Environmental awareness activities could integrate sustainability practices into the event.
(环保意识活动可将可持续实践融入春游中。)
8. Leisure time in designated relaxation zones allows for informal interaction.
(在指定休闲区域的休闲时间有助于非正式交流。)
9. Ice-breaking exercises are essential to initiate collaborative tasks effectively.
(破冰活动对于有效启动协作任务至关重要。)
10. Photography spots along the route would create memorable experiences for everyone.
(沿途设置拍照点将为每个人创造难忘体验。)
11. Feedback collection after the event will improve future logistical planning.
(活动后的意见收集将改进未来的后勤规划。)
12. Outdoor fitness activities could energize the group while promoting health.
(户外健身活动能在促进健康的同时激发团队活力。)
13. **A blend of creative workshops and recreational activities ensures broad appeal.**
(创意工作坊与娱乐活动的结合能确保广泛的吸引力。)
14. Local flora and fauna observation adds educational value to the spring outing.
(观察当地动植物能为春游增添教育意义。)
15. Refreshment breaks should be scheduled to maintain energy levels throughout the day.
(应安排茶歇时间以维持全天的精力水平。)
参考范文2:Dear Tom,
Greetings! Learning that you’re planning a spring outing to People’s Park next Saturday, I’m writing with enthusiasm to propose some activity ideas for our class gathering. As a way to make the event more engaging and meaningful, I’d like to share my suggestions.
First, organizing a nature photography contest would be a great choice. It allows us to explore the park’s scenic routes, capture local flora and fauna like blooming willows or playful birds, and create memorable experiences with designated photography spots. Additionally, a picnic arrangement with refreshment breaks is essential—sitting under the trees, sharing snacks, and chatting during leisure time naturally fosters community bonding. To kick off the day smoothly, ice-breaking exercises such as team-building games can enhance group dynamics and initiate collaborative tasks effectively. These activities also integrate environmental awareness by letting us appreciate nature, aligning perfectly with the spring outing theme.
I hope these ideas can help make the outing enjoyable and meaningful. Please feel free to share your thoughts, and I’m happy to assist with further logistical planning. Looking forward to your reply!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
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