内容正文:
英语写作课——
书面表达写作讲解及练习
Healthy Habits
洛阳市嵩县思源实验学校 张艳飞 Unit3
Learning aims:
1.掌握书面表达的写作步骤。
2.通过写英语作文,提高自己英语水平。
3.健康生活,做一个快乐学习的学生。
一.Writing steps(写作步骤).
二.Writing skills(写作技巧).
三.Writing practice(写作练习).
本课流程:
1. Cross-question(审题)
2. An outline drawing(列提纲)
3. Sentence Making(句子写作)
4. Sentence connection(句子衔接)
5. Checking(复查)
6. Copying out(抄写)
Writing steps(写作步骤)
Writing steps
1. Cross-question(审题)
Style (体裁)
Person(人称)
Tense(时态)
2. An outline drawing(列提纲)
List key points(列要点)
Arrange and Add(布局加首尾)
Writing steps
3. Sentence Making(组句)
words
phrases
sentences
Writing steps
4. Sentence connection(衔接)
sentences
passage
Linking words
(连接词)
Writing steps
5. Checking(核查)
Spelling(拼写)
Tense(时态)
Grammar (语法)
Handwriting(书写)
Punctuation marks(标点符号)
Writing steps
6. Copying out(重写)
书写规范,卷面整洁
Writing steps
1、善用意义相近的高级词汇,避免行文单调
Writing skills(写作技巧):
2、活用多种句型,尽量使用我们熟悉的句型, 避免重复和呆板,增加文采。
3、妙用引文和例子,旁征博引,丰富文章内容。
4、妙用关联词,使行文连贯流畅,使文章富有层次感。
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Healthy habits
Writing practice
Healthy habits
Writing tasks(写作任务):
健康的生活习惯对成长中的我们非常重要要。拥有了健康的生活习惯,我们才会有强健的体魄和充沛的精力,我们每天的生活和学习才会变得更加轻松和快乐。那么如何养成健康的生活习惯呢?请你以“Healthy Habits”为题,写一篇100词左右的英语短文,不出现自己真实姓名。要点提示:
1.多吃蔬菜水果,不吃垃圾食品;
2.保证充足的睡眠,早睡早起,不熬夜;
3.多做运动;
4.心态积极乐观。
Style(体裁):___________________
Tense(时态):___________________
Person(人称):___________________
说明文
一般现在时
第一人称
1. Cross-question(审题),定基调
2. An outline drawing
Beginning(引出话题):
Body(怎么做):
Ending(感受与总结):
健康的生活习惯是重要的。
1.多吃水果蔬菜,不吃垃圾食品。
2.保证充足睡眠,早睡早起,不熬夜。
3.多做运动。
4.心态积极乐观。
过一个健康和快乐的生活
It‘s important for us to have healthy habits.
1.have more fruit and vegetables.
2.have enough sleep.
3.do exercise more.
4.stay positive,
live a healthy and happy life.
Beginning:
Body:
Ending:
3. Sentence Making
As we all know,It’s important for us to......Here are some ways to ......
First, We should have healthy eating habits.We need to ... Don’t ....
Second, We must have enough sleep,It;s good for us to........Never......
What’s more,We should do exercise....
Last but not least,staying positive has many benefits,we can study and work better in a good mood.
With these healthy habits,we can live a healthy and happy life.
4. Sentence connection
sentences
passage
Linking words
(连接词)
本文主要叙述如何保持健康的四点做法,因此需要按顺序来安排文章,使文章内容连贯井然有序如:
First/Firstly/To start with...
Second/Secondly/ ...
Third/Thirdly/What’s more /Besides.....
Finally/Last but not least ...
5. Checking
Spelling(拼写)
Tense(时态)
Grammar (语法)
Handwriting(书写)
Punctuation marks(标点符号)
6. Copying out
书写规范,卷面整洁
Share your passages
Healthy Habits
As we all know, It’s important for us to have healthy habits .Here are some ways to keep healthy .
First, we should have healthy eating habits. We need to have more fruit and vegetables. Don’t eat too much junk food. And we can drink milk every day. It is good for our health.Second, we should have enough sleep. It's good for us to go to bed early and get up early. Never stay up late. Third, we should do exercise often. Sports can keep us fit. Last but not least, staying positive has amazing benefits.we can study and work better in a good mood.So be happy to be healthy.
With these healthy habits, we can live a healthy and happy life.
-Have a pleasant and colorful life after hard work.
-To be a happy and healthy student.
Thanks for your listening!
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