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突破15:演讲稿
语料储备
【句式建模】
1.篇首——深感荣幸
①我很荣幸代表学校在此演讲。
I am greatly honoured to speak here on behalf of my school.
②我从心底感谢你们今天给我这个机会在你们面前演讲。
Thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving me this chance to speak to you today.
2.篇中——拓展话题
①真正要紧的是提升人们保护环境的意识。
What really matters/counts is to raise people ’s awareness of protecting the environment.
②我们应该重视节约用水、保护环境。
We should attach great importance to saving water and protecting the environment.
③不可否认,环境污染越来越严重。
There ’s no denying that the environmental pollution is getting increasingly serious.
3.篇尾——感谢与祝福
①我希望大家觉得自己在这里的逗留是一次愉快的经历,你们的访问一定会促进我们的友谊。
I hope everyone finds your stay here an enjoyable experience and your visit will surely promote our friendship.
②我的演讲到此结束,谢谢大家。
That ’s all.Thank you for your attention/listening.
【话题词汇】
常用词汇
话题示例
相关表达
(1)honour/privilege(荣幸)
(2)count/matter(有影响)
(3)engagement(参与)
(4)attend/attendance(出席)
(5)on behalf of(代表)
(6)deliver a speech(发表演讲)
(7)extend our warm welcome to(热烈欢迎)
(8)attach great importance to(重视)
(9)lay emphasis on(强调)
(10)in conclusion(总而言之)
你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以 “Take a Break from Social Media”为题,写一篇发言稿参赛,内容包括:1.提出观点;2.陈述理由;3.发起倡议。
(1)沉迷于社交媒体be addicted to social media
(2)不能集中精力学习fail to concentrate on study
(3)不可避免地影响他们的学习成绩inevitably affect their academic performance
(4)过度接触虚拟世界excessive exposure to the virtual world
(5)制造虚假的现实感,失去真正的人际交往create a false sense of reality and a loss of real human contact
(6)暂时关闭我们的设备,拥抱现实世界turn off our devices for a while and embrace the physical world
假定你是你校英语社团负责人李华,你校邀请了Green教授来做主题为“How to enjoy English poems”的讲座。请你用英语写一段主持词开场白,内容包括:1.讲座目的;2.相关介绍;3.对观众的要求。
(1)由格林教授带来的英语诗歌讲座English poetry lecture delivered by Professor Green
(2)激励学生欣赏英语诗歌inspire our students to appreciate English poems
(3)著名的英国文学专家,专门研究诗歌a renowned expert in English literature and specializes in poetry
(4)以开放的心态积极参加讲座come with an open mind and actively participate in the lecture
(5)抓住这个宝贵的机会学习take this valuable chance to learn
重温真题
(2021·全国乙卷)
你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Be smart online learners为题写一篇发言稿参赛,内容包括:
1.分析优势与不足;
2.提出学习建议。
注意:
1.词数80个左右;
2.题目和首句已为你写好。
Be smart online learners
Online learning has become an important way to study recently._____________
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【审题与构思】
本次写作任务是一篇发言稿。发言稿是参加者为了在会议或者重要活动上表达自己的意见和看法而事先准备好的文稿。写发言稿时,要注意三点:1.观点要鲜明;2.条理清晰;3.语言简洁明快。
内容结构方面,可将文章分为三段。
第一段
总结概括目前线上学习(网络学习)的现状
第二段
阐述线上学习的优缺点
第三段
提出学习建议
【经典范文】
Be smart online learners
Online learning has become an important way to study recently.It is growing at a rapid rate, with millions of people of different ages, cultures, and genders around the world taking up courses.
However, it has both advantages and disadvantages.On the one hand, it is convenient and time-saving, allowing us to learn anytime and anywhere we like.Besides, it provides us with a wide range of learning resources and flexible learning ways.On the other hand, there is a greater chance of us being drawn to social media and other sites.We may also develop physical problems as a result of sitting in front of the screen for a long time.
To avoid these problems, we should try our best to concentrate on our study and take enough breaks from the screen to refresh our mind and body.
【学生习作】
Be smart online learners
Online learning has become an important way to study recently.I have been learning online for a long period.
Online learning is playing a very important role in education.Online courses indeed have brought me a lot of surprises and benefits.Online learning can provide flexible learning opportunities.Therefore, we don ’t have to worry about missing some important points.However, everything has its two sides.While learning online, it ’s difficult for me to interact with the teachers, which means some problems can ’t be solved in time.Some students might spend a lot of time playing computer games.
As far as I am concerned, we should be strict with ourselves while learning online.Thank you for your listening.
教师点评
[得分]11分
优点:1.要点齐全,内容完整;
2.线上学习的优势与不足条理清晰。
缺点:1.首段引入没有亮点,没有顺承首句,从线上学习的现状转移到个人观点;
2.第二段中,优势与不足各谈论了一个点,但占据了整个主体段落,语言过于啰嗦;最后一段给出的建议过于宽泛,不够具体;
3.语言较为平实,简单句居多,语言质量有待提高。
【修改与升级】
Be smart online learners
Online learning has become an important way to study recently.Being smart online learners plays a significant role here.Therefore, I ’d like to share my opinions regarding of its advantages and disadvantages.
There is no denying that the flexibility it provides allows us to learn at our own pace and on our own terms while the vast resources available online cater to diverse learning styles and preferences.However, with great advantages come challenges.The lack of face-to-face interaction can sometimes lead to feelings of isolation and distractions from social media can hinder our focus and productivity.Therefore, it is of significance to explore how to become smart online learners.Specific plans for what to learn online should come first in case that we are distracted.Besides, good time management contributes to our learning efficiency.
Thank you for your attention, and let ’s strive to be the best online learners we can be.
教师点评
[得分]14分
优点:1.要点齐全,内容完整,语言恰当,言之有理;
2.文章结构合理,层次分明。开篇直接点明在线学习的重要性,引出话题。接着,从在线学习的灵活性和资源丰富性两个方面展开论述其优势,同时指出了在线学习可能带来的挑战,如孤立感和社交媒体的干扰。最后,以“因此,探索如何成为聪明的在线学习者至关重要”作为过渡句,提出了具体的学习策略,包括制订明确的学习计划和良好的时间管理,以提高学习效率。结尾再次发出号召,鼓励大家成为最好的在线学习者。
3.演讲稿在要点的比重分配上合理,内容丰富充实,恰当地使用了从句等语言结构,增强了表达效果。
实战演练
(2021·浙江1月高考)
假定你是李华,下周有新西兰学生访问你校,你将作为学生代表致欢迎辞。请为此写一篇发言稿,内容包括:
1.表示欢迎;
2.介绍活动安排;
3.表达祝愿。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
My dear friends, I am Li Hua.On behalf of our school, I ’m delighted to extend warm welcome to you.Your visit bears great significance.
We have prepared a variety of activities to ensure your time with us is both enjoyable and enriching.Our agenda includes a campus tour, where you will get to see the facilities and the vibrant life of our school.We will also have a cultural exchange session, where students from both our schools will share and learn about each other ’s traditions and customs.Additionally, there will be a sports day, where we can all come together and engage in friendly competition, fostering camaraderie and fun.
As we embark on this journey of discovery and friendship, I would like to express my sincerest wishes for a fruitful and enjoyable visit.Thank you.
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