2025-2026学年 高一英语上学期 第二次月考复习 - 作文（江苏专用）

25-26 高一上 第二次月考复习 – 作文 目录 1. 24-25 苏州 园区星海实验中学 高一上 12月月考 2. 24-25 苏州姑苏区第十中学 高一上 12月月考 3. 24-25 苏州姑苏区苏州大学附属中学 高一上 12月月考 4. 24-25 常州高级中学 高一上 12月月考 5. 24-25 常州市五校联考 高一上 12月月考 6. 24-25 海安高级中学 高一上 12月月考 7. 24-25 南京师范大学附属中学 高一上 12月月考 8. 24-25 泰州中学 高一上 12月月考 9. 24-25 锡山高级中学 高一上 12月测试 10. 24-25 扬州大学附属中学 高一上 12月月考 11. 24-25 扬州市八校 高一上 12月学情检测 12. 24-25 扬州市广陵区扬州中学 高一上 12月月考 1. 24-25 苏州 园区星海实验中学 高一上 12月月考 第一节 应用文写作（满分15分） 56. 假定你是学校影视社团的负责人李华。上周学校举行了一年一度的“校园电影节”，旨在给大家传播有价值的影视作品并邀请专业人士点评。请你写一篇简要的英文报道刊登在 Xinghai Daily 上，概括本次电影节的情况。 内容包括：1. 校园电影节的主要活动安排及亮点；2. 同学们的一些反馈。 写作要求： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Campus Film Festival Goes off with a Bang ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 第二节 微写作（满分15分） 57. 主题：Be sporty, be healthy 研究表明，除了均衡的饮食和规律的作息外，经常锻炼对身心大有益处。首先，体育活动能增强心肺功能。经常锻炼的人往往免疫系统会更好，患病的风险更低。锻炼对心理健康有好处，因为它能帮你缓解心理压力，克服负面情绪。 解决方式：一些中国传统武术，如太极拳近些年风靡起来。根植于中国的阴阳学说，太极拳的练习旨在通过一些相对的动作来维持人体内部的阴阳调和，并达成一种身心平衡的状态。但请记住刚开始锻炼强度要小，热身在先，拉伸在后。 结论：美就是要成为最优的自己——不论是内在，还是外在。 Be sporty, be healthy ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 24-25 苏州姑苏区第十中学 高一上 12月月考 第一节: 应用文写作（满分15分） 56. 假定你是李华，你的交换生好友Peter对你校刚建立的电影鉴赏社团（Film Appreciation Society）很感兴趣，特发邮件向你咨询相关信息。请你回复邮件，内容包括： 1. 社团成立的目的； 2. 社团的活动的细节（包括活动时间、地点和主要内容）； 3. 为他的加入提供建议。 注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Peter, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 第二节 话题写作（满分15分） 57. 主题——Appearance Anxiety Among High School Students 高中生对自己的外表感到相当焦虑，严重影响了他们的自尊心和整体心理健康。 媒体中的美学标准对大多数人来说根本无法达到，这使得青少年陷入了一场无望的战斗。此外，朋友们在社交媒体分享的既诱人又时尚的形象也让他们倍感压力。由此，他们最终可能会对自己感觉更糟。 尽管存在这些外部影响，但仍存在有效的应对策略。首先，不要盲目追求流行的美学标准。其次，通过关注自己独特的优势来培养自信。最后，建立对个人美丽的欣赏。如此，青少年便可以摆脱压力，拥抱真实的自我。 1.词数100左右。 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Appearance Anxiety Among High School Students _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 24-25 苏州姑苏区苏州大学附属中学 高一上 12月月考 第一节 应用文写作(满分15分) 56. 假定你是李华，你的笔友 Richard是你校的一名交换生，正在犹豫选科的问题，他不确定选择文科方向还是理科方向，给你写了一封邮件征求你的建议请你给他写一封回信。 注意：1. 写作词数应为100个左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯； 3. 参考词语：选考科目 elective subjects; 文科 liberal-arts; 理科 sciences Dear Richard, Hope this email finds you well. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 第二节 话题写作(满分15分) 57. 现如今，人们对强身健体越来越重视，因为定期锻炼对身心健康都有奇效。一方面，它可以帮助建立更好的免疫系统，降低患病的风险；另一方面，它可以减少压力，克服负面情绪。 然而，过度运动或不恰当的运动也会带来损伤。我们需要成为明智的运动者：制定锻炼计划并坚持；合理饮食；充分热身与拉伸；寻求专业教练的帮助……。（展开写2-3点） How to be a wise exerciser? ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4. 24-25 常州高级中学 高一上 12月月考 第五部分写作(满分15分) 58. 假定你是高中生李华，你的英国好友David向你倾诉，由于刷手机短视频(short video)上瘾而影响到了健康和学业，为此他很苦恼。请你给他写一封信，提供一些建议戒掉网瘾，内容包括： 1.表示担忧； 2.提出建议； 3.表达祝愿。 参考词汇：对……上瘾 be addicted to(doing) sth 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear David, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 5. 24-25 常州市五校联考 高一上 12月月考 第一节 应用文写作（满分15分） 46. 假定你是李华，你校英语报的编辑将在英文报开设一个新的专栏，专门推荐一些经典英文好电影。请你根据以下提示给英语报写一封推荐信，推荐一部你喜欢的英文电影。 内容包括：1. 介绍电影的基本信息； 2. 推荐这部电影的理由。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80词左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear editor, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 第二节 读后续写（满分25分） 47. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 “Why did she let out my secrets?” I thought regretfully. I’ll always remember that day, when I was so surprised by all the strange looks everyone was giving me. Those thoughts will always stay with me. And I couldn’t believe I would lose the friendship of the person I trusted the most. Five years back, Sally was the new kid in class. I don’t know what it was, but something unique about her drew me to her. She was the most friendly person I knew. We started as classmates. But after a few months, I found we had a lot in common and that we got along well with each other. We were like best friends. So, I never expected her to hurt me in such a big way. I don’t know what made me tell Sally about my personal life. She made the matter bigger than it was, adding her own description of it and telling everyone at school. It hurt me seriously. After she gave away my secrets, everyone at school started laughing at me, looking at me and giggling (咯咯地笑) whenever I passed by. After this terrible situation, I changed schools. Sally called me many times, but I didn’t answer. My heart was broken. I tried hard to heal from the scars (伤痕) she left on my heart. I started a new life. After five years, my life went back to the way it was, with new friends. But one day, I met Anna at the market. She was my classmate from 3rd grade. She told me that Sally wasn’t the one who brought my secrets to light. Mary was. Mary was our school’s big mouth who always wanted to stick her nose into other people’s business. I was at a loss. I wished I could have asked Sally about this. I wished I could go back in time and fix my mistakes. I was struggling. Maybe I should give Sally a call. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 A few days later, I gathered the courage to pick up the phone. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I have learned a lesson from the experience. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6. 24-25 海安高级中学 高一上 12月月考 应用文写作（满分15分） 66. 近日，你校英语社举行了一场以“人工智能是否能创造艺术”为题的辩论，请你写一篇新闻稿，为校英语报报道此事，内容包括： 1. 辩论过程； 2. 辩论结果； 3. 活动影响。 参考词汇：正方 the affirmative team, 反方 the negative team 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Can AI create art? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7. 24-25 南京师范大学附属中学 高一上 12月月考 第四节翻译句子: 根据括号内提示将下列句子翻译为英文。 58. 媒体的审美标准可能对那些试图模仿自己最喜爱的明星形象的青少年产生负面影响。(effect, 定语从句)(汉译英) _______________________________________________________________________ 59. 如果你想满足所有人的期望，你最终会感到疲惫和焦虑。(live, end up)(汉译英) _______________________________________________________________________ 60. 尽管日程繁忙，他仍然很重视与家人共度时光。(despite, attach)(汉译英) _______________________________________________________________________ 61. 每次我们庆祝时，我们都要想一想那些无法与我们同在的人。(every time, , spare)(汉译英) _______________________________________________________________________ 62. 在现代科技的帮助下，他解决难题的方法已变得更加高效。(aid n. , approach n. )(汉译英) _______________________________________________________________________ 8. 24-25 泰州中学 高一上 12月月考 第一节 (满分15分) 58. 假如你是李华。期中考试结束后，上周日学校组织全校高一师生去人民公园进行了一次户外徒步活动，受到了大家的一致好评。请你就本次活动给校园英语报写一篇报道。 内容包括： 1.活动内容 2.活动的意义。 注意：1. 词数80左右。 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Hiking to the People’s Park ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 第二节 (满分25分) 59. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Lily and Susan had been the best of friends since kindergarten. They shared everything—from secrets to lunches—and were inseparable. One sunny afternoon, as they walked in the nearby park, chatting about their plans for the future, they saw an injured dog. Without hesitation, Lily and Susan decided to help the poor little dog. They carefully held it and rushed to the nearest vet (兽医) clinic. The vet assured them that the dog would be fine with some rest and medicine. Relieved, they decided to name the dog Lucky and take turns to care for it until it recovered. Their act of kindness brought them even closer, and they spent many joyful hours playing with Lucky in the park. However, as high school progressed, their interests started to diverge (出现分歧) . Lily became passionate about painting, spending hours in the art room perfecting her art works, while Susan developed a deep interest in science, joining the school’s science club and taking part in various competitions. As time passed, they found themselves with less and less in common. One day, a misunderstanding occurred when Lily blamed Susan for ignoring Lucky because of her busy schedule. Susan felt hurt and believed that Lily didn’t understand the pressure she was under with her studies and extra-curricular activities. They argued, and for the first time, their friendship seemed strained. Feeling disheartened, both girls went their separate ways. But despite their differences, they couldn’t shake off the memories of better times and the close relationship they once shared. One evening, as Lily walked home from an art class, she noticed Susan sitting alone on the side of the road, looking deep in thought. She hesitated but then gathered up the courage to approach her. “Mind if I sit down?” she asked softly. Susan looked up, surprised but not unwelcoming. “I was just thinking about old times,” she admitted. “Me too,” Lily said quietly. 注意：1. 续写词数应为 150个左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸相应位置作答。 They sat in silence for a while, both lost in their thoughts. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ After talking, they came up with a plan to rebuild their relationship. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 24-25 锡山高级中学 高一上 12月测试 第四部分 微写作（满分15分） 56. 翻译下列句子，并增加适当的过渡词语，把它们连成一篇小短文。 1.我将就电影制作中你们可能不太熟悉的一些方面做一个简单的介绍。 2.我想让你们注意电影的一个重要因素——音效。 3.另一个我认为非常重要的方面就是视觉特效。 4.道具也为一部电影的成功助力。 5.正如“泰坦尼克号”上可怜的乘客看到的冰山一角一样，我们在影院银幕上看的也只是电影制作这座巨大冰山的一角而已。 6.希望下次你们走进电影院的时候，能想一想所有那些才华出众的幕后工作者。 连句成文： ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10. 24-25 扬州大学附属中学 高一上 12月月考 应用文写作 （满分15分） 66. 假定你是李华，你的英国好友Jayne得知你校本学期开设了影评写作选修课，发来邮件询问你对该课程的看法。请你给她写一封回信，内容包括： 1. 发表看法； 2. 阐述理由。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：选修课 optional course Dear Jayne, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 11. 24-25 扬州市八校 高一上 12月学情检测 应用文写作（满分15分） 86. 假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他想强身健体，计划选择一项可以长期坚持的运动并向你征询建议。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括： 1.推荐的运动；2.推荐的理由。 注意：1.词数不少于50；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 12. 24-25 扬州市广陵区扬州中学 高一上 12月月考 写作(满分20分) 66. 假定你是李华，你的爱尔兰笔友Adam热衷于中国历史文化。他计划今年假期来华旅游，希望你给他推荐旅游城市。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1. 表示欢迎；2. 推荐旅游城市；3. 表示祝愿。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卷的相应位置作答。 Dear Adam, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 2 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 25-26 高一上 第二次月考复习 – 作文 目录 1. 24-25 苏州 园区星海实验中学 高一上 12月月考 2. 24-25 苏州姑苏区第十中学 高一上 12月月考 3. 24-25 苏州姑苏区苏州大学附属中学 高一上 12月月考 4. 24-25 常州高级中学 高一上 12月月考 5. 24-25 常州市五校联考 高一上 12月月考 6. 24-25 海安高级中学 高一上 12月月考 7. 24-25 南京师范大学附属中学 高一上 12月月考 8. 24-25 泰州中学 高一上 12月月考 9. 24-25 锡山高级中学 高一上 12月测试 10. 24-25 扬州大学附属中学 高一上 12月月考 11. 24-25 扬州市八校 高一上 12月学情检测 12. 24-25 扬州市广陵区扬州中学 高一上 12月月考 1. 24-25 苏州 园区星海实验中学 高一上 12月月考 第一节 应用文写作（满分15分） 56. 假定你是学校影视社团的负责人李华。上周学校举行了一年一度的“校园电影节”，旨在给大家传播有价值的影视作品并邀请专业人士点评。请你写一篇简要的英文报道刊登在 Xinghai Daily 上，概括本次电影节的情况。 内容包括：1. 校园电影节的主要活动安排及亮点；2. 同学们的一些反馈。 写作要求： 1. 词数80左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Campus Film Festival Goes off with a Bang ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Campus Film Festival Goes off with a Bang Last week, our school’s annual Campus Film Festival was successfully held. A diverse range of valuable films from different genres were screened, aiming to enrich students’ cultural life. The festival’s highlight was the presence of professional film critics who provided in-depth analysis and commentary after each screening, enhancing students’ understanding of film art. The event received an enthusiastic response from the students. Many expressed that they not only enjoyed the visual feasts but also broadened their horizons. This festival has truly become a platform for students to explore the charm of films and will be remembered for a long time. 【解析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以学校影视社团负责人李华的身份，用英文简要报道学校举行的 “校园电影节” 的情况，包括活动安排及亮点和同学们的反馈。 【详解】1.词汇积累 各种各样的：a diverse range of→all kinds of 充实：enrich→enhance 热情的：enthusiastic→passionate 视野：horizons→viewpoints 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：A diverse range of valuable films from different genres were screened, aiming to enrich students’ cultural life. 拓展句：A diverse range of valuable films from different genres were screened, whose aim was to enrich students’ cultural life. 【点睛】【高分句型1】The festival’s highlight was the presence of professional film critics who provided in-depth analysis and commentary after each screening, enhancing students’ understanding of film art. (运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句和现在分词作状语) 【高分句型2】Many expressed that they not only enjoyed the visual feasts but also broadened their horizons. (运用了that引导的宾语从句) 第二节 微写作（满分15分） 57. 主题：Be sporty, be healthy 研究表明，除了均衡的饮食和规律的作息外，经常锻炼对身心大有益处。首先，体育活动能增强心肺功能。经常锻炼的人往往免疫系统会更好，患病的风险更低。锻炼对心理健康有好处，因为它能帮你缓解心理压力，克服负面情绪。 解决方式：一些中国传统武术，如太极拳近些年风靡起来。根植于中国的阴阳学说，太极拳的练习旨在通过一些相对的动作来维持人体内部的阴阳调和，并达成一种身心平衡的状态。但请记住刚开始锻炼强度要小，热身在先，拉伸在后。 结论：美就是要成为最优的自己——不论是内在，还是外在。 Be sporty, be healthy __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Be sporty, be healthy Research shows that, besides a balanced diet and regular sleep, frequent exercise greatly benefits both body and mind. First, physical activity boosts heart and lung health. Regular exercisers often have stronger immune systems and lower illness risks. Exercise also improves mental health by reducing stress and helping overcome negative emotions. In recent years, traditional Chinese martial arts like Tai Chi have become very popular. Based on the Yin-Yang philosophy, Tai Chi uses gentle movements to balance the body’s energy, promoting harmony between mind and body. When starting any new exercise, begin with low intensity, warm up before, and stretch after. Beauty comes from becoming the best version of yourself — inside and out. 【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。文章通过科学研究和具体例子，阐述了经常锻炼对身心健康的重要性，并介绍了中国传统武术如太极拳的益处及练习注意事项。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 除了……之外(还)：besides → apart from 压力：stress → pressure 克服：overcome → conquer 减少：reduce → decrease 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句： When starting any new exercise, begin with low intensity, warm up before, and stretch after. 拓展句：When you start any new exercise, begin with low intensity, warm up before, and stretch after. 【点睛】【高分句型2】Research shows that, besides a balanced diet and regular sleep, frequent exercise greatly benefits both body and mind.(运用了that引导宾语从句) 【高分句型2】Based on the Yin-Yang philosophy, Tai Chi uses gentle movements to balance the body’s energy, promoting harmony between mind and body.(运用了过去分词短语作状语和现在分词短语作状语) 2. 24-25 苏州姑苏区第十中学 高一上 12月月考 第一节: 应用文写作（满分15分） 56. 假定你是李华，你的交换生好友Peter对你校刚建立的电影鉴赏社团（Film Appreciation Society）很感兴趣，特发邮件向你咨询相关信息。请你回复邮件，内容包括： 1. 社团成立的目的； 2. 社团的活动的细节（包括活动时间、地点和主要内容）； 3. 为他的加入提供建议。 注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Peter, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】One possible version: Dear Peter, I’m glad you’re interested in the Film Appreciation Society newly established in our school. The purpose of this society is to promote students’ understanding and appreciation of films from different cultures. Our society usually meets on weekends in the school’s multimedia room. We watch a variety of classic and contemporary films together, followed by in-depth discussions about the themes, characters and filming techniques. Sometimes, we also invite professional film critics to give lectures, so that we can gain a deeper understanding of films. If you want to join, I suggest that you prepare some basic knowledge about film history and theory in advance. This will help you better participate in our activities. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李华的身份，给对电影鉴赏社团感兴趣的交换生好友Peter回复邮件，告知他社团成立的目的，从时间、地点和主要内容三方面详细描述社团活动的细节，最后为他提供加入该社团的建议。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 促进：promote→advance, facilitate 各种各样的：a variety of→a wide range of, different kinds of 收获：gain→obtain, acquire 参与：participate in→take part in 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：We watch a variety of classic and contemporary films together, followed by in-depth discussions about the themes, characters and filming techniques. 拓展句：We watch a variety of classic and contemporary films together, after which we have in-depth discussions about the themes, characters and filming techniques. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Sometimes, we also invite professional film critics to give lectures, so that we can gain a deeper understanding of films. (运用了so that引导目的状语从句) [高分句型2] If you want to join, I suggest that you prepare some basic knowledge about film history and theory in advance. (运用了if引导条件状语从句、that引导宾语从句、虚拟语气) 第二节 话题写作（满分15分） 57. 主题——Appearance Anxiety Among High School Students 高中生对自己的外表感到相当焦虑，严重影响了他们的自尊心和整体心理健康。 媒体中的美学标准对大多数人来说根本无法达到，这使得青少年陷入了一场无望的战斗。此外，朋友们在社交媒体分享的既诱人又时尚的形象也让他们倍感压力。由此，他们最终可能会对自己感觉更糟。 尽管存在这些外部影响，但仍存在有效的应对策略。首先，不要盲目追求流行的美学标准。其次，通过关注自己独特的优势来培养自信。最后，建立对个人美丽的欣赏。如此，青少年便可以摆脱压力，拥抱真实的自我。 1.词数100左右。 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Appearance Anxiety Among High School Students _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Appearance Anxiety Among High School Students Appearance anxiety is an important issue among high school students, profoundly impacting their self-esteem and overall mental health. The unrealistic beauty standards perpetuated by media create an unattainable ideal, leading many teens to feel inadequate and engage in a relentless battle against their appearance. Social media further exacerbates this issue, as friends share glamorous and trendy images, increasing pressure to conform to these ideals. Consequently, students often end up feeling worse about themselves. However, there are effective strategies to cope with this anxiety. First, it is essential to avoid blindly chasing popular beauty trends that may not suit individual identities. Instead, students should focus on their unique strengths and qualities to build self-confidence. Additionally, cultivating an appreciation for personal beauty can help shift the focus from societal standards to self-acceptance. By adopting these strategies, teenagers can alleviate pressure and embrace their authentic selves. 【解析】 【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇开放性作文。要求考生以“Appearance Anxiety Among High School Students”为题写一篇短文。 【详解】1.词汇积累 重要的：important→significant 影响：impact→influence 首先：first→to begin with 处理：cope with→deal with 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Appearance anxiety is an important issue among high school students, profoundly impacting their self-esteem and overall mental health. 拓展句：Appearance anxiety is an important issue among high school students, which profoundly impacts their self-esteem and overall mental health. 【点睛】[高分句型1]The unrealistic beauty standards perpetuated by media create an unattainable ideal, leading many teens to feel inadequate and engage in a relentless battle against their appearance.（运用了现在分词作状语） [高分句型2]First, it is essential to avoid blindly chasing popular beauty trends that may not suit individual identities.（运用了that引导定语从句） 3. 24-25 苏州姑苏区苏州大学附属中学 高一上 12月月考 第一节 应用文写作(满分15分) 56. 假定你是李华，你的笔友 Richard是你校的一名交换生，正在犹豫选科的问题，他不确定选择文科方向还是理科方向，给你写了一封邮件征求你的建议请你给他写一封回信。 注意：1. 写作词数应为100个左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯； 3. 参考词语：选考科目 elective subjects; 文科 liberal-arts; 理科 sciences Dear Richard, Hope this email finds you well. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】One possible version: Dear Richard, Hope this email finds you well. Learning that you are deeply upset and troubled by what elective subjects to choose lately, I would like to share my ideas with you. To begin with, you are supposed to determine where your passion and interest lies. Only in your favorite field will you be able to find pleasure and accomplish great achievements. Additionally, you had better objectively analyse and compare your performances in sciences and liberal-arts, and then figure out which subject you are better at. Lastly, it’s your own thoughts that play a decisive role in determining what elective subjects to choose. I really hope that you will find the elective subjects that you are passionate about. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生给笔友 Richard回信，针对他关于选科的困惑给出建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 选择：choose → select 最近：lately → recently 热情：passion → enthusiasm 此外：additionally → in addition 2.句式拓展 同义句改写 原句：Learning that you are deeply upset and troubled by what elective subjects to choose lately, I would like to share my ideas with you. 拓展句：Because I learn that you are deeply upset and troubled by what elective subjects to choose lately, I would like to share my ideas with you. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Only in your favorite field will you be able to find pleasure and accomplish great achievements.（运用了“only+状语”位于句首，引出的部分倒装句） 【高分句型2】Lastly, it’s your own thoughts that play a decisive role in determining what elective subjects to choose.（运用了强调句型“it+be+被强调部分+that…”强调句子主语，what引导宾语从句） 第二节 话题写作(满分15分) 57. 现如今，人们对强身健体越来越重视，因为定期锻炼对身心健康都有奇效。一方面，它可以帮助建立更好的免疫系统，降低患病的风险；另一方面，它可以减少压力，克服负面情绪。 然而，过度运动或不恰当的运动也会带来损伤。我们需要成为明智的运动者：制定锻炼计划并坚持；合理饮食；充分热身与拉伸；寻求专业教练的帮助……。（展开写2-3点） How to be a wise exerciser? ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 How to be a wise exerciser? Nowadays, more people focus on staying fit because regular exercise benefits both body and mind. It builds a strong immune system and reduces illness risks. Exercise also relieves stress and improves mood. However, over-exercising or improper exercise can cause injuries. To be a wise exerciser, follow these tips. First, create a plan and stick to it. Set realistic goals and gradually increase your workout intensity. Exercise regularly but avoid pushing too hard. A plan that is tailored to your needs keeps you healthy and safe. Second, warm up and stretch properly. Always start with a warm-up and end with stretching to help muscles recover and prevent soreness. Proper warm-ups reduce injury risks and improve flexibility. By following these tips, you can enjoy the benefits of exercise while staying safe and healthy. 【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生介绍定期锻炼对身心健康的好处，并强调了过度或不恰当运动可能带来的风险，最后给出成为明智运动者的建议。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 专注于：focus on → concentrate on 减少：reduce → decrease 缓解、减轻：relieve → ease 目标：goal → aim 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：By following these tips, you can enjoy the benefits of exercise while staying safe and healthy. 拓展句：By following these tips, which are designed to help you stay safe and healthy, you can fully enjoy the benefits of exercise. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Nowadays, more people focus on staying fit because regular exercise benefits both body and mind.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句) 【高分句型2】A plan that is tailored to your needs keeps you healthy and safe.(运用了that引导的定语从句) 4. 24-25 常州高级中学 高一上 12月月考 写作(满分15分) 58. 假定你是高中生李华，你的英国好友David向你倾诉，由于刷手机短视频(short video)上瘾而影响到了健康和学业，为此他很苦恼。请你给他写一封信，提供一些建议戒掉网瘾，内容包括： 1.表示担忧； 2.提出建议； 3.表达祝愿。 参考词汇：对……上瘾 be addicted to(doing) sth 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear David, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear David, Hearing that you are addicted to watching the short videos on your phone, I am deeply concerned about your obsession and writing to offer some practical advice on how to cope with your Internet addiction. I strongly recommend that you should make a workable schedule and have your time well-organized, which can help you develop the good habit of living regularly. Besides, you’d better reduce the time you spend in watching short videos. I will be delighted if you benefit from my suggestions. Yours Li Hua 【解析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友David写一封信，提供一些建议，帮助他戒掉网瘾。 【详解】1.词汇积累 高兴：delighted→glad 建议：recommend→suggest 减少：reduce→cut down 此外：besides→in addition 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：I strongly recommend that you should make a workable schedule and have your time well-organized, which can help you develop the good habit of living regularly. 拓展句：I strongly recommend that you should make a workable schedule and have your time well-organized because this can help you develop the good habit of living regularly. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Hearing that you are addicted to watching the short videos on your phone, I am deeply concerned about your obsession and writing to offer some practical advice on how to cope with your Internet addiction. (运用了that引导宾语从句) [高分句型2] I will be delighted if you benefit from my suggestions. (运用了if引导条件状语从句) 5. 24-25 常州市五校联考 高一上 12月月考 第一节 应用文写作（满分15分） 46. 假定你是李华，你校英语报的编辑将在英文报开设一个新的专栏，专门推荐一些经典英文好电影。请你根据以下提示给英语报写一封推荐信，推荐一部你喜欢的英文电影。 内容包括：1. 介绍电影的基本信息；2. 推荐这部电影的理由。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80词左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear editor, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours Li Hua 【答案】Dear editor, I’m writing to recommend my favorite movie, “The Shawshank Redemption”, for your new movie column. This 1994 classic, directed by Frank Darabont, stars Tim Robbins and Morgan Freeman. It tells the story of Andy Dufresne, a banker wrongly convicted of murder, and his unwavering hope for freedom. The reason I love this movie is its powerful themes of hope, friendship, and perseverance. It shows that no matter how difficult life gets, as long as we hold on to hope, we can overcome any obstacle. The performances are outstanding, and the storyline is both touching and inspiring. I believe it's a must-see for all movie lovers. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【导语】本篇是应用文写作。校英语报的编辑将在英文报开设一个新的专栏，专门推荐一些经典英文好电影，要求考生给英语报写一封推荐信，推荐一部喜欢的英文电影。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 推荐：recommend→propose 坚定的：unwavering→steadfast 展示：show→display 鼓舞人心的：inspiring→encouraging 2. 句式拓展 同义句替换 原句：It tells the story of Andy Dufresne, a banker wrongly convicted of murder, and his unwavering hope for freedom. 拓展句：It tells the story of Andy Dufresne, a banker who was wrongly convicted of murder, and how he maintains his unwavering hope for freedom despite the circumstances. 【点睛】[高分句型1]The reason I love this movie is its powerful themes of hope, friendship, and perseverance.(运用了省略关系词的定语从句) [高分句型2]It shows that no matter how difficult life gets, as long as we hold on to hope, we can overcome any obstacle.(运用了that引导的宾语从句和as long as引导的条件状语从句) 第二节 读后续写（满分25分） 47. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 “Why did she let out my secrets?” I thought regretfully. I’ll always remember that day, when I was so surprised by all the strange looks everyone was giving me. Those thoughts will always stay with me. And I couldn’t believe I would lose the friendship of the person I trusted the most. Five years back, Sally was the new kid in class. I don’t know what it was, but something unique about her drew me to her. She was the most friendly person I knew. We started as classmates. But after a few months, I found we had a lot in common and that we got along well with each other. We were like best friends. So, I never expected her to hurt me in such a big way. I don’t know what made me tell Sally about my personal life. She made the matter bigger than it was, adding her own description of it and telling everyone at school. It hurt me seriously. After she gave away my secrets, everyone at school started laughing at me, looking at me and giggling (咯咯地笑) whenever I passed by. After this terrible situation, I changed schools. Sally called me many times, but I didn’t answer. My heart was broken. I tried hard to heal from the scars (伤痕) she left on my heart. I started a new life. After five years, my life went back to the way it was, with new friends. But one day, I met Anna at the market. She was my classmate from 3rd grade. She told me that Sally wasn’t the one who brought my secrets to light. Mary was. Mary was our school’s big mouth who always wanted to stick her nose into other people’s business. I was at a loss. I wished I could have asked Sally about this. I wished I could go back in time and fix my mistakes. I was struggling. Maybe I should give Sally a call. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 A few days later, I gathered the courage to pick up the phone. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I have learned a lesson from the experience. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】A few days later, I gathered the courage to pick up the phone. My heart pounded as I dialed Sally’s number. When she answered, there was a moment of silence. Then, I took a deep breath and said, “Sally, I heard the truth. I’m sorry for not answering your calls.” Sally’s voice was shaky as she replied, “I’m glad you called. I’ve been so worried.” We talked for a long time, and gradually, the ice between us began to melt. I have learned a lesson from the experience. Trust is fragile and once broken, it’s hard to repair. But with communication and understanding, there can be a chance for people to make up with each other. This incident has taught me to be more cautious in sharing my secrets and to give people a chance to explain. We can’t always jump to conclusions. Life is full of misunderstandings, and it’s up to us to find the courage to face them and work towards solving them. 【解析】【导语】本文以人物为线索展开。作者和莎莉是好朋友，作者把自己的秘密告诉给莎莉，然后，作者的秘密被泄露给他人，作者被他人嘲笑，作者认为是莎莉把自己的秘密告诉给他人。作者转学，莎莉多次给作者打电话，作者都没有接电话，作者感到受到伤害。后来，作者得知是玛丽泄露自己的秘密而不是莎莉。作者主动给莎莉打电话道歉，二人摒弃前嫌，言归于好。由此，作者体会颇深。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“几天后，我鼓起勇气拿起电话。”可知，第一段可描写作者给莎莉打电话道歉，通过交流二人摒弃前嫌，言归于好。 ②由第二段首句内容“我从这次经历中吸取了教训。”可知，第二段可描写作者由这件事得到的教训和体会。 2.续写线索：打电话——道歉——重归于好——教训——感悟 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①怦怦地跳：pound/thump ②恢复；修复：repair/restore ③解决：solve/resolve 情绪类 ①担心的：worried/concerned ②谨慎的：cautious/prudent 【点睛】 [高分句型1] My heart pounded as I dialed Sally’s number. (运用了as引导的时间状语从句) [高分句型2] When she answered, there was a moment of silence. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句) 6. 24-25 海安高级中学 高一上 12月月考 应用文写作（满分15分） 66. 近日，你校英语社举行了一场以“人工智能是否能创造艺术”为题的辩论，请你写一篇新闻稿，为校英语报报道此事，内容包括： 1. 辩论过程； 2. 辩论结果； 3. 活动影响。 参考词汇：正方 the affirmative team, 反方 the negative team 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Can AI create art? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version Can AI create art? Recently, the English Society at our school hosted a lively debate on the topic, “Can artificial intelligence create art?” The event drew an enthusiastic audience of around 600 students. The affirmative team argued that AI can generate innovative and valuable artwork through algorithms and data analysis. The negative team, however, contended that true art requires human emotion, soul, experience, and intention, which AI lacks. After a heated exchange and Q&A session, the judges declared the negative team the winner due to their strong reasoning and persuasive delivery. The debate sparked interest in AI and creativity, encouraging students to think critically about technology’s role in art and life. 【解析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于报道。要求考生根据给定的背景信息，撰写一篇关于学校英语社举行的“人工智能是否能创造艺术”辩论活动的新闻稿，内容包括辩论过程、辩论结果和活动影响。 【详解】1.词汇积累 最近：recently → lately   举办：host → hold 吸引：draw → attract 需要：require → need 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：After a heated exchange and Q&A session, the judges declared the negative team the winner due to their strong reasoning and persuasive delivery. 拓展句：After a heated exchange and Q&A session, the judges declared that the negative team was the winner due to their strong reasoning and persuasive delivery. 【点睛】【高分句型1】The affirmative team argued that AI can generate innovative and valuable artwork through algorithms and data analysis. (运用了that引导的宾语从句) 【高分句型2】The negative team, however, contended that true art requires human emotion, soul, experience, and intention, which AI lacks.(运用了that引导宾语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句) 7. 24-25 南京师范大学附属中学 高一上 12月月考 第四节翻译句子：根据括号内提示将下列句子翻译为英文。 58. 媒体的审美标准可能对那些试图模仿自己最喜爱的明星形象的青少年产生负面影响。(effect, 定语从句)(汉译英) _______________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Standards of beauty in the media can have a negative effect on teens who try to copy the looks of their favorite stars. 【解析】 【详解】考查名词、动词短语和定语从句。表示“媒体的审美标准”应用名词短语standards of beauty in the media，作主语，首字母需大写，表示“对……产生负面影响”应用动词短语have a negative effect on...，表示“试图做某事”应用动词短语try to do...，作定语从句的谓语动词，从句主语为teens，同时作have a negative effect on的宾语，关系代词应用who，表示“模仿”应用动词copy，表示“最喜爱的明星形象”应用名词短语the looks of their favorite stars，作copy的宾语，故翻译为Standards of beauty in the media can have a negative effect on teens who try to copy the looks of their favorite stars。 59. 如果你想满足所有人期望，你最终会感到疲惫和焦虑。(live, end up)(汉译英) _______________________________________________________________________ 【答案】If you want to live up to everyone’s expectations, you might end up (feeling) tired and anxious. 【解析】 【详解】考查if引导条件状语从句。“想要做某事”表达为want to do...；“满足所有人的期望”表达为live up to everyone’s expectations；“最终做某事”表达为end up doing...；“感到”表达为feel；“疲惫的”表达为tired；“焦虑的”表达为anxious。“如果你想满足所有人的期望”为if引导条件状语从句，用一般现在时；“你最终会感到疲惫和焦虑”为主句，表达为：you might end up (feeling) tired and anxious. 故翻译为：If you want to live up to everyone’s expectations, you might end up (feeling) tired and anxious. 60. 尽管日程繁忙，他仍然很重视与家人共度时光。(despite, attach)(汉译英) _______________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Despite his busy schedule/Despite the fact that he has/had a tight schedule, he still attaches/attached importance to spending time with his family. 【解析】 【详解】考查短语和时态。表示“尽管”可用despite或despite the fact that，表示“日程繁忙”可翻译为his busy schedule，或用he作主语，“日程繁忙”翻译为have a tight schedule；表示“仍然”用副词still；表示“很重视”短语为attach importance to doing sth.；表示“与家人共度时光”用动名词短语spending time with his family。可用一般现在时或一般过去时。故翻译为Despite his busy schedule/Despite the fact that he has/had a tight schedule, he still attaches/attached importance to spending time with his family. 61. 每次我们庆祝时，我们都要想一想那些无法与我们同在的人。(every time, , spare)(汉译英) _______________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Every time we celebrate, we need to spare a thought for those who can’t be with us. 【解析】 【详解】考查状语从句和短语。表示“每次”用every time，引导时间状语从句，主语为we；表示“庆祝”用动词celebrate，陈述事实用一般现在时，句首单词首字母大写，故从句翻译为：Every time we celebrate；主句主语为we；表示“需要做某事”短语为need to do sth.；表示“想一想”可用spare a thought for；表示“那些无法与我们同在的人”可以使用定语从句表述，应用those作先行词，在从句作主语，指人，故用who引导定语从句，表示“无法与我们同在”翻译为can’t be with us。故翻译为Every time we celebrate, we need to spare a thought for those who can’t be with us. 62. 在现代科技的帮助下，他解决难题的方法已变得更加高效。(aid n. , approach n. )(汉译英) _______________________________________________________________________ 【答案】With the aid of modern technology, his approach to solving difficult problems has become much more efficient. 【解析】 【详解】考查现在完成时。“在……的帮助下”表达为with the aid of...；“现代科技”表达为modern technology；“他……的方法”表达为his approach to doing；“解决难题”表达为solve difficult problems；“更加高效”表达为much more efficient。“他解决难题的方法已变得更加高效”为主句，根据“已变得”可知，此处应用现在完成时，故表达为his approach to solving difficult problems has become much more efficient。故翻译为：With the aid of modern technology, his approach to solving difficult problems has become much more efficient. 8. 24-25 泰州中学 高一上 12月月考 第一节 (满分15分) 58. 假如你是李华。期中考试结束后，上周日学校组织全校高一师生去人民公园进行了一次户外徒步活动，受到了大家的一致好评。请你就本次活动给校园英语报写一篇报道。 内容包括：1.活动内容 2.活动的意义。 注意：1. 词数80左右。 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Hiking to the People’s Park ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Hiking to the People’s Park Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary hiking to the People’s park, which successfully drew the attention of every student and teacher in senior 1. Bathed in the warm sunshine, we managed to arrive in our destination on foot, talking and laughing. On our arrival, we enjoyed the beautiful scenery, thinking it was a visual feast. What excited us most was that those who lost the game should have a talent show. Additionally, some students put on their marvelous performances, making us burst into laughter. By immersing everyone on the charm of nature, this activity definitely offered relaxation to us. What really matters is that not only did it strengthen our perseverance, but also enhanced our friendship. 【解析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生就上周日学校组织全校高一师生去人民公园进行了一次户外徒步活动给校园英语报写一篇报道。内容包括：活动内容和活动的意义。 【详解】1.词汇积累 风景：scenery→landscape 使兴奋：excite→stimulate 而且：additionally→moreover 大笑：burst into laughter→burst out laughing 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Additionally, some students put on their marvelous performances, making us burst into laughter. 拓展句：Additionally, some students put on their marvelous performances, which made us burst into laughter. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary hiking to the People’s park, which successfully drew the attention of every student and teacher in senior 1.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】 What excited us most was that those who lost the game should have a talent show.（运用了what引导的主语从句、that引导的表语从句和who引导的定语从句） 第二节 (满分25分) 59. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Lily and Susan had been the best of friends since kindergarten. They shared everything—from secrets to lunches—and were inseparable. One sunny afternoon, as they walked in the nearby park, chatting about their plans for the future, they saw an injured dog. Without hesitation, Lily and Susan decided to help the poor little dog. They carefully held it and rushed to the nearest vet (兽医) clinic. The vet assured them that the dog would be fine with some rest and medicine. Relieved, they decided to name the dog Lucky and take turns to care for it until it recovered. Their act of kindness brought them even closer, and they spent many joyful hours playing with Lucky in the park. However, as high school progressed, their interests started to diverge (出现分歧) . Lily became passionate about painting, spending hours in the art room perfecting her art works, while Susan developed a deep interest in science, joining the school’s science club and taking part in various competitions. As time passed, they found themselves with less and less in common. One day, a misunderstanding occurred when Lily blamed Susan for ignoring Lucky because of her busy schedule. Susan felt hurt and believed that Lily didn’t understand the pressure she was under with her studies and extra-curricular activities. They argued, and for the first time, their friendship seemed strained. Feeling disheartened, both girls went their separate ways. But despite their differences, they couldn’t shake off the memories of better times and the close relationship they once shared. One evening, as Lily walked home from an art class, she noticed Susan sitting alone on the side of the road, looking deep in thought. She hesitated but then gathered up the courage to approach her. “Mind if I sit down?” she asked softly. Susan looked up, surprised but not unwelcoming. “I was just thinking about old times,” she admitted. “Me too,” Lily said quietly. 注意： 1. 续写词数应 150个左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 They sat in silence for a while, both lost in their thoughts. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ After talking, they came up with a plan to rebuild their relationship. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 They sat in silence for a while, both lost in their thoughts. They were all immersed in the beautiful memories of the past. Suddenly, Susan said, “I don't know why we argued, and it was all because of some small things.” “And, I care about Lucky. It’s the cutest little dog in the world,” Susan added. Lily smiled and said, “Of course, we’re still good friends.” The two girls talked a lot, as if unaware of the passage of time. They were happy to be able to bridge the gap between each other. After talking, they came up with a plan to rebuild their relationship. Susan decided to try to understand painting, while Lily decided to try to understand science. After school, they went home together. On weekends, they took Lucky to the park for a walk, which made them feel excited. When encountering disagreements, they would analyze rather than argue. True friends will not be separated by minor conflicts. True friends understand and support each other. 【解析】 【导语】本文讲述了莉莉和苏珊从幼儿园起就是最好的朋友，她们分享一切，形影不离，她们还收养了一只受伤的流浪狗。但随着时间流逝，她们因为爱好不同及忙碌的学习而忽略彼此，最终引发矛盾，不再理会彼此。一天，莉莉下课回家见到沉思的苏珊，她过去搭话。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“她们沉默地坐了一会儿，都陷入了沉思。”可知，第一段可描写两人的心理活动及语言交流。 ②由第二段首句内容“经过交谈，她们想出了一个重建关系的计划。”可知，第二段可描写两人是如何重建友谊的。 2.续写线索：陷入回忆——坦诚交流——原谅彼此——重建友谊——找回友谊——朋友的真谛 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①争吵：argue/quarrel ②关心：care about/be concerned with ③决定做某事：decided to do/be determined to do 情绪类 ①高兴的：happy/glad ②兴奋的：excited/thrilled 【点睛】[高分句型1]. On weekends, they took Lucky to the park for a walk, which made them feel excited.（由which引导非限制性定语从句） [高分句型2]. When encountering disagreements, they would analyze rather than argue.（由When引导的时间状语从句的省略） 9. 24-25 锡山高级中学 高一上 12月测试 微写作（满分15分） 56. 翻译下列句子，并增加适当的过渡词语，把它们连成一篇小短文。 1.我将就电影制作中你们可能不太熟悉的一些方面做一个简单的介绍。 2.我想让你们注意电影的一个重要因素——音效。 3.另一个我认为非常重要的方面就是视觉特效。 4.道具也为一部电影的成功助力。 5.正如“泰坦尼克号”上可怜的乘客看到的冰山一角一样，我们在影院银幕上看的也只是电影制作这座巨大冰山的一角而已。 6.希望下次你们走进电影院的时候，能想一想所有那些才华出众的幕后工作者。 连句成文： ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Today, I’ll give you a brief introduction to some aspects of film-making you might not be familiar with. To begin with, I’d like to draw your attention to an important factor of a film - sound effects. Another aspect I attach great importance to is visual special effects. Props also contribute to a film’s success. Just as the poor passengers on the real Titanic saw the tip of the iceberg, what we see on the cinema screen is just the tip of the huge iceberg of film-making. Hopefully, next time you go to the cinema, you’ll spare a thought for all those talented people behind the scenes. 【解析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求考生写一篇文章，介绍读者可能不熟悉的电影制作方面的内容。 【详解】1.词汇积累 重要的：important→critical 重要性：importance→significance 有才能的：talented→gifted 首先：to begin with→to start with 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：To begin with, I’d like to draw your attention to an important factor of a film - sound effects. 拓展句：To begin with, I’d like to draw your attention to an important factor of a film, which is sound effects. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Today, I’ll give you a brief introduction to some aspects of film-making you might not be familiar with. (运用了which/that引导的限制性定语从句，省略了which/that) [高分句型2] Another aspect I attach great importance to is visual special effects. (运用了which/that引导的限制性定语从句，省略了which/that) 10. 24-25 扬州大学附属中学 高一上 12月月考 应用文写作 （满分15分） 66. 假定你是李华，你的英国好友Jayne得知你校本学期开设了影评写作选修课，发来邮件询问你对该课程的看法。请你给她写一封回信，内容包括： 1. 发表看法； 2. 阐述理由。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：选修课 optional course Dear Jayne, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jayne, Knowing that you’re interested in the Film Review Writing course in our school, I would like to share my opinions. This optional course is beneficial for several reasons. It exposes us to diverse cultures through the many impressive and instructive films. Furthermore, our writing ability have remarkably improved thanks to the lectures and exercises by teachers. Finally, it offers us opportunities to develop our critical thinking skills in the process of analyzing and evaluating various aspects of films. Is there any similar course in your school? What do you think of it? Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国好友Jayne写一封回信，对于学校本学期开设了影评写作选修课发表看法并阐述理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 观点：opinion→view 此外：furthermore→what’s more 为某人提供某物：offer sb sth→provide sb with sth 机会：opportunity→chance 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Finally, it offers us opportunities to develop our critical thinking skills in the process of analyzing and evaluating various aspects of films. 拓展句：Finally, it offers us opportunities where we can develop our critical thinking skills in the process of analyzing and evaluating various aspects of films. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing that you’re interested in the Film Review Writing course in our school, I would like to share my opinions.（运用了that引导的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】Finally, it offers us opportunities to develop our critical thinking skills in the process of analyzing and evaluating various aspects of films.（运用了动词不定式作后置定语） 11. 24-25 扬州市八校 高一上 12月学情检测 应用文写作（满分15分） 86. 假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他想强身健体，计划选择一项可以长期坚持的运动并向你征询建议。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括： 1.推荐的运动； 2.推荐的理由。 注意：1.词数不少于50； 2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jim, I am glad to learn that you would like to exercise to keep fit. I believe running is the best choice. My reasons are as follows. First of all, the physical benefits from running have long been recognized as it helps increase the body’s flow of blood and oxygen, which thus strengthens the immune system and reduces the risk of diseases. What’s more, running can certainly become a long-term hobby, since it takes only a pair of running shoes and can easily and flexibly be added to your schedule. Last but not least, running can improve one’s mood and particularly provide relief from pain or tension. Therefore, you can also achieve mental well-being if you take up running as a hobby. All in all, I’d like to recommend running as a sport that you can do regularly. Why not give it a try? Just put on your trainers and get started. Then keep going. I’m sure you will get a lot out of running. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他想强身健体，计划选择一项可以长期坚持的运动并向你征询建议。请你给他回复邮件。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。 结构：总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 内容包括： 1.推荐的运动； 2.推荐的理由。 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） keep fit；as follows；benefits from；what’s more；last but not least；take up；all in all 第三步：连词成句（包含关键句，至少3句） 1.First of all, the physical benefits from running have long been recognized as it helps increase the body’s flow of blood and oxygen, which thus strengthens the immune system and reduces the risk of diseases. 2. What’s more, running can certainly become a long-term hobby, since it takes only a pair of running shoes and can easily and flexibly be added to your schedule. 3. Therefore, you can also achieve mental well-being if you take up running as a hobby. 4. Why not give it a try? 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Last but not least 2.表并列补充关系：What is more 3.表因果关系： Therefore 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰， 【点睛】[高分句型1] First of all, the physical benefits from running have long been recognized as it helps increase the body’s flow of blood and oxygen, which thus strengthens the immune system and reduces the risk of diseases.句中含as引导的原因状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句。 [高分句型2] What’s more, running can certainly become a long-term hobby, since it takes only a pair of running shoes and can easily and flexibly be added to your schedule.句中含情态动词的被动语态和since引导的原因状语从句。 [高分句型3] Therefore, you can also achieve mental well-being if you take up running as a hobby.句中含if引导的条件状语从句。 12. 24-25 扬州市广陵区扬州中学 高一上 12月月考 写作(满分20分) 66. 假定你是李华，你的爱尔兰笔友Adam热衷于中国历史文化。他计划今年假期来华旅游，希望你给他推荐旅游城市。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1. 表示欢迎；2. 推荐旅游城市；3. 表示祝愿。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卷的相应位置作答。 Dear Adam, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Adam, I’m glad to learn that you are planning to travel around China. I’m writing to extend my warm welcome. I suggest that you go to Beijing for a visit. Beijing has much to offer the tourists. You can go to the Great Wall first. You are also strongly recommended to tour around the Forbidden City, whose character is well preserved despite its old age. Not only will you learn more about Chinese history, but you will also appreciate the charm of traditional Chinese architecture. I hope you will enjoy your stay and have a good time travelling. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给爱尔兰笔友Adam写一封信，为他推荐旅游城市。 详解】1.词汇积累 高兴的：glad → delighted 表达：extend → convey 尽管：despite → in spite of 玩得愉快：have a good time → have fun 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Beijing has much to offer the tourists. You can go to the Great Wall first. 拓展句：Beijing has much to offer the tourists, where you can go to the Great Wall first. 【点睛】【高分句型1】You are also strongly recommended to tour around the Forbidden City, whose character is well preserved despite its old age.（运用了whose引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】Not only will you learn more about Chinese history, but you will also appreciate the charm of traditional Chinese architecture.（运用了部分倒装结构和not only…but also…连接的并列句） 2 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $