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热点03 志愿服务
备考2026年中考英语新课标(核心素养)同步大师课堂之书面表达统统过
【热点预测】
2025年杭州“8+N”志愿服务品牌发布
当志愿服务从零散的“星光”汇聚为有序的“星河”,一座城市的温暖便有了更坚实的底座与更深远的力量。10月30日,“最暖杭州 志愿同行”2025年杭州市“8+N”志愿服务项目展示交流活动品牌发布仪式举行,红色领“杭”、平安护“杭”、文化润“杭”、青春启“杭”、银龄助“杭”、关爱暖“杭”、家园美“杭”、应急守“杭”八大赛道及系列子品牌正式发布,标志着杭州志愿服务进入品牌引领、专业发展的新阶段。
2025年杭州志愿服务事业发展凝聚新的力量,其核心正是“8+N”品牌矩阵构建起的治理新格局。在关爱暖“杭”的赛道中,余杭区推荐的“追星星的AI”志愿服务项目格外动人。“我们想用技术,为孤独症孩子架起一座与外界沟通的桥。”阿里巴巴“追星星的AI”志愿服务队项目负责人动情地说,他们开发的AI互动绘本,能将抽象情绪转化为直观画面,用科技叩开孩子们封闭的心门。在银龄助“杭”领域,“共享奶奶”等“银发力量”被充分激活,银龄志愿者活跃在社区基层治理一线,成为居民自发参与的社会治理共同体。而在应急守“杭”的战线,杭州市红十字会推荐的“城市骑士急救侠”等项目聚焦外卖骑手、快递小哥等新就业群体,以党建引领为抓手,通过急救帮扶、职业培训,将他们打造成城市安全的“移动前哨”。
【题材解析】
一、题型分布与命题趋势
1.高频题型
•应用文:自荐信(如申请成为志愿者)、倡议书(如号召参与社区服务)、书信(如分享志愿经历)。
•记叙文:描述一次志愿服务经历(如敬老院帮扶、环保活动),要求包含时间、地点、活动内容及个人感受。
•议论文:讨论志愿服务的意义(如社会责任、个人成长)或呼吁更多人参与。
2.命题特点
•贴近生活场景:聚焦学生可参与的志愿活动(如社区清洁、图书馆服务、助老助残),强调“微行动”价值。
•价值观引导:突出“奉献、友爱、互助”精神,关联“立德树人”教育目标。
•语言能力分层:基础题要求描述活动过程,拔高题需分析意义或提出改进建议。
二、2026年高频主题预测
1.社区服务类
•示例题目:
“A Meaningful Day at the Nursing Home”
“Volunteering in Our Community”
•核心词:elderly care(老年关怀)、community service(社区服务)、clean-up campaign(清洁活动)。
2.环保公益类
•示例题目:
“Protecting the Environment with Love”
“Plastic-Free Summer: My Volunteer Journey”
•核心词:recycling(回收)、carbon footprint(碳足迹)、eco-friendly(环保的)。
3.特殊群体帮扶类
•示例题目:
“Helping Children with Autism”
“A Day with Homeless Animals”
•核心词:autism(自闭症)、animal rescue(动物救助)、inclusion(包容)。
三、命题深度与难度预测
1.语言要求
•词汇升级:需掌握情感类词汇(如compassion, fulfillment)及场景词汇(如volunteer training, donation drive)。
•复杂句式:
•定语从句:“The children I taught were those who needed extra care.”
•条件句:“If everyone contributes, our community will be cleaner.”
•数据引用:“Over 200 volunteers joined the event, collecting 500kg of trash.”
2.思维层次
•基础层:描述活动(如“We cleaned the park”)。
•进阶层:分析影响(如“Improved local environment”)。
•高阶层:反思成长(如“Learned teamwork and empathy”)。
四、备考策略与高分技巧
1.素材积累
•高频论点库:
角度论点示例个人成长Enhance communication skills“I learned to listen patiently.”社会价值Reduce social isolation“Elderly felt less lonely.”团队协作Strengthen group responsibility“We divided tasks efficiently.”
角度
论点
示例
个人成长
Enhance communication skills
“I learned to listen patiently.”
社会价值
Reduce social isolation
“Elderly felt less lonely.”
团队协作
Strengthen group responsibility
“We divided tasks efficiently.”
•案例库:
•助老:“Taught seniors to use smartphones.”
•环保:“Organized a school recycling program.”
2.结构模板
•记叙文四段式:
复制Introduction: Time/Place + Activity Overview
Body:
1. Preparation (e.g., training, tools)
2. Process (e.g., tasks done, challenges)
3. Emotional Moments (e.g., laughter, tears)
Conclusion: Lessons Learned + Future Plans
•倡议书框架:
复制Greeting + Purpose
Current Situation + Why Volunteer?
Call to Action (3-4 Steps)
Encouraging Closing
3.语言提升技巧
•高级替换:
•“happy” → “fulfilled/joyful”
•“important” → “significant/valuable”
•修辞手法:比喻(“Volunteering is like planting seeds of kindness.”)
•逻辑连接词:
•递进:Furthermore, Moreover
•对比:On one hand... On the other hand
五、风险规避与常见失分点
1.偏题风险
•对策:紧扣题目关键词(如“community service”),避免泛泛而谈“helping others”。
2.中式英语
•典型错误:
•“We do good things for people.”(中式)
•“We contributed to society through our actions.”(地道)
3.内容空洞
•建议:添加具体细节(如“I helped Mrs. Li water her plants every Tuesday”)。
六、真题模拟与范文参考
预测题目:
“Write a letter to the principal suggesting a school volunteer program. Include your ideas and reasons.”
高分范文片段:
*“Dear Principal Smith,
I propose a ‘Green Guardians’ program where students plant trees and organize recycling workshops. This will not only beautify our campus but also teach us environmental responsibility. For example, last year, our class collected 200kg of paper, saving 40 trees. Let’s make our school a model of sustainability!”*
七、总结
2026年中考英语书面表达中,志愿服务主题将延续“实践经历+价值观升华”的命题逻辑,考生需重点掌握社区服务、环保帮扶等场景的描写技巧,积累情感表达与反思性语言,并注重结构逻辑与细节真实性。通过模拟训练强化批判性思维,避免模板化写作,方能应对灵活多变的考题。
【典型范文】
A
Write a passage with at least 80 words according to the given situation.(根据以下情境写一篇不少于80个词的作文,标点符号不计入字数)
为增强学生的社会责任感和社会实践能力,学校计划组织九年级学生参加一次社区志愿服务活动(Community volunteer service)——协助整理社区图书馆,活动旨在通过实际行动帮助社区居民,提高学生的社会服务意识。假设你是本校九年级学生李华,请阅读以下活动方案,写一封邮件给活动负责人张老师,邮件须包含以下内容:
1)你是否会参加此活动,并简述理由;
2)针对方案中的至少一项内容,提出修改建议。
活动方案
活动对象(participant):
本校九年级学生
活动任务:
社区志愿服务——协助整理社区图书馆
活动时间:
11月9日(周六)上午9:00
集合地点:
社区图书馆
(注意文章中不得出现具体个人信息,否则不予评分。)
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【答案】
Dear Mr. Zhang,
I’m Li Hua, a ninth-grader. I will definitely take part in the community volunteer service to organize the library. It’s a great chance to help residents and develop my social responsibility and practical skills.
For the activity plan, I suggest changing the gathering place to our school gate. Some students might have trouble reaching the community library directly, so gathering at school and traveling together by bus would be more convenient and ensure everyone’s punctuality.
I hope this activity will be a success.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【难度】0.4
【知识点】志愿服务、应用文
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:以“一般现在时”为主,结合“一般将来时”;
③提示:作为学生李华,就社区志愿服务活动给张老师写邮件,说明参与意愿及修改建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头表明身份并说明参与意愿。
第二步,阐述参与理由,再针对活动方案提出修改建议。
第三步,结尾表达对活动成功的期望。
[亮点词汇]
①eager渴望的;热切的
②enhance增强;提高
③recommend推荐;建议
④punctuality准时;守时
[高分句型]
①I’m eager to participate in the community volunteer service activity of organizing the library.(“be eager to”结构,清晰表达参与的热切心情。)
②Since some students may find it difficult to get to the community library directly, I recommend changing the gathering place to our school gate.(运用“since”引导的原因状语从句,使建议的提出更具逻辑性。)
B
根据有关部门调查,我国部分青少年每天劳动时间过少。假如你是李华,请根据表格的内容提示,说一说你平时参加劳动的情况,谈一谈对养成良好劳动习惯的看法。
提示词:社区志愿者服务 community voluntary services;生活技能 life skills;责任感 a sense of responsibility
要求:
1.不能出现真实的校名、人名等相关信息;
2.根据中文和英文提示,可以适当发挥;
3.内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑、书写整齐;
4.词数:80-100词。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
李华参加劳动的情况
养成良好劳动习惯的重要性
在校
打扫教室……
◆提高基本的生活技能
在家
清洗餐具,洗衣服,做饭……
◆学会照顾自己
◆拥有责任感
社区
做社区志愿者服务,如去养老院看望老人……
I’m Li Hua. As a teenager, I am supposed to form good working habits. It’s good for my development.
At school,_________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
I’m Li Hua. As a teenager, I am supposed to form good working habits. It’s good for my development.
At school, I clean the classroom with my classmates every day to keep it tidy. At home, I often help with housework, like washing dishes, cleaning my room, and sometimes cooking simple meals. On weekends, I sometimes take part in community voluntary services, such as visiting old people in the nursing home.
I think forming good working habits is very important. First, it helps us improve basic life skills. Second, we learn to take care of ourselves. Most importantly, doing these things gives us a sense of responsibility. We should all start doing more work in daily life.
【难度】0.4
【知识点】记叙文、劳动实践
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是材料作文;
②时态:主要时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述,适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。开篇即点出养成良好的劳动习惯至关重要,以便引出接下来要谈及的关于劳动习惯的话题;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——参加劳动的情况、养成良好劳动习惯的重要性等均要一一阐述;
第三步,书写结语。表达“在日常生活中多劳动”的呼吁。
[亮点词汇]
①help with帮助
②take part in参加
③take care of照顾
[高分句型]
①I think forming good working habits is very important. (宾语从句)
②Most importantly, doing these things gives us a sense of responsibility. (动名词作主语)
C
随着免签政策的实施,外国游客纷至沓来。为传播中华文化,讲好中国故事,某旅游服务机构正在招募一批志愿者,要求报名者面试时用英语推荐国内任意一个有特色的城市。假设你是李华,你想报名参加面试,并已绘制了如下流程图,请根据图示内容完成面试发言稿。
注意事项:1. 发言稿内容须自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
2. 词数不少于90个,发言稿开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 发言稿中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。
Hello, my friends Welcome to China!
I’d like to recommend_______________________________________________________
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I’m waiting for you here in this beautiful city.
【答案】
Hello, my friends! Welcome to China!
I’d like to recommend Guilin, a pearl in southern China. Located in Guangxi Province, this city is renowned for its breathtaking scenery, especially the Li River with its emerald waters and karst mountains.
Here, you can be immersed in nature by cycling through rice terraces or taking a bamboo raft ride. Not only can you explore ancient towns like Xingping, but you also have the chance to taste authentic cuisine such as Guilin rice noodles. For photography lovers, the sunset at Elephant Trunk Hill is a must-visit spot.
My advice? Visit between April and October for the best weather, and try learning basic Chinese phrases to connect with locals.
I’m waiting for you here in this beautiful city!
【难度】0.4
【知识点】城市
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇面试发言稿;
②时态:主要时态为一般现在时;
③提示:根据流程图提示介绍城市特色、活动及建议,语言需流畅且有感染力,注意句式多样性。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开门见山推荐城市;
第二步:分点说明城市特色与活动;
第三步:给出实用建议并热情结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①breathtaking scenery令人惊叹的风景
②be immersed in沉浸于
③authentic cuisine地道美食
④must-visit spots必游景点
[高分句型]
①Located in Guangxi Province, this city is renowned for its breathtaking scenery, especially the Li River with its emerald waters and karst mountains.(非谓语动词作状语)
②Not only can you explore ancient towns like Xingping, but you also have the chance to taste authentic cuisine such as Guilin rice noodles.(倒装句)
【拓展训练】
A
2025 年 11 月,粤港澳三地即将共同迎来首次由多城联办的第十五届全国运动会。作为东道主城市的青年学子,我们既是这场体育盛会的见证者,更应成为全运会成功举办的参与者。请根据以下提示,以 “我为全运添光彩” 为主题撰写一篇演讲稿,呼吁同学们为全运会出一份力。
内容提示:
1. 学习体育赛事规则,展现高素质观众风采,如……;
2. 积极参与志愿工作,赛场内外提供暖心服务,如……;
3. 请补充 1 点。
参考词汇:spectator 观众,stadium 体育场
要求:
1. 可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2. 词数80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Dear friends,
The 15th National Games will light up our Greater Bay Area in 2025! As citizens, we should all take action to make this event successful._____________________________________
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【答案】
Dear friends,
The 15th National Games will light up our Greater Bay Area in 2025! As citizens, we should all take action to make this event successful.
Firstly, let’s learn sports event rules and behave as respectful spectators. We should cheer politely, keep the stadium clean, and respect all athletes. Secondly, volunteer our time to offer warm services inside and outside the stadium, such as guiding visitors and assisting athletes. Lastly, let’s promote sports spirit in our daily lives, encouraging more people to participate in sports and support the Games.
Together, let’s add our glow to the 15th National Games and make it a memorable event for all!
【难度】0.4
【知识点】意见/建议
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:内容提示已给出,注意不要遗漏,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,从学习体育赛事规则和积极参与志愿工作两个方面具体介绍可以做哪些事;
第二步,在前两个方面的基础上再额外补充一点,比如:日常生活中鼓励他人参加和支持运动;
第三步,书写结语,呼吁同学们为全运会出一份力。
[亮点词汇]
①such as比如
②encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事
③participate in参与
[高分句型]
①Firstly, let’s learn sports event rules and behave as respectful spectators.(祈使句)
②Lastly, let’s promote sports spirit in our daily lives, encouraging more people to participate in sports and support the Games.(现在分词作伴随状语)
B
Sandy是学校青少年服务中心(Teenage Service Centre)的志愿者,负责在学校英文网站上解答青少年学习和生活上的困惑,如果你是Sandy,请根据以下信息,任选一个问题进行回复。
Questions for Sandy
There’s a talent show coming up. I can’t dance or sing. I’m not really good at anything. What can I do?
Amy
I’m not doing a lot of exercise because I like video games too much. How do I stop?
Simon
注意事项:
1.回复内容须须根据帖子自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
2.词数不少于90个,回复的首尾已在答题卡上给出,不计入总词数;
3.回复中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息。
Dear Amy/ Simon,
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I hope my advice is valuable to you. If you still have any questions, please feel free to ask me.
【答案】
范文一:
Dear Amy,
I’m Sandy, a volunteer at Teenage Service Centre. I have received your question. I hope I can offer you some useful advice.
Talent shows aren’t just about singing or dancing. Everyone has their own skills. Maybe you’re good at telling stories or doing magic tricks! You could also try hosting the show, because owning good speaking skills is a talent too. Helping your classmates or organizing the event is a wonderful way to join it. The most important thing is to take part and enjoy the process. Trust me, showing courage to be part of it is a talent itself.
I hope my advice is valuable to you. If you still have any questions, please feel free to ask me.
(100 words)
范文二:
Dear Simon,
I’m Sandy, a volunteer at Teenage Service Centre. I have received your question. I hope I can offer you some useful advice.
Balance is key to a healthy life! Why not make a timetable for gaming and use the rest of the time for exercise you enjoy? Try active games like dance video games or outdoor sports with friends. It makes you feel like playing but makes you exercise. You could also join a school sports club or go for a bike ride after finishing homework. Your body will thank you, and you might even find new hobbies you love.
I hope my advice is valuable to you. If you still have any questions, please feel free to ask me.
(100 words)
【难度】0.4
【知识点】意见/建议
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏提示中的要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,简单自我介绍,并表明愿意为对方提供建议和帮助;
第二步,具体写一下自己的建议并鼓励对方;
第三步,书写结语,表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at 擅长
②take part参加
③be part of成为……一部分
[高分句型]
①I hope I can offer you some useful advice.(宾语从句)
②You could also try hosting the show, because owning good speaking skills is a talent too.(原因状语从句)
C
假设你是社区服务中心的志愿者,向居住在本小区的外国友人介绍本周六社区服务中心的活动。
要求:
包含上述所有提示,内容充实;
条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
70词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Notice
Dear all,
There will be a “Helping Hands” activity this Saturday. We have professional helpers available for you.________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Everyone is welcome to attend this activity. Please come and keep our helpers busy!
The Community Centre
【答案】
Notice
Dear all,
There will be a “Helping Hands” activity this Saturday. We have professional helpers available for you. The activity will take place from 2:00 p.m. to 4:30 p.m. at the Community Centre.
Mr. Lin, who is a policeman, will give some safety tips to you. He is kind and fun to be around. If your electrical appliances are not working properly, please come and ask Mr. Ma for help. He is an engineer and is good at fixing electrical appliances. If you have any problems caring for your pets, please come to see Ms. Liu. She is an animal doctor and is willing to teach you how to look after your pets.
Everyone is welcome to attend this activity. Please come and keep our helpers busy!
The Community Centre
【难度】0.4
【知识点】社区
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇活动通知;
②时态:时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:介绍“Helping Hands”活动的相关信息。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头说明本周六将有“Helping Hands”活动;
第二步,中间介绍活动的时间、地点、提供帮助的人员及其专长;
第三步,结尾欢迎大家参加活动。
[亮点词汇]
①professional专业的
②available可获得的;有空的
③properly正确地;适当地
④willing愿意的
[高分句型]
①There will be a “Helping Hands” activity this Saturday.(此句使用there be句型的一般将来时,直接点明活动的存在和时间。)
②If your electrical appliances are not working properly, please come and ask Mr. Ma for help.(此句使用if引导的条件状语从句,清晰地给出寻求帮助的条件。)
D
唯有不断成长,才能遇见更好的自己。随着初中生活即将结束,中考的脚步越来越近了,在这关键时刻,我们要知道决定成败的不是成绩的高低,而是每天都要做一个更好的自己。为了给我们的初中生活画上一个圆满的句号,最近学校即将举行一个题为“To be a better self”的演讲比赛,假如你是来自九(1)班的Nancy,请你以此为题写一篇英文演讲稿,谈一谈自己对此话题的理解。演讲稿内容必须包含表格中的要点:
To be a better self
懂得感恩
1. 敬爱父母老师,为他们做……2. 志愿服务社区,……
亲近自然
1. 保护环境,……2. 关爱动物,……
热爱自己
1. 健康生活,……2. 发展爱好,……
相关词汇:志愿服务volunteer
注意:
1. 词数在100左右,已给出的文字不计入总词数;
2. 可适当发挥,使短文连贯通顺:
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
To be a better self
Hello, everyone!
I am Nancy from Class One, Grade Nine. I am glad to be here to give a speech about “To be a better self”. ___________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thanks for your listening!
【答案】
To be a better self
Hello, everyone!
I am Nancy from Class One, Grade Nine. I am glad to be here to give a speech about “To be a better self”.
In order to become a better version of ourselves, we should first be grateful. We should love our parents and teachers. We can help with housework, study actively, and say “thank you” more often. We also use our spare time to serve the community. If we meet people in need of help, we should lend a hand in time. Second, we should get close to nature. We should protect the environment and care for animals. We also do volunteer work to promote the importance of animals and plants. Finally, we have to love ourselves. We should live a healthy life and develop our hobbies. We should learn ways to relax ourselves and keep a good mood.
That’s all. Thanks for your listening!
【难度】0.65
【知识点】方法/策略
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、开篇点题,引出话题;
第二步、从懂得感恩、亲近自然和热爱自己这三方面,具体阐述怎么做;
第三步、书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①in order to为了
②in need of help需要帮助
③get close to接近
[高分句型]
①If we meet people in need of help, we should lend a hand in time.(if引导的条件状语从句)
E
近期,你校将组织“传统文化进社区”的志愿服务活动,交换生Sally也报名参加。假如你是李华,请你结合以下提示,写一份英文邮件,向她介绍活动安排。
要求:
1)邮件应包括图中要点,并适当拓展。
2)词数80-120左右,邮件开头已经给出,不计入总字数,文中不得出现个人信息。
Dear Sally,
Thank you for joining us in our voluntary work. ____________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sally,
Thank you for joining us in our voluntary work. We plan to hold a Chinese calligraphy and paper-cutting workshop because they show the beauty of our traditional culture. To share these skills with the community, we will meet next Saturday morning at 9:00 at the local community center. There, we will guide residents to write Chinese characters and cut paper designs. We will also explain their history and meaning. I believe our efforts will help more people understand and appreciate our culture.
I look forward to seeing you there.
Yours,
Li Hua
【难度】0.4
【知识点】志愿服务
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封邮件;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、承接已给的开头,介绍活动名称以及原因;
第二步、介绍活动时间和地点以及活动形式;
第三步、书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①plan to do sth.计划做某事
②share…with…和……分享……
③guide sb. to do sth.引导某人做某事
[高分句型]
①We plan to hold a Chinese calligraphy and paper-cutting workshop because they show the beauty of our traditional culture.(because引导原因状语从句)
F
假如你是李华,上周你参加了一次“关爱残疾人”的志愿服务活动。请根据以下提示,写一篇英语短文,介绍一下此次活动的目的、经过和感受。
注意:
1. 词数80~100;
2. 需涵盖图示中的所有内容,合理拓展;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 文章的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Last week, I took part in a volunteer activity called “Caring for People with Disabilities.”
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
Last week, I took part in a volunteer activity called “Caring for People with Disabilities.” The activity took place in a community center on Saturday morning. It was organized by our school to show care and support for disabled people. About 20 volunteers, including students and teachers, joined the event.
When we arrived, we were warmly welcomed. First, we cleaned their rooms and did some washing for them. Then, we sat together and had heart-to-heart talks. We listened to their life stories and shared ours. We also taught them some simple hand-making skills. Everyone had a great time.
I was deeply moved during the activity. It made me realize that disabled people need our love and support. Small acts of kindness can bring them great warmth. I hope more people can join in such activities to make a difference.
【难度】0.4
【知识点】志愿服务、文体活动、个人经历
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏信息,考生结合自身经历,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出主题;
第二步,介绍活动的基本信息:时间、地点和参与者以及活动过程;
第三步,最后介绍个人感受。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②take place发生
③make a difference有影响,起作用
[高分句型]
①When we arrived, we were warmly welcomed. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②It made me realize that disabled people need our love and support. (that引导的宾语从句)
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热点03 志愿服务
备考2026年中考英语新课标(核心素养)同步大师课堂之书面表达统统过
【热点预测】
2025年杭州“8+N”志愿服务品牌发布
当志愿服务从零散的“星光”汇聚为有序的“星河”,一座城市的温暖便有了更坚实的底座与更深远的力量。10月30日,“最暖杭州 志愿同行”2025年杭州市“8+N”志愿服务项目展示交流活动品牌发布仪式举行,红色领“杭”、平安护“杭”、文化润“杭”、青春启“杭”、银龄助“杭”、关爱暖“杭”、家园美“杭”、应急守“杭”八大赛道及系列子品牌正式发布,标志着杭州志愿服务进入品牌引领、专业发展的新阶段。
2025年杭州志愿服务事业发展凝聚新的力量,其核心正是“8+N”品牌矩阵构建起的治理新格局。在关爱暖“杭”的赛道中,余杭区推荐的“追星星的AI”志愿服务项目格外动人。“我们想用技术,为孤独症孩子架起一座与外界沟通的桥。”阿里巴巴“追星星的AI”志愿服务队项目负责人动情地说,他们开发的AI互动绘本,能将抽象情绪转化为直观画面,用科技叩开孩子们封闭的心门。在银龄助“杭”领域,“共享奶奶”等“银发力量”被充分激活,银龄志愿者活跃在社区基层治理一线,成为居民自发参与的社会治理共同体。而在应急守“杭”的战线,杭州市红十字会推荐的“城市骑士急救侠”等项目聚焦外卖骑手、快递小哥等新就业群体,以党建引领为抓手,通过急救帮扶、职业培训,将他们打造成城市安全的“移动前哨”。
【题材解析】
一、题型分布与命题趋势
1.高频题型
•应用文:自荐信(如申请成为志愿者)、倡议书(如号召参与社区服务)、书信(如分享志愿经历)。
•记叙文:描述一次志愿服务经历(如敬老院帮扶、环保活动),要求包含时间、地点、活动内容及个人感受。
•议论文:讨论志愿服务的意义(如社会责任、个人成长)或呼吁更多人参与。
2.命题特点
•贴近生活场景:聚焦学生可参与的志愿活动(如社区清洁、图书馆服务、助老助残),强调“微行动”价值。
•价值观引导:突出“奉献、友爱、互助”精神,关联“立德树人”教育目标。
•语言能力分层:基础题要求描述活动过程,拔高题需分析意义或提出改进建议。
二、2026年高频主题预测
1.社区服务类
•示例题目:
“A Meaningful Day at the Nursing Home”
“Volunteering in Our Community”
•核心词:elderly care(老年关怀)、community service(社区服务)、clean-up campaign(清洁活动)。
2.环保公益类
•示例题目:
“Protecting the Environment with Love”
“Plastic-Free Summer: My Volunteer Journey”
•核心词:recycling(回收)、carbon footprint(碳足迹)、eco-friendly(环保的)。
3.特殊群体帮扶类
•示例题目:
“Helping Children with Autism”
“A Day with Homeless Animals”
•核心词:autism(自闭症)、animal rescue(动物救助)、inclusion(包容)。
三、命题深度与难度预测
1.语言要求
•词汇升级:需掌握情感类词汇(如compassion, fulfillment)及场景词汇(如volunteer training, donation drive)。
•复杂句式:
•定语从句:“The children I taught were those who needed extra care.”
•条件句:“If everyone contributes, our community will be cleaner.”
•数据引用:“Over 200 volunteers joined the event, collecting 500kg of trash.”
2.思维层次
•基础层:描述活动(如“We cleaned the park”)。
•进阶层:分析影响(如“Improved local environment”)。
•高阶层:反思成长(如“Learned teamwork and empathy”)。
四、备考策略与高分技巧
1.素材积累
•高频论点库:
角度论点示例个人成长Enhance communication skills“I learned to listen patiently.”社会价值Reduce social isolation“Elderly felt less lonely.”团队协作Strengthen group responsibility“We divided tasks efficiently.”
角度
论点
示例
个人成长
Enhance communication skills
“I learned to listen patiently.”
社会价值
Reduce social isolation
“Elderly felt less lonely.”
团队协作
Strengthen group responsibility
“We divided tasks efficiently.”
•案例库:
•助老:“Taught seniors to use smartphones.”
•环保:“Organized a school recycling program.”
2.结构模板
•记叙文四段式:
复制Introduction: Time/Place + Activity Overview
Body:
1. Preparation (e.g., training, tools)
2. Process (e.g., tasks done, challenges)
3. Emotional Moments (e.g., laughter, tears)
Conclusion: Lessons Learned + Future Plans
•倡议书框架:
复制Greeting + Purpose
Current Situation + Why Volunteer?
Call to Action (3-4 Steps)
Encouraging Closing
3.语言提升技巧
•高级替换:
•“happy” → “fulfilled/joyful”
•“important” → “significant/valuable”
•修辞手法:比喻(“Volunteering is like planting seeds of kindness.”)
•逻辑连接词:
•递进:Furthermore, Moreover
•对比:On one hand... On the other hand
五、风险规避与常见失分点
1.偏题风险
•对策:紧扣题目关键词(如“community service”),避免泛泛而谈“helping others”。
2.中式英语
•典型错误:
•“We do good things for people.”(中式)
•“We contributed to society through our actions.”(地道)
3.内容空洞
•建议:添加具体细节(如“I helped Mrs. Li water her plants every Tuesday”)。
六、真题模拟与范文参考
预测题目:
“Write a letter to the principal suggesting a school volunteer program. Include your ideas and reasons.”
高分范文片段:
*“Dear Principal Smith,
I propose a ‘Green Guardians’ program where students plant trees and organize recycling workshops. This will not only beautify our campus but also teach us environmental responsibility. For example, last year, our class collected 200kg of paper, saving 40 trees. Let’s make our school a model of sustainability!”*
七、总结
2026年中考英语书面表达中,志愿服务主题将延续“实践经历+价值观升华”的命题逻辑,考生需重点掌握社区服务、环保帮扶等场景的描写技巧,积累情感表达与反思性语言,并注重结构逻辑与细节真实性。通过模拟训练强化批判性思维,避免模板化写作,方能应对灵活多变的考题。
【典型范文】
A
Write a passage with at least 80 words according to the given situation.(根据以下情境写一篇不少于80个词的作文,标点符号不计入字数)
为增强学生的社会责任感和社会实践能力,学校计划组织九年级学生参加一次社区志愿服务活动(Community volunteer service)——协助整理社区图书馆,活动旨在通过实际行动帮助社区居民,提高学生的社会服务意识。假设你是本校九年级学生李华,请阅读以下活动方案,写一封邮件给活动负责人张老师,邮件须包含以下内容:
1)你是否会参加此活动,并简述理由;
2)针对方案中的至少一项内容,提出修改建议。
活动方案
活动对象(participant):
本校九年级学生
活动任务:
社区志愿服务——协助整理社区图书馆
活动时间:
11月9日(周六)上午9:00
集合地点:
社区图书馆
(注意文章中不得出现具体个人信息,否则不予评分。)
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
B
根据有关部门调查,我国部分青少年每天劳动时间过少。假如你是李华,请根据表格的内容提示,说一说你平时参加劳动的情况,谈一谈对养成良好劳动习惯的看法。
提示词:社区志愿者服务 community voluntary services;生活技能 life skills;责任感 a sense of responsibility
要求:
1.不能出现真实的校名、人名等相关信息;
2.根据中文和英文提示,可以适当发挥;
3.内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑、书写整齐;
4.词数:80-100词。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
李华参加劳动的情况
养成良好劳动习惯的重要性
在校
打扫教室……
◆提高基本的生活技能
在家
清洗餐具,洗衣服,做饭……
◆学会照顾自己
◆拥有责任感
社区
做社区志愿者服务,如去养老院看望老人……
I’m Li Hua. As a teenager, I am supposed to form good working habits. It’s good for my development.
At school,_________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
C
随着免签政策的实施,外国游客纷至沓来。为传播中华文化,讲好中国故事,某旅游服务机构正在招募一批志愿者,要求报名者面试时用英语推荐国内任意一个有特色的城市。假设你是李华,你想报名参加面试,并已绘制了如下流程图,请根据图示内容完成面试发言稿。
注意事项:1. 发言稿内容须自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
2. 词数不少于90个,发言稿开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 发言稿中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。
Hello, my friends Welcome to China!
I’d like to recommend_______________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m waiting for you here in this beautiful city.
【拓展训练】
A
2025 年 11 月,粤港澳三地即将共同迎来首次由多城联办的第十五届全国运动会。作为东道主城市的青年学子,我们既是这场体育盛会的见证者,更应成为全运会成功举办的参与者。请根据以下提示,以 “我为全运添光彩” 为主题撰写一篇演讲稿,呼吁同学们为全运会出一份力。
内容提示:
1. 学习体育赛事规则,展现高素质观众风采,如……;
2. 积极参与志愿工作,赛场内外提供暖心服务,如……;
3. 请补充 1 点。
参考词汇:spectator 观众,stadium 体育场
要求:
1. 可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2. 词数80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Dear friends,
The 15th National Games will light up our Greater Bay Area in 2025! As citizens, we should all take action to make this event successful._____________________________________
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B
Sandy是学校青少年服务中心(Teenage Service Centre)的志愿者,负责在学校英文网站上解答青少年学习和生活上的困惑,如果你是Sandy,请根据以下信息,任选一个问题进行回复。
Questions for Sandy
There’s a talent show coming up. I can’t dance or sing. I’m not really good at anything. What can I do?
Amy
I’m not doing a lot of exercise because I like video games too much. How do I stop?
Simon
注意事项:
1.回复内容须须根据帖子自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
2.词数不少于90个,回复的首尾已在答题卡上给出,不计入总词数;
3.回复中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息。
Dear Amy/ Simon,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope my advice is valuable to you. If you still have any questions, please feel free to ask me.
C
假设你是社区服务中心的志愿者,向居住在本小区的外国友人介绍本周六社区服务中心的活动。
要求:
包含上述所有提示,内容充实;
条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
70词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Notice
Dear all,
There will be a “Helping Hands” activity this Saturday. We have professional helpers available for you.________________________________________________________________________
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Everyone is welcome to attend this activity. Please come and keep our helpers busy!
The Community Centre
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唯有不断成长,才能遇见更好的自己。随着初中生活即将结束,中考的脚步越来越近了,在这关键时刻,我们要知道决定成败的不是成绩的高低,而是每天都要做一个更好的自己。为了给我们的初中生活画上一个圆满的句号,最近学校即将举行一个题为“To be a better self”的演讲比赛,假如你是来自九(1)班的Nancy,请你以此为题写一篇英文演讲稿,谈一谈自己对此话题的理解。演讲稿内容必须包含表格中的要点:
To be a better self
懂得感恩
1. 敬爱父母老师,为他们做……2. 志愿服务社区,……
亲近自然
1. 保护环境,……2. 关爱动物,……
热爱自己
1. 健康生活,……2. 发展爱好,……
相关词汇:志愿服务volunteer
注意:
1. 词数在100左右,已给出的文字不计入总词数;
2. 可适当发挥,使短文连贯通顺:
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
To be a better self
Hello, everyone!
I am Nancy from Class One, Grade Nine. I am glad to be here to give a speech about “To be a better self”. ___________________________________________________________________
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That’s all. Thanks for your listening!
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近期,你校将组织“传统文化进社区”的志愿服务活动,交换生Sally也报名参加。假如你是李华,请你结合以下提示,写一份英文邮件,向她介绍活动安排。
要求:
1)邮件应包括图中要点,并适当拓展。
2)词数80-120左右,邮件开头已经给出,不计入总字数,文中不得出现个人信息。
Dear Sally,
Thank you for joining us in our voluntary work. ____________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
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假如你是李华,上周你参加了一次“关爱残疾人”的志愿服务活动。请根据以下提示,写一篇英语短文,介绍一下此次活动的目的、经过和感受。
注意:
1. 词数80~100;
2. 需涵盖图示中的所有内容,合理拓展;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 文章的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Last week, I took part in a volunteer activity called “Caring for People with Disabilities.”
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