内容正文:
应用文09 祝贺信
【写作框架】
【高分句型】
[首段句] 表明祝贺事由:
(1)Please …(接受我对……的真心的祝贺)
(2)It was a great pleasure to send you my congratulations on…
(3)I was delighted to learn of your success/achievements in…
(4)I am really happy to learn that you have been elected…Congratulations!All of us feel proud of your remarkable achievements on…
[中段句] 具体阐述祝贺的内容:
(1)It is a reward you really deserve for your industry and persistence.
(2)I know that you would not have achieved this without diligence and perseverance.
(3)As far as I am concerned, (正是你的努力促成了你的杰出的成就).
[尾段句] 再次表达美好祝愿:
(1)Please accept my sincerest congratulations and very best wishes for all the good future.
(2)I wish you success and fulfillment in the years ahead.
(3)May every happiness be yours!
(4)All my best wishes for an even brighter future/successful career!
【真题示例】
[2025·河南百所名校高三联考]
假设你是李华,自“国球进校园”活动开展以来,你校举办了第一届乒乓球比赛,你校的交换生 James取得了第三名的好成绩。请你给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.表示诚挚的祝贺;
2.回顾他的努力;
3.向他学习。
注意:1.词数80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【精彩美文】
Dear James,
I’m writing to express my sincere congratulations to you! Your performance in the table tennis match was so excellent that it impressed all of us.
As you know, table tennis can not only build up our body but also help relieve our stress. So we all attach great importance to it. But among so many excellent competitors, you really stood out. Of course, no pains, no gains. Thinking of the scenes where you practised hard after school, we all agreed that you deserved the honour.
You really set a good example for us and greatly inspired us. Recently, many of my classmates have made up their minds to take up playing table tennis.
Yours,
Li Hua
【即时训练】
A [2024·江西师范大学附属中学高三三模]
假定你是李华,你的留学生好友 Peter在你市举办的“中国传统文化知识竞赛”(Traditional Chinese Culture Contest)中获得外国选手组一等奖。请你给他写一封信,内容包括:
1.祝贺;
2.回顾;
3.期待。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【范文填空】
Dear Peter,
Learning your winning the first prize in the Traditional Chinese Culture Contest organized by our city, I’m writing to 1. (向你表示我衷心的祝贺).
It came as no surprise, for 2. (你对中国文化有着浓厚的兴趣) and have been continuously exploring it. Not only did you refer to abundant resources, but you also 3. (咨询了许多当地人和专业人士), which equips you with a comprehensive knowledge and good command of Chinese culture. 4. (再次祝贺你的成功) and I hope you 5. (能致力于传播中国文化) and make it more accessible to people around the world.
Yours,
Li Hua
B [2025·陕西安康高三模拟]
假定你是李华,交换生Terry在你校成语闯关比赛(Idiom Challenge Competition)中荣获二等奖,请你给他写一封祝贺信。内容包括:
1.向他表示祝贺;
2.肯定他的付出。
注意:1.词数80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Terry,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
KEYS:
【高分句型】
[首段句] (1)accept my sincere/hearty congratulations on
[中段句] (3)it is your efforts that lead to your brilliant achievements
【即时训练】
A
1.extend my sincere congratulations to you
2.you are keenly interested in Chinese culture
3.consulted many locals and professionals
4.Congratulate you on your success again
5.can devote yourself to spreading the Chinese culture
B
One possible version:
Dear Terry,
I’m writing to extend my warmest congratulations to you for your outstanding performance in Idiom Challenge Competition, where you were awarded the second prize.
Your achievement is truly commendable, and it reflects your hard work and dedication towards this competition. It is evident that you have put in a large amount of effort to master the idioms and their meanings. Your success is a testament to your perseverance and commitment to excellence.
Once again, congratulations on your well-deserved accomplishment! I am confident that this recognition will motivate you to continue striving for greatness in your future study. Keep up the fantastic work, Terry!
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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