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应用文一课时01建议信
命题趋势
建议信的命题呈现出以下趋势:
1.情境愈发真实具体,贴近校园与社会生活
2025年北京卷要求为参加联合国倡议征集活动的好友提供建议,2023年新高考全国 I、II卷是针对外教分组练习口语的方法提出问题和建议。这表明题目多源于学生的真实学习经历或广泛的社会生活情境,旨在考查学生发现并解决实际问题的能力。
2.内容更具开放性与思辨性
单纯的“指出问题+给建议”模式在演变。例如,2025年全国Ⅰ卷作文虽为回复信,但核心是“选择并阐述理由”,融入了建议与说理的要素。这要求学生在提建议时,不仅要点子好,更要理由充分、有说服力,能清晰论证自己建议的合理性。
3.反套路命题趋势明显
2025年高考英语整体呈现出显著的“反套路”特征。命题刻意规避常见的模拟题和模板,素材多来自2023年后出版的外刊并经过AI改写,情境设计更新颖。这意味着依靠死记硬背范文模板的风险变大,真正考查学生的语言运用能力和思维深度。
【写作框架】
【高分句型】
[首段句]呈现问题,表明写作目的:
(1) (我写信表达我的观点) concerning…/convey my concern about…
(2)You have asked for my advice about…and I will try to make some suggestions.
(3)In response to your letter telling me you hope to…, I have some ideas for you.
(4)I’m sorry to hear you’re having difficulty/trouble in…; I’m only too willing to help you
and (我的建议如下).
[中段句]提出建议并说明建议的好处:
(1)I think the most suitable…for you is…, so that…
(2)You’d better…/It’s better to…In that way,…
(3)Why not do…?/What about doing…?/ (强烈建议) that you should…Thus,…
(4) (如果我是你), I would…/It would be a good choice to…/By doing that,…
(5)In my personal opinion, it would be wise/more helpful to do…
[尾段句]希望建议有用或被接受:
(1)I hope my suggestions can make a difference to you.
(2)I would appreciate it (如果你能考虑我的建议).
(3)I hope you will take my advice into account/consideration.
(4)I hope you will find (这些建议实用/有用/有帮助).
【真题示例】
[2024·安徽合肥高三二模]
假定你是李华,你校外教Adele计划拍短视频向她的亲友介绍你们的校园生活,为此征求你的建议,请你给她回一封邮件,内容包括:
1.你建议的拍摄内容;
2.你的理由。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
【精彩美文】
Dear Adele,
I’m glad to hear that you’re planning to make a short video to introduce our campus life to your friends and family. Here are my suggestions for the shooting content.
Firstly, it would be great to record some of our daily activities, such as morning exercises, classroom interactions, and extracurricular activities. This will help them understand our vibrant campus life. Secondly, you can film our school’s beautiful scenery, including the green lawns, the lake, and the modern teaching
buildings, all of which will give a good first impression of our campus. Last but not least, interviewing some students and teachers about their favourite parts of school life would add a personal touch. It would make the video more relatable and interesting for your audience.
I hope you find these suggestions helpful and that my recommendations will be of some use to you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【即时训练】
A [2024·山东临沂高三一模]
假如你是李华,你校外教Ryan打算开展英语阅读活动,现向学生征求意见,请你给外教回复一封邮件,陈述建议并给出理由,内容包括:
1.材料选择;
2.阅读形式(小组合作或自主阅读)。
注意:1.词数80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【范文填空】
Dear Ryan,
I’m delighted to hear about 1. (你发起英语阅读活动的计划). Here are my suggestions.
Firstly, as for the reading materials, I suggest 2. (我们选择各种文本来迎合不同的兴趣和阅读水平). This diversity will 3. (不仅会丰富我们的阅读体验,还会开阔我们的视野). Secondly, regarding the reading format, I propose a combination of both group collaboration and independent reading. Group collaboration can foster a lively discussion and 4. (鼓励学生分享他们的见解), while independent reading 5. (允许个人按照自己的节奏更深入地研究文本).
What I strongly believe is that these suggestions 6. (将有助于我们阅读活动的成功).
Yours,
Li Hua
B [2024·山东青岛高三二模]
假定你是李华。你校即将开设英语角,校英文报现面向全体学生征集建议。请你写一封信,内容包括:
1.提供建议(如时间、地点、主题等);
2.表达期待。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Editor,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
KEYS:
【高分句型】
[首段句](1)I am writing to express my views
(4)my tips are as follows
[中段句](3)It’s strongly advised/suggested
(4)If I were you
[尾段句](2)if you could consider my suggestions
(4)these suggestions practical/useful/helpful
【即时训练】
A
1. your plan to launch an English reading activity
2. we choose a variety of texts to cater to different interest and reading levels
3. not only enrich our reading experience but also broaden our horizons
4. encourage students to share their insights
5. allows individuals to delve deeper into the texts at their own pace
6. will contribute to the success of our reading activity
B
One possible version:
Dear Editor,
Learning that an English corner will be open in our school, I’m writing to give some advice.
First of all, the English corner can be arranged every Friday in our language lab so that we will be offered a chance to practise our oral English using multimedia devices. What’s more, the theme of the English corner should be about improving our language competence, various topics included.
I hope my advice is worth taking and that the first session will arrive on time!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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