Unit 5 Writing 课件 2025-2026学年沪教版八年级英语上册

该初中英语课件聚焦“写感谢信”核心知识点，从学生已有收信经历导入（如“你收到过哪些信件或卡片？”），结合交换旅行主题，通过“理解重要性—掌握结构—积累表达—实践写作”的脉络搭建支架，先解析感谢信的目的与结构，再提供Eric案例的大纲、有用表达及句子积累，引导学生从输入到输出逐步掌握写作技能。 其亮点在于以真实情境（交换生Eric给寄宿家庭写感谢信）为载体，融合语言能力与文化意识培养。通过“头脑风暴”问题链（如“最感激的事”“学到的中国文化”）引导学生梳理内容，培养思维品质；提供丰富语言支架（开头/中间/结尾常用语、时态人称提示），助力学生规范表达。学生能提升应用文写作能力与跨文化沟通素养，教师可借助结构化步骤（Plan-Write-Check）和分层作业（基础+拓展）提高教学效率。

What kind of letters or cards have you received? Do you know what a thank-you email is? Importance and purpose of thank-you emails Why do we write thank-you emails? Why are they important? Thank-you emails are a great way to express gratitude. They help us build strong relationships.  Writing a thank-you email Eric’s teacher has suggested an outline and some useful expressions for a thank-you email. Add more useful expressions if you can. Greeting and opening Closing and signature Body of the email Structure of a thank-you email Imagine you are Eric. You have just come back from Beijing. Now, you want to write a thank-you email to your host family. What should you include in the email? Look at the texts on pages 69 and 73, and then discuss in groups. Brainstorming 1. What are you most grateful for? (e.g. being wonderful hosts, showing you around) 2. What was the most enjoyable part of the trip? (e.g. food / places of interest) 3. What have you learnt about Chinese history and culture? 4. What have you done since you returned to the UK? 5. What do you miss most about Beijing? Content Useful expressions Greetings and beginning of the email I hope you are well. How are you? I’m writing to thankyou for ___________ Your appreciation and gratitude •Things you are grateful for •Things you enjoyed most about the trip •Things you learnt during your stay in Beijing (e.g. Chinese history, Chinese culture) It was so kind of you to ... I am grateful that... It has been a fantastic experience to learn ... I felt like part of the family. I still remember the day when ... _______________ Your life and feelings after the trip • Things you have done since you returned to London • Things you miss about Beijing I have told my friends about... The thing I miss most is ... I do hope that________________ Ending and signing off • Best wishes to the host family Keep in touch! Yours, Best wishes, ___________________ we can meet again soon your kindness during my stay in Beijing Eric We made dumplings together Step 1 Plan Make an outline of the thank-you email. Step 2 Write 文体： 人称： 时态： 写作要点： 应用文 第一人称 一般现在时/ 一般过去时/现在完成时 表达感谢 1.开头常用语 1.I hope you are well. How are you? I'm writing to express my sincere thanks for your hospitality during my stay in Beijing.​ 2.How is everything going? I'm writing this letter to show my gratitude to you for taking care of me during my study tour in Beijing. 2. 中间常用语 A 表达感激的事​ 1.I am grateful that you helped me with my Chinese pronunciation every day, which made a big difference to my language learning.​ 2.I really appreciate it that you took me to see the local traditional opera show. It was an unforgettable experience. (句子积累） B 旅行中最喜欢的事​ 1.The thing I enjoyed most about the trip was the family dinner we had during the Mid - Autumn Festival. Making and eating mooncakes together was so much fun.​ 2.I still remember the day when we went hiking in the mountains near Beijing. The beautiful scenery and fresh air were amazing, and I had a great time with you.​ C 学到的知识​ 1.It has been a fantastic experience to learn about the long history of the Great Wall from you. Your stories made it come alive.​ 2.I've learned a lot about Chinese family values during my stay with you. I feel like part of the family.​ D 回国后的情况​ 1.I have told my friends all about the interesting Beijing hutongs we walked through. They were really interested.​ 2.Since I returned to London, I've been trying to cook some simple Chinese dishes like you taught me, but they never taste as good as yours.​ E 表达想念​ 1.The thing I miss most is our evening talks after dinner. We shared so many interesting ideas and stories.​ 2.What I miss a lot is the friendly smiles on your faces every morning. 结尾常用语​ I do hope that you can visit London someday. I would love to be your guide and show you around my city.​ Keep in touch! I hope to hear from you soon and know how you are doing.​ Best wishes to your family. May all your dreams come true. Basic structure of how to write a thank-you email 01 03 02 Part 1 The beginning (the purpose of writing a thank-you letter) Part 2 1. Describe something you are grateful for. something you enjoy most. something you have learnt. 2. Your life and feelings after the trip Part 3 (Best wishes to the host family) The body The ending How is everything? I hope you are well. I’m writing to thank you for your kindness during my stay in Beijing. You were wonderful hosts, and I am so grateful that you took care of me. You made me feel part of the family! I really enjoyed the amazing family dinners, and I learnt so much about Chinese culture from you. I still remember the day we visited the Great Wall. It was one of the best days in my life! I really miss all the delicious food in Beijing, especially your home-cooked dumplings. Since I returned to London, I haven’t had any good Chinese food. I wish I can go back to China again soon. It was an unforgettable experience. I do hope that you can come and visit London sometime too! Check and revise Dimensions Criteria Scores Structure I presented the information in a clear and logical way. Content I used appropriate expressions for greetings and sign-offs. I used appropriate vocabulary to describe Eric's experiences and feelings about the trip. Language I used the words and expressions I learnt in this unit. I used correct spelling, grammar and punctuation. The subjects and verbs in each sentence agree. 5= Excellent 4= Good 3= Acceptable 2= Needs improvement 1= Not good Homework 基础作业 将修改后的感谢信工整地抄写在作业本上，注意书写规范和格式正确。 拓展作业 1.给曾经帮助过自己的老师、同学或朋友写一封感谢信，实际运用所学知识，表达自己的感激之情。 2.收集一些优秀的感谢信，分析它们的特点，整理成一份小报告，下节课与同学们分享。 THANK YOU $