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09 如何设置故事开端 一、句子翻译练习 修辞翻译练习01 1．我睡得正酣，正在这时我的床开始晃动，我听到一种奇怪的声音就像一列火车正从我的窗外驶过。 I was fast asleep when suddenly my bed began shaking and I heard a strange sound, like a railway train passing my window. 2．这颗老松树依然耸立在那，像伞一样盖住了洞穴。 The old pine tree still stood there like an umbrella covering the entrance of the cave. 3．他开始新生活就像古树又开了花。 He began his new life like an old tree blossoming again. 4．她的一双眼又大又明亮，如同镶嵌着的宝石。 Her eyes are big and bright like jewels set in. 5．雷声听起来就好像炸弹在房顶上爆炸似地。 The thunder sounded like a bomb exploding on the roof of the house. 6．他看见我就像老鼠见了猫似的，到处躲藏。 He saw me like a mouse seeing the cat, running everywhere to hide. 7．我就像过街的老鼠似的，被人追着打。 I was chased by people like a rat crossing the street. 8．他高兴起来就像一只顽皮的猴子似的，蹦跳个不停。 He cheered up like a naughty monkey jumping without stop. 9．她好像圈在屋里的一只蜜蜂，看着外边的阳光却飞不出去。 She was like a bee trapped in a room, seeing the sunlight outside but unable to fly out. 10.有时我觉得自己像是一只在笼子里的鸟，而来到这里让我感到自由。 Sometimes I feel like a bird in the cage, and coming here is what sets me free. 11.人都会有优缺点。如果对此视而不见，像蜗牛向前慢爬一样对周围发生的一切一无所知，那样，我们就很可能落在后面并被激烈的竞争淘汰。 Everyone has his own strengths and weaknesses. If we are blind to it, we are like a snail crawling slowly alone without knowing what is happening around us. Thus, we are more likely to be left behind and ruled out of the fierce competition. 12.一开始，他车驾得跟蜗牛一样，现在他又一路猛冲！ At first he drove like a snail and now how he is dashing along! 13.正月十五的月亮就像明镜似的，照得大地一片光明。 The moon of the Lantern Festival is like a mirror, lighting up the ground. 14.夏天的太阳就像着了魔似的，疯狂地炙烤着大地。 The summer sun is like a magic wand, madly parching the earth. 15.暴风雨消退就如同潮汐落下。 The storm is dying out like the tide down. 16.玛丽笑起来如同一朵盛开的鲜花。 Mary is smiling like a flower out. 17.她像离弓之箭冲到车站。 She dashed to the station like an arrow from a bow. 18.他轻而易举就把难题解开了。 He worked out the problem like a duck to water. 19.莎拉教起书来驾轻就熟。 Sarah took to teaching like a duck to water. 20.他像一头发怒的狮子冲着我叫嚷。 He shouted at me like an angry lion. 21.她整天辛辛苦苦地干活。 She works like a horse all day long. 22.我们跑得飞快。 We ran like the wind. 23.听到钥匙在开前门的声音，我立即从床上起来了。 I heard the key turn in the front door and I was out of bed like a shot. 24.他走路鬼鬼崇崇的，就像做贼似的。 He walked trembling just like a thief. 25.爷爷高兴起来就像一个孩子似的，乐呵呵地转悠着。 Grandpa happily wandered about like a child. 26.开车回家时，我哭得像个婴儿。 As I drove home I sobbed like a baby. 27.猫飞快地冲出我的房间，一定是什么东西把它吓坏了。 The cat darted out of my room like (greased) lightning; something must have frightened it badly. 28.这个消息犹如晴天霹雳使他们大为震惊。 The news hit them like a thunderbolt. 29.网络文化是一把双刃剑，具有双重效应。 Network culture, which is like a double-edged sword, has double effects. 30.突然凯特犹如被电击一样，他想到 30 分钟后会有一辆特快火车经过 (该危险地方)。 Suddenly another thought went through Kate's mind like an electric shock. An express train was due to go past about 30 minutes later. 31.她看起来像天使般腼腆。 She looks shy like an angel. 32.她有金色的头发，蓝色的眼睛，很漂亮，天使般的歌声让每一个人着迷。 Blonde-haired, blue-eyed and beautiful, she sang like a little angel and impressed everyone. 33.你最好自己做出决定，不要盲从你的朋友。 You'd better make your own decision; don't follow your friend like a sheep. 34.我像一只迷途的羔羊。 I have gone out of the way like a wandering sheep. 35.我尽量缩小与弟弟的卡车的距离，缓缓地移动，盯住他的尾灯，心中才略有一丝安慰，就像一只吓坏了的小羊紧跟在羊倌的屁股后面一样。 I kept closing the gap between my car and my brother's truck, inching toward the reassuring glow of the taillights like a frightened sheep following a shepherd. 36.我饥肠辘辘，像头穿行在森林里寻找猎物的狼。 I'm hungry like a wolf stalking in the forest. 37.突然门打开了，一队德国士兵像恶狼般扑进来。 Abruptly, the door was broken into. The German soldiers flooded in like fierce wolves. 38.我女儿的高中生活每一天都很艰辛。她早上起来想到上学，有时甚至想到出门都像爬一座高山。 Every day of my daughter's high school life has been a struggle. She wakes up in the morning and the thought of going to school-sometimes even the thought of going outside-is like a huge mountain to climb. 39.你要站在那儿拼命挥手，以确保他们看到你。 You stand there and you wave like blazes to make sure they've seen you. 40.用 “谨小慎微” 来形容新会长很恰当。 “Cautious” is a description that certainly fits the new president like a glove. 41.头顶上的天空灰蒙蒙，空气似乎稀薄得难以呼吸。这儿的一切看起来像死湖！ The sky above was gray and the air seemed too thin to breathe. Everything here looked like a completely dead lake! 42.她大失所望。 Disappointment hit her like a ton of bricks (very heavily, very severely). 43.每次看恐怖电影时，我都吓得浑身发抖。 When I watch scary movies, I shake like a leaf. 44.今天早上他忘记带雨伞了，被淋得像落汤鸡似的。 He forgot the umbrella this morning, caught in the rain like a drowned rat. 45.她像一只蝴蝶，在人们的生活中穿梭。 She is like a butterfly. She fits in and out of people's life. 46.这些照片和视频在互联网上迅速传播，激起了一波波巨大的争议。 The photos and the video spread like wildfire on the Internet, stirring huge waves of controversy. 47.林肯总统被刺杀的消息不胫而走。 The news of assassination of President Lincoln spread like wildfire. 48.有时候刻薄的话就如尖刀刺伤人们的心，纵使道歉，疼痛如破镜也难以愈合。 Sometimes mean words are just like the sharp knives, stabbing into people's hearts. Even if we apologize, the pain will still exist like the broken mirror. 49.这是一场美满的婚姻，两口子很快就如胶似漆。 It was a perfect marriage. They got on (with each other) like a house on fire. 50.她飞快地跑下山。 She ran like the clappers down the hill. 51.她心急如焚，就像热锅上的蚂蚁。 She was so worried that she looked like a cat on hot bricks. 比较: 他们如坐针毡，不知道做什么好。 They are on pins and needles, not knowing what to do. 我紧张得像热锅上的蚂蚁！ I am so nervous, I feel like I have ants in my pants! 52.当我看见他用黑笔签文件把我的房子卖给别人时，我感觉就像当头挨了一棒。 It struck me like a blow when I saw his initials in black pen on the legal document which sold my house to another family. 53.当房屋畅销时所有的一切都是美好，它们每月增值。 Everything was great when houses were selling like hot cakes and their values go up every month. 54.整个计划像梦一样奏效。 The whole plan worked like a dream (work very well). 55.这几年好像是一场凄楚的梦。 The last few years have been like a bad dream. 56.在光天化日之下，前一天晚上发生的事情看起来像是一场噩梦。 In broad daylight the events of the night before seemed like a bad dream. 57.他束手无策地站着，活像丢魂似的。 He stood helplessly, like a lost soul. 58.别假装自己在讲真话，我早把你看透了。 Don't pretend you're telling the truth-I can read you like a book. 59.他对这地区了如指掌。 He knew the area like a book. 60.有几句坏话，或一对夫妇的 “恐怖故事” 将不胫而走。 A few bad words or a couple of “horror stories” will spread like wildfire. 61.我儿子的学校里突然爆发的水痘像野火般迅速传开来，差不多有一半的孩子染上了。 There was an outbreak of chicken pox at my son's school which spread like wildfire until nearly half the children caught it. 62.罗斯每周一早上都如约而至 (非常准时)。 Rose arrives every Monday morning just like clockwork. 63.这一定是一种被人打了耳光的感觉。 It must feel like a slap on the face. 64.它就像是在我脸上闪了一巴掌似的唤醒了我。 It was like a slap in the face -a wake up call. 65.那个进球仿佛一盆冷水浇在了我的头上，但感谢我的队友让我们回到正确的轨道上，我必须要真诚地感谢他们。 The goal was like a cold bucket of water over my head, but thanks to my teammates we got back on track and I really must thank them. 66.父亲去世后的最初几年里，每当我看见别人的花园时，对他的幕幕回忆就像一盆冷水浇在我的头上。 For the first few years after he died, I couldn't even bear to look at anyone's garden without having strong memories pour over me like cold water from a bucket. 67.有关皇室的书卖得正火。 Books on the Royal Family are selling like hot cakes. 68.那些糖果成了热销货，它们很快就要卖完了。 Those candies are going like hot cakes; they'll be sold out soon. 69.他们将永远积攒不起钱来买新房子－他们花钱如水。 They will never be able to save money to buy a new house-they both spend money like water. 70.玛丽瘦削的老手扑到脸上，表示惊奇和高兴，然后像一个挨饿的孩子吃面包一样饿着冲了出去。玛丽抓起红色的钱包。她拿了一会儿，只是想看看，然后把它按在胸前，像婴儿一样摇摆。 Mary's thin old hands flew up to her face in a gesture of wonder and joy, then flew out hungrily like a starved child taking bread. Mary grabbed the red purse. She held it for a moment, just to see it, then pressed it to her breast, rocking it like a baby. 71.恐惧就像恶魔冰冷、锋利的手包围着我。我努力调整自己的情绪，但我做不到。 The fear surrounded me like a devil's frozen, sharp hands. I struggled to adjust my mood but I couldn't. 72.我是唯一一个穿制服的人，我很扎眼／招眼。 I was the only one in uniform and I stood/ stuck out like a sore thumb. 73.中国沿海岛屿星罗棋布。 Islands are scattered all along China's coastline like stars in the sky. 74.晚会上，我穿着寒酸的衣服感到很不自在。 At the party, I felt like a fish out of water in my shabby clothes. 75.我不喜欢和妈妈及她的朋友一起出去吃饭，和她们在一起，我总感到不舒服。 I don't like to dine out with Mum and her friends because I always feel like a fish out of water in their company. 76.就像上了发条似的，这声音每半个小时响一次，一直持续到天亮。 This occurred like clockwork about every half hour until sunrise. 77.女王的假期安排得井井有条，所有活动都已提前把时间精确计划好了。 The Queen's holiday is arranged to go like clockwork, everything pre-planned to the minute. 78.运动会进展顺利，所有赛事都准时开始，准时结束。 The sports day went like clockwork, with every race starting and finishing on time. 修辞翻译练习02 1．她哭得好像世界的末日来临了。 She cried as if the world came to an end. 2．我耸了耸肩，仿佛想说 “为什么不？” I shrugged, as if to say “Why not?” 3．他总能知道几点了，仿佛是出于本能。 He always knew what time it was, as if by instinct. 4．让你感觉到这儿就好像到了自己家一样。 You'll feel as if you were at home while here. 5．女孩一动不动地倾听着，似乎已经变成一块石头。 The girl listened as if she had been turned to a stone. 6．他停了下来，好像要把悲伤的记忆抹去。 He paused as if (he was going) to let the sad memory pass. 7．他四下张望，好像寻找什么。 He looked about as though (he was) in search of something. 8．他停了下来好像期望汤姆说些什么。 He paused as if (he was) expecting Tom to speak. 9．他做事像个傻子。 He acts as if (he was) a fool. 10.他目不转睛地看着我，就像第一次看见我似的。 He stared at me as if seeing me for the first time. 11.他们完全忽略了这些事实，就仿佛它们不存在似的。 They completely ignore these facts as if they never existed. 12.不要总认为只有自己才行，别人什么都不行，好像地球没有你就不转了。 Don't think that you alone can do everything while others can do nothing, as if the earth would stop turning without you. 13.她觉得她简直无法忍受这样的生活。 She felt as though (she was) hardly able to endure such a life. 14.他好像是漫不经心地说了那句话。 He made that remark as if (he did it) absently. 15.她爱这男孩，就好像她是他的妈妈一样。 She loves the boy as if she were his mother. 16.坐在我对面的男人梦幻般地笑着仿佛想起了什么。 The man sitting opposite me smiled dreamily as if remembering something pleasant in the past. 17.他跑得好像鬼在追逐他。 He ran as if ghosts were chasing him. 18.他走路像喝醉了似的。 He walks as if(he were/is) drunk. 19.她看起来好像年轻了十岁。 She looks as if (she were) ten years younger. 20.夜似乎没有尽头。 It seemed as if the night would never end. 21.两位陌生人聊天就好像他们是多年的老朋友。 The two strangers talked as if they had been friends for years. 22.他冲出房间，好像要去迎接某个重要人物似的。 He rushes out as if to meet some important person. 23.你说话的样子就好像你是上帝似的。 You speak as if you were God. 24.他站着一动不动好像粘在地上。 He stood as if (he was) rooted to the ground. 25.那孩子跟我们谈起话来，像个成年人似的。 The child talked to us as if he were a grown-up. 26.我恶狠狠地拉起脸来，仿佛要把他活生生地吞下去。 I made a fierce countenance as if to eat him alive. 27.史密斯太太感觉几乎不能呼吸了。 Mrs. Smith felt as if she could hardly breathe. 28.她觉得自己的激情似乎已经榨尽了。 She felt as if every drop of emotion had been squeezed from her. 29.我不知道该去哪里，觉得自己又聋又瞎又蠢。我开始惊慌失措。 I had no idea where to go, feeling as if I were deaf and blind and stupid. I began to panic. 30.他的手提箱不见了，他觉得好像世界末日了，不知该干什么。 With his suitcase gone, he felt as if it were the end of the world, not knowing what to do. 31.我觉得我的世界好像崩溃了，原本属于我生活的一部分正在远去。 I felt as if my world was falling apart. My heart ached for that part of me that was slipping away. 32.我觉得好像刚从恶梦中醒来。 I feel as if I had wakened from a nightmare. 33.我感到自己无意中来到了梦魇中的世界，就像你有时在梦中所经历的那样。 I felt as if I had stumbled into a nightmare country, as you sometimes do in dreams. 34.泪水涌上他的眼睛，他试图把它抑制住但徒劳无功。他最后看了一眼那条鱼，仿佛在挥手告别。 Tears welling up in his eyes, he tried to hold it back but in vain. He took a final look at the fish as if he was waving goodbye. 35.令我惊讶的是，他奇怪地看了我一眼，好像我抢了他的食物。然后他愤怒地站了起来。 To my surprise, he gave me a strange look as if I had grabbed his food. Then he stood up irritatedly. 36.我问他我的工作是否完成了。当我说出这些话的时候，我觉得好像有炸弹落在他身上。他喊道:“什么都没做。这需要时间！” I asked him if my work was done. The moment I uttered the words, I felt as if a bomb had fallen on him. He shouted,“ Nothing is done, It will take time!” 37.我惊慌失措，心跳加速，泪水开始从我的眼眶里涌出，我的眼睛就好像是被打开了的水龙头。 I was panicking, my heart was racing, and tears started to pour out of my eyes as if my eyes were a tap being turned on. 38.我感到震惊和恐惧，好像我心脏病发作似的。 I was so shocked and terrified that I felt as if I was having a heart attack. 39.他们看着我，就像我已经疯了一样。 They looked at me as if I had taken leave of my senses. 修辞翻译练习03 1．“我要告发那个家伙！” 卢克插话道。他猛冲着离开，脸红如红莓酱。 “I'm telling on that kid!"Lucky interrupted. He charged off, his face as red as cranberry sauce. 2．我把它握在手里思考着，直到五指冰冷。 I held it there thinking until my fingers turned as cold as the ice. 3．每当我晚归时，我的太太就非常生气。 My wife gets as mad as a wet hen whenever l come home late. 4．她很温和。 She is as mild as a dove. 5．魅力女生应该每天身体健康，开心快乐，无忧无虑。 A charming girl should be as sound as a bell, as merry as a cricket and happy-go-lucky every day. 6．他即使住院也非常活泼。 Even when he was in hospital, he stayed as lively as a cricket. 7．几个朋友这时都始终站在一旁，一声不响。 The friends stood all this while as mute as fishes. 8．他正襟危坐，纹丝不动。 He was sitting upright, as stiff as a poker. 9．他今天下午特别讨人喜欢。 He is as nice as pie this afternoon. 10.男孩非常敏捷。 The boy is as nimble as a squirrel. 11.当他看到他受伤的腿时，他的脸一下子变白了。 He turned as pale as a ghost when he saw his injured leg. 12.琼斯先生虽然一贫如洗，但为人非常正直。 Mr. Jones is as poor as a church mouse, but he is as honest as the day is long. 13.那男孩给我看他的崭新足球靴子时得意极了。 The boy was as proud as a peacock when he showed me his new football boots. 14.我兄弟说他的同学海伦像孔雀一样虚荣。 My brother said his classmate Helen was as vain as a peacock. 15.一瞬间，他就把乌龟的头砍了下来。 As quick as a flash, he chopped off the turtle's head. 16.她因羞愧脸红得像朵玫瑰花。 She blushed as red as a rose with shame. 17.那个胖家伙蠢得像猪一样。 The fat fellow is as stupid as a goose. 18.劝他是没用的，他非常固执，就像骡子一样。 It's useless to persuade him, he is as stubborn as a mule. 19.这小姑娘胆子特别小，怕人。 The little girl is as timid as a hare, shy in the presence of strangers. 20.我的妈妈像蜜蜂一样忙。 My mother is as busy as a bee. 21.我们根本没有通知就去拜访了我的岳父母，结果他们非常欢迎我们去。 We called on my parents-in-law completely unannounced and they made us as welcome as the flowers in May. 22.他个子或许矮小，身体也不够强壮，但非常勇敢。 He may be small and not very strong, but he's as brave as a lion. 23.她像耗子一样悄悄爬上楼去。 She crept upstairs, (as) quiet as a mouse. 24.他们冷酷无情，铁石心肠。 They are merciless, with hearts as hard as nails. 25.我淋浴后总觉得精神焕发。 I always feel as fresh as a daisy after a shower. 26.解答这个数学问题当然轻而易举。 Solving this math problem is certainly as easy as ABC. 27.他等着选举的结果，就像热锅上的蚂蚁。 He was waiting for the results of the elections, restless as an ant on a hot pan. 28.老板做生意极守规律。 The boss is as regular as clockwork in his business. 29.有些人对非常有规律的工作感到厌倦。 Some people are bored with their as-regular-as-clockwork jobs. 30.她过去每逢星期六的傍晚必来此地。 She used to come here every Saturday evening as regular as clockwork. 31.这只小小的幼兔在她手里像羽毛一样轻。 The little baby rabbit was as light as a feather in her hand. 32.老爷爷听说他的孙子孙女们要来他家里玩，简直高兴极了。 The old man became as cheerful as a lark when he heard that his grandchildren were coming for a visit. 33.跟雷迪先生做生意要多加小心，他十分狡猾。 Be careful about doing business with Mr. Reddy. He's as cunning as a fox. 34.我相信他适合这个工作。他强壮如马。 I'm sure he is fit for the work. He's as strong as a horse. 35.我们要在危急时刻保持镇定自若。 We must keep as cool as a cucumber in an emergency. 36.她泰然自若地走进来，好像什么都没发生一样。 She walked in as cool as a cucumber, as if nothing had happened. 二、综合模拟演练01 In 1945, a 12-year-old boy saw a beautiful brooch （胸针）in a shop window that set his heart racing. But the price—five dollars—was too high for Reuben Earle. Five dollars would buy almost a week's food for his family. Reuben couldn’t ask his father for the money. Everything his father made through fishing went to his mother, Dora. Slim and beautiful, she was the center of the home and the glue that held it together. The housework was never-ending, and she struggled to feed and clothe their five children, but she was happy as her family and their well-being were all she cared about. Nevertheless, he opened the shop's door and went inside. Standing proudly and straight in his flour-sack （面粉袋改做的）shirt and washed-out trousers, he told the shopkeeper what he wanted, adding, “But I don't have the money right now. Can you please hold it for me for some time?” "I'll try,” the shopkeeper smiled. "People around here don't usually have that kind of money to spend on things. It should keep for a while." Reuben respectfully touched his worn cap and walked out. He would raise the money and not tell anybody, for he thought Mum would get surprised when she saw that brooch. On hearing the sound of hammering （捶打）from a side street, Reuben suddenly had an idea that he could raise money by selling the used nail bags. People built their own homes in Bay Roberts, using nails bought in bags from a local factory. Sometimes the used bags were thrown away at the construction site, and Reuben knew he could sell them back to the factory for five cents a piece. That day he sold two nail bags and hid the money in a rusty soda tin. 注意：1,续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Every day after school, Reuben started his plan. . Paragraph2: Finally, the time came! _______________________________________________________________________________. 单句训练 1. 每天放学后，鲁本都开始了他的计划。 2. 又冷又饿，鲁本四处闲逛，小心地从一条街到另一条街寻找指甲袋。 3. 为了节省更多的钱，这个下定决心的男孩甚至决定在一大早就送文件。 4. 他赢的每枚硬币都去了苏打罐，他珍贵的“银行”，然后所有的疲倦都神奇地消失了 5. 每次他经过商店橱窗里的胸针时，都会提醒他，他做了什么是值得的。 6. 一天比一天地，他的苏打水锡变得越来越重了。 7. 六个星期过去了，他才知道。然后走到了平安夜。 8. 终于，时间到了！鲁本偷偷走进他的房间，小心翼翼地拿出苏打罐，把所有的硬币都倒出来，开始数。 9. 5美元二十美分！他第二次数了一遍，毫无差错。 10. 他的努力工作最终得到了回报！ 11. 鲁本紧紧地拿着苏打锡，立刻冲进了商店。 12. 朵拉戴着漂亮的胸针，知道背后的故事，欣喜若狂，一句话也说出来。 13. 她只是伸出双臂紧紧地搂住了她心爱的儿子。 14. “圣诞快乐，妈妈，”儿子骄傲地宣布。“你自己也是如此。” 15. 骄傲的母亲也着。嗯，没有梦想是无法不到的。 参考答案 情节分析：本文主要讲述了一个小故事：12岁男孩Reuben想为自己的母亲买一枚胸针，可 手头没有足够的钱，他找到店主，店主答应为他保留一段时间，而Reuben开始捡钉子来筹 钱购买胸针。 续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：每天放学后，Reuben就开始他的计划。 本段开头提到Reuben已经开始进行筹钱计划，后文可以讲述他的筹钱过程以及最终结果， 可以具体描写一下筹钱过程中Reuben付出的努力。 第二段开头是：终于，是时候了！本段 开头暗示Reuben己经筹到了足够的钱，后文就可以描写他买下胸针的激动心情以及将胸针 送给母亲Dora的过程。另外，母亲收到胸针后开心、感动的反应也可以是描写的重点. 文章的主人公无疑是小男孩Reuben,但次要人物Dora是不能忽略的，需要通过妈妈来衬托 儿子。那么看看文章对妈妈的描述： Slim and beautiful, she was the center of the home and the glue that held it together. The housework was never-ending, and she struggled to feed and clothe their five children, but she was happy as her family and their well-being were all she cared about. 如果结尾只是说妈妈很开心，就非常遗憾了，还必须和这个描写照应：对生活的乐观 和对孩子的热爱。 妈妈的开心：Wearing the beautiful brooch and knowing the story behind it, Dora was too overjoyed to utter a word. 妈妈的疼爱：She just threw her arms tightly around her beloved son. 对话： “Merry Christmas, mom"， the son announced proudly. "You too." the proud mother echoed. 主题升华：Well, no dream is out of reach for a willing heart. 单句训练 1) Every day after school, Reuben started his plan. 2) Cold and hungry, Reuben wandered around, searching for nail bags carefully from one street to another. 3) To save more money, the determined boy even decided to deliver papers on the early morning. 4) Every coin he won went to a soda tin, his treasured “bank"， and then all the tiredness disappeared magically. 5) Each time he passed by the brooch in the shop window would remind him what he did was worthwhile. 6) Day by day, his soda tin became heavier and heavier. 7) Six weeks passed before he even knew it. 8) Then approached the Christmas Eve. 9) Finally, the time came! Reuben stole into his room and cautiously took out the soda tin, poured all the coins out and began to count. 10) Five dollars and twenty cents! He counted it a second time, and no mistake. 11) His hard work eventually paid off! 12) Holding the soda tin firmly, Reuben rushed for the shop without a second's delay. 13) Wearing the beautiful brooch and knowing the story behind it, Dora was too overjoyed to utter a word. 14) She just threw her arms tightly around her beloved son. “Merry Christmas, mom"， the son announced proudly. "You too." 15) No dream is out of reach for a willing heart. 参考范文： Every day after school, Reuben started his plan. Cold and hungry, Reuben wandered around, searching for nail bags carefully from one street to another. To save more money, the determined boy even decided to deliver papers on the early morning. Every coin he won went to a soda tin, his treasured “bank"， and then all the tiredness disappeared magically. Each time he passed by the brooch in the shop window would remind him what he did was worthwhile. Day by day, his soda tin became heavier and heavier. Six weeks passed before he even knew it. Then approached the Christmas Eve. Finally, the time came! Reuben stole into his room and cautiously took out the soda tin, poured all the coins out and began to count. Five dollars and twenty cents! He counted it a second time, and no mistake. His hard work eventually paid off! Holding the soda tin firmly, Reuben rushed for the shop without a second's delay. Wearing the beautiful brooch and knowing the story behind it, Dora was too overjoyed to utter a word. She just threw her arms tightly around her beloved son. “Merry Christmas, mom"， the son announced proudly. "You too." the proud mother echoed. Well, no dream is out of reach for a willing heart. 三、综合模拟演练02 Writing01 1．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文 I was eight the first time I played checkers. I’ve played about a thousand games since then, but none was so memorable as that first one. It was icy January in Kansas. When the snowstorm hit, cutting off our power, we were thrown into darkness though it was still around noon. No heat, no light. The winter became terrible for everyone-especially for me and my six year old brother. Methodically Grandpa gathered up his winter coat, scarf and gloves, and disappeared into snow. Several minutes later, he returned, carrying much wood. Glancing casually at my brother and me, he said, “Come on boys. Time to build a fire. ” But the fire wasn’t enough to sustain the attention of two young boys. “Maybe,” Grandpa remarked, carefully considering the situation. “we could do something I used to do as a boy. Let’s go camping.” My brothers and I looked at each other in amazement. ”Get your sleeping bags, pillows and stuffed animals, and meet me back here.“ It took us only minutes to gather our sleeping gear. When we returned Grandpa had rearranged the furniture, clearing an open space in front of the fire. in short order, we had a fine campground. “Now then” Grandpa began, unfolding a strange looking game board, “who’s up for a little game of checkers?” “What are checkers?” my brother and I asked. “Never played, eh? Well. it’s time you boys learned,” Grandpa said. For the next hour or so. Grandpa coached us on the fine art of playing checkers. I became a fair player after losing four games in a row. Then I defeated Grandpa. When I asked him if he’d let me win, he merely winked (眨眼 and set the board up for the next game Afterward. Grandpa used his old guitar to sing us some campfire songs to which we sing along. Then suddenly, the power came back on. Mom and Dad gave a cheer, but for my brother and me, it was the end of a grand adventure. This wasn’t how we wanted the night to end. 注意：1.续写词数应为 150 左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Grandpa looked at us, smiled and then slowly stood up. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The next morning, everything returned to normal: lights, television and heat, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________  Grandpa looked at us smiled and then slowly stood up. He walked across the room to the light switch and turned it off. “Oops, it looks like another power outage, boys. Better sit down for the night. It is going to be a long one” And with that, our camping journey continued. We played another game or two of checkers in the flickering light of the fireplace before bedding down. And then was Grandpa right there with us, stretched out on the couch, his legs hanging over the edge.        The next morning everything returned to normal: lights, television and heat. Bat my brother and I never forgot that special day. We were always grateful for the experience and played many a game of checkers in the years to come. But, most of all, we wen grateful to Grandp, who had known how to transform a cold and dark day in Kansas into something memorable and magical. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者回忆起了第一次和爷爷下跳棋的经历。那是一个寒冬，由于暴风雪停电了，于是爷爷找来了木头在雪地里生火露营。他们玩得很开心，来电了也不愿意进屋。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“爷爷笑着看着我们，然后慢慢地站了起来。”可知，第一段可描写爷爷的行为以及他们继续下跳棋。 ②由第二段首句内容“第二天早上，一切恢复正常：电灯、电视和暖气。”可知，第二段可描写这段经历带给作者的感受。 2.续写线索：爷爷站起来——关掉电灯——继续下棋——难忘——感悟 3.词汇激活 行为类 关闭：turn off/switch off 继续：continue/go on 睡觉：bed down/go to sleep 情绪类 感谢：grateful /thankful 难忘：memorable /unforgettable 【点睛】[高分句型1] We played another game or two of checkers in the flickering light of the fireplace before bedding down. (运用了动名词作宾语) [高分句型2] But, most of all, we wen grateful to Grandpa, who had known how to transform a cold and dark day in Kansas into something memorable and magical. (运用了who引导非限制性定语从句) Writing02 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Sports are important in our family. Both of our sons were high-school athletes in our town of Verden. So I shouldn’t have been surprised when Lauren announced she was going out for the girls’ basketball team. But I was. At just five feet, one inch tall, our daughter’s lack of height wasn’t my worry. She has Down syndrome (唐氏综合症). My wife and I never told Lauren that she was different. We treated her like our other children. We didn’t want her to feel disabled or different because she had Down syndrome. “I’m gonna play basketball, Daddy.” Lauren ran to meet me when I came in from work. She flew into my arms and lingered long in my embrace. Unlike some sixteen-year-olds, Lauren was outwardly affectionate (亲切的). “That’s nice, honey,” I replied automatically, and patted her shoulder. Walking into the kitchen, I kissed my wife Laura on the cheek. Laura spoke slowly, her tone steady. “What Lauren’s trying to tell you is that she’s joining the girls’ high-school basketball team.” Just as my wife’s words sunk in, I heard Lauren behind me. “I’m gonna be a Lady Tiger,” she whooped, skipping into the room and throwing her arms in the air. She raced out of the kitchen to one of her favorite activities, watching cartoons on television. Everything that could happen flashed through my mind. What should we do? Parenting seldom had clear-cut answers, and bringing up a child with a disability was an additional challenge. Mid-November, the season’s first basketball game arrived. I settled into a seat on the second row with the rest of my family. Before the game, cheerleaders (啦啦队) were running on the court, dancing and jumping. The game got off to a good start, but soon Verden was behind. Even after a rally (反弹) in the second half, I knew the Lady Tigers were certain to lose. Just less than two minutes were left, and Verden was down by seventeen points. Coach called a time-out. The announcer’s voice echoed over the public-address system. “Number thirty-three, Lauren Wray, in for the Lady Tigers.” My heart pounding, I watched wide-eyed. Lauren was in the game. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Lauren kept pace with the others fairly well. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Applause exploded and the thunderous sounds echoed on the court. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Lauren kept pace with the others fairly well. She was struggling to gain an opportunity to score. However, the opposing team scored again. With less than a minute left, the Lady Tigers were near their goal. I saw the coach shout and flash a signal to her teammates. Then something I consider sacred happened on the court. They passed Lauren the ball. She caught it and moved toward the goal. Lauren went in for a layup. Amazingly, the opposing team did not block her. She shot. She scored! Applause exploded and the thunderous sounds echoed on the court. “Lauren, Lauren, Lauren,” shouted the cheerleaders. Instead of reacting to the noisy crowd, my daughter kept her head in the game. The final buzzer sounded. Verden lost by seventeen points. A few minutes later, Lauren joined us in the stands. “Did you see? I scored!” Her brown eyes shone as she wiped sweat from her forehead. “I made a basket!” I wrapped my arms around her and hugged her tight. Lauren was different. My daughter wasn't like everyone else. And I was glad. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者的家人都觉得运动很重要，他的女儿劳伦也同样喜欢运动，但是劳伦患有唐氏综合症，当劳伦要参加女子篮球比赛时，作者感到非常担心，但是作者及家人并未告知劳伦她患有唐氏综合症也没有阻止劳伦参加篮球比赛，劳伦最终上场参加比赛。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“劳伦跟得上其他人的步伐。”可知，第一段可描写劳伦在赛场上的表现，并且最终进球。 ②由第二段首句内容“掌声爆发，雷鸣般的声音在球场上回荡。”可知，第二段可描写劳伦进球后告诉作者的激动心情和作者的感悟。 2.续写线索：劳伦努力比赛——神圣事情发生——劳伦进球——现场沸腾——劳伦激动——作者激动感悟 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①.获得机会：gain an opportunity /get a chance/acquire an opportunity ②.前进：move toward /go forward ③.拥抱：wrap one’s arms around sb. / hold in one's arms 情绪类 ①.令人惊奇的：Amazingly /To one’s Amazement ②.高兴的：glad/ joyful/happy 【点睛】[高分句型1]. Then something I consider sacred happened on the court. （省略关系代词的限制性定语从句） [高分句型2]. Her brown eyes shone as she wiped sweat from her forehead. （as引导的时间状语从句） Writing03 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was Sunday. I had one last patient to see. I approached her room in a hurry and stood at the doorway. She was an older woman, sitting on the edge of the bed, struggling to put socks on her swollen feet. I crossed the threshold(门口), spoke quickly to the nurse, and scanned her chart, noting she was in stable condition. I was almost in the clear. I leaned on the bed rail looking down at her. She asked if I could help put on her socks. I thought I had other priorities on the list. It’s my responsibility to arrange the issue. So instead, I launched into a monologue(独白)that went something like this: “How are you feeling? Your sugars and blood pressure were high but they’re better today. The nurse mentioned you’re anxious to see your son who’s visiting you today. It’s nice to have family visit from far away. I bet you really look forward to seeing him.” She stopped me in a serious, authoritative voice. “Sit down, doctor. This is my story, not your story.” I was surprised and embarrassed. I sat down. I helped her with the socks. She began to tell me that her only son lived around the corner from her, but she had not seen him in five years. She believed that the stress of this contributed greatly to her health problems. After hearing her story and putting on her socks, I asked if there was anything else I could do for her. She shook her head no and smiled. All she wanted me to do was to listen. And, not long after, in an unexpected twist, I became the patient, with a diagnosis of multiple sclerosis at age 31. Now, 20 years later, I sit all the time --- in a wheelchair. For as long as I could, I continued to see patients from my chair. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I gradually realize the patients’ stories area bond between the teller and the listener. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ When my condition affected my hands, I resigned and began to teach medical students. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I gradually realize the patients’ stories are a bond between the teller and the listener. Each story is different. Some are detailed; others are vague. Some have a beginning, middle and end. Others wander without a clear conclusion. Some are true; others not. Yet all those things do not really matter. What matters to the storyteller is that the story is heard—without interruption, assumption or judgement. I always reminded myself of the importance of stop-ping, sitting down and truly listening. When my condition affected my hands, I resigned and began to teach medical students. Now I could view the whole from the perspective of physician and patient. I tell them I believe in the power of listening. I tell them I know first hand that immeasurable healing takes place within me when someone stops, sits down and listens to my story. Listening to someone’s story costs less than expensive diagnostic testing but is key to healing and diagnosis. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了我作为医生，在与病人沟通过程中常常以问询为主，了解病人的病情及治疗情况，忽视了倾听病人内心的声音，但在与一位老人的沟通中，我深刻的领会了倾听的重要性，我忽然明白对于病人而言，倾听也是一剂良药的故事。 【详解】1. 段落续写 ①由第一段句首内容“我逐渐意识到，病人的故事是连接讲者和听者的纽带”可知，第一段讲述作者意识到倾听病人的重要意义。 ②由第二段句首内容“当我的病情影响到我的手时，我辞职并开始教医学生”可知，第二段描述我将自己与病人沟通中倾听的经验分享给学生，告诉他们倾听有着不可估量的治愈力量。 2. 续写线索：反思倾听——分析病人倾诉内容——自身领悟——教授学生——分享经验 3. 词汇激活 行为类： ①意识到：realize / be aware of ②重要：matter / count ③辞职：resign /quit the job 情绪类 ①模糊的：vague → unclear 【点睛】【高分句型1】What matters to the storyteller is that the story is heard—without interruption, assumption or judgement.（运用了what引导主语从句及that引导表语从句） 【高分句型2】Listening to someone’s story costs less than expensive diagnostic testing but is key to healing and diagnosis.（运用了动名词作主语） Writing04 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Catherine was the coolest kid in her class. Whenever she went,she was in the spotlight,with a bunch of kids following her and doing everything she did. Her desk mate,Landy,however,was not in the cool kids’ group.Being the tallest kid in her class, she was teased by her classmates,who were always chanting “Landy,Landy,long as spaghetti (意大利面)”.Every time Landy heard those silly chants， she could feel her face burst into flames. God knew how she wished the ground to crack and swallow her! Catherine didn’t really like it when the kids chanted “Landy,Landy,long as spaghetti”.But she never told them to stop either, and nor did she ever talk to her. She liked being popular. One weekend, Catherine went over to her grandfather for Thanksgiving. Her grandfather lives on a farm at the opposite end of town,where he keeps chickens. While helping to feed the chickens, Catherine noticed a peculiar one. Curling in the corner,it looked smaller than the others and was almost half-bare! “What’s the matter with it?”She asked her grandfather, with a puzzled frown on her face. Her grandfather told her how chickens could act.’“They have a pecking(啄) order，” he explained，wrinkles of concern spreading around his forehead.“If one chicken is different, the others will push it away and keep pecking it. Sometimes they peck it so much that it dies.” “Oh，what a poor little thing!”Catherine let out a sigh as she scooped(捧起)the frightened chicken up in her arms,whose heart was beating fast in the bony little body. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Suddenly,she thought of Landy,the girl being ”pecked“by her classmates ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ But Catherine walked directly toward Landy,regardless of what they said. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Suddenly,she thought of Landy,the girl being “pecked” by her classmates.“ I’m going to take it home and take good care of it,”she said with a determined look.Back in school,Catherine spotted Landy sitting by herself in a corner. She kept her head down with her eyes fixed on the floor as usual. Catherine thought Landy was just like the poor little chicken,being teased and ignored by her classmates, merely due to her special height. She told other kids,“It’s time for me to make an apology to Landy.” Astonished at what she said, all the kids burst out screaming,“Talking to the long spaghetti? Are you crazy?” But Catherine walked directly toward Landy,regardless of what they said.“Hi,Landy. I’m sorry about the spaghetti thing.” Catherine murmured an apology, her face reddening.“I know it hurts you. Can you forgive me?" She figured Landy might just walk away. But she lifted her misty eyes and nodded yes. Catherine wiped away her tears,giving her a warm hug. Moved by the scene, the other kids also came to offer their sincere apologies to Landy. From that day on, no one made up silly chants about Landy, and Catherine also gained an important life lesson that everyone should be treated equally no matter how special he or she was. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Catherine是班上最酷的孩子，无论她去哪里，她都是聚光灯下的人物，一群孩子跟着她，做她做的每一件事；而她的同桌——Landy作为班里最高的孩子，经常被同学们取笑。Catherine不太喜欢同学们嘲笑Landy，但她也从来没有叫他们停下来，也从来没有和她说话。直到有一天，Catherine在爷爷的农场看到一只被欺负的小鸡才对Lancy有了愧疚之情，于是决定返校后向Lancy道歉，并与她友好相处。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“突然，她想起了兰迪，那个被同学“啄”的女孩。”可知，第一段可描写Catherine意识到自己之前对待Lancy的态度不好，要用实际行动改变。 ②由第二段首句内容“但Catherine不管他们说什么，直接朝Lancy走去。”可知，第二段可描写Catherine真诚地向Lancy道歉，并下定决心与其友好相处。 2.续写线索：想到被欺负的Lancy——再次看到Lancy被欺负——决定向Lancy道歉——真诚道歉——关系和解——感悟 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①抱起：scoop/hold/take ②道歉：make an apology to /apologize/ murmured an apology/offer their sincere apologies to ③嘲笑：tease/laugh at/ made up silly chants about Landy 情绪类 ①疑惑：with a puzzled frown on her face/confused/puzzled ②担心：wrinkles of concern spreading around his forehead/concerned 【点睛】[高分句型1] Astonished at what she said, all the kids burst out screaming,“Talking to the long spaghetti? Are you crazy?”（由连接词what引导的宾语从句作at的宾语） [高分句型2] Moved by the scene, the other kids also came to offer their sincere apologies to Landy. （Moved by the scene形容词作原因状语） Writing05 Good friendship can get people through almost anything. Many times, a good friend will know what you need before you even ask for it, and they’ll want to offer a helping hand. That’s what happened to two friends in Caddo Hills High School. When one differently abled young man needed help, his friend went above and beyond. When Brandon and Tanner met, Brandon was using a hand-push wheelchair. The chair was becoming kind of a pain for Brandon as he had to push his way down the halls from class to class around Caddo Hills High School. “My arms would get really tired and I would have to stop and take rests,” said Brandon. Sometimes when they were together, Brandon would ask Tanner to push his wheelchair. Tanner was happy to help. Most often, Tanner would offer to help and he noticed how hard using this wheelchair was on his friend. Tanner thought that if his friend had had an electric wheelchair, life would be easier for him. But Brandon’s family was unable to afford it. Seeing how much his friend struggled in his wheelchair, Tanner made up his mind to do something about it. “He’s just been a really good friend and I wanted to do him a favor. I just felt like I needed to do it and I wanted to do it,” Tanner explained. Then the enthusiastic(热心的)high school student became devoted to getting his friend a wheelchair. He got an after-school job at an auto repair shop and he worked there every afternoon. In order to help his friend out, Tanner worked part-time for two years. All of the money he earned went towards saving for a self-powered wheelchair. That moment finally came in late February, when he would present Brandon with a life-changing gift during the school day. 注意: 1. 续写词数应为150左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 At the beginning, Tanner had planned on giving Brandon all the money he had saved. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Brandon cried when he first got the wheelchair. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ At the beginning, Tanner had planned on giring Brandon all the money he had saved. That way, Brandon could buy whatever wheelchair he liked. On second thought, Tanner decided to give him an electric wheelchair as a present, in case he declined the money. With the help of his mother, Tanner found a wheelchair in an online store , which he thought would be the perfect gift for his friend. After buying the wheelchair, Tanner gave it to Brandon during the school day. Brandon cried when he first got the wheelchair. He was so grateful to his friend for the amazing act of kindness. “Wow, I can’t believe he did that for me!” Brandon said, adding that it had been his dream to own an electric wheel-chair. Now, it was easier for him to get around, and he wouldn’t ever have to worry about his arms getting tired out again. Tanner was happy that his friend liked it. “I will help him as long as he needs me,” Tanner said, wishing more people in the world to care for the disabled. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了坦纳为了帮助他的朋友布兰登换一辆电动轮椅，而利用课余时间打工两年去存钱，最终存下足够的钱给他的朋友换了一辆电动轮椅，布兰登深受感动。 【详解】1. 段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“一开始，坦纳打算把他所有的积蓄都给布兰登。”可知，第一段可描写坦纳购买电动轮椅的过程。 ②由第二段首句内容“布兰登第一次得到轮椅时哭了。”可知，第二段可描写布兰登收到轮椅之后的感受。 2. 续写线索：布兰登用手动轮椅感到累——坦纳决定帮助他——坦纳花了两年时间兼职存钱——购买电动轮椅送给布兰登——布兰登深受感动 3. 词汇激活 行为类 ①购买：buy/purchase ②拒绝：decline/refuse/reject ③拥有：own/have/possess 情绪类 ①感激：grateful/appreciative ②令人惊讶的：amazing/surprising/astonishing 【点睛】[高分句型1]With the help of his mother, Tanner found a wheelchair in an online store , which he thought would be the perfect gift for his friend.(which引导的非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2]I will help him as long as he needs me.(as long as引导的条件状语从句) Writing06 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Pam Bales left her car and stepped onto the snow-covered Jewell Trail. She planned a six-hour hike through New Hampshire’s Mount Washington State Park. The hike up the lower part of Jewell was pleasant. At 8:30 am, still below the tree line, she took the first in a series of on-the-trail selfies. Less than an hour later, she took another photo, after she’d climbed into colder air and deeper snows. She made her way across the snow-covered ridge toward Mount Washington. Then she noticed something: a single set of footprints in the snow ahead of her. She’d been following faint tracks all day and hadn’t given them much thought, because so many people climb Jewell Trail. But these, she realized, had been made by a pair of trainers, not suitable for hiking on snow. By 11 am, Bales was getting cold and decided to abandon her plan. The only thing keeping Bales on Gulfside Trail was the trainer tracks in the sonw. As she fought the wind and heavy sleet (雨夹雪), the tracks made a hard left-hand turn off the trail. Now she alarmed. She was sure the hiker could get through in the ow visibility and was heading straight toward the challenging trails of the Great Gulf Wilderness. Bales stood there, stunned. The temperature and clouds were in a race to find their lowest point, and darkness was mere hours away. She turned to the left and called out, “Hello!” into the frozen fog. Nothing. She called out again: “Is anybody out there? Do you need help?” The strong westerly winds carried her voice away. She blew into her rescue whistle. For a fleeting moment she thought she heard someone reply, but it was just the wind playing games with her mind. She stood listening, then turned and walked cautiously in the direction of the single set of tracks. Bales followed the tracks cautiously for 20 to 30 meters. She rounded a slight corner and saw a man sitting motionless. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 When she approached him and said hello, he did not react. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ After waking the man up, Bales recognized that they had to get out of there soon. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ One possible version: When she approached him and said hello, he did not react. Taking a deep breath, Bales got closer, checked his pulse and suddenly realized that the man must have passed out. She knew she had to wake him up immediately or the dreadful weather could put him in greater danger. Out of her bag, Bales took a carpet to wrap the man, gave some hot water to him, called out repeatedly and shook him hard. Fortunately, it didn’t take long before the man came to himself. After waking the man up, Bales recognized that they had to get out of there soon. The wind kept howling with the heavy sleet driving fiercely, and even worse, darkness began to fall. Anxious, Bales struggled to help the man up, supporting his weight and inching along the trail, following the tracks left by her hiking boots. After what seemed like ages, they finally made it to the foot of the mountain. The man was rushed to hospital immediately. Exhausted as she was, Bales felt a wave of happiness welled up inside. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了帕姆·巴勒斯计划在新罕布什尔州的华盛顿山州立公园徒步六小时，不到一小时后，她已经爬进了更冷的空气和更深的雪中。她穿过白雪覆盖的山脊，向华盛顿山进发。然后她注意到了一件事：她前面的雪上有一组脚印。她一整天都在跟踪微弱的轨迹，并没有给它们太多的思考，因为有太多人爬珠尔小道。但她意识到，这些鞋是由一双运动鞋制成的，不适合在雪地上徒步旅行。后来，她在一个小角落，看见一个人一动不动地坐着。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“当她走近他打招呼时，他没有反应。”可知，第一段可描写巴勒斯救助这名已经失去意识的男子的过程。 ②由第二段首句内容“在叫醒那个人后，巴勒斯意识到他们必须尽快离开那里。”可知，第二段可描写巴勒斯和那名男子一起下山，脱离险境的过程。 2.续写线索：检查——拿出物品给男子取暖——唤醒男子——扶起那名男子——一起下山——脱离险境——感受 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①检查：check/ examine ②唤醒：wake up/awaken ③努力：struggle to do/make great efforts to do 情绪类 ①高兴：happiness /joy ②焦急：anxious/worried 【点睛】[高分句型1] Taking a deep breath, Bales got closer, checked his pulse and suddenly realized that the man must have passed out. (运用了现在分词作状语和that引导的宾语从句) [高分句型2] Anxious, Bales struggled to help the man up, supporting his weight and inching along the trail, following the tracks left by her hiking boots. (运用了形容词和现在分词作状语) [高分句型3] Exhausted as she was, Bales felt a wave of happiness welled up inside.(运用了让步状语从句的倒装结构) Writing07 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 When asked about why she chose to be a cadet (学员) firefighter, Ava Smith talked about her father’s action four months ago. “The girl he saved is going to live a whole life because of him. It’s incredible!” she said. Jonathan Smith, and his 13-year-old daughter, Ava, were driving on the 1.4-mile-long, two-lane Route 90 bridge, which spans (横跨) the shallow waters of Assawoman Bay. Suddenly, the calm was disturbed by the scream of tyres. Not far ahead of them, a black pickup truck (小卡车) was sliding from one lane to the other. It crashed into a barrier, turned around like endless, and came to rest hanging over the edge of the bridge. Smith hit the brakes in time to avoid the vehicles in his path, but too late: he ran into a BMW directly ahead of him. Smith stopped the car. “Ava, are you OK?” he asked. She was obviously shocked, but unhurt. He ran to the BMW. “Are you OK?” he asked the driver. She nodded, too terrified to speak. And then another scream came from the pickup. The truck bed hung out past the railing (栏杆), about 10 meters above the waters of the bay. The driver’s door was pushed open and a man climbed out. He dropped to the ground, then ran to the railing. The man pointed down, saying something in Spanish to Smith. In the water was a car seat. Next to it was a girl, about two years old: pink dress, brown hair, brown eyes, floating on her back, kicking and shouting. Matters quickly went from bad to frightening when the baby girl rolled over onto her stomach. Smith waited for the pickup driver to do something, but he didn’t. Maybe he was in shock. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右： 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 “Ava!” Smith yelled, removing his shoes. “Stay by the car!” ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Standing, he laid her against his shoulder and beat her back hard. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文 Para 1 “Ava!” Smith yelled, removing his shoes. “Stay by the car!” Climbing onto the railing, he eyed the shallow water. “Better less than 3 feet deep.” he thought to himself. As if mustering up all his courage, Smith jumped off with belly down. A moment later, he was bouncing off the sandy bottom and luckily, unhurt! The little girl was less than 1 meter away. Smith swam to her in a few quick strokes and lifted her out of the water: mouth half open, eyes nearly closed, not breathing. “Come on, stay with me!” A sense of panic crept over this middle-aged man. Seconds later, composing his thoughts, Smith recalled the first aid measures learned years ago. Para 2 Standing, he laid her against his shoulder and beat her back hard. Some water came streaming down the baby’s mouth. But still no breath. Another whack on the back and then Smith felt the little fingers gripping him around the neck. Her eyes were opened now. Smith hugged her to shield her from the cold. Just then a family on a small boat pulled up and took Smith and the little girl to the waiting ambulance near a dock. The toddler suffered a broken shoulder but was otherwise uninjured. However, on seeing Ava, Smith hugged her tighter than ever. When interviewed later, Smith admitted the fear flashing across his mind but the desire to save a life took the upper hand. That heroic deed not only kept one girl from dying, but fueled the passion of another girl. 【导语】本篇书面表达是读后续写。本篇文章以人物为线索展开，讲述了Jonathan Smith救了由于车祸掉入水中的小女孩，女儿受父亲影响选择成为消防学员的故事。Jonathan Smith和他13岁的女儿Ava正在公路大桥上行驶时，前方一辆黑色小货车突然爆胎，失控，最终挂在桥边上，Smith及时刹车，但仍然撞上了一辆宝马车。小卡车的车厢悬挂在护栏外，一个约两岁的小女孩掉入海里，小卡车的司机吓呆了，Jonathan Smith跳入水中，设法救出小女孩。 【详解】1. 段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“‘Ava！’Smith喊道，脱下鞋子。‘待在车旁边！’”可知，第一段可描写Smith跳入水中，设法从水中救出小女孩；由第二段首句内容“站着，他把她靠在肩膀上，用力捶着她的背。”可知，第一段段尾可描述小女孩有危险，需要急救。 ②由第二段首句内容“站着，他把她靠在肩膀上，用力捶着她的背。”可知，第二段可描写Smith小女孩脱离危险，得到救治。由所给的文章第一段“当被问及她为什么选择成为学消防学员时Ava Smith谈到了她父亲四个月前的行动。”可知，第二段段末可以描述父亲的行为对女儿的影响。 2. 续写线索：跳入水中——找到女孩并救出——对女孩进行急救——女孩脱离危险——对女儿的影响 3. 词汇激活： 行为类： ①鼓起全部勇气：muster up all one’s courage/gather up all one’s courage ②举起：lift/raise ③拥抱：hug/embrace 情绪类： ①感到恐慌：a sense of panic crept over sb/be in panic ②镇定下来：compose one’s thoughts/calm down ③害怕：fear flash across his mind/feel frightened 【点睛】【高分句型1】As if mustering up all his courage, Smith jumped off with belly down.（运用as if引导的状语从句中的省略以及with的复合结构 ） 【高分句型2】Seconds later, composing his thoughts, Smith recalled the first aid measures learned years ago. (运用现在分词作状语以及过去分词作后置定语) 【高分句型3】When interviewed later, Smith admitted the fear flashing across his mind but the desire to save a life took the upper hand.   (运用when引导的时间状语从句以及状语从句中的省略) Writing08 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Arshad had been out window shopping with his parents. That was all they did these days because they didn’t have enough money to afford all the shiny clothes, shoes and other fancy items the windows displayed. Even from a distance, they looked so promising and inviting that one couldn’t help but go over and look at them. Ever since Arshad’s father lost his business, Arshad’s family barely had the money to make ends meet. They even had to move to a rented house, which was smaller and was situated in the shabbier part of the city. Unlike his previous house, where he had a big luxurious room all to himself, here Arshad had to share his room and bed with his naughty younger brother who always had the room in a horrible mess. What was worse, the playground in this neighborhood was nothing like the one in his previous neighborhood’s; swings were all broken and the seesaw(跷跷板) only had one seat. There weren’t even any bookshops nearby where he could spend his free time. That day, Arshad and his brother were terribly bored when their father decided to take them outfor window shopping. When his father saw the sad look on Arshad’s face, he sat down next to him and said, “Remember, there are children out there who don’t even have the things you do, like warm clothes, a roof over their heads, good education and all the delicious meals that your mother prepares for you, three times a day. You should always be grateful for what you have.” 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右：2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Arshad remembered how he always complained about the swings in his playground. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thinking of the happy children in that school, Arshad decided to do something. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Arshad remembered how he always complained about the swings in his playground. He felt a rush of guilt. At least he had a playground! Despite all these things, Arshad noticed how happy and satisfied all the children were. How they played and laughed, with not a single frowning face or a complaining voice. On their way back from the school, Arshad’s father said, “This is what I was talking about.” Thinking of the happy children in that school, Arshad decided to do something. He prepared a gratitude list, jotting down all the things he was thankful for. Then he pulled out an empty cardboard box and put in all the things that he thought the children in that school might need--coloring books, toys and other such goods. When his mother asked about the box, he told her how he planned to donate these things. “I am sharing happiness,” he told his mother, his face beaming. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了在爸爸生意失败之后，Arshad失去了过去以前所拥有的一切，并且时常抱怨生活不如意。但是Arshad的爸爸告诉他，生活要学会感恩，要感谢周围的一切。后来Arshad到一所公立中学读书，即使设施很差，里面的孩子们依然很开心，此时Arshad决定感恩所拥有的一切。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“Arshad记得他总是抱怨操场上的秋千。”可知，第一段可具体描Arshad看见孩子们在操场上快乐地玩耍后的内心感受并理解了父亲所说的话。 ②由第二段首句内容“想到那所学校里快乐的孩子们，Arshad决定做点什么。”可知，第二段可描写Arshad为孩子们捐赠的东西，并且学会了分享快乐。 2.续写线索：抱怨秋千——看见孩子们的快乐——理解感恩——开始感恩——分享物品——得到快乐 3.词类激活 行为类 ①认为：think/suppose ②询问：ask/inquire ③准备：prepare/make preparations for 情感类 ①高兴的：happy/delighted ②满意的：satisfied/approving 【点睛】[高分句型1] This is what I was talking about.(运用了what引导的表语从句) [高分句型2] He prepared a gratitude list, jotting down all the things he was thankful for.(运用了现在分词作状语) / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 09 如何设置故事开端 一、句子翻译练习 修辞翻译练习01 1.我睡得正酣，正在这时我的床开始晃动，我听到一种奇怪的声音就像一列火车正从我的窗外驶过。 2.这颗老松树依然耸立在那，像伞一样盖住了洞穴。 3.他开始新生活就像古树又开了花。 4.她的一双眼又大又明亮，如同镶嵌着的宝石。 5.雷声听起来就好像炸弹在房顶上爆炸似地。 6.他看见我就像老鼠见了猫似的，到处躲藏。 7.我就像过街的老鼠似的，被人追着打。 8.他高兴起来就像一只顽皮的猴子似的，蹦跳个不停。 9.她好像圈在屋里的一只蜜蜂，看着外边的阳光却飞不出去。 10.有时我觉得自己像是一只在笼子里的鸟，而来到这里让我感到自由。 11.人都会有优缺点。如果对此视而不见，像蜗牛向前慢爬一样对周围发生的一切一无所知，那样，我们就很可能落在后面并被激烈的竞争淘汰。 12.一开始，他车驾得跟蜗牛一样，现在他又一路猛冲！ 13.正月十五的月亮就像明镜似的，照得大地一片光明。 14.夏天的太阳就像着了魔似的，疯狂地炙烤着大地。 15.暴风雨消退就如同潮汐落下。 16.玛丽笑起来如同一朵盛开的鲜花。 17.她像离弓之箭冲到车站。 18.他轻而易举就把难题解开了。 19.莎拉教起书来驾轻就熟。 20.他像一头发怒的狮子冲着我叫嚷。 21.她整天辛辛苦苦地干活。 22.我们跑得飞快。 23.听到钥匙在开前门的声音，我立即从床上起来了。 24.他走路鬼鬼崇崇的，就像做贼似的。 25.爷爷高兴起来就像一个孩子似的，乐呵呵地转悠着。 26.开车回家时，我哭得像个婴儿。 27.猫飞快地冲出我的房间，一定是什么东西把它吓坏了。 28.这个消息犹如晴天霹雳使他们大为震惊。 29.网络文化是一把双刃剑，具有双重效应。 30.突然凯特犹如被电击一样，他想到 30 分钟后会有一辆特快火车经过 (该危险地方)。 31.她看起来像天使般腼腆。 32.她有金色的头发，蓝色的眼睛，很漂亮，天使般的歌声让每一个人着迷。 33.你最好自己做出决定，不要盲从你的朋友。 34.我像一只迷途的羔羊。 35.我尽量缩小与弟弟的卡车的距离，缓缓地移动，盯住他的尾灯，心中才略有一丝安慰，就像一只吓坏了的小羊紧跟在羊倌的屁股后面一样。 36.我饥肠辘辘，像头穿行在森林里寻找猎物的狼。 37.突然门打开了，一队德国士兵像恶狼般扑进来。 38.我女儿的高中生活每一天都很艰辛。她早上起来想到上学，有时甚至想到出门都像爬一座高山。 39.你要站在那儿拼命挥手，以确保他们看到你。 40.用 “谨小慎微” 来形容新会长很恰当。 41.头顶上的天空灰蒙蒙，空气似乎稀薄得难以呼吸。这儿的一切看起来像死湖！ 42.她大失所望。 43.每次看恐怖电影时，我都吓得浑身发抖。44.今天早上他忘记带雨伞了，被淋得像落汤鸡似的。 45.她像一只蝴蝶，在人们的生活中穿梭。 46.这些照片和视频在互联网上迅速传播，激起了一波波巨大的争议。 47.林肯总统被刺杀的消息不胫而走。 48.有时候刻薄的话就如尖刀刺伤人们的心，纵使道歉，疼痛如破镜也难以愈合。 49.这是一场美满的婚姻，两口子很快就如胶似漆。 50.她飞快地跑下山。 51.她心急如焚，就像热锅上的蚂蚁。 比较: 他们如坐针毡，不知道做什么好。 我紧张得像热锅上的蚂蚁！ 52.当我看见他用黑笔签文件把我的房子卖给别人时，我感觉就像当头挨了一棒。 53.当房屋畅销时所有的一切都是美好，它们每月增值。 54.整个计划像梦一样奏效。 55.这几年好像是一场凄楚的梦。 56.在光天化日之下，前一天晚上发生的事情看起来像是一场噩梦。57.他束手无策地站着，活像丢魂似的。 58.别假装自己在讲真话，我早把你看透了。 59.他对这地区了如指掌。 60.有几句坏话，或一对夫妇的 “恐怖故事” 将不胫而走。 61.我儿子的学校里突然爆发的水痘像野火般迅速传开来，差不多有一半的孩子染上了。 62.罗斯每周一早上都如约而至 (非常准时)。 63.这一定是一种被人打了耳光的感觉。 64.它就像是在我脸上闪了一巴掌似的唤醒了我。 65.那个进球仿佛一盆冷水浇在了我的头上，但感谢我的队友让我们回到正确的轨道上，我必须要真诚地感谢他们。 66.父亲去世后的最初几年里，每当我看见别人的花园时，对他的幕幕回忆就像一盆冷水浇在我的头上。 67.有关皇室的书卖得正火。 68.那些糖果成了热销货，它们很快就要卖完了。 69.他们将永远积攒不起钱来买新房子－他们花钱如水。 70.玛丽瘦削的老手扑到脸上，表示惊奇和高兴，然后像一个挨饿的孩子吃面包一样饿着冲了出去。玛丽抓起红色的钱包。她拿了一会儿，只是想看看，然后把它按在胸前，像婴儿一样摇摆。 71.恐惧就像恶魔冰冷、锋利的手包围着我。我努力调整自己的情绪，但我做不到。 72.我是唯一一个穿制服的人，我很扎眼／招眼。 73.中国沿海岛屿星罗棋布。 74.晚会上，我穿着寒酸的衣服感到很不自在。 75.我不喜欢和妈妈及她的朋友一起出去吃饭，和她们在一起，我总感到不舒服。 76.就像上了发条似的，这声音每半个小时响一次，一直持续到天亮。 77.女王的假期安排得井井有条，所有活动都已提前把时间精确计划好了。 78.运动会进展顺利，所有赛事都准时开始，准时结束。 修辞翻译练习02 1.她哭得好像世界的末日来临了。 2.我耸了耸肩，仿佛想说 “为什么不？” 3.他总能知道几点了，仿佛是出于本能。 4.让你感觉到这儿就好像到了自己家一样。 5.女孩一动不动地倾听着，似乎已经变成一块石头。 6.他停了下来，好像要把悲伤的记忆抹去。 7.他四下张望，好像寻找什么。 8.他停了下来好像期望汤姆说些什么。 9.他做事像个傻子。 10.他目不转睛地看着我，就像第一次看见我似的。 11.他们完全忽略了这些事实，就仿佛它们不存在似的。 12.不要总认为只有自己才行，别人什么都不行，好像地球没有你就不转了。 13.她觉得她简直无法忍受这样的生活。 14.他好像是漫不经心地说了那句话。 15.她爱这男孩，就好像她是他的妈妈一样。 16.坐在我对面的男人梦幻般地笑着仿佛想起了什么。 17.他跑得好像鬼在追逐他。 18.他走路像喝醉了似的。 19.她看起来好像年轻了十岁。 20.夜似乎没有尽头。 21.两位陌生人聊天就好像他们是多年的老朋友。 22.他冲出房间，好像要去迎接某个重要人物似的。 23.你说话的样子就好像你是上帝似的。 24.他站着一动不动好像粘在地上。 25.那孩子跟我们谈起话来，像个成年人似的。 26.我恶狠狠地拉起脸来，仿佛要把他活生生地吞下去。 27.史密斯太太感觉几乎不能呼吸了。 28.她觉得自己的激情似乎已经榨尽了。 29.我不知道该去哪里，觉得自己又聋又瞎又蠢。我开始惊慌失措。 30.他的手提箱不见了，他觉得好像世界末日了，不知该干什么。 31.我觉得我的世界好像崩溃了，原本属于我生活的一部分正在远去。 32.我觉得好像刚从恶梦中醒来。 33.我感到自己无意中来到了梦魇中的世界，就像你有时在梦中所经历的那样。 34.泪水涌上他的眼睛，他试图把它抑制住但徒劳无功。他最后看了一眼那条鱼，仿佛在挥手告别。 35.令我惊讶的是，他奇怪地看了我一眼，好像我抢了他的食物。然后他愤怒地站了起来。 36.我问他我的工作是否完成了。当我说出这些话的时候，我觉得好像有炸弹落在他身上。他喊道:“什 37.我惊慌失措，心跳加速，泪水开始从我的眼眶里涌出，我的眼睛就好像是被打开了的水龙头。 38.我感到震惊和恐惧，好像我心脏病发作似的。 39.他们看着我，就像我已经疯了一样。 修辞翻译练习03 1.“我要告发那个家伙！” 卢克插话道。他猛冲着离开，脸红如红莓酱。 2.我把它握在手里思考着，直到五指冰冷。 3.每当我晚归时，我的太太就非常生气。 4.她很温和。 5.魅力女生应该每天身体健康，开心快乐，无忧无虑。 6.他即使住院也非常活泼。 7.几个朋友这时都始终站在一旁，一声不响。 8.他正襟危坐，纹丝不动。 9.他今天下午特别讨人喜欢。 10.男孩非常敏捷。 11.当他看到他受伤的腿时，他的脸一下子变白了。 12.琼斯先生虽然一贫如洗，但为人非常正直。 13.那男孩给我看他的崭新足球靴子时得意极了。 14.我兄弟说他的同学海伦像孔雀一样虚荣。 15.一瞬间，他就把乌龟的头砍了下来。 16.她因羞愧脸红得像朵玫瑰花。 17.那个胖家伙蠢得像猪一样。 18.劝他是没用的，他非常固执，就像骡子一样。 19.这小姑娘胆子特别小，怕人。 20.我的妈妈像蜜蜂一样忙。 21.我们根本没有通知就去拜访了我的岳父母，结果他们非常欢迎我们去。 22.他个子或许矮小，身体也不够强壮，但非常勇敢。 23.她像耗子一样悄悄爬上楼去。 24.他们冷酷无情，铁石心肠。 25.我淋浴后总觉得精神焕发。 26.解答这个数学问题当然轻而易举。 27.他等着选举的结果，就像热锅上的蚂蚁。 28.老板做生意极守规律。 29.有些人对非常有规律的工作感到厌倦。30.她过去每逢星期六的傍晚必来此地。 31.这只小小的幼兔在她手里像羽毛一样轻。 32.老爷爷听说他的孙子孙女们要来他家里玩，简直高兴极了。 33.跟雷迪先生做生意要多加小心，他十分狡猾。 34.我相信他适合这个工作。他强壮如马。 35.我们要在危急时刻保持镇定自若。 36.她泰然自若地走进来，好像什么都没发生一样。 二、综合模拟演练01 In 1945, a 12-year-old boy saw a beautiful brooch （胸针）in a shop window that set his heart racing. But the price—five dollars—was too high for Reuben Earle. Five dollars would buy almost a week's food for his family. Reuben couldn’t ask his father for the money. Everything his father made through fishing went to his mother, Dora. Slim and beautiful, she was the center of the home and the glue that held it together. The housework was never-ending, and she struggled to feed and clothe their five children, but she was happy as her family and their well-being were all she cared about. Nevertheless, he opened the shop's door and went inside. Standing proudly and straight in his flour-sack （面粉袋改做的）shirt and washed-out trousers, he told the shopkeeper what he wanted, adding, “But I don't have the money right now. Can you please hold it for me for some time?” "I'll try,” the shopkeeper smiled. "People around here don't usually have that kind of money to spend on things. It should keep for a while." Reuben respectfully touched his worn cap and walked out. He would raise the money and not tell anybody, for he thought Mum would get surprised when she saw that brooch. On hearing the sound of hammering （捶打）from a side street, Reuben suddenly had an idea that he could raise money by selling the used nail bags. People built their own homes in Bay Roberts, using nails bought in bags from a local factory. Sometimes the used bags were thrown away at the construction site, and Reuben knew he could sell them back to the factory for five cents a piece. That day he sold two nail bags and hid the money in a rusty soda tin. 注意：1,续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Every day after school, Reuben started his plan. . Paragraph2: Finally, the time came! _______________________________________________________________________________. 单句训练 1. 每天放学后，鲁本都开始了他的计划。 2. 又冷又饿，鲁本四处闲逛，小心地从一条街到另一条街寻找指甲袋。 3. 为了节省更多的钱，这个下定决心的男孩甚至决定在一大早就送文件。 4. 他赢的每枚硬币都去了苏打罐，他珍贵的“银行”，然后所有的疲倦都神奇地消失了 5. 每次他经过商店橱窗里的胸针时，都会提醒他，他做了什么是值得的。 6. 一天比一天地，他的苏打水锡变得越来越重了。 7. 六个星期过去了，他才知道。然后走到了平安夜。 8. 终于，时间到了！鲁本偷偷走进他的房间，小心翼翼地拿出苏打罐，把所有的硬币都倒出来，开始数。 9. 5美元二十美分！他第二次数了一遍，毫无差错。 10. 他的努力工作最终得到了回报！ 11. 鲁本紧紧地拿着苏打锡，立刻冲进了商店。 12. 朵拉戴着漂亮的胸针，知道背后的故事，欣喜若狂，一句话也说出来。 13. 她只是伸出双臂紧紧地搂住了她心爱的儿子。 14. “圣诞快乐，妈妈，”儿子骄傲地宣布。“你自己也是如此。” 15. 骄傲的母亲也着。嗯，没有梦想是无法不到的。 三、综合模拟演练02 Writing01 1．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文 I was eight the first time I played checkers. I’ve played about a thousand games since then, but none was so memorable as that first one. It was icy January in Kansas. When the snowstorm hit, cutting off our power, we were thrown into darkness though it was still around noon. No heat, no light. The winter became terrible for everyone-especially for me and my six year old brother. Methodically Grandpa gathered up his winter coat, scarf and gloves, and disappeared into snow. Several minutes later, he returned, carrying much wood. Glancing casually at my brother and me, he said, “Come on boys. Time to build a fire. ” But the fire wasn’t enough to sustain the attention of two young boys. “Maybe,” Grandpa remarked, carefully considering the situation. “we could do something I used to do as a boy. Let’s go camping.” My brothers and I looked at each other in amazement. ”Get your sleeping bags, pillows and stuffed animals, and meet me back here.“ It took us only minutes to gather our sleeping gear. When we returned Grandpa had rearranged the furniture, clearing an open space in front of the fire. in short order, we had a fine campground. “Now then” Grandpa began, unfolding a strange looking game board, “who’s up for a little game of checkers?” “What are checkers?” my brother and I asked. “Never played, eh? Well. it’s time you boys learned,” Grandpa said. For the next hour or so. Grandpa coached us on the fine art of playing checkers. I became a fair player after losing four games in a row. Then I defeated Grandpa. When I asked him if he’d let me win, he merely winked (眨眼 and set the board up for the next game Afterward. Grandpa used his old guitar to sing us some campfire songs to which we sing along. Then suddenly, the power came back on. Mom and Dad gave a cheer, but for my brother and me, it was the end of a grand adventure. This wasn’t how we wanted the night to end. 注意：1.续写词数应为 150 左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Grandpa looked at us, smiled and then slowly stood up. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The next morning, everything returned to normal: lights, television and heat, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Writing02 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Sports are important in our family. Both of our sons were high-school athletes in our town of Verden. So I shouldn’t have been surprised when Lauren announced she was going out for the girls’ basketball team. But I was. At just five feet, one inch tall, our daughter’s lack of height wasn’t my worry. She has Down syndrome (唐氏综合症). My wife and I never told Lauren that she was different. We treated her like our other children. We didn’t want her to feel disabled or different because she had Down syndrome. “I’m gonna play basketball, Daddy.” Lauren ran to meet me when I came in from work. She flew into my arms and lingered long in my embrace. Unlike some sixteen-year-olds, Lauren was outwardly affectionate (亲切的). “That’s nice, honey,” I replied automatically, and patted her shoulder. Walking into the kitchen, I kissed my wife Laura on the cheek. Laura spoke slowly, her tone steady. “What Lauren’s trying to tell you is that she’s joining the girls’ high-school basketball team.” Just as my wife’s words sunk in, I heard Lauren behind me. “I’m gonna be a Lady Tiger,” she whooped, skipping into the room and throwing her arms in the air. She raced out of the kitchen to one of her favorite activities, watching cartoons on television. Everything that could happen flashed through my mind. What should we do? Parenting seldom had clear-cut answers, and bringing up a child with a disability was an additional challenge. Mid-November, the season’s first basketball game arrived. I settled into a seat on the second row with the rest of my family. Before the game, cheerleaders (啦啦队) were running on the court, dancing and jumping. The game got off to a good start, but soon Verden was behind. Even after a rally (反弹) in the second half, I knew the Lady Tigers were certain to lose. Just less than two minutes were left, and Verden was down by seventeen points. Coach called a time-out. The announcer’s voice echoed over the public-address system. “Number thirty-three, Lauren Wray, in for the Lady Tigers.” My heart pounding, I watched wide-eyed. Lauren was in the game. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Lauren kept pace with the others fairly well. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Applause exploded and the thunderous sounds echoed on the court. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Writing03 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was Sunday. I had one last patient to see. I approached her room in a hurry and stood at the doorway. She was an older woman, sitting on the edge of the bed, struggling to put socks on her swollen feet. I crossed the threshold(门口), spoke quickly to the nurse, and scanned her chart, noting she was in stable condition. I was almost in the clear. I leaned on the bed rail looking down at her. She asked if I could help put on her socks. I thought I had other priorities on the list. It’s my responsibility to arrange the issue. So instead, I launched into a monologue(独白)that went something like this: “How are you feeling? Your sugars and blood pressure were high but they’re better today. The nurse mentioned you’re anxious to see your son who’s visiting you today. It’s nice to have family visit from far away. I bet you really look forward to seeing him.” She stopped me in a serious, authoritative voice. “Sit down, doctor. This is my story, not your story.” I was surprised and embarrassed. I sat down. I helped her with the socks. She began to tell me that her only son lived around the corner from her, but she had not seen him in five years. She believed that the stress of this contributed greatly to her health problems. After hearing her story and putting on her socks, I asked if there was anything else I could do for her. She shook her head no and smiled. All she wanted me to do was to listen. And, not long after, in an unexpected twist, I became the patient, with a diagnosis of multiple sclerosis at age 31. Now, 20 years later, I sit all the time --- in a wheelchair. For as long as I could, I continued to see patients from my chair. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I gradually realize the patients’ stories area bond between the teller and the listener. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ When my condition affected my hands, I resigned and began to teach medical students. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Writing04 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Catherine was the coolest kid in her class. Whenever she went,she was in the spotlight,with a bunch of kids following her and doing everything she did. Her desk mate,Landy,however,was not in the cool kids’ group.Being the tallest kid in her class, she was teased by her classmates,who were always chanting “Landy,Landy,long as spaghetti (意大利面)”.Every time Landy heard those silly chants， she could feel her face burst into flames. God knew how she wished the ground to crack and swallow her! Catherine didn’t really like it when the kids chanted “Landy,Landy,long as spaghetti”.But she never told them to stop either, and nor did she ever talk to her. She liked being popular. One weekend, Catherine went over to her grandfather for Thanksgiving. Her grandfather lives on a farm at the opposite end of town,where he keeps chickens. While helping to feed the chickens, Catherine noticed a peculiar one. Curling in the corner,it looked smaller than the others and was almost half-bare! “What’s the matter with it?”She asked her grandfather, with a puzzled frown on her face. Her grandfather told her how chickens could act.’“They have a pecking(啄) order，” he explained，wrinkles of concern spreading around his forehead.“If one chicken is different, the others will push it away and keep pecking it. Sometimes they peck it so much that it dies.” “Oh，what a poor little thing!”Catherine let out a sigh as she scooped(捧起)the frightened chicken up in her arms,whose heart was beating fast in the bony little body. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Suddenly,she thought of Landy,the girl being ”pecked“by her classmates ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ But Catherine walked directly toward Landy,regardless of what they said. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Writing05 Good friendship can get people through almost anything. Many times, a good friend will know what you need before you even ask for it, and they’ll want to offer a helping hand. That’s what happened to two friends in Caddo Hills High School. When one differently abled young man needed help, his friend went above and beyond. When Brandon and Tanner met, Brandon was using a hand-push wheelchair. The chair was becoming kind of a pain for Brandon as he had to push his way down the halls from class to class around Caddo Hills High School. “My arms would get really tired and I would have to stop and take rests,” said Brandon. Sometimes when they were together, Brandon would ask Tanner to push his wheelchair. Tanner was happy to help. Most often, Tanner would offer to help and he noticed how hard using this wheelchair was on his friend. Tanner thought that if his friend had had an electric wheelchair, life would be easier for him. But Brandon’s family was unable to afford it. Seeing how much his friend struggled in his wheelchair, Tanner made up his mind to do something about it. “He’s just been a really good friend and I wanted to do him a favor. I just felt like I needed to do it and I wanted to do it,” Tanner explained. Then the enthusiastic(热心的)high school student became devoted to getting his friend a wheelchair. He got an after-school job at an auto repair shop and he worked there every afternoon. In order to help his friend out, Tanner worked part-time for two years. All of the money he earned went towards saving for a self-powered wheelchair. That moment finally came in late February, when he would present Brandon with a life-changing gift during the school day. 注意: 1. 续写词数应为150左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 At the beginning, Tanner had planned on giving Brandon all the money he had saved. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Brandon cried when he first got the wheelchair. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Writing06 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Pam Bales left her car and stepped onto the snow-covered Jewell Trail. She planned a six-hour hike through New Hampshire’s Mount Washington State Park. The hike up the lower part of Jewell was pleasant. At 8:30 am, still below the tree line, she took the first in a series of on-the-trail selfies. Less than an hour later, she took another photo, after she’d climbed into colder air and deeper snows. She made her way across the snow-covered ridge toward Mount Washington. Then she noticed something: a single set of footprints in the snow ahead of her. She’d been following faint tracks all day and hadn’t given them much thought, because so many people climb Jewell Trail. But these, she realized, had been made by a pair of trainers, not suitable for hiking on snow. By 11 am, Bales was getting cold and decided to abandon her plan. The only thing keeping Bales on Gulfside Trail was the trainer tracks in the sonw. As she fought the wind and heavy sleet (雨夹雪), the tracks made a hard left-hand turn off the trail. Now she alarmed. She was sure the hiker could get through in the ow visibility and was heading straight toward the challenging trails of the Great Gulf Wilderness. Bales stood there, stunned. The temperature and clouds were in a race to find their lowest point, and darkness was mere hours away. She turned to the left and called out, “Hello!” into the frozen fog. Nothing. She called out again: “Is anybody out there? Do you need help?” The strong westerly winds carried her voice away. She blew into her rescue whistle. For a fleeting moment she thought she heard someone reply, but it was just the wind playing games with her mind. She stood listening, then turned and walked cautiously in the direction of the single set of tracks. Bales followed the tracks cautiously for 20 to 30 meters. She rounded a slight corner and saw a man sitting motionless. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 When she approached him and said hello, he did not react. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ After waking the man up, Bales recognized that they had to get out of there soon. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Writing07 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 When asked about why she chose to be a cadet (学员) firefighter, Ava Smith talked about her father’s action four months ago. “The girl he saved is going to live a whole life because of him. It’s incredible!” she said. Jonathan Smith, and his 13-year-old daughter, Ava, were driving on the 1.4-mile-long, two-lane Route 90 bridge, which spans (横跨) the shallow waters of Assawoman Bay. Suddenly, the calm was disturbed by the scream of tyres. Not far ahead of them, a black pickup truck (小卡车) was sliding from one lane to the other. It crashed into a barrier, turned around like endless, and came to rest hanging over the edge of the bridge. Smith hit the brakes in time to avoid the vehicles in his path, but too late: he ran into a BMW directly ahead of him. Smith stopped the car. “Ava, are you OK?” he asked. She was obviously shocked, but unhurt. He ran to the BMW. “Are you OK?” he asked the driver. She nodded, too terrified to speak. And then another scream came from the pickup. The truck bed hung out past the railing (栏杆), about 10 meters above the waters of the bay. The driver’s door was pushed open and a man climbed out. He dropped to the ground, then ran to the railing. The man pointed down, saying something in Spanish to Smith. In the water was a car seat. Next to it was a girl, about two years old: pink dress, brown hair, brown eyes, floating on her back, kicking and shouting. Matters quickly went from bad to frightening when the baby girl rolled over onto her stomach. Smith waited for the pickup driver to do something, but he didn’t. Maybe he was in shock. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右： 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 “Ava!” Smith yelled, removing his shoes. “Stay by the car!” ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Standing, he laid her against his shoulder and beat her back hard. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Writing08 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Arshad had been out window shopping with his parents. That was all they did these days because they didn’t have enough money to afford all the shiny clothes, shoes and other fancy items the windows displayed. Even from a distance, they looked so promising and inviting that one couldn’t help but go over and look at them. Ever since Arshad’s father lost his business, Arshad’s family barely had the money to make ends meet. They even had to move to a rented house, which was smaller and was situated in the shabbier part of the city. Unlike his previous house, where he had a big luxurious room all to himself, here Arshad had to share his room and bed with his naughty younger brother who always had the room in a horrible mess. What was worse, the playground in this neighborhood was nothing like the one in his previous neighborhood’s; swings were all broken and the seesaw(跷跷板) only had one seat. There weren’t even any bookshops nearby where he could spend his free time. That day, Arshad and his brother were terribly bored when their father decided to take them outfor window shopping. When his father saw the sad look on Arshad’s face, he sat down next to him and said, “Remember, there are children out there who don’t even have the things you do, like warm clothes, a roof over their heads, good education and all the delicious meals that your mother prepares for you, three times a day. You should always be grateful for what you have.” 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右：2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Arshad remembered how he always complained about the swings in his playground. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thinking of the happy children in that school, Arshad decided to do something. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $