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04 如何设计续写情节
1、十句五定法总体思路
读后续写续写的内容有两段,即paragraph 1¶graph 2.每段写五句,一共十句。其中有五句已经定下,如下图所示
paragraph 1
paragraph 2
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衔接para1首句
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衔接para2首句
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7
3
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4
9
结局(正能量)
5
衔接para2首句
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升华主题
其他五句根据前后情节发展进行补充即可,可用到五大描写:情绪,动作,心理,语言,环境。
2、“十句五定”框架拆分
第一段 第1句:情感描写
Sb. felt a great sense of guilt welling up in his heart and surging through him. (他感到一股强烈的愧疚在心中升腾、奔涌。)
第一段 第2-4句 细节深化
动作链:He grabbed the letter, took a deep breath, and walked toward the door. 环境/心理:The rain pattered outside, mirroring his uneasy heart.
第一段 第5句 过渡衔接
With the decision made, he knocked on the door, not knowing what would happen next. (做好决定后,他敲响了门,不知道接下来会发生什么。)
第二段 第6句 情感转折
Upon seeing his brother’s smile, all his anxiety vanished instantly. (看到哥哥的微笑,他所有的焦虑瞬间消失了。)
第二段 第7-8句 互动递进
对话:“Let’s start over,” his brother said. 回应:He nodded, a tear of relief sliding down his cheek.
第二段 第9句 结局呈现
By dusk, they were walking Toby together, laughter filling the air. (黄昏时,他们一起遛着托比,笑声弥漫在空气中。)
第二段 第10句 主题升华
This experience taught him that forgiveness is the bridge to mending broken bonds. (这次经历让他明白,原谅是修复破裂关系的桥梁。)
3、真题实战演练:2025年6月新高考1卷(狗引发的兄弟风波)
My wife and I wanted to share our new home with family and friends by hosting a small gathering in the early summer. She had prepared lots of snacks, while my job was to have the backyard in order.
There was plenty of space for the kids to run and play. There was just one thing I hadn’t counted on: My brother chose to bring his dog Toby, a 50-pound ball of fire. Though friendly, he could easily knock over my niece’s small boys and my six-month-old granddaughter. So, when my brother showed up, I asked him to watch Toby and keep him outside.
My plan was working out just fine. Toby was using up his energy by running back and forth in the backyard and giving the kids plenty of room. Unexpectedly, after supper, the weather changed. It started to rain and everyone went indoors.
It was an awkward moment. I didn’t want Toby to be running around in the house, and my brother wasn’t happy with driving home with a wet dog. Eventually, my brother decided to leave rather than force the issue.
A few days passed, and I hadn’t heard anything from my brother. I texted him and expressed wishes for him to come out again. His reply came as a surprise — a shock, actually: “Not a chance.” Clearly, he was unhappy over the way we had parted. After all, I had left him little choice. Well, he’ll get over it, I reasoned.
Two months passed. My wife suggested I get in touch with my brother, but I resisted, thinking he should call first. However, my conscience (良心) kept bothering me. I tried to put myself in my brother’s shoes. He was facing health issues and his wife of thirty-five years had passed away a few months earlier. Toby was his constant companion, the one who kept him going.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I realized it was me who was at fault.
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With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door.
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Paragraph 1(五句定位:1. 衔接首句;5. 衔接 Para2 首句)
1.衔接 Para1 首句:
I realized it was me who was at fault — my thoughtlessness about my brother’s pain had pushed him away, a mistake I deeply regretted.
翻译:我意识到是我错了 —— 我忽略了哥哥的痛苦,这才把他推远了,这个错误让我深感懊悔。
(强调句:用 “It was...who...” 突出 “我” 的过错,融入心理描写 “deeply regretted”)
2.英文:I had been so busy worrying about the party’s order that I completely ignored how Toby, as his only companion, kept him company through the dark days after his wife’s passing.
翻译:我之前一门心思担心派对的秩序,完全没考虑到托比作为他唯一的陪伴,在他妻子去世后的那些艰难日子里,一直陪在他身边。
(状语从句:“so...that...” 体现逻辑,补充环境背景 “dark days”,强化矛盾根源)
3.英文:My stubborn pride had stopped me from saying sorry first, and every night, the memory of his disappointed face when he left kept echoing in my mind.
翻译:我那固执的自尊心让我不愿先道歉,而且每天晚上,他离开时那失望的神情,总在我脑海里反复浮现。
(非谓语:“stopped me from...” 作谓语,“echoing” 体现心理折磨,增强情绪张力)
4.英文:Determined to make amends, I rummaged through the kitchen and found the recipe for his favorite oatmeal biscuits — a small gesture to warm his heart.
翻译:我决心弥补过错,在厨房里翻找起来,找到了他最爱的燕麦饼干的食谱 —— 这是一个能温暖他心的小举动。
(形容词作状语:“Determined to...” 表目的,动作描写 “rummaged through” 让场景更具体)
5.衔接 Para2 首句:
英文:With the biscuits my wife had helped bake, their sweet scent wrapping around me, I made up my mind to visit him the next morning.
翻译:拿着妻子帮忙烤好的饼干,甜香萦绕在我身边,我下定决心第二天早上就去拜访他。
(with 复合结构:“their sweet scent wrapping...” 营造氛围,自然衔接下一段 “带着饼干上门” 的情节)
Paragraph 2(五句定位:6. 衔接首句;9. 结局;10. 升华主题)
1.衔接 Para2 首句:
英文:With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door, my hands slightly trembling as I raised my fist to knock.
翻译:拿着妻子烤的饼干,我来到了哥哥家门口,抬手准备敲门时,我的手微微颤抖着。
(独立主格:“my hands slightly trembling” 体现紧张情绪,动作描写 “raised my fist” 细节感拉满)
2.英文:The door creaked open, and there he stood — his eyes red from lack of sleep, but when he saw the biscuits, a faint smile slowly spread across his face.
翻译:门 “吱呀” 一声开了,他就站在那里 —— 眼睛因睡眠不足而泛红,但当他看到饼干时,一丝淡淡的笑容慢慢在他脸上展开。
(无灵主语:“The door creaked open” 用环境声音烘托场景,情绪描写 “faint smile” 暗示关系缓和)
3.英文:Toby, hearing my voice, dashed to the door, his tail wagging wildly, and nuzzled my hand gently, as if urging us to make up.
翻译:托比听到我的声音,冲到门口,尾巴疯狂地摇摆着,还轻轻蹭了蹭我的手,仿佛在催促我们和好。
(定语从句:“hearing my voice” 作非谓语,动物动作 “wagging”“nuzzled” 增添温情,推动情节)
4.结局(正能量):
英文:We sat on the porch, sharing the biscuits and talking about old times — the awkwardness melted away, replaced by the warmth we hadn’t felt for months.
翻译:我们坐在门廊上,一边分享饼干,一边聊起过去的时光 —— 尴尬的气氛渐渐消散,取而代之的是我们好几个月都没感受到的温情。
(名词性从句:“talking about old times” 补充互动,“warmth” 体现结局的正能量)
5.升华主题:
英文:Not until that moment did I truly understand that family bonds, like fragile glass, need care and forgiveness to stay unbroken.
翻译:直到那一刻我才真正明白,亲情就像易碎的玻璃,需要用心呵护和包容,才能保持完整。
(倒装句:“Not until...did...” 强调感悟,用比喻 “fragile glass” 升华 “亲情需包容” 的主题)
一、句子翻译练习
翻译练习01:“头、脸” 相关的动作
1.当没人知道你名字的时候,你还会趾高气扬么?
2.那位学生回答问题前挠了挠头.
3.他挠挠头,皱皱眉,但还是想不出一个好办法.
4.你只要记住他们永远是对的,尽管点头就是,别浪费唇舌.
5.她点头表示同意.
6.她摇摇头,不相信.
7.迈克考试失败,他羞愧得耷拉着脑袋走出了校园.
8.老练的企业家知道如何清晰辨别真正的成功,如何剔除纷繁芜杂的成功表象,而不会被这些一无是处的表象冲昏头脑.
9.如果你再拒绝承认你的一些同班同学已经赶上来了这一事实,那么不用多久,你就会发现自己落后了.
10.说话很中肯,一针见血.
11.他倒栽葱地摔下楼梯.
12.她离婚后又仓促再婚了.
13.我们浑身是泥.
14.他扭过头去看她.
15.他那饱经风霜的布满皱纹的脸上散发着光彩,使人产生一种乐观的感觉.
16.亲爱的朋友,如果你现在正在遭受痛苦和挫折,不要去抱怨而是要绞尽脑汁去寻找适合你自己的未来之路.
17.你为什么闷闷不乐?发生什么事了?
18.他把表掉到汤里,我实在忍不住笑了.
19.上次用餐不付钱就走,你还敢来?
20.当医生告诉加文他的病将永远无法痊愈时,加文装作满不在乎的样子.
21.倘若不能,我亦无悔面对.
22.她气得脸都变形了.
23.苏听丈夫的讲话时,表情复杂 (心里五味杂陈).
翻译练习02: “眼” 相关的动作
1.她的双眼闪耀着幸福的光芒.
2.“没错,主人.” 贝拉特里克斯轻声说,她的眼中再次充满了感激的泪花.
3.她眼里闪出怒火.
4.她生气地瞪了我一眼.
5.她紧张不安地瞥我一眼/羞怯地朝我一笑没说任何话.
6.她朝他那个方向扫了一眼/微微一笑.
7.她的眼光扫过人们的脸.
8.他恶狠狠地/厌恶地瞪了我一眼/给了我一个白眼.
9.他怀疑地眯起眼睛.
10.他向她挤了挤眼.
11.她咄咄逼人地眯起眼睛.
12.他怀疑地注视着她.
13.我的目光 (突然) 落在一个奇怪的物体上.
14.我简直难以置信.
15.她不敢正眼看我.
16.她毫不畏缩地与他对视.
17.他们的目光隔着拥挤的房间相遇.
18.一幅可怕的景象映入他们的眼帘.
19.他们不说话,只是愉快地微笑和交换眼色.
20.我当时是一名大学新生,很晚还与同学们闲聊不睡。而至上课前的一刻,那眼皮觉得实在太重,越来越睁不开,终于垂下头去,把书本当作枕头,心想课前打几分钟瞌睡没什么大不了.
21.她朝我所在的角落走了几步,冲我翻着白眼道:“看这被子吧!”
22.在主菜吃到一半时,我不经意地抬头看见母亲坐在那儿目不转睛地看着我,嘴角挂着一抹微笑.
23.他对她眨动他那双猪眼一般的小眼睛.
24.她快速地眨了眨眼.
25.老板对上班迟到的人会蹙眉,露出不悦之色.
26.在许多欧洲国家,人们都反感在公共场所吸烟.
27.她打开门,一片混乱不堪的景象呈现在她的眼前.
28.老人把不速之客上下打量了一番.
29.我要是撒谎,我就不敢直视他的眼睛.
30.就在他离开聚会几秒钟后有人发现烟雾顺着楼梯冒上来了.
31.印度近年来经历了很多政治变动.
32.他匆匆看了一下手表.
33.我拿起电话簿,匆匆扫了一遍.
34.他没有喊叫,只是默默地怒视着我.
35.塔玛拉一边狐疑地盯着他看,一边摇着头.
36.他双臂交叉,睁大眼睛,张大嘴巴盯着天空中的烟花看.
37.你需要利用反馈信息来监控进展.
38.两个警察让一辆卡车停住以便检查司机的驾驶证.
39.去查看一下我是不是把窗户锁上了.
40.他仔细检查了她的护照,然后在上面盖了章.
41.另外一名医生对她进行了诊察,仍旧没有发现任何问题.
42.她久久地端详着这张照片,眼里含着泪水.
43.我觉得他正在注视着我做的每一件事.
44.你愿意照看一会儿我的小孩吗?
45.她蹙额,陷人了沉思.
46.她眉头紧锁,全神贯注.
47.她只要眨一下眼睫毛,男人们便忙不迭地跑过来.
48.杰克当头挨了一击,眼睛直冒金星.
49.他们进入银行时便被警察发现了.
50.我发现他躲在门后.
51.她突然在人群中发现了她的朋友.
52.她从窗帘后面能窥探到自己的邻居.
53.向别人窗内窥探是不礼貌的.
54.他生性好刺探别人的私事.
55.这孩子眼巴巴地望着巧克力蛋糕.
56.男孩子们站在角落里打量着那些本地的女孩.
57.我正准备穿马路,这时我瞟到一辆摩托车从拐弯处直驶而来.
58.我从眼角瞥到了点什么,原来是邻居-一个不爱讲废话的女人中午出来散步.
59.她的目光突然落到了这捆文件上.
60.她急切地端详着他的脸.
61.我扫视人群,寻找汤姆.
62.她睁大眼睛惊讶地注视着他.
63.她吃惊地睁大了眼睛.
64.特雷弗正睁大眼睛盯着我.
65.他两眼唰地睁开了.
66.猫暗地里注视着老鼠.
67.她羞涩地用眼角瞟了他一眼.
68.我眼角余光看到哈桑快速地弯下腰又站起来.
69.她驻足凝神欣赏这片景色.
70.昨晚我们尽情欣赏了您的精彩表演.
71.对着迷茫的晚景,我们静静地欣赏着.
72.不止一位猎人用艳羡的目光虎视眈眈着那对漂亮的,无与伦比的大公羊角.
73.我正在减肥,所以只能到那些面包房去解解眼馋.
74.展品琳琅满目,美不胜收。这次展览是一场赏心悦目的盛宴.
75.在西湖漫步能让你一饱眼福.
翻译练习03: “耳、鼻、口” 相关的动作
1.我洗耳恭听.
2.我耳根发热.
3.年轻人有时把父母的苦口婆心当作耳边风.
4.如果我们送她一辆自行车作为生日礼物,她会笑得合不拢嘴.
5.《芝加哥》将给所有音乐爱好者献上一场听觉的盛宴.
6.这首古典乐曲令人大饱耳福.
7.倒塌的建筑物,跳跃燃烧的汽车,飞机坠落并设法在着陆前拉升,它是一次真正的旅行和一场视听盛宴.
8.她向他投去意味深长的一笑.
9.你不必考虑,凭直觉行事就行.
10.他对太太唯命是从.
11.我的鼻子开始出血.
12.她尽量文雅地擤了擤鼻涕.
13.你的时尚嗅觉的确了得.
14.我们都感冒了,一个劲儿地抽鼻子,打喷嚏.
15.店铺橱窗里摆的馅饼使小汤米馋涎欲滴.
16.他看见那面包师的儿子走来时,就从草堆后边跳了出来,那男孩吓得张大了嘴巴.
17.当你吃东西时,不要在你满嘴食物时说话.
18.两姐妹都像小孩儿一样咬指甲.
19.他想说 “跟上那辆车”, 话到嘴边又咽了回去.
20.走过柜橱时,她看见那上面有一块在尘土中发霉的干面包皮,她扑了上去,拿来一面啃,一面嘟囔.
21.这小女孩在咬苹果时,她的牙掉了.
22.我第一次尝这个的时候,差点没呕出来.
23.他尝遍了人生的酸甜苦辣.
24.这强烈的气味使我呕吐了.
25.她刚吃完药,又都吐了出来.
26.迈克尔疲惫地叹了口气.
27.午餐很丰盛,有肉、蔬菜、奶酪、酸奶、水果,酒无限量供应.
28.他们吃玉米炖羊肉一直吃到下午.
29.他们大吃大喝,好像没有明天了一样.
30.波利咬了一口苹果,嚼了嚼咽了下去.
31.他使劲咽了一下口水,然后踏进面试室.
32.戈登忍住了内心的愤怒.
33.她放下架子/放下身段向他道歉.
34.他先是冲我咧嘴一笑,不过看到我的表情后又赶紧收起笑脸.
35.我尖叫着让他们离开我的家.
36.你少冲我大喊大叫的,我已经够快的了.
37.演出结束时全场爆发出雷鸣般的欢呼声.
38.我们转到一个角落-我驻足,惊叹不已.
39.大多数听众笑,少数张嘴惊骇.
40.听到这意外的消息,我惊得倒吸了一口冷气.
41.“我可能要死了.” 他一边想一边喘着气.
42.杰克气喘吁吁地跟着她.
43.那个丑陋、肥胖的男人和他的同样丑陋的妻子气喘吁吁地挣扎着穿过门.
44.当水手详述沉船的故事时,孩子们屏息倾听着.
45.我上气不接下气,让我喘口气.
46.我肯定老了,那几级台阶已经让我气喘吁吁了.
47.他的胸脯上下起伏,然后他深深地吸了口气.
48.他曾停下来歇口气,同时确定一下方向.
49.他屏住了气,不敢抬起头来.
50.她自由地呼吸着,好像卸下千斤重担.
51.他听到卫士的脚步声消失后,才松了口气.
52.她放低声音.
53.当她和他谈话时,她的讲话声压低而变成耳语.
54.她用近乎孩子气的天真的声音问关于大自然的非常难的问题.
55.两臂交叉,他睁大眼睛张大嘴巴盯着看天空中的烟花.
56.她双唇微张,呆呆地望着天空.
57.当他终于找到她时,那女人向他连珠炮似地提出了许多问题:“你是谁?什么古董店?”
58.如果你心存疑虑,你通常会连珠炮式地向你的副手发问.
59.他们连珠炮似地向他发问,弄得他不知所措.
60.她像打开了的话匣子一样讲个没完没了.
61.上天为什么开这种玩笑来试探我们的缘分?
62.他说他的访华之行是想探询一下中国对世界问题的看法.
63.我正在试探他,看他是否愿意来为我们工作.
64.他们决定试探一下他对那个项目的兴趣.
65.她声称赞同训练,但至今还只是停留在口头上.
66.许多国家的政府对于该建议只是口头承诺,或者行事迟缓.
67.那些口是心非的人比那些公开反对你的人对你的威胁更大.
68.他用词细心谨慎.
69.他甚至想和逮住他的女警官套近乎.
70.别给我灌迷魂汤了,我不会再给你钱的.
71.别想用甜言蜜语哄我去参加你们公司的聚会.
72.他们互相讲述了他们在军队中的经历.
73.他们都坐在桌子旁,有说有笑地讲述各自的故事.
74.女孩被这意外的景象吓了一跳,眼睛睁得大大的,但随后嘴角慢慢地弯成一个微笑.
75.但是,她的笑话没有引起任何反应,甚至没有一个人笑一笑.
76.在我们给了那个小孩一个玩具火车后,他终于笑了.
二、综合模拟演练01
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
It was a Saturday afternoon.The color of the sky was changing,first light gray,then dark gray,and finally dark and dense.The wind was blowing heavily,and the trees were swaying in the strong wind.It began to rain cats and dogs.Soon,the road was filled with puddles from the rain.
On such a stormy afternoon,my mother took my five-year-old brother,Christopher,and me to a new big toy store she had read about in the newspaper.“So many toys,”the advertisement had shouted in full and flashy color,“that we had to get a huge warehouse to fit them all!”
Christopher and I couldn’t have been more excited.We ran across the parking lot,through the cold and biting rain,as fast as our little legs could carry us.We left our mother outside to battle with the frustrating umbrella,which never worked when she wanted it to.“Christine!Take care of your young brother!”Mother shouted at the top of her voice.
“Christine!I’m going to find the Lego section(乐高积木区)!There’s a new pirate ship I want,and I have four dollars!Maybe I can buy it!”Christopher exclaimed and ran off excitedly.I only half heard him.I took a right turn and,to my wide-eyed delight,found myself in the midst of the Barbie(芭比) World.
I was studying a Barbie and doing some simple math in my head when suddenly an earthshaking clap of thunder roared from the storm outside.I jumped at the noise,dropping the doll to the floor.The lights flickered(闪烁) once and died,covering everything in a blanket of blackness.Thunder continued to shake the sky and lightning illuminated the store for seconds,casting frightening shadows on my mind.
Paragraph 1:
“Oh no,”I thought,“Where’s Christopher?”
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“Christine,I’m here.”
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单句训练
1) 哦,不,”我想,“克里斯托弗在哪儿?”
2) 我害怕,吓得呆住了,需要见到我哥哥,拥抱他,确保他很好。
3) 我的胃难受了,正在翻转进去。
4) 我在黑暗的走廊上跑来跑去,恐慌充满了我的内心,使我呼吸困难。
5) 我一边看到糖果,一边被玩具绊倒,一边疯狂地叫着我哥哥的名字。
6) 虽然我很焦虑,但我几乎看不见他的身影。
7) 沮丧和恐惧的眼泪从我的脸上滴了下来,但我继续跑着。
8) “克里斯汀,我在这里。
9) “兴奋让我喘住了呼吸——在黑暗的乐高走廊里,我找到了克里斯托弗。
10) 他独自站着,一动不动,紧紧地抓着海盗船。
11) 我开始欣慰地大叫起来,伸出双臂搂住他,紧紧地拥抱着他。
12) 他拥抱我说:“我知道如果我在这里等着,克里斯汀,你就能找到我。
13) ”然后,我把我的手抓住我的手,我们去找我们的母亲,她一定是拼命地在商店里寻找我们。
三、综合模拟演练02
Writing 01
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On the first day of school, I stared in awe at the huge buildings. This high school was definitely bigger than the one I had previously attended.
This was my second year of high school, but my first year of school in St. Louis. I had decided the night before that I would be much happier in a new school if I made friends that were so-called “popular”. Getting in with the right group of people would make my life a whole lot better. I even bought a new outfit and had my hair styled just so the first day would be perfect.
Scared, yet anxious to begin my new life, I walked up the stairs to the front door. The halls were packed with kids yelling and laughing and telling stories of their summer adventures. My first class was geometry, but where was that?
I was standing in the hall looking confused, when a short, blond girl wearing glasses came up and asked, “Are you new? You look lost. Do you need help? My name is Diane. What’s yours?” Even though she seemed a bit strange, definitely not the kind of person I wanted to be associated with, I decided to answer her anyway. I was, after all, lost.
After exchanging names. I followed her up the stairs and down a hallway on the right, making polite conversation the whole way. When we reached my room she said, “Well, here you are. Welcome to JFK, and I hope your day goes all right.”
I said thanks and waved good-bye. Once inside the classroom, I saw one big group of people huddled around someone who seemed to be telling some sort of story. I walked over and got close enough to overhear. All eyes were glued to the guy in the middle of the circle who was wearing a letter jacket covered with patches. I decided that this guy was popular, so I managed to get a seat right next to him. I said, “Hi, my name is Lisa and I’m new here.” He said, “Johnny.”
注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置答题。
At the end of the class, I turned to him and asked, “I’m not sure where my next class is, could you help me?”
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Just at that time, someone came up and tapped me on the shoulder.
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Writing 02
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I had been acting in school for a few years. When I got a rough role in a play, I, only a junior in my high school, was excited that my inspiring drama teacher and director had trusted me with the part.
We had little time to prepare and I would never forget reading the lines for the first time. At first the dialogue was lively, but then it became quite long and boring. To my surprise, my character had one disrespectful line that complained about his bad luck. I had never said something like that on stage before. Uncomfortable as I felt about it, I had never thought of making myself heard to make a change. I was weak, went silent, and accepted the line as it was.
At our first rehearsal (彩排), I whispered, the line and hoped with so many distractions on stage that the director wouldn’t notice. Luckily, she didn’t. Over three wild weeks of rehearsals, I convinced myself that I could keep faking it. Then, when the curtain finally rose with an audience, maybe I would feel fine about saying the line just once as loudly as I could.
On the night of the open dress rehearsal, I was nervous to see an old couple, the Ehlers, seated in the hall. They were close friends of our family and I had no idea they would be there. When the big moment arrived, with nervousness racing through my body, I went for it. I remember the moment quite clearly. Where I stood. How it sounded. How I felt.
After the show, the Ehlers met me with cheers, a warm hug, and some brief dialogue of their own. While talking with them, I was overwhelmed by mixed feelings of regret and shame.
注意: 1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
“Jason, that was quite some language. You surprised us,” Mrs. Ehlers looked at me.
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I said goodbye to the couple and waited in the drama room until our director appeared.
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Writing 03
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Our car ran over the sand and rocks, leaving a cloud of dust. It was a beautiful spring day. The sun was bright and the sky was clear—perfect conditions for off-roading(越野). Back then, in 1984, my wife Sue and I were living in southeastern California. The views were wonderful, but with dangers. The temperatures could rise above 50℃, and it was no place for tourists to go off-roading without enough preparation.
Sue and I always took a bag with us, packed with snacks, water, and a first aid kit. We also had a car specially changed for driving in the desert. With it, we could go anywhere a jeep could go.
That day, we drove about 20 miles into the park. Around midday,we stopped to have a rest. As usual, we could see the desert before us. When the spirit of adventure moved us, we went back into the car. But when I turned the key nothing happened. I tried again and again. Nothing happened. I could see Sue was thinking the same thing—the engine wouldn’t start.
Our car had one strange problem. About once a year, it would refuse to start. If left overnight, the engine would run just fine the next morning. But no one could find anything wrong with our car. Because it happened so rarely, we’d just learned to live with it. But it had never happened suddenly.
“What should we do?” I felt a little anxious. I hadn’t seen a person on our drive out here, and we had no way to call for help.“We could walk back to town,”Sue said. Eager not to waste any more daylight,we quickly packed our things. We were about to set off when Sue called my name.“Look!” she cried. Sure enough, there was something, getting closer.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
It wasn’t long before I could make out what it was—a jeep!
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He checked the engine and said, “I know what’s wrong.”
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Writing 04
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“What a crabby-looking lady (怨妇),” the cashier at my local convenience store whispered to her coworker. I was grabbing something off the shelf. I had a half dozen kids waiting for me outside in the van, and here’s the thing: they were all my own children. No time for polite. No casual conversation with the checkout lady, no nod of approval toward the stock boy, no breathing. Just get the toilet paper, two gallons of milk and some Frosted Flakes and get back to my children!
But my interest was aroused by the crabby-looking lady. Which one was she? Taking a family pack of toilet paper under my arm, I scanned the tiny store for the crabby lady. Let’s see, there’s a middle-aged guy checking on pork, an older gentleman at the checkout purchasing an egg salad sandwich and a coffee, and... just then I saw her, the crabby-looking lady.
Her eyes were small; her brown hair was pulled back in a ponytail so tight that it looked like her forehead would drop. Her mouth was shut serious. This lady looked like she had smelled something really bad. Then, I turned away from my own reflection in the convex security mirror (安全反射镜) at the back of the store. The crabby-looking lady... was me!
That night, I cried. I was the crabby-looking lady! Me! The girl once voted nicest smile by her high school class! Things must get changed! Right then and there I resolved to do one thing over the next year. One simple resolution: to smile. I didn’t need to wait for January 1st — I would start right now.
I resolved to smile at anyone and anything, even though they would let me down. And I also resolved to make a conscious effort to smile, at least ten times a day.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The first day of “Mission Smile” I practiced smiling as planned.
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After practicing a month, unexpectedly, something different happened.
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Writing 05
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When Christmas rolled around, I always got the tree up. And Christmas Eve found me placing an envelope on the tree.
It was just a small, white envelope with a note of what I had done, stuck among the branches of our Christmas tree. It all began because my husband Mike hated Christmas. Oh, not the true meaning of Christmas, but the commercial aspects of it, overspending, the gifts given in desperation because you couldn’t think of anything else.
Knowing he felt this way, I decided one year to bypass (避开) the usual shirts, sweaters, ties and so on. I tried to find a special present just for Mike. The inspiration came in an unusual way.
Our son, Kevin, who was 12 that year, was wrestling at the junior level at the school he attended, and shortly before Christmas, there was a non-league match against a team Sponsored by an inner-city church.
These youngsters, dressed in sneakers so ragged (褴褛的) that shoes seemed to be the only thing holding them together, presented a sharp contrast to our boys in the spiffy blue and gold uniforms and sparkling new wrestling hoes. As the match began I was alarmed to see that the other team was wrestling without headgear, a kind of light helmet designed to protect a wrestler’s cars. It was a luxury the ragged team obviously could not afford. Well, we ended up defeating them. We took every weight class.
Mike, seated beside me, shook his head sadly, “I wish one of them could have won,” he said. They have a lot of potential, but losing like this could take the heart right out of them.”Mike loved kids, all kids, and he knew them, having coached little league football, baseball and lacrosse.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
That was when the idea of his Christmas present came.
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Feeling their dad’s happiness, my children joined me.
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Writing 06
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“JAMIE EVANS.”
Oh no. Please tell me that Coach Cafferty did NOT just say my name. Not for the one-hundred-meter breaststroke (蛙泳). Except all eyes were turned to me when she announced it, and her eyes met mine over the clipboard (剪贴板) that held the list of events and swimmers for the Plain Township Aquatic Center meet. The PTAC meet was the first of the season, and I was not ready.
“Remember, the meet is on Wednesday night. Be here at four-thirty for and the race kicks off at six. I’ll see you at practice tomorrow.” Coach Cafferty added. The crowd cleared quickly and I headed back home, feeling desperate.
“Did you find out your events for Wednesday?” Mom asked as she slid the pizza box across the table to me.
“Yeah. One-hundred breaststroke,” I finally said, not meeting her eyes. “I don’t know why Coach didn’t give me backstroke (仰泳). She knows it’s my best. I can’t swim breaststroke!”
“Maybe she sees something you don’t.” Mom said.
“Or maybe I should just quit the swim team.”
Mom frowned. “Is that what you want?”
I sighed. “No.” I took a bite of my pizza. “I’m terrible at breaststroke. What happens when I show up on Wednesday and race, and I sink to the bottom of the pool? Or even worse,come in last?”
“Someone has to be last.” Mom pointed out.
“But I don’t even know if I can swim breaststroke for one-hundred meters!” I set my pizza down. “She had submitted the names, but there’s no way I can do this.”
“You could. But how will you know unless you try?” Mom persuaded.
“Yeah, but if I try, I could fail. In front of everyone.” I pictured the entire crowd watching as I finished last, pointing and laughing. My belly squeezed.
Mom set her pizza down and gave me her I’m-saying-something-important-so-listen face. “Don’t worry about other people. Just race against yourself. Forget about anything else except doing your best and swimming your own race. Prove to yourself that you can do it.”
Somehow, there seemed a mysterious power in her words comforting my unsettling heart and I decided to have a try. The next day, I was at practice as required.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:
The first practice was a disaster.
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Then everything crashed in the last 5 meters of the race.
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Writing 07
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A Great Monday
Monday started out great. I woke up on time, ate breakfast and did some last minute studying for my math test that day. I was confident that I would get a high mark. I left my house, and minutes later, I was sitting with my friends on the school bus. We were busy talking about how we spent our weekend. At one stop, a boy named Ryan got on hurriedly. He tripped(绊倒) over someone’s foot and THUMP! He fell flat onto the floor.
Every one of us on the bus looked on and laughed crazily. Ryan picked himself up, dusted his jacket and made his way to an empty seat. He tried to laugh with us, but his face was burning with embarrassment. The rest of the morning flew by. I did well in my math test. It wasn’t long before the lunch bell rang. I met my friends from the cheerleading team in the dining hall.
When we finished eating, we headed out to the courtyard to practice a cheer we would do at that night’s football game. After much practice, we finally managed to do the cheer perfectly. We decided to practice it again one last time. Again, just like the rest of my day so far, the cheer was going great. I raised my leg for one last toe touch. RIIPPP! I felt my jeans was torn down in the middle of my backside.
I froze(僵住了). I had no idea what to do but stand still. Then I heard people burst out laughing and I saw them pointing at my broken jeans. Trying to cover myself with my hands, I tried to laugh too, but I felt tears began to well up in my eyes.
注意:1. 续写的词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:
Then I saw Ryan running towards me.
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That night, after the cheer at the football game, I found Ryan.
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Writing 08
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
From Tiger to Goldfish
Josh is my 10-year- old grandson. I love him so much that I find it very difficult to refuse any one of his requirements. Besides, he is good at persuading me. So, it’s really a big challenge to take him out sometimes. But now, I consider myself to be quite courageous. Perhaps that’s why I recently decided to take him to a fair.
At the first ringtoss booth, Josh was absolutely certain that he could win that five foot-tall tiger because he told me he was a real expert at tossing rings. They had such kind of game played at school and he practiced a lot at school. He told me that he was often the winner of the ringtoss. The guy in the booth said, “You could buy one ring for 50 cents, or three for $ 1. But if you wanted a real bargain, you could get 20 rings for $ 5.”
Of course, Josh said, “We should go for the bargain.” I thought about arguing with him by saying that an expert ringtosser like him would need only one ring. But I knew this was not an argument I was going to win. So I pulled out the $ 5 bill and placed it on the counter. Twenty rings later, he still didn’t have the tiger. “But now I see how to do this," Josh said. “Let’s buy another 20 rings, and I’ll get it this time.”
Well, he never did get the tiger, but there were plenty more places where we could spend our money. Josh was equally unsuccessful at the next several booths. My wallet was getting thinner. And then we spotted the booth that Josh positively could not miss: the goldfish booth, All you had to do was toss a ping- pong ball into just one of the many fishbowls, and you could go home with your very own goldfish.
注意:
1.续写的词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As we got down to the last ball, I was secretly relieved that the goldfish would be staying at the fair.
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The look of pure happiness on Josh’s face made the entire fair experience one to treasure.
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04 如何设计续写情节
1、十句五定法总体思路
读后续写续写的内容有两段,即paragraph 1¶graph 2.每段写五句,一共十句。其中有五句已经定下,如下图所示
paragraph 1
paragraph 2
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衔接para1首句
6
衔接para2首句
2
7
3
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9
结局(正能量)
5
衔接para2首句
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升华主题
其他五句根据前后情节发展进行补充即可,可用到五大描写:情绪,动作,心理,语言,环境。
2、“十句五定”框架拆分
第一段 第1句:情感描写
Sb. felt a great sense of guilt welling up in his heart and surging through him. (他感到一股强烈的愧疚在心中升腾、奔涌。)
第一段 第2-4句 细节深化
动作链:He grabbed the letter, took a deep breath, and walked toward the door. 环境/心理:The rain pattered outside, mirroring his uneasy heart.
第一段 第5句 过渡衔接
With the decision made, he knocked on the door, not knowing what would happen next. (做好决定后,他敲响了门,不知道接下来会发生什么。)
第二段 第6句 情感转折
Upon seeing his brother’s smile, all his anxiety vanished instantly. (看到哥哥的微笑,他所有的焦虑瞬间消失了。)
第二段 第7-8句 互动递进
对话:“Let’s start over,” his brother said. 回应:He nodded, a tear of relief sliding down his cheek.
第二段 第9句 结局呈现
By dusk, they were walking Toby together, laughter filling the air. (黄昏时,他们一起遛着托比,笑声弥漫在空气中。)
第二段 第10句 主题升华
This experience taught him that forgiveness is the bridge to mending broken bonds. (这次经历让他明白,原谅是修复破裂关系的桥梁。)
3、真题实战演练:2025年6月新高考1卷(狗引发的兄弟风波)
My wife and I wanted to share our new home with family and friends by hosting a small gathering in the early summer. She had prepared lots of snacks, while my job was to have the backyard in order.
There was plenty of space for the kids to run and play. There was just one thing I hadn’t counted on: My brother chose to bring his dog Toby, a 50-pound ball of fire. Though friendly, he could easily knock over my niece’s small boys and my six-month-old granddaughter. So, when my brother showed up, I asked him to watch Toby and keep him outside.
My plan was working out just fine. Toby was using up his energy by running back and forth in the backyard and giving the kids plenty of room. Unexpectedly, after supper, the weather changed. It started to rain and everyone went indoors.
It was an awkward moment. I didn’t want Toby to be running around in the house, and my brother wasn’t happy with driving home with a wet dog. Eventually, my brother decided to leave rather than force the issue.
A few days passed, and I hadn’t heard anything from my brother. I texted him and expressed wishes for him to come out again. His reply came as a surprise — a shock, actually: “Not a chance.” Clearly, he was unhappy over the way we had parted. After all, I had left him little choice. Well, he’ll get over it, I reasoned.
Two months passed. My wife suggested I get in touch with my brother, but I resisted, thinking he should call first. However, my conscience (良心) kept bothering me. I tried to put myself in my brother’s shoes. He was facing health issues and his wife of thirty-five years had passed away a few months earlier. Toby was his constant companion, the one who kept him going.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I realized it was me who was at fault.
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With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door.
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Paragraph 1(五句定位:1. 衔接首句;5. 衔接 Para2 首句)
1.衔接 Para1 首句:
I realized it was me who was at fault — my thoughtlessness about my brother’s pain had pushed him away, a mistake I deeply regretted.
翻译:我意识到是我错了 —— 我忽略了哥哥的痛苦,这才把他推远了,这个错误让我深感懊悔。
(强调句:用 “It was...who...” 突出 “我” 的过错,融入心理描写 “deeply regretted”)
2.英文:I had been so busy worrying about the party’s order that I completely ignored how Toby, as his only companion, kept him company through the dark days after his wife’s passing.
翻译:我之前一门心思担心派对的秩序,完全没考虑到托比作为他唯一的陪伴,在他妻子去世后的那些艰难日子里,一直陪在他身边。
(状语从句:“so...that...” 体现逻辑,补充环境背景 “dark days”,强化矛盾根源)
3.英文:My stubborn pride had stopped me from saying sorry first, and every night, the memory of his disappointed face when he left kept echoing in my mind.
翻译:我那固执的自尊心让我不愿先道歉,而且每天晚上,他离开时那失望的神情,总在我脑海里反复浮现。
(非谓语:“stopped me from...” 作谓语,“echoing” 体现心理折磨,增强情绪张力)
4.英文:Determined to make amends, I rummaged through the kitchen and found the recipe for his favorite oatmeal biscuits — a small gesture to warm his heart.
翻译:我决心弥补过错,在厨房里翻找起来,找到了他最爱的燕麦饼干的食谱 —— 这是一个能温暖他心的小举动。
(形容词作状语:“Determined to...” 表目的,动作描写 “rummaged through” 让场景更具体)
5.衔接 Para2 首句:
英文:With the biscuits my wife had helped bake, their sweet scent wrapping around me, I made up my mind to visit him the next morning.
翻译:拿着妻子帮忙烤好的饼干,甜香萦绕在我身边,我下定决心第二天早上就去拜访他。
(with 复合结构:“their sweet scent wrapping...” 营造氛围,自然衔接下一段 “带着饼干上门” 的情节)
Paragraph 2(五句定位:6. 衔接首句;9. 结局;10. 升华主题)
1.衔接 Para2 首句:
英文:With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door, my hands slightly trembling as I raised my fist to knock.
翻译:拿着妻子烤的饼干,我来到了哥哥家门口,抬手准备敲门时,我的手微微颤抖着。
(独立主格:“my hands slightly trembling” 体现紧张情绪,动作描写 “raised my fist” 细节感拉满)
2.英文:The door creaked open, and there he stood — his eyes red from lack of sleep, but when he saw the biscuits, a faint smile slowly spread across his face.
翻译:门 “吱呀” 一声开了,他就站在那里 —— 眼睛因睡眠不足而泛红,但当他看到饼干时,一丝淡淡的笑容慢慢在他脸上展开。
(无灵主语:“The door creaked open” 用环境声音烘托场景,情绪描写 “faint smile” 暗示关系缓和)
3.英文:Toby, hearing my voice, dashed to the door, his tail wagging wildly, and nuzzled my hand gently, as if urging us to make up.
翻译:托比听到我的声音,冲到门口,尾巴疯狂地摇摆着,还轻轻蹭了蹭我的手,仿佛在催促我们和好。
(定语从句:“hearing my voice” 作非谓语,动物动作 “wagging”“nuzzled” 增添温情,推动情节)
4.结局(正能量):
英文:We sat on the porch, sharing the biscuits and talking about old times — the awkwardness melted away, replaced by the warmth we hadn’t felt for months.
翻译:我们坐在门廊上,一边分享饼干,一边聊起过去的时光 —— 尴尬的气氛渐渐消散,取而代之的是我们好几个月都没感受到的温情。
(名词性从句:“talking about old times” 补充互动,“warmth” 体现结局的正能量)
5.升华主题:
英文:Not until that moment did I truly understand that family bonds, like fragile glass, need care and forgiveness to stay unbroken.
翻译:直到那一刻我才真正明白,亲情就像易碎的玻璃,需要用心呵护和包容,才能保持完整。
(倒装句:“Not until...did...” 强调感悟,用比喻 “fragile glass” 升华 “亲情需包容” 的主题)
一、句子翻译练习
翻译练习01:“头、脸” 相关的动作
1.当没人知道你名字的时候,你还会趾高气扬么?
Could you hold your head high when no one knows your name?
2.那位学生回答问题前挠了挠头.
The student scratched his head before answering the question.
3.他挠挠头,皱皱眉,但还是想不出一个好办法.
He scratched his head and knitted his brows, but could not come up with a good plan.
4.你只要记住他们永远是对的,尽管点头就是,别浪费唇舌.
Just remember they are always right, nod your head and don't waste your breath.
5.她点头表示同意.
She nodded her head in agreement.
6.她摇摇头,不相信.
She shook her head in disbelief.
7.迈克考试失败,他羞愧得耷拉着脑袋走出了校园.
Mike failed in the exam, and he hung his head in shame walking out of school.
8.老练的企业家知道如何清晰辨别真正的成功,如何剔除纷繁芜杂的成功表象,而不会被这些一无是处的表象冲昏头脑.
Experienced entrepreneurs learn to clearly distinguish between real success and the many proxies which mean little but can turn their head.
9.如果你再拒绝承认你的一些同班同学已经赶上来了这一事实,那么不用多久,你就会发现自己落后了.
If you continue to hide/bury your head in the sand and refuse to recognize the fact that some of your classmates are catching up with you, it won't be long before you find yourself lagging behind.
10.说话很中肯,一针见血.
You hit the nail on the head.
11.他倒栽葱地摔下楼梯.
He fell head first down the stairs.
12.她离婚后又仓促再婚了.
She got divorced and rushed head first (未经深思;轻率;鲁莽) into another marriage.
13.我们浑身是泥.
We were covered from head to foot in mud.
14.他扭过头去看她.
He twisted his head around to look at her.
15.他那饱经风霜的布满皱纹的脸上散发着光彩,使人产生一种乐观的感觉.
There was a glow on his face, wrinkled by a life time of suffering, that inspired one with a feeling of unshakable optimism.
16.亲爱的朋友,如果你现在正在遭受痛苦和挫折,不要去抱怨而是要绞尽脑汁去寻找适合你自己的未来之路.
Dear friend, if you suffer a lot, don't complain but just rack your brains to find your own way to the future.
17.你为什么闷闷不乐?发生什么事了?
Why do you pull a long face? What has happened to you?
18.他把表掉到汤里,我实在忍不住笑了.
I couldn't keep a straight face when he dropped his watch in the soup.
19.上次用餐不付钱就走,你还敢来?
How dare you show your face in this restaurant after having left without paying last time you ate here!
20.当医生告诉加文他的病将永远无法痊愈时,加文装作满不在乎的样子.
Gavin put a bold face on it when the doctors told him that he would never completely recover from his illness.
21.倘若不能,我亦无悔面对.
If I cannot, I will face the music without regret.
22.她气得脸都变形了.
Her face twisted in anger.
23.苏听丈夫的讲话时,表情复杂 (心里五味杂陈).
Sue's face was a picture( =she looked very surprised, angry, etc.)as she listened to her husband's speech.
翻译练习02: “眼” 相关的动作
1.她的双眼闪耀着幸福的光芒.
Her eyes sparkled/danced with happiness.
2.“没错,主人.” 贝拉特里克斯轻声说,她的眼中再次充满了感激的泪花.
“Yes,my Lord.” whispered Bellatrix, and her eyes swam with tears of gratitude again.
3.她眼里闪出怒火.
Her eyes flashed with anger.
4.她生气地瞪了我一眼.
She threw me an angry look.
5.她紧张不安地瞥我一眼/羞怯地朝我一笑没说任何话.
She flashed a nervous look/a shy smile at me without saying anything.
6.她朝他那个方向扫了一眼/微微一笑.
She cast/flicked a glance/smile in his direction.
7.她的眼光扫过人们的脸.
Her eyes flicked from face to face.
8.他恶狠狠地/厌恶地瞪了我一眼/给了我一个白眼.
He gave me a really dirty look.
9.他怀疑地眯起眼睛.
He narrowed his eyes suspiciously.
10.他向她挤了挤眼.
He narrowed his eyes at her.
11.她咄咄逼人地眯起眼睛.
Her eyes narrowed menacingly.
12.他怀疑地注视着她.
His eyes rested on her doubtfully.
13.我的目光 (突然) 落在一个奇怪的物体上.
My eye fell on a curious object.(I suddenly saw…)
14.我简直难以置信.
I could hardly believe my eyes/ears/luck.
15.她不敢正眼看我.
She was afraid to meet my eye.
16.她毫不畏缩地与他对视.
She met his gaze/look without flinching.
17.他们的目光隔着拥挤的房间相遇.
Their eyes met across the crowded room.
18.一幅可怕的景象映入他们的眼帘.
A terrible sight met their eyes.
19.他们不说话,只是愉快地微笑和交换眼色.
They did not speak, but only smiled joyfully and exchanged glances.
20.我当时是一名大学新生,很晚还与同学们闲聊不睡。而至上课前的一刻,那眼皮觉得实在太重,越来越睁不开,终于垂下头去,把书本当作枕头,心想课前打几分钟瞌睡没什么大不了.
I was a college freshman and had stayed up most of the night before, laughing and talking with friends. Now just before my first class of the day my eyelids were feeling heavier and heavier and my head was drifting down to my desk to make my textbook a pillow. A few minutes nap time before class couldn't hurt I thought.
21.她朝我所在的角落走了几步,冲我翻着白眼道:“看这被子吧!”
She took a few steps towards my corner and rolled her eyes at me,“ See that quilt!”
22.在主菜吃到一半时,我不经意地抬头看见母亲坐在那儿目不转睛地看着我,嘴角挂着一抹微笑.
Half way through the entree, I lifted my eyes and saw Mom sitting there staring at me. A nostalgic smile was on her lips.
23.他对她眨动他那双猪眼一般的小眼睛.
He blinked at her with his little piggy eyes.
24.她快速地眨了眨眼.
She was blinking her eyes rapidly.
25.老板对上班迟到的人会蹙眉,露出不悦之色.
The boss will frown on those who come to work late.
26.在许多欧洲国家,人们都反感在公共场所吸烟.
In many European countries people tend to frown on smoking in public places.
27.她打开门,一片混乱不堪的景象呈现在她的眼前.
When she opened the door she was greeted by a scene of utter confusion.
28.老人把不速之客上下打量了一番.
The old man looked the uninvited guest up and down.
29.我要是撒谎,我就不敢直视他的眼睛.
I won't be able to look him in the eye if I lie.
30.就在他离开聚会几秒钟后有人发现烟雾顺着楼梯冒上来了.
He left the party seconds before smoke was spotted coming up the stairs.
31.印度近年来经历了很多政治变动.
India has witnessed many political changes in recent years.
32.他匆匆看了一下手表.
He glanced at his watch.
33.我拿起电话簿,匆匆扫了一遍.
I picked up the phone book and glanced through it.
34.他没有喊叫,只是默默地怒视着我.
He didn't shout, he just glared at me silently.
35.塔玛拉一边狐疑地盯着他看,一边摇着头.
Tamara stared at him in disbelief, shaking her head.
36.他双臂交叉,睁大眼睛,张大嘴巴盯着天空中的烟花看.
Arms crossed, he stares up wide-eyed and open-mouthed at the fireworks in the sky.
37.你需要利用反馈信息来监控进展.
You need feedback to monitor progress.
38.两个警察让一辆卡车停住以便检查司机的驾驶证.
Two policemen held up a truck so as to inspect the driver's license.
39.去查看一下我是不是把窗户锁上了.
Go and check if I've locked the windows.
40.他仔细检查了她的护照,然后在上面盖了章.
He examined her passport and stamped it.
41.另外一名医生对她进行了诊察,仍旧没有发现任何问题.
Another doctor examined her and could still find nothing wrong.
42.她久久地端详着这张照片,眼里含着泪水.
She studied the photo for a long time, with tears in her eyes.
43.我觉得他正在注视着我做的每一件事.
I felt he was observing everything I did.
44.你愿意照看一会儿我的小孩吗?
Will you keep an eye on my children for a while?
45.她蹙额,陷人了沉思.
She wrinkled her brows in concentration.
46.她眉头紧锁,全神贯注.
Her brow furrowed in concentration.
47.她只要眨一下眼睫毛,男人们便忙不迭地跑过来.
She just flutters her eyelashes and the men come running.
48.杰克当头挨了一击,眼睛直冒金星.
The blow on his head made Jack see stars.
49.他们进入银行时便被警察发现了.
They were spotted by the police as they were entering the bank.
50.我发现他躲在门后.
I spied him hiding behind the door.
51.她突然在人群中发现了她的朋友.
She suddenly spied her friend in the crowd.
52.她从窗帘后面能窥探到自己的邻居.
From behind her curtain she could spy on her neighbours.
53.向别人窗内窥探是不礼貌的.
It's impolite to spy into other people's windows.
54.他生性好刺探别人的私事.
It is his nature to spy into other people's affairs.
55.这孩子眼巴巴地望着巧克力蛋糕.
The child was eyeing the chocolate cake.
56.男孩子们站在角落里打量着那些本地的女孩.
The boys stood on the corner eyeing(up)the local girls.
57.我正准备穿马路,这时我瞟到一辆摩托车从拐弯处直驶而来.
I was about to cross the road when out of the corner of my eye I saw a motorbike coming round the bend.
58.我从眼角瞥到了点什么,原来是邻居-一个不爱讲废话的女人中午出来散步.
I catch something out of the corner of my eye. It's a no-nonsense lady from our neighbor-hood out for a midday walk.
59.她的目光突然落到了这捆文件上.
Her eyes suddenly alighted on the bundle of documents.
60.她急切地端详着他的脸.
She scanned his face anxiously.
61.我扫视人群,寻找汤姆.
I scanned the crowd, searching for Tom.
62.她睁大眼睛惊讶地注视着他.
She stared at him in wide-eyed amazement.
63.她吃惊地睁大了眼睛.
She is wide-eyed with astonishment.
64.特雷弗正睁大眼睛盯着我.
Trevor was staring wide-eyed at me.
65.他两眼唰地睁开了.
His eyes snapped open.
66.猫暗地里注视着老鼠.
The cat looked at the mouse out of the corner of its eye.
67.她羞涩地用眼角瞟了他一眼.
She glanced shyly at him out of the corner of her eye.
68.我眼角余光看到哈桑快速地弯下腰又站起来.
Out of the corner of my eye, I saw Hassan bend down and stand up quickly.
69.她驻足凝神欣赏这片景色.
She stood feasting her eyes on the view.
70.昨晚我们尽情欣赏了您的精彩表演.
We feasted our eyes on your wonderful performance last night.
71.对着迷茫的晚景,我们静静地欣赏着.
Quietly we feasted our eyes on the hazy evening scene.
72.不止一位猎人用艳羡的目光虎视眈眈着那对漂亮的,无与伦比的大公羊角.
More than one hunter feasted his envious eyes on the great ram's horns-magnificent and unequaled.
73.我正在减肥,所以只能到那些面包房去解解眼馋.
I stopped to feast my eyes on the cakes because I'm on diet.
74.展品琳琅满目,美不胜收。这次展览是一场赏心悦目的盛宴.
One is dazzled by the endless array of beautiful exhibits. The exhibition is a feast for the eyes.
75.在西湖漫步能让你一饱眼福.
A walk around the West Lake is a feast for the eyes.
翻译练习03: “耳、鼻、口” 相关的动作
1.我洗耳恭听.
I'm all ears.
2.我耳根发热.
My ears are burning.
3.年轻人有时把父母的苦口婆心当作耳边风.
Young people sometimes seem to turn a deaf ear to the words of their anxious parents.
4.如果我们送她一辆自行车作为生日礼物,她会笑得合不拢嘴.
She'll smile from ear to ear if we give her a bike for her birthday.
5.《芝加哥》将给所有音乐爱好者献上一场听觉的盛宴.
Chicago provides a feast for the ears of any music lover.
6.这首古典乐曲令人大饱耳福.
The classical music is really a feast for the ears.
7.倒塌的建筑物,跳跃燃烧的汽车,飞机坠落并设法在着陆前拉升,它是一次真正的旅行和一场视听盛宴.
Collapsing buildings, jumping flaming cars, planes falling down and managing to pull up a second before touching down, it was a real trip and a feast for the eyes and ears.
8.她向他投去意味深长的一笑.
She cast him a significant smile.
9.你不必考虑,凭直觉行事就行.
You won't have to think, just follow your nose.
10.他对太太唯命是从.
He lets his wife lead him by the nose.
11.我的鼻子开始出血.
My nose began to bleed.
12.她尽量文雅地擤了擤鼻涕.
She blew her nose as daintily as possible.
13.你的时尚嗅觉的确了得.
You do have a nose for fashion.
14.我们都感冒了,一个劲儿地抽鼻子,打喷嚏.
We all had colds and couldn't stop sniffing and sneezing.
15.店铺橱窗里摆的馅饼使小汤米馋涎欲滴.
The pies in the store window made little Tommy's mouth water.
16.他看见那面包师的儿子走来时,就从草堆后边跳了出来,那男孩吓得张大了嘴巴.
When he saw the baker's boy coming, he jumped out from behind the haystack and the boy's mouth fell open in surprise.
17.当你吃东西时,不要在你满嘴食物时说话.
When you are eating, don't speak with your mouth full of food.
18.两姐妹都像小孩儿一样咬指甲.
Both sisters bit their nails as children.
19.他想说 “跟上那辆车”, 话到嘴边又咽了回去.
He bit his tongue as he found himself on the point of saying “follow that car”.
20.走过柜橱时,她看见那上面有一块在尘土中发霉的干面包皮,她扑了上去,拿来一面啃,一面嘟囔.
As she passed, she caught sight of a dry crust of bread on the commode, which was moulding there amid the dust; she flung herself upon it and bit into it, muttering.
21.这小女孩在咬苹果时,她的牙掉了.
The little girl's tooth came out when she bit into the apple.
22.我第一次尝这个的时候,差点没呕出来.
When I first tasted it I almost barfed.
23.他尝遍了人生的酸甜苦辣.
He has tasted the sweets and bitters of life.
24.这强烈的气味使我呕吐了.
The strong smell made me throw up.
25.她刚吃完药,又都吐了出来.
She threw up all the medicine she had just taken.
26.迈克尔疲惫地叹了口气.
Michael sighed wearily.
27.午餐很丰盛,有肉、蔬菜、奶酪、酸奶、水果,酒无限量供应.
Lunch was a feast of meat and vegetables, cheese, yoghurt and fruit, with unlimited wine.
28.他们吃玉米炖羊肉一直吃到下午.
They feasted well into the afternoon on mutton and corn stew.
29.他们大吃大喝,好像没有明天了一样.
They feast like there is no tomorrow.
30.波利咬了一口苹果,嚼了嚼咽了下去.
Polly took a bite of the apple, chewed and swallowed.
31.他使劲咽了一下口水,然后踏进面试室.
He swallowed hard, and walked into the interview room.
32.戈登忍住了内心的愤怒.
Gordon has swallowed the anger he felt.
33.她放下架子/放下身段向他道歉.
She managed to swallow her pride and say sorry to him.
34.他先是冲我咧嘴一笑,不过看到我的表情后又赶紧收起笑脸.
He flashed me a quick grin but rapidly swallowed it when he saw my expression.
35.我尖叫着让他们离开我的家.
I was screaming at them to get out of my house.
36.你少冲我大喊大叫的,我已经够快的了.
Don't yell at me. I came as fast as I could.
37.演出结束时全场爆发出雷鸣般的欢呼声.
At the end of the performance, the entire hall burst into thunderous cheers.
38.我们转到一个角落-我驻足,惊叹不已.
Then we turned a corner-and I stopped and gasped in amazement.
39.大多数听众笑,少数张嘴惊骇.
Most of the audience laughed, a small number gasped in astonishment.
40.听到这意外的消息,我惊得倒吸了一口冷气.
I gasped with/in surprise at the unexpected news.
41.“我可能要死了.” 他一边想一边喘着气.
“Maybe I'm going to die,” he thought as he gasped for air.
42.杰克气喘吁吁地跟着她.
Jack was huffing and puffing to keep up with her.
43.那个丑陋、肥胖的男人和他的同样丑陋的妻子气喘吁吁地挣扎着穿过门.
The ugly, overweight man struggled breathlessly through the door with his equally ugly wife.
44.当水手详述沉船的故事时,孩子们屏息倾听着.
The boys listened breathlessly as the sailor detailed the story of the shipwreck.
45.我上气不接下气,让我喘口气.
I am out of breath, let me recover my breath.
46.我肯定老了,那几级台阶已经让我气喘吁吁了.
I must be betting old-those few steps have left/have made/have put me quite out of breath.
47.他的胸脯上下起伏,然后他深深地吸了口气.
His chest heaved, and he took a deep breath.
48.他曾停下来歇口气,同时确定一下方向.
He had stopped to catch his breath and make sure of his directions.
49.他屏住了气,不敢抬起头来.
He held his breath, not daring to raise his head.
50.她自由地呼吸着,好像卸下千斤重担.
She breathed freely, and a great weight fell off her.
51.他听到卫士的脚步声消失后,才松了口气.
He heard the security guard's footsteps receding and breathed freely again.
52.她放低声音.
She dropped her voice.
53.当她和他谈话时,她的讲话声压低而变成耳语.
Her voice dropped to a whisper when she was talking with him.
54.她用近乎孩子气的天真的声音问关于大自然的非常难的问题.
In a voice of near childlike innocence, she asks extraordinarily difficult questions about nature.
55.两臂交叉,他睁大眼睛张大嘴巴盯着看天空中的烟花.
Arms crossed, he stares up wide-eyed and open-mouthed at the fireworks in the sky.
56.她双唇微张,呆呆地望着天空.
She was staring into space, her mouth slack.
57.当他终于找到她时,那女人向他连珠炮似地提出了许多问题:“你是谁?什么古董店?”
When he finally reached her, the woman flooded him with questions “Who are you? What antique shop?”
58.如果你心存疑虑,你通常会连珠炮式地向你的副手发问.
If you harbour concerns ,you usually bombard lieutenants with questions.
59.他们连珠炮似地向他发问,弄得他不知所措.
They fired so many questions at him that he hardly knew what to do.
60.她像打开了的话匣子一样讲个没完没了.
She talked away like a chatterbox.
61.上天为什么开这种玩笑来试探我们的缘分?
Why did the God this joke to sound out our love?
62.他说他的访华之行是想探询一下中国对世界问题的看法.
He says his trip to China is an attempt to sound out Chinese world views.
63.我正在试探他,看他是否愿意来为我们工作.
I am trying to sound out if he'd like to work for us.
64.他们决定试探一下他对那个项目的兴趣.
They decided to sound him out about/on his interest in the project. to sound out his interest in the project.
65.她声称赞同训练,但至今还只是停留在口头上.
She claims to be in favour of training, but so far she's only paid lip service to the idea.
66.许多国家的政府对于该建议只是口头承诺,或者行事迟缓.
Many governments do nothing more than pay lip service to the advice, or drag their feet.
67.那些口是心非的人比那些公开反对你的人对你的威胁更大.
Those who pay lip ice are greater enemies than those who speak openly against you.
68.他用词细心谨慎.
He picked his words carefully.
69.他甚至想和逮住他的女警官套近乎.
He even tried to sweet-talk the policewoman who arrested him.
70.别给我灌迷魂汤了,我不会再给你钱的.
Don't sweet-talk me into it. I won't give you money anymore.
71.别想用甜言蜜语哄我去参加你们公司的聚会.
Don't try to sweet-talk me into going to your company party.
72.他们互相讲述了他们在军队中的经历.
They swapped stories about their army days.
73.他们都坐在桌子旁,有说有笑地讲述各自的故事.
They all sat together at table, laughing and swapping stories.
74.女孩被这意外的景象吓了一跳,眼睛睁得大大的,但随后嘴角慢慢地弯成一个微笑.
Startled by the unexpected sight, the girl's eyes became huge and then her mouth curved slowly into a smile.
75.但是,她的笑话没有引起任何反应,甚至没有一个人笑一笑.
But her joke went over like a lead balloon, nobody even cracked a smile.
76.在我们给了那个小孩一个玩具火车后,他终于笑了.
When we gave the kid a toy train, he finally cracked a smile.
二、综合模拟演练01
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
It was a Saturday afternoon.The color of the sky was changing,first light gray,then dark gray,and finally dark and dense.The wind was blowing heavily,and the trees were swaying in the strong wind.It began to rain cats and dogs.Soon,the road was filled with puddles from the rain.
On such a stormy afternoon,my mother took my five-year-old brother,Christopher,and me to a new big toy store she had read about in the newspaper.“So many toys,”the advertisement had shouted in full and flashy color,“that we had to get a huge warehouse to fit them all!”
Christopher and I couldn’t have been more excited.We ran across the parking lot,through the cold and biting rain,as fast as our little legs could carry us.We left our mother outside to battle with the frustrating umbrella,which never worked when she wanted it to.“Christine!Take care of your young brother!”Mother shouted at the top of her voice.
“Christine!I’m going to find the Lego section(乐高积木区)!There’s a new pirate ship I want,and I have four dollars!Maybe I can buy it!”Christopher exclaimed and ran off excitedly.I only half heard him.I took a right turn and,to my wide-eyed delight,found myself in the midst of the Barbie(芭比) World.
I was studying a Barbie and doing some simple math in my head when suddenly an earthshaking clap of thunder roared from the storm outside.I jumped at the noise,dropping the doll to the floor.The lights flickered(闪烁) once and died,covering everything in a blanket of blackness.Thunder continued to shake the sky and lightning illuminated the store for seconds,casting frightening shadows on my mind.
Paragraph 1:
“Oh no,”I thought,“Where’s Christopher?”
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Paragraph 2:
“Christine,I’m here.”
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单句训练
1) 哦,不,”我想,“克里斯托弗在哪儿?”
2) 我害怕,吓得呆住了,需要见到我哥哥,拥抱他,确保他很好。
3) 我的胃难受了,正在翻转进去。
4) 我在黑暗的走廊上跑来跑去,恐慌充满了我的内心,使我呼吸困难。
5) 我一边看到糖果,一边被玩具绊倒,一边疯狂地叫着我哥哥的名字。
6) 虽然我很焦虑,但我几乎看不见他的身影。
7) 沮丧和恐惧的眼泪从我的脸上滴了下来,但我继续跑着。
8) “克里斯汀,我在这里。
9) “兴奋让我喘住了呼吸——在黑暗的乐高走廊里,我找到了克里斯托弗。
10) 他独自站着,一动不动,紧紧地抓着海盗船。
11) 我开始欣慰地大叫起来,伸出双臂搂住他,紧紧地拥抱着他。
12) 他拥抱我说:“我知道如果我在这里等着,克里斯汀,你就能找到我。
13) ”然后,我把我的手抓住我的手,我们去找我们的母亲,她一定是拼命地在商店里寻找我们。
参考答案
单句训练
1. “Oh no,”I thought,“Where’s Christopher?”
2. Scared,I was frozen to the spot,overcome with the need to see my brother,to hug and make certain he was all right.
3. My stomach twisted and turned inside.
4. I ran up and down the aisles through the blackness,panic filling my small chest and making it difficult to breathe.
5. I knocked into displays of candy and tripped over toys,all the while frantically calling my brother’s name.
6. Anxious as I was,I could barely see his figure.
7. Tears of frustration and fear trickled down my face,but I continued to run.
8. “Christine,I’m here.”
9. Excitement took my breath away—there in the dark Lego aisle I found Christopher.
10. He was standing alone,perfectly still,clutching tightly to the pirate ship set.
11. I began to cry out from relief,throwing my arms around him and hugged him tightly.
12. He hugged me back,saying,“I knew if I waited here,Christine,you would be able to find me.”
13. Then,I took his hand in mine and we went to find our mother,who must be desperately searching the store for us.
参考范文:
“Oh no,”I thought,“Where’s Christopher?”Scared,I was frozen to the spot,overcome with the need to see my brother,to hug and make certain he was all right.My stomach twisted and turned inside.I ran up and down the aisles through the blackness,panic filling my small chest and making it difficult to breathe.I knocked into displays of candy and tripped over toys,all the while frantically calling my brother’s name.Anxious as I was,I could barely see his figure.Tears of frustration and fear trickled down my face,but I continued to run.
“Christine,I’m here.”Excitement took my breath away—there in the dark Lego aisle I found Christopher.He was standing alone,perfectly still,clutching tightly to the pirate ship set.I began to cry out from relief,throwing my arms around him and hugged him tightly.He hugged me back,saying,“I knew if I waited here,Christine,you would be able to find me.”Then,I took his hand in mine and we went to find our mother,who must be desperately searching the store for us.
三、综合模拟演练02
Writing 01
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On the first day of school, I stared in awe at the huge buildings. This high school was definitely bigger than the one I had previously attended.
This was my second year of high school, but my first year of school in St. Louis. I had decided the night before that I would be much happier in a new school if I made friends that were so-called “popular”. Getting in with the right group of people would make my life a whole lot better. I even bought a new outfit and had my hair styled just so the first day would be perfect.
Scared, yet anxious to begin my new life, I walked up the stairs to the front door. The halls were packed with kids yelling and laughing and telling stories of their summer adventures. My first class was geometry, but where was that?
I was standing in the hall looking confused, when a short, blond girl wearing glasses came up and asked, “Are you new? You look lost. Do you need help? My name is Diane. What’s yours?” Even though she seemed a bit strange, definitely not the kind of person I wanted to be associated with, I decided to answer her anyway. I was, after all, lost.
After exchanging names. I followed her up the stairs and down a hallway on the right, making polite conversation the whole way. When we reached my room she said, “Well, here you are. Welcome to JFK, and I hope your day goes all right.”
I said thanks and waved good-bye. Once inside the classroom, I saw one big group of people huddled around someone who seemed to be telling some sort of story. I walked over and got close enough to overhear. All eyes were glued to the guy in the middle of the circle who was wearing a letter jacket covered with patches. I decided that this guy was popular, so I managed to get a seat right next to him. I said, “Hi, my name is Lisa and I’m new here.” He said, “Johnny.”
注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置答题。
At the end of the class, I turned to him and asked, “I’m not sure where my next class is, could you help me?”
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Just at that time, someone came up and tapped me on the shoulder.
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1.One Possible Version:
At the end of the class, I turned to him and asked, “I’m not sure where my next class is, could you help me?” With a frown, he looked at me and then said a quick no, turned back to his friends, and walked out of the classroom. As they were walking out I heard him say, “Did you guys see that new girl trying to get into our group? That outfit was too strange.” They all laughed and some of them turned around and stared at me. My face hot with shame, I stood stock-still, not believing what had just happened.
Just at that time, someone came up and tapped me on the shoulder. It was Diane. Like a ray of sunshine, the big smile on her face swept away my gloom. I struggled to hold my feelings back and told her what I had encountered. A gleam of concern in her eyes, she said she was sorry and offered to find my next class. At that moment I realized how wrong I was in wanting to only be friends with popular people. Maybe I shouldn’t decide whether a person is worth being my friend or not by their reputation, but by who they are.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者高中第二年是在圣路易斯的第一年,作者在学校认识了Diane,Diane给作者指路。结果作者因为穿着被班上的同学嘲笑,Diane也对作者表示了关心,作者也感悟到不应该只和受欢迎的人交朋友。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“下课的时候,我转向他问:‘我不知道下节课在哪里,你能帮我吗?’”可知,第一段可描写对方的反应以及作者被嘲笑的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“就在那时,有人走过来拍了拍我的肩膀”可知,第二段可描写Diane帮助作者以及作者的感悟。
2.续写线索:询问——拒绝——嘲笑——帮助——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①走出:walk out of/step out of
②融入:get into/fit into
③抑制:hold back/restrain
情绪类
①奇怪的:strange /odd
②担心:concern /worry
【点睛】[高分句型1] My face hot with shame, I stood stock-still, not believing what had just happened.(运用了what引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Maybe I shouldn’t decide whether a person is worth being my friend or not by their reputation, but by who they are. (运用了whether引导宾语从句)
Writing 02
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I had been acting in school for a few years. When I got a rough role in a play, I, only a junior in my high school, was excited that my inspiring drama teacher and director had trusted me with the part.
We had little time to prepare and I would never forget reading the lines for the first time. At first the dialogue was lively, but then it became quite long and boring. To my surprise, my character had one disrespectful line that complained about his bad luck. I had never said something like that on stage before. Uncomfortable as I felt about it, I had never thought of making myself heard to make a change. I was weak, went silent, and accepted the line as it was.
At our first rehearsal (彩排), I whispered, the line and hoped with so many distractions on stage that the director wouldn’t notice. Luckily, she didn’t. Over three wild weeks of rehearsals, I convinced myself that I could keep faking it. Then, when the curtain finally rose with an audience, maybe I would feel fine about saying the line just once as loudly as I could.
On the night of the open dress rehearsal, I was nervous to see an old couple, the Ehlers, seated in the hall. They were close friends of our family and I had no idea they would be there. When the big moment arrived, with nervousness racing through my body, I went for it. I remember the moment quite clearly. Where I stood. How it sounded. How I felt.
After the show, the Ehlers met me with cheers, a warm hug, and some brief dialogue of their own. While talking with them, I was overwhelmed by mixed feelings of regret and shame.
注意: 1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
“Jason, that was quite some language. You surprised us,” Mrs. Ehlers looked at me.
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I said goodbye to the couple and waited in the drama room until our director appeared.
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“Jason, that was quite some language. You surprised us,” Mrs. Ehlers looked at me. I told Mrs. Ehlers frankly that I had been unwilling to say it. Mrs. Ehlers patted me on the shoulder consolingly, suggesting that I should have told the director to change it. I nodded my head, but still doubted whether the director would let me. Mrs. Ehlers seemed to have read my mind and said with a soft smile, “Whatever you get is a gain. We have to stand up and give it a try sometimes, don't we?”
I said goodbye to the couple and waited in the drama room until our director appeared. With my heart racing, I stood near her desk and casually asked if I might possibly change the disrespectful line in the play to a more decent one. She sank into silence for a moment and replied, “Your replacement is indeed more appropriate. Thank you!” Agreeably surprised by her response, I left with a mixture of gratitude, humility, respect and shame. From that moment on, I felt increasingly confident and proud to share my views with others.
【导语】本文以故事的发展线索展开,讲述了作者在中学时,老师和导演给了他一个角色让他出演,在第一次读台词时发现里面有一句不礼貌的台词。尽管作者自己读到的时候感觉不舒服,但还是在一次一次的排练时用了那句台词,在公开彩排的时候,作者家的好朋友也来了,听到了作者使用的那句台词后,与作者进行了交流。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容““Jason,你说的话真太厉害了。你让我们大吃一惊,” Rhlers太太看着我。”可知,第一段可描写作者与Rhlers太太交流了那句台词的事情,给作者提出什么建议。
②由第二段首句内容“我告别了这对夫妇,在戏剧室里等着,直到我们的导演出现。”可知,第二段可描写作者与导演交流了些什么,问题有没有得到解决。
2.续写线索:Ehlers太太的问候——作者坦白心情——Ehlers太太提出建议——等到导演——说出台词问题——解决问题——感想
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.拍肩膀:patsb. on the shoulder/tab sb on the shoulder
②.理解某人:read one’s mind/understand/grasp/catch sb.
③.陷入:sink into/be lost in
情绪类
①使.惊讶:surprise/amaze/astonish
②.有信心的:confident /secure
【点睛】[高分句型1]. Ehlers patted me on the shoulder consolingly, suggesting that I should have told the director to change it. (运用了现在分词做状语以及that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]. With my heart racing, I stood near her desk and casually asked if I might possibly change the disrespectful line in the play to a more decent one. (运用了with复合结构和if引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型3]. Agreeably surprised by her response, I left with a mixture of gratitude, humility, respect and shame. (运用了过去分词作状语)
Writing 03
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Our car ran over the sand and rocks, leaving a cloud of dust. It was a beautiful spring day. The sun was bright and the sky was clear—perfect conditions for off-roading(越野). Back then, in 1984, my wife Sue and I were living in southeastern California. The views were wonderful, but with dangers. The temperatures could rise above 50℃, and it was no place for tourists to go off-roading without enough preparation.
Sue and I always took a bag with us, packed with snacks, water, and a first aid kit. We also had a car specially changed for driving in the desert. With it, we could go anywhere a jeep could go.
That day, we drove about 20 miles into the park. Around midday,we stopped to have a rest. As usual, we could see the desert before us. When the spirit of adventure moved us, we went back into the car. But when I turned the key nothing happened. I tried again and again. Nothing happened. I could see Sue was thinking the same thing—the engine wouldn’t start.
Our car had one strange problem. About once a year, it would refuse to start. If left overnight, the engine would run just fine the next morning. But no one could find anything wrong with our car. Because it happened so rarely, we’d just learned to live with it. But it had never happened suddenly.
“What should we do?” I felt a little anxious. I hadn’t seen a person on our drive out here, and we had no way to call for help.“We could walk back to town,”Sue said. Eager not to waste any more daylight,we quickly packed our things. We were about to set off when Sue called my name.“Look!” she cried. Sure enough, there was something, getting closer.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
It wasn’t long before I could make out what it was—a jeep!
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He checked the engine and said, “I know what’s wrong.”
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It wasn’t long before I could make out what it was—a jeep! And it was heading straight for the place we stayed! There was a man in the driver’s seat. Not a local. Our community was small, and I didn’t recognize him at all. “You need help?” he asked. “Can you give us a ride back into town?” I asked cautiously.”Our car won’t start again until it sits overnight.“He thought for a while and asked to take a look at our car. I knew it was hopeless, but I didn’t want to be rude to a stranger trying to help.
He checked the engine and said, “I know what’s wrong.” The man continued to say, “Lucky for you. I have that tool with me.” He went to fetch the tool and got to repair our strange car, and after several minutes, the engine began to work again. I felt so surprised, and he told us not to stop again until we got the car home. We had no words to express our gratitude and Sue wanted to pay him some money, but he shook his head and climbed into his jeep, continuing his way. Sue and I believed he was an angel who happened to be passing by.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者和妻子驱车20英里离开城市去公园欣赏沙漠的美景,可中午休息后,发现车发动机无法启动了。当他们正准备步行回城时突然看到有东西朝他们越来越近。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由续写第一段首句“没过多久,我就弄清楚它是什么——一辆吉普车!”可以预测续写第一段主要内容:吉普车朝作者开过来,作者要求车主搭载他们回城,吉普车主主动提出帮他们看下车的问题。
②由第二段首句“他检查了发动机,说:‘我知道出了什么问题。’”可以预测续写第二段主要内容:吉普车主发现车的问题并修好,作者准备支付钱作为报答,吉普车主拒绝了,这让作者感到自己遇到天使一般。
2.续写线索:作者发现吉普车开过来——请求车主搭载他们回城——吉普车主要求帮他们检查下车——吉普车主发现车的问题并修好——作者提出现金报答——吉普车主拒绝任何报酬
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.检查:examine/check /inspect/look closely at
②.修理:mend/fix/repair
③.表达我们的感谢:show our thanks / express our gratitude/express our appreciation
情绪类
①.谨慎地: cautiously /prudently/carefully
②.绝望的: hopeless/desperate/in despair
③.惊讶的:surprised/ astonished/ amazed/in surprise
【点睛】[高分句型1]. We had no words to express our gratitude and Sue wanted to pay him some money, but he shook his head and climbed into his jeep, continuing his way. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2].Sue and I believed he was an angel who happened to be passing by.(运用了who引导的定语从句)
Writing 04
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“What a crabby-looking lady (怨妇),” the cashier at my local convenience store whispered to her coworker. I was grabbing something off the shelf. I had a half dozen kids waiting for me outside in the van, and here’s the thing: they were all my own children. No time for polite. No casual conversation with the checkout lady, no nod of approval toward the stock boy, no breathing. Just get the toilet paper, two gallons of milk and some Frosted Flakes and get back to my children!
But my interest was aroused by the crabby-looking lady. Which one was she? Taking a family pack of toilet paper under my arm, I scanned the tiny store for the crabby lady. Let’s see, there’s a middle-aged guy checking on pork, an older gentleman at the checkout purchasing an egg salad sandwich and a coffee, and... just then I saw her, the crabby-looking lady.
Her eyes were small; her brown hair was pulled back in a ponytail so tight that it looked like her forehead would drop. Her mouth was shut serious. This lady looked like she had smelled something really bad. Then, I turned away from my own reflection in the convex security mirror (安全反射镜) at the back of the store. The crabby-looking lady... was me!
That night, I cried. I was the crabby-looking lady! Me! The girl once voted nicest smile by her high school class! Things must get changed! Right then and there I resolved to do one thing over the next year. One simple resolution: to smile. I didn’t need to wait for January 1st — I would start right now.
I resolved to smile at anyone and anything, even though they would let me down. And I also resolved to make a conscious effort to smile, at least ten times a day.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The first day of “Mission Smile” I practiced smiling as planned.
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After practicing a month, unexpectedly, something different happened.
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One possible version:
The first day of “Mission Smile” I practiced smiling as planned. I smiled at a strange dog who peed on my daughter’s new school shoes while she was in them, the salesman to the door, three of my six children, a librarian who asked me if I was aware of the global overpopulation problem, and my bathtub. I even smiled at my husband over the phone when he called to say he’d be late from work. And I smiled at myself in the mirror twice, just to remind myself what a smile looked like.
After practicing a month, unexpectedly, something different happened. I didn’t even try to find things to smile at and I’d still notice smile take over my face. When my daughter loaded the dishwasher with her socks, I smiled. When we were really late for church, I smiled. One day I was meeting a couple of friends at a local coffee shop. I overheard the cashier remark to her co-worker, “What a happy-looking lady!" And I didn’t even have to look around to know who she was talking about. It was me!
【导语】本文以人物线索展开,讲述了作者在超市匆忙买东西时无意间听到收银员们评论一位女士脾气暴躁,作者想知道这名女士到底是谁,结果从安全镜中发现竟然是自己,晚上作者伤心地哭了,当下决定要做一件事情:学会微笑。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“‘使命微笑’的第一天,我按计划练习微笑。”可知,第一段可描写作者在具体不同的场景下开始练习微笑。
②由第二段首句内容“练习了一个月后,出乎意料的是,不同的事情发生了。”可知,本段应该写练习微笑一个月给作者带来的影响和变化。
2.续写线索:计划练习微笑——在不同场景下学会微笑——练习微笑一个月后的变化——收银员对作者的新评价
3.词汇激活
行为类
①练习:practice/train
②穿:be in/wear/put on
③意识到:be aware of/be conscious of
情绪类
①出乎意料地:unexpectedly/ surprisingly
【点睛】[高分句型1]. I smiled at a strange dog who peed on my daughter’s new school shoes while she was in them, the salesman to the door, three of my six children, a librarian who asked me if I was aware of the global overpopulation problem, and my bathtub. (运用了who引导的限制性定语从句、while引导的时间状语从句和if引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]. And I smiled at myself in the mirror twice, just to remind myself what a smile looked like.(运用了不定式短语作目的状语和what引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型3]. And I didn’t even have to look around to know who she was talking about.(运用了who引导的宾语从句)
Writing 05
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When Christmas rolled around, I always got the tree up. And Christmas Eve found me placing an envelope on the tree.
It was just a small, white envelope with a note of what I had done, stuck among the branches of our Christmas tree. It all began because my husband Mike hated Christmas. Oh, not the true meaning of Christmas, but the commercial aspects of it, overspending, the gifts given in desperation because you couldn’t think of anything else.
Knowing he felt this way, I decided one year to bypass (避开) the usual shirts, sweaters, ties and so on. I tried to find a special present just for Mike. The inspiration came in an unusual way.
Our son, Kevin, who was 12 that year, was wrestling at the junior level at the school he attended, and shortly before Christmas, there was a non-league match against a team Sponsored by an inner-city church.
These youngsters, dressed in sneakers so ragged (褴褛的) that shoes seemed to be the only thing holding them together, presented a sharp contrast to our boys in the spiffy blue and gold uniforms and sparkling new wrestling hoes. As the match began I was alarmed to see that the other team was wrestling without headgear, a kind of light helmet designed to protect a wrestler’s cars. It was a luxury the ragged team obviously could not afford. Well, we ended up defeating them. We took every weight class.
Mike, seated beside me, shook his head sadly, “I wish one of them could have won,” he said. They have a lot of potential, but losing like this could take the heart right out of them.”Mike loved kids, all kids, and he knew them, having coached little league football, baseball and lacrosse.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
That was when the idea of his Christmas present came.
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Feeling their dad’s happiness, my children joined me.
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That’s when the idea for his present came. That afternoon, I went to a local sporting goods store and bought an assortment of wrestling headgear and shoes and sent them anonymously to the inner-city church. On Christmas Eve, I placed the envelope on the tree, the note inside telling Mike what I had done and that this was his gift from me. His smile was the brightest thing about Christmas that year and in succeeding years.
Feeling their dad’s happiness, my children joined me. Each of our children, unbeknownst to the others, had placed an envelope on the tree for their dad. The tradition has grown and someday will expand even further with our grandchildren standing around the tree with wide-eyed anticipation watching as their fathers take down the envelope. Mike’s spirit, like the Christmas spirit, will always be with us.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者的丈夫并不喜欢圣诞节,于是作者想到了给她丈夫送一份特殊的圣诞礼物,一个信封,里面讲述了作者所做的一切,为了使他的丈夫在圣诞感到快乐。
【详解】1.段落续写
①由第一段首句内容“就在这时,想到了给他送什么圣诞礼物。”可知,第一段主要写送了什么圣诞礼物给Mike,并使他感到高兴。
②由第二段首句内容“感受到父亲的幸福,我的孩子们也加入了我的行列。”可知,第二段可写,我的孩子们也趁大家不注意的时候,在圣诞树上放了一封写给爸爸的信。并且把这个传统延续下去。
2. 续写线索:mike不喜欢圣诞——想到礼物——mike看到礼物感到高兴——孩子们加入进来——传统延续。
3. 词汇激活
行为类
①购买:buy/purchase
②放置:place/put/lay up
③扩大:expand/enlarge/develop
情绪类
①幸福:happiness/gladness/contentment
②预期:anticipation/expectation
【点睛】[高分句型1.] On Christmas Eve, I placed the envelope on the tree, the note inside telling Mike what I had done and that this was his gift from me.(what和that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2.]The tradition has grown and someday will expand even further with our grandchildren standing around the tree with wide-eyed anticipation watching as their fathers take down the envelope.(as引导的时间状语从句)
Writing 06
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“JAMIE EVANS.”
Oh no. Please tell me that Coach Cafferty did NOT just say my name. Not for the one-hundred-meter breaststroke (蛙泳). Except all eyes were turned to me when she announced it, and her eyes met mine over the clipboard (剪贴板) that held the list of events and swimmers for the Plain Township Aquatic Center meet. The PTAC meet was the first of the season, and I was not ready.
“Remember, the meet is on Wednesday night. Be here at four-thirty for and the race kicks off at six. I’ll see you at practice tomorrow.” Coach Cafferty added. The crowd cleared quickly and I headed back home, feeling desperate.
“Did you find out your events for Wednesday?” Mom asked as she slid the pizza box across the table to me.
“Yeah. One-hundred breaststroke,” I finally said, not meeting her eyes. “I don’t know why Coach didn’t give me backstroke (仰泳). She knows it’s my best. I can’t swim breaststroke!”
“Maybe she sees something you don’t.” Mom said.
“Or maybe I should just quit the swim team.”
Mom frowned. “Is that what you want?”
I sighed. “No.” I took a bite of my pizza. “I’m terrible at breaststroke. What happens when I show up on Wednesday and race, and I sink to the bottom of the pool? Or even worse,come in last?”
“Someone has to be last.” Mom pointed out.
“But I don’t even know if I can swim breaststroke for one-hundred meters!” I set my pizza down. “She had submitted the names, but there’s no way I can do this.”
“You could. But how will you know unless you try?” Mom persuaded.
“Yeah, but if I try, I could fail. In front of everyone.” I pictured the entire crowd watching as I finished last, pointing and laughing. My belly squeezed.
Mom set her pizza down and gave me her I’m-saying-something-important-so-listen face. “Don’t worry about other people. Just race against yourself. Forget about anything else except doing your best and swimming your own race. Prove to yourself that you can do it.”
Somehow, there seemed a mysterious power in her words comforting my unsettling heart and I decided to have a try. The next day, I was at practice as required.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:
The first practice was a disaster.
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Paragraph 2:
Then everything crashed in the last 5 meters of the race.
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Paragraph 1:
The first practice was a disaster. I didn’t swim breaststroke for one-hundred meters and sank to the bottom of the pool. I could feel people surrounding were all pointing and laughing. What a shame! Face blushing, I was about to give up again when mom’s words resounded in my mind, “Don’t worry about other people. Just race against yourself.” Calmness gradually seizing me, I continued to practise and gradually made progress in the following practices. Finally, Wednesday came and I arrived at the pool hall nervously. Soon it was my turn and to my surprise, I had a good beginning.
Paragraph 2:
Then everything crashed in the last 5 meters of the race. My legs were pillars of lead. I kicked, but it felt like I was moving through cement. My arms were on fire, and my lungs were bursting. I slapped it with what little energy I had left. There was no one else left in the pool. I had finished last. After the meet, Mom found me, exhausted, collapsing in a chair. “I’m so proud of you,” she said. “I lost.” “Yeah.” She nodded. “But you did it, right?” I bit my lip. “Yeah. I guess I did.” I didn’t come close to placing, but I had given everything I had to finish. “I swam my race. And I think I won.” Race is not only to beat your competitors but also to race against yourself.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者被选为参加一百米蛙泳比赛,但是作者并不擅长,担心自己会输掉比赛,后来在母亲的开导下,作者认真训练,并参加了比赛,尽管最后并未得到冠军,但是战胜了自己。
【详解】1. 段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“第一次练习是一场灾难。”可知,第一段可描写作者第一次训练,情况很糟糕,但是想到母亲的话,最后作者坚持了下来。
②由第二段首句内容“然后在比赛的最后5米,一切都崩溃了。”可知,第二段可描写作者最后还是输掉了比赛,母亲来安慰作者,虽然没有赢竞争对手,但是赢了自己。
2. 续写线索:被选为参加一百米蛙泳比赛——感到担心——向母亲抱怨——母亲安慰——参加训练——坚持完成比赛——感悟
3. 词汇激活
行为类
①回响:resound/reverberate
②练习:practise/train/discipline
③我认为:I think/I consider/in my opinion
④完成:finish/accomplish/complete
情绪类
①紧张的:nervously/anxiously/restlessly
②惊讶:surprise/amaze/astonish
【点睛】[高分句型1] Face blushing, I was about to give up again when mom’s words resounded in my mind, “Don’t worry about other people.(运用了独立主格作状语和when引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] I kicked, but it felt like I was moving through cement.(运用了省略that的宾语从句)
Writing 07
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A Great Monday
Monday started out great. I woke up on time, ate breakfast and did some last minute studying for my math test that day. I was confident that I would get a high mark. I left my house, and minutes later, I was sitting with my friends on the school bus. We were busy talking about how we spent our weekend. At one stop, a boy named Ryan got on hurriedly. He tripped(绊倒) over someone’s foot and THUMP! He fell flat onto the floor.
Every one of us on the bus looked on and laughed crazily. Ryan picked himself up, dusted his jacket and made his way to an empty seat. He tried to laugh with us, but his face was burning with embarrassment. The rest of the morning flew by. I did well in my math test. It wasn’t long before the lunch bell rang. I met my friends from the cheerleading team in the dining hall.
When we finished eating, we headed out to the courtyard to practice a cheer we would do at that night’s football game. After much practice, we finally managed to do the cheer perfectly. We decided to practice it again one last time. Again, just like the rest of my day so far, the cheer was going great. I raised my leg for one last toe touch. RIIPPP! I felt my jeans was torn down in the middle of my backside.
I froze(僵住了). I had no idea what to do but stand still. Then I heard people burst out laughing and I saw them pointing at my broken jeans. Trying to cover myself with my hands, I tried to laugh too, but I felt tears began to well up in my eyes.
注意:1. 续写的词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:
Then I saw Ryan running towards me.
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Paragraph 2:
That night, after the cheer at the football game, I found Ryan.
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One possible version
Then I saw Ryan running towards me. Suddenly the scene struck me where he fell flat and I laughed at him crazily, I thought he would join in with those laughing at me. I lowered, my head, my face burning with embarrassment. However, Ryan didn’t laugh. Instead, he approached me from behind, quickly took off his jacket and offered it to me, signaling to me to cover my torn jeans. Struggling against my tears, I did want to express my gratitude to him but courage failed me. I left the courtyard in total silence.
That night, after the cheer at the football game, I found Ryan. I thanked him for giving me his jacket and returned it to him. Gathering my courage, I sincerely apologized to him for my misconduct on the bus, and thanked him for helping me out of an equally embarrassing situation. Ryan, with a broad smile, patted me on the shoulder and told me to forget about it, joking he fell like that a lot. I admired his honesty and sense of humor, and realized that he was someone I could be great friends with. Honestly, Monday was a great day indeed!
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者在公交车上见到同学Ryan被绊倒,引起大家,包括作者,一起哄笑,这使Ryan很尴尬。下午作者在准备足球赛进行训练时,不幸牛仔裤从屁股的中间撕开了,这也引起大家的哄笑,正在作者尴尬得无地自容的时候,Ryan跑过来,帮助作者解脱尴尬处境的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“然后我看到Ryan朝我跑过来。”可知,第一段可描写Ryan帮助作者解脱尴尬处境。
②由第二段首句内容“那天晚上,在足球比赛的欢呼过后,我找到了Ryan。”可知,第二段可描写作者找到Ryan,为自己的不礼貌而道歉,为Ryan的帮助而表示感谢。
2.续写线索:尴尬——走近——帮助——离开——感谢——道歉——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.走近:approach/step close to
②.离开:leave/depart from
情绪类
①.尴尬:thank/be grateful/show gratitude
②.道歉:apologize/say sorry to
【点睛】[高分句型1]. Suddenly the scene struck me where he fell flat and I laughed at him crazily, I thought he would join in with those laughing at me. (由关系副词where引导的分隔式定语从句作the scene的定语)
[高分句型2]. Gathering my courage, I sincerely apologized to him for my misconduct on the bus, and thanked him for helping me out of an equally embarrassing situation. (运用了非谓语动词现在分词作状语)
Writing 08
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
From Tiger to Goldfish
Josh is my 10-year- old grandson. I love him so much that I find it very difficult to refuse any one of his requirements. Besides, he is good at persuading me. So, it’s really a big challenge to take him out sometimes. But now, I consider myself to be quite courageous. Perhaps that’s why I recently decided to take him to a fair.
At the first ringtoss booth, Josh was absolutely certain that he could win that five foot-tall tiger because he told me he was a real expert at tossing rings. They had such kind of game played at school and he practiced a lot at school. He told me that he was often the winner of the ringtoss. The guy in the booth said, “You could buy one ring for 50 cents, or three for $ 1. But if you wanted a real bargain, you could get 20 rings for $ 5.”
Of course, Josh said, “We should go for the bargain.” I thought about arguing with him by saying that an expert ringtosser like him would need only one ring. But I knew this was not an argument I was going to win. So I pulled out the $ 5 bill and placed it on the counter. Twenty rings later, he still didn’t have the tiger. “But now I see how to do this," Josh said. “Let’s buy another 20 rings, and I’ll get it this time.”
Well, he never did get the tiger, but there were plenty more places where we could spend our money. Josh was equally unsuccessful at the next several booths. My wallet was getting thinner. And then we spotted the booth that Josh positively could not miss: the goldfish booth, All you had to do was toss a ping- pong ball into just one of the many fishbowls, and you could go home with your very own goldfish.
注意:
1.续写的词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As we got down to the last ball, I was secretly relieved that the goldfish would be staying at the fair.
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The look of pure happiness on Josh’s face made the entire fair experience one to treasure.
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One possible version:
As we got down to the last ball, I was secretly relieved that the goldfish would be staying at the fair. As I had expected, Josh missed every toss successfully. But wait! It was the last day of the fair, and the guy in the booth didn’t want to take those fish home. So he was giving them away to anyone who played. “You’re a winner!” he told Josh as he scooped a goldfish into a plastic bag filled with water and handed it over to Josh.
The look of pure happiness on Josh’s face made the entire fair experience one to treasure. No amount of money can buy that joy. Josh decided that we could not spend another second at the fair. No, we had to rush home to get the fish into a proper tank because living in a plastic bag was not a good experience for this darling little creature, which he immediately named Goldie.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者带自己的孙子Josh去集市,Josh想要掷环来赢得老虎,结果钱包越来越瘪了,但还是没能得到老虎,他们又来到了金鱼的摊位,只需要把一个乒乓球扔进众多鱼缸中的一个,你就可以带着你自己的金鱼回家了。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“当我们来到最后一个球时,我暗自庆幸金鱼会留在集市上。”可知,第一段可描写Josh一个也没投中,没能得到金鱼,但是摊主送给我们一条金鱼。
②由第二段首句内容“乔什脸上洋溢着纯粹的快乐,这让整个集市的经历都变得值得珍惜。”可知,第二段可描写Josh很开心,要赶回家把金鱼放到鱼缸里。
2.续写线索:爷爷带Josh去集市——Josh没有掷中老虎——Josh没投中金鱼——摊主送金鱼——Josh高兴——Josh想冲回家
3.词汇激活
行为类
①没投中:miss every toss/let slip every toss
②递给某人:hand sth. over to sb./pass sth. to sb.
③冲回家:rush home/hurry home
情绪类
①高兴:joy/delight
②心爱的:darling/beloved
【点睛】[高分句型1] So he was giving them away to anyone who played. (由关系代词who引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] No, we had to rush home to get the fish into a proper tank because living in a plastic bag was not a good experience for this darling little creature, which he immediately named Goldie. (由because引导的原因状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
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