18 险境求生篇（专项训练）-2026年高考英语读后续写高分突破训练

18 险境求生篇 一、险境求生类常用词汇 中文 英文 中文 英文 被困 筋疲力尽 心提到嗓子眼 毫不犹豫 吓得僵住 简要介绍情况 救援人员 安然无恙 一线希望 获救 感激的泪水 浓烟 呼救 湍急的水 用尽全身力气 （火势）蔓延 快不行了（体力不支） 电闪雷鸣 急救 扭伤（肢体） 松了一口气 流血 暴风雪 吞噬（物体） 狂风暴雨 捷径 海浪 迷路 地震 温度骤降 火灾 食物和水耗尽 二、险境求生类常用句型 一、突遭意外：灾害降临与困境初现 1．汤姆震惊地发现水一直上涨。他被困在他的房子里，他的心一下子提到了嗓子眼。 2．一场猛烈的暴风雪席卷了这个地区。 3．窗外猛烈的暴风雨席卷了整个小镇。 4．大约 12 米高的海浪涌来，淹没了一切。 5．忽然间，地面震动，大地仿佛要裂开了。 6．在西风的助推下，火势在森林中迅速蔓延。 7．我想走捷径，但迷路了。 8．美洲狮向它的猎物逼近。 二、雪上加霜：危机加剧与处境恶化 1．吓得僵住了，他站在那里一动不动，各种可怕的想法向他涌来。 2．风暴将至，天空变得一片漆黑。 3．此外，食物和水快用完了。 4．更糟糕的是，发动机停止了运行。 5．他的左腿已经扭伤了，根本不能动。 6．他的右腿被一块石头压住了，他看起来无助又绝望。 7．他们一直在喊救命，但没有人来。 8．他大喊大叫，但湍急的水声淹没了他的声音。 9．我躺在地上，头晕目眩。 10.在那些日子里，他饥寒交迫。 三、求生行动与救援到来 1．幸运的是，一些救援人员来帮助他了，给他带来了最后一线希望。镇静立即替代了心里不断增加的恐惧和不安。 2．听到尖叫声，亨利跑到河边，扔掉衣服，毫不犹豫地跳进了水里。 3．尽管紧张和焦虑，Norwood 努力让自己镇静下来，并对 Simmons 进行了急救。 4．在绝望的泪水中，她突然看到一条船，上面有一个人在走动。她挥挥手，用尽全身力气喊救命。 5．那个人听到 Sydney 的叫声就冲了过来。Sydney 向他简要介绍了情况，男子毫不犹豫地帮助了女子。 6．幸运的是，这一次成功了。因此，那位女士把卡在喉咙里的食物吐了出来，开始大口喘气，她得救了。 7．看到 Simmons 从昏倒中醒来，Norwood 松了一口气。 四、峰回路转：希望与成功脱险 1．他还抱着最后一线希望。 2．她把所有的希望都寄托在有人能注意到烟雾上。 3．虽然我们的食物维持不了多久，但我们坚信我们很快就会获救。 4．这三个孩子安然无恙。 5．美洲狮立即逃走了。 6．令他们惊讶的是，这个毛茸茸的 “巨人” 突然不再追逐他们，好像意识到了他们没有恶意。 7．美洲狮走了，但 Larrane 充满智慧和勇气的故事依然在村子内外流传。 8．这个英雄事迹的消息在她的小村子里不胫而走。 9．他们仍然有一线希望能把她活着找到。 10.她还没有放弃，期待被救援人员发现。 五、感悟与总结 1．遭受了这么多，汤姆再也不能抑制自己的情绪，感激的泪水像断了线的珠子一样滚下他的脸颊。 2．后来，当被问及是什么给了她在冰冷的水中和极度的恐惧中继续下去的力量和毅力时，Kiana 认为这和家庭有关。“我只是想救我的家人，我不希望他们发生任何不好的事情。所以我没有时间去担心或害怕。” 她说。 3．我们从这个事件中学到：生命非常有价值，拯救生命的技能更有价值。 三、高考真题演练 2020年7月浙江卷 One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside “ the polar bear capital of the world ” — the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada. Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears — like all wild animals — should be photographed from a safe distance. When I’m face to face with a polar bear, I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes, that is easier said than done. This was one of those times. As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our garlic bread. The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts. Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though — he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws (爪子). I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter (相遇), I took some pictures of the bear. Elli and I feared the fence wouldn’t last through 30 more minutes of the bear’s punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears’ eyes, but doesn’t hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and, through the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar (吼叫), the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes. 注意： 1． 所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 2． 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3． 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4． 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Para 1: A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. ___________________ Para 2: At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. _____________________________ 四、模拟题演练01 Writing01 阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was a fine summer morning, perfect to be outdoors. Two sisters had been out mushroom picking, and were on their way home with heavy baskets full of mushrooms. They sang songs on the way, and played with each other. Soon they reached a point where they had to cross a railway track. They did not think twice about crossing it since there was no train coming, and they could not hear any whistle. They slowly climbed the steep railway embankment, taking care not to drop the baskets. They were very near the track and the little sister Mary was about to cross it first when a train whistled in the distance. Hearing the train coming, Rose the elder sister quickly ran down. She thought that the young one was following her. But as she turned back, she was shocked to see her little sister still up there crossing the track. “Come back here! Run back fast!” she shouted. Mary seemed not to hear the whistle nor her sister’s cry as she was concentrating on stepping over the track with her little feet, and holding on to the basket. Then she tripped and fell on the track, scattering her mushrooms around. The engine driver panicked on seeing a girl between the tracks who was on her hands and knees and he blew the horn with all his strength. Poor Mary, who was frightened by the coming danger, froze and didn’t know what to do. When Rose saw the scene, she screamed at the top of her voice for Mary’s attention. Mary noticed that her sister was not around and cried for help. With the train drawing near, the engine driver grew extremely anxious. As hard as he could, he kept blowing the whistle and started reducing speed. Yet it was not possible for him to stop the heavy train within such a short distance. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Rose wouldn’t watch the tragedy happen before her eyes. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The train rolled over and finally stopped. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Writing02 It was last February. Noel, a 28-year-old marketing manager was heading from Iceland’s Keflavik International Airport to the capital city Reykjavik with the modern traveler’s two essentials: a dream and a GPSunit. What could go wrong? The dream had been with him since April 14, 2010 when he watched TV news report of the volcano eruption in Iceland. Dark-haired, with a youthful face and thick eyebrows, he had never travelled beyond the United States and his native Mexico. “I want to see this through my own eyes,” he thought as he watched the news on his couch. Four months later, on a cold winter morning, he was driving from Keflavik Airport in a rented car towards a hotel in Reykjavik, excited that his one-week journey was beginning. As the pink sun rose over the ocean and shone light on the snow-covered lava rocks along the shore, he dutifully followed the commands of the GPS that came with the car, a calm female voice directing him to an address—a left here, a right there. But after stopping on a deserted road, he got a feeling that the voice might be steering (引导) him wrong. He had been driving for nearly an hour, yet the GPS put his arrival time at around eight hours later. He entered his destination again and got the same result. Though he sensed that something was off, he made a choice to trust the machine. The farther he drove, the fewer cars he saw. The roads became icier. He was sleepy, cold and hungry. He hadn’t set up his phone for international use, so that was no help. Another three hours passed. As his tires skidded (打滑) along a narrow mountain road that skirted a steep cliff.he knew that the device had failed him. He was lost. He didn’t know where else to go. There was no one else on the road, and there was nothing else to do but follow the line on the screen to its mysterious end. Paragraph 1 The directions ended at a small blue house in a tiny town. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Knowing what had happened, the woman offered to help him. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Writing03 I was finally going to see Giant Rock with my brothers and Dad. I’d been snowshoeing before, and I liked the adventure of hiking through deep snow alongside wild-animal tracks. After putting on our snowshoes, we studied the map. Dad said, “We start here on the red trail, and then we turn left onto the purple one. That’s where Giant Rock is. Remember to stick together, guys!” The trail ran uphill alongside a stone wall. It was easy to follow because red markers were nailed to the trees and the snow had been packed down by other hikers. Half way up the hill, we turned onto the winding purple trail. We settled into a rhythm, with Dad and everyone else in front and me in the back, crunch-crunching through the snow. The late afternoon sun felt warm, although it was already sinking lower. I saw lots of animal tracks-mostly deer, squirrel, and rabbit prints, which I recognized from my field guide. An hour later, we topped the hill and saw the massive rock sitting alone in the forest. “It is really huge, as big as a house!” my brother Josh said, gazing up. Breathlessly standing in the rock’s giant shadow, I noticed the sun had dipped even lower. “Let’s head back,” Dad said. I was a little behind the group when I noticed a set of animal tracks I didn’t recognize. They were hard to see among the snowshoe prints, so I followed them off the trail for a closer look. There were no claw marks, which meant they didn’t belong to a dog or a fox. Instead, they looked like tiny handprints and footprints. “Must be a raccoon (浣熊),” I thought, matching them to prints in my guide. I looked up when I suddenly realized how quiet it had gotten. I was totally alone. “Hey!” I shouted. “Where is everyone?” nothing. Just the sound of my own breathing. “They couldn’t have gone far. I’ll catch up to them if I hurry,” I thought, stepping back onto the trail. The light had grown darker by the second. Without flashlight and phone, I began running. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。 I came to where I could turn right or go straight. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ “Stop and think,” I told myself, picturing the map again. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Writing04 One day, my brother and I were coming back from the islands where we often risked going and got more fish than others. All at once, the sky was covered with dark clouds and in less than a minute we were in a terrible storm. A huge wave covered our boat and we nearly fell into the sea. My brother put his mouth close to my ear and cried out “Moskoe-strom!” The moment I heard the word I became very frightened. I knew what he meant by that one word well enough. With the wind and waves, we were going in the direction of the whirlpool (漩涡). We were hopeless. Nothing could save us. I felt sick, as if I was falling from a mountain top in a dream. We went round and round, nearer and nearer to the horrible edge of the whirlpool. It may appear strange, but at that moment, when we were on the edge of the whirlpool, I felt calmer than when we were moving towards it. I began to think how amazing a thing it was to die in such a way, and how wonderful it was to see the power of nature. Suddenly, we went over the edge. I thought my life was over. But moment after moment passed, and I was still safe. The boat was on the inside of the huge whirlpool and we were going round in circles at great speed. I saw clearly that there were other objects in the whirlpool—trees and barrels (水桶). After a while, I became curious about the whirlpool itself. I then made three important observations. The first, the larger the bodies were, the more rapidly they fell; the second, between two objects of equal extent, round objects fell down less rapidly; and the third, between two objects of the same size, objects shaped like a tube fell down more slowly. So I tied myself to a barrel to help me float. I tried to make my brother understand, but he was too frightened and stayed in the boat. Without waiting, I jumped into the sea to try and escape. 注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Some time after I left the boat, I saw my brother struggling in the sea. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Soon after that, the whirlpool became less wild and then the sky was clear. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Writing05 It was an unusually hot day. Exhausted after football practice, I headed for the bus stop to wait for Bus 112 which would take me home. I was beginning to drift off to sleep when I saw the bus arriving. The sun was in my eyes and that was probably the reason why I got onto Bus 113 I was glad to get a seat. Within minutes, I was sting against the window, fast asleep. When I opened my eyes, it was dark outside. I was the only passenger left on the bus. I could not recognize the part of town we were passing through. I pressed the bell and the bus stopped. I planned to hop across the road and catch a bus going the opposite direction. However, I found myself on a quiet street with a row of shops that were all closed. I kicked myself for not asking the driver for directions. As I was wondering what to do, a motorcycle came down the road. The rider looked at me as he passed and then stopped a short distance away. I went to him and asked him how to get back to the City Square. He smiled and nodded. He patted the back seat and said that he would send me home. Without a second thought, I climbed up behind the rider. He turned the motorcycle around and headed in the direction I wanted. We travelled for about 15 minutes and the surroundings still looked unfamiliar to me. The rider made a few turns and I knew I was hopelessly lost. I asked him where we were going, He did not answer but increased his speed. Alarm bells started to ring in my head. I tapped the man, shoulder and told him to stop. He leaned forward and went at high speed now. Then he slowed down to turn into a dark and narrow road that led into an oil palm plantation. I had had enough. 注意: 1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下超式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I jumped off the vehicle and fell onto the ground. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I got off the taxi and rushed into my house. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Writing06 It’s a beautiful sunny day. The Bonds boarded their boat for a carefree day trip to Dove Island for some fishing as a family custom. Thomas Bond, a 30-year-old construction worker, loved the sport, especially catching bass (鲈鱼) and had impressed on his oldest daughter, Lizzy, a love of the outdoors, teaching her how to bait (下诱饵) a hook and cast a line and brave the waves. The family spent the day fishing in the vast ocean, and then left the island in the early evening. Upon setting off from the shore, they found thick fog rolling in. Lizzy fell into a light sleep beside her five-year-old sister, Molly, at a table on the boat’s lower deck (甲板). Their father’s sharp orders woke her up: “Get out of the boat. The boat’s sinking!” Lizzy pushed her sister into the cold, dark water. Both girls wore life jackets. The adults did not. The girls were followed by their mother, Petra Bond, who was expecting a baby at that time. Within seconds, the boat was damaged and was left just the tip of its bow in the air. Looking into the faces of her father, mother, and sister, Lizzy wasn’t frightened. After some time, her father told them he would swim for help. “I’ll be back,” he said before disappearing into the darkness. “Dad is like the superhero to me. I believe he will get help to rescue us,” Lizzy said to herself. After some time, her mother became quiet and stopped swimming. Lizzy wrapped a rope around her mother’s chest and tied her to the boat so she wouldn’t float away. Then her sister fell quiet too and she stayed beside her. To keep herself awake, Lizzy daydreamed about what they would do after they were rescued. They would stay in a hotel, order room service, and lie comfortably under the blankets in bed, cozy and warm. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 After several hours, Lizzy heard her name called in the distance. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ On the coast, an ambulance was waiting for them. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 五、模拟题演练02 Writing 01 When I was in the eighth grade, I became interested in mountain climbing. Then I climbed my first mountain— a fairly gentle 3,900-foot peak near where I live in surrey, British Columbia. I loved the challenge of conquering something bigger than myself. I like climbing more and more. Soon I’d climbed nearly l00 peaks. My parents were happy I’d finally found a hobby. Two years ago, on December 30, when I was 16, I drove to Oregon to climb 11,240-foot Mount Hood with my friend Mel Olsen. It’s safer to start winter climbs at night when there’s less risk of the sun melting the snowpack (积雪). That day, we started at 3 a.m. The temperature was about 14 degrees. Along the way, we met two other climbers, and the four of us continued on together. After about five hours, we reached Devil’s Kitchen, a plateau at about l0,000 feet. By this point, the wind conditions were nasty (极糟糕的). My exposed skin felt as though it were burning. The trail we followed grew narrower and steeper. At around 9 a.m. , we reached an ice step. I volunteered to go first. I placed my left foot on it. Confident I was safe, I put my full weight on it. Suddenly, I heard a loud noise, and a whole slab of ice broke off the step, right under my foot. In an instant, I fell backward, rolling down the mountain as if I were a character in a video game. After a few seconds, I came to a stop on a shallow slope just above the Devil’s Kitchen. I’d fallen 600 feet. My clothes were torn into small pieces, my helmet was broken, and my face was bloodied from cuts and scratches. Fortunately, for the most part, I was fine, except that I was suffering from a sharp, great pain in my left leg. 注意: l. 续写词数应为 l50 左右; 2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 I yelled for help. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ This accident made me have a deep reflection, but I was back climbing again. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Writing 02 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文，续写词数应为150左右。 Malachi Bradley doesn’t show signs of being panicked or worried when he talks about how he spent 29 hours lost in a rough area of the High Uintas. “I didn’t really feel scared. I was just trying to get back to my family,” the 10-year-old said Tuesday in a quiet, almost matter-of-fact way just one day after he was rescued. When asked what happened to him, he simply replied: “A lot of things. I hiked a long way.” Malachi confidently believes he could have survived two or three weeks on his own, dressed in only his jeans and his shoes, and with no food, tent or blankets. But the look in the eyes of Malachi’s father, Danny Bradley, told a different story, one of much deeper concern, when he realized his son was missing. “It’s a horrible feeling, just knowing how vast the Uinta Mountains are,” he said, “I quickly felt how severe the situation was.” Malachi recalled his great adventure Tuesday. He showed no signs of going without food for a day or sleeping between rocks for an hour at night to block the cold wind. But he admitted when he got home to his own bed on Monday night that he was asleep within a minute of his head hitting his pillow and stayed there for 12 hours. His adventure began Sunday when Malachi, his father, two siblings(兄弟姐妹), and a family friend were about to leave their campsite near Paul Lake to go home. “We were just going to cook up a fish he caught and head out, and,” Danny Bradley paused, “it ended up being a lot longer.” Malachi said he went to look for mushrooms about 10:30 a.m. He had just walked a long way when he encountered a snake. He was so frightened that he decided to get back but he could no longer see the lake where his campsite was set up. He knew he was lost. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Malachi didn’t have his whistle with him that he normally carries in case he gets lost when exploring. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ But on Monday afternoon, Malachi took off his shoes to take a break in an open area and heard another helicopter nearby. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Writing 03 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 Brady was a recently retired search and rescue dog. He was not happy and missed his owner Al because Al had gone out on a rescue mission without him. Al’s nephew Steve took Brady along when he and his friend Zach went on a overnight hike. But suddenly Steve and Zach smelled something burning and they realized that lightning had set the woods on fire. Wind-blown flame had leaped from the top of one tree to another. The long dry summer had turned the forest into a tinderbox(火绒箱) and the thunderstorm wasn’t helping much. It had more wind and lightning than rain. Zach pulled Steve’s arm. “Let’s go! We can make it back to the river we crossed today.” Steve pulled Brady’s leash（皮带） and their heads down against the strong fire-wind, they hurried down the path they had followed earlier. The air was full of smoke，and pine branches broke from burning trees with a crisp sound. Steve kept his eyes on the route. All they had to do was to make it down to the river… Brady barked a sharp warning. Ahead of them lay a dense curtain of smoke across the path. They’d never make it through that. They would have to find another escape route. The dog was pulling at his leash trying to draw them away from the smoke. This was what Brady was trained to do, and yet Steve was uneasy. It seemed to him they were moving away from the river. Brady lifted his head and smelled the smoky wind. Suddenly, the dog ran away and disappeared. The boys yelled and shouted for him，but he didn’t come back. They had no choice but to leave him behind. Heartsick, Steve and Zach went up aslope（斜坡）. He couldn’t blame Brady for panicking and escaping. He himself wanted to run even though he didn’t have a clue which way. They hadn’t gone far when there was a familiar bark, and Brady came running toward him. Paragraph1： “Where’ve you been?” Steve cried. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2： Brady led them back down the slope and into the trees. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Writing 04 阅读下而材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The Biggest Dog on the Mountain We liked hiking together. Today, we were looking for a trail over Wallace Mountain. ”It’s been over an hour,” said Jessc, my nineteen-year-old son. “Do you think the trail still exists?” We had explored several paths but with no luck. We pushed through weeds mid-calf high for us, but neck-high for our rusty-brown dog, Shadow. Once in a while, we would call Shadow back when she was attracted by the pleasant smell of flowers. No longer slim and bouncing with energy, Shadow was the size of a large house cat, and always content to curl up on the couch beside one of us. Suddenly, we heard what sounded like many dogs barking in the distance, an unusual sound in the wilderness around us. Curious, we climbed the ridge (山脉), only to find what seemed like a dog factory. Small dogs, big dogs, brown dogs, and dogs I can’t even describe poured out. The hounds (猎狗) hit the ground, sniffing the air and turning to face us. Before long, they went down from their side of the mountain. Jesse shot an alarmed glance at me before turning to call in a firm voice, “Shadow, come here, stay.” I patted my pockets, feeling for the pepper spray (防狼喷雾), so small it would never work against so many animals. I turned, surveying the nearby brush for a potential weapon. With the help of adrenaline (肾上腺素), I broke off two thick branches from a tree and rushed to Jesse’s side, “Here you are!” “OK,” he said, “Dad, they are coming to us.” My-mouth went dry. I glanced over at Jesse, his lips pinched (夹紧) tight. The pack emerged from the valley, marching straight toward us. The dogs in the lead were now close enough for us to see that most of them were three times larger than Shadow. With deep growls (怒吼声)，they ran straight for us. Jesse swallowed hard and looked at me. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Shadow’s back fur rose. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Surprisingly, the entire mass of dogs turned tail and fled. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Writing 05 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。 My husband, Donald, took our daughter Sarah out for some ice cream the night before driving her to college. As they were walking back to the car, they saw a young man sitting on the ground and giving his puppy a cone. “A cute dog,” Donald said as they walked by. “A free dog,” the young man replied. Donald asked him what he meant by that and the man explained. He was moving away from Vermont and did not think the travel would be good for the dog. He had raised her from a small puppy. The man said she was a 6-month-old cross between the Doberman and the Labrador named Rhubarb. Donald took his phone number. The rest, as they say, is history. Rhubarb was a sweet dog and very friendly and loved everyone. Whenever someone came to the house, she was always happy. She also got along with Willie, an older Samoyed we had. Willie was not well and died about a year later, but, fortunately, Rhubarb’s company helped him keep going for longer than that if he had been alone. But the interesting thing about Rhubarb was that she never barked. She would sometimes get excited when she saw a chipmunk (花栗鼠) and make a little crying sound. One hot night when she was about 4 years old, we went to bed with the windows open and the doors unlocked. At about 3 a.m., I woke up to the sound of Rhubarb barking. I woke Donald and we got out of bed. Rhubarb was coming toward us. We turned on the lights and noticed the door to the kitchen was open. Then we saw the door leading into the house from the garage was also open. We quickly locked all the doors, and we did not get any sleep that night. It was deep into the night, so we didn’t call the police. Paragraph 1: The next day we noticed there was cigarette ash on the floor. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: My purse was right next to the door. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Writing06   阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 Lightning flashed through the darkness over Sibson’s bedroom skylight(天窗). Sibson was shaken by a clap of thunder before he knew what was happening. The storm had moved directly through his twostory wooden house. Then he heard the smoke alarm beeping. Sibson rushed down the stairs barefoot to check. He opened the door to the basement, and flames exploded out. Sibson ran back upstairs to call 911 from his bedroom. “I felt glad because the room had a separate outdoor stairway,” he explained to the media later. But the phone didn’t work, and when he tried to go down the outdoor stairway, he was stopped by a wall of flames. Sibson realized he was trapped. Suddenly, a piece of wood fell from the roof. Sharp pain raced through his body as he looked down and found his leg bleeding. Sibson’s house was three kilometers off the main road and was so well hidden by trees that he knew calling for help would be fruitless. Up a hill nearby lived Sibson’s neighbor, Huggons. He was lying in bed when something like a smoke alarm struck his ears. He jumped out of bed, took his phone and flashlight, and headed down the hillside toward the noise. That was when he saw the rolling heavy smoke. Huggons dialed 911, and the operator warned him not to enter the house. But Huggons said, “There is no way I am going to listen to Sibson scream and die in that fire.” “Anyone there?” Huggons called out. Then he heard “Help! I’m trapped!” coming from the second floor balcony. He entered the house, but soon had to run back to catch his breath. After one more attempt to get inside the house, Huggons gave up and circled around back. The wind parted the smoke just enough for him to catch sight of Sibson. But there was no way to get to him. With the wind fueling the fire, there was no time to waste and the second floor seemed to be falling down in the next minute. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ “Go! Leave me alone!” shouted Sibson with desperate tears in his eyes, “It will kill you, too.” ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Writing07 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Pam Bales left her car and stepped onto the snow-covered Jewell Trail. She planned a six-hour hike through New Hampshire’s Mount Washington State Park. The hike up the lower part of Jewell was pleasant. At 8:30 am, still below the tree line, she took the first in a series of on-the-trail selfies. Less than an hour later, she took another photo, after she’d climbed into colder air and deeper snows. She made her way across the snow-covered ridge toward Mount Washington. Then she noticed something: a single set of footprints in the snow ahead of her. She’d been following faint tracks all day and hadn’t given them much thought, because so many people climb Jewell Trail. But these, she realized, had been made by a pair of trainers, not suitable for hiking on snow. By 11 am, Bales was getting cold and decided to abandon her plan. The only thing keeping Bales on Gulfside Trail was the trainer tracks in the sonw. As she fought the wind and heavy sleet (雨夹雪), the tracks made a hard left-hand turn off the trail. Now she alarmed. She was sure the hiker could get through in the ow visibility and was heading straight toward the challenging trails of the Great Gulf Wilderness. Bales stood there, stunned. The temperature and clouds were in a race to find their lowest point, and darkness was mere hours away. She turned to the left and called out, “Hello!” into the frozen fog. Nothing. She called out again: “Is anybody out there? Do you need help?” The strong westerly winds carried her voice away. She blew into her rescue whistle. For a fleeting moment she thought she heard someone reply, but it was just the wind playing games with her mind. She stood listening, then turned and walked cautiously in the direction of the single set of tracks. Bales followed the tracks cautiously for 20 to 30 meters. She rounded a slight corner and saw a man sitting motionless. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 When she approached him and said hello, he did not react. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ After waking the man up, Bales recognized that they had to get out of there soon. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 18 险境求生篇 一、险境求生类常用词汇 中文 英文 中文 英文 被困 trapped 筋疲力尽 exhausted 心提到嗓子眼 heart jump into one's throat 毫不犹豫 without hesitation 吓得僵住 frozen with fear 简要介绍情况 brief on the situation 救援人员 rescue workers 安然无恙 safe and sound 一线希望 glimmer of hope 获救 be saved 感激的泪水 tears of gratitude 浓烟 heavy smoke 呼救 cry for help 湍急的水 rushing water 用尽全身力气 with all one's strength （火势）蔓延 spread (fire) 快不行了（体力不支） give out 电闪雷鸣 flash of lightning and burst of thunder 急救 first aid 扭伤（肢体） twist (leg/arm) 松了一口气 breathe a sigh of relief 流血 bleed 暴风雪 snowstorm 吞噬（物体） swallow 狂风暴雨 violent storm 捷径 short cut 海浪 waves 迷路 get lost 地震 earthquake 温度骤降 sudden drop in temperature 火灾 fire 食物和水耗尽 food and water run out 二、险境求生类常用句型 一、突遭意外：灾害降临与困境初现 1．汤姆震惊地发现水一直上涨。他被困在他的房子里，他的心一下子提到了嗓子眼。 Tom was shocked to find that the water kept rising. He was trapped in his house and his heart suddenly jumped into his throat. 亮点：“shocked”（震惊的）点明情绪，“kept rising”（一直上涨）体现危机升级，“trapped”（被困）交代核心处境；“heart suddenly jumped into his throat”（心一下子提到嗓子眼）是经典心理描写，生动还原意外发生时的窒息感，适配洪水、暴雨等 “被困” 场景。 2．一场猛烈的暴风雪席卷了这个地区。 A fierce snowstorm had swept through the area. 亮点：“fierce”（猛烈的）强化灾害强度，“swept through”（席卷）是灾害场景高频动词短语；简洁交代暴雪背景，适配 “雪灾求生” 开篇，可替换 “snowstorm” 为 “sandstorm”（沙尘暴）等，通用性强。 3．窗外猛烈的暴风雨席卷了整个小镇。 Out of the window, a violent storm swept across the town. 亮点：“Out of the window”（从窗外）以视角切入，增强代入感；“violent”（猛烈的）“swept across”（席卷）描写暴雨 / 暴风场景，适合 “室内观察室外灾害” 的细节刻画。 4．大约 12 米高的海浪涌来，淹没了一切。 Waves about twelve meters high came rushing in, drowning everything. 亮点：“twelve meters high”（12 米高）用具体数字强化视觉冲击，“came rushing in”（涌来）“drowning everything”（淹没一切）体现海啸 / 洪水的毁灭性，适配 “大规模水患” 场景。 5．忽然间，地面震动，大地仿佛要裂开了。 Suddenly, the ground shook as if the earth were splitting apart. 亮点：“Suddenly”（突然）制造意外感，“shook”（震动）“splitting apart”（裂开）夸张描写地震强度；“as if” 引导比喻，增强画面感，适配 “地震突发” 场景。 6．在西风的助推下，火势在森林中迅速蔓延。 Fanned by a westerly wind, the fire spread rapidly through the forest. 亮点：“Fanned by a westerly wind”（西风助推）交代火势蔓延原因，“spread rapidly”（迅速蔓延）体现火灾紧迫性；适配 “森林火灾”“房屋起火” 等场景，逻辑清晰。 7．我想走捷径，但迷路了。 I tried to take a short cut but got lost. 亮点：“take a short cut”（走捷径）交代迷路原因，“got lost”（迷路）是求生类 “野外困境” 的核心表达；语言简洁，适配森林、山区等 “迷路” 场景，易套用。 8．美洲狮向它的猎物逼近。 The cougar inched towards its prey. 亮点：“inched towards”（缓慢逼近）动作细节充满紧张感，“prey”（猎物）明确猛兽目标；可替换 “cougar” 为 “wolf”（狼）“bear”（熊），适配 “野外遭遇猛兽” 场景。 二、雪上加霜：危机加剧与处境恶化 1．吓得僵住了，他站在那里一动不动，各种可怕的想法向他涌来。 Frozen with fear，he stood rooted to the spot，various terrible thoughts flooding in. 亮点：“Frozen with fear”（吓得僵住）“stood rooted to the spot”（站着不动）描写身体僵直状态，“various terrible thoughts flooding in”（可怕想法涌来）补充心理活动；全方位还原 “极度恐惧”，适配任何危机升级场景。 2．风暴将至，天空变得一片漆黑。 The sky blackened as the storm approached. 亮点：“blackened”（变黑）视觉描写，“as the storm approached”（风暴将至）交代时间逻辑；用环境变化暗示危机加剧，适配暴雨、暴雪、沙尘暴等场景。 3．此外，食物和水快用完了。 Besides, food and water were running out. 亮点：“running out”（快用完）是 “物资短缺” 的高频表达，“Besides”（此外）表递进，体现 “雪上加霜”；适配所有求生场景（如被困、迷路、灾害后），核心且百搭。 4．更糟糕的是，发动机停止了运行。 To make matters worse, the motor stopped working. 亮点：“To make matters worse”（更糟糕的是）是 “危机升级” 的标志性衔接语，“motor stopped working”（发动机停转）具象化设备故障；适配汽车被困、船只故障等场景。 5．他的左腿已经扭伤了，根本不能动。 His left leg had been twisted and he couldn't move it at all. 亮点：“twisted”（扭伤）明确受伤部位与程度，“couldn't move it at all”（完全不能动）强调困境；适配野外摔倒、灾害中被砸伤等 “受伤求生” 场景，细节真实。 6．他的右腿被一块石头压住了，他看起来无助又绝望。 With his right leg trapped under a stone, he looked helpless and desperate. 亮点：“trapped under a stone”（被石头压住）具象化困境，“helpless and desperate”（无助绝望）直接点明情绪；适配地震、塌方、爬山遇险等场景，感染力强。 7．他们一直在喊救命，但没有人来。 They kept shouting for help, but no one came. 亮点：“kept shouting for help”（一直喊救命）体现求生努力，“but no one came”（没人来）突出 “孤立无援”；适配任何 “求救无门” 的场景，如野外迷路、被困废墟等。 8．他大喊大叫，但湍急的水声淹没了他的声音。 He yelled, but the sound of the rushing water drowned him out. 亮点：“rushing water”（湍急的水）交代环境，“drowned him out”（淹没声音）解释求救失败原因；适配洪水、河边遇险场景，逻辑与细节结合。 9．我躺在地上，头晕目眩。 Lying on the ground, I felt dizzy. 亮点：“Lying on the ground”（躺在地上）交代动作，“felt dizzy”（头晕目眩）描写身体不适；适配受伤、饥饿、缺氧等 “体力不支” 场景，简洁易套用。 10.在那些日子里，他饥寒交迫。 During those days, he suffered from both cold and hunger. 亮点：“suffered from both cold and hunger”（饥寒交迫）是求生类 “极端困境” 的经典表达；概括性强，适配雪灾、野外迷路等长时间求生场景。 三、求生行动与救援到来 1．幸运的是，一些救援人员来帮助他了，给他带来了最后一线希望。镇静立即替代了心里不断增加的恐惧和不安。 Luckily，some rescue workers came to his aid，bringing him the last glimmer of hope. A sense of calmness immediately replaced the mounting fear and anxiety in his mind. 亮点：“came to his aid”（来帮助他）“last glimmer of hope”（最后一线希望）标志救援转折；“replaced the mounting fear and anxiety”（替代不断增加的恐惧不安）体现情绪变化，适配 “救援到来” 的关键场景。 2．听到尖叫声，亨利跑到河边，扔掉衣服，毫不犹豫地跳进了水里。 Hearing the screams, Henry ran to the riverside, threw off his clothes and jumped into the water without hesitation. 亮点：“Hearing the screams”（听到尖叫）触发行动，“ran to”“threw off”“jumped into” 连贯动作描写，“without hesitation”（毫不犹豫）体现救援者的果断；适配 “水中救人” 场景，动作画面感强。 3．尽管紧张和焦虑，Norwood 努力让自己镇静下来，并对 Simmons 进行了急救。 Nervous and anxious, Norwood struggled to calm herself down and carried out first aid to Simmons. 亮点：“Nervous and anxious”（紧张焦虑）交代心理，“struggled to calm down”（努力镇静）体现克制，“carried out first aid”（进行急救）是 “医疗求生” 核心动作；适配受伤、窒息等需要急救的场景。 4．在绝望的泪水中，她突然看到一条船，上面有一个人在走动。她挥挥手，用尽全身力气喊救命。 With desperate tears, she suddenly spotted a boat with a figure walking on it. She waved and cried for help with all her strength. 亮点：“With desperate tears”（绝望的泪水）铺垫情绪，“suddenly spotted”（突然看到）制造希望转折；“waved”“cried for help with all her strength”（挥手、用尽力气喊救命）描写求生动作，适配 “水中 / 孤岛求救” 场景。 5．那个人听到 Sydney 的叫声就冲了过来。Sydney 向他简要介绍了情况，男子毫不犹豫地帮助了女子。 The man heard Sydney's cry and rushed over. Sydney briefed him on the situation, and the man did not hesitate to help the woman. 亮点：“rushed over”（冲过来）“briefed him on the situation”（简要介绍情况）“did not hesitate to help”（毫不犹豫帮助）完整还原 “求救 — 救援” 过程；适配任何 “向陌生人求救” 的场景，逻辑连贯。 6．幸运的是，这一次成功了。因此，那位女士把卡在喉咙里的食物吐了出来，开始大口喘气，她得救了。 Happily, it worked this time. As a result, the woman threw up the food stuck in her throat and began gasping for air, and she was saved. 亮点：“it worked”（成功了）“threw up the food stuck in her throat”（吐出卡喉食物）“gasping for air”（大口喘气）细节还原 “窒息救援成功” 过程；适配 “异物卡喉” 等急救场景，结果明确。 7．看到 Simmons 从昏倒中醒来，Norwood 松了一口气。 Seeing Simmons wake up from passing out, Norwood breathed a sigh of relief. 亮点：“wake up from passing out”（从昏倒中醒来）交代救援结果，“breathed a sigh of relief”（松了一口气）体现救援者的情绪释放；适配 “急救成功”“伤者苏醒” 场景，简洁实用。 四、峰回路转：希望与成功脱险 1．他还抱着最后一线希望。 He had one last hope to hold on to. 亮点：“one last hope to hold on to”（最后一线希望）是 “绝境中坚持” 的核心表达；适配任何 “未放弃求生” 的场景，如被困废墟、野外迷路等，传递坚韧感。 2．她把所有的希望都寄托在有人能注意到烟雾上。 She pinned all her hopes on someone noticing the smoke. 亮点：“pinned all her hopes on”（把所有希望寄托在）是经典搭配，“noticing the smoke”（注意到烟雾）具象化求生信号；适配火灾求救、野外生火求救场景，细节具体。 3．虽然我们的食物维持不了多久，但我们坚信我们很快就会获救。 Though our food wouldn't last long, we stuck to the hope that we would be rescued soon. 亮点：“Though”（尽管）引导让步，“wouldn't last long”（维持不了多久）体现困境，“stuck to the hope”（坚持希望）突出信念；适配 “物资短缺但仍抱希望” 的场景，传递正能量。 4．这三个孩子安然无恙。 The three children were safe and sound. 亮点：“safe and sound”（安然无恙）是 “成功脱险” 的标志性表达；简洁有力，适配儿童、家人等 “重要人物获救” 场景，给人安心感。 5．美洲狮立即逃走了。 The cougar fled immediately. 亮点：“fled immediately”（立即逃走）明确猛兽退去结果；可替换 “cougar” 为其他猛兽，适配 “赶走猛兽” 的脱险场景，结果清晰。 6．令他们惊讶的是，这个毛茸茸的 “巨人” 突然不再追逐他们，好像意识到了他们没有恶意。 To their surprise, the furry giant suddenly stopped chasing them, as if it had realized they meant no harm. 亮点：“To their surprise”（令他们惊讶）制造转折，“stopped chasing”（停止追逐）“meant no harm”（没有恶意）解释猛兽退去原因；适配 “与猛兽和解” 的特殊求生场景，情节生动。 7．美洲狮走了，但 Larrane 充满智慧和勇气的故事依然在村子内外流传。 The cougar disappeared, but the story of Larrane's wisdom and bravery was still spreading around the village and beyond. 亮点：“spread around the village and beyond”（在村子内外流传）体现故事的影响力，“wisdom and bravery”（智慧和勇气）升华主题；适配 “凭借智慧战胜猛兽” 的故事结尾，兼具温情与励志。 8．这个英雄事迹的消息在她的小村子里不胫而走。 News of the heroic deed spread through her little village like wildfire. 亮点：“spread like wildfire”（像野火一样蔓延，不胫而走）是经典比喻，“heroic deed”（英雄事迹）点明事件性质；适配 “求生成功后事迹传播” 的结尾，增强故事感染力。 9．他们仍然有一线希望能把她活着找到。 There was still a remote chance that they would find her alive. 亮点：“a remote chance”（一线希望）“find her alive”（活着找到她）体现 “未放弃寻找”；适配 “搜救失联者” 场景，保留希望感，适合故事中段转折。 10.她还没有放弃，期待被救援人员发现。 She had not yet given up hope that she would be found by the rescuers. 亮点：“had not yet given up hope”（尚未放弃希望）“be found by the rescuers”（被救援人员发现）体现个人求生信念；适配 “独自被困” 场景，突出主观能动性。 五、感悟与总结 1．遭受了这么多，汤姆再也不能抑制自己的情绪，感激的泪水像断了线的珠子一样滚下他的脸颊。 Having suffered so much，Tom couldn’t contain his emotions and tears of gratitude trickled down his cheeks，like a broken line of beads. 亮点：“Having suffered so much”（遭受这么多）铺垫情绪，“couldn’t contain his emotions”（抑制不住情绪）“tears of gratitude”（感激的泪水）体现获救后的感动；“like a broken line of beads”（像断了线的珠子）比喻生动，适配 “获救后情绪释放” 场景。 2．后来，当被问及是什么给了她在冰冷的水中和极度的恐惧中继续下去的力量和毅力时，Kiana 认为这和家庭有关。“我只是想救我的家人，我不希望他们发生任何不好的事情。所以我没有时间去担心或害怕。” 她说。 Later, when asked what gave her the strength and perseverance to continue both in the cold water and in great fear. Kiana thought it had to do with family. “I just wanted to save my family, and I didn't want anything bad to happen to them. So I couldn't spare a second to worry or fear.” She said. 亮点：“strength and perseverance”（力量和毅力）点明核心品质，直接引语 “wanted to save my family”（想救家人）揭示求生动力；适配 “为家人坚持求生” 的故事，情感真挚，易引发共鸣。 3．我们从这个事件中学到：生命非常有价值，拯救生命的技能更有价值。 We have learnt from the incident that life is valuable and the skill of saving is more valuable. 亮点：“learnt from the incident”（从事件中学到）引出感悟，“life is valuable”（生命有价值）“skill of saving is more valuable”（拯救技能更有价值）升华主题；适配所有求生故事的结尾，传递普世价值，通用性极强。 三、高考真题演练 2020年7月浙江卷 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside “ the polar bear capital of the world ” — the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada. Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears — like all wild animals — should be photographed from a safe distance. When I’m face to face with a polar bear, I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes, that is easier said than done. This was one of those times. As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our garlic bread. The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts. Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though — he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws (爪子). I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter (相遇), I took some pictures of the bear. Elli and I feared the fence wouldn’t last through 30 more minutes of the bear’s punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears’ eyes, but doesn’t hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and, through the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar (吼叫), the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes. 注意： 1． 所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 2． 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3． 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4． 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Para 1: A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. ___________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Para 2: At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. _____________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ One possible version: Para 1: A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. Then we realized that the spray had only angered him even more, for he seemed much fiercer this time and violently pushed the fence like mad. My heart raced wildly, not knowing what to do. At this critical moment, Elli grabbed several pieces of garlic bread and threw them over the fence. It worked! The bear stopped the attack and ran to the bread. But it wasn’t long before he ate up all the bread and came back again. Para 2: At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. “Thank goodness we are saved!” Elli cried out. Once the helicopter landed, we got onto it in no time, excited and relieved. When we were safe on the helicopter up in the air, I was amazed to spot that the bear had finally torn down the fence and ran towards the food we left behind. I quickly took out the camera and photographed the rare scene — we were robbed by a polar bear! 四、模拟题演练01 Writing01 阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was a fine summer morning, perfect to be outdoors. Two sisters had been out mushroom picking, and were on their way home with heavy baskets full of mushrooms. They sang songs on the way, and played with each other. Soon they reached a point where they had to cross a railway track. They did not think twice about crossing it since there was no train coming, and they could not hear any whistle. They slowly climbed the steep railway embankment, taking care not to drop the baskets. They were very near the track and the little sister Mary was about to cross it first when a train whistled in the distance. Hearing the train coming, Rose the elder sister quickly ran down. She thought that the young one was following her. But as she turned back, she was shocked to see her little sister still up there crossing the track. “Come back here! Run back fast!” she shouted. Mary seemed not to hear the whistle nor her sister’s cry as she was concentrating on stepping over the track with her little feet, and holding on to the basket. Then she tripped and fell on the track, scattering her mushrooms around. The engine driver panicked on seeing a girl between the tracks who was on her hands and knees and he blew the horn with all his strength. Poor Mary, who was frightened by the coming danger, froze and didn’t know what to do. When Rose saw the scene, she screamed at the top of her voice for Mary’s attention. Mary noticed that her sister was not around and cried for help. With the train drawing near, the engine driver grew extremely anxious. As hard as he could, he kept blowing the whistle and started reducing speed. Yet it was not possible for him to stop the heavy train within such a short distance. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Rose wouldn’t watch the tragedy happen before her eyes. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The train rolled over and finally stopped. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Para 1: Rose wouldn’t watch the tragedy happen before her eyes. She rushed up the embankment staircase, repeating at the top of her voice “Stay off the tracks!” Mary, at the sight of Rose’s coming to her rescue, burst into tears of joy. Though reducing speed as hard as it could, the train was still approaching fast. Seeing there was little time to drag her sister out of danger, Rose jumped over without a second thought and covered Mary’s body under hers. Para 2: The train rolled over and finally stopped. Frightened and worried, the engine driver quickened his pace to see what happened to the little girl. To his great relief, the sisters lied between the rails safe and sound. What a narrow escape! He helped them sit up and comforted them. The two sisters hugged and kissed each other, tears of joy flowing down their cheeks. Never were the two souls so happily united at that moment. They then collected all the remaining mushrooms and, hand in hand more tightly than before, walked back home. 【解析】 本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了两姐妹出去采蘑菇，带着沉重的蘑菇篮子回家，在穿过铁轨的时候小妹妹Mary在铁轨上摔倒了，姐姐Rose在危急时刻冲过去护住妹妹，最后火车停了下来，两人死里逃生。 【详解】 1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“Rose不愿看到悲剧发生在她眼前。”可知，第一段可描写Rose是如何帮助妹妹的。 ②由第二段首句内容“火车翻倒了，终于停了下来。”可知，第二段可描写火车停下，两姐妹获救。 2.续写线索：Rose冲上铁轨——Rose护住妹妹——火车停下——获救 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①靠近：approach/get close ②捡起：collect/pick up ③回家：walk back home/get back home 情绪类 ①快乐：joy/happiness ②害怕：frightened/scared 【点睛】 [高分句型1] She rushed up the embankment staircase, repeating at the top of her voice “Stay off the tracks!”(运用了现在分词作状语) [高分句型2] Never were the two souls so happily united at that moment. (运用了全部倒装) Writing02 It was last February. Noel, a 28-year-old marketing manager was heading from Iceland’s Keflavik International Airport to the capital city Reykjavik with the modern traveler’s two essentials: a dream and a GPSunit. What could go wrong? The dream had been with him since April 14, 2010 when he watched TV news report of the volcano eruption in Iceland. Dark-haired, with a youthful face and thick eyebrows, he had never travelled beyond the United States and his native Mexico. “I want to see this through my own eyes,” he thought as he watched the news on his couch. Four months later, on a cold winter morning, he was driving from Keflavik Airport in a rented car towards a hotel in Reykjavik, excited that his one-week journey was beginning. As the pink sun rose over the ocean and shone light on the snow-covered lava rocks along the shore, he dutifully followed the commands of the GPS that came with the car, a calm female voice directing him to an address—a left here, a right there. But after stopping on a deserted road, he got a feeling that the voice might be steering (引导) him wrong. He had been driving for nearly an hour, yet the GPS put his arrival time at around eight hours later. He entered his destination again and got the same result. Though he sensed that something was off, he made a choice to trust the machine. The farther he drove, the fewer cars he saw. The roads became icier. He was sleepy, cold and hungry. He hadn’t set up his phone for international use, so that was no help. Another three hours passed. As his tires skidded (打滑) along a narrow mountain road that skirted a steep cliff.he knew that the device had failed him. He was lost. He didn’t know where else to go. There was no one else on the road, and there was nothing else to do but follow the line on the screen to its mysterious end. Paragraph 1 The directions ended at a small blue house in a tiny town. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Knowing what had happened, the woman offered to help him. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Paragraph 1: The directions ended at a small blue house in a tiny town. Noel parked his car and headed towards the door. An old blue-eyed woman answered after the second ring. She smiled as he stammered about his hotel and handed her his reservation. “No. this isn’t the hotel you have booked. Your hotel is 380 kilometres south.” She told him in accented English with a laugh. Noel quickly figured out what happened the address was wrong with an extra “r” in it. Paragraph 2: Knowing what had happened, the woman offered to help him. She provided Noel a free meal and a bed so that he could get a good night’s sleep. The next day, Noel decided to drive to Reykjavik. In light of his previous experience, the woman gave him a map with the main roads and landmarks carefully marked on it in case the device went wrong again. With the help of the woman’s directions, Noel finally reached his destination. “Without her help, I wouldn’t have made it.” He was so thankful to the woman, who was just a total stranger to him. 【解析】 这是一篇读后续写。故事以人物为线索展开，讲述了28岁的Noel从冰岛凯夫拉维克国际机场前往首都雷克雅未克，但不知怎么回事导航系统把他带到了一个偏远的地方。他迷路了，但又只能跟着导航继续前进。 【详解】 1.段落续写 ①根据第一段首句“导航的尽头是一个小镇上的一座蓝色的小房子”可知，下文可描写Noel到达房子后发生的事情，并且知道了自己为什么会来到这么远的地方。 ②根据第二段首句“那个女人知道发生了什么事后，主动提出帮助他”可知，下文可描写女士是如何帮助Noel的。 2.续写线索 来到小房子——发现女士——知道为什么——女士提供帮助——安全到达目的地——感激 3.词类激活 行为类 ①回答：answer/reply/respond ②递：hand/deliver ③弄清楚，明白：figure out/understand ④决定做某事：decide to do/be determined to do/make up one’s mind to do 情绪类 ①感激的：grateful/thankful 【点睛】 [高分句型1]She smiled as he stammered about his hotel and handed her his reservation. （运用了as引导的时间状语从句） [高分句型2] Noel quickly figured out what happened: the address was wrong with an extra “r” in it.（运用了what引导的宾语从句） [高分句型3]He was so thankful to the woman, who was just a total stranger to him.（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句） Writing03 I was finally going to see Giant Rock with my brothers and Dad. I’d been snowshoeing before, and I liked the adventure of hiking through deep snow alongside wild-animal tracks. After putting on our snowshoes, we studied the map. Dad said, “We start here on the red trail, and then we turn left onto the purple one. That’s where Giant Rock is. Remember to stick together, guys!” The trail ran uphill alongside a stone wall. It was easy to follow because red markers were nailed to the trees and the snow had been packed down by other hikers. Half way up the hill, we turned onto the winding purple trail. We settled into a rhythm, with Dad and everyone else in front and me in the back, crunch-crunching through the snow. The late afternoon sun felt warm, although it was already sinking lower. I saw lots of animal tracks-mostly deer, squirrel, and rabbit prints, which I recognized from my field guide. An hour later, we topped the hill and saw the massive rock sitting alone in the forest. “It is really huge, as big as a house!” my brother Josh said, gazing up. Breathlessly standing in the rock’s giant shadow, I noticed the sun had dipped even lower. “Let’s head back,” Dad said. I was a little behind the group when I noticed a set of animal tracks I didn’t recognize. They were hard to see among the snowshoe prints, so I followed them off the trail for a closer look. There were no claw marks, which meant they didn’t belong to a dog or a fox. Instead, they looked like tiny handprints and footprints. “Must be a raccoon (浣熊),” I thought, matching them to prints in my guide. I looked up when I suddenly realized how quiet it had gotten. I was totally alone. “Hey!” I shouted. “Where is everyone?” nothing. Just the sound of my own breathing. “They couldn’t have gone far. I’ll catch up to them if I hurry,” I thought, stepping back onto the trail. The light had grown darker by the second. Without flashlight and phone, I began running. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。 I came to where I could turn right or go straight. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ “Stop and think,” I told myself, picturing the map again. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Paragraph 1: I came to where I could turn right or go straight. The path to the front looked familiar. But when I walked on, some scenes told me I was going the wrong way. So I reversed direction. My mind started to race. Soon it might be too dark to tell what color the markers were. And I couldn’t just follow my own footsteps because there were so many tracks from other hikers. What if I couldn’t find my way back? I started tearing through the woods in a panic. Paragraph 2: “Stop and think,” I told myself, picturing the map again. To get to Giant Rock we had turned left onto the purple trail. To get back, I needed to do the opposite and turn right onto the red one. I struggled forward in the faint light. Then I noticed the stone wall. This had to be right. I went downhill in giant steps, and then I saw my family! I shouted as I ran toward them. “Honey? Are you OK?” Dad’s voice was urgent. It seemed I had been lost for ages, and all I wanted now was a bear hug from Dad. 【解析】 本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者与兄弟和爸爸去看巨人岩，天色逐渐晚了，作者跟着一组不认识的动物脚印和亲人走散了，十分慌张。幸好最后和父亲团聚了。 【详解】 1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“我来到了可以右转或直走的地方。”可知，第一段可描写作者走散后的心理活动以及反应。 ②由第二段首句内容“‘停下来想一想，’我对自己说，一边又想象着地图。”可知，第二段可描写作者如何和家人团聚的。 2.续写线索：继续前行——改变方向——慌张——想象地图——看到家人 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①继续前进：walk on/move on ②辨别：tell/distinguish ③大叫：shout/yell 情绪类 ①慌乱地：in a panic/flurriedly ②焦急的：urgent/anxious 【点睛】 [高分句型1] But when I walked on, some scenes told me I was going the wrong way. (运用了when引导时间状语从句和省略that的宾语从句) [高分句型2] Soon it might be too dark to tell what color the markers were. (运用了what引导宾语从句) Writing04 One day, my brother and I were coming back from the islands where we often risked going and got more fish than others. All at once, the sky was covered with dark clouds and in less than a minute we were in a terrible storm. A huge wave covered our boat and we nearly fell into the sea. My brother put his mouth close to my ear and cried out “Moskoe-strom!” The moment I heard the word I became very frightened. I knew what he meant by that one word well enough. With the wind and waves, we were going in the direction of the whirlpool (漩涡). We were hopeless. Nothing could save us. I felt sick, as if I was falling from a mountain top in a dream. We went round and round, nearer and nearer to the horrible edge of the whirlpool. It may appear strange, but at that moment, when we were on the edge of the whirlpool, I felt calmer than when we were moving towards it. I began to think how amazing a thing it was to die in such a way, and how wonderful it was to see the power of nature. Suddenly, we went over the edge. I thought my life was over. But moment after moment passed, and I was still safe. The boat was on the inside of the huge whirlpool and we were going round in circles at great speed. I saw clearly that there were other objects in the whirlpool—trees and barrels (水桶). After a while, I became curious about the whirlpool itself. I then made three important observations. The first, the larger the bodies were, the more rapidly they fell; the second, between two objects of equal extent, round objects fell down less rapidly; and the third, between two objects of the same size, objects shaped like a tube fell down more slowly. So I tied myself to a barrel to help me float. I tried to make my brother understand, but he was too frightened and stayed in the boat. Without waiting, I jumped into the sea to try and escape. 注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Some time after I left the boat, I saw my brother struggling in the sea. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Soon after that, the whirlpool became less wild and then the sky was clear. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】        Some time after I left the boat, I saw my brother struggling in the sea. I tried my best to approach to him but I failed again and again. I waved and called him to tie himself to another barrel to help him float. I struggled to run away from the whirlpool and prayed the storm could stop as soon as possible. Soon after that, the whirlpool became less wild and then the sky was clear. The wind became calmer, and the moon was shining. I was still tied to the barrel and the waves soon carried me to an area where the other fishermen were. Fortunately, a boat picked me up when I was tired out. The fishermen were very old friends, but they were unable to recognize me at first because I was in a so difficult position. To my great excitement, minutes later, another boat arrived with my brother in it. How lucky we were! 【解析】 本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者和弟弟从我们经常冒险去的岛屿回来，遇到了可怕的暴风雨，离漩涡越来越近了，作者清楚地看到漩涡里还有别的东西，作者做了三个重要的观察。 【详解】 1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“我下船后不久，看见弟弟在海里挣扎。”可知，第一段可描写作者试图救弟弟。 ②由第二段首句内容“不久之后，漩涡变得不那么猛烈了，天空也变得晴朗了。”可知，第二段可描写作者和弟弟都获救。 2.续写线索：想办法救弟弟——风停——得救 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①尽力做：try one's best to do/struggle to do ②救起：pick up/pluck ③到达：arrive/reach 情绪类 ①非常疲倦：be tired out/be exhausted ②兴奋：excitement/thrill 【点睛】 [高分句型1]I was still tied to the barrel and the waves soon carried me to an area where the other fishermen were.(由关系副词where引导的定语从句) [高分句型2]Fortunately, a boat picked me up when I was tired out.(由when引导的时间状语从句) Writing05 It was an unusually hot day. Exhausted after football practice, I headed for the bus stop to wait for Bus 112 which would take me home. I was beginning to drift off to sleep when I saw the bus arriving. The sun was in my eyes and that was probably the reason why I got onto Bus 113 I was glad to get a seat. Within minutes, I was sting against the window, fast asleep. When I opened my eyes, it was dark outside. I was the only passenger left on the bus. I could not recognize the part of town we were passing through. I pressed the bell and the bus stopped. I planned to hop across the road and catch a bus going the opposite direction. However, I found myself on a quiet street with a row of shops that were all closed. I kicked myself for not asking the driver for directions. As I was wondering what to do, a motorcycle came down the road. The rider looked at me as he passed and then stopped a short distance away. I went to him and asked him how to get back to the City Square. He smiled and nodded. He patted the back seat and said that he would send me home. Without a second thought, I climbed up behind the rider. He turned the motorcycle around and headed in the direction I wanted. We travelled for about 15 minutes and the surroundings still looked unfamiliar to me. The rider made a few turns and I knew I was hopelessly lost. I asked him where we were going, He did not answer but increased his speed. Alarm bells started to ring in my head. I tapped the man, shoulder and told him to stop. He leaned forward and went at high speed now. Then he slowed down to turn into a dark and narrow road that led into an oil palm plantation. I had had enough. 注意: 1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下超式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I jumped off the vehicle and fell onto the ground. I got off the taxi and rushed into my house. 【答案】I jumped of vehicle and fell onto the ground. The man turned around and rode towards me. I swung my schoolbag at him and he lost his balance and fell off his motorcycle. Without looking back, I just ran and ran. When I dared to stop, I found that I was on a main road. Cars were passing by, I was relieved to see a taxi and waved desperately, praying that it would stop. It did. I got in and gave the driver my house address, shaking uncontrollably. I got off the taxi and rushed into my house. I threw myself into my mum's arms and broke into tears. When my family learned what had happened, they were horrified. My parents told me that I should have just looked for a public phone and called home when I was lost. I knew I had been foolish to believe a stranger. It was a frightening experience which I hoped would never happen to me again. It's better to be safe than sorry. 【解析】 本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了足球训练结束后，我筋疲力尽，我走向公共汽车站，错上了反方向的车。下车后，外面一片漆黑，正当我不知所措时，一辆摩托车从路上开了过来，骑手主动要求搭载我。一路上，他走的路很陌生，我要求他停下来，他却全速前进。 【详解】 1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“我从车上跳下来，摔在了地上”可知，第一段可描写我是如何跳下摩托车，逃离这个陌生人的。 ②由第二段首句内容“我下了出租车，冲进屋去”可知，第二段可描写我把这件事情告诉父母，父母告诉我今后遇到类似的事情，该怎么办。 2.续写线索：筋疲力尽——上错车——搭载摩托车——遇险——逃跑——诉说——感悟 3.词汇激活 行为类 转身：turn around /turn back 冲进：rush into /dash into 情绪类 绝望地：desperately / hopelessly 大哭：break into tears / burst out crying 【点睛】 [高分句型1] When I dared to stop, I found that I was on a main road. (运用了when引导时间状语从句) [高分句型2] It was a frightening experience which I hoped would never happen to me again. (运用了which引导定语从句) Writing06 It’s a beautiful sunny day. The Bonds boarded their boat for a carefree day trip to Dove Island for some fishing as a family custom. Thomas Bond, a 30-year-old construction worker, loved the sport, especially catching bass (鲈鱼) and had impressed on his oldest daughter, Lizzy, a love of the outdoors, teaching her how to bait (下诱饵) a hook and cast a line and brave the waves. The family spent the day fishing in the vast ocean, and then left the island in the early evening. Upon setting off from the shore, they found thick fog rolling in. Lizzy fell into a light sleep beside her five-year-old sister, Molly, at a table on the boat’s lower deck (甲板). Their father’s sharp orders woke her up: “Get out of the boat. The boat’s sinking!” Lizzy pushed her sister into the cold, dark water. Both girls wore life jackets. The adults did not. The girls were followed by their mother, Petra Bond, who was expecting a baby at that time. Within seconds, the boat was damaged and was left just the tip of its bow in the air. Looking into the faces of her father, mother, and sister, Lizzy wasn’t frightened. After some time, her father told them he would swim for help. “I’ll be back,” he said before disappearing into the darkness. “Dad is like the superhero to me. I believe he will get help to rescue us,” Lizzy said to herself. After some time, her mother became quiet and stopped swimming. Lizzy wrapped a rope around her mother’s chest and tied her to the boat so she wouldn’t float away. Then her sister fell quiet too and she stayed beside her. To keep herself awake, Lizzy daydreamed about what they would do after they were rescued. They would stay in a hotel, order room service, and lie comfortably under the blankets in bed, cozy and warm. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 After several hours, Lizzy heard her name called in the distance. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ On the coast, an ambulance was waiting for them. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】            After several hours, Lizzy heard her name called in the distance. “It’s dad.” Lizzy called out and began to shake her sleepy mother and sister. Mother opened her eyes and squeezed out a faint smile and fell asleep again. Through the thick fog, a white small boat sliding close. Lizzy cried out, “Dad, here”, with tears rolling down her face. Finally, Dad got three of them into the boat where Lizzy finally closed her eyes, exhausted and relieved. She knew they were rescued. On the coast, an ambulance was waiting for them. With the help of the nurses, they all got in. Wrapped in a warm blanket, Lizzy sit beside her family, looking at her mom on the bed. Suddenly, Lizzy turned to her father and said, “I knew you would be back, Dad.” “I knew you would keep mother and sister safe”, her father hugged her. Tears   rolled down their faces. 【解析】 本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Lizzy和妹妹跟随爸爸妈妈出海钓鱼，遭遇沉船落水，爸爸留下Lizzy照顾妈妈和妹妹，自己游去寻求救援，妈妈的妹妹体力不支快失去意识，只有Lizzy坚持着保护着她们，等待爸爸归来。 【详解】 1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“几个小时后，利奇听到远处有人叫她的名字。”可知，第一段可描写爸爸归来，三人获救。 ②由第二段首句内容“在海岸上，一辆救护车正等着他们”可知，第二段可描写获救后利齐与爸爸的对话。 2.续写线索：爸爸归来——三人获救——得到救助——父女对话 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①大喊：cry out/yell/scream ②营救：rescue/save ③在……的帮助下：with the help of/with the aid of 情绪类 ①疲倦的：exhausted/tired 【点睛】 [高分句型1] Finally, Dad got three of them into the boat where Lizzy finally closed her eyes, exhausted and relieved.(运用了where引导定语从句和形容词作状语) [高分句型2] She knew they were rescued.(运用了省略连词的宾语从句) [高分句型3] Wrapped in a warm blanket, Lizzy sit beside her family, looking at her mom on the bed.(运用了过去分词和现在分词作状语) / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 五、模拟题演练02 Writing 01 When I was in the eighth grade, I became interested in mountain climbing. Then I climbed my first mountain— a fairly gentle 3,900-foot peak near where I live in surrey, British Columbia. I loved the challenge of conquering something bigger than myself. I like climbing more and more. Soon I’d climbed nearly l00 peaks. My parents were happy I’d finally found a hobby. Two years ago, on December 30, when I was 16, I drove to Oregon to climb 11,240-foot Mount Hood with my friend Mel Olsen. It’s safer to start winter climbs at night when there’s less risk of the sun melting the snowpack (积雪). That day, we started at 3 a.m. The temperature was about 14 degrees. Along the way, we met two other climbers, and the four of us continued on together. After about five hours, we reached Devil’s Kitchen, a plateau at about l0,000 feet. By this point, the wind conditions were nasty (极糟糕的). My exposed skin felt as though it were burning. The trail we followed grew narrower and steeper. At around 9 a.m. , we reached an ice step. I volunteered to go first. I placed my left foot on it. Confident I was safe, I put my full weight on it. Suddenly, I heard a loud noise, and a whole slab of ice broke off the step, right under my foot. In an instant, I fell backward, rolling down the mountain as if I were a character in a video game. After a few seconds, I came to a stop on a shallow slope just above the Devil’s Kitchen. I’d fallen 600 feet. My clothes were torn into small pieces, my helmet was broken, and my face was bloodied from cuts and scratches. Fortunately, for the most part, I was fine, except that I was suffering from a sharp, great pain in my left leg. 注意: l. 续写词数应为 l50 左右; 2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 I yelled for help. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ This accident made me have a deep reflection, but I was back climbing again. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】I yelled for help. Hearing my cry for help, Mel made her way down and other climbers came to assist me. A couple of them were trained first aid treatment. They splinted my leg and called rescue team. Mel stayed by my side while I tried not to cry from the pain. I’d been lying on the ice shivering and in agony for four hours by the time the rescuers reached me. They strapped me into a sled and pulled me down the mountain. Then I was loaded into an ambulance and taken to a hospital, where I stayed for four days. This accident made me have a deep reflection, but I was back climbing again. The fall has made me more cautious. One slip on a mountain can change everything. But the experience also made me grow as a person and helped me mature. Since the accident, I’ve climbed another 60 mountains. I’m not going to let one fall and its aftermath keep me from doing my favorite thing in the world. 【导语】本文以时间为线索展开，讲述了作者从八年级开始就对爬山有兴趣，并且很快爬了近百座山峰。16岁时，作者和朋友Mel Olsen相约去攀登11,240英尺高的胡德山，但在中途过程中，作者意外从山上摔下来的故事。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“我大声呼救。”可知，第一段可描写作者被得到救助的过程。 ②由第二段首句内容“这次事故让我有了深刻的反思，但我又重新爬了起来。”可知，本段描写作者通过本次经历得到了哪些反思，以及后续又开始爬山。 2.续写线索：大声呼救——被救助过程——感悟——重新开始爬山 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①帮助：assist/aid/help ②颤抖：shiver/tremble/quiver ③阻止某人做某事：keep sb from doing sth/prevent sb from doing sth 情绪类 ①痛苦：agony/pain/suffering ②谨慎的：cautious/careful/prudent 【点睛】[高分句型1]. Hearing my cry for help, Mel made her way down and other climbers came to assist me.（运用了现在分词作状语） [高分句型2]. I’d been lying on the ice shivering and in agony for four hours by the time the rescuers reached me.（运用了by the time引导的时间状语从句） [高分句型3]. Then I was loaded into an ambulance and taken to a hospital, where I stayed for four days.（运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句） Writing 02 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文，续写词数应为150左右。 Malachi Bradley doesn’t show signs of being panicked or worried when he talks about how he spent 29 hours lost in a rough area of the High Uintas. “I didn’t really feel scared. I was just trying to get back to my family,” the 10-year-old said Tuesday in a quiet, almost matter-of-fact way just one day after he was rescued. When asked what happened to him, he simply replied: “A lot of things. I hiked a long way.” Malachi confidently believes he could have survived two or three weeks on his own, dressed in only his jeans and his shoes, and with no food, tent or blankets. But the look in the eyes of Malachi’s father, Danny Bradley, told a different story, one of much deeper concern, when he realized his son was missing. “It’s a horrible feeling, just knowing how vast the Uinta Mountains are,” he said, “I quickly felt how severe the situation was.” Malachi recalled his great adventure Tuesday. He showed no signs of going without food for a day or sleeping between rocks for an hour at night to block the cold wind. But he admitted when he got home to his own bed on Monday night that he was asleep within a minute of his head hitting his pillow and stayed there for 12 hours. His adventure began Sunday when Malachi, his father, two siblings(兄弟姐妹), and a family friend were about to leave their campsite near Paul Lake to go home. “We were just going to cook up a fish he caught and head out, and,” Danny Bradley paused, “it ended up being a lot longer.” Malachi said he went to look for mushrooms about 10:30 a.m. He had just walked a long way when he encountered a snake. He was so frightened that he decided to get back but he could no longer see the lake where his campsite was set up. He knew he was lost. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Malachi didn’t have his whistle with him that he normally carries in case he gets lost when exploring. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ But on Monday afternoon, Malachi took off his shoes to take a break in an open area and heard another helicopter nearby. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Malachi didn’t have his whistle with him that he normally carries in case he gets lost when exploring. He didn’t know what to do but to walk along the road and call out his families while walking. However, nobody answered him. Not knowing how long he had walked for, he suddenly heard a helicopter nearby. He began to shout as loudly as he could so that he could be heard. Unfortunately, the helicopter flied away for it was too dark to see him. Feeling a little bit depressed, he tried his best to follow the helicopter though he lost it very quickly. Not until the sun rose did Malachi realize that he had walked for the whole night, hungry, tired and cold. But on Monday afternoon, Malachi took off his shoes to take a break in an open area and heard another helicopter nearby. He tried to yell for help again with his clothes waving in his hand. To his disappointment, the helicopter began to fly away too. He thought he was about to stay here for another night when the helicopter turned back. 【导语】这是一篇记叙文。文章以倒叙的手法讲述了主人公Malachi在山上走丢的故事。10岁的Malachi在走失了29个小时后终于被找到了，他云淡风轻的讲述了自己走丢这段时间的经历，但从他父亲的反应来看，事情远非如此简单。Malachi在周日上午和家人一起露营的时候不小心走失，一直到周二才被找到。回忆起自己这两天的经历，Malachi虽然没有表现得很惊慌，但回到家后却倒头就睡，并且一睡就睡了12个小时。 【详解】1.段落续写： 由第一段首句内容“Malachi没有带他的哨子，他通常会带着哨子以防在探险时迷路。”可知，第一段可描写Malachi走失后的经历及心里想法。 由第二段首句内容“但在周一下午，Malachi脱下鞋子，在一个开阔的地方休息，听到附近有另一架直升机。”可知，第二段可描写Malachi遇到直升机后的反应。 2.续写线索：走失但没带哨子——不知所措只能大喊家人的名字——遇到一架直升机但未被救——第二天下午再次遇到直升机——有幸被救 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①呼救：shout for help / call for help / cry for help ②返回：turn back / come back / fly back 情绪类 ①感到有点沮丧：feel a little bit depressed / feel a little bit frustrated ②令某人失望：to one’s disappointment / to one’s depression 【点睛】【高分句型1】Not until the sun rose did Malachi realize that he had walked for the whole night, hungry, tired and cold. (运用了部分倒装和that引导的宾语从句) 【高分句型2】He began to shout as loudly as he could so that he could be heard.(运用了so that引导的目的状语从句) Writing 03 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 Brady was a recently retired search and rescue dog. He was not happy and missed his owner Al because Al had gone out on a rescue mission without him. Al’s nephew Steve took Brady along when he and his friend Zach went on a overnight hike. But suddenly Steve and Zach smelled something burning and they realized that lightning had set the woods on fire. Wind-blown flame had leaped from the top of one tree to another. The long dry summer had turned the forest into a tinderbox(火绒箱) and the thunderstorm wasn’t helping much. It had more wind and lightning than rain. Zach pulled Steve’s arm. “Let’s go! We can make it back to the river we crossed today.” Steve pulled Brady’s leash（皮带） and their heads down against the strong fire-wind, they hurried down the path they had followed earlier. The air was full of smoke，and pine branches broke from burning trees with a crisp sound. Steve kept his eyes on the route. All they had to do was to make it down to the river… Brady barked a sharp warning. Ahead of them lay a dense curtain of smoke across the path. They’d never make it through that. They would have to find another escape route. The dog was pulling at his leash trying to draw them away from the smoke. This was what Brady was trained to do, and yet Steve was uneasy. It seemed to him they were moving away from the river. Brady lifted his head and smelled the smoky wind. Suddenly, the dog ran away and disappeared. The boys yelled and shouted for him，but he didn’t come back. They had no choice but to leave him behind. Heartsick, Steve and Zach went up aslope（斜坡）. He couldn’t blame Brady for panicking and escaping. He himself wanted to run even though he didn’t have a clue which way. They hadn’t gone far when there was a familiar bark, and Brady came running toward him. Paragraph1： “Where’ve you been?” Steve cried. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2： Brady led them back down the slope and into the trees. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Paragraph 1: “Where’ve you been?” Steve cried. Brady stopped directly in front of him and started pushing him back toward the slope they’d just climbed. When Steve still didn’t get it, Brady grabbed the boy’s jeans and pulled harder. The message was clear, but Steve hesitated. Of course he remembered what his uncle had said about Brady saving his life, but that had been a long time ago. Was he still sharp enough to get them through this? Brady pulled again, urgently. “OK, big guy,” Steve decided. Paragraph 2: Brady led them back down the slope and into the trees. Several times the big dog stopped to get his escape route. Often he changed direction. How long they’d walked Steve had no idea. He just held onto Brady’s leash with one hand and kept putting one foot in front of the other. He was almost numb when he heard the wonderful sound of rushing water. The river! With a yell the boys ran unsteadily forward until they jumped in cool, running water. “Brady, you did it!” 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Brady是一只最近退休的搜救犬，这天它主人的侄子Steve 带着Brady和他的朋友Zach去远足过夜。结果闪电把树林点着了，森林起了大火，最后多亏了Brady的帮助，他们才找到了河流并且获救。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“‘你哪儿去了？’Steve哭喊道。”可知，第一段可描写Brady找到Steve他们后的行为，Brady开始示意Steve和自己走。 ②由第二段首句内容“Brady领着他们下了坡，进入树林。”可知，第二段可描写Brady带领Steve他们找到了河流并且得救的经过。 2.续写线索： Brady回来——Brady拉扯男孩的牛仔裤——男孩跟着Brady走——找到河流——跳进河里得救 3.词汇激活 行为类 明白：get it/understand 想起：remember/ recall 抓住：hold onto/ grabbed/ grasp 情绪类 美妙：wonderful /amazing 急切：urgently / eagerly 【点睛】[高分句型1]. When Steve still didn’t get it, Brady grabbed the boy’s jeans and pulled harder. (运用了when引导时间状语从句) [高分句型2]. Of course he remembered what his uncle had said about Brady saving his life, but that had been a long time ago. (运用了what引导宾语从句) Writing 04 阅读下而材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The Biggest Dog on the Mountain We liked hiking together. Today, we were looking for a trail over Wallace Mountain. ”It’s been over an hour,” said Jessc, my nineteen-year-old son. “Do you think the trail still exists?” We had explored several paths but with no luck. We pushed through weeds mid-calf high for us, but neck-high for our rusty-brown dog, Shadow. Once in a while, we would call Shadow back when she was attracted by the pleasant smell of flowers. No longer slim and bouncing with energy, Shadow was the size of a large house cat, and always content to curl up on the couch beside one of us. Suddenly, we heard what sounded like many dogs barking in the distance, an unusual sound in the wilderness around us. Curious, we climbed the ridge (山脉), only to find what seemed like a dog factory. Small dogs, big dogs, brown dogs, and dogs I can’t even describe poured out. The hounds (猎狗) hit the ground, sniffing the air and turning to face us. Before long, they went down from their side of the mountain. Jesse shot an alarmed glance at me before turning to call in a firm voice, “Shadow, come here, stay.” I patted my pockets, feeling for the pepper spray (防狼喷雾), so small it would never work against so many animals. I turned, surveying the nearby brush for a potential weapon. With the help of adrenaline (肾上腺素), I broke off two thick branches from a tree and rushed to Jesse’s side, “Here you are!” “OK,” he said, “Dad, they are coming to us.” My-mouth went dry. I glanced over at Jesse, his lips pinched (夹紧) tight. The pack emerged from the valley, marching straight toward us. The dogs in the lead were now close enough for us to see that most of them were three times larger than Shadow. With deep growls (怒吼声)，they ran straight for us. Jesse swallowed hard and looked at me. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Shadow’s back fur rose. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Surprisingly, the entire mass of dogs turned tail and fled. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Shadow’s back fur rose. Down came the group of dogs towards us, roaring angrily. Just as one of them approached us, I raised the pepper spray and spray the liquid to it. Luckily it jumped aside. However, more dogs charged at me, which made the pepper spray useless. Just then, Jesse went up bravely and threw the thick branches around us, making it difficult for the dogs to move near. Meanwhile, Shadow shouted at the dogs aggressively in an attempt to scare them away. Surprisingly, the entire mass of dogs turned tail and fled. I was glad to see them disappear. I thanked Jesse for her bravery and I patted Shadow on his back. While he was bigger than those dogs, he was not afraid in face of the mass of dogs. We continued to set off to search for our trail.This time, with Shadow leading the way, we would not get lost and soon we found the right trail. After the adventure, we returned home safe and sound thanks to my brave son and the biggest dog. 【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者，他的儿子和狗一起探险的故事。他们一起徒步旅行，在华莱士山寻找一条小径。因为迷路，遇到一群狗攻击，在危机时刻，他们的狗Shadow勇敢吓退一群狗，而保护他们的故事。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“Shadow的背部毛发立了起来。”可知，第一段可描写他们和Shadow在遇到这一群狗之后的表现。 ②由第二段首句内容“令人惊讶的是，整群狗都掉头逃跑了。”可知，第二段可描写那群狗退去，他们脱险后的回家以及他们的心理活动。 2.续写线索：徒步旅行——探索——发现一群狗——遭攻击——Shadow吓退狗——回家 3.词汇激活 行为类 寻找：look for /search/seek 回家：go back home/return home 爬：climb /ascend/mount 情绪类 感谢：thank/show our appreciation/show our gratitude/be grateful 害怕的：afraid /dreadful/horrible 【点睛】[高分句型1] Just as one of them approached us, I raised the pepper spray and spray the liquid to it.（由连接词as引导的时间状语从句） [高分句型2] However，more dogs charged at me, which made the pepper spray useless.（由关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句） [高分句型3] I thanked Jesse for her bravery and I patted Shadow on his back.（由省略that引导的宾语从句） Writing 05 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。 My husband, Donald, took our daughter Sarah out for some ice cream the night before driving her to college. As they were walking back to the car, they saw a young man sitting on the ground and giving his puppy a cone. “A cute dog,” Donald said as they walked by. “A free dog,” the young man replied. Donald asked him what he meant by that and the man explained. He was moving away from Vermont and did not think the travel would be good for the dog. He had raised her from a small puppy. The man said she was a 6-month-old cross between the Doberman and the Labrador named Rhubarb. Donald took his phone number. The rest, as they say, is history. Rhubarb was a sweet dog and very friendly and loved everyone. Whenever someone came to the house, she was always happy. She also got along with Willie, an older Samoyed we had. Willie was not well and died about a year later, but, fortunately, Rhubarb’s company helped him keep going for longer than that if he had been alone. But the interesting thing about Rhubarb was that she never barked. She would sometimes get excited when she saw a chipmunk (花栗鼠) and make a little crying sound. One hot night when she was about 4 years old, we went to bed with the windows open and the doors unlocked. At about 3 a.m., I woke up to the sound of Rhubarb barking. I woke Donald and we got out of bed. Rhubarb was coming toward us. We turned on the lights and noticed the door to the kitchen was open. Then we saw the door leading into the house from the garage was also open. We quickly locked all the doors, and we did not get any sleep that night. It was deep into the night, so we didn’t call the police. Paragraph 1: The next day we noticed there was cigarette ash on the floor. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: My purse was right next to the door. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Paragraph 1: The next day we noticed there was cigarette ash on the floor. Actually, it was a thief who entered our kitchen and garage. Much to our relief, thanks to Rhubarb, the thief stole nothing. I called the police to report the break-in. I also told them nothing had been taken, but they sent a police officer over to talk with us anyway. In fact, recently many local homes had been broken in on the weekend. Most people’s wallets and purses had been stolen. Paragraph 2: My purse was right next to the door. However, Rhubarb had scared the thief away before he or she could steal it. When the police officer left, he said we should reward Rhubarb with a big steak dinner. Rhubarb lived to be almost 12 years old, but that night was the only time she barked in her entire life. Fortunately, she never saw the need to warn us of any other danger. We were very thankful to Rhubarb. We loved her like a member of the family. 【导语】本文以作者家里的一条狗为线索展开，讲述了作者收养了一条名叫大黄的拉布拉多杂交犬。这条狗和家人相处愉快，在她大约4岁的时候，她成功吓跑了小偷，保护了作者一家的财物的故事。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“第二天，我们注意到地板上有烟灰。”可知，第一段可描写作者一家发现晚上有人闯入，随后报警的过程。 ②由第二段首句内容“我的钱包就在门边。”可知，第二段可描写作者一家发现并没有丢失财物，更加感激狗狗大黄。 2.续写线索：发现有人闯入——报警——警员查看——财物没有丢失——对大黄充满感激 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①进入：enter/break into ②打电话：call/ring up/phone ③把……吓跑：scare away/scare off 情绪类 ①感激的：thankful / grateful ②幸运地：fortunately/luckily 【点睛】[高分句型1] Actually, it was a thief who entered our kitchen and garage. (运用了强调句型) [高分句型2] When the police officer left, he said we should reward Rhubarb with a big steak dinner. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句和省略连接词的宾语从句) Writing06   阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 Lightning flashed through the darkness over Sibson’s bedroom skylight(天窗). Sibson was shaken by a clap of thunder before he knew what was happening. The storm had moved directly through his twostory wooden house. Then he heard the smoke alarm beeping. Sibson rushed down the stairs barefoot to check. He opened the door to the basement, and flames exploded out. Sibson ran back upstairs to call 911 from his bedroom. “I felt glad because the room had a separate outdoor stairway,” he explained to the media later. But the phone didn’t work, and when he tried to go down the outdoor stairway, he was stopped by a wall of flames. Sibson realized he was trapped. Suddenly, a piece of wood fell from the roof. Sharp pain raced through his body as he looked down and found his leg bleeding. Sibson’s house was three kilometers off the main road and was so well hidden by trees that he knew calling for help would be fruitless. Up a hill nearby lived Sibson’s neighbor, Huggons. He was lying in bed when something like a smoke alarm struck his ears. He jumped out of bed, took his phone and flashlight, and headed down the hillside toward the noise. That was when he saw the rolling heavy smoke. Huggons dialed 911, and the operator warned him not to enter the house. But Huggons said, “There is no way I am going to listen to Sibson scream and die in that fire.” “Anyone there?” Huggons called out. Then he heard “Help! I’m trapped!” coming from the second floor balcony. He entered the house, but soon had to run back to catch his breath. After one more attempt to get inside the house, Huggons gave up and circled around back. The wind parted the smoke just enough for him to catch sight of Sibson. But there was no way to get to him. With the wind fueling the fire, there was no time to waste and the second floor seemed to be falling down in the next minute. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ “Go! Leave me alone!” shouted Sibson with desperate tears in his eyes, “It will kill you, too.” ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 With the wind fueling the fire, there was no time to waste and the second floor seemed to be falling down in the next minute. Sibson was in great pain in the fire, and Huggons struggled to find a solution. He looked around, got a fire extinguisher, and tried to rush onto the balcony again to save Sibson, but the fire was too intense for him to get near. Huggons was anxious as the second floor of the house was about to collapse. “Go! Leave me alone!” shouted Sibson with desperate tears in his eyes, “It will kill you, too.” Huggons was fightened but did not want to leave him alone. He shone the flashlight into the woods and noticed a ladder. He took it over to the balcony and pulled Sibson down just as the second floor of the house fell off. Sibson is still 40 when he tells the story. “I was alone that night,” he says. “Then I heard the most beautiful sound in my life. It was Huggons.” 【导语】本文是一篇读后续写，以人物为主要线索展开，一天暴风雨袭击了Sibson的小木屋，导致地下室大火弥漫，Sibson从户外楼梯准备逃离时，发现火势凶猛，又不幸被掉落的屋顶砸中腿部，因此被困在了阳台，千钧一发之际，邻居Huggons过来想尽各种办法，最终救下了他。 第一步：段落续写：  ①由第一段首句内容“风助长了火势，没有时间再浪费了，二楼似乎马上就要塌下来了。”可知，当时的火势十分凶猛，情况十分危急，Sibson随时都有生命危险，所以接下来可重点描写Huggons是如何不顾一切，想办法去施救的。 ②由第二段首句内容“去！别管我！布森眼里含着绝望的泪水喊道，“它也会杀死你的。””可知，情况已经到了危急时刻，可接着描写Huggons是如何将Sibson救出火场的，以及Sibson的人物情绪。 第二步：续写线索： 二楼即将要坍塌——Huggons尝试各种途径扑救——火势太大，以失败告终——危机时分，Huggons发现了一个梯子——用梯子将Sibson从阳台上接了下来——Sibson非常感激Huggons的救命之恩。 第三步：词汇激活 【行为类】 ①.环顾四周：look around / go around ②.冲：rush/ dash ③.倒下：fall down/ collapse /come down 【情绪类】 ①.焦急的：anxious/ worried ②.害怕的：frightened/ scared/ terrified 【点睛】 [高分句型1]. Huggons was anxious as the second floor of the house was about to collapse.（运用了as引导的原因状语从句） [高分句型2]. He took it over to the balcony and pulled Sibson down just as the second floor of the house fell off.（运用了as引导的时间状语从句） Writing07 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Pam Bales left her car and stepped onto the snow-covered Jewell Trail. She planned a six-hour hike through New Hampshire’s Mount Washington State Park. The hike up the lower part of Jewell was pleasant. At 8:30 am, still below the tree line, she took the first in a series of on-the-trail selfies. Less than an hour later, she took another photo, after she’d climbed into colder air and deeper snows. She made her way across the snow-covered ridge toward Mount Washington. Then she noticed something: a single set of footprints in the snow ahead of her. She’d been following faint tracks all day and hadn’t given them much thought, because so many people climb Jewell Trail. But these, she realized, had been made by a pair of trainers, not suitable for hiking on snow. By 11 am, Bales was getting cold and decided to abandon her plan. The only thing keeping Bales on Gulfside Trail was the trainer tracks in the sonw. As she fought the wind and heavy sleet (雨夹雪), the tracks made a hard left-hand turn off the trail. Now she alarmed. She was sure the hiker could get through in the ow visibility and was heading straight toward the challenging trails of the Great Gulf Wilderness. Bales stood there, stunned. The temperature and clouds were in a race to find their lowest point, and darkness was mere hours away. She turned to the left and called out, “Hello!” into the frozen fog. Nothing. She called out again: “Is anybody out there? Do you need help?” The strong westerly winds carried her voice away. She blew into her rescue whistle. For a fleeting moment she thought she heard someone reply, but it was just the wind playing games with her mind. She stood listening, then turned and walked cautiously in the direction of the single set of tracks. Bales followed the tracks cautiously for 20 to 30 meters. She rounded a slight corner and saw a man sitting motionless. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 When she approached him and said hello, he did not react. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ After waking the man up, Bales recognized that they had to get out of there soon. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: When she approached him and said hello, he did not react. Taking a deep breath, Bales got closer, checked his pulse and suddenly realized that the man must have passed out. She knew she had to wake him up immediately or the dreadful weather could put him in greater danger. Out of her bag, Bales took a carpet to wrap the man, gave some hot water to him, called out repeatedly and shook him hard. Fortunately, it didn’t take long before the man came to himself. After waking the man up, Bales recognized that they had to get out of there soon. The wind kept howling with the heavy sleet driving fiercely, and even worse, darkness began to fall. Anxious, Bales struggled to help the man up, supporting his weight and inching along the trail, following the tracks left by her hiking boots. After what seemed like ages, they finally made it to the foot of the mountain. The man was rushed to hospital immediately. Exhausted as she was, Bales felt a wave of happiness welled up inside. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了帕姆·巴勒斯计划在新罕布什尔州的华盛顿山州立公园徒步六小时，不到一小时后，她已经爬进了更冷的空气和更深的雪中。她穿过白雪覆盖的山脊，向华盛顿山进发。然后她注意到了一件事：她前面的雪上有一组脚印。她一整天都在跟踪微弱的轨迹，并没有给它们太多的思考，因为有太多人爬珠尔小道。但她意识到，这些鞋是由一双运动鞋制成的，不适合在雪地上徒步旅行。后来，她在一个小角落，看见一个人一动不动地坐着。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“当她走近他打招呼时，他没有反应。”可知，第一段可描写巴勒斯救助这名已经失去意识的男子的过程。 ②由第二段首句内容“在叫醒那个人后，巴勒斯意识到他们必须尽快离开那里。”可知，第二段可描写巴勒斯和那名男子一起下山，脱离险境的过程。 2.续写线索：检查——拿出物品给男子取暖——唤醒男子——扶起那名男子——一起下山——脱离险境——感受 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①检查：check/ examine ②唤醒：wake up/awaken ③努力：struggle to do/make great efforts to do 情绪类 ①高兴：happiness /joy ②焦急：anxious/worried 【点睛】[高分句型1] Taking a deep breath, Bales got closer, checked his pulse and suddenly realized that the man must have passed out. (运用了现在分词作状语和that引导的宾语从句) [高分句型2] Anxious, Bales struggled to help the man up, supporting his weight and inching along the trail, following the tracks left by her hiking boots. (运用了形容词和现在分词作状语) [高分句型3] Exhausted as she was, Bales felt a wave of happiness welled up inside.(运用了让步状语从句的倒装结构) / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $