16 生活趣事篇（专项训练）-2026年高考英语读后续写高分突破训练

16 生活趣事篇 一、生活趣事类常用词汇 中文 英文 中文 英文 围坐、聚集 传奇的 刷手机 合影 突然想到 很久以来 气氛 清理烂摊子 从... 涌出 意想不到的 令某人惊讶的是 克服麻烦 卡在... 里 不完美 滑倒 野餐垫 （电脑）蓝屏 积极的态度 使情况更糟 中空的 惊慌中 阻碍、障碍 自我感觉良好 烤面包机 原来是... 叹气、松口气 覆盖着... 顽皮的、捣蛋的 微焦的 分享故事 二、生活趣事类常用句型 一、日常引入（故事起点：铺垫氛围） 1．一家人正围坐在桌旁，进行一个普通的周六晚餐。 2．约翰正无聊地刷着手机，突然一个奇怪的想法冒了出来。 3．在一节无聊的化学课上，迈克的肚子突然大声咕咕叫起来。 4．我爸爸和往常一样自信，宣布要为我们做一顿大餐。 5．房间里的气氛轻松而充满欢笑，直到我们听到厨房传来一声巨响。 二、意外发生（转折点：打破平静） 1．突然，黑色的烟雾开始从烤面包机里冒出来！ 2．令所有人惊讶的是，狗跳上桌子，偷走了整只鸡。 3．风筝卡在了树上，我们的野餐垫被一阵大风吹进了河里。 4．她踩在一块香蕉皮上滑了一下差点摔倒，但疯狂地挥舞手臂以保持平衡。 5．电脑屏幕突然蓝屏了，他所有未保存的工作一秒钟内全消失了。 三、趣味发展（主体：混乱与滑稽） 1．我们都冲过去帮忙，结果却只是互相碍事。 2．他试图用锤子修理它，这当然让情况变得更糟了。 3．慌乱中，她把盐当成了糖，让蛋糕吃起来味道怪极了。 4．他们试图保持安静，但他们的每一个动作似乎都发出了更大的响声。 5．我笑得太厉害，气都喘不过来了，更别提提供任何有用的帮助了。 四、爆笑解决（高潮：荒诞与和解） 1．最后，狗叼着空盘子跑回来了，看起来对自己非常满意。 2．原来，“鬼” 的声音只是老冰箱的嗡嗡声。 3．我们解决问题靠的不是技术，而是很多运气和更多的笑声。 4．最后，我们都坐在地板上，吃着有点焦但美味的三明治。 5．他脸上沾满了面粉，端出了那个 “蛋糕”，结果实际上是个披萨。 五、趣味收尾（结尾：轻松回味） 1．我们晚上剩下的时间都在分享故事，笑谈我们这次小小的 “冒险”。 2．那天的事成了我们家的一个传奇故事，每次聚会都会被反复讲述。 3．我们拍了一张傻乎乎的合影，以永远记住这一刻。 4．尽管计划完全失败了，但我们都一致认为这是很久以来我们玩得最开心的一次。 5．我们一起清理了烂摊子，仍然拿刚才发生的事开玩笑。 六、感悟升华（主题：提炼意义） 1．我明白了，最美好的回忆往往来自于最意想不到的瞬间。 2．它告诉我们，一起大笑是克服任何小麻烦的最好方法。 3．我们意识到，让生活有趣而真实的不是完美，而是不完美。 4．这个有趣的事件让我们比以前更加亲密了。 5．现在我明白了，积极的态度可以把一场灾难变成一个有趣的故事。 三、高考真题演练 【真题1】2025年1月八省联考（ 彪悍机车党的柔软爱心） I was in Philadelphia for a conference when I saw an ad in the hotel. A nearby theater was showing a documentary (纪录片) about several local animal shelters that were helping to save abandoned dogs across the country. I love animals, and I felt an urge to go to this fundraising event. However, none of my co-workers would go with me, and I was worried about walking on the street alone at night. I resigned myself to spending the evening in my hotel room, but as soon as I got back to my room I felt restless and bored. The theater where the event was taking place was only about five blocks from the hotel, and the area around the hotel didn’t seem particularly dangerous. So, I decided to brave it. I gathered up my wallet and room key and set off. It was already getting dark and the streets were nearly deserted. I managed to find the street the theater was on, but when I turned the corner, I stopped in shock. In front of the theater were a group of bikers–very big, tough-looking bikers. I’ve known lots of motorcycle enthusiasts and most are nice people. However, in this case, I was a woman all alone, in a strange neighborhood, at night, and there were twenty or so very large men–all wearing insignia (徽章) that indicated they were in some sort of club–standing before me. Warning bells began to sound in my head, and my heart was pounding. Was I at the right theater? Had I misread the date of the event? A sign outside the theater told me that I was in the right place on the right evening. Nevertheless, I wondered if I should rush back to my hotel instead of walking through that crowd of bikers. I finally decided that I would be safer inside the theater. Hopefully, the bikers would have gone away by the time the film was over. 注意： （1）续写词数应为150个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. Paragraph 2: When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. 【真题2】2021年1月浙江卷：万圣节南瓜卡头 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 Pumpkin (南瓜）carving at Halloween is a family tradition. We visit a local farm every October. In the pumpkin field, I compete with my three brothers and sister to seek out the biggest pumpkin. My dad has a rule that we have to carry our pumpkins back home, and as the eldest child I have an advantage — I carried an 85-pounder back last year. This year, it was hard to tell whether my prize or the one chosen by my 14-year-old brother, Jason, was the winner. Unfortunately we forgot to weigh them before taking out their insides, but I was determined to prove my point. All of us were hard at work at the kitchen table, with my mom filming the annual event. I’m unsure now why I thought forcing my head inside the pumpkin would settle the matter, but it seemed to make perfect sense at the time. With the pumpkin resting on the table, hole uppermost, I bent over and pressed my head against the opening. At first I got jammed just above my eyes and then, as I went on with my task, unwilling to quit, my nose briefly prevented entry. Finally I managed to put my whole head into it, like a cork (软木塞) forced into a bottle. I was able to straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting on my shoulders. My excitement was short-lived. The pumpkin was heavy. “I’m going to set it down, now,” I said, and with Jason helping to support its weight, I bent back over the table to give it somewhere to rest. It was only when I tried to remove my head that I realized getting out was going to be less straightforward than getting in. When I pulled hard, my nose got in the way. I got into a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head around trying to find the right angle, but it was no use. “I can’t get it out!” I shouted, my voice sounding unnaturally loud in the enclosed space. 注意： 1． 所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 2． 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3． 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4． 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1 I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2 That video was posted the day before Halloween. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【真题3】2017年浙江卷：健忘而可爱的妈妈 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 A vacation with my mother     I had an interesting childhood: It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because of my mother-loving, sweet, and yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.    My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip approached, David, my eight-year-old brother, and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. Who knew if we’d ever see them again? Finally, the moment of our departure arrived, and we loaded suitcases, books, games, camping equipment, and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after we’d returned home to get the purse and traveler’s checks Mom had forgotten.    David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving while Dadslept:” You stand outside the door and play lookout while I go, and I’ll stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind: “Honey, where are the kids?” “What?! Oh, Gosh… I thought they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a strange city, but we weren’t about to take any chances. On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didn’t we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there? David and I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections.If a strange family showed up on her front doorsteps, Mom would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world as as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town.  注意： 1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3. 续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好； 4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1  The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2  We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 四、模拟题演练01 Writing 01 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was at least two months before Christmas when nine-year-old Almie Rose told her father and me that she wanted a new bicycle. Her old Barbie bicycle was just too babyish, and besides, it needed a new tire. As Christmas drew nearer, her desire for a bicycle seemed to fade, —or so we thought, as she didn’t mention it again. Merrily, we started purchasing the latest fashion—Baby Sitter’s Club dolls—and beautiful story books, a doll house, a holiday dress and toys. Then, much to our surprise, on December 23rd, she proudly announced that she “really wanted a bike more than anything else.” Now we didn’t know what to do. It was just too late, with all the details of preparing Christmas dinner and buying last-minute gifts. So here we were—Christmas Eve around 9:00 p.m., having just returned from a wonderful party, looking forward to our evening ahead—hours of wrapping children’s presents, parents’ presents, a brother’s presents and friends’ presents. With Almie Rose and her six-year-old brother, Dylan, lay comfortably in their beds. Now we could only think of the bicycle, the guilt and the idea that we were parents who would disappoint their child. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: “What if I make a little bicycle out of clay (黏土) and she can trade it for a real one later?” my husband Ron thought. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: On Christmas morning, we were excited for Almie to open the package with the clay bike. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Writing 02 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Seeing the United Parcel Truck pull into my driveway, I opened the garage door knowing that another package had arrived helping us with the Christmas in July Party we were putting together for the homeless children at a local charity. As I stood watching the driver get the packages from the back of the truck, I saw Madison, my three-year-old granddaughter, picking weeds from the lawn. “These are for my mommy and daddy,” she replied, as she held out a hand full of worthless little weeds. I just smiled and nodded my head as I looked at her tight little closed fist. The UPT driver walked into the garage and sat the two packages down on the wooden bench. He and I stood talking about the numerous baseball gloves, baseball bats, helmets and baseballs sitting about the room. I told him I had been raised in a Jacksonville, Florida orphanage and that during my entire childhood I never once owned anything of my own. I told him that these presents were for the children themselves and not for the orphanage. After talking for a few minutes, the driver told me he had to leave. He waved and began walking back down the driveway. I turned around, locked garage door and began walking up onto the front porch. Just as I closed the gate, Madison came running up to where I was standing. “My flowers, my flowers,” she screamed aloud. I soon realized that I had locked her weeds in the garage. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 “We’ll get them later,” I told her. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I turned around, walked back to the end of the porch and opened the gate. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Writing 03 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Alice and her family went on a camping trip along the seaside. Upon arrival, Dad called for a meeting. He announced, “There are lots of jobs to be done. It’s no fun on holiday if Mum and I do all the work, so I come up with this pocket money chart. In this way, everyone has to do something, and you must do your own job every day! If you do your jobs well, you get some extra pocket money!” Looking at the chart, which had their names on it next to a list of jobs, the kids frowned (皱眉) at the idea. Unwillingly, they began to do their jobs. Alice washed up the dishes. Mike, the youngest brother, dried the dishes. Jeff, Alice’s twin brother, took their dog for a walk. The next day they went to the beach. After playing some time in the sea, they went to look for shells along the beach. Suddenly, Alice found a strange-looking rock. She picked it up and showed it to Dad. “You’ve found a fossil (化石)! It was once a shellfish and has turned into a rock after millions of years!” Dad said happily. Greatly inspired, Alice continued her search, determined to find a better one, but she failed. Darkness fell, and Alice had to head back to the campsite with her family in disappointment. On the way back they stopped at a shop, where Alice spotted some amazing fossils! But soon she found they were too expensive! Back at the camp, Alice was still thinking of the amazing fossils in the shop. Suddenly an idea occurred to her, “I’ll do everyone’s jobs and then I can get all the extra pocket money to buy a fossil!” The next morning, Alice offered to dry the dishes and walk the dog, which greatly pleased Mike and Jeff. But things didn’t go as Alice planned. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 When Dad saw Alice walking the dog, he was confused. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Later that morning, Mike and Jeff approached Alice when they found she was unhappy. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Writing 04 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 One day, I found a wallet on the street. The wallet contained only three dollars and a very old letter. The envelope was worn and the only thing on it was the return address. I started to open the letter, hoping to find some information. Then I saw the date-1990, and the signature-Beatrice. The letter was written several decades ago. Then I made every effort and found out that Beatrice was now working in a hospital. I showed her the letter. The second she saw the letter, she took a deep breath and said, “Young man, this letter was the last contact I ever had with Henry. He is my only brother. I loved him very much. I was only 16 at the time and my brother is two years younger than me. If you can find him, tell him I'm still looking for him,” she said and tears began to well up in her eyes. “Mother is waiting for him to come back home.” When I walked out of the building with the wallet in my hand, the guard of the building recognized the wallet, and with his help, I finally found its owner, Henry. I handed the wallet to Henry and he said, “Yes, that's mine! It must have dropped out of my pocket this afternoon.” “I read the letter in the hope of finding out who owned the wallet.” I said. The smile on his face suddenly disappeared. He asked, “You read that letter?” “Not only did I read it, but also Beatrice read.” I replied. He suddenly became excited. “Beatrice? You know where she is? How is she? Please tell me,” he begged. “She's fine. She has been looking for you.” I said softly. He grabbed my hand and said, “Sir, you know she is my only sister in this world. I've always missed her.” Henry and I took the elevator (电梯) down to Beatrice's room. I walked over to her. “Beatrice,” I said softly, pointing to Henry, who was waiting with me in the doorway. “Do you know the man?” 注意： 1．续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Beatrice adjusted her glasses, looked for a moment, but didn't say a word． ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ About three weeks later I got a call at my office from Beatrice． _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Writing 05 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。（满分25分） During lunchtime，Emma suggested going to the zoo to feed the animals and her mom agreed. “We’ll stop by the bakery and pick some bread up. Now hurry and eat and then we’ll go. It’s going to be a lovely day. Grandma is coming with us. She’ll be here any minute，”mom said. Emma ate her lunch and then ran into her room to get her shoes.The problem was that she could only find one of them. She looked under her bed, but all she could see were dirty towels and pants. She moved some of her toys out of the way，but still couldn’t find her shoe. After she’d checked everywhere in her room，she ran into the kitchen. “Mom，I can’t find my shoe.Will you wait while I look for it？”she asked. Her mom thought about how many times she’d told Emma to clean her room up. She whispered something to Emma’s grandma and then said to Emma，“You will have to stay home.Your dad and I will take Ryan to the zoo. Grandma will stay here with you.” “No！Please wait for me. I want to go to the zoo，”Emma cried. “I’m sorry, Emma. I’ve told you a dozen times to clean your room and you ignored me.You can’t find your shoe now. It’s your own fault for not doing as I asked.You will stay home.” Emma ran into her bedroom, crying. Her mom came to the door and said，“Emma，clean that room of yours before I get home. I’ve told grandma not to give you any sweets until you finish the work.” She went out to the car with Ryan and Emma’s dad and then they drove away. 注意： 1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1： Emma sat on her bed and cried for a long time. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2： Emma and her grandma were sitting at the table，eating when her mom，dad，and Ryan came home. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Writing 06 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节，使之构成一个完整的故事。 Thanks to my conservative(保守的）family background,I didn't believe in angels(天使）.That is,not until Christmas Eve of 1979, when an angel brought unexpected joy to my home. After divorce,my two daughters not only lost the safety of a whole family,they also tearfully(泪汪汪地）left behind neighborhood friends, a familiar school, and a large house. These had all been replaced with a narrow two-bedroom apartment in a poorer part of town . I arranged to take my vacation during my children's winter holiday. We spent evenings planning activities: games, a pizza night , and evening car rides to view neighborhood holiday lights .With expectation , they seemed to be in good spirits . The week before the school break, however, I was fired because of the company's poor performance. By Christmas Eve,sadness covered our vacation plans. An afternoon outing did little to improve our mood . On returning to our apartment, we were astonished to see a beautiful,six-foot Christmas tree propped(支撑）against our front door. In silent wonder, we looked back and forth, from the tree to one another and around the empty street. Excitement built,and the girls begged to keep the tree. "Maybe it's for us,"my older daughter guessed. "Yeah,"repeated my younger child,"I bet an angel brought it to us!" I laughed aloud at the idea of an angel bringing a Christmas tree to my family. Caught up in their happiness, I announced the tree "ours". We moved it inside and headed out to the only upermarkets in our small town open that late on Christmas Eve. With holiday goods down to half price,I agreed to buy a tree stand(底座）,two boxes of colorful balls , some colorful lights , and one paper angel. Paragraph 1:Back home , we moved "our" tree into our tiny living room . ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2:The annual winter holiday became a family tradition. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Writing 07 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Seeing the United Parcel Truck pull into my driveway, I opened the garage door knowing that another package had arrived helping us with the Christmas in July Party we were putting together for the homeless children at a local charity. As I stood watching the driver get the packages from the back of the truck, I saw Madison, my three-year-old granddaughter, picking weeds from the lawn. “These are for my mommy and daddy,” she replied, as she held out a hand full of worthless little weeds. I just smiled and nodded my head as I looked at her tight little closed fist. The UPT driver walked into the garage and sat the two packages down on the wooden bench. He and I stood talking about the numerous baseball gloves, baseball bats, helmets and baseballs sitting about the room. I told him I had been raised in a Jacksonville, Florida orphanage and that during my entire childhood I never once owned anything of my own. I told him that these presents were for the children themselves and not for the orphanage. After talking for a few minutes, the driver told me he had to leave. He waved and began walking back down the driveway. I turned around, locked garage door and began walking up onto the front porch. Just as I closed the gate, Madison came running up to where I was standing. “My flowers, my flowers,” she screamed aloud. I soon realized that I had locked her weeds in the garage. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 “We’ll get them later,” I told her. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I turned around, walked back to the end of the porch and opened the gate. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Writing08 阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Jessie had two days’leave in January this year. She surfed the Internet for cheap travel deals and found the most impressive to be a twoday trip to Dublin. Jessie had never visited Ireland so she knew this was the destination for her. She arrived in Dublin and headed for her hotel. She was excited. When she found her hotel, she paid her money for both nights in advance. The receptionist (接待员) said that was possibly the smartest thing she had done since she decided to take the trip. Jessie dropped her bags in her room and immediately went out to check out some of the sights. It was getting late as Jessie wandered in the streets and decided that even though she was starving, she would rather wait to have dinner later after having a drink. She headed into the closest pub. Jessie noticed a rather strangelooking man staring at her from across the room. He walked to her table and asked her in his most polite manner if she would like to have a beer. After about ten seconds of thought, Jessie came to the conclusion that she would and accepted the offer. But she proposed that she should treat him to some fruits. The man smiled and accepted. Their conversation was mainly about places they had been and places they wanted to go. Jessie soon found out that he was traveling alone too and as soon as he started mentioning that he was staying in the same hotel as her, Jessie swiftly rose from her seat to get another drink. Searching through her bag Jessie found that her wallet was gone! Immediately she realized she took the wrong bag. Her wallet was in another bag. Jessie didn’t panic at first until it hit her that without it, she had not one penny in hand. She was starving. Worst of all, she had generously proposed a treat to the man. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2． 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Without explaining the situation, Jessie ran back to the hotel. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: The man was still there. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Writing 09 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节，使之构成一个完整的故事。 After dinner, Mrs. Quimby told the family that Grandma, who lived on a farm, had sent in a lot of pumpkins for jack-o’-lanterns (空心南瓜灯) for the neighborhood children. There was one in the basement waiting to be carved, she added. Ramona sprang to her feet and dashed down to bring it up, but it was too heavy for a second-grader. Finally Mr. Quimby gave a hand. “Let’s make it smile like last year,” exclaimed Ramona. “Hmm. Let’s see.” Mr. Quimby studied the pumpkin, turning it to find the best side for the face. With a pencil he sketched (素描) a nose-shaped nose, not a triangle. Then the mouth turned up on both sides. “smiling!” Ramona clapped her hands. Mr. Quimby nodded with a smile, cut a circle around the top of the pumpkin and lifted it off for a lid. Without being asked, Ramona found a big spoon for scooping out the seeds. Picky-picky, the Quimbys' shabby old cat, came into the kitchen to see if something had been put in his dish. When he found that it had not, he paused, sniffed the pumpkin smell and angrily walked out with his tail twitching. Mr. Quimby began to whistle as he carved with skill and care, first a mouthful of teeth, each one neat and square, then eyes and eyebrows. He was working on two ears shaped like question marks when Mrs. Quimby announced it was bedtime for Ramona. Unwillingly Ramona ran, took a shower and quickly returned. Now, Mr. Quimby had just carved a few C-shaped curls (卷发) around the hole in the top of the pumpkin. He reached inside and dug a candle holder in the bottom. “There,” he said, putting down his knife. “A work of art.” Mrs. Quimby found a candle stub (残根), inserted it in the pumpkin, lit it and set the lid in place. Ramona turned off the light. The jack-o’-lantern was smiling with a flickering flame. “Wow!” Ramona threw her arms around her father before going to bed with great satisfaction. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2． 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: In the middle of the night Ramona awoke to a noise. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph2: On the table their jack-o’-lantern no longer had a whole face. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 16 生活趣事篇 一、生活趣事类常用词汇 中文 英文 中文 英文 围坐、聚集 gather around 传奇的 legendary 刷手机 scroll through one's phone 合影 group photo 突然想到 pop into one's head 很久以来 in ages 气氛 atmosphere 清理烂摊子 clean up the mess 从... 涌出 pour out of 意想不到的 unexpected 令某人惊讶的是 to one's astonishment 克服麻烦 overcome trouble 卡在... 里 get stuck in 不完美 imperfection 滑倒 slip on 野餐垫 picnic blanket （电脑）蓝屏 go blue 积极的态度 a positive attitude 使情况更糟 make the situation worse 中空的 hollow 惊慌中 in a panic 阻碍、障碍 obstacle 自我感觉良好 look pleased with oneself 烤面包机 toaster 原来是... It turned out that... 叹气、松口气 sigh of relief 覆盖着... be covered in 顽皮的、捣蛋的 mischievous 微焦的 slightly burnt 分享故事 share stories 二、生活趣事类常用句型 一、日常引入（故事起点：铺垫氛围） 1．一家人正围坐在桌旁，进行一个普通的周六晚餐。 The family was gathered around the table for a regular Saturday night dinner. 亮点：“gather around”（围坐、聚集）还原家庭温馨场景，“regular”（普通的）强调 “日常感”，为后续意外打破平静做铺垫，适配家庭趣事开篇。 2．约翰正无聊地刷着手机，突然一个奇怪的想法冒了出来。 John was bored and scrolling through his phone when a strange idea popped into his head. 亮点：“scroll through his phone”（刷手机）是高频日常动作，“pop into his head”（突然想到）用固定搭配自然引出 “趣事触发点”，适合 “由无聊引发趣味事件” 的场景。 3．在一节无聊的化学课上，迈克的肚子突然大声咕咕叫起来。 In the middle of a boring chemistry class, Mike's stomach suddenly growled loudly. 亮点：“in the middle of”（在…… 过程中）明确场景，“growl”（原指动物咆哮，此处形容肚子叫）用幽默手法制造趣味，适配校园日常趣事开篇。 4．我爸爸和往常一样自信，宣布要为我们做一顿大餐。 My dad, confident as always, announced he would cook a fancy meal for us. 亮点：“confident as always”（插入语，表 “和往常一样自信”）塑造人物性格，“announced”（宣布）“fancy meal”（大餐）为后续 “做饭出糗” 埋下伏笔，适合家庭厨艺趣事。 5．房间里的气氛轻松而充满欢笑，直到我们听到厨房传来一声巨响。 The atmosphere in the room was relaxed and full of laughter until we heard a loud crash from the kitchen. 亮点：“relaxed and full of laughter”（轻松欢笑）铺垫氛围，“until” 引导转折，“loud crash”（巨响）触发意外，是 “平静转趣味” 的经典过渡句。 二、意外发生（转折点：打破平静） 1．突然，黑色的烟雾开始从烤面包机里冒出来！ Suddenly, black smoke started pouring out of the toaster! 亮点：“Suddenly”（突然）强化意外感，“pour out of”（从…… 涌出）具象化烟雾形态，“toaster”（烤面包机）是日常家电，场景通用，适配 “家电出故障” 类趣事。 2．令所有人惊讶的是，狗跳上桌子，偷走了整只鸡。 To everyone's astonishment, the dog jumped onto the table and stole the whole chicken. 亮点：“to everyone's astonishment”（令所有人惊讶）点明情绪，“jumped onto”“stole the whole chicken”（跳上桌子偷整只鸡）动作连贯，画面感强，适合动物捣乱类趣事。 3．风筝卡在了树上，我们的野餐垫被一阵大风吹进了河里。 The kite got stuck in a tree, and our picnic blanket was blown into the river by a strong wind. 亮点：“got stuck in”（卡在…… 里）“blown into”（被吹进）双意外叠加，“picnic blanket”（野餐垫）“strong wind”（大风）贴合户外场景，适配 “野餐 / 户外活动出糗” 情节。 4．她踩在一块香蕉皮上滑了一下差点摔倒，但疯狂地挥舞手臂以保持平衡。 She slipped on a banana peel and almost fell, but she waved her arms wildly to keep balance. 亮点：“slip on a banana peel”（踩香蕉皮滑倒）是经典趣味场景，“waved her arms wildly”（疯狂挥臂）细节动作增加滑稽感，“keep balance”（保持平衡）体现慌乱中的反应，通用性强。 5．电脑屏幕突然蓝屏了，他所有未保存的工作一秒钟内全消失了。 The computer screen suddenly went blue, and all his unsaved work disappeared in a second. 亮点：“went blue”（蓝屏）是电脑故障高频表达，“unsaved work”（未保存的工作）“in a second”（一秒内）强化意外后果，适合 “电子设备出问题” 的日常趣事。 三、趣味发展（主体：混乱与滑稽） 1．我们都冲过去帮忙，结果却只是互相碍事。 We all rushed to help, but we only ended up getting in each other's way. 亮点：“rushed to help”（冲过去帮忙）体现初衷，“ended up getting in each other's way”（最终互相碍事）用 “好心办坏事” 制造趣味，“end up doing”（最终……）是核心结构，适配多人应对意外的场景。 2．他试图用锤子修理它，这当然让情况变得更糟了。 He tried to fix it with a hammer, which, of course, made the situation even worse. 亮点：“fix it with a hammer”（用锤子修理）凸显 “盲目解决” 的滑稽，“of course”（插入语）增强幽默语气，“made the situation even worse”（让情况更糟）是趣味发展的核心逻辑，适配 “修理出糗” 情节。 3．慌乱中，她把盐当成了糖，让蛋糕吃起来味道怪极了。 In a panic, she used salt instead of sugar, making the cake taste extremely strange. 亮点：“in a panic”（慌乱中）交代状态，“instead of”（把…… 当成……）是 “误操作” 的经典表达，“taste extremely strange”（味道怪极了）点明后果，适合厨房做饭趣事。 4．他们试图保持安静，但他们的每一个动作似乎都发出了更大的响声。 They were trying to be quiet, but every move they made seemed to create a louder noise. 亮点：“trying to be quiet”（试图安静）与 “create a louder noise”（发出更大响声）形成反差，“every move”（每一个动作）细节放大滑稽感，适配 “偷偷做事却搞砸” 的场景。 5．我笑得太厉害，气都喘不过来了，更别提提供任何有用的帮助了。 I was laughing so hard that I couldn't breathe, let alone offer any useful help. 亮点：“laugh so hard that”（笑得太厉害以至于……）夸张表达情绪，“let alone”（更别提）递进关系强化 “只顾笑不帮忙” 的趣味，适合旁观者视角的趣事描写。 四、爆笑解决（高潮：荒诞与和解） 1．最后，狗叼着空盘子跑回来了，看起来对自己非常满意。 Finally, the dog ran back with an empty plate, looking very pleased with himself. 亮点：“looking very pleased with himself”（自我感觉良好）拟人化描写动物神态，“empty plate”（空盘子）呼应前文 “偷食物”，结局荒诞又可爱，适配动物相关趣事。 2．原来，“鬼” 的声音只是老冰箱的嗡嗡声。 It turned out that the ‘ghost' noise was just the old refrigerator humming. 亮点：“It turned out that...”（原来是……）是 “解开误会” 的万能句型，“humming”（嗡嗡声）具象化声音，“ghost noise”（鬼声）与 “冰箱声” 的反差制造爆笑效果，适合 “误解类趣事”。 3．我们解决问题靠的不是技术，而是很多运气和更多的笑声。 We solved the problem not with skill, but with a lot of luck and even more laughter. 亮点：“not... but...”（不是…… 而是……）突出 “非专业解决” 的趣味，“a lot of luck and even more laughter”（运气和笑声）点明趣事核心，适配所有 “混乱中解决问题” 的场景。 4．最后，我们都坐在地板上，吃着有点焦但美味的三明治。 In the end, we all sat on the floor, eating slightly burnt but delicious sandwiches. 亮点：“slightly burnt but delicious”（有点焦但美味）形成反差，“sat on the floor”（坐在地板上）还原放松氛围，适合 “做饭失败后凑活吃” 的家庭趣事。 5．他脸上沾满了面粉，端出了那个 “蛋糕”，结果实际上是个披萨。 His face was covered in flour, and he presented the ‘cake' which was actually a pizza. 亮点：“was covered in flour”（满脸面粉）细节形象，“‘cake' which was actually a pizza”（名为蛋糕实为披萨）的反差制造爆笑，“presented”（端出）动作完整，适合厨艺翻车趣事。 五、趣味收尾（结尾：轻松回味） 1．我们晚上剩下的时间都在分享故事，笑谈我们这次小小的 “冒险”。 We spent the rest of the evening sharing stories and laughing about our little ‘adventure'. 亮点：“spent the rest of the evening doing”（晚上剩下时间做……）交代收尾场景，“little ‘adventure'”（加引号的小冒险）幽默指代趣事，“sharing stories and laughing”（分享欢笑）贴合收尾氛围，通用性强。 2．那天的事成了我们家的一个传奇故事，每次聚会都会被反复讲述。 That day became a legendary story in our family, told and retold at every gathering. 亮点：“legendary”（传奇的）夸张形容趣事的难忘，“told and retold”（反复讲述）体现故事的流传性，“at every gathering”（每次聚会）适配家庭场景，适合 “成为家庭经典趣事” 的收尾。 3．我们拍了一张傻乎乎的合影，以永远记住这一刻。 We took a silly group photo to remember the moment forever. 亮点：“silly group photo”（傻乎乎的合影）细节具象化，“remember the moment forever”（永远记住这一刻）点明目的，适合所有趣事的 “纪念式收尾”，操作简单易套用。 4．尽管计划完全失败了，但我们都一致认为这是很久以来我们玩得最开心的一次。 Even though the plan failed completely, we all agreed it was the most fun we'd had in ages. 亮点：“Even though”（尽管）引导让步，“failed completely”（完全失败）与 “most fun we'd had in ages”（很久最开心）形成反差，突出趣事的积极意义，适配 “计划翻车却开心” 的场景。 5．我们一起清理了烂摊子，仍然拿刚才发生的事开玩笑。 We cleaned up the mess together, still joking about what had happened. 亮点：“cleaned up the mess”（清理烂摊子）是 “收尾必做动作”，“still joking about”（仍在开玩笑）延续幽默氛围，适合 “共同收拾残局” 的互动场景，体现团队感。 六、感悟升华（主题：提炼意义） 1．我明白了，最美好的回忆往往来自于最意想不到的瞬间。 I learned that the best memories often come from the most unexpected moments. 亮点：“the best memories come from unexpected moments”（美好回忆来自意外瞬间）是趣事类故事的核心感悟，“learned that”（明白了）引出哲理，适配所有 “意外引发趣味” 的故事结尾。 2．它告诉我们，一起大笑是克服任何小麻烦的最好方法。 It taught us that laughing together is the best way to overcome any small trouble. 亮点：“laughing together”（一起大笑）点明趣事的核心行为，“overcome any small trouble”（克服小麻烦）提炼解决问题的态度，适合 “多人互动类趣事” 的升华。 3．我们意识到，让生活有趣而真实的不是完美，而是不完美。 We realized that it's not perfection, but imperfection that makes life fun and real. 亮点：“It is... that...” 强调句突出 “imperfection”（不完美），“makes life fun and real”（让生活有趣真实）升华主题，适配 “因不完美产生趣味” 的故事，立意深刻且通用。 4．这个有趣的事件让我们比以前更加亲密了。 This funny incident brought us closer together than ever before. 亮点：“brought us closer together”（让我们更亲密）点明趣事的 “情感价值”，“than ever before”（比以前更）强化程度，适合家庭、朋友间趣事的升华，突出关系升温。 5．现在我明白了，积极的态度可以把一场灾难变成一个有趣的故事。 Now I understand that a positive attitude can turn a disaster into a fun story. 亮点：“turn a disaster into a fun story”（把灾难变成趣事）是 “态度决定感受” 的经典表达，“positive attitude”（积极态度）是核心主题，适配所有 “从糟糕到有趣” 的故事，通用性极强。 三、高考真题演练 【真题1】2025年1月八省联考（ 彪悍机车党的柔软爱心） I was in Philadelphia for a conference when I saw an ad in the hotel. A nearby theater was showing a documentary (纪录片) about several local animal shelters that were helping to save abandoned dogs across the country. I love animals, and I felt an urge to go to this fundraising event. However, none of my co-workers would go with me, and I was worried about walking on the street alone at night. I resigned myself to spending the evening in my hotel room, but as soon as I got back to my room I felt restless and bored. The theater where the event was taking place was only about five blocks from the hotel, and the area around the hotel didn’t seem particularly dangerous. So, I decided to brave it. I gathered up my wallet and room key and set off. It was already getting dark and the streets were nearly deserted. I managed to find the street the theater was on, but when I turned the corner, I stopped in shock. In front of the theater were a group of bikers–very big, tough-looking bikers. I’ve known lots of motorcycle enthusiasts and most are nice people. However, in this case, I was a woman all alone, in a strange neighborhood, at night, and there were twenty or so very large men–all wearing insignia (徽章) that indicated they were in some sort of club–standing before me. Warning bells began to sound in my head, and my heart was pounding. Was I at the right theater? Had I misread the date of the event? A sign outside the theater told me that I was in the right place on the right evening. Nevertheless, I wondered if I should rush back to my hotel instead of walking through that crowd of bikers. I finally decided that I would be safer inside the theater. Hopefully, the bikers would have gone away by the time the film was over. 注意： （1）续写词数应为150个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. Paragraph 2: When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. 【范文1】 I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. My heart sank and I felt a bit panicked. But I noticed that they were all very orderly. Some were chatting quietly about the dogs they had rescued. I took a deep breath and found an empty seat as far away from them as possible. I was still a bit nervous but tried to calm myself down, waiting for the film to start.  When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. They were here for the same reason as me - to support the local animal shelters. I felt so ashamed of my initial fear. As the film played, I saw their efforts in saving the abandoned dogs. They were so passionate and kind. After the film, I went up to them and apologized for my misjudgment. They just laughed and said it was okay. We even exchanged contact information to keep in touch about future animal - saving activities. 主旨大意 文章主要讲述了“我”在费城参加会议期间，因热爱动物想独自去观看一场关于动物救助站的纪录片筹款活动，途中遇到一群看起来很凶悍的摩托车骑手，尽管害怕但还是决定进入剧院，为后续在剧院内的发现等情节做铺垫，展现出一场因误解产生紧张又意外的经历。 伏笔 文中提到“有二十个左右身材高大的男人——都佩戴着表明他们属于某个俱乐部的徽章——站在我面前”，以及“我”内心的担忧和纠结要不要进入剧院等描写，都为后文揭示这些骑手的真实身份埋下伏笔，让读者也跟着“我”一起好奇他们到底是怎样的群体。 情节发展 先是“我”看到活动广告想参加却因无人陪同而犹豫，最终决定独自前往。接着在剧院外看到一群令人生畏的骑手，一番思想斗争后进入剧院，发现里面还有更多骑手，最后在电影开始时才明白他们原来是动物救援团体，情节层层递进，充满意外感。 情绪变化 从一开始对活动的期待，到独自出行时的些许不安，看到骑手后的极度紧张、害怕，再到进入剧院后的忐忑，最后得知真相后的释然，情绪变化丰富且符合情节发展逻辑，使读者能很好地代入“我”的视角感受整个过程。 主题句 1． "Don't judge a book by its cover, as those who seem intimidating might have a kind heart．" 不要以貌取人，那些看似令人生畏的人或许有着善良的心。 2． "Appearances can be deceiving, and unexpected kindness may come from the most unlikely people．" 外表可能具有欺骗性，意想不到的善意或许来自最不可能的人。  3． "One should never make assumptions based on looks alone, for there's often more than meets the eye．" 人们绝不应该仅凭外表就妄下论断，因为往往有很多内在的东西是看不到的。 4． "Underneath a tough exterior could lie a warm and caring soul, just as those bikers did．" 在强硬的外表之下可能藏着一颗温暖且有爱心的灵魂，就像那些骑手一样。 5． "We should look beyond appearances to discover the true nature of others, as the bikers' story shows．" 我们应该透过外表去发现他人的真实品性，正如那些骑手的故事所展示的那样。 【范文2】 I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. My heart sank and I felt like I had walked into a lion's den. They were chatting loudly and seemed to fill every corner of the place. I quickly found an empty seat in a corner, trying to make myself as inconspicuous as possible. I kept stealing glances at them, still feeling extremely nervous.  When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. They were here for the same reason as I was-to support the animal shelters. They had organized this event to raise funds and awareness for the abandoned dogs. As I watched them watching the film with such passion and care in their eyes, I felt ashamed of my initial judgment. I was touched by their love for animals and glad that I hadn't let my fear stop me from coming. 生词归纳： 1．“inconspicuous”：形容词，意为“不显眼的；不引人注意的”，例句“He tried to make himself inconspicuous in the crowd．”（他试图在人群中让自己不引人注意。）  2．“initial”：形容词，意思是“最初的；开始的”，例如“Her initial reaction was one of shock．”（她最初的反应是震惊。） 高级句式解析： 1．“only to find there were even more bikers inside”是不定式作结果状语，表示意料之外的结果，生动地体现出“我”进入剧院后看到更多骑手时那种糟糕又意外的心情。 2． “I felt ashamed of my initial judgment．”使用了“be ashamed of”这一短语，表示“为……感到羞愧”，准确地传达出“我”得知真相后对自己一开始仅凭外表判断他人的惭愧心理。 【范文3】 I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. I froze for a moment, my palms sweating and my mind racing with all kinds of worst-case scenarios. But since I was already inside, I took a deep breath and walked slowly towards an empty row, constantly aware of their presence around me.  When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. It turned out that they were using their club's influence to advocate for these poor animals. They were the ones who had put a lot of effort into organizing this fundraising event. Watching them so engrossed in the documentary, I couldn't help but smile. I was relieved that my unfounded fears had been just that-unfounded. And I was truly inspired by their dedication to the cause of helping animals. 生词归纳： 1． “scenarios”：名词，复数形式，意为“设想；方案；情节”，如“We need to consider different scenarios before making a decision．”（在做决定之前我们需要考虑不同的设想情况。）  2． “engrossed”：形容词，“全神贯注的；专心致志的”，常用搭配“be engrossed in”，例如“He was engrossed in reading the book．”（他全神贯注地读那本书。） 高级句式解析： 1． “I froze for a moment, my palms sweating and my mind racing with all kinds of worst-case scenarios．”此句运用了独立主格结构，“my palms sweating”和“my mind racing”分别对“我”当时的状态进行了细节描写，使画面感更强，更生动地展现出“我”紧张害怕的样子。 2． “It turned out that they were using their club's influence to advocate for these poor animals．”中“It turned out that．．．”是一个常用句型，意为“结果是……；原来是……”，用于引出意想不到的结果或真相，在这里很好地起到了揭示骑手真实身份和目的的作用。 【真题2】2021年1月浙江卷：万圣节南瓜卡头 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 Pumpkin (南瓜）carving at Halloween is a family tradition. We visit a local farm every October. In the pumpkin field, I compete with my three brothers and sister to seek out the biggest pumpkin. My dad has a rule that we have to carry our pumpkins back home, and as the eldest child I have an advantage — I carried an 85-pounder back last year. This year, it was hard to tell whether my prize or the one chosen by my 14-year-old brother, Jason, was the winner. Unfortunately we forgot to weigh them before taking out their insides, but I was determined to prove my point. All of us were hard at work at the kitchen table, with my mom filming the annual event. I’m unsure now why I thought forcing my head inside the pumpkin would settle the matter, but it seemed to make perfect sense at the time. With the pumpkin resting on the table, hole uppermost, I bent over and pressed my head against the opening. At first I got jammed just above my eyes and then, as I went on with my task, unwilling to quit, my nose briefly prevented entry. Finally I managed to put my whole head into it, like a cork (软木塞) forced into a bottle. I was able to straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting on my shoulders. My excitement was short-lived. The pumpkin was heavy. “I’m going to set it down, now,” I said, and with Jason helping to support its weight, I bent back over the table to give it somewhere to rest. It was only when I tried to remove my head that I realized getting out was going to be less straightforward than getting in. When I pulled hard, my nose got in the way. I got into a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head around trying to find the right angle, but it was no use. “I can’t get it out!” I shouted, my voice sounding unnaturally loud in the enclosed space. 注意： 1． 所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 2． 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3． 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4． 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1 I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2 That video was posted the day before Halloween. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 优秀范文1 It was five or six minutes though it felt much longer. The air inside the hollow vegetable was full of my anxious breath. I could hear my sister’s laughter and Jason’s muffled voice talking about cutting the giant thing open. “No! Not my precious pumpkin!” I protested. Eventually, Dad helped me adjust my body to a more relaxed position, and pulled the pumpkin gently off my head. Hair in knots, nose and chain covered in pumpkin flesh, I let out a sigh of relief. That’s when I realized the camera had been rolling the whole time! The video was posted online the Monday before Halloween.I looked just like a pumpkin head in it. Embarrassed and a little annoyed, I fled to my room, but Mom stopped me. “You haven’t read the comments yet.” I scrolled down the screen and marveled at the stories the viewers shared about Halloween. One girl recalled celebrating it with her brothers and sisters, and thanked us for “bringing her home”. The words brought warmth to my heart and tears to my eyes. I felt lucky to be a part of this mischievous yet loving family. (171 words) 出彩表达积累（出自原文及范文） 1．hollow adj． 中空的；空心的 2．muffled adj．沉闷的；模糊不清的 3．sigh n．叹气；叹息 4．marvel v．感到惊奇；大为赞叹 5．mischievous adj．顽皮的；捣蛋的 6．scroll down  向下滚动 7．Eventually, Dad helped me adjust my body to a more relaxed position, and pulled the pumpkin gently off my head． 最后，爸爸帮我把身体调整到一个比较放松的姿势，轻轻地把南瓜从我头上扯下来。（对动作的生动描写） 8．The words brought warmth to my heart and tears to my eyes． 这些话温暖了我的心，使我热泪盈眶。（对神态的生动描写） 优秀范文2 It was five or six minutes though it felt much longer.Jason suggested using a knife to cut the pumpkin open. I waved my hands wildly in protest at the plan. “Then you need to find a way of pulling yourself out.” My dad said in a calm, cool voice. His voice settled my nerves. I was conscious that my nose was acting as an impediment to my escape. With stretching out my face and biting into the pumpkin, I surmounted the large obstacle and managed to pull my head out. A ripple of excitement ran through us but the first thing I saw was the camera. The video was posted online the Monday before Halloween. In the space of a week, it had been viewed over a million times. It filled Mom with greater astonishment. Rarely had a pumpkin’s video had so many hits as this one. Dangerous as it is, some viewers’ curiosity was too strong to resist. They left messages describing the feelings they had while watching it. Some laughed at me, while others praised my parents, who remained calm throughout. Looking through these reviews, the sunlight peeking through our , Dad’s calm smile reflected his motto “All’s well with us, never fear”. (186 words) 出彩表达积累（出自原文及范文） 1． nerve n．神经质；神经紧张 2． conscious adj．意识到；注意到 3． impediment n．妨碍；阻碍；障碍 4． surmount v．克服；解决 5． obstacle n．障碍；阻碍；绊脚石 6． ripple n．波纹；细浪；涟漪 7． His voice settled my nerves．   他的声音使我安定下来。（无灵主语） 8． It filled Mom with greater astonishment．这使母亲尤为惊讶。（对情绪的生动描写） 【真题3】2017年浙江卷：健忘而可爱的妈妈 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 A vacation with my mother     I had an interesting childhood: It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because of my mother-loving, sweet, and yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.    My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip approached, David, my eight-year-old brother, and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. Who knew if we’d ever see them again? Finally, the moment of our departure arrived, and we loaded suitcases, books, games, camping equipment, and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after we’d returned home to get the purse and traveler’s checks Mom had forgotten.    David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving while Dadslept:” You stand outside the door and play lookout while I go, and I’ll stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind: “Honey, where are the kids?” “What?! Oh, Gosh… I thought they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a strange city, but we weren’t about to take any chances. On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didn’t we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there? David and I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections.If a strange family showed up on her front doorsteps, Mom would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world as as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town.  注意： 1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3. 续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好； 4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1  The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2  We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 优秀范文 The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.But then we were half an hour away from the hotel, where the tentwas left behind. Dad recommended buying a new one, while Mom insisted on our going back to fetch it, saying "Forgetful people like me may lose things repeatedly, so it's unwise to give up the tent." Finally, we got back the tent and hit the road again. If Mom hadn't been that absent-minded, it would have saved us the trouble of going back again and again. We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. One day, towards evening, we found a great campingsite at the foot of a high mountain. Davidand I helped Dad put up the tent, and Mom was busy preparing supper. When the setting sun cast an orange light over the mountains, the tent was set up and the meal was ready. Sitting around the camp fire, we talked and laughed. Every time we mentioned the funny incidents of the journey a pleasant smile would spread over Mom's face. 解析 文章中文大意：我的母亲很健忘（absent-minded and forgetful），一家四口去祖父母在的省自驾旅游，途中发生了有趣的事情，比如爸爸叫我盯住妈妈，以防她开车的时候睡着： 第一段开头句：我们拿出来新买的帐篷 第二段开头句：我们愉快地欣赏路边的景色 关键词： mom dad  David （弟弟）, tent, camping, nice, trouble, forgetful, absent-minded 实战解析 首先，根据文章当中第二段内容比较开心的基调，第一段的故事情节应该比较偏向正面感情色彩，例如：我们在露营过程中一起搭建帐篷的开心时光或露营过程中的趣事（尤其是前文有铺垫妈妈是个forgetful的人，这一点也可以埋下伏笔来表达后面过程中由于妈妈健忘而带来的趣事）（也有同学在此处描述了露营过程中对其他陌生人提供帮助，来集中体现nice这一个点）； 其次，第二段开头说来描述欣赏风景： 此处可以用一些描述景色环境的表达来烘托下氛围，但是第二段不能仅仅只有景色描述； 例如：这里可以实写和虚写结合的方式，看到景色（同时回忆往事），最终把故事的落脚点放在 "家人的感情" "亲情" "生活的乐趣" "与妈妈一起的趣事" 等等角度都可以的；当然也有同学描述与陌生人的相遇，引出了陌生人的善意这个主题；总之这次的话题比较开放，情节可以写的角度比较多； 再次，除了情节方面的内容以外，以下几个方面是考生需要着重关注的得分点：字迹清晰程度，语法多样性和句式丰富性，衔接成分的使用，语言的场景恰当程度；高考英语写作中，考生所采用的句型结构一定程度上影响了老师对考生写作水平的判断；说到语法丰富性方面，例如在作文中用到从句结构、强调句、非谓语结构等。尤其应该注意的是：避免句型单一化，如通篇使用定语从句，这样反而使阅卷老师觉得该考生对句型掌握的不够充分。应该在文章写作中有意识地多使用不同的句型结构。例如：They said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever.（such… that结构）。  由于阅卷老师在评卷时的时间十分有限，在作文中放入显耀的连接词可以帮助老师快速抓住文章结构，促使老师更好地理解文章主旨，同时清晰的连接词可以显示作者写作时严谨的逻辑。例如：upon one's arrival, then, however, besides, while等。 四、模拟题演练01 Writing 01 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was at least two months before Christmas when nine-year-old Almie Rose told her father and me that she wanted a new bicycle. Her old Barbie bicycle was just too babyish, and besides, it needed a new tire. As Christmas drew nearer, her desire for a bicycle seemed to fade, —or so we thought, as she didn’t mention it again. Merrily, we started purchasing the latest fashion—Baby Sitter’s Club dolls—and beautiful story books, a doll house, a holiday dress and toys. Then, much to our surprise, on December 23rd, she proudly announced that she “really wanted a bike more than anything else.” Now we didn’t know what to do. It was just too late, with all the details of preparing Christmas dinner and buying last-minute gifts. So here we were—Christmas Eve around 9:00 p.m., having just returned from a wonderful party, looking forward to our evening ahead—hours of wrapping children’s presents, parents’ presents, a brother’s presents and friends’ presents. With Almie Rose and her six-year-old brother, Dylan, lay comfortably in their beds. Now we could only think of the bicycle, the guilt and the idea that we were parents who would disappoint their child. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: “What if I make a little bicycle out of clay (黏土) and she can trade it for a real one later?” my husband Ron thought. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: On Christmas morning, we were excited for Almie to open the package with the clay bike. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ “What if I make a little bicycle out of clay (黏土)and she can trade it for a real one later?" my husband Ron thought.He also wrote a note that she could trade it for a real bike. "This is an expensive item and she is 'such a big girl,' it would be much better for her to pick it out." he thought. So he spent the next four hours painstakingly (尽心地) working with clay to make a tiny bike. Finally, his face expanded with a satisfied smile when he finished it. On Christmas morning, we were excited for Almie to open the package with the clay bike. Almie’s heart raced when she opened it and found the note. "Does this mean that I will trade this bike that Daddy made me for a real one?" Smiling, I said, "Yes." With tears in her eyes, she replied, "I could never trade in this beautiful bicycle that Daddy made me. I'd rather keep this than get a real bike." At that moment, we were too amazed to hear her response and her father hugged her tightly. 【导语】这段读后续写围绕圣诞前夕孩子想要自行车却因准备不及时，父母用黏土做自行车展开。以下从续写思路、词汇激活和高分句型等方面进行解析： 【详解】续写思路 第一段：由首句丈夫提出用黏土做自行车的想法可知，此段主要描写丈夫制作黏土自行车的过程，包括他的行动、想法以及完成后的心情，从而体现父母对孩子的爱与弥补心理。 第二段：首句表明到了圣诞节早上，孩子要打开装有黏土自行车的包裹，该段着重描写孩子打开包裹后的反应，如看到黏土自行车和纸条后的情感变化，以及她的决定，突出孩子对父母心意的珍视。 词汇激活： 制作：make/create/ craft 写：write/compose 挑选：pick out/select/ choose 满意的：satisfied/content/ pleased 惊讶的：amazed/astonished/ astounded 【点睛】 高分句型： 1.“He also wrote a note that she could trade it for a real bike.” （由 that 引导的同位语从句，解释说明 note 的内容） 2.“I could never trade in this beautiful bicycle that Daddy made me. I'd rather keep this than get a real bike.” （that 引导定语从句修饰 bicycle；“would rather...than...” 结构，表达孩子的选择） 。 Writing 02 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Seeing the United Parcel Truck pull into my driveway, I opened the garage door knowing that another package had arrived helping us with the Christmas in July Party we were putting together for the homeless children at a local charity. As I stood watching the driver get the packages from the back of the truck, I saw Madison, my three-year-old granddaughter, picking weeds from the lawn. “These are for my mommy and daddy,” she replied, as she held out a hand full of worthless little weeds. I just smiled and nodded my head as I looked at her tight little closed fist. The UPT driver walked into the garage and sat the two packages down on the wooden bench. He and I stood talking about the numerous baseball gloves, baseball bats, helmets and baseballs sitting about the room. I told him I had been raised in a Jacksonville, Florida orphanage and that during my entire childhood I never once owned anything of my own. I told him that these presents were for the children themselves and not for the orphanage. After talking for a few minutes, the driver told me he had to leave. He waved and began walking back down the driveway. I turned around, locked garage door and began walking up onto the front porch. Just as I closed the gate, Madison came running up to where I was standing. “My flowers, my flowers,” she screamed aloud. I soon realized that I had locked her weeds in the garage. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 “We’ll get them later,” I told her. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I turned around, walked back to the end of the porch and opened the gate. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: “We’ll get them later,” I told her. I just did not want to walk back down the stairs and unlock the garage door for a bunch of worthless weeds. Putting my hand onto her small shoulder, I began directing her back into the house. She stood there with tears welling up in her eyes. “These flowers are specially for my mommy and daddy,” she sobbed. All of a sudden, I realized that those baseball gloves were like gold to those homeless children just as those weeds were beautiful flowers to my granddaughter. I turned around, walked back to the end of the porch and opened the gate. Then I walked down the three stairs, took out my keys and opened the garage door. Wearing a shining smile on her face, Madison ran past me, grabbing the little treasures she had picked moments before. “Thank you, grandma, I love you!” she said. I knelt down, looked through the green, now lifeless weeds and smiled as I saw the beauty of a dozen beautiful red roses reflecting in her eyes. As is often the case, something valueless to adults means a lot to children. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者一家为当地慈善机构的无家可归的孩子们举办的7月圣诞派对，孙女说她专门为父母准备了花，其实只是杂草。一开始作者并不重视孙女要打开车库门的请求，后来认识到了孙女的用心，非常感动。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“我告诉她：‘我们一会儿再去拿。’”可知，第一段可描写孙女被拒绝后的伤心反应，作者的感悟和反应。 ②由第二段首句内容“我转过身，走回门廊的尽头，打开了门。”可知，第二段可描写作者为孙女开门拿东西，认识到了一些对成年人来说毫无价值的东西对孩子来说却很重要。 2.续写线索：拒绝开车库门——孙女哭泣——感悟——打开库门——孙女开心——感悟 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①回去：walk back /go back ②开始：begin /start ③看见：see/spot 情绪类 ①专门：specially / particularly ②美丽：beautiful /gorgeous 【点睛】[高分句型1] Putting my hand onto her small shoulder, I began directing her back into the house. (运用了现在分词作状语) [高分句型2] All of a sudden, I realized that those baseball gloves were like gold to those homeless children just as those weeds were beautiful flowers to my granddaughter. (运用了that引导宾语从句) Writing 03 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Alice and her family went on a camping trip along the seaside. Upon arrival, Dad called for a meeting. He announced, “There are lots of jobs to be done. It’s no fun on holiday if Mum and I do all the work, so I come up with this pocket money chart. In this way, everyone has to do something, and you must do your own job every day! If you do your jobs well, you get some extra pocket money!” Looking at the chart, which had their names on it next to a list of jobs, the kids frowned (皱眉) at the idea. Unwillingly, they began to do their jobs. Alice washed up the dishes. Mike, the youngest brother, dried the dishes. Jeff, Alice’s twin brother, took their dog for a walk. The next day they went to the beach. After playing some time in the sea, they went to look for shells along the beach. Suddenly, Alice found a strange-looking rock. She picked it up and showed it to Dad. “You’ve found a fossil (化石)! It was once a shellfish and has turned into a rock after millions of years!” Dad said happily. Greatly inspired, Alice continued her search, determined to find a better one, but she failed. Darkness fell, and Alice had to head back to the campsite with her family in disappointment. On the way back they stopped at a shop, where Alice spotted some amazing fossils! But soon she found they were too expensive! Back at the camp, Alice was still thinking of the amazing fossils in the shop. Suddenly an idea occurred to her, “I’ll do everyone’s jobs and then I can get all the extra pocket money to buy a fossil!” The next morning, Alice offered to dry the dishes and walk the dog, which greatly pleased Mike and Jeff. But things didn’t go as Alice planned. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 When Dad saw Alice walking the dog, he was confused. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Later that morning, Mike and Jeff approached Alice when they found she was unhappy. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Paragraph 1: When Dad saw Alice walking the dog, he was confused. Obviously, he was not happy about this. When Alice came back, Dad asked why she was doing Jeff’s jobs. Alice stuttered, “I....I just want to earn all the extra pocket money to buy that fossil in the shop.” “I’m sorry, Alice, I’m afraid you can’t. You all have to do the jobs -not just you. The point is that we share the jobs.” Dad said. Hearing what Dad said, Alice was taken hold of by a surge of disappointment mixed with sadness. She thought it was unfair that Dad just ignored her hard work. Paragraph 2: Later that morning, Mike and Jeff approached Alice when they found she was unhappy. They presented a small box and urged her to open it. Alice had no idea what was going on, but seeing her two brothers’ eyes twinkling with eagerness, she opened it. The moment she saw what was inside, Alice jumped up with joy. It was her brothers’ extra pocket money, with which she could afford one of the fossils she dreamed about! She threw her arms around her brothers, tears welling up in her eyes. Jeff said, “Dad told us your plan.” It dawned on Alice that Dad was trying to tell her that rules are rules but love between family members never fails. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Alice和她的家人沿着海边露营，她的爸爸提出每个孩子可以通过做一些工作来赚取零花钱，但是孩子们却不情愿地做这些工作，第二天，他们去了海滩。在海里玩了一段时间后，他们沿着海滩去找贝壳。突然，Alice发现了一块奇怪的石头，爸爸告诉她那是化石，Alice决定寻找更好的，在一家商店里她发现了一些令人惊奇的化石，但是太贵了，她决定干所有孩子们的工作来获得零花钱来买化石，事情并没有像Alice计划的那样发展。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“当爸爸看到爱丽丝在遛狗时，他很困惑。”可知，第一段可描写爸爸对爱丽丝做其他孩子的工作一事不满意。 ②由第二段首句内容“那天上午晚些时候，迈克和杰夫发现爱丽丝不开心，就去找她。”可知，第二段可描写爱丽丝的哥哥们如何帮助爱丽丝，让爱丽丝高兴起来。 2.续写线索：爸爸询问——爱丽丝解释——爸爸教育爱丽丝——爱丽丝的感受——哥哥们送给爱丽丝零花钱——爱丽丝高兴——感悟 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①询问：ask/inquire ②递交：present/hand ③拥抱：throw one’s arms around sb./embrace sb. 情绪类 ①悲伤：sadness/sorrow ②高兴：joy/delight 【点睛】[高分句型1] When Alice came back, Dad asked why she was doing Jeff’s jobs. (由when引导的时间状语从句和why引导的宾语从句) [高分句型2] It dawned on Alice that Dad was trying to tell her that rules are rules but love between family members never fails. (由that引导的主语从句和that引导的宾语从句) Writing 04 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 One day, I found a wallet on the street. The wallet contained only three dollars and a very old letter. The envelope was worn and the only thing on it was the return address. I started to open the letter, hoping to find some information. Then I saw the date-1990, and the signature-Beatrice. The letter was written several decades ago. Then I made every effort and found out that Beatrice was now working in a hospital. I showed her the letter. The second she saw the letter, she took a deep breath and said, “Young man, this letter was the last contact I ever had with Henry. He is my only brother. I loved him very much. I was only 16 at the time and my brother is two years younger than me. If you can find him, tell him I'm still looking for him,” she said and tears began to well up in her eyes. “Mother is waiting for him to come back home.” When I walked out of the building with the wallet in my hand, the guard of the building recognized the wallet, and with his help, I finally found its owner, Henry. I handed the wallet to Henry and he said, “Yes, that's mine! It must have dropped out of my pocket this afternoon.” “I read the letter in the hope of finding out who owned the wallet.” I said. The smile on his face suddenly disappeared. He asked, “You read that letter?” “Not only did I read it, but also Beatrice read.” I replied. He suddenly became excited. “Beatrice? You know where she is? How is she? Please tell me,” he begged. “She's fine. She has been looking for you.” I said softly. He grabbed my hand and said, “Sir, you know she is my only sister in this world. I've always missed her.” Henry and I took the elevator (电梯) down to Beatrice's room. I walked over to her. “Beatrice,” I said softly, pointing to Henry, who was waiting with me in the doorway. “Do you know the man?” 注意： 1．续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Beatrice adjusted her glasses, looked for a moment, but didn't say a word． ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ About three weeks later I got a call at my office from Beatrice． _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Paragraph 1： Beatrice adjusted her glasses, looked for a moment, but didn't say a word．Henry said softly, almost in a whisper, “Beatrice, it’s Henry. Do you remember me? ” She said excitedly, “Henry! I don’t believe it! Henry! It's you! My Henry! ” He walked slowly towards her and they hugged. The nurse and I left with tears falling down our faces. 比阿特丽斯调整了一下眼镜，看了一会儿，但一句话也没说。亨利轻声说，几乎是轻声说，“比阿特丽斯，是亨利。你还记得我了吗？她兴奋地说，“亨利！”我不相信！亨利！是你的名字！我的亨利先生！他慢慢地向她走去，他们拥抱在一起。护士和我离开了，眼泪流了下来。 Paragraph 2： About three weeks later I got a call at my office from Beatrice．“Can you break away on Sunday to attend a party? Henry and Beatrice are going to have a party in the home! ” It was a beautiful party with all the people dressed up to join in the celebration. If you ever wanted to see a woman and a man acting like two teenagers, you had to see this elder sister and younger brother. It was a perfect ending for a family affection that had lasted nearly several decades. 大约三周后，我接到比阿特丽斯的电话。“你星期天可以参加聚会吗？”亨利和比阿特丽斯将在家里举办一个聚会！“这是一个美丽的派对，所有人都盛装参加庆祝活动。如果你想看到一个女人和一个男人像两个青少年，你必须看到这个姐姐和弟弟。这是一个持续了近几十年的家庭感情的完美结局。 【解析】 本文以信封为线索展开，讲述了作者在街上发现了一个钱包，在里面发现一封破旧的信，通过努力找到信主人的姐姐，通过保安大叔找到了钱包主人，最后，姐弟重逢的故事。 1．段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“比阿特丽斯扶了扶眼镜，看了一会儿，但没有说一句话。”可知，第一段可描写姐弟两人重逢的温馨场景。 ②由第二段首句内容“大约三周后，我在办公室接到比阿特丽斯的电话。”可知，第二段可描写作者对重逢事件的感慨。 2．续写线索：发现信封——找到信封主人姐姐——找到主人——姐弟重逢——感谢——感悟 3．词汇激活 行为类 接电话：get a call at/put sb on to/pick up the telephone/answer the phone 抽出时间：break away on/take time off/spare one’s time 情绪类 兴奋：did excitedly/thrilled 泪流满面：tears bathe/stream down/one’s cheeks 【点睛】 [高分句型1]：The nurse and I left with tears falling down our faces.这句话运用了with的复合结构。 [高分句型2]：It was a perfect ending for a family affection that had lasted nearly several decades这句话运用了that引导的定语从句。 Writing 05 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。（满分25分） During lunchtime，Emma suggested going to the zoo to feed the animals and her mom agreed. “We’ll stop by the bakery and pick some bread up. Now hurry and eat and then we’ll go. It’s going to be a lovely day. Grandma is coming with us. She’ll be here any minute，”mom said. Emma ate her lunch and then ran into her room to get her shoes.The problem was that she could only find one of them. She looked under her bed, but all she could see were dirty towels and pants. She moved some of her toys out of the way，but still couldn’t find her shoe. After she’d checked everywhere in her room，she ran into the kitchen. “Mom，I can’t find my shoe.Will you wait while I look for it？”she asked. Her mom thought about how many times she’d told Emma to clean her room up. She whispered something to Emma’s grandma and then said to Emma，“You will have to stay home.Your dad and I will take Ryan to the zoo. Grandma will stay here with you.” “No！Please wait for me. I want to go to the zoo，”Emma cried. “I’m sorry, Emma. I’ve told you a dozen times to clean your room and you ignored me.You can’t find your shoe now. It’s your own fault for not doing as I asked.You will stay home.” Emma ran into her bedroom, crying. Her mom came to the door and said，“Emma，clean that room of yours before I get home. I’ve told grandma not to give you any sweets until you finish the work.” She went out to the car with Ryan and Emma’s dad and then they drove away. 注意： 1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1： Emma sat on her bed and cried for a long time. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2： Emma and her grandma were sitting at the table，eating when her mom，dad，and Ryan came home. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Emma sat on her bed and cried for a long time. And then she wiped her eyes and started to clean her room. It took her two hours to clean up the room.“I did it！”she said proudly. She even found her missing shoe. She ran into the living room.“Grandma！Come and see. I cleaned my room and found my shoe.” Grandma looked in Emma’s room. “If you had kept it this way, you wouldn’t have lost your shoe.Come and have some sweets now，”she said. Emma and her grandma were sitting at the table，eating when her mom，dad，and Ryan came home.“Well，look at Emma’s room！It’s clean，”her dad said.“How was the zoo？Did you have fun？I wish I could have gone there with you，”Emma said.“If you keep your room clean，we may go and see animals again，”her mom said. From then on，Emma tried her best to keep her room clean. 1.这段读后续写围绕 “Emma 因未整理房间弄丢鞋子、错失动物园之行，后主动打扫房间找回鞋子并养成整洁习惯” 的成长情节展开，且严格呼应题目中 “使用下划线关键词” 的要求。 ◦第一段：由首句 “Emma 坐在床上哭了很久” 可知，此段需聚焦 “Emma 的情绪转变与行动”—— 先描写她从哭泣到擦干眼泪、主动打扫房间的心理转折（因不想再因混乱错失机会），再通过 “花费两小时整理”“找到丢失的鞋子” 等细节，展现她的行动力；最后以奶奶的肯定（“若一直保持整洁就不会丢鞋”）和允许吃糖果，呼应前文妈妈 “不打扫完不给糖果” 的要求，完成 “犯错 — 改正” 的第一步，凸显她的初步成长。 ◦第二段：首句点明 “Emma 和奶奶正坐在桌边吃饭时，家人回来了”，该段需聚焦 “家人的反馈与 Emma 的习惯养成”—— 先通过爸爸 “快看 Emma 的房间！真干净” 的惊叹，体现家人对她改变的认可；再通过 Emma “遗憾没去动物园” 的表达，保留孩子的真实情绪；最后以妈妈 “若保持房间整洁，还能再去看动物” 的承诺，以及 “从那以后 Emma 尽力保持房间整洁” 的结尾，完成 “改正 — 养成习惯” 的闭环，凸显情节的教育意义（从混乱到有序的成长）。同时，此段自然融入 “zoo”“clean her room” 等下划线关键词，贴合题目要求。 1.词汇激活 ◦行为类 ▪打扫：clean up/tidy up（如 “打扫房间” 可表达为 clean up her room/tidy up the bedroom，答案中 “started to clean her room”“cleaned my room” 均用此核心词） ▪找到：find/locate（如 “找到丢失的鞋子” 为 found her missing shoe/located the lost shoe，呼应题目关键词 “missing shoe”） ▪保持：keep/maintain（如 “保持房间整洁” 为 keep the room clean/maintain the bedroom’s tidiness，答案中 “keep your room clean”“keep her room clean” 贯穿前后） ◦情绪类 ▪骄傲的：proud/pleased（如 “她骄傲地说” 为 she said proudly/she spoke with pleasure，体现 Emma 完成打扫后的成就感） ▪遗憾的：regretful/disappointed（如 “我真希望能和你们一起去” 为 I wish I could have gone there with you，传递 Emma 错失动物园之行的遗憾） ▪认可的：approving/acknowledging（如 “爸爸惊叹房间干净” 为 her dad said in amazement，体现家人对 Emma 改变的认可） 1.高分句型 ◦“And then she wiped her eyes and started to clean her room. It took her two hours to clean up the room.”（①“wiped her eyes” 细节描写，具象化 Emma 从哭泣到振作的情绪转折；②“it takes sb. + 时间 + to do sth.” 经典句型，清晰交代打扫房间的耗时，凸显 Emma 的坚持，让 “改正错误” 的过程更真实） ◦“If you had kept it this way, you wouldn’t have lost your shoe.”（①虚拟语气结构 “if + 过去完成时，wouldn’t have done”，通过奶奶的话复盘 “房间混乱导致丢鞋” 的因果关系，既符合长辈的教导口吻，又暗含教育意义；②自然嵌入 “lost your shoe”，呼应题目关键词 “missing shoe”） ◦“Emma and her grandma were sitting at the table，eating when her mom，dad，and Ryan came home.”（①“were doing...when...” 句型，生动呈现 “家人回来” 的意外节点，让场景转换更流畅；②“eating” 现在分词作伴随状语，补充 “家人回来时的状态”，画面感强；③嵌入关键词 “Ryan”，满足题目 “使用 5 个以上下划线词” 的要求） ◦“From then on，Emma tried her best to keep her room clean.”（①“From then on” 时间状语短语，明确 “养成整洁习惯” 的时间起点，衔接前文家人的承诺与 Emma 的改变，让情节逻辑更完整；②“tried her best to do” 体现 Emma 的主动意愿，凸显 “成长” 这一核心主题，与开篇 “不整理房间” 形成鲜明对比） Writing 06 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节，使之构成一个完整的故事。 Thanks to my conservative(保守的）family background,I didn't believe in angels(天使）.That is,not until Christmas Eve of 1979, when an angel brought unexpected joy to my home. After divorce,my two daughters not only lost the safety of a whole family,they also tearfully(泪汪汪地）left behind neighborhood friends, a familiar school, and a large house. These had all been replaced with a narrow two-bedroom apartment in a poorer part of town . I arranged to take my vacation during my children's winter holiday. We spent evenings planning activities: games, a pizza night , and evening car rides to view neighborhood holiday lights .With expectation , they seemed to be in good spirits . The week before the school break, however, I was fired because of the company's poor performance. By Christmas Eve,sadness covered our vacation plans. An afternoon outing did little to improve our mood . On returning to our apartment, we were astonished to see a beautiful,six-foot Christmas tree propped(支撑）against our front door. In silent wonder, we looked back and forth, from the tree to one another and around the empty street. Excitement built,and the girls begged to keep the tree. "Maybe it's for us,"my older daughter guessed. "Yeah,"repeated my younger child,"I bet an angel brought it to us!" I laughed aloud at the idea of an angel bringing a Christmas tree to my family. Caught up in their happiness, I announced the tree "ours". We moved it inside and headed out to the only upermarkets in our small town open that late on Christmas Eve. With holiday goods down to half price,I agreed to buy a tree stand(底座）,two boxes of colorful balls , some colorful lights , and one paper angel. Paragraph 1:Back home , we moved "our" tree into our tiny living room . ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2:The annual winter holiday became a family tradition. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Back home , we moved " our " tree into our tiny living room . Cheerfully, the girls painted some paper decorations. With delight that had been absent for months, we started to add the things we bought from the supermarket around the Christmas tree. We put up the lights, hung the colorful balls and placed the paper angel on top. Finally, with a girl in each of my arms, we sat in the darkness,attracted by the bright Christmas tree lights. There was full of joy in our new home . The annual winter holiday became a family tradition. We'd feel complete with a Christmas tree in our house. For many years, we held our breath and experienced the familiar feeling up our arms when we placed the original paper angel on the top of each tree. Still, every Christmas Eve, my daughters and I talked about the unexpected joy that Christmas tree had brought us and about the special childhood memories at that time. 这段读后续写围绕 “失业单亲妈妈与女儿在圣诞夜收获意外圣诞树，进而重拾欢乐并形成家庭传统” 的温情情节展开。以下从续写思路、词汇激活和高分句型等方面进行解析： 1.续写思路 ◦第一段：由首句 “回到家，我们把‘我们的’树搬进了小小的客厅” 可知，此段需聚焦 “装饰圣诞树” 的核心场景 —— 描写女儿们制作纸质装饰的主动行为、全家共同悬挂彩灯、彩球及放置纸天使的协作过程，再通过 “黑暗中相拥看灯” 的细节，展现家庭氛围从失业后的低落，转变为充满欢乐的温馨状态，完成情绪的关键转折。 ◦第二段：首句点明 “每年的寒假成了家庭传统”，该段需延伸 “圣诞树” 的象征意义 —— 重点描写传统的具体内容（保留原版纸天使、每年悬挂时的熟悉触感）、传统中的情感联结（圣诞夜聊起当年的意外惊喜与童年回忆），突出这棵意外圣诞树带来的不仅是即时欢乐，更成为维系家庭情感、传承温暖记忆的纽带。 1.词汇激活 ◦行为类 ▪装饰：decorate/adorn/trim（如 “装饰圣诞树” 可表达为 decorate the Christmas tree/adorn the tree with ornaments） ▪悬挂：hang/suspend（如 “挂彩灯” 为 hang the colorful lights/suspend the lights on the tree） ▪保留：keep/preserve/retain（如 “保留纸天使” 为 keep the paper angel/preserve the original paper angel） ◦情绪类 ▪欢乐：joy/delight/cheer（如 “充满欢乐” 可表达为 full of joy/filled with delight） ▪温馨：warmth/affection（如 “温馨氛围” 为 warm atmosphere/affectionate mood） ▪缺失：absent/missing（如 “消失已久的喜悦” 为 delight that had been absent/missing joy） 1.高分句型 ◦“Cheerfully, the girls painted some paper decorations. With delight that had been absent for months, we started to add the things we bought from the supermarket around the Christmas tree.”（①副词 “Cheerfully” 开头，点明女儿们的情绪状态，增强句子节奏感；②“With delight that...” 介词短语作伴随状语，既交代 “装饰树” 的情绪背景，又通过定语从句 “that had been absent for months” 呼应前文失业后的低落，形成情绪对比，让情节更连贯） ◦“Finally, with a girl in each of my arms, we sat in the darkness, attracted by the bright Christmas tree lights.”（“with a girl in each of my arms” 为 with 复合结构，具象化 “相拥” 的场景；“attracted by...” 过去分词短语作后置定语，描绘全家被灯光吸引的专注状态，画面感极强，凸显温馨氛围） ◦“For many years, we held our breath and experienced the familiar feeling up our arms when we placed the original paper angel on the top of each tree.”（①“held our breath” 细节描写，体现对 “悬挂纸天使” 这一传统的珍视；②“when” 引导的时间状语从句，将 “动作（放纸天使）” 与 “情感（熟悉触感）” 绑定，让 “传统” 不再是抽象概念，而是可感知的情感载体） ◦“Still, every Christmas Eve, my daughters and I talked about the unexpected joy that Christmas tree had brought us and about the special childhood memories at that time.”（“that” 引导的定语从句修饰 “unexpected joy”，清晰交代 “谈论” 的具体内容，同时通过 “and about...” 的并列结构，将 “即时欢乐” 与 “长远回忆” 关联，深化 “圣诞树象征家庭记忆” 的主题） Writing 07 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Seeing the United Parcel Truck pull into my driveway, I opened the garage door knowing that another package had arrived helping us with the Christmas in July Party we were putting together for the homeless children at a local charity. As I stood watching the driver get the packages from the back of the truck, I saw Madison, my three-year-old granddaughter, picking weeds from the lawn. “These are for my mommy and daddy,” she replied, as she held out a hand full of worthless little weeds. I just smiled and nodded my head as I looked at her tight little closed fist. The UPT driver walked into the garage and sat the two packages down on the wooden bench. He and I stood talking about the numerous baseball gloves, baseball bats, helmets and baseballs sitting about the room. I told him I had been raised in a Jacksonville, Florida orphanage and that during my entire childhood I never once owned anything of my own. I told him that these presents were for the children themselves and not for the orphanage. After talking for a few minutes, the driver told me he had to leave. He waved and began walking back down the driveway. I turned around, locked garage door and began walking up onto the front porch. Just as I closed the gate, Madison came running up to where I was standing. “My flowers, my flowers,” she screamed aloud. I soon realized that I had locked her weeds in the garage. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 “We’ll get them later,” I told her. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I turned around, walked back to the end of the porch and opened the gate. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: “We’ll get them later,” I told her. I just did not want to walk back down the stairs and unlock the garage door for a bunch of worthless weeds. Putting my hand onto her small shoulder, I began directing her back into the house. She stood there with tears welling up in her eyes. “These flowers are specially for my mommy and daddy,” she sobbed. All of a sudden, I realized that those baseball gloves were like gold to those homeless children just as those weeds were beautiful flowers to my granddaughter. I turned around, walked back to the end of the porch and opened the gate. Then I walked down the three stairs, took out my keys and opened the garage door. Wearing a shining smile on her face, Madison ran past me, grabbing the little treasures she had picked moments before. “Thank you, grandma, I love you!” she said. I knelt down, looked through the green, now lifeless weeds and smiled as I saw the beauty of a dozen beautiful red roses reflecting in her eyes. As is often the case, something valueless to adults means a lot to children. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者一家为当地慈善机构的无家可归的孩子们举办的7月圣诞派对，孙女说她专门为父母准备了花，其实只是杂草。一开始作者并不重视孙女要打开车库门的请求，后来认识到了孙女的用心，非常感动。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“我告诉她：‘我们一会儿再去拿。’”可知，第一段可描写孙女被拒绝后的伤心反应，作者的感悟和反应。 ②由第二段首句内容“我转过身，走回门廊的尽头，打开了门。”可知，第二段可描写作者为孙女开门拿东西，认识到了一些对成年人来说毫无价值的东西对孩子来说却很重要。 2.续写线索：拒绝开车库门——孙女哭泣——感悟——打开库门——孙女开心——感悟 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①回去：walk back /go back ②开始：begin /start ③看见：see/spot 情绪类 ①专门：specially / particularly ②美丽：beautiful /gorgeous 【点睛】[高分句型1] Putting my hand onto her small shoulder, I began directing her back into the house. (运用了现在分词作状语) [高分句型2] All of a sudden, I realized that those baseball gloves were like gold to those homeless children just as those weeds were beautiful flowers to my granddaughter. (运用了that引导宾语从句) Writing08 阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Jessie had two days’leave in January this year. She surfed the Internet for cheap travel deals and found the most impressive to be a twoday trip to Dublin. Jessie had never visited Ireland so she knew this was the destination for her. She arrived in Dublin and headed for her hotel. She was excited. When she found her hotel, she paid her money for both nights in advance. The receptionist (接待员) said that was possibly the smartest thing she had done since she decided to take the trip. Jessie dropped her bags in her room and immediately went out to check out some of the sights. It was getting late as Jessie wandered in the streets and decided that even though she was starving, she would rather wait to have dinner later after having a drink. She headed into the closest pub. Jessie noticed a rather strangelooking man staring at her from across the room. He walked to her table and asked her in his most polite manner if she would like to have a beer. After about ten seconds of thought, Jessie came to the conclusion that she would and accepted the offer. But she proposed that she should treat him to some fruits. The man smiled and accepted. Their conversation was mainly about places they had been and places they wanted to go. Jessie soon found out that he was traveling alone too and as soon as he started mentioning that he was staying in the same hotel as her, Jessie swiftly rose from her seat to get another drink. Searching through her bag Jessie found that her wallet was gone! Immediately she realized she took the wrong bag. Her wallet was in another bag. Jessie didn’t panic at first until it hit her that without it, she had not one penny in hand. She was starving. Worst of all, she had generously proposed a treat to the man. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2． 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Without explaining the situation, Jessie ran back to the hotel. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: The man was still there. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Without explaining the situation, Jessie ran back to the hotel. As soon as Jessie saw the receptionist she burst into tears. She told her the embarrassing situation in the pub and the receptionist burst into laughter. She said that she shouldn’t have worried too much since she had found she ordered her hotel. Jessie ran to her room and wallet as soon as possible. She must go back to the pub or she would be regarded as a cheat. Luckily the pub was near and soon Jessie got there. The man was still there. When he saw Jessie again he was completely puzzled. He stood up but didn’t know what to say. Jessie smiled and told him the situation which made him burst into laughter too. But he jokingly told Jessie “If I hadn’t proposed an offer of beer, you wouldn’t have realized that you hadn’t bring money with you. So treat me to two beers please!” They both laughed. Of course they became friends. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开。Jessie独自去爱尔兰首都都柏林旅行，进了当地一家酒吧，遇到了一位男士。男士邀请她喝啤酒，Jessie邀请他吃水果。就在他们聊得兴起，Jessie想要再买一杯啤酒时，她发现自己没有带钱包。为了不想那位男士认为自己是一个骗子，于是，她跑回酒店，拿回了钱包。男士很惊讶，随后Jessie告知他发生了什么事。他们都笑了，最后成了朋友。 第一步：段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“杰西没有解释情况，就跑回了酒店。”可知，第一段可描写Jessie回酒店拿钱包的经过。 ②由第二段首句内容“这位男士仍然在那里。”可知，第二段可描写Jessie赶回来，男士很困惑，得知发生了什么之后，开心地笑了。最后两个人成为了好朋友。 第二步：续写线索： 跑回酒店——告诉接待员经过——拿到钱包——赶回酒吧——得知原因——成为朋友 第三步：词汇激活 【行为类】 ①.看见：see/meet/come across ②.返回：go back/return 【情绪类】 ①.尴尬的：embarrassing/awkward ②.困惑的：puzzled/confused 【点睛】 [高分句型1].She said that she shouldn’t have worried too much since she had found she ordered her hotel.（由that引导的宾语从句和since引导的状语从句） [高分句型2].Jessie smiled and told him the situation which made him burst into laughter too. （由关系代词which引导的限制性定语从句） Writing 09 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节，使之构成一个完整的故事。 After dinner, Mrs. Quimby told the family that Grandma, who lived on a farm, had sent in a lot of pumpkins for jack-o’-lanterns (空心南瓜灯) for the neighborhood children. There was one in the basement waiting to be carved, she added. Ramona sprang to her feet and dashed down to bring it up, but it was too heavy for a second-grader. Finally Mr. Quimby gave a hand. “Let’s make it smile like last year,” exclaimed Ramona. “Hmm. Let’s see.” Mr. Quimby studied the pumpkin, turning it to find the best side for the face. With a pencil he sketched (素描) a nose-shaped nose, not a triangle. Then the mouth turned up on both sides. “smiling!” Ramona clapped her hands. Mr. Quimby nodded with a smile, cut a circle around the top of the pumpkin and lifted it off for a lid. Without being asked, Ramona found a big spoon for scooping out the seeds. Picky-picky, the Quimbys' shabby old cat, came into the kitchen to see if something had been put in his dish. When he found that it had not, he paused, sniffed the pumpkin smell and angrily walked out with his tail twitching. Mr. Quimby began to whistle as he carved with skill and care, first a mouthful of teeth, each one neat and square, then eyes and eyebrows. He was working on two ears shaped like question marks when Mrs. Quimby announced it was bedtime for Ramona. Unwillingly Ramona ran, took a shower and quickly returned. Now, Mr. Quimby had just carved a few C-shaped curls (卷发) around the hole in the top of the pumpkin. He reached inside and dug a candle holder in the bottom. “There,” he said, putting down his knife. “A work of art.” Mrs. Quimby found a candle stub (残根), inserted it in the pumpkin, lit it and set the lid in place. Ramona turned off the light. The jack-o’-lantern was smiling with a flickering flame. “Wow!” Ramona threw her arms around her father before going to bed with great satisfaction. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2． 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: In the middle of the night Ramona awoke to a noise. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph2: On the table their jack-o’-lantern no longer had a whole face. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ In the middle of the night, Ramona awoke to a noise. Ramona turned on the light and jumped out of bed angrily. It turned out that the cat accidentally bumped the jack-o’-lantern to the floor while catching mice. It was broken. Looking at her beloved jack-o-lantern lying on the floor, the candle in it went out, Ramona began to cry. Mr. Quimby was also woken up, got up to comfort Ramona and helped her take the jack-o’-lantern to the table. On the table their jack-o’-lantern no longer had a whole face. Ramona continued to cry, and dad decided to carve the pumpkin again. He picked up the knife and carved along the incomplete face of the pumpkin. The incomplete face became funnier, and the lantern laughed more brightly. Dad said, “Ramona, don't cry. Look at your pumpkin lantern. It’s alive again.” Ramona dried her tears and smiled with greater satisfaction. 这段读后续写围绕 Ramona 一家制作的南瓜灯半夜意外损坏，最终爸爸修复南瓜灯的温馨情节展开。以下从续写思路、词汇激活和高分句型等方面进行解析： 1.续写思路 第一段：由首句 “Ramona 半夜被一阵声音吵醒” 可知，此段需描写 Ramona 被吵醒后的行动的行动 —— 开灯查看、发现南瓜灯损坏的原因（猫咪抓老鼠时撞翻），以及她的情绪变化（从生气到难过哭泣），同时展现爸爸被吵醒后的反应（安慰 Ramona、帮忙处理损坏的南瓜灯），铺垫后续修复情节，体现家人间的关怀。 第二段：首句点明 “桌上的南瓜灯脸部已不再完整”，该段重点描写爸爸修复南瓜灯的过程（顺着破损的脸部重新雕刻）、修复后南瓜灯的新形态（更有趣、灯光更明亮），以及 Ramona 情绪的转变（从哭泣到擦干眼泪、露出满意笑容），突出问题解决后的温暖与欢乐。 1.词汇激活 ◦行为类 ▪吵醒：wake up/awaken/rouse ▪撞翻：bump over/knock over/upset ▪修复：repair/fix/restore ▪雕刻：carve/chisel/sculpt ◦情绪类 ▪生气的：angry/annoyed/irritated ▪难过的：sad/upset/grieved ▪满意的：satisfied/content/pleased 1.高分句型 ◦“It turned out that the cat accidentally bumped the jack-o’-lantern to the floor while catching mice.”（由 it turned out that 引导的主语从句，交代南瓜灯损坏的原因；while 引导的时间状语从句，补充猫咪撞翻南瓜灯时的动作，使情节更完整） ◦“Looking at her beloved jack-o-lantern lying on the floor, the candle in it went out, Ramona began to cry.”（现在分词短语 “Looking at...” 作伴随状语，描绘 Ramona 看到南瓜灯损坏时的状态，生动展现她的难过情绪，增强画面感） ◦“He picked up the knife and carved along the incomplete face of the pumpkin. The incomplete face became funnier, and the lantern laughed more brightly.”（连贯的动作描写与拟人手法结合，“the lantern laughed more brightly” 将南瓜灯拟人化，既体现修复后南瓜灯的活泼形态，也暗示 Ramona 情绪的好转） / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $