内容正文:
经历与感受
人与社会——经历和感受。经历是成长路上的每一个阶段,成长是在一次次的经历中不断地进化。经历和感受这一话题和学生现实生活关系密切,人人都有难以忘怀的经历,有深刻的感悟。这一话题具有较强的实用性和教育意义。
提示:
假如你是李华,是八年级三班的一名学生,请根据下面的信息提示写一篇英语短文介绍一下你自己以及你的旅行经历。
1.长得很高,善良并友好,爱好旅游;
2.去过埃及金字塔,也去过张家界,在那里度过了美好时光。今年暑假希望去北海公园……
3.谈谈你的旅行感受。
注意:
1.短文词数80左右;
2.短文必须包含以上内容,但可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.短文的开头部分已给出,不计入总词数;
4.文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。
Hello,I'm Li Hua.
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1.人称:主要以__________来叙述;
2.体裁:________;
3.时态:____________和____________。
参考范文
句式升级
Hello,I'm Li Hua.I'm quite tall.I'm really friendly and kind.Travelling is my favourite hobby.
I have travelled to many famous places such as pyramids in Egypt and Zhangjiajie in China.In Egypt,I travelled on a boat on the Nile River and visited the palaces and towers of ancient kings and queens.I also had a wonderful time in Zhangjiajie.It's a magic land of mountains,forests and rivers.It's very beautiful.And then I hope I can go to Beihai Park this summer holiday.①People like its lake,bridges and the ancient buildings on the hill.
I like travelling.It makes me happy and relaxed.②I'll never forget it in my life.
①用“It is famous for...”升格句子
It _________________ its lake,bridges and the ancient buildings on the hill.
②用“It's something that+从句”升格句子
It's something that ___________________________________.
(2024·滨州中考)生活中有很多值得我们珍惜的东西,如时间、健康、亲人、生命等。假设你是李华,你们学校正在开展以“珍惜”为主题的征文活动,请结合自身经历用英语写一篇短文投稿。
提示:
1.你珍惜什么;
2.描述你的一次经历;
3.谈谈这次经历带给你的收获。
注意:
1.要点齐全,并适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名与校名;
3.词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
There are many important things that are worth valuing in our daily lives.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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热点话题写作五 经历与感受
审题定向
1.第一人称 2.记叙文 3.一般现在时;一般过去时
谋篇布局
friendly and kind;travelling;have travelled;had a wonderful time;It's a magic land of;the ancient buildings;makes me happy and relaxed;I'll never forget it in my life
妙笔生花
①is famous for ②I'll never forget in my life
真题实战
【参考范文】
!!!There are many important things that are worth valuing in our daily lives.###Let me tell a story about me.
Last summer,I wanted a new bike.But my family was too poor to afford it.I was very sad and upset.After three weeks,I saw an old bike standing in front of my house.“I don't like the bike.It is too old.” My mother didn't say anything after hearing my words.At that night,my father told me my mother had cooked some dishes in the restaurant to buy this bike.Although it was not the one that I wanted,it was my mother's love.I regretted what I did and apologized to my mother.
From this experience,we should value what we have and the persons who love us.
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