内容正文:
专题08 询问信
写作指导
识
第一部分:询问信核心认知
询问信是写信人就自己不太熟悉和了解或不理解的事情或问题,向相关人士请求解答时所使用的一种书信形式。在近年的高考咨询信中。主要考察的要点如下:表明目的、询问信息、期待回复。对咨询信的回信也是需要关注的一个板块。
1. 写作目的:就某一事件、活动、产品、服务或机会等,向相关方提出询问,以获取更多、更详细的信息。
2. 核心要素:
· 身份与意图:清晰说明你是谁以及你为什么写这封信。
· 问题具体:所提问题必须明确、具体、有条理,避免模糊宽泛。
· 语气礼貌:因为是请求对方提供信息,语气应诚恳、礼貌、得体。
· 结构清晰:遵循“自我介绍-阐明来意-具体询问-期待回复&感谢”的逻辑。
第二部分:万能写作模板
模板一:经典三段式
Paragraph 1: 自我介绍 & 阐明意图
I am Li Hua, a student from [学校名称] High School. I am writing to inquire about [主题内容] after reading/learning/hearing about it from [信息来源,如:your website, the school notice, a poster].
I would be very grateful if you could provide me with some essential information regarding the following aspects.
【译文】:我是李华,一名来自[学校名称]高中的学生。我从[您的网站/学校通知/海报]上看到/了解到[主题内容]后,特此写信询问。如果您能就以下几个方面为我提供一些必要信息,我将不胜感激。
Paragraph 2: 具体问题 (核心段落)
Firstly, I would like to know more details about... (问题一). Could you please tell me... (细化问题)?
Secondly, I am curious about... (问题二). It would be great if you could inform me of... (细化问题).
Lastly, could you please let me know... (问题三)? Specifically, I am interested in whether... (具体关注点).
【译文】:
首先,我想了解更多关于……(问题一)的细节。您能否告诉我……(细化问题)?
其次,我对……(问题二)很感兴趣。如果您能告知我……(细化问题),那就太好了。
最后,您能否告诉我……(问题三)?具体来说,我想知道是否……(具体关注点)。
Paragraph 3: 期待回复 & 表达感谢
Thank you for your time and consideration. I am looking forward to your early reply. Please feel free to contact me at [你的邮箱] or [你的电话] if necessary.
【译文】:感谢您花费时间阅读我的信件。期待您的早日回复。如有需要,请随时通过[你的邮箱]或[你的电话]与我联系。
模板二:万能模板
Dear Silvia,
I am ... . Sorry to disturb you, I am writing to consult you about further information regarding ... .
First and foremost, could you tell me .... ? Aside from it, I intend to know.... Thirdly, I would also like to inquire .... .Furthermore, is there anything else I should pay special attention to?Could you be so kind as to send me some relevant details on the above-mentioned aspects?
Thank you for you kindness, and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
第三部分:高频场景 & 核心素材库
场景一:咨询夏令营/课程/活动
· 主题:Summer Camp, Exchange Program, Volunteer Activity, Online Course
· 问题素材:
· 资格与申请:What are the specific requirements for applicants? (申请者的具体要求是什么?)
· 时间与地点:When and where will the activity be held? (活动何时何地举行?)
· 费用:Is there any participation fee? And what does it cover? (是否有参与费用?它包含哪些项目?)
· 日程安排:Could you please send me the detailed schedule? (您能发给我详细的日程安排吗?)
· 住宿:What about the accommodation arrangements? (住宿安排是怎样的?)
场景二:咨询产品与服务
· 主题:Buy a Book, Join a Club, Use a Service
· 问题素材:
· 价格与支付:How much does it cost? And what are the available payment methods? (价格是多少?有哪些支付方式?)
· 功能与特色:What are its main functions and features? (它的主要功能和特色是什么?)
· 配送与时间:How long will it take to deliver the product? (配送产品需要多长时间?)
· 售后服务:What about the after-sales service? (售后服务怎么样?)
场景三:咨询留学与大学信息
· 主题:Study Abroad, University Major, Scholarship
· 问题素材:
· 课程信息:Could you introduce the curriculum of [专业名称]? (您能介绍一下[专业名称]的课程设置吗?)
· 申请截止日期:What is the application deadline for international students? (国际学生的申请截止日期是什么时候?)
· 奖学金:Are there any scholarships available for overseas students? (有没有为海外学生提供的奖学金?)
· 语言要求:What are the language proficiency requirements? (语言能力要求是什么?)
第四部分:高分亮句 & 升级技巧
1. 开头句升级:
· 平淡:I want to ask you about...
· 高分:I am writing to see if it would be possible for you to provide me with information regarding... (我写此信是想知道您是否有可能为我提供关于……的信息。)
2. 提问句式多样化(避免全是Could you...):
· I would like to know... (我想知道……)
· It would be greatly appreciated if you could inform me about... (如果您能告知我……,我将不胜感激。)
· My primary concern is whether... (我主要关心的是是否……)
· I am particularly interested in... (我对……特别感兴趣。)
· Please could you let me know if...? (您能告诉我是否……吗?)
3. 连接词升级:
· 用 First and foremost, Regarding... 替代 First。
· 用 Another matter I need to know is... 引出下一个问题。
· 用 Finally, I would also like to ask about... 作为结尾问题。
4. 结尾句升级:
· 平淡:Please reply to me soon.
· 高分:I would be extremely grateful if you could respond at your earliest convenience. (如果您能在方便时尽早回复,我将万分感激。)
· 更高分:Your prompt attention to this matter would be highly appreciated. Thank you in advance for your help. (非常感谢您对此事的及时关注。先行感谢您的帮助。)
温馨提示:
1. 问题逻辑:问题排列应由主到次,由一般到具体。
2. 紧扣主题:所有问题都必须围绕信件的核心目的展开,不要问不相关的问题。
3. 检查问题:确保你的问题通过阅读这封信就能被回答,而不是需要额外解释。
4. 格式无误:注意书信格式,尤其是称呼和落款。
【2014年全国卷I】假定你是李华,计划暑假期间去英国学习英语,为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意,请给该校写封信,询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)。
答案:
Dear Sir / Madam,
I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation. I’ve seen your ad, and I’d like to know something more about your six-week English course. Firstwhen will the course start and how many class hours are there per week? Besides, I wish there would not be too many students in a class. I’d also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included. Would there be a host family or a university dormitory?
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
典题精练1
假定你是李华,最近你在当地报纸上看到一则游泳培训班的广告,称其有称职教练(instructor),一周包会。你会一点游泳,但水性不太好,想在暑假参加训练。请你写一封咨询信了解相关情况,要点如下:
1. 训练的具体时间和地点。
2. 条件和费用。
3. 其他特别注意的事项。
注意:
1. 词数100左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I have read your advertisement in the newspaper.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
答案:
Dear Sir/Madam,
I have read your advertisement in the newspaper. You mentioned in it that your instructors are fully qualified and you ensure that learners will be able to swim well after one week’s training.
I can swim a little but I’m not very confident in the water. So I’m interested in taking part in the training course. Fortunately, the summer holiday is around the corner. I’m writing to inquire when and where the course will be given, and how long the training course will last each day. I also want to know how much you will charge me for that. Besides, would you be so kind as to tell me whether there is anything special that should be prepared or does your company provide everything necessary?
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
典题精练2
假定你是李华,正在英国某市做交换生,想到该市的一家图书馆办理一张借书卡(library card),请用英语给该图书馆的工作人员写一封电子邮件,询问相关信息。
内容包括:
1.可借阅图书范围;
2.借阅制度及费用;
3.办理时间及地点。
注意:
1.词数100左右。
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
答案:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Hua, an exchange student from China. Wanting to get a library card in your library, I am writing to ask for some relevant information.
To begin with, could you please tell me what kind of books can be borrowed? Besides, I want to know something about borrowing system, including how long I can keep the books, how many books I can borrow once, and how much I should pay. Last but not least, when and where can I make it?
Thanks for your time and I would appreciate it if you can give an early reply.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua.
典题精练3
假定你是李华,寒假中你去澳大利亚旅游,可是回国后发现你的相机落在旅馆了,所以你要给旅馆负责人写一封咨询信。要点如下:
1. 入住时间:1月27日~2月5日;房间号:608。
2. 相机:型号Canon Ixus860,白色;你的17岁生日礼物,很重要。
3. 请他/她帮你寻找并寄回,表示感谢。
4. 你的地址在信封上。
注意:
1. 词数100左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
答案:
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am very grateful for your great service while staying at your hotel, but I’m writing to ask for your help with sending back my camera that I left in your hotel.
I checked in on January 27 and out on February 5 and stayed in Room 608 for the whole time. Perhaps because I left in such a rush for the airport, I made the mistake of leaving my camera in the room.
Since it was a gift from my parents on my 17th birthday, it’s very important to me. It’s a white Canon Ixus860. I would be very grateful if you could help me find it.
If found, the camera can be posted back to me by using the address on the envelope.
I am looking forward to your early reply!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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专题08 询问信
写作指导
识
第一部分:询问信核心认知
询问信是写信人就自己不太熟悉和了解或不理解的事情或问题,向相关人士请求解答时所使用的一种书信形式。在近年的高考咨询信中。主要考察的要点如下:表明目的、询问信息、期待回复。对咨询信的回信也是需要关注的一个板块。
1. 写作目的:就某一事件、活动、产品、服务或机会等,向相关方提出询问,以获取更多、更详细的信息。
2. 核心要素:
· 身份与意图:清晰说明你是谁以及你为什么写这封信。
· 问题具体:所提问题必须明确、具体、有条理,避免模糊宽泛。
· 语气礼貌:因为是请求对方提供信息,语气应诚恳、礼貌、得体。
· 结构清晰:遵循“自我介绍-阐明来意-具体询问-期待回复&感谢”的逻辑。
第二部分:万能写作模板
模板一:经典三段式
Paragraph 1: 自我介绍 & 阐明意图
I am Li Hua, a student from [学校名称] High School. I am writing to inquire about [主题内容] after reading/learning/hearing about it from [信息来源,如:your website, the school notice, a poster].
I would be very grateful if you could provide me with some essential information regarding the following aspects.
【译文】:我是李华,一名来自[学校名称]高中的学生。我从[您的网站/学校通知/海报]上看到/了解到[主题内容]后,特此写信询问。如果您能就以下几个方面为我提供一些必要信息,我将不胜感激。
Paragraph 2: 具体问题 (核心段落)
Firstly, I would like to know more details about... (问题一). Could you please tell me... (细化问题)?
Secondly, I am curious about... (问题二). It would be great if you could inform me of... (细化问题).
Lastly, could you please let me know... (问题三)? Specifically, I am interested in whether... (具体关注点).
【译文】:
首先,我想了解更多关于……(问题一)的细节。您能否告诉我……(细化问题)?
其次,我对……(问题二)很感兴趣。如果您能告知我……(细化问题),那就太好了。
最后,您能否告诉我……(问题三)?具体来说,我想知道是否……(具体关注点)。
Paragraph 3: 期待回复 & 表达感谢
Thank you for your time and consideration. I am looking forward to your early reply. Please feel free to contact me at [你的邮箱] or [你的电话] if necessary.
【译文】:感谢您花费时间阅读我的信件。期待您的早日回复。如有需要,请随时通过[你的邮箱]或[你的电话]与我联系。
模板二:万能模板
Dear Silvia,
I am ... . Sorry to disturb you, I am writing to consult you about further information regarding ... .
First and foremost, could you tell me .... ? Aside from it, I intend to know.... Thirdly, I would also like to inquire .... .Furthermore, is there anything else I should pay special attention to?Could you be so kind as to send me some relevant details on the above-mentioned aspects?
Thank you for you kindness, and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
第三部分:高频场景 & 核心素材库
场景一:咨询夏令营/课程/活动
· 主题:Summer Camp, Exchange Program, Volunteer Activity, Online Course
· 问题素材:
· 资格与申请:What are the specific requirements for applicants? (申请者的具体要求是什么?)
· 时间与地点:When and where will the activity be held? (活动何时何地举行?)
· 费用:Is there any participation fee? And what does it cover? (是否有参与费用?它包含哪些项目?)
· 日程安排:Could you please send me the detailed schedule? (您能发给我详细的日程安排吗?)
· 住宿:What about the accommodation arrangements? (住宿安排是怎样的?)
场景二:咨询产品与服务
· 主题:Buy a Book, Join a Club, Use a Service
· 问题素材:
· 价格与支付:How much does it cost? And what are the available payment methods? (价格是多少?有哪些支付方式?)
· 功能与特色:What are its main functions and features? (它的主要功能和特色是什么?)
· 配送与时间:How long will it take to deliver the product? (配送产品需要多长时间?)
· 售后服务:What about the after-sales service? (售后服务怎么样?)
场景三:咨询留学与大学信息
· 主题:Study Abroad, University Major, Scholarship
· 问题素材:
· 课程信息:Could you introduce the curriculum of [专业名称]? (您能介绍一下[专业名称]的课程设置吗?)
· 申请截止日期:What is the application deadline for international students? (国际学生的申请截止日期是什么时候?)
· 奖学金:Are there any scholarships available for overseas students? (有没有为海外学生提供的奖学金?)
· 语言要求:What are the language proficiency requirements? (语言能力要求是什么?)
第四部分:高分亮句 & 升级技巧
1. 开头句升级:
· 平淡:I want to ask you about...
· 高分:I am writing to see if it would be possible for you to provide me with information regarding... (我写此信是想知道您是否有可能为我提供关于……的信息。)
2. 提问句式多样化(避免全是Could you...):
· I would like to know... (我想知道……)
· It would be greatly appreciated if you could inform me about... (如果您能告知我……,我将不胜感激。)
· My primary concern is whether... (我主要关心的是是否……)
· I am particularly interested in... (我对……特别感兴趣。)
· Please could you let me know if...? (您能告诉我是否……吗?)
3. 连接词升级:
· 用 First and foremost, Regarding... 替代 First。
· 用 Another matter I need to know is... 引出下一个问题。
· 用 Finally, I would also like to ask about... 作为结尾问题。
4. 结尾句升级:
· 平淡:Please reply to me soon.
· 高分:I would be extremely grateful if you could respond at your earliest convenience. (如果您能在方便时尽早回复,我将万分感激。)
· 更高分:Your prompt attention to this matter would be highly appreciated. Thank you in advance for your help. (非常感谢您对此事的及时关注。先行感谢您的帮助。)
温馨提示:
1. 问题逻辑:问题排列应由主到次,由一般到具体。
2. 紧扣主题:所有问题都必须围绕信件的核心目的展开,不要问不相关的问题。
3. 检查问题:确保你的问题通过阅读这封信就能被回答,而不是需要额外解释。
4. 格式无误:注意书信格式,尤其是称呼和落款。
【2014年全国卷I】假定你是李华,计划暑假期间去英国学习英语,为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意,请给该校写封信,询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)。
典题精练1
假定你是李华,最近你在当地报纸上看到一则游泳培训班的广告,称其有称职教练(instructor),一周包会。你会一点游泳,但水性不太好,想在暑假参加训练。请你写一封咨询信了解相关情况,要点如下:
1. 训练的具体时间和地点。
2. 条件和费用。
3. 其他特别注意的事项。
注意:
1. 词数100左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I have read your advertisement in the newspaper.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
典题精练2
假定你是李华,正在英国某市做交换生,想到该市的一家图书馆办理一张借书卡(library card),请用英语给该图书馆的工作人员写一封电子邮件,询问相关信息。
内容包括:
1.可借阅图书范围;
2.借阅制度及费用;
3.办理时间及地点。
注意:
1.词数100左右。
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
典题精练3
假定你是李华,寒假中你去澳大利亚旅游,可是回国后发现你的相机落在旅馆了,所以你要给旅馆负责人写一封咨询信。要点如下:
1. 入住时间:1月27日~2月5日;房间号:608。
2. 相机:型号Canon Ixus860,白色;你的17岁生日礼物,很重要。
3. 请他/她帮你寻找并寄回,表示感谢。
4. 你的地址在信封上。
注意:
1. 词数100左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
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