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B1Unit 1 A New Start
Presenting ideas P16
A letter of suggestion
1.学会如何提建议;
2.知道建议信的写信格式,段落内容分布;
3.会使用所给句式进行建议信写作。
What do you think of your school?
Our school is beautiful with tall trees and gardens.
We had great fun in the after-school activities.
We had a wonderful class.
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We had a sound rest during the lunch break.
Pair-work:Discussion
Were there any problems in our school?
What were they?
(List at least 3 problems)
It was at 1:40pm,last Friday.
They didn’t have a sleep during the lunch break. They didn’t wear our school uniforms
Some rubbish was left there polluting our beautiful compus .
rubbish
Groupwork: Have an interview
(Give Suggestions on the three Problems)
A(P1,2,3):Interviewer
B(S1)、C(S2)、D(S3):Interviewees
A: B, what do we do to have enough time to rest
during the lunch break ?
B:I think we should……
A:C,what should we do to keep wearing our school uniforms?
C:I think it would be a good idea if we ……
A:D, what would we do with the rubbish?
D:In order to ……,we had better……
Suggestions:
a. We didn’t have have a sleep during the lunch break.
→ Keep the lunch break rules .
b.We should keep wearing our school unifoms.
→ Students’Union and teachers strengthen supervision.
c.Some rubbish was left in the open air.
→ Put all the rubbish into the dustbins.
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Imagine you are a member of your class
committee. Think about the changes you
would suggest to the head teacher to
improve your school.
Suggestions to the head teacher
英语建议信的基本框架
Body
Ending
过渡,提出写作目的——提建议。
1-3个句子
提出的建议及其理由5-6个句子。
希望采纳该建议。
1-2个句子
Heading
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1)Heading:
I am XXX, from Class 15, Grade 1. ....I still want to give some
suggestions to you. My suggestions are as follow:
2)Body:
First/First of all, we don’t to have enough time to rest
during the lunch break , I suggest that we should…
Second/Besides/What's more…, I think it would be a good idea if you … Last/In the end, in order to …,we had better…
3) Ending:
I would appreciate it if you can accept my suggestions.
I hope my suggestions will meet with your approval.
sentences
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1. The first thing I would suggest is …
2. Secondly, I think it would be a good idea to…
3. I strongly suggest that…= It is strongly suggested that....
4. Another thing I would suggest is…
5. In my opinion,…
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Work in pairs
to write down your suggestions to the head teacher
with the useful expressions.
1.词数的限制
(应在80-120词之间)
2. 拼写与标点符号的准确性
3.书写的工整性
4. 卷面的整洁性
且记且注意
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How to write the suggestions in a written form?
Dear head teacher,
I am XXX, from Class 4, Grade 1. During the past few weeks of my senior high, Leshan No.1 Middle School left a deep impression on me. Leshan No.1 Middle School is beautiful with tall trees and organized buildings. Although our school life is colorful and happy, I still want to give some suggestions to you. My suggestions are as follow:
Firstly, I think it would be a good idea to do sth(建议要做的事1), for s+v+o(理由1/好处1) Secondly, in my opinion,_____(学生存在的问题). I strongly suggest that we should____(建议要做的事2) so that____(理由2/好处2). The last thing I would like to suggest is that____(建议要做的事3), for____(理由3/好处3)
Hopefully, you can take my suggestions into account.
yours,
XXX
Polish your letter of suggestions which you learnt today.
Homework
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