内容正文:
专题02 申请信
写作指导
识
第一部分:申请信核心认知
申请信有很多种,其目的在于让对方了解自己的经验、能力、成就以及愿望等,所以个人情况的介绍应该是申请信的核心内容,应尽可能地向对方说明本人的长处,以便给对方留下好印象,从而获得面谈的机会。
1. 写作目的:向对方(学校、组织、项目)展示你的优势、表达强烈意愿,以争取一个职位、机会或名额。
2. 核心要素:
· 我是谁:清晰的身份介绍。
· 我为何而来:明确申请目标。
· 我为何能行 (核心):展示与申请目标高度相关的个人能力、经历和品质。
· 我为何渴望:表达真诚的热情和期待。
· 下一步是什么:希望获得面试或进一步联系的机会。
第二部分:万能写作模板
模板一:经典三段式
Paragraph 1: 开门见山,表明意图
I am writing to apply for the [职位/机会名称] that I saw advertised on [看到信息的渠道,如 your school website / the school noticeboard]. / I am writing with great enthusiasm to express my interest in the [职位/机会名称].
I am a student from [学校名称] High School, and I believe that my qualifications and passion make me a strong candidate for this position.
【译文】:我写这封信是为了申请我在 [看到信息的渠道] 上看到的 [职位/机会名称]。/ 我怀着极大的热情写信表达我对 [职位/机会名称] 的兴趣。我是一名来自 [学校名称] 高中的学生,我相信我的资历和热情使我成为这个职位的强有力的候选人。
Paragraph 2: 展示优势,证明自己 (核心段落)
I am confident that I am well-suited for this opportunity due to the following reasons. Firstly, I have a solid foundation in [相关领域知识,如 English / organization]. For instance, I once [具体事例,如 won the first prize in an English speech contest / successfully organized a charity sale].
Secondly, I am a person with excellent [相关能力,如 communication skills / teamwork spirit], which was demonstrated when I [具体事例].
Moreover, I am deeply passionate about [与申请目标相关的领域]. I have always been eager to [为此付出的努力或表现出的兴趣].
【译文】:由于以下原因,我相信自己非常适合这个机会。首先,我在 [相关领域知识] 方面有扎实的基础。例如,我曾经 [具体事例]。其次,我是一个具有优秀 [相关能力] 的人,这在我 [具体事例] 时得到了证明。此外,我对 [相关领域] 充满热情。我一直渴望 [付出的努力或表现出的兴趣]。
Paragraph 3: 重申热情,表达期待
I am convinced that my involvement would be mutually beneficial. I am eager to contribute my [你的优势,如 energy and ideas] to your team.
Thank you for considering my application. I have attached my resume for your review and am available for an interview at your earliest convenience. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
【译文】:我相信我的加入将会是双赢的。我渴望为团队贡献我的 [你的优势]。感谢您考虑我的申请。我已附上我的简历供您审阅,并随时准备参加面试。期待您的回复。
模板二:万能模板
Dear Sir or Madam,
Learning from the advertisement you have posted that you're in need of..., I'm writing for a chance to work as...and I feel this position is specially tailored to me.
To start with, my advantage first lies in the fact that …. Furthermore, as an outgoing student, not only can I get along well with others but also I have a sense of duty and cooperation. In addition,what satisfies me most is that …..With responsibility and patience, I'll show passionate enthusiasm toward this job.
I do hope my enthusiasm and qualification will win me a favorable consideration from your side.Keenly anticipate your prompt reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
第三部分:高频场景 & 核心素材库
场景一:申请志愿者 (Volunteer)
· 所需品质:乐于助人、有耐心、有责任感。
· 素材库:
· 经历:I have previous volunteer experience at a local nursing home/community center. (我曾在当地养老院/社区中心有过志愿者经历。)
· 能力:I am patient and good at communicating with people from different backgrounds. (我很有耐心,善于与来自不同背景的人交流。)
· 热情:I am eager to give back to the community and help those in need. (我渴望回馈社区,帮助那些需要帮助的人。)
场景二:申请大学/夏令营 (University/Summer Camp)
· 所需品质:学术优异、有求知欲、有领导力。
· 素材库:
· 学术:I have consistently achieved top scores in [学科名称], which reflects my strong academic ability. (我在 [学科名称] 上一直名列前茅,这反映了我强大的学术能力。)
· 活动:I served as the monitor and led the class to win the "Civilized Class" award. (我曾担任班长,带领班级获得“文明班级”称号。)
· 匹配度:Your university's renowned program in [专业名称] is exactly what I have been looking for. (贵校在 [专业名称] 方面的知名项目正是我一直在寻找的。)
场景三:申请社团/俱乐部职位 (Club Leader)
· 所需品质:有组织能力、有团队精神、有相关技能。
· 素材库:
· 技能:I am proficient in using Photoshop and video editing software. (我精通使用PS和视频编辑软件。) -- 适用于宣传部门
· 贡献:I can help manage the club's social media accounts and design posters for events. (我可以帮助管理社团的社交媒体账号并为活动设计海报。)
· 理念:I share the club's vision of promoting [社团目标,如 environmental awareness]. (我认同社团关于推广 [社团目标] 的愿景。)
第四部分:高分亮句 & 升级技巧
1. 开头句升级:
· 平淡:I want to apply for...
· 高分:I am writing with great enthusiasm to submit my application for the [职位] position. (我怀着极大的热情提交我对 [职位] 的申请。)
· 更高分:Having long been an admirer of [组织名称]'s work in [领域], I was thrilled to see the opening for a [职位]. (长期以来,我一直钦佩 [组织名称] 在 [领域] 的工作,因此看到 [职位] 的招聘信息时,我激动不已。)
2. 展示能力句式多样化:
· I have a proven track record in... (我在……方面有良好的过往成绩。)
· My experience in... has equipped me with the ability to... (我在……方面的经历使我具备了……的能力。)
· I am well-versed in... (我精通于……)
· One of my key strengths is my ability to... (我的一个关键优势是能够……)
3. 表达热情与匹配度:
· This opportunity aligns perfectly with my academic interests and career aspirations. (这个机会与我的学术兴趣和职业抱负完美契合。)
· I am not only seeking to... but also eager to contribute my... to... (我不仅寻求……,也渴望将我的……贡献给……)
4. 结尾句升级:
· 平淡:Please give me a chance.
· 高分:I am very excited about the possibility of contributing to your team and am available for an interview at your earliest convenience. (对于有可能为您的团队做出贡献,我感到非常兴奋,并随时准备参加您的面试。)
· 更高分:Thank you for your time and consideration. I have attached my curriculum vitae for your perusal and would welcome the opportunity to discuss my application further in an interview. (感谢您的时间和考虑。我已附上我的简历供您细读,并非常希望有机会在面试中进一步讨论我的申请。)
温馨提示:
1. 针对性:根据申请目标裁剪你的经历,展示“匹配度”。
2. 用事实说话:用具体的奖项、事例来支撑你的能力,避免空泛。
3. 附件提醒:如果题目提示可附简历,一定要在信中提及。
4. 检查格式:注意称呼、结尾和署名。
【真题再现】(2019·全国I卷·高考真题)假定你是李华,暑假在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括:
1. 写信目的;2. 个人优势;3. 能做的事情。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 结束语已为你写好。
答案:
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua, a Chinese student currently studying in London. Learning that your gallery will host a Chinese painting exhibition, I am eager to contribute as a volunteer.
My qualifications align perfectly with the role. Firstly, my major in Fine Arts at Beijing University has provided me with expertise in traditional Chinese ink-wash techniques. Additionally, having served as a docent at the Shanghai Art Museum, I am adept at engaging audiences with vivid explanations. Moreover, my fluency in both English and Mandarin ensures smooth communication with diverse visitors.
If selected, I will enthusiastically guide tours, elaborate on the symbolism behind artworks (e.g., lotus flowers representing purity), and assist in organizing interactive workshops.
Thank you for considering my application. I would appreciate the opportunity to promote Chinese culture through this meaningful event.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
解析:
覆盖所有要点:目的(首段)、优势(学术背景+经验+语言)、能做的事(导览+讲解+活动协助)。
逻辑清晰:Firstly/Additionally/Moreover分层展示优势,If selected...自然过渡到行动。
细节丰富:提到“莲花的象征意义”和“互动工作坊”,体现文化深度。
语言亮点:分词结构(Learning that...)、专业词汇(docent, ink-wash techniques)、衔接词(If selected)。
审题定位:应用文中的正式申请信,需明确题目要求的三个核心内容(目的、优势、能做的事),围绕“美术馆中国画展览志愿者”的主题展开。
角色代入:以暑期在伦敦学习的李华身份,展现对中国文化的热爱及志愿服务的热情。
逻辑分层:目的段:简明申请意愿。优势段:结合个人经历(语言能力、艺术知识、志愿经验等)。行动段:具体说明能为展览提供的帮助(导览、讲解、活动协助等)。
开头段(写信目的):直接点明申请志愿者职位。
例句:I am writing to apply for the volunteer position at the upcoming Chinese painting exhibition.
中间段1(个人优势):分点说明与职位相关的技能或经历。
例句:My passion for Chinese art, coupled with my bilingual proficiency, makes me a qualified candidate.
中间段2(能做的事):列出具体服务内容,强调实用性。
例句:I am capable of guiding visitors through the exhibition, explaining the historical context of ink-wash paintings.
结尾段:礼貌表达期待回复。
分词结构作状语:Having studied Chinese art history for three years, I possess in-depth knowledge of classical painting techniques.
定语从句:The exhibition, which showcases masterpieces from the Ming Dynasty, offers a perfect platform to promote cultural exchange.
强调句:It is my volunteer experience at the National Art Museum that has equipped me with strong communication skills.
高级词汇替换:优势:advantages → strengths/qualifications帮助:help → assist/facilitate因为:because → owing to/given that
结尾段:礼貌表达期待回复。
分词结构作状语:Having studied Chinese art history for three years, I possess in-depth knowledge of classical painting techniques.
定语从句:The exhibition, which showcases masterpieces from the Ming Dynasty, offers a perfect platform to promote cultural exchange.
强调句:It is my volunteer experience at the National Art Museum that has equipped me with strong communication skills.
高级词汇替换:优势:advantages → strengths/qualifications帮助:help → assist/facilitate因为:because → owing to/given that
2012年全国卷I英语作文
假定你是李华,从互联网((the Internet)上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore) 举办夏令营,欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。
内容主要包括:
1、自我介绍(包括英语能力);
2、参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家);
3、希望获准。
答案:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Li Hua, presently a senior high school student from China. I am writing to express my great interest in your activity. I learn from the Internet that your organization will hold a summer camp in Singapore and welcome students from various countries to join.
Here’s the detailed information about myself. I’ve been learning English for 10 years and after years of hard work, now I have a rather good command of both written and spoken English. What’s more, for the reason why I am so eager to join you, I believe it would be a great opportunity for me to introduce China and learn more about other countries.
Thank you so much for your time to read my application and I would appreciate it if you can give me an opportunity/chance to join you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
2019全国I英语作文
假定你是李华,暑假在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括:
1.写信目的:
2.个人优势:
3.能做的事情。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
答案:
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China during this summer vacation. I’m delighted to learn that volunteer students are wanted for a Chinese painting exhibition to be held in the local art gallery. Now I’m writing to apply for the position.
The reasons for my application are as follows. First of all, having been exposed to foreign teachers since a young age, I can communicate freely with others in English. What’s more, years of being monitor makes me a brilliant organizer, which will help a lot to keep the exhibition in order. The most important factor is that my related knowledge will undoubtedly help the audience learn more about the unique Chinese art form.
All in all, my sense of responsibility will make me a qualified volunteer. I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
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专题02 申请信
写作指导
识
第一部分:申请信核心认知
申请信有很多种,其目的在于让对方了解自己的经验、能力、成就以及愿望等,所以个人情况的介绍应该是申请信的核心内容,应尽可能地向对方说明本人的长处,以便给对方留下好印象,从而获得面谈的机会。
1. 写作目的:向对方(学校、组织、项目)展示你的优势、表达强烈意愿,以争取一个职位、机会或名额。
2. 核心要素:
· 我是谁:清晰的身份介绍。
· 我为何而来:明确申请目标。
· 我为何能行 (核心):展示与申请目标高度相关的个人能力、经历和品质。
· 我为何渴望:表达真诚的热情和期待。
· 下一步是什么:希望获得面试或进一步联系的机会。
第二部分:万能写作模板
模板一:经典三段式
Paragraph 1: 开门见山,表明意图
I am writing to apply for the [职位/机会名称] that I saw advertised on [看到信息的渠道,如 your school website / the school noticeboard]. / I am writing with great enthusiasm to express my interest in the [职位/机会名称].
I am a student from [学校名称] High School, and I believe that my qualifications and passion make me a strong candidate for this position.
【译文】:我写这封信是为了申请我在 [看到信息的渠道] 上看到的 [职位/机会名称]。/ 我怀着极大的热情写信表达我对 [职位/机会名称] 的兴趣。我是一名来自 [学校名称] 高中的学生,我相信我的资历和热情使我成为这个职位的强有力的候选人。
Paragraph 2: 展示优势,证明自己 (核心段落)
I am confident that I am well-suited for this opportunity due to the following reasons. Firstly, I have a solid foundation in [相关领域知识,如 English / organization]. For instance, I once [具体事例,如 won the first prize in an English speech contest / successfully organized a charity sale].
Secondly, I am a person with excellent [相关能力,如 communication skills / teamwork spirit], which was demonstrated when I [具体事例].
Moreover, I am deeply passionate about [与申请目标相关的领域]. I have always been eager to [为此付出的努力或表现出的兴趣].
【译文】:由于以下原因,我相信自己非常适合这个机会。首先,我在 [相关领域知识] 方面有扎实的基础。例如,我曾经 [具体事例]。其次,我是一个具有优秀 [相关能力] 的人,这在我 [具体事例] 时得到了证明。此外,我对 [相关领域] 充满热情。我一直渴望 [付出的努力或表现出的兴趣]。
Paragraph 3: 重申热情,表达期待
I am convinced that my involvement would be mutually beneficial. I am eager to contribute my [你的优势,如 energy and ideas] to your team.
Thank you for considering my application. I have attached my resume for your review and am available for an interview at your earliest convenience. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
【译文】:我相信我的加入将会是双赢的。我渴望为团队贡献我的 [你的优势]。感谢您考虑我的申请。我已附上我的简历供您审阅,并随时准备参加面试。期待您的回复。
模板二:万能模板
Dear Sir or Madam,
Learning from the advertisement you have posted that you're in need of..., I'm writing for a chance to work as...and I feel this position is specially tailored to me.
To start with, my advantage first lies in the fact that …. Furthermore, as an outgoing student, not only can I get along well with others but also I have a sense of duty and cooperation. In addition,what satisfies me most is that …..With responsibility and patience, I'll show passionate enthusiasm toward this job.
I do hope my enthusiasm and qualification will win me a favorable consideration from your side.Keenly anticipate your prompt reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
第三部分:高频场景 & 核心素材库
场景一:申请志愿者 (Volunteer)
· 所需品质:乐于助人、有耐心、有责任感。
· 素材库:
· 经历:I have previous volunteer experience at a local nursing home/community center. (我曾在当地养老院/社区中心有过志愿者经历。)
· 能力:I am patient and good at communicating with people from different backgrounds. (我很有耐心,善于与来自不同背景的人交流。)
· 热情:I am eager to give back to the community and help those in need. (我渴望回馈社区,帮助那些需要帮助的人。)
场景二:申请大学/夏令营 (University/Summer Camp)
· 所需品质:学术优异、有求知欲、有领导力。
· 素材库:
· 学术:I have consistently achieved top scores in [学科名称], which reflects my strong academic ability. (我在 [学科名称] 上一直名列前茅,这反映了我强大的学术能力。)
· 活动:I served as the monitor and led the class to win the "Civilized Class" award. (我曾担任班长,带领班级获得“文明班级”称号。)
· 匹配度:Your university's renowned program in [专业名称] is exactly what I have been looking for. (贵校在 [专业名称] 方面的知名项目正是我一直在寻找的。)
场景三:申请社团/俱乐部职位 (Club Leader)
· 所需品质:有组织能力、有团队精神、有相关技能。
· 素材库:
· 技能:I am proficient in using Photoshop and video editing software. (我精通使用PS和视频编辑软件。) -- 适用于宣传部门
· 贡献:I can help manage the club's social media accounts and design posters for events. (我可以帮助管理社团的社交媒体账号并为活动设计海报。)
· 理念:I share the club's vision of promoting [社团目标,如 environmental awareness]. (我认同社团关于推广 [社团目标] 的愿景。)
第四部分:高分亮句 & 升级技巧
1. 开头句升级:
· 平淡:I want to apply for...
· 高分:I am writing with great enthusiasm to submit my application for the [职位] position. (我怀着极大的热情提交我对 [职位] 的申请。)
· 更高分:Having long been an admirer of [组织名称]'s work in [领域], I was thrilled to see the opening for a [职位]. (长期以来,我一直钦佩 [组织名称] 在 [领域] 的工作,因此看到 [职位] 的招聘信息时,我激动不已。)
2. 展示能力句式多样化:
· I have a proven track record in... (我在……方面有良好的过往成绩。)
· My experience in... has equipped me with the ability to... (我在……方面的经历使我具备了……的能力。)
· I am well-versed in... (我精通于……)
· One of my key strengths is my ability to... (我的一个关键优势是能够……)
3. 表达热情与匹配度:
· This opportunity aligns perfectly with my academic interests and career aspirations. (这个机会与我的学术兴趣和职业抱负完美契合。)
· I am not only seeking to... but also eager to contribute my... to... (我不仅寻求……,也渴望将我的……贡献给……)
4. 结尾句升级:
· 平淡:Please give me a chance.
· 高分:I am very excited about the possibility of contributing to your team and am available for an interview at your earliest convenience. (对于有可能为您的团队做出贡献,我感到非常兴奋,并随时准备参加您的面试。)
· 更高分:Thank you for your time and consideration. I have attached my curriculum vitae for your perusal and would welcome the opportunity to discuss my application further in an interview. (感谢您的时间和考虑。我已附上我的简历供您细读,并非常希望有机会在面试中进一步讨论我的申请。)
温馨提示:
1. 针对性:根据申请目标裁剪你的经历,展示“匹配度”。
2. 用事实说话:用具体的奖项、事例来支撑你的能力,避免空泛。
3. 附件提醒:如果题目提示可附简历,一定要在信中提及。
4. 检查格式:注意称呼、结尾和署名。
【真题再现】(2019·全国I卷·高考真题)假定你是李华,暑假在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括:
1. 写信目的;2. 个人优势;3. 能做的事情。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 结束语已为你写好。
2012年全国卷I英语作文
假定你是李华,从互联网((the Internet)上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore) 举办夏令营,欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。
内容主要包括:
1、自我介绍(包括英语能力);
2、参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家);
3、希望获准。
2019全国I英语作文
假定你是李华,暑假在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括:
1.写信目的:
2.个人优势:
3.能做的事情。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
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