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专题09 图表类和图画类
图表类
图表类作文常以数据表格形式、曲线图形式、流程图形式、柱形图形式、饼式图形式及平面图形式出现。这类题型具有文字少、信息简洁、要点分散等特征。图表类书面表达在近年的高考中时有出现,这类统计图在日常生活中应用得非常广泛,因此,读懂它并能用英语清晰地表述出来具有很强的现实意义。图表作文主要是介绍或说明某方面的情况,文体上属于说明文。应按照说明文的形式和特点来进行写作。由于这类试题文字少、信息简洁,如果只是把图表中的内容一点一点地记叙出来,进行清单式的罗列,就会索然乏味,并且达不到字数要求。
【2022年全国乙卷】学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 学习活动状况描述:
2. 简单评论;
3. 你的建议。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
【思路点拨】
对于图表作文,写作内容主要包括三个方面:描述图表信息+从中总结出变化规律+提出建议或解决 之道(这一部分可以根据实际要求进行取舍)。
准备过程中,应着重从以下几个方面入手。
1. 读出图表所传达的信息,并对信息进行分类
将图表所传达的信息进行全面的转换,并根据不同的项目对信息进行分类,这是进行数据整合的基础, 这一过程中要尽量确保信息全面。
2. 整合信息,总结规律/分析原因
信息经过分类之后,以某一个标准为参照(比如时间、地域等),总结出同一对象在不同时间/地域/…… 下的变化规律,或通过对同类信息的对比分析出问题出现的原因。找出规律/原因是解决问题/提出建议的基础。
3. 数据处理
对数据进行处理时,要根据题干的要求,着重处理差异比较大或变化比较明显的信息。这样呈现数据时才能有所侧重,写的时候才能有详略之分。
4. 段落构建
一般而言,图表作文可分为三个段落来写。第一个段落点明调查/统计对象并进行图表信息的转换,转 换过程中需要注意的是信息的取舍和详略程度。第二段主要是根据信息总结出规律或找出问题出现的原因。 第三段则主要是建议的提出或解决方法的提出。其中第一段和第二段是重点段落,第三段可根据题干要求 进行取舍。
【写作模板】
模板一
①The bar chart_______(给出图表的出处)reflects______(解释图表所反映的现象). From these statistics, it can be seen that______(具体说明这一现象).
②Generally speaking, _______(分析这一现象产生的几点原因)factors have contributed to this phenomenon.For one thing, _______(第一点原因). For another, ______(第二点原因).
③As far as I am concerned,______(发表个人看法). First,_______(其中一条解决办法). Second, _______(另外一条解决办法).
模板二
①The two charts reveal the striking changes in______(引出图表揭示的现象). From the charts we can see that the percentage of _____(其中一项变化)is growing steadily, and the percentage of______(另外一项变化)rises from _____ to ______(通过具体数据加以说明), while the percentage of______(第三项变化)decreases dramatically from_____ to _____(通过具体数据加以说明).
②The changes are chiefly due to the following reasons. To start with,_______(第一点原因). Besides,______(第二点原因).Furthermore,_______(第三点原因).
③With the above analysis, we can conclude that_______(对以上分析加以总结). What’s more, _______(进一步提出解决方法)
【必备词块】
1. 点明图表所反映的主题时常用的词汇:
table 表格,chart 图表,diagram 图解/示意图,figure图形/数字,describe 描述,tell 告诉,show 表明, represent 描绘/展示,indicate 显示
2. 分析数据差异及变化趋势时常用的词汇:
(1)表示上升或增加的:rise, increase, go up
(2)表示下降或减少的:decrease, fall, reduce, decline, drop, go down
(3)表示变化特点的:sharply 急剧地,quickly 迅速地,rapidly 快速地,dramatically 戏剧性地,slowly 缓慢地,gradually 逐渐地。
(4)表示比较的:compared different from, difference between, while, contrary, however, more than, less than。
【万能句式】
图表类满分作文必备词汇 示例 1
● 表示“说明”的常用句式
在说明图表的时候,要使用下列表示“说明”的常用句式,它们可以帮助读者弄清楚所引信息的出处,有效地将你要说的话带出来。
1.As we can see from the chart/graph / table/diagram,…从图表中可以看出……(eg: 模板(一)How People Spent Their Holidays)
2.The chart/graph / table/diagram shows/displays that,…如图所示……
3.As can be shown in/According to the chart/graph / table/diagram,…如图所示……
4.The figures/statistics in the chart reflect/show/reveal that…
图表中的数据表明……
5.The chart/graph/table/diagram illustrates/describes…图表描述了……
6.It is clear/apparent from the chart/graph / table/diagram that…
从图表我们可以清楚地看到……
图表类满分作文必备词汇
● 表示“数据”的常用句式
1.…had the largest percentage/proportion of… ……在……方面具有很大的百分比。
2.…account (s) for/take (s) up 10%.……占有10%。
3.Compared with A, B has a higher percentage.
与A相比,B有更高的比例。
4.On the top of the list is…, which accounts for 60%.占比重最高的是……,占60%。
5.At the bottom is…, which takes up 20%.占最低比重的是……,占20%。
6.A is second to B. A仅次于B。
7.A is ranked/rated first, followed by B at 30% and C at 25%.
A占最高比重,紧随其后的是占30%的B和占25%的C。
● 表示“数据变化”的常用句式
在描述图表的过程中,考生有必要对图表的数据进行描述,因此,掌握相应地表示变化的句式也是相当重要的。
a.表示增加、减少和波动的常用结构
1.The number of (private cars) increased/rose suddenly/rapidly/dramatically/substantially/considerably/sharply/steeply from…to…从……到……期间,(私家车)的数量有了急剧的增长。
2.There was a sudden/rapid/dramatic/substantial/considerable/sharp/steep increase/rise in the number of (private cars) from…to…从……到……期间,(私家车)的数量有了急剧的增长。
3.There was a boom in the number of (private cars) from…to…
从……到……期间,(私家车)的数量有了急剧的增长。
4.The number of (private cars) climbed/jumped/rose suddenly/went sharply up/soared to…in…在……(时间),(私家车)的数量猛增到……(辆)。
5.There was an evident/ apparent/ obvious increase in…from…to….
从……到……期间,在……方面有明显的增长。
6.The number of (private cars) increased/rose steadily/gradually from…to…
从……到……期间, (私家车)的数量有了稳定持续的增长。
7.There was a steady/gradual increase/rise in the number of (private cars) from…to…
从……到……期间, (私家车)的数量有了稳定持续的增长。
8.There was a slight/slow increase/rise in the number of (private cars) from…to…
从……到……期间,’ (私家车)的数量有了稍微/缓慢的增长。
9.The number of (private cars)increased/rose slightly/slowly from…to…
从……到……期间,(私家车)的数量有了稍微/缓慢的增长。
10.The number of (private cars) decreased/fell/dropped suddenly/rapidly/dramatically/substantially/sharply/steeply from…to… 从……到……期间,(私家车)的数量有了急剧的下降。
11.There was a sudden/rapid/dramatic/substantial/sharp/steep decrease/drop/reduction/decline in the number of (private cars)from…to…
从……到……期间,(私家车)的数量有了急剧的下降。
12.There was a (n) evident/apparent/obvious reduction/decline in...from....to...
从……到……期间,在……方面有明显的下降。
13.The number of (private cars) dropped sharply/went sharply down to…in…
在……(时间),(私家车)的数量急剧下降到……(辆)。
14.The number of (private cars) increased/rose by …% from…to…
在……(时间),(私家车)的数量增加了百分之……
15.The number of (private cars) fell/dropped/declined by …%from…to…
在……(时间),(私家车)的数量下降了百分之……
16.There was a slight fluctuation in the number of (private cars) from…to…
从……到……期间,(私家车)的数量有轻微的波动。
b.表示变化不大或没有变化的常用结构
1.The number of (private cars) remained steady/stable/constant between…and…
从……到……期间,(私家车)的数量保持稳定。
2.The number of (private cars) stayed the same between…and…
从……到……期间,(私家车)的数量并没有发生变化。
3.There was little/hardly any change in the number of (private cars ) between…and…
从……到……期间,(私家车)的数量并没有发生变化。
4.The number of (private cars) remained level between…and…
从……到……期间,(私家车)的数量趋于稳定。
5.The number of (private cars) remained steady at approximately…between…and…
从……到……期间,(私家车)的数量稳定在……(辆)左右。
6.The number of (private cars) appeared to level off.(私家车)的数量开始稳定下来了。
c.表示最高点或最低点的常用结构
1.The situation/figures reached a peak/a high at …% in…情况(数据)在……(时间)达到顶点,为……(数目)。
2.The situation/figures bottomed out at …% in…情况(数据)在……(时间)达到最低点,为……(数目)。
3.The situation/figures peaked at …% in.....情况(数据)在…(时间)达到顶点,为……(数目)。
4.The situation/figures hit a trough at ...% in…情况(数据)在……(时间)达到最低点,为……(数目)。
5.The number soared to a record high of…数量剧增至历史新高,为……(数目)。
d.表示倍数的常用结构
1.A is twice/three times/four times what it was in…与……(时间)相比,A是原来的两倍(三倍、四倍)。
2.A is twice/three times/four times the amount in…与……(时间)相比,A是原来的两倍(三倍、四倍)。
3.A is twice/three times/four times as much/many as...in…与……(时间)相比,A是原来的两倍(三倍、四倍):
4.A is twice/three times/four times more than...in...与……(时间)相比,A是原来的两倍(三倍、四倍)还要多。
5.From…to…, A increased/dropped more than six fold.从……到……期间,A增加(减少)了六倍。
6.The output of steel in 1990 was 400% up compared with in 1980. 与1980年相比,1990年钢铁产量增加了四倍。
7.The figure was roughly doubled/tripled/quintupled between…and…从……到……期间,数字大概是原来的两倍(三倍、五倍)
图表类满分作文必备词汇 示例 2
1. 描述图表变化趋势的词汇
上升 (v.):
increase; go up; rise; improve; grow;
jump; rocket; soar; surge; shoot up(猛增)
上升 (n.):
increase; rise; growth; jump; surge
下降 (v.):
fall; drop; decrease; decline; go down; sink; dip
plummet; plunge(暴跌)
下降 (n.):
decrease, decline, fall, reduction, drop
波动 (v.):fluctuate
波动 (n.):fluctuation
持平(v.):
stabilize; remain the same trend; remain stable; remain constant; level off
多条曲线趋势一致:
A and B share the same trend; the trend of A happens to coincide with B
2. 描述图表变化程度的词汇
程度很大significantly;considerably;rapidly;sharply;dramatically;drastically; enormously;substantially;markedly
程度较轻 slightly;gradually;slowly; steadily;moderately
3. 极值类词汇
最高点:reach the peak/top/highest point;
increase to the peak/top/highest point(所有上升类的动词都可以替换掉increase)
最低点:reach/hit the bottom/lowest point;
drop to the bottom/lowest point(所有下降类的动词都可以替换掉drop)
占比最多:occupy/ make up/ take up/ account for/ the largest proportion/number/percentage of …
占比最少:occupy/ make up/ take up/ account for the smallest proportion/number/percentage of…
4. "大约"的表达方式
about/around + 数字
数字 + or so
approximately + 数字
图表类满分作文必备词汇 万能句型
① The mobile-phone subscriptions soared to 4 billion in 2008.
② Conversely, the urban population saw a rising trend, growing from only 300 million to 680 million by 2010.
③ Domestic cars had a dramatic increase in the market share, as high as 9.8%, while/whereas(然而)Japanese cars declined by nearly 10%.
④ The percentage of students taking part-time jobs remains a continuous increase all through the four years in university, starting from 67.77% in freshmen, reaching 71.13% and 71.93% respectively in sophomores and juniors, and ending at 88.24% in seniors at length.
④ 饼状图描述最大占比:We cannot fail to see that the biggest share is acquiring knowledge, with a proportion as high as 59.5%./ We cannot fail to see that the biggest share is acquiring knowledge, accounting for 59.5%.
⑤ 饼状图分别描述比例:Meanwhile, it is also not difficult to find that service, environment, price and other factors occupy 26.8%, 23.8%, 8.4% and 4.7% respectively(分别地).
解释原因的功能句型✦
● 第一句:
① Three major factors / reasons give rise to (引起)the situation(情况)/ phenomenon (现象)mentioned above.
② What gives rise to the situation / phenomenon can be summarized as follows.
③ It is of no difficulty to come up with(提出,想出) some possible factors for these changes.
④ The contributing factors(成因)responsible for this phenomenon can be summarized as follows.
⑤ What accounts for this situation? At least, for my part, three factors contribute to it.
⑥ This situation can be traced to(追溯到)a multitude of(众多的)factors; the fundamental ones, however, can be sought as follows.
●分条描述原因:
First and foremost, these changes are closely related to...
In the first place, this trend is bound up with(与...有密切关系)...
In addition, we must admit that this tendency/situation also has a lot to do with ...
Moreover, it must be stressed that the present situation, to a certain degree, stems from….
... is another significant factor that cannot be ignored.
Finally, we may notice that ... also plays a positive roles in leading to this phenomenon.
评论预测的功能句型✦
评论类
① It is of great importance for (the government and authorities concerned) to (place a higher value on) (the practical education and integrated development of college students).
② For one thing, relevant laws and regulations have to be established and implemented (to protect the rights of college students when they take part in part-time jobs). For another, it is high time that a nationwide campaign was launched to educate (college students to strike a balance between their social work and study). In these ways, a brighter future will surely await the young generation when they step into real society.
③ In view of the description and analysis above, I’m convinced that ....
预测趋势类
①From what has been discussed above, the trend can be predicated(预测) to continue in the following years with the rapid development of economy and society.
② I firmly believe that this tendency will continue in the forthcoming years.
③ And there is every possible reason to believe that this condition will go on in the near future.
④ And we can predict with assurance that the situation will continue maintaining an upward trend in the following years.
⑤ Thus, how to tackle this problem properly should be placed on a high value by the public and relevant departments.
⑥ And accordingly, immediate measures must be taken to reverse(逆转)or at least ease this worsening situation.
(2025·江苏盐城·三模)假如你是晨光中学的李津,5月18日为国际博物馆日,学校英语俱乐部正在举办主题为The Power Of Museums的征文活动,根据你搜集的以下图表信息,写一篇稿件。
内容:
1)简单分析图表展示的现象;
2)简要分析该现象产生处原因;
3)鼓励大家走进博物馆。
要求:
1)词数不少于80;
2)可以适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。
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图画类
图画类作文是材料作文的一种特殊形式,是一种变“画”为文的作文方式。这种题型提供给考生的是图画,要求考生在看懂图画意思后写作文,主要训练和考查考生的观察力、思考力、创造力和表达能力。素材贴近生活。图画类的书面表达一般都是中学生所熟悉的场景;画面生动形象,具有趣味性,体现高考书面表达“生活化”的特点。有时候还附带有英语或汉语说明,考生易获得直观信息。文体形式多样。值得注意的是图画式作文主要有记叙文、说明文和议论文。
【2024全国甲卷】 英语课要求做课堂展示, 请你根据所给图片, 以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 题目和首句已为你写好。
Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport, Chinese transport has an enormous development.
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【思路点拨】
一、写作要领
1.准确审题。这是看图作文写作的基础。准确审题就是注意文体、人物和时态。
2.把握情境。这是看图作文的关键。要根据图画,合理想象,围绕特定的主题,把握情景,(利用图中人物
间的关系、人物的对话、人物的活动及所处场所,以及图中的文字说明和标识来)提炼要点等。
3.发表感想。围绕主题展开合理的想象,发表自己的联想或感想。
二、具体步骤
1.根据提示,全面审题
(1)确定体裁。针对此类题型,考生应仔细阅读图画及文字说明,首先确定文章体裁。目前图画作文的体
裁主要涉及记叙文、议论文和夹叙夹议文。对多幅图来说,体裁主要是记叙文,有时也会是夹叙夹议 文。多幅图有时反映了事件背后的某种现象,这样就需要加上适当的议论,进而变为夹叙夹议文。对 于单幅图来说,体裁主要为议论文。
(2)确定人称。如果以日记、回忆录等形式来写,一般采用第一人称;如果是以将故事的形式来写,则一 般采用第三人称。但不管用哪种人称,全文一般都必须一致。
(3)确定时态。根据图画内容及所采用的的文章体裁,确定文章所要用的时态。
(4)确定主题。在审题时,考生要认真分析图画所反映的内容以及出题者的意图,分析图画的表层含义和 深层含义,通过表层含义分析图画真正想要说明的问题是什么,从而挖掘出其深层含义以确定文章的 主题。
2. 认真读图,进行图文转换
图画是作文的信息基础。考生应对图画进行全面而细致的研究,尤其是要注意图画中人或物的特点和背景,确定人物之间、人物与背景之间的主要关系,以便正确掌握图画所传达的信息。如果图画以系列形式(即多幅)出现,考生除需掌握每一幅图画的信息外,还应该对图画之间的相互联系有所了解,从整体上把握图画所呈现的主要内容。然后将图画所传达的信息以文字的形式呈现出来,并对转换后的信息重新整合,确定主要内容。
3. 确定段落,草拟提纲
根据图画内容及体裁的不同采用不同的段落发展方式。一般情况下,图画作文可以当作三段式的提纲作文来写:第一段用来描述图画并揭示其寓意(寓意一般用一句话来概括),第二段分析原因,最后一段发表评论或提出建议。其中第二、三段是写作的重点。叙事型图画作文(通常会涉及多幅画,要求对某一事件的发生、发展进行描述)可根据图画的数目和具体内容来确定段落。
4. 斟词酌句,组句成文
【写作模板】
As is shown in the picture above,_________(图画的内容). The first thing we notice is that_________(图画的最大特点).This means that _________(进一步说明). The implied meaning of the picture should be considered/taken into account seriously/paid more attention to. First, _________(分析、说明原因或结果①). Second/What’s more,________(分析、说明原因或结果②). Last but not least/Finally, ________(分析、说明原因或结果③) And the problem has aroused the great concern/care of the whole society/world/all the people around. In my view/As for me,we should take measures to deal with the problem shown in the picture. First, we should_________(措施、建议、办法①). And then we have to_________(措施、建议、办法②). Only in these ways can we solve/settle the problem of_________(图画主要问题).
【万能句式】
1. 描述图画部分
From the picture we can see that…
As is shown in the picture…
As we can see in the picture…
The picture shows us that…
This is a funny and instructive picture, from which we can see…
Look at the picture. It is a picture about…
2. 论述图画寓意及所反映现象部分
The picture reflects/implies that…
The picture illustrates a common phenomenon in today’s society.
Apparently, the picture reflects a major social problem.
This sight reminds me of something in my daily life.
What the picture reflects sets me thinking a lot.
3. 发表评论与观点部分
In my view/As for me/As far as I’m concerned, we should take measures to avoid this phenomenon happening again.
请简要描述图片内容,并结合生活或学习中的例子谈谈你对该图的理解。
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Writing 1
(25-26高三上·湖南长沙·阶段练习)假定你是李华,你校英语报健康专栏对学生不吃早餐的现象进行调查,请根据以下调查统计图写一份书面报告,内容包括:
(1) 描述统计图(bar chart)
(2) 给出建议。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
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Writing 2
(2025·福建福州·一模)假定你是李华,你校英语报健康专栏对学生不吃早餐的现象进行调查,请根据以下调查统计图写一份书面报告,内容包括:
1.描述统计图(bar chart);
2.给出建议。
How Often Breakfast Is Skipped
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Recently, our English newspaper had a survey about how often breakfast is skipped.
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Writing 3
(2025高三上·全国·专题练习)学校英文报开展了以“AI in My Life”的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 调查结果描述;
2. 简单评论;
3. 你的建议
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个词左右;
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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Writing 4
(2025·福建龙岩·模拟预测)近期,我校学生会对高中生在家做家务的情况做了一个调查,调查结果如下。请简要描述调查结果,并谈谈你对高中生是否应该做家务的看法。注意:
(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)请在答题纸的相应位置作答。
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Writing 5
(2025·江苏盐城·三模)假如你是晨光中学的李津,5月18日为国际博物馆日,学校英语俱乐部正在举办主题为The Power Of Museums的征文活动,根据你搜集的以下图表信息,写一篇稿件。
内容:
1)简单分析图表展示的现象;
2)简要分析该现象产生处原因;
3)鼓励大家走进博物馆。
要求:
1)词数不少于80;
2)可以适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。
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Writing 6
(24-25高三下·四川巴中·阶段练习)假定你是李华,你将参加研究性学习小组“两分钟答辩”活动。请你根据你小组调查得到的以下图表中所提供的数据写一篇发言稿,内容包括:
(1)陈述看法和事实;
(2)提出建议和理由。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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Writing 7
(2025·广东中山·二模)随着电脑普及率的提高,学生对于书写的重视程度降低了。下图是我校进行的中学生不想练字理由的调查。请说明该现象并发表自己的看法。
注意:可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Writing 8
(2025·四川巴中·一模)学校英文报正在开展以 “Choosing Universities and Majors” 为题的讨论。以下是近期调查所得的图表数据,请根据图表写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
(1)选择因素状况描述;
(2)你的观点。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为 80 个左右;
(2)短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
Choosing Universities and Majors
Choosing the right university and major is a crucial decision that shapes a student’s future.
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Writing 9
(25-26高三上·福建福州·阶段练习)请根据以下图用英文写一篇短文,描述主人公发现问题并解决问题的过程。注意:词数150左右。文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Once upon a time, in ancient China, there was a clever boy named Cao Chong. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Writing 10
(25-26高三上·山西·开学考试)假定你是李华,你们班学习了Learning from nature的主题单元,请你根据所给的图画内容,写一个自命题目的寓言小故事,在课上和同学们分享。内容包括:
1. 发挥想象描写完整的图画故事 。
2. 写出我们从故事中获得的感悟。
注意: 词数80左右;
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Writing 11
(2024·山东济宁·三模)4月22日为世界地球日。你在某国际网站上看到下面两张图片。请你用英语在留言板上发一个帖子,内容包括:
1. 图片简介
2. 个人感想。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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Writing 12
(23-24高三上·上海·阶段练习)Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
下面一组图片展现了现代生活方式。请根据你对这组图片的理解用英语写一篇短文。
你的短文应包含以下内容:
1. 描述图片的内容;
2. 分析该现象的原因;
3. 结合生活实际,谈谈你的感想。
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Writing 13
(2024·浙江·模拟预测)假定你是李华,你校英文报“Psychology of Teenagers”栏目正在征稿,请你选取图中反映的一个青少年心理问题,写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 问题产生的原因;
2. 你的建议。
注意:
1.写作词数应为 80 个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
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Writing 14
(2024·陕西西安·模拟预测)孩子的成长和教育是社会热议的话题,现今父母包揽一切、孩子过度依赖等现象十分严重。请阅读下面这幅漫画,按要求用英文写一篇短文。
要求:1.描述漫画内容;2.分析漫画所揭示的问题;3.提出你的看法。
注意:1.考生可适当发挥,使文章内容充实、连贯;
2.词数100左右;
参考词汇: pave vt. 铺设;为…铺平道路;
Pave the way
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Writing 16
(23-24高一下·山东济宁·阶段练习)本期校报英语专栏的话题是“Modern technology is changing our life”。请结合图片,为该校报写一篇英语稿件。内容包括:
1. 描述图片的内容;
2. 分析图片中的现象;
3. 提出你的看法。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Modern technology is changing our life
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Writing 17
(2025高三上·全国·专题练习)假定你是李华,你校正在为英语文学阅读室设计标识,现向学生征集意见。请你给负责此项工作的外教Mr.Green写邮件,从以下标识中选择你最喜欢的一个,并说明理由。
注意:
1.写作词数为80左右;
2.可以增加适当细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Green,
I am writing to share my ideas on the logo design for our English literature reading room.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Writing 1
【2024全国甲卷】 英语课要求做课堂展示, 请你根据所给图片, 以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 题目和首句已为你写好。
Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport, Chinese transport has an enormous development.
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Writing 2
【2022年全国乙卷】
学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 学习活动状况描述:
2. 简单评论;
3. 你的建议。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
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专题09 图表类和图画类
图表类
图表类作文常以数据表格形式、曲线图形式、流程图形式、柱形图形式、饼式图形式及平面图形式出现。这类题型具有文字少、信息简洁、要点分散等特征。图表类书面表达在近年的高考中时有出现,这类统计图在日常生活中应用得非常广泛,因此,读懂它并能用英语清晰地表述出来具有很强的现实意义。图表作文主要是介绍或说明某方面的情况,文体上属于说明文。应按照说明文的形式和特点来进行写作。由于这类试题文字少、信息简洁,如果只是把图表中的内容一点一点地记叙出来,进行清单式的罗列,就会索然乏味,并且达不到字数要求。
【2022年全国乙卷】学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 学习活动状况描述:
2. 简单评论;
3. 你的建议。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
【答案】
Learning English Beyond the Classroom
Nowadays, with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers, an increasing number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the classroom in various ways.
It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English songs and watching English movies is respectively 65% and 50%. However, those choosing reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%.
As far as I’m concerned, it is a disturbing trend. For students, what benefits most to their study is reading English books. Because of their lack of self-discipline, they’re more easily addicted to chatting online or playing games. It’s urgent for students themselves to improve their self-discipline, and it’s also urgent for parents and teachers to strengthen the guidance.
【思路点拨】
对于图表作文,写作内容主要包括三个方面:描述图表信息+从中总结出变化规律+提出建议或解决 之道(这一部分可以根据实际要求进行取舍)。
准备过程中,应着重从以下几个方面入手。
1. 读出图表所传达的信息,并对信息进行分类
将图表所传达的信息进行全面的转换,并根据不同的项目对信息进行分类,这是进行数据整合的基础, 这一过程中要尽量确保信息全面。
2. 整合信息,总结规律/分析原因
信息经过分类之后,以某一个标准为参照(比如时间、地域等),总结出同一对象在不同时间/地域/…… 下的变化规律,或通过对同类信息的对比分析出问题出现的原因。找出规律/原因是解决问题/提出建议的基础。
3. 数据处理
对数据进行处理时,要根据题干的要求,着重处理差异比较大或变化比较明显的信息。这样呈现数据时才能有所侧重,写的时候才能有详略之分。
4. 段落构建
一般而言,图表作文可分为三个段落来写。第一个段落点明调查/统计对象并进行图表信息的转换,转 换过程中需要注意的是信息的取舍和详略程度。第二段主要是根据信息总结出规律或找出问题出现的原因。 第三段则主要是建议的提出或解决方法的提出。其中第一段和第二段是重点段落,第三段可根据题干要求 进行取舍。
【写作模板】
模板一
①The bar chart_______(给出图表的出处)reflects______(解释图表所反映的现象). From these statistics, it can be seen that______(具体说明这一现象).
②Generally speaking, _______(分析这一现象产生的几点原因)factors have contributed to this phenomenon.For one thing, _______(第一点原因). For another, ______(第二点原因).
③As far as I am concerned,______(发表个人看法). First,_______(其中一条解决办法). Second, _______(另外一条解决办法).
模板二
①The two charts reveal the striking changes in______(引出图表揭示的现象). From the charts we can see that the percentage of _____(其中一项变化)is growing steadily, and the percentage of______(另外一项变化)rises from _____ to ______(通过具体数据加以说明), while the percentage of______(第三项变化)decreases dramatically from_____ to _____(通过具体数据加以说明).
②The changes are chiefly due to the following reasons. To start with,_______(第一点原因). Besides,______(第二点原因).Furthermore,_______(第三点原因).
③With the above analysis, we can conclude that_______(对以上分析加以总结). What’s more, _______(进一步提出解决方法)
【必备词块】
1. 点明图表所反映的主题时常用的词汇:
table 表格,chart 图表,diagram 图解/示意图,figure图形/数字,describe 描述,tell 告诉,show 表明, represent 描绘/展示,indicate 显示
2. 分析数据差异及变化趋势时常用的词汇:
(1)表示上升或增加的:rise, increase, go up
(2)表示下降或减少的:decrease, fall, reduce, decline, drop, go down
(3)表示变化特点的:sharply 急剧地,quickly 迅速地,rapidly 快速地,dramatically 戏剧性地,slowly 缓慢地,gradually 逐渐地。
(4)表示比较的:compared different from, difference between, while, contrary, however, more than, less than。
【万能句式】
图表类满分作文必备词汇 示例 1
● 表示“说明”的常用句式
在说明图表的时候,要使用下列表示“说明”的常用句式,它们可以帮助读者弄清楚所引信息的出处,有效地将你要说的话带出来。
1.As we can see from the chart/graph / table/diagram,…从图表中可以看出……(eg: 模板(一)How People Spent Their Holidays)
2.The chart/graph / table/diagram shows/displays that,…如图所示……
3.As can be shown in/According to the chart/graph / table/diagram,…如图所示……
4.The figures/statistics in the chart reflect/show/reveal that…
图表中的数据表明……
5.The chart/graph/table/diagram illustrates/describes…图表描述了……
6.It is clear/apparent from the chart/graph / table/diagram that…
从图表我们可以清楚地看到……
图表类满分作文必备词汇
● 表示“数据”的常用句式
1.…had the largest percentage/proportion of… ……在……方面具有很大的百分比。
2.…account (s) for/take (s) up 10%.……占有10%。
3.Compared with A, B has a higher percentage.
与A相比,B有更高的比例。
4.On the top of the list is…, which accounts for 60%.占比重最高的是……,占60%。
5.At the bottom is…, which takes up 20%.占最低比重的是……,占20%。
6.A is second to B. A仅次于B。
7.A is ranked/rated first, followed by B at 30% and C at 25%.
A占最高比重,紧随其后的是占30%的B和占25%的C。
● 表示“数据变化”的常用句式
在描述图表的过程中,考生有必要对图表的数据进行描述,因此,掌握相应地表示变化的句式也是相当重要的。
a.表示增加、减少和波动的常用结构
1.The number of (private cars) increased/rose suddenly/rapidly/dramatically/substantially/considerably/sharply/steeply from…to…从……到……期间,(私家车)的数量有了急剧的增长。
2.There was a sudden/rapid/dramatic/substantial/considerable/sharp/steep increase/rise in the number of (private cars) from…to…从……到……期间,(私家车)的数量有了急剧的增长。
3.There was a boom in the number of (private cars) from…to…
从……到……期间,(私家车)的数量有了急剧的增长。
4.The number of (private cars) climbed/jumped/rose suddenly/went sharply up/soared to…in…在……(时间),(私家车)的数量猛增到……(辆)。
5.There was an evident/ apparent/ obvious increase in…from…to….
从……到……期间,在……方面有明显的增长。
6.The number of (private cars) increased/rose steadily/gradually from…to…
从……到……期间, (私家车)的数量有了稳定持续的增长。
7.There was a steady/gradual increase/rise in the number of (private cars) from…to…
从……到……期间, (私家车)的数量有了稳定持续的增长。
8.There was a slight/slow increase/rise in the number of (private cars) from…to…
从……到……期间,’ (私家车)的数量有了稍微/缓慢的增长。
9.The number of (private cars)increased/rose slightly/slowly from…to…
从……到……期间,(私家车)的数量有了稍微/缓慢的增长。
10.The number of (private cars) decreased/fell/dropped suddenly/rapidly/dramatically/substantially/sharply/steeply from…to… 从……到……期间,(私家车)的数量有了急剧的下降。
11.There was a sudden/rapid/dramatic/substantial/sharp/steep decrease/drop/reduction/decline in the number of (private cars)from…to…
从……到……期间,(私家车)的数量有了急剧的下降。
12.There was a (n) evident/apparent/obvious reduction/decline in...from....to...
从……到……期间,在……方面有明显的下降。
13.The number of (private cars) dropped sharply/went sharply down to…in…
在……(时间),(私家车)的数量急剧下降到……(辆)。
14.The number of (private cars) increased/rose by …% from…to…
在……(时间),(私家车)的数量增加了百分之……
15.The number of (private cars) fell/dropped/declined by …%from…to…
在……(时间),(私家车)的数量下降了百分之……
16.There was a slight fluctuation in the number of (private cars) from…to…
从……到……期间,(私家车)的数量有轻微的波动。
b.表示变化不大或没有变化的常用结构
1.The number of (private cars) remained steady/stable/constant between…and…
从……到……期间,(私家车)的数量保持稳定。
2.The number of (private cars) stayed the same between…and…
从……到……期间,(私家车)的数量并没有发生变化。
3.There was little/hardly any change in the number of (private cars ) between…and…
从……到……期间,(私家车)的数量并没有发生变化。
4.The number of (private cars) remained level between…and…
从……到……期间,(私家车)的数量趋于稳定。
5.The number of (private cars) remained steady at approximately…between…and…
从……到……期间,(私家车)的数量稳定在……(辆)左右。
6.The number of (private cars) appeared to level off.(私家车)的数量开始稳定下来了。
c.表示最高点或最低点的常用结构
1.The situation/figures reached a peak/a high at …% in…情况(数据)在……(时间)达到顶点,为……(数目)。
2.The situation/figures bottomed out at …% in…情况(数据)在……(时间)达到最低点,为……(数目)。
3.The situation/figures peaked at …% in.....情况(数据)在…(时间)达到顶点,为……(数目)。
4.The situation/figures hit a trough at ...% in…情况(数据)在……(时间)达到最低点,为……(数目)。
5.The number soared to a record high of…数量剧增至历史新高,为……(数目)。
d.表示倍数的常用结构
1.A is twice/three times/four times what it was in…与……(时间)相比,A是原来的两倍(三倍、四倍)。
2.A is twice/three times/four times the amount in…与……(时间)相比,A是原来的两倍(三倍、四倍)。
3.A is twice/three times/four times as much/many as...in…与……(时间)相比,A是原来的两倍(三倍、四倍):
4.A is twice/three times/four times more than...in...与……(时间)相比,A是原来的两倍(三倍、四倍)还要多。
5.From…to…, A increased/dropped more than six fold.从……到……期间,A增加(减少)了六倍。
6.The output of steel in 1990 was 400% up compared with in 1980. 与1980年相比,1990年钢铁产量增加了四倍。
7.The figure was roughly doubled/tripled/quintupled between…and…从……到……期间,数字大概是原来的两倍(三倍、五倍)
图表类满分作文必备词汇 示例 2
1. 描述图表变化趋势的词汇
上升 (v.):
increase; go up; rise; improve; grow;
jump; rocket; soar; surge; shoot up(猛增)
上升 (n.):
increase; rise; growth; jump; surge
下降 (v.):
fall; drop; decrease; decline; go down; sink; dip
plummet; plunge(暴跌)
下降 (n.):
decrease, decline, fall, reduction, drop
波动 (v.):fluctuate
波动 (n.):fluctuation
持平(v.):
stabilize; remain the same trend; remain stable; remain constant; level off
多条曲线趋势一致:
A and B share the same trend; the trend of A happens to coincide with B
2. 描述图表变化程度的词汇
程度很大significantly;considerably;rapidly;sharply;dramatically;drastically; enormously;substantially;markedly
程度较轻 slightly;gradually;slowly; steadily;moderately
3. 极值类词汇
最高点:reach the peak/top/highest point;
increase to the peak/top/highest point(所有上升类的动词都可以替换掉increase)
最低点:reach/hit the bottom/lowest point;
drop to the bottom/lowest point(所有下降类的动词都可以替换掉drop)
占比最多:occupy/ make up/ take up/ account for/ the largest proportion/number/percentage of …
占比最少:occupy/ make up/ take up/ account for the smallest proportion/number/percentage of…
4. "大约"的表达方式
about/around + 数字
数字 + or so
approximately + 数字
图表类满分作文必备词汇 万能句型
① The mobile-phone subscriptions soared to 4 billion in 2008.
② Conversely, the urban population saw a rising trend, growing from only 300 million to 680 million by 2010.
③ Domestic cars had a dramatic increase in the market share, as high as 9.8%, while/whereas(然而)Japanese cars declined by nearly 10%.
④ The percentage of students taking part-time jobs remains a continuous increase all through the four years in university, starting from 67.77% in freshmen, reaching 71.13% and 71.93% respectively in sophomores and juniors, and ending at 88.24% in seniors at length.
④ 饼状图描述最大占比:We cannot fail to see that the biggest share is acquiring knowledge, with a proportion as high as 59.5%./ We cannot fail to see that the biggest share is acquiring knowledge, accounting for 59.5%.
⑤ 饼状图分别描述比例:Meanwhile, it is also not difficult to find that service, environment, price and other factors occupy 26.8%, 23.8%, 8.4% and 4.7% respectively(分别地).
解释原因的功能句型✦
● 第一句:
① Three major factors / reasons give rise to (引起)the situation(情况)/ phenomenon (现象)mentioned above.
② What gives rise to the situation / phenomenon can be summarized as follows.
③ It is of no difficulty to come up with(提出,想出) some possible factors for these changes.
④ The contributing factors(成因)responsible for this phenomenon can be summarized as follows.
⑤ What accounts for this situation? At least, for my part, three factors contribute to it.
⑥ This situation can be traced to(追溯到)a multitude of(众多的)factors; the fundamental ones, however, can be sought as follows.
●分条描述原因:
First and foremost, these changes are closely related to...
In the first place, this trend is bound up with(与...有密切关系)...
In addition, we must admit that this tendency/situation also has a lot to do with ...
Moreover, it must be stressed that the present situation, to a certain degree, stems from….
... is another significant factor that cannot be ignored.
Finally, we may notice that ... also plays a positive roles in leading to this phenomenon.
评论预测的功能句型✦
评论类
① It is of great importance for (the government and authorities concerned) to (place a higher value on) (the practical education and integrated development of college students).
② For one thing, relevant laws and regulations have to be established and implemented (to protect the rights of college students when they take part in part-time jobs). For another, it is high time that a nationwide campaign was launched to educate (college students to strike a balance between their social work and study). In these ways, a brighter future will surely await the young generation when they step into real society.
③ In view of the description and analysis above, I’m convinced that ....
预测趋势类
①From what has been discussed above, the trend can be predicated(预测) to continue in the following years with the rapid development of economy and society.
② I firmly believe that this tendency will continue in the forthcoming years.
③ And there is every possible reason to believe that this condition will go on in the near future.
④ And we can predict with assurance that the situation will continue maintaining an upward trend in the following years.
⑤ Thus, how to tackle this problem properly should be placed on a high value by the public and relevant departments.
⑥ And accordingly, immediate measures must be taken to reverse(逆转)or at least ease this worsening situation.
(2025·江苏盐城·三模)假如你是晨光中学的李津,5月18日为国际博物馆日,学校英语俱乐部正在举办主题为The Power Of Museums的征文活动,根据你搜集的以下图表信息,写一篇稿件。
内容:
1)简单分析图表展示的现象;
2)简要分析该现象产生处原因;
3)鼓励大家走进博物馆。
要求:
1)词数不少于80;
2)可以适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。
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【答案】 The Power of Museums
As vividly shown in the chart, there has been a remarkable increase in the number of visitors to museums in China. In 2014, the number was merely 720 million, while in 2024, it soared to 1.4 billion.
This trend can be attributed to several factors. Firstly, museums nowadays present a rich variety of exhibitions. They display not only historical relics but also artworks and modern scientific achievements, catering to diverse interests. Secondly, museums have enhanced interactivity. Visitors can engage in hands-on activities like virtual reality experiences and DIY workshops, making their visits more immersive and appealing.
Since museums are so attractive and beneficial, why not pay them a visit? Whether you’re a history enthusiast, an art lover, or simply eager to learn, museums have something for everyone. Let’s step into museums and explore the wonderful world they offer!
【导语】这是一篇图表作文。5月18日为国际博物馆日,学校英语俱乐部正在举办主题为The Power Of Museums的征文活动,根据考生搜集的图表信息写一篇稿件。
【详解】1.词汇积累:
显著的:remarkable→notable
归因于:attribute ...to→owe... to
增强:enhance→strengthen
有吸引力的:appealing→attractive
2.句式拓展:
句型转换
原句:Since museums are so attractive and beneficial, why not pay them a visit?
拓展句:Considering that museums are extremely charming and advantageous, you’d better pay them a visit.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】As vividly shown in the chart, there has been a remarkable increase in the number of visitors to museums in China.(运用了 as 引导的非限制性定语从句 )
【高分句型 2】Whether you’re a history enthusiast, an art lover, or simply eager to learn, museums have something for everyone.(运用了whether...or...引导的让步状语从句)
图画类
图画类作文是材料作文的一种特殊形式,是一种变“画”为文的作文方式。这种题型提供给考生的是图画,要求考生在看懂图画意思后写作文,主要训练和考查考生的观察力、思考力、创造力和表达能力。素材贴近生活。图画类的书面表达一般都是中学生所熟悉的场景;画面生动形象,具有趣味性,体现高考书面表达“生活化”的特点。有时候还附带有英语或汉语说明,考生易获得直观信息。文体形式多样。值得注意的是图画式作文主要有记叙文、说明文和议论文。
【2024全国甲卷】 英语课要求做课堂展示, 请你根据所给图片, 以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 题目和首句已为你写好。
Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport, Chinese transport has an enormous development.
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【答案】Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today’s convenient transport, Chinese transport has seen enormous development. Chinese transport has undergone remarkable transformations, giving the Chinese people access to different ways of travelling.
Firstly, shared bicycles have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility, offering an affordable and green alternative for short trips. Secondly, the introduction of high- speed trains has dramatically shortened travel times, making intercity travel faster and more comfortable. Lastly, the proliferation of new energy vehicles underscores China’s dedication to environmental sustainability, reducing reliance on fossil fuels. These developments illustrate China’s journey towards a modern and efficient transportation network that balances convenience with environmental responsibility.
In short, China’s transport system is embracing innovation and eco-friendliness.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据所给图片,以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。
【详解】1.词汇激活
提供:offer→provide
极大地:dramatically→tremendously
减少:reduce→decrease
总之:in short→in a nutshell
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Firstly, shared bicycles have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility, offering an affordable and green alternative for short trips.
拓展句:Firstly, shared bicycles, which offer an affordable and green alternative for short trips have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Chinese transport has undergone remarkable transformations, giving the Chinese people access to different ways of travelling.(运用了现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】These developments illustrate China’s journey towards a modern and efficient transportation network that balances convenience with environmental responsibility.(运用了that引导的定语从句)
【思路点拨】
一、写作要领
1.准确审题。这是看图作文写作的基础。准确审题就是注意文体、人物和时态。
2.把握情境。这是看图作文的关键。要根据图画,合理想象,围绕特定的主题,把握情景,(利用图中人物
间的关系、人物的对话、人物的活动及所处场所,以及图中的文字说明和标识来)提炼要点等。
3.发表感想。围绕主题展开合理的想象,发表自己的联想或感想。
二、具体步骤
1.根据提示,全面审题
(1)确定体裁。针对此类题型,考生应仔细阅读图画及文字说明,首先确定文章体裁。目前图画作文的体
裁主要涉及记叙文、议论文和夹叙夹议文。对多幅图来说,体裁主要是记叙文,有时也会是夹叙夹议 文。多幅图有时反映了事件背后的某种现象,这样就需要加上适当的议论,进而变为夹叙夹议文。对 于单幅图来说,体裁主要为议论文。
(2)确定人称。如果以日记、回忆录等形式来写,一般采用第一人称;如果是以将故事的形式来写,则一 般采用第三人称。但不管用哪种人称,全文一般都必须一致。
(3)确定时态。根据图画内容及所采用的的文章体裁,确定文章所要用的时态。
(4)确定主题。在审题时,考生要认真分析图画所反映的内容以及出题者的意图,分析图画的表层含义和 深层含义,通过表层含义分析图画真正想要说明的问题是什么,从而挖掘出其深层含义以确定文章的 主题。
2. 认真读图,进行图文转换
图画是作文的信息基础。考生应对图画进行全面而细致的研究,尤其是要注意图画中人或物的特点和背景,确定人物之间、人物与背景之间的主要关系,以便正确掌握图画所传达的信息。如果图画以系列形式(即多幅)出现,考生除需掌握每一幅图画的信息外,还应该对图画之间的相互联系有所了解,从整体上把握图画所呈现的主要内容。然后将图画所传达的信息以文字的形式呈现出来,并对转换后的信息重新整合,确定主要内容。
3. 确定段落,草拟提纲
根据图画内容及体裁的不同采用不同的段落发展方式。一般情况下,图画作文可以当作三段式的提纲作文来写:第一段用来描述图画并揭示其寓意(寓意一般用一句话来概括),第二段分析原因,最后一段发表评论或提出建议。其中第二、三段是写作的重点。叙事型图画作文(通常会涉及多幅画,要求对某一事件的发生、发展进行描述)可根据图画的数目和具体内容来确定段落。
4. 斟词酌句,组句成文
【写作模板】
As is shown in the picture above,_________(图画的内容). The first thing we notice is that_________(图画的最大特点).This means that _________(进一步说明). The implied meaning of the picture should be considered/taken into account seriously/paid more attention to. First, _________(分析、说明原因或结果①). Second/What’s more,________(分析、说明原因或结果②). Last but not least/Finally, ________(分析、说明原因或结果③) And the problem has aroused the great concern/care of the whole society/world/all the people around. In my view/As for me,we should take measures to deal with the problem shown in the picture. First, we should_________(措施、建议、办法①). And then we have to_________(措施、建议、办法②). Only in these ways can we solve/settle the problem of_________(图画主要问题).
【万能句式】
1. 描述图画部分
From the picture we can see that…
As is shown in the picture…
As we can see in the picture…
The picture shows us that…
This is a funny and instructive picture, from which we can see…
Look at the picture. It is a picture about…
2. 论述图画寓意及所反映现象部分
The picture reflects/implies that…
The picture illustrates a common phenomenon in today’s society.
Apparently, the picture reflects a major social problem.
This sight reminds me of something in my daily life.
What the picture reflects sets me thinking a lot.
3. 发表评论与观点部分
In my view/As for me/As far as I’m concerned, we should take measures to avoid this phenomenon happening again.
请简要描述图片内容,并结合生活或学习中的例子谈谈你对该图的理解。
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【答案】 As the picture shows, some small ants encountered a big pit on their way. Without panic, they quickly found a solution. They decided to let some small ants connect to build a bridge at a time. After the other ants passed the bridge, they would pull the remaining ants over. Their success demonstrates the importance of teamwork.
In our daily life, some people like to work alone while others enjoy teamwork. In my opinion, everyone had better learn to work with others because teamwork is definitely necessary and important.For example, in a football match, every member plays different role which is important. All members must cooperate with each other to fight against the opponent team.They can only win when they do good teamwork,or they will be defeated.
In sum, teamwork is very important. No one could live individually. Hence working together could make our life easier.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图画类作文。要求考生描述图片内容,结合生活或学习中的例子谈谈对图片的理解。
【详解】1.词汇积累
遇到:encounter→come across
在某人看来:in one’s opinion→in one’s view
重要的:important→vital
总之:in sum→in a word
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句: In sum, teamwork is very important.
拓展句:In sum, teamwork is very important, which can help us complete the task faster and better.
【点睛】[高分句型1]As the picture shows, some small ants encountered a big pit on their way.(运用了as引导的非限定性定语从句)
[高分句型2]In my opinion, everyone had better learn to work with others because teamwork is definitely necessary and important.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
Writing 1
(25-26高三上·湖南长沙·阶段练习)假定你是李华,你校英语报健康专栏对学生不吃早餐的现象进行调查,请根据以下调查统计图写一份书面报告,内容包括:
(1) 描述统计图(bar chart)
(2) 给出建议。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
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【答案】One possible version:
Recently, our English newspaper had a survey about how often breakfast is skipped.
As is revealed in the bar chart, a significant proportion of students skip breakfast frequently, with nearly 20% missing it every day and over 50% skipping at least once a week. In contrast, only a tiny minority, 7%, never skip the morning meal.
To address this issue, it is highly recommended that students develop the habit of having breakfast by opting for nutritious options like yogurt or whole-wheat bread. Besides, it is a good idea for schools to play a vital role by offering healthy breakfast options or allowing more time for students to eat in the morning.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表作文。要求考生以李华的身份,根据学生不吃早餐现象的调查统计图,为学校英语报健康专栏撰写书面报告,内容需包括描述统计图及给出建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
解决:address→solve
建议:recommend→suggest
提供:offer→provide
选择:option→choice
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Besides, it is a good idea for schools to play a vital role by offering healthy breakfast options or allowing more time for students to eat in the morning.
拓展句:Besides, it is a good idea that schools play a vital role by offering healthy breakfast options or allowing more time for students to eat in the morning.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As is revealed in the bar chart, a significant proportion of students skip breakfast frequently, with nearly 20% missing it every day and over 50% skipping at least once a week.(运用as引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】To address this issue, it is highly recommended that students develop the habit of having breakfast by opting for nutritious options like yogurt or whole-wheat bread.(运用了“it作为形式主语,that引导的主语从句作真正主语”结构)
Writing 2
(2025·福建福州·一模)假定你是李华,你校英语报健康专栏对学生不吃早餐的现象进行调查,请根据以下调查统计图写一份书面报告,内容包括:
1.描述统计图(bar chart);
2.给出建议。
How Often Breakfast Is Skipped
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Recently, our English newspaper had a survey about how often breakfast is skipped.
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【答案】
Recently, our English newspaper had a survey about how often breakfast is skipped.
The bar chart clearly presents the results: 50% of students skip breakfast once a week, the highest percentage among all groups. Another 8% do so several times a week, while only 5% are in the “Others” category. This data shows that skipping breakfast is a common problem among our students.
To solve this, students should set alarms and go to bed earlier to make time for breakfast. Schools can also add more tasty and nutritious breakfast choices. A good breakfast gives us energy, which is vital for our study and health.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表作文,要求考生根据学生不吃早餐的现象调查统计图写一份书面报告。
【详解】1.词汇积累
清晰可辨的:clearly→evidently
解决: solve→settle
美味的:tasty→delicious
重要的:vital→important
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句: To solve this, students should set alarms and go to bed earlier to make time for breakfast.
拓展句:To solve this, students should set alarms and go to bed earlier so that they can make time for breakfast.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 This data shows that skipping breakfast is a common problem among our students.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】A good breakfast gives us energy, which is vital for our study and health.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
Writing 3
(2025高三上·全国·专题练习)学校英文报开展了以“AI in My Life”的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 调查结果描述;
2. 简单评论;
3. 你的建议
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个词左右;
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】
Recently, a survey named “AI in my life” has been conducted in our school. The result is as follows.
The findings highlight AI’s role as both a supportive tool and an emotional outlet in our life. 66% of the participants turn to AI for aid with their homework. Content creation comes second with 54% using it to generate video scripts or writing. 32% rely on AI for emotional interaction, like chatting with Chatbot for comfort, while 27% use it in other aspects.
While AI boosts efficiency and creativity, automated homework solutions could hinder critical thinking and reliance on Chatbots might reduce human connections. To embrace AI wisely, we are supposed to optimize its use for learning and creation, while balancing digital and human interactions.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据学校英文报关于“我生活中的AI”讨论的调查结果,写一篇短文进行投稿,内容需涵盖调查结果描述、简单评论以及个人建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
最近:recently → lately
依靠:rely on→ depend on
促进:boost → improve
阻碍:hinder → prevent
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Recently, a survey named “AI in my life” has been conducted in our school.
拓展句:Recently, a survey, whose name is “AI in my life”, has been conducted in our school.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Recently, a survey named “AI in my life” has been conducted in our school.(运用了过去分词短语named “AI in my life”作定语)
【高分句型2】While AI boosts efficiency and creativity, automated homework solutions could hinder critical thinking and reliance on Chatbots might reduce human connections.(运用了while引导的让步状语从句)
Writing 4
(2025·福建龙岩·模拟预测)近期,我校学生会对高中生在家做家务的情况做了一个调查,调查结果如下。请简要描述调查结果,并谈谈你对高中生是否应该做家务的看法。注意:
(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)请在答题纸的相应位置作答。
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【答案】One possible version:
Recently, the Students’ Union of our school have made a survey concerning doing housework at home among high school students.
According to the pie chart, 55% of the students never do housework at home, while 10% of the students do. 12% of the students do chores occasionally, namely one or two times a week, And the students who do housework three or four times a week accounts for 23%.
From my point of view, it is good for students to do housework. Firstly, doing some housework can practice both our hands-on living skills and independence to well prepare for our future life. Besides, the diverse housework can be served as a kind of physical exercise which enables us to keep healthy and strong. What’s more, doing some housework means sharing our parents’ workload, which not only releases their daily burden but also helps us learn to shoulder the responsibility as a family. So I believe it is definitely good for students to do some housework.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表类作文。要求考生根据调查结果描述高中生在家做家务的情况,并结合数据阐述对“高中生是否应该做家务”的看法。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
调查:survey → research
关于:concerning → regarding
充当:serve as → act as
帮助某人做某事:help sb. do sth. → assist sb. to do sth.
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:From my point of view, it is good for students to do housework.
拓展句:I hold the belief that it is good for students to do housework.
【点睛】【高分句型1】And the students who do housework three or four times a week accounts for 23%.(运用who引导限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】What’s more, doing some housework means sharing our parents’ workload, which not only releases their daily burden but also helps us learn to shoulder the responsibility as a family.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句以及“not only…but also…”连接两个并列结构)
Writing 5
(2025·江苏盐城·三模)假如你是晨光中学的李津,5月18日为国际博物馆日,学校英语俱乐部正在举办主题为The Power Of Museums的征文活动,根据你搜集的以下图表信息,写一篇稿件。
内容:
1)简单分析图表展示的现象;
2)简要分析该现象产生处原因;
3)鼓励大家走进博物馆。
要求:
1)词数不少于80;
2)可以适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。
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【答案】 The Power of Museums
As vividly shown in the chart, there has been a remarkable increase in the number of visitors to museums in China. In 2014, the number was merely 720 million, while in 2024, it soared to 1.4 billion.
This trend can be attributed to several factors. Firstly, museums nowadays present a rich variety of exhibitions. They display not only historical relics but also artworks and modern scientific achievements, catering to diverse interests. Secondly, museums have enhanced interactivity. Visitors can engage in hands-on activities like virtual reality experiences and DIY workshops, making their visits more immersive and appealing.
Since museums are so attractive and beneficial, why not pay them a visit? Whether you’re a history enthusiast, an art lover, or simply eager to learn, museums have something for everyone. Let’s step into museums and explore the wonderful world they offer!
【导语】这是一篇图表作文。5月18日为国际博物馆日,学校英语俱乐部正在举办主题为The Power Of Museums的征文活动,根据考生搜集的图表信息写一篇稿件。
【详解】1.词汇积累:
显著的:remarkable→notable
归因于:attribute ...to→owe... to
增强:enhance→strengthen
有吸引力的:appealing→attractive
2.句式拓展:
句型转换
原句:Since museums are so attractive and beneficial, why not pay them a visit?
拓展句:Considering that museums are extremely charming and advantageous, you’d better pay them a visit.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】As vividly shown in the chart, there has been a remarkable increase in the number of visitors to museums in China.(运用了 as 引导的非限制性定语从句 )
【高分句型 2】Whether you’re a history enthusiast, an art lover, or simply eager to learn, museums have something for everyone.(运用了whether...or...引导的让步状语从句)
Writing 6
(24-25高三下·四川巴中·阶段练习)假定你是李华,你将参加研究性学习小组“两分钟答辩”活动。请你根据你小组调查得到的以下图表中所提供的数据写一篇发言稿,内容包括:
(1)陈述看法和事实;
(2)提出建议和理由。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】Dear classmates,
I’m Li Hua. As the data from our survey reveals, a staggering 50% of senior 3 students’ time is dedicated to study. In contrast, the time spent on sports only accounts for a meager 5%, while socializing takes up 25%, and a notable 20% goes to games.
It’s clear that this time distribution is far from ideal. The excessive focus on study at the expense of sports is detrimental to our well-being. Moreover, the substantial amount of time invested in games not only shrinks our study hours but also diverts our attention. Thus, I propose reducing game time and allocating more time to sports. By doing so, we can boost our physical fitness and enhance our concentration in study.
That’s all. Thank you!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表作文。要求考生根据调查得到的以下图表中所提供的数据写一篇发言稿,
【详解】1.词汇积累
集中:focus on→concentrate on
此外:moreover→besides
加强:enhance→strengthen
促进:boost→improve
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:By doing so, we can boost our physical fitness and enhance our concentration in study.
拓展句:If we do so, we can boost our physical fitness and enhance our concentration in study.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It’s clear that this time distribution is far from ideal.(运用了that引导主语从句)
【高分句型2】 As the data from our survey reveals, a staggering 50% of senior 3 students’ time is dedicated to study. (运用了as引导的定语从句)
Writing 7
(2025·广东中山·二模)随着电脑普及率的提高,学生对于书写的重视程度降低了。下图是我校进行的中学生不想练字理由的调查。请说明该现象并发表自己的看法。
注意:可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】One possible version:
Nowadays, with the growing popularity of computers, students are paying less and less attention to handwriting.
According to a recent survey, about 85.8 percent of middle school students think that their handwriting is poor. Yet for various reasons, many students don’t want to improve their handwriting. 51.5 percent of the students think that they can just use a computer, so there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting, and 32.2 percent believe that they are so busy with the study that they do not have time to practice. 10.9 percent think that practicing handwriting is useless.
As the saying goes, writing style shows the man. Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial, especially for middle school students. Therefore, in my opinion, more emphasis should be placed on this aspect in the future.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表作文。要求考生根据图表说明中学生不想练字的现象并发表自己的看法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
各种各样:various→a variety of
忙于:be busy with→be occupied with
提高:improve→enhance
有益的:beneficial→rewarding
2.句式拓展
句型转换
原句:10.9 percent think that practicing handwriting is useless.
拓展句:10.9 percent think that it is useless to practice handwriting.
【点睛】【高分句型1】51.5 percent of the students think that they can just use a computer, so there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting, and 32.2 percent believe that they are so busy with the study that they do not have time to practice.(运用了that引导宾语从句)
【高分句型2】10.9 percent think that practicing handwriting is useless.(运用了动名词作主语)
Writing 8
(2025·四川巴中·一模)学校英文报正在开展以 “Choosing Universities and Majors” 为题的讨论。以下是近期调查所得的图表数据,请根据图表写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
(1)选择因素状况描述;
(2)你的观点。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为 80 个左右;
(2)短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
Choosing Universities and Majors
Choosing the right university and major is a crucial decision that shapes a student’s future.
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【答案】 Choosing the right university and major is a crucial decision that shapes a student’s future. A recent survey shows that 51% of students prioritize “interest and ability” when choosing universities and majors. “Scores” and “social demand” both rank second at 33%, while only 3.2% consider “parents’ opinions” a top factor.
In my view, while following one’s passion is crucial, ignoring social demand might lead to challenges in future careers. Parents’ advice, based on their experience, can also provide valuable insights. A balance between personal interest and practical considerations is essential. Therefore, students should strike a balance between their passions and practical factors. Researching job trends and seeking advice from mentors and parents can help ensure thoughtful and informed decisions.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表作文。学校英文报正在开展以“Choosing Universities and Majors”为题的讨论。要求考生根据近期调查所得的图表数据,以“Choosing Universities and Majors”为题写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
在我看来:in my opinion → as far as I am concerned
至关重要的:crucial → vital
导致:lead to → result in
因此:therefore → consequently
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Parents’ advice, based on their experience, can also provide valuable insights.
拓展句:Parents’ advice, which is based on their experience, can also provide valuable insights.
【点睛】【高分句型1】In my view, while following one’s passion is crucial, ignoring social demand might lead to challenges in future careers.(运用了while引导的让步状语从句)
【高分句型2】A recent survey shows that 51% of students prioritize “interest and ability” when choosing universities and majors.(运用了that引导的宾语从句和when引导的时间状语从句中的省略)
Writing 9
(25-26高三上·福建福州·阶段练习)请根据以下图用英文写一篇短文,描述主人公发现问题并解决问题的过程。注意:词数150左右。文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
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【答案】 Once upon a time, in ancient China, there was a clever boy named Cao Chong. One day, a foreign king sent an elephant as a gift to Cao Chong’s father, who was a powerful official. Everyone was curious about the elephant’s weight but no one knew how to measure it because the elephant was too big and heavy.
Cao Chong thought for a while and then came up with a brilliant idea. First, he led the elephant onto a boat. The boat sank a little, and he marked the water level on the boat’s side. Next, he drove the elephant off the boat and had stones loaded onto it until the boat sank to the marked level again. Finally, he weighed the stones one by one and added up their weights, which was exactly the weight of the elephant.
All the people present were amazed by Cao Chong’s intelligence. His method showed that with creative thinking, even difficult problems can be solved easily.
【导语】这是一篇图画作文。请根据以下图用英文写一篇短文,描述主人公发现问题并解决问题的过程。
【详解】1.词汇积累:
好奇的:curious → inquisitive
想出:come up with → put forward
聪明的:clever→smart
重量:weight → heft
2.句式拓展:
同义句
原句:Everyone was curious about the elephant’s weight but no one knew how to measure it because the elephant was too big and heavy.
拓展句:Everyone was filled with curiosity about the weight of the elephant, yet no one had an idea about how to measure it due to the fact that the elephant was extremely big and heavy.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】Next, he drove the elephant off the boat and had stones loaded onto it until the boat sank to the marked level again.(运用 until 引导时间状语从句)
【高分句型 2】His method showed that with creative thinking, even difficult problems can be solved easily.(运用 that 引导宾语从句)
Writing 10
(25-26高三上·山西·开学考试)假定你是李华,你们班学习了Learning from nature的主题单元,请你根据所给的图画内容,写一个自命题目的寓言小故事,在课上和同学们分享。内容包括:
1. 发挥想象描写完整的图画故事 。
2. 写出我们从故事中获得的感悟。
注意: 词数80左右;
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【答案】范文:
The Early Bird Catches the Worm
One morning, while other birds were still sleeping, a little sparrow named Sunny woke up early. She flew around and found many juicy worms in the dewy grass. By the time the other birds woke up, most worms had disappeared into the ground. Sunny enjoyed a full breakfast while others struggled to find food.
This story teaches us that diligence and initiative bring rewards. Those who start early gain advantages over others. Whether in studies or work, being proactive helps us seize opportunities before they slip away. Success often favors those who prepare and act ahead of time.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图画作文。要求考生根据图画内容,发挥想象描写完整的图画故事,写一个自命题目的寓言小故事,在课上和同学们分享。
【详解】1.词汇积累
当……时:while → when
开始:start → begin
获得:gain → attain
帮助:help → assist
机会:opportunity → chance
2.句式拓展
句型转换
原句:This story teaches us that diligence and initiative bring rewards.
拓展句:This story teaches us that it is diligence and initiative that bring rewards.
【点睛】【高分句型1】One morning, while other birds were still sleeping, a little sparrow named Sunny woke up early. (运用了while引导的状语从句)
【高分句型2】Those who start early gain advantages over others. (运用了who引导的定语从句)
Writing 11
(2024·山东济宁·三模)4月22日为世界地球日。你在某国际网站上看到下面两张图片。请你用英语在留言板上发一个帖子,内容包括:
1. 图片简介
2. 个人感想。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】范文:
On World Earth Day, I came across two powerful images on an international website. One portrays our planet shedding tears, expressing its sorrow while the other one, by contrast, showcases Earth’s continuous and generous blessings.
The powerful images set me thinking. Obviously, the planet’s tears symbolize the harm caused by human activities, such as deforestation, pollution, and climate change. Yet, our generous Earth, the ultimate giver of gifts, makes us feel guilty for not fully appreciating and safeguarding its generosity. These images awakens a sense of guilt and an urgent need to protect the earth.
It’s high time that we banded together to preserve and restore our Earth. By embracing sustainable practices, minimizing our carbon footprint, and advocating for environmentally responsible policies, we are bound to pave the way for a sustainable future.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图画作文。要求考生根据图片内容写一个关于地球日的帖子。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
显然:obviously→apparently
紧急的:urgent→pressing
遇到:come across→encounter with
表达:express→extend
2. 句式拓展
同义句转化
原句:One portrays our planet shedding tears, expressing its sorrow while the other one, by contrast, showcases Earth’s continuous and generous blessings.
拓展句:One portrays our planet shedding tears, which expresses its sorrow while the other one, by contrast, showcases Earth’s continuous and generous blessings.
【点睛】[高分句型1] One portrays our planet shedding tears, expressing its sorrow while the other one, by contrast, showcases Earth’s continuous and generous blessings. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] By embracing sustainable practices, minimizing our carbon footprint, and advocating for environmentally responsible policies, we are bound to pave the way for a sustainable future. (运用了动名词作宾语)
Writing 12
(23-24高三上·上海·阶段练习)Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
下面一组图片展现了现代生活方式。请根据你对这组图片的理解用英语写一篇短文。
你的短文应包含以下内容:
1. 描述图片的内容;
2. 分析该现象的原因;
3. 结合生活实际,谈谈你的感想。
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【答案】The images present a vivid snapshot of modern lifestyle. The first image shows a person working remotely using laptop. The second depicts a home with laptop. In the third picture, the person is glued to his laptop to play. What is astonishing is that in the fourth picture, the person is still using laptop when he is supposed to go to sleep.
This phenomenon stems from rapid technological advancements of our world. The convenience offered by smartphones and remote work tools have transformed our life and work. People now seek instant connectivity, efficiency, and flexibility, which these technologies provide.
While these changes bring undeniable conveniences, they also pose challenges. The constant connection can lead to burnout and a sense of isolation. It's crucial to strike a balance between embracing technology's benefits and preserving personal space. In my daily life, I ensure to set boundaries to foster real-life connections. Ultimately, technology should serve to enhance our lives, not control them.
【导语】本文是一篇议论文,属于看图写作类型。要求考生描述图片内容,接着分析现象产生的原因,最后结合生活实际谈感想。
【详解】词汇积累
使用:use → employ
描绘:depict → portray
源于:stem from → originate from
不可否认的:undeniable → indisputable
句式拓展
同义句改写
原句:The first image shows a person working remotely using laptop.
拓展句:The initial depiction illustrates an individual engaged in telecommuting, utilizing a portable computer as their primary tool.
【高分句型1】What is astonishing is that in the fourth picture, the person is still using laptop when he is supposed to go to sleep.(使用了连接代词what连接的主语从句)
【高分句型2】People now seek instant connectivity, efficiency, and flexibility, which these technologies provide.(使用了关系代词which引导的非限定性定语从句,先行词为connectivity, efficiency, and flexibility)
Writing 13
(2024·浙江·模拟预测)假定你是李华,你校英文报“Psychology of Teenagers”栏目正在征稿,请你选取图中反映的一个青少年心理问题,写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 问题产生的原因;
2. 你的建议。
注意:
1.写作词数应为 80 个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
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【答案】范文
Caring Too Much About Others’ Opinions
Many students grapple with the issue of caring deeply about what others think of them. Often, it leads to self-doubt and anxiety, impacting their self-esteem and daily life.
This concern can stem from a strong desire for social acceptance and fear of rejection. Another reason for this sensitivity is the formative stage of identity development during adolescence. Peer influence is also a significant factor, as teenagers often seek validation from their social circle to fit in.
To overcome this challenge, my suggestion is to cultivate self-awareness and self-acceptance. Engaging in activities that build confidence, such as hobbies and sports, can also be beneficial. It’s essential to remember that everyone has unique qualities, and embracing individuality is crucial for personal growth and happiness. Let’s encourage our peers to be true to themselves and not let the opinions of others define their self-worth.
Mood swings
Mood swings are a common psychological challenge among teenagers, characterized by sudden and extreme changes in emotions. The primary reason for mood swings is the hormonal changes that occur during adolescence, which can affect emotional regulation. Additionally, the pressure to perform well academically and socially can contribute to emotional instability.
To manage mood swings, my advice is to maintain a balanced lifestyle with regular physical activity, a healthy diet, and adequate sleep. Practicing mindfulness and stress management techniques, such as yoga or meditation, can also help in achieving emotional balance. It’s also important for teenagers to seek support from friends, family, or counselors when they’re feeling overwhelmed.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图画作文。你校英文报“Psychology of Teenagers”栏目正在征稿,要求考生选取图中反映的一个青少年心理问题,写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】(范文1)
1.词汇积累
源自:stem from→come from
重要:crucial→vital
建议:suggestion→advice
克服:overcome→ger over
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:To overcome this challenge, my suggestion is to cultivate self-awareness and self-acceptance.
拓展句:If you want to overcome this challenge, my suggestion is to cultivate self-awareness and self-acceptance.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Often, it leads to self-doubt and anxiety, impacting their self-esteem and daily life. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] To overcome this challenge, my suggestion is to cultivate self-awareness and self-acceptance. (运用了不定式作目的状语)
Writing 14
(2024·陕西西安·模拟预测)孩子的成长和教育是社会热议的话题,现今父母包揽一切、孩子过度依赖等现象十分严重。请阅读下面这幅漫画,按要求用英文写一篇短文。
要求:1.描述漫画内容;2.分析漫画所揭示的问题;3.提出你的看法。
注意:1.考生可适当发挥,使文章内容充实、连贯;
2.词数100左右;
参考词汇: pave vt. 铺设;为…铺平道路;
Pave the way
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【答案】 Pave the way
From the picture we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet. The son, well dressed, waves proudly in the middle while the father behind bends forward to hold the jacket and the mother in front rolls out the carpet, sweating.
It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus of families, shouldering the hope of their parents. Parents arrange everything for their children and spare no effort to pave the way for their success. As a consequence, children become so reliant on their parents that they have no independent thought or creative ideas.
Such a situation is of great concern. In my opinion, overprotection and too much care are extremely bad for children’s development. Instead of doing everything for them, parents should encourage their children to overcome difficulties and inspire them to develop by themselves. Only in this way can they grow up to be independent and become truly successful. (157words)
【导语】本篇书面表达图画作文。要求考生就漫画中描述的父母包揽一切、孩子过度依赖等现象进行描述,分析漫画所揭示的问题并阐述自己的观点。
【详解】1.词汇积累
安排:arrange→schedule
后果:consequence→result
独立:independent→individual
克服:overcome→conquer
2.句式拓展
同义句替换
原句:Parents arrange everything for their children and spare no effort to pave the way for their success.
同义句:Parents go to great lengths to organize everything for their children and leave no stone unturned in facilitating their success.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As a consequence, children become so reliant on their parents that they have no independent thought or creative ideas. (运用了so…that引导的结果状语从句)
【高分句型2】Only in this way can they grow up to be independent and become truly successful. (运用了Only+状语引导的部分倒装)
Writing 16
(23-24高一下·山东济宁·阶段练习)本期校报英语专栏的话题是“Modern technology is changing our life”。请结合图片,为该校报写一篇英语稿件。内容包括:
1. 描述图片的内容;
2. 分析图片中的现象;
3. 提出你的看法。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Modern technology is changing our life
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【答案】 Modern technology is changing our life
As the picture shows, many people enjoy playing with their mobile phones even when they are walking, riding a bike or driving a car. Such phenomenon deserves our attention.
Being addicted to playing with mobile phones is harmful to us. First, if we spend too much time on them, we are likely to ignore the people around us. As a matter of fact, many young people lack the communication skills to develop a pleasant relationship with others. Besides, it is dangerous to play with mobile phones while walking, riding or driving, which is a main cause of road accidents.
It is time to reflect on our behavior. The mobile phone is designed to help us communicate with others conveniently, not to spoil our life.
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇图画作文。要求考生以“Modern technology is changing our life”为题,结合图片,为该校报写一篇英语稿件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
许多的:many→a number of
帮助:help→assist
对……有害:be harmful to→do harm to
首先:firstly→to begin with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:As a matter of fact, many young people lack the communication skills to develop a pleasant relationship with others.
拓展句:As a matter of fact, many young people lack the communication skills, which is important for them to develop a pleasant relationship with others.
【点睛】[高分句型1]First, if we spend too much time on them, we are likely to ignore the people around us.(运用了if引导条件状语从句)
[高分句型2]Besides, it is dangerous to play with mobile phones while walking, riding or driving, which is a main cause of road accidents.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
Writing 17
(2025高三上·全国·专题练习)假定你是李华,你校正在为英语文学阅读室设计标识,现向学生征集意见。请你给负责此项工作的外教Mr.Green写邮件,从以下标识中选择你最喜欢的一个,并说明理由。
注意:
1.写作词数为80左右;
2.可以增加适当细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Green,
I am writing to share my ideas on the logo design for our English literature reading room.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Green,
I am writing to share my ideas on the logo design for our English literature reading room. Among the three logos, I am particularly fond of the first one.
The logo features an open book with a globe inside, vividly conveying the idea that English literature can open a window to the world. It suggests that through reading English literary works, we can explore different cultures and gain a broader perspective. Moreover, the words “Open a book, open a world” below the image perfectly express its concept. This logo is not only simple and eye-catching but also closely related to the essence of English literature reading.
I believe it would be an excellent choice for our reading room.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本书面表达属于图表写作。要求从给定图片中选择最喜欢的英语文学阅读室的设计标识,并向负责该工作的外教发邮件说明自己的意见。
【详解】1.词汇积累
想法:idea→opinion
喜欢:be fond of →enjoy
传达:convey→express
而且:moreover→what’s more
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:I believe it would be an excellent choice for our reading room.
拓展句:I’m convinced that it would be an excellent choice for our reading room.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The logo features an open book with a globe inside, vividly conveying the idea that English literature can open a window to the world.(运用了现在分词作状语及that引导的同位语从句)
【高分句型2】It suggests that through reading English literary works, we can explore different cultures and gain a broader perspective.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
Writing 1
【2024全国甲卷】 英语课要求做课堂展示, 请你根据所给图片, 以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 题目和首句已为你写好。
Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport, Chinese transport has an enormous development.
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【答案】Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today’s convenient transport, Chinese transport has seen enormous development. Chinese transport has undergone remarkable transformations, giving the Chinese people access to different ways of travelling.
Firstly, shared bicycles have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility, offering an affordable and green alternative for short trips. Secondly, the introduction of high- speed trains has dramatically shortened travel times, making intercity travel faster and more comfortable. Lastly, the proliferation of new energy vehicles underscores China’s dedication to environmental sustainability, reducing reliance on fossil fuels. These developments illustrate China’s journey towards a modern and efficient transportation network that balances convenience with environmental responsibility.
In short, China’s transport system is embracing innovation and eco-friendliness.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据所给图片,以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。
【详解】1.词汇激活
提供:offer→provide
极大地:dramatically→tremendously
减少:reduce→decrease
总之:in short→in a nutshell
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Firstly, shared bicycles have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility, offering an affordable and green alternative for short trips.
拓展句:Firstly, shared bicycles, which offer an affordable and green alternative for short trips have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Chinese transport has undergone remarkable transformations, giving the Chinese people access to different ways of travelling.(运用了现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】These developments illustrate China’s journey towards a modern and efficient transportation network that balances convenience with environmental responsibility.(运用了that引导的定语从句)
Writing 2
【2022年全国乙卷】
学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 学习活动状况描述:
2. 简单评论;
3. 你的建议。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
【答案】
Learning English Beyond the Classroom
Nowadays, with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers, an increasing number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the classroom in various ways.
It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English songs and watching English movies is respectively 65% and 50%. However, those choosing reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%.
As far as I’m concerned, it is a disturbing trend. For students, what benefits most to their study is reading English books. Because of their lack of self-discipline, they’re more easily addicted to chatting online or playing games. It’s urgent for students themselves to improve their self-discipline, and it’s also urgent for parents and teachers to strengthen the guidance.
【解析】
【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文。要求考生请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文给学校英文报投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
选择:choose → select
提高:improve → strengthen
各种各样的:various → diverse
就我而言:as far as I’m concerned → from my perspective
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Nowadays, with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers, an increasing number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the Classroom in various ways.
拓展句:Nowadays, because smartphones and computers are becoming more and more popular, an increasing number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the Classroom in various ways.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English songs and watching English movies is respectively 65% and 50%. (运用了it作形式主语,that引导主语从句以及who引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】It's urgent for students themselves to improve their self-discipline (运用了it作形式主语,to improve their self-discipline为真正的主语)
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