内容正文:
专题01 建议信
写作指导
识
第一部分:建议信核心认知
建议信可以写给个人,针对遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法或观点;也可以写给某个组织或者机构,就改进其服务等提出建议或忠告。建议信要给出写信的原因,建议的内容,提出建议的理由,而且提出的理由要合情合理,语气一定要得当,既要委婉礼貌,又要有说服力。
1. 写作目的:针对某人或某个机构存在的问题,提出自己的建议并希望对方采纳。
2. 核心要素:
· 问题要准:开门见山,明确指出你所了解到的问题。
· 建议要实:提出的建议必须具体、合理、可操作。
· 语气要诚:语气应诚恳、礼貌、有说服力,避免说教。
· 结构要清:遵循“提出问题-分析问题-提出建议-期望总结”的逻辑。
第二部分:万能写作模板
模板一:经典三段式
Paragraph 1: 开门见山,表明意图 & 简述问题
I am writing this letter to offer some constructive suggestions regarding... (主题) that I have recently learned/noticed.
As a student who deeply cares about... / Having heard about your situation, I genuinely hope my advice could be of some help to you.
【译文】:我写这封信是为了就我最近了解/注意到的……(主题)提出一些建设性建议。作为一个非常关心……的学生/了解到您的情况后,我真诚地希望我的建议能对您有所帮助。
Paragraph 2: 具体建议 & 阐述理由 (核心段落)
Firstly, it would be highly advisable if you could... (建议一). By doing this, you can... (好处一).
Secondly, why not consider... (建议二)? This approach will not only help you... (好处二) but also enable you to... (好处三).
Lastly, I strongly recommend that you... (建议三). This is because... (理由).
【译文】:
首先,如果您能……(建议一),这将是非常可取的。这样做,您可以……(好处一)。
其次,为什么不考虑一下……(建议二)呢?这个方法不仅能帮助您……(好处二),还能让您……(好处三)。
最后,我强烈建议您……(建议三)。这是因为……(理由)。
Paragraph 3: 总结建议 & 表达祝愿
I hope you will find these proposals practical and helpful. I am convinced that if my suggestions are adopted, the situation will be greatly improved. I am looking forward to seeing positive changes.
【译文】:希望您觉得这些建议实用且有帮助。我相信如果我的建议被采纳,情况将会大大改善。我期待看到积极的变化。
模板二:万能模板
Dear XXX,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on …. Here are some suggestions which I hope will be of some help to you.
To begin with, it is a good idea to …. , through which not only can you ….but also you can…. . Next, I think it would be beneficial if you….This is because…. Last but not least, if possible, …. The reason why I recommed it is that ….
I’ll be more than happy if you can take my recommendation into consideration. If you need further information, don’t hesitate to contact me.
Yours,
Li Hua
第三部分:高频场景 & 核心素材库
场景一:学习与备考
· 问题:学习效率低、压力大、偏科、单词记不住。
· 建议素材:
· 制定计划:Make a detailed study plan and stick to it. (制定详细的学习计划并坚持执行。)
· 分清主次:Identify your weaknesses and allocate more time to them. (找出你的弱点并分配更多时间。)
· 学习方法:Summarize key points and错题本 is highly recommended. (总结知识点,强烈推荐使用错题本。)
· 劳逸结合:Ensure adequate sleep and engage in regular physical exercise to relieve stress. (保证充足睡眠并进行定期体育锻炼来缓解压力。)
· 寻求帮助:Don't hesitate to turn to your teachers or classmates when encountering difficulties. (遇到困难时,不要犹豫向老师或同学求助。)
场景二:学校生活与活动
· 问题:食堂饭菜、图书馆管理、社团活动不丰富、校园环境。
· 建议素材:
· 食堂:Introduce more healthy and diverse food options. (引入更健康和多样化的食物选择。)
· 图书馆:Extend the opening hours during exam periods. (在考试期间延长开放时间。)
· 社团:Organize more interactive activities, such as debates and speech contests. (组织更多互动活动,如辩论赛和演讲比赛。)
· 设施:Set up more recycling bins around the campus to promote environmental protection. (在校园内设置更多垃圾桶以促进环保。)
场景三:健康与生活
· 问题:沉迷手机、不健康饮食、缺乏锻炼。
· 建议素材:
· 限制屏幕时间:Set a daily time limit for using electronic devices. (为使用电子设备设定每日时限。)
· 均衡饮食:Reduce the intake of junk food and drink plenty of water. (减少垃圾食品的摄入,多喝水。)
· 培养爱好:Develop a hobby, like reading or playing a musical instrument, to enrich your life. (培养一个爱好,如阅读或演奏乐器,来丰富你的生活。)
第四部分:高分亮句 & 升级技巧
1. 开头句升级:
· 平淡:I'm writing to give you some advice.
· 高分:I am writing to share with you some of my thoughts on how to improve... (就如何改进……,我想与您分享我的一些想法。)
2. 提建议句式多样化(避免全是You should...):
· It might be a good idea to... (……可能是个好主意。)
· I would like to suggest that... (我想建议……)
· If I were you, I would... (如果我是你,我会……) - 语气更委婉
· What about/How about V-ing...? (……怎么样?)
· I strongly advocate for... (我强烈主张……) - 语气更强
3. 连接词升级:
· 用 Furthermore, Moreover, Additionally 替代 And。
· 用 Therefore, Thus, As a result 替代 So。
· 用 Nevertheless, However 替代 But。
4. 结尾句升级:
· 平淡:I hope you like my advice.
· 高分:I sincerely hope that my suggestions will be taken into serious consideration. (我真诚地希望我的建议能得到认真考虑。)
· 更高分:Thank you for reading my letter. Your attention to this matter would be highly appreciated. (感谢您阅读我的信。如果您能关注此事,我将不胜感激。)
温馨提示:
1. 背熟模板:形成肌肉记忆,考场上快速搭建框架。
2. 活用素材:根据题目要求,从素材库中精准挑选并修改。
3. 注意格式:书信的称呼、结尾、署名不要忘记。
4. 卷面整洁:清晰的书写是隐形的加分项。
【2023年新高考I卷】假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 说明问题;
2. 提出建议;
注意: 1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
1.(2024·北京卷) 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年,他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就,发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
(1)建议投稿内容;
(2)就以上建议简要说明理由。
注意:(1)词数100左右;
(2)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Hu
2. (2023·北京卷) 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动,他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
(1)活动形式;
(2)活动内容。
注意:(1)词数100左右;
(2)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hu
3.(2019·天津卷) 假设你是晨光中学的李津,英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间,英方教师Chris 将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:
⑴你喜欢的讲座话题(从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一);
⑵选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容;
⑶希望从中有何收获。
注意:
1. 词数不少于100;
2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
I'm Li Jim, a student at Chenguang High School.
______________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for your time.
Yours,
Li Jin
4.(24-25高三上·浙江·阶段练习) 假定你是李华,为迎接即将来访的新西兰姐妹学校的师生代表,学校将举办“戏剧工坊”(drama workshop) 活动。现向全校学生征集活动的建议,请你给负责活动的老师写一封邮件。内容包括:
1. 写信目的;
2. 你的建议及具体安排。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope this letter finds you well.
____________________________________________________________________
Best regards,
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专题01 建议信
写作指导
识
第一部分:建议信核心认知
建议信可以写给个人,针对遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法或观点;也可以写给某个组织或者机构,就改进其服务等提出建议或忠告。建议信要给出写信的原因,建议的内容,提出建议的理由,而且提出的理由要合情合理,语气一定要得当,既要委婉礼貌,又要有说服力。
1. 写作目的:针对某人或某个机构存在的问题,提出自己的建议并希望对方采纳。
2. 核心要素:
· 问题要准:开门见山,明确指出你所了解到的问题。
· 建议要实:提出的建议必须具体、合理、可操作。
· 语气要诚:语气应诚恳、礼貌、有说服力,避免说教。
· 结构要清:遵循“提出问题-分析问题-提出建议-期望总结”的逻辑。
第二部分:万能写作模板
模板一:经典三段式
Paragraph 1: 开门见山,表明意图 & 简述问题
I am writing this letter to offer some constructive suggestions regarding... (主题) that I have recently learned/noticed.
As a student who deeply cares about... / Having heard about your situation, I genuinely hope my advice could be of some help to you.
【译文】:我写这封信是为了就我最近了解/注意到的……(主题)提出一些建设性建议。作为一个非常关心……的学生/了解到您的情况后,我真诚地希望我的建议能对您有所帮助。
Paragraph 2: 具体建议 & 阐述理由 (核心段落)
Firstly, it would be highly advisable if you could... (建议一). By doing this, you can... (好处一).
Secondly, why not consider... (建议二)? This approach will not only help you... (好处二) but also enable you to... (好处三).
Lastly, I strongly recommend that you... (建议三). This is because... (理由).
【译文】:
首先,如果您能……(建议一),这将是非常可取的。这样做,您可以……(好处一)。
其次,为什么不考虑一下……(建议二)呢?这个方法不仅能帮助您……(好处二),还能让您……(好处三)。
最后,我强烈建议您……(建议三)。这是因为……(理由)。
Paragraph 3: 总结建议 & 表达祝愿
I hope you will find these proposals practical and helpful. I am convinced that if my suggestions are adopted, the situation will be greatly improved. I am looking forward to seeing positive changes.
【译文】:希望您觉得这些建议实用且有帮助。我相信如果我的建议被采纳,情况将会大大改善。我期待看到积极的变化。
模板二:万能模板
Dear XXX,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on …. Here are some suggestions which I hope will be of some help to you.
To begin with, it is a good idea to …. , through which not only can you ….but also you can…. . Next, I think it would be beneficial if you….This is because…. Last but not least, if possible, …. The reason why I recommed it is that ….
I’ll be more than happy if you can take my recommendation into consideration. If you need further information, don’t hesitate to contact me.
Yours,
Li Hua
第三部分:高频场景 & 核心素材库
场景一:学习与备考
· 问题:学习效率低、压力大、偏科、单词记不住。
· 建议素材:
· 制定计划:Make a detailed study plan and stick to it. (制定详细的学习计划并坚持执行。)
· 分清主次:Identify your weaknesses and allocate more time to them. (找出你的弱点并分配更多时间。)
· 学习方法:Summarize key points and错题本 is highly recommended. (总结知识点,强烈推荐使用错题本。)
· 劳逸结合:Ensure adequate sleep and engage in regular physical exercise to relieve stress. (保证充足睡眠并进行定期体育锻炼来缓解压力。)
· 寻求帮助:Don't hesitate to turn to your teachers or classmates when encountering difficulties. (遇到困难时,不要犹豫向老师或同学求助。)
场景二:学校生活与活动
· 问题:食堂饭菜、图书馆管理、社团活动不丰富、校园环境。
· 建议素材:
· 食堂:Introduce more healthy and diverse food options. (引入更健康和多样化的食物选择。)
· 图书馆:Extend the opening hours during exam periods. (在考试期间延长开放时间。)
· 社团:Organize more interactive activities, such as debates and speech contests. (组织更多互动活动,如辩论赛和演讲比赛。)
· 设施:Set up more recycling bins around the campus to promote environmental protection. (在校园内设置更多垃圾桶以促进环保。)
场景三:健康与生活
· 问题:沉迷手机、不健康饮食、缺乏锻炼。
· 建议素材:
· 限制屏幕时间:Set a daily time limit for using electronic devices. (为使用电子设备设定每日时限。)
· 均衡饮食:Reduce the intake of junk food and drink plenty of water. (减少垃圾食品的摄入,多喝水。)
· 培养爱好:Develop a hobby, like reading or playing a musical instrument, to enrich your life. (培养一个爱好,如阅读或演奏乐器,来丰富你的生活。)
第四部分:高分亮句 & 升级技巧
1. 开头句升级:
· 平淡:I'm writing to give you some advice.
· 高分:I am writing to share with you some of my thoughts on how to improve... (就如何改进……,我想与您分享我的一些想法。)
2. 提建议句式多样化(避免全是You should...):
· It might be a good idea to... (……可能是个好主意。)
· I would like to suggest that... (我想建议……)
· If I were you, I would... (如果我是你,我会……) - 语气更委婉
· What about/How about V-ing...? (……怎么样?)
· I strongly advocate for... (我强烈主张……) - 语气更强
3. 连接词升级:
· 用 Furthermore, Moreover, Additionally 替代 And。
· 用 Therefore, Thus, As a result 替代 So。
· 用 Nevertheless, However 替代 But。
4. 结尾句升级:
· 平淡:I hope you like my advice.
· 高分:I sincerely hope that my suggestions will be taken into serious consideration. (我真诚地希望我的建议能得到认真考虑。)
· 更高分:Thank you for reading my letter. Your attention to this matter would be highly appreciated. (感谢您阅读我的信。如果您能关注此事,我将不胜感激。)
温馨提示:
1. 背熟模板:形成肌肉记忆,考场上快速搭建框架。
2. 活用素材:根据题目要求,从素材库中精准挑选并修改。
3. 注意格式:书信的称呼、结尾、署名不要忘记。
4. 卷面整洁:清晰的书写是隐形的加分项。
【2023年新高考I卷】假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 说明问题;
2. 提出建议;
注意: 1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
一、写作思路分析
核心任务定位:本题为问题反馈型建议信,需构建「问题描述+解决方案」的黄金逻辑链。重点在于既要礼貌指出当前分组方式的不足,又要提出切实可行的替代方案。
关键策略:
问题分层:能力差异(水平悬殊导致无效练习)+ 兴趣错配(话题参与度低)建议系统化:分层分组(水平相近)+ 主题自选(兴趣导向)+ 轮换机制(扩大交流圈)数据支撑:引用课堂观察实例(如某次分组对话中一方持续沉默)
二、结构框架设计
三段式结构(总80词) :
问题陈述段(30词)
现象描述:"While appreciating your interactive approach, I've noticed some分组挑战 during recent sessions."具体问题:
能力问题:"When advanced learners pair with beginners, constructive dialogue often stagnates."
兴趣问题:"Last Thursday, two students assigned to discuss climate change sat silent – one热衷sports, the other痴迷AI."
建议提出段(40词)
解决方案:
前置测评:"Conduct pre-grouping surveys to assess口语levels and topic preferences."
动态调整:"Implement biweekly partner rotation to maximize exposure to diverse accents."
应急预案:"Allow temporary trio formation when odd numbers occur."
礼貌结尾段(10词)
价值升华:"These adjustments could turn practice sessions into truly reciprocal learning journeys."
三、高级句式
语法结构
应用示例
增分原理
虚拟语气
Were we to adopt proficiency-based pairing, both novices and advanced speakers would benefit exponentially.
体现假设分析能力
现在分词作结果状语
30% of classmates reported frustration, resulting in diminished participation enthusiasm.
展现因果关系
双重比较级
The wider the proficiency gap, the less meaningful the conversation becomes.
强调问题严重性
数据实证
According to my 20-class observation records, 62% of randomly paired students failed to sustain 5-minute dialogues.
增强说服力
隐喻修辞
Current grouping resembles mismatched dance partners – stepping on each other's linguistic toes.
生动说明问题
四、范文及解析
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I’m writing to share some concerns about the random pairing for after-class speaking practice. While the intention is good, pairing students randomly might lead to uneven participation. For instance, pairing a shy student with a more dominant partner could discourage the former from speaking up. Additionally, mismatched language levels may limit meaningful interaction.
To improve this, could we group students based on complementary strengths or similar interests? Alternatively, allowing students to self-select partners occasionally might boost engagement. Your guidance in balancing groups would be highly appreciated.
Thank you for considering my suggestions!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
解析:
1. 问题说明:指出随机分组可能导致参与度不均(uneven participation),如性格差异(shy vs. dominant)和语言水平不匹配(mismatched levels)影响互动效果。
2. 建议提出:提出按优势互补(complementary strengths)、兴趣相似(similar interests)或偶尔自选搭档(self-select partners),并礼貌请求外教指导平衡分组。
3. 语言风格:保持礼貌委婉,使用“might”“could”等词减轻语气,结尾感谢以示尊重。
五、典型写作误区
常见错误
改进方案
危害等级
指责语气过重
使用"I've observed"替代"You’re wrong"
★★★★☆
问题描述模糊
具体化:"Pair 7上次对话仅交换了4句话"
★★★☆☆
建议不具操作性
将"better grouping"具体为"color-coded name tags indicating proficiency"
★★★★☆
忽略实施成本
添加:"所需测评工具我可协助设计"
★★☆☆☆
中式直译错误
修改"Good students help bad ones" → "Peer mentoring works best when level差距不超过30%"
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1.(2024·北京卷) 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年,他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就,发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
(1)建议投稿内容;
(2)就以上建议简要说明理由。
注意:(1)词数100左右;
(2)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Hu
【答案】
Dear Jim,
It’s great to hear you’re planning to write about China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country. Here are a few suggestions for your article.
To begin with, talk about China’s economic growth and technological advancements, which are the highlights in the past few decades. Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss because it showcases China’s determination to build a shared future with the world. In addition, you can also mention China’s role in helping solving global issues such as the global warming, offering a more comprehensive view.
Looking forward to reading your article!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文之建议信。外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年,他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就,要求考生给他回复邮件,就此给予他建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
很好的:great →wonderful
成就:achievement→ accomplishment
建议:suggestion →advice
此外:In addition → what’s more
2.句式拓展
句式变换
原句:It’s great to hear you’re planning to write about China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country.
拓展句:It’s great to hear what you’re planning to write about is China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country.
【点睛】【高分句型1】To begin with, talk about China’s economic growth and technological advancements, which are the highlights in the past few decades.(运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss because it showcases China’s determination to build a shared future with the world.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
2. (2023·北京卷) 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动,他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
(1)活动形式;
(2)活动内容。
注意:(1)词数100左右;
(2)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hu
【答案】
Dear Jim,
Learning that a club activity themed “Green Beijing” is scheduled to be held in your school,I am writing to give you some suggestions.
Firstly,I think it great to organize a cycling tour around the city,visiting some of the green spaces and eco-friendly buildings in Beijing.Secondly,I recommend that you should arrange lectures or workshops on topics such as sustainable living,recycling and renewable energy.Besides,you could also hold a green fair or exhibition which focuses on environmentally friendly products and technologies.
Wish these ideas are helpful to you and I hope you can tell me the details and feedback the moment the event ends.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友Jim策划的“绿色北京”社团活动给出一些建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议:suggestion→tip
提供:offer→provide
开展:carry out→conduct
主题:theme→topic
【点睛】[高分句型1] Learning that a club activity themed “Green Beijing” is scheduled to be held in your school,I am writing to give you some suggestions.. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Firstly,I think it great to organize a cycling tour around the city,visiting some of the green spaces and eco-friendly buildings in Beijing.(运用了现在分词表伴随)
3.(2019·天津卷) 假设你是晨光中学的李津,英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间,英方教师Chris 将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:
⑴你喜欢的讲座话题(从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一);
⑵选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容;
⑶希望从中有何收获。
注意:
1. 词数不少于100;
2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
I'm Li Jim, a student at Chenguang High School.
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Thank you for your time.
Yours,
Li Jin
【答案】
Dear Chris,
I'm Li Jim, a student at Chenguang High School.It’s our great pleasure to have you visit our school and give a lecture on western art during the coming summer vacation.
When it comes to my suggestions, I am quite interested in western music, and expect that you could deliver the lecture on this topic. Served as a bridge, western music provides us teenagers with the opportunity to broaden our horizons and have a better understanding on culture diversities. It also gives us strength and hope when we are overcoming difficulties.
I would appreciate it if you could take my advice, and I hope that I can gain more knowledge through the lecture. Looking forward to your early reply. Thank you for your time.
Yours,
Li Jin
4.(24-25高三上·浙江·阶段练习) 假定你是李华,为迎接即将来访的新西兰姐妹学校的师生代表,学校将举办“戏剧工坊”(drama workshop) 活动。现向全校学生征集活动的建议,请你给负责活动的老师写一封邮件。内容包括:
1. 写信目的;
2. 你的建议及具体安排。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope this letter finds you well.
____________________________________________________________________
Best regards,
【答案】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to share some suggestions for the upcoming drama workshop to welcome the students and teachers from our sister school in New Zealand.
To begin with, we could initiate the workshop with interactive ice-breaker activities, allowing students to familiarize themselves with one another. Following this, a session dedicated to basic acting techniques, such as voice projection, body language, and improvisation, would be highly beneficial. Moreover, organizing students into small groups to prepare and perform short skits could foster teamwork and creativity. To conclude, a feedback session where students can share their thoughts and learning outcomes would be valuable.
I am confident that these activities will create an engaging and educational environment for all participants.
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给负责“戏剧工坊”活动的老师写信,内容需要包括写信目的、建议内容和具体安排。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议:suggestion→advice
即将来临的:upcoming→forthcoming
首先:to begin with→first of all
此外:moreover→furthermore
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Following this, a session dedicated to basic acting techniques, such as voice projection, body language, and improvisation, would be highly beneficial.
拓展句:Following this, a session that is dedicated to basic acting techniques, such as voice projection, body language, and improvisation, would be highly beneficial.
【点睛】【高分句型1】To begin with, we could initiate the workshop with interactive ice-breaker activities, allowing students to familiarize themselves with one another.(运用了现在分词短语作状语)
【高分句型2】To conclude, a feedback session where students can share their thoughts and learning outcomes would be valuable.(运用了where引导的定语从句)
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