Unit 1 单元话题写作指导- 2025-2026学年外研版（2024）英语八年级上册

新外研版八上英语U1作文指导 第1阶 高分词句储备 一、话题词汇 1. 尽管 ______ 2. 差别 ______ 3. 能力 ______ 4. 讨厌 ______ 5. 坚持 ______ 6. 代替；而不是 ______ 二、佳句仿写 7. 【教材原句】I suppose everyone has something they don’t like about themselves. (I suppose...) →我认为我会变得越来越好。 8. 【教材原句】Instead of looking away, Maddie studied my face. (instead of...) →我在空闲时候做家务而不是玩游戏。 9. 【教材原句】I have already learnt that I am what I am. (现在完成时) →这段经历把他变成了一个勇敢的男孩。 10. 【教材原句】In fact, I’m not good at basketball at all. (be good at...) →我擅长打乒乓球。 第2阶 经典范文模版 How I have changed! How time flies! I am a student in Grade 9（介绍年级）now. I have changed a lot in the last two years.（总述变化很大） First, I used to be short and thin, but now I’m tall and strong.（对比过去与现在）Second, I used to watch too much TV（介绍过去喜欢做什么）. Now I like doing sports（介绍现在喜欢做什么）. Third, I wasn’t so interested in studying two years ago. When my head teacher learnt about that, she helped me patiently.（改变的原因）I began to study very hard. Now I have a good habit that I will go over my homework one more time when I finish it.（发生的变化）Last but not least, I was too weak to do much exercise two years ago（介绍过去）. But with the help of the teachers and classmates, I can run very fast and I’m also good at playing basketball.（介绍现状） 第3阶 高分范文赏析 常常回望过去能使得我们更清晰地认识到自身的不足，总结现在的积极变化能让我们更好地往前走。在八年级开始之际，你所在的班级将举行一次主题班会，要求同学们谈谈过去一年来自己的收获与变化，请为Simon准备一份英语演讲稿，要点如下： | 学习 | 过去 | 现在 | | | 做作业不细心 | 更认真听讲，对课程越来越喜欢了 | | 业余生活 | 玩游戏，不做家务 | 参加志愿（volunteer）活动，因为…… | | 家庭关系 | 与父母吵闹 | 和睦相处，家人间有礼貌…… | | 展望未来 | 相信自己在八年级会…… | | 要求： 1. 作文应包括所给要点，可适当发挥； 2. 词数80左右（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。 Hello, everyone. I’m Simon. In the past one year, I suppose I have changed a lot and achieved a lot in some ways. 第一步 审 体裁：记叙文 时态：以一般现在时和一般过去时为主 人称：以第一人称为主 内容要点：根据所给信息介绍自己的变化 写作框架：总—分—总 第二步 列 开头： 开门见山，引出主题 In the past one year, I suppose... 中间： 介绍自己的变化等 I used to.../But now I... 结尾： 展望未来 I think I will get better and better in Grade Eight. 高分范文 Hello, everyone. I'm Simon. In the past one year, I suppose I have changed a lot and achieved a lot in some ways.① I used to do my homework carelessly.② But now I listen more carefully and enjoy the lessons more and more. I used to play games in my spare time instead of doing housework. But now I do volunteer activities and do housework, because I can learn a lot of life knowledge.③ I used to argue with my parents. Now I get along well with them and my family members are polite. I think I will get better and better in Grade Eight.④ 名师点评 ①文章开头直接点题，用“In the past one year, I suppose I have changed a lot...”总述自己变化很大，这是一个很好的开头方式。 ②用 used to do sth 描述过去常常做的事。 ③用 because 引导原因状语从句，阐述参加志愿者活动和做家务的原因。 ④I think 后加宾语从句，展望未来。 本文介绍自己的变化，使用了 used to do, instead of, get along well with 等短语，使得句子结构丰富多样，避免了重复。 第4阶 实战演练 成长的道路上，我们努力改变以提升自我。假如你是李华，你校英语广播站正在开展主题为“The Change Made Me...”（改变让我……）的征文活动。请参考图文信息，积极投稿。 要求： 1. 补全标题； 2. 内容积极向上，不少于80词； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 The Change Made Me ______ (Better/Improve/...) - change weak↔strong careless↔careful ... - story What happened? Who was in the story? ... - feelings It made me... I got to know... ... 范文 The Change Made Me Better I have changed a lot this year. I used to be a careless boy. I often made mistakes in homework and exams. One day, I failed a math test. My teacher said to me, "You can do better if you are more careful." Her words made me think a lot. After that, I started to change. I began to check my answers carefully. I listened to the teacher more in class. I also asked questions when I didn't understand. Now, I make fewer mistakes. My grades are getting better. This change made me a better student. I'm very happy about it. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $