内容正文:
话题情境助写作
典例剖析
Step1审题立意定基调
第一人称:一般过去时:记叙文:志愿活动
Step3语篇润色成佳作
DThen the volunteers were divided by teachers into
groups.
2I went all out to work at the learning stalls,teaching
neighbors how to properly recycle and reduce trash
here in town.
3I shared what I knew with others through the activity.
实战演练
◆基础句式练
1.Judy likes making friends and always gets ready for
helping others.
2.I feel proud of being a volunteer,which means I am
able to offer help.
3.Learn to express yourself honestly,and you will find it
easy to make friends.
4.We shouldn't forget the people who have ever helped us.
5.How often do the volunteers visit the old people's
home?
◆作文实战练
第一篇
How to Communicate with Friends
A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your
heart.It's important for us to communicate with friends.
Here are some suggestions.
First,we should trust our friends.We should learn
to share with our friends,especially when we have
problems.Sharing problems is like cutting them in half.
Second,we should help each other.When our friends are
in trouble,we should try to help them to solve problems.
Third,we should do something together.This can help
主题范畴二人与社会
us understand each other better.
In a word,we should communicate with our friends.
话题七人际交往与志愿服务
It can make our friendship stronger.
话题情境夯基础
第二篇
I.1.satisfaction 2.kindness 3.volunteering
Dear students,
4.relations 5.offered 6.accept 7.invitation
Lei Feng Memorial Day is on March 5 each year.
8.communicating
Lei Feng's spirit should be remembered by us Chinese.
II.1.Instead of 2.difference 3.taking part in
As a member of volunteers,we decided to do something.
4.To be honest 5.important role
We went to the nursing home and the community last
IlI.1.Sorry,I'm afraid I can't
Tuesday.The activity lasted three hours from 8:30 a.m.
2.How often do you go there
to 11:30 a.m.We cleaned the windows and swept the
floor for them.Some of us performed programs for them,
3.What do you usually do there
such as singing songs and dancing.Other students read
4.Would you like to join us
newspapers for them.I also chatted with some old
5.Sounds great
话题语篇练思维
people.How happy they were!
From this meaningful activity,I find that we should
I.1.B2.B3.C4.A5.A6.C7.D8.C
care for the old and respect them.And we should treat
9.D10.A
our own grandparents more kindly.What we do also
Ⅱ.1.B2.A3.C4.B
brings us happiness.
IlI.1.compared 2.unfair 3.painting 4.skills 5.join
Thank you for listening.
6.yourself 7.finally 8.first 9.surprised 10.better
第三篇
IV.1.asking a question 2.Three/3
It's important to learn to communicate well with
3.the ways of sharing thoughts and ideas
others.I think the most useful skill to communicate
4.happiness,sadness and fear
better is to respect others.
5.magic/use/power
Last year I went travelling with my good friends.
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When I made the plan,he disagreed.We argued about it
because I thought he should follow my advice.Later,I
thought about it and realized that his advice was actually
pretty good.We should respect each other.I said sorry to
him and then we had a good trip.
In my opinion,everyone should learn how to get on
well
with others.We should learn to listen to and
understand others.
We should also respect
tothers
politely.主题范畴二人与社会
话题七人际交往与志愿服务
教材单元链接
册次
对应教材单元
话题功能
七年级上册
Unit 5 Do you have a soccer ball?
谈论人际交往
八年级上册
Unit 9
Can you come to my party?
Unit 2 I'll help to clean up the city parks.
谈论志愿服务
八年级下册
Unit 4
Why don't you talk to your parents?
谈论沟通与交流
话题词句串主线
人际交往
event n.公开活动
deal n.协议;交易
sport n.体育运动
communication n.交流
development n.发展
invitation n.邀请;请柬
opinion n.意见;想法
member n.成员;分子
preparation n.准备工作
pressure n.压力
like y.喜欢;喜爱
argue v.争吵:争论
communicate u.交流;沟通
continue.持续:继续存在
meet v.遇见;相逢
refuse,.拒绝
explain.解释;说明
cause r.造成;引起
prepare for为…做准备
look after照料:照顾
turn down拒绝
get on with和睦相处;关系良好
in one's opinion依…看
hand out分发
care for照顾;非常喜欢
give away赠送;捐赠
deal with应对;处理
Can she go to the baseball match?她能去看棒球比赛吗?
When I face trouble and failure,my parents and friends always encourage me not to give up easily.
当我面对困难和失败时,我的父母和朋友总是鼓励我不要轻言放弃。
志愿服务和活动
feeling m.感觉;感触
difficulty n.困难;难题
kindness n.仁慈;善良
satisfaction n.满足;满意
volunteer n.志愿者
understand.理解
alone ad.独自;单独
imagine v.想象
raise v.募集;征集
helpful adj.有帮助的
lonely adj.孤独的
excited ad.激动的
look forward to盼望:期待
clean up打扫(或清除)干净
cheer up变得更高兴
fix up修理;装饰
come up with想出;提出
raise money筹集资金
You could ask hospitals to let you visit the kids and cheer them up.
你可以请求医院允许你去看望孩子们,让他们振作起来。
She volunteers there once a week to help kids learn to read.
她每周在那里做一次志愿者,帮助孩子们学习阅读。
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话题情境夯基础
I.用方框中所给词的适当形式填空
3.我认为积极参加志愿者活动真的很有意思。
communicate
volunteer
invite kind
I think
volunteer
satisfy offer accept relation
activities actively is really fun
1.[2024新疆改编]I got such a strong feeling of
4.说实话,志愿服务既是一个帮助别人的机会,
when I enjoyed the noodles and saw the
也是一个发展自己的好方法。
look of joy on my parents'faces.
volunteering is both a
2.[2024辽宁改编]Cooperation comes from
chance to help others and a good way to develop
friendship,friendship comes from trust,and
ourselves.
trust comes from
5.如今,一些大学生在农村志愿服务中发挥着重
3.You can turn kind ideas into action by
要作用。
and helping others around you.
Nowadays,some college students play an
4.Most traditional Chinese festivals build close
in volunteering in the
among humans.
countryside
5.Dale
to take the dog for a walk for me
Ⅲ.补全对话
when I was busy around.
6.The interviewer asked Tom whether he would
A:Can you go to the movies with me tomorrow
the offer from their company.
afternoon,Jane?
7.People should learn how to refuse other's
B:1.
I'm
politely
going to the children's home with my sister
8.We can know what to read by
with some
A:
2
reading lovers.
B:We go there once a week.
Ⅱ.孕原创完成句子
A:3.
1.我没有待在家里过春节,而是去了北京当志
B:We usually teach the kids to sing and dance.
愿者。
A:Oh,they must be happy.Both of you do well in
staying at home for the
singing and dancing.
Spring Festival,I went to Beijing to be a
B:In fact,we need more volunteers.4.
volunteer.
?
2.尽管志愿者们年龄差异较大,但是他们一直相
处得很融洽。
A:Sure,I'd love to!But what can I do?
Although there's a great
B:How about telling stories to the kids?You're
in their ages,the volunteers always get on well
good at it.
with each other.
A:5
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话题语篇练思维
I.完形填空(第一节)[2024西工大附中六模改编]
2.A.with
B.without
Dear Mr.White,
C.among
D.including
I'd like to thank you so much for teaching me
3.A.show
B.were showing
English in the past three years.I had a lovely time,
C.showed
D.have shown
and I was so pleased to meet you.You are such
4.A.So
B.But
1 excellent teacher.I wouldn't learn English so
C.Unless
D.Though
well 2 your help.You not only taught me
5.A.what I could do
B.when I could do
English knowledge,but also 3 me a brand new
C.what could I do
D.when could I do
world about foreign culture.Your English classes
6.A.I
B.my
C.me
D.mine
were so impressive((印象深刻的)that I couldn't
7.A.solve
B.solved
forget them until now.
C.are solved
D.were solved
You always had enough patience with me.I
8.A.are never
B.never are
remember I used to have trouble pronouncing
C.are always
D.always are
English words,and you helped me a lot.4 I
9.A.Ability
B.Abilities
made great progress in English.I also enjoyed our
C.Chance
D.Chances
walk -the views near your house is beautiful.
10.A.to visit
B.visit
That day you told me a lot about 5 to face the
C.to watch
D.watch
challenges in my English learning.It was very kind
Ⅱ.阅读理解(第一节)
of you to encourage me and trust me.The words
In 2017,at the Hankou Railway Station in
always made 6 feel much more confident about
Wuhan,24-year-old Lugazo Abubakar Lugazo found
myself.Many problems of mine
7
by taking
himself lost.He had no idea which way to go,a
your advice.
passenger who had been sitting next to him on the
And you never said any words to embarrass
train kindly offered to take him to Central China
students.Now that I am in high school,my classmates
Normal University.Lugazo had just arrived in China
8 friendly to me.I have a busy and colorful
from Tanzania to study at the university.The warm-
school life.I'm doing my best to get used to the new
hearted man was the first“Lei Feng”he met..
schools,just like you said,"9 always stand by
This experience left a lasting influence on
the people who are better prepared."I'd like 10
Lugazo.Several months later,he joined the
you during the summer holiday.
university's International Students'Volunteer Team.
Thank you again.Best wishes to you!
Set up in 2012,the volunteer team numbers over
Yours Sincerely,
100 students from about 50 countries.These
Li Hua
volunteers take part in different activities both on
1.A.a
B.an
C.the
D.
and off school grounds.Every month,they provide
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directions for passengers,help elderly people buy
A.①②③④
B.①④⑤⑥
tickets and pick up rubbish at train stations.They
C.②③④⑥
D.②④⑤6
offer free language classes in English,French and
3.Why did Lugazo think the scene in Paragraph 3
Arabic three times a week.They also contribute to
heartwarming?
the community by cleaning parks,planting trees,
A.Because he got a nice name.
and visiting lonely seniors.
B.Because he liked the little boy
As a member of the team,Lugazo often does
C.Because his work was praised.
volunteer work at the Wuhan Railway Station.He
D.Because his work touched other people.
shared a heartwarming scene,"After I helped an
4.What can we learn from the last paragraph?
elderly woman,her 5-year-old grandson called me a
living‘Lei Feng'!That truly touched me.”Lugazo
A.Lugazo will take the place of Lei Feng.
also volunteers to teach English to some left-behind
B.Lugazo will continue volunteer work in the
children in Yichang,forming friendships with them
future.
and bringing happiness into their lives
C.Lugazo will continue to play the role of Lei
Feng.
In China,stories about Lei Feng are widely
D.Lugazo will learn more about stories about Lei
known,and his spirit has been passed down from
Feng.
generations(代):“Aman's life has a certain term,
Ⅲ.短文填空
but serving the people is infinite(无限的).”
join fair paint one surprise
Volunteer work has become an important part
compare you
skill final good
of Lugazo's life and he will continue to be a "Lei
Simon didn't get on well with his parents in the
Feng”.
past.
He hardly talked to them because they always
1.The underlined
word
“contribute”
means
him with his sister.Simon thought that
”in Paragraph2.
was very 2.
and he often fought with his
A.save people
B.give help
parents about this.
C.sell products
D.give directions
Later,Simon wanted to show his parents he could
2.新考法·细节多选)Which of the following
do things as well as his sister.Then he started to
belongs to Lugazo's volunteer work?
spend most of his free time 3.
in his
①planting trees
bedroom.Luckily,Miss Green,his art teacher,
②picking up rubbish
offered him a lot of help.She taught Simon some
3giving directions to passengers
drawing 4.
With her help,Simon improved
4helping elderly people buy tickets
a lot.
5selling local products to passengers
Simon trusted Miss Green very much.One
6teaching English to left-behind children
day,Simon told Miss Green about his problem.
in Wuhan
Miss Green advised him to 5.
a painting
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competition.She said to Simon,"The best way to
proved to have a good influence on all kinds of
communicate with your parents is to prove(证明)
animals.
6.
to them.”
Some people believe dance is also a universal
After a few weeks,the result 7.
language.Along with music,dancing seems to be a
came out.Simon was very happy and excited,
common interest shared by people all over the
because he got 8.
prize.When he took
world.Do you think you could see a dance from
the prize home,his parents were 9.
another culture and make some reasonable guesses
They realized it was stupid to compare their son with
about the ideas and emotions behind it?Of course,
his sister.Now relations between Simon and his
you could!
parents are much 10.
than before.
Another universal language that you might not
V.任务型阅读[2024西工大附中七模改编]
think of is math!If you think about it now,it just
通用语言
makes sense.The value of pi is around 3.14159,
How different can cultures be?
no matter where you are on the earth!
People from different cultures can eat different
The word "universal"means true or right at all
kinds of foods and live in different kinds of houses.
times and in all places.
They probably speak different languages and have
1.新考法·写作手法How does the writer start
different beliefs and customs.But guess what!They
the passage?
can also be similar in ways you might not expect.
The writer starts the passage by
The similarities between cultures connect people
and help them communicate.
2.
How many kinds of universal languages are
We sometimes call these ways of communication
mentioned in the passage?
universal'languages.Strictly speaking,they're not
universal languages are
languages but ways of sharing thoughts and ideas.
mentioned in the passage
And some of them allow people of different
3.What does the underlined word "them"strictly
backgrounds to communicate and share emotions
refer to?
and feelings
It strictly refers to
instead of
For example,some people believe music is a
universal language.There must be some scientific
languages.
support for this idea,too.Experts have learned that
4.What common emotions can people notice in
across cultures,people can notice three common
music?
emotions in music,happiness,sadness and
The three common emotions that people can
fear.
notice in music are
Music may even be able to bridge the differences
5.What title can you make for the passage?
not only between people of different cultures but also
The title can be“The
of
between people and other living things.Music has
universal language'”.
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话题情境助写作
【典例剖析】[2024包头改编]
你校英语报社组织同学们分享自己在社区进行志愿活动
Step1审题立意定基调
的经历,请你根据下列提示信息写一篇短文分享自己的经历,
P定人称:
并谈谈体验和感受。
定时态:
Topic
Volunteer Work in Hongxing Community
P定文体:
●定主题:
Time
last Sunday
made eco-friendly(环保的)products;gave
Activities
out reusable water bottles and bags;worked
at the learning stalls(摊位)
要求:1.参考表格提示内容,可适当发挥:
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等):
4.词数:不少于70。(开头已给出,但不计入总词数。)》
Volunteer Work in Hongxing Community
Last Sunday I worked in Hongxing Community as a volunteer.
Step2谋篇布局成框架
时间
Last Sunday
地点
开篇:介绍
Hongxing Community
活动
人物
divide into groups
Volunteer Work in
正文:介绍活
Some made...Others gave out reusable water
Hongxing Community
动内容
bottles and...I went all out to...
意识到关爱社
结尾:表达感
区的重要性
Wish everyone could...
受
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Step3语篇润色成佳作
衔接成篇
润色升华
Volunteer Work in Hongxing Community
①尝试用“被动语态”改写:
Last Sunday I worked in Hongxing Community as a volunteer.
Before the event began,we met each other at the entrance of
Hongxing Park at 9 o'clock.Then teachers divided the volunteers
②尝试用“动名词作伴随状语”改写:
into groups.
Some made eco-friendly products.Others gave out reusable
water bottles and the bags we made.I went all out to work at
the learning stalls,and taught neighbors how to properly recycle
and reduce trash here in town.
③尝试用“what”引导的宾语从句改写:
I shared many things I knew with others through the activity.
Sharing is caring.Wish everyone could care about our
community and earth.
【实战演练】
◆基础句式练
◆作文实战练
1.Judy likes making friends.Judy always gets ready
第一篇
for helping others.(用“and”连接两个句子)
"A true friend reaches for your hand and
touches your heart.”这句谚语让我们体会到了朋
友的珍贵之处。那么我们应如何与朋友交流,让
2.I feel proud of being a volunteer.It means I am
友谊长存呢?请根据下面的结构图,以“How to
able to offer help.(用“which”引导的定语从句
Communicate with Friends”为题写一篇英语短文。
改写句子)
trust
share
How to Communicate with Friends
help
3.You can learn to express yourself honestly,and
you will find it easy to make friends.(用祈使句
要求:1.参考提示内容,可适当发挥:
改写句子)
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、
校名和地名等);
4.我们不应该忘记曾经给予我们帮助的人。
4.词数:不少于70。(开头已给出,但不计
(who引导的定语从句)》
入总词数。)
How to Communicate with Friends
A true friend reaches for your hand and
5.志愿者多长时间去敬老院一次?(how often引
touches your heart.
导特殊疑问句)
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Thank you for listening.
第三篇
第二篇
沟通,不仅可以交流信息,更能互通心灵。
每年3月5日是“学雷锋纪念日”,我们要弘
某英文网站正在开展以“学会沟通”为主题的征
扬和践行雷锋精神。为此,学校上月开展了人人
文活动。假如你是李华,请你根据以下图示信息
争做“小雷锋”的主题志愿者活动,带领同学们去
并结合自身的经历写一篇英文短文投稿。
附近的养老院(nursing home)和社区进行志愿者
活动。请你根据下列提示信息写一篇演讲稿介
A wonderful experience:
绍此次活动,并发出倡议。
The ways that you make good
communications:
The most useful skill:
The activity of learning from Lei Feng
Time:
Place:
Activities:
Purpose:
8:30a.m.-11:30a.m
nursing home
do some cleaning:
last Tuesday
community
read newspapers:
sing and dance...
参考词汇:spirit,care for,clean up,accompany,
要求:1.参考提示内容,可适当发挥;
要求:1.短文应包含所给要点,选择使用参考词
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
汇,可适当发挥;
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
校名和地名等);
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、
4.词数:不少于70。(开头已给出,但不计
校名和地名等):
入总词数。)”
4.词数:不少于70。(开头和结尾已给出,
It's important to learn to communicate well with
但不计入总词数。)】
others
Dear students,
Lei Feng Memorial Day is on March 5 each
year.Lei Feng's spirit should be remembered by us
Chinese.
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