高频话题16 应用文写作之难忘的事(写作专练)英语高考复习通用版

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高频话题16 难忘的事 近五年考情分析 年份 卷区 体裁 话题 命题形式 2025年 全国一卷 建议信 对外交提出的“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项做出选择 提纲类 全国二卷 咨询信 咨询外交介绍加拿大体育运动的文章进展 提纲类 浙江卷1月 发言稿 发表关于在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象的演讲稿 提纲类 北京卷 建议信 给参加联合国倡议征集活动的好友提建议 提纲类 天津卷 推荐信 在论坛交流上围绕“人类文明音像资料收录”提出推荐 提纲类 2024年 新高考I和II卷 告知信 分享在公园上了一堂美术课经历 提纲类 全国甲卷 发言稿 以Development of Transport in China为题的发言稿 图标类 北京卷 建议信 对好友介绍中国的发展成就提出建议 提纲类 天津卷 发言稿 “低碳校园,从我做起”英语主题的演讲稿 提纲类 浙江卷1月 征文投稿 推荐一项适合课间开展的运动 提纲类 上海卷 安慰信 在“排忧解难”专栏回复校友父母不容许自己做饭 提纲类 2023年 新高考全国卷 建议信 提出随机分组存在的问题并给建议 提纲类 全国甲卷 征文投稿 以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿 提纲类 全国乙卷 征文投稿 用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历,及从中获得的体验和感受 提纲类 浙江卷1月 报道 报道“认识我们身边的植物”活动 提纲类 北京卷 建议信 为以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动提供建议 提纲类 天津卷 申请信 申请参加“中国工坊” 活动 提纲类 2022年 新高考全国卷 邀请信 邀请外教做访谈 提纲类 浙江卷 邀请信 校图书馆新开设“小组学习室” 邀请外国留学生一同体验 提纲类 浙江卷 (1月) 回忆经历 回忆中国-爱尔兰文化节 提纲类 全国甲卷 征文投稿 世界海洋日为主题,举办英语征文比赛 提纲类 全国乙卷 征文投稿 英语学习方式图标的调查投稿 提纲类 北京卷 邀请信 邀请好友做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流 提纲类 天津卷 视频文字稿 用英语为社团纳新活动录制一段短视频 提纲类 2021年 新高考全国卷 征文投稿 庆祝英文报创刊十周年投稿 提纲类 浙江卷 宣传稿 宣传学生国画作品展 提纲类 浙江卷 (1月) 发言稿 欢迎新西兰学生访校致辞 提纲类 全国甲卷 咨询信 咨询国外友人对中国传统文化的看法 提纲类 全国乙卷 发言稿 以 Be smart online learners为题的发言稿 提纲类 北京卷 道歉信 你因故不能赴约周末一起外出 提纲类 天津卷 征文投稿 介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方 提纲类 语料表达 1. 通用词汇和句式 通用核心词汇 表达难忘 unforgettable / memorable: 难忘的 impressive: 令人印象深刻的 enduring: 持久的,耐久的 indelible: 无法抹去的 remarkable: 非凡的,显著的 表达经历 experience: 经历 event / incident: 事件 memory: 记忆 adventure: 冒险,奇遇 journey: 旅程 (可用于比喻) 表达感受 moved / touched: 感动的 grateful / thankful: 感激的 delighted / overjoyed / thrilled: 高兴的,兴奋的 proud: 自豪的 inspired: 受鼓舞的 confident: 自信的 表达影响 influence / impact: 影响 shape my character: 塑造我的性格 change my perspective: 改变我的看法 teach me a lesson: 给我上了一课 leave a deep impression on me: 给我留下深刻印象 become a turning point: 成为一个转折点 万能句式 开篇点题,引出经历 句型: Never will I forget the day when... (我永远不会忘记那一天...) 例句: Never will I forget the day when I first stood on the stage and gave a speech. 句型: Among countless memories, one particular experience stands out. (在无数记忆中,一次特别的经历尤为突出。 句型: Looking back on my ... (e.g., high school years), one thing that I will forever cherish is... (回顾我的...,有一件事我将永远珍视...) 描述经历,突出细节 句型: What impressed me most was... (最让我印象深刻的是...) 例句: What impressed me most was their selfless dedication. (范文1 精神) 句型: ... as if it happened yesterday. (……仿佛就发生在昨天。) 句型: The moment ..., I ... (当……的那一刻,我……) 例句: The moment I heard the news, I was so happy and proud of myself. (范文9) 阐述感受与影响 句型: This experience taught me that... (这次经历让我明白了……) 例句: This experience taught me that hard work really pays off. (范文9) 句型: It was ... that ... (正是……才……) 【强调句】 例句: It was your warmth and thoughtfulness that has made my travel such an unforgettable experience! (范文7) 句型: Not only did I ..., but I also ... (我不仅……,还……) 【倒装句】 例句: Not only did I get to know the cultural differences, but I also learned how to co-operate with others. (范文5) 句型: Though we were tired, we were delighted at the sight of ... (尽管我们很累,但看到……我们非常高兴。) 【情感对比】 例句: Though we were tired, we were delighted at the sight of the smiles on their faces. (范文6) 总结升华,展望未来 句型: I will surely bear ... in heart forever. (我定将……永远铭记在心。) 句型: This unforgettable experience will continue to inspire me to ... (这段难忘的经历将继续激励我去……) 句型: The memory of ... will serve as a constant reminder that ... (关于……的记忆将不断提醒我……) 2. 实用范文片段 克服挑战类 (学习/竞赛) · The weeks I spent preparing for the English speech contest were among the most challenging yet rewarding of my life. Countless hours were spent polishing my pronunciation and gestures in front of a mirror. What seemed impossible gradually became manageable. This journey taught me that sweat and perseverance are the true keys to unlocking one's potential. 我为准备英语演讲比赛所花费的数周,是我人生中最具挑战性也最有收获的时光。无数个小时在镜子前打磨我的发音和手势。曾经看似不可能的事,逐渐变得可以掌控。这段经历让我明白,汗水与坚持才是激发个人潜能的真正钥匙。 团队协作类 (活动/项目) · Our group project on environmental protection initially got stuck due to conflicting ideas. However, through open communication, we learned to channel our individual strengths toward a common goal. The moment we presented our work, the shared sense of accomplishment was unforgettable. It was this experience that brought home to me the power of teamwork. · 我们关于环保的小组项目最初因意见冲突卡住了。但通过开放的沟通,我们学会了将个人优势导向一个共同的目标。当我们展示成果的那一刻,那份共同的成就感令人难忘。正是这次经历让我深刻体会到团队合作的力量。 情感触动类 (志愿服务) · Volunteering at the local nursing home shifted my entire perspective on happiness. I spent an afternoon listening to an elderly gentleman's life stories. His wrinkled face lit up with a smile as he spoke, and in that moment, I realized that the greatest gift we can offer is often simply our time and attention. This profoundly moving encounter taught me more about compassion than any textbook could. · 在本地敬老院的志愿服务彻底改变了我对幸福的看法。我用了一个下午聆听一位老爷爷的人生故事。他说话时,布满皱纹的脸上绽放出笑容。在那一刻,我意识到我们能给予的最好的礼物,往往只是我们的时间和关注。这次深刻的动人经历教会我的关于同情心的一切,是任何教科书都无法比拟的。 文化体验类 (旅行/交流) My first solo trip to a historical city was a major step out of my comfort zone. Walking through the complicated ancient streets and interacting with locals, I gained a tangible sense of history and culture that no documentary could provide. This adventure fostered in me a spirit of independence and a curiosity about the world that continues to drive me today. 我的第一次历史名城独自旅行,是迈出舒适圈的一大步。在错综复杂的古老街道中穿行并与当地人交流,我获得了一种纪录片无法提供的、对历史与文化的真切感受。这次冒险培养了我的独立精神与对世界的好奇心,这至今仍推动着我前进。 必背满分范文 1.(2025·安徽马鞍山·月考)假定你是李华,高三的生活即将结束,亲情、友情、师生情弥足珍贵。请你给你的父母、同学或老师写一封信,要点如下: 1. 写信的目的; 2. 你们之间难忘的事情。 注意: 1. 词数80左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【范文】 Dear parents, Words have always failed me when I have a strong desire to express my thanks to you for the loving care you have shown for me, especially since I went to senior three. There were terrible times when I had problems in carrying out my assignments. It was Mother who approached, accompanying me with a cup of fragrant milk in your hand; it was Father who helped me regain the confidence to overcome the difficulties, challenging me to succeed in life. As you know, those good memories will never fade away. I love you! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】 本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给自己的父母、同学或老师写一封信,向他们表达弥足珍贵的亲情、友情或师生情。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 感谢:gratitude→thanks 任务:task→assignment 克服:get over→overcome 帮助某人做某事:assist sb. to do sth.=help sb. do sth. 2.句式拓展 简单句变强调句 原句:As you know, those good memories will never fade away. 拓展句:As you know, it is those good memories that will never fade away. 【点睛】 [高分句型1] Words have always failed me when I have a strong desire to express my thanks to you for the loving care you have shown for me, especially since I went to senior three. (划线部分运用了省略that/which引导的限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] It was Mother who approached, accompanying me with a cup of fragrant milk in your hand; it was Father who helped me regain the confidence to overcome the difficulties, challenging me to succeed in life. (运用了强调句型结构,现在分词作状语) 2.(2025·四川·月考)你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Take the stage, play our role 为题写一篇发言稿参赛。内容包括: 1.选择一个近来发生的让人振奋的事件说起,让你联想到祖国发展,青年一代所要肩负的责任和使命。 2.结合自身,如何实践理想报效祖国。 注意: 1.词数 80 左右; 2.题目和首句已为你写好。 Take the stage, play our role China is rising on the world stage notably. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 Take the stage, play our role China is rising on the world stage notably. We were very excited to hear the news that the Shenzhou-V carrying the 38-year-old astronaut Yang, lifted off on Wednesday at 9:00 a.m. at Jiuquan Satellite Launch Centre, Gansu Province. The success was exciting not only for all Chinese, but also for people around the world. That was an honor of our great motherland and made me think about our responsibility. Someone may doubt that the young people have a little responsibility, but it’s just the opposite. The young people are carrying too much responsibility. Well, I must say that we have a responsibility for ourselves. The contemporary young people are stressed out, and we have to work hard to make a living. As a student of us, so long as we choose study, we have a responsibility to complete our studies seriously and steadfastly. We have grown up with physical and mental health, and that is inseparable from all kinds of hardship parents endured. So we should not shirk any responsibility of love and care. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生以Take the stage, play our role为题写一篇发言稿参加英语演讲比赛。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 激动的:excited→thrilled 责任:responsibility→duty 分不开的:inseparable→indivisible 承受:endure→bear 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句:That was an honor of our great motherland and made me think about our responsibility. 拓展句:That was an honor of our great motherland, which made me think about our responsibility. 【点睛】 [高分句型1]We were very excited to hear the news that the Shenzhou-V carrying the 38-year-old astronaut Yang, lifted off on Wednesday at 9:00 a.m. at Jiuquan Satellite Launch Centre, Gansu Province.(运用了that引导的同位语从句,现在分词作后置定语) [高分句型2]Someone may doubt that the young people have a little responsibility, but it’s just the opposite.(运用了that引导的宾语从句) 3.(2025·宁夏·月考)假定你是李华,在英语课上,外教Smith要求每位同学写一篇周记,谈一谈自己进入高中这一阶段内的感受。请你根据以下要点,用英语完成你的周记。 1. 新旧学校对比; 2. 给你留下印象最深刻的事。 注意: 1. 词数80左右; 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 Friday September 6th I believe the first week of our senior high left a deep impression on us all. The moment I stepped into the school, I was attracted by the large campus which is about three times larger than my former one. What impressed me most was the first English lesson by Mr. Smith, our foreign language teacher. I was asked to introduce myself in English, but I was too nervous to speak, which made me quite embarrassed. However, Mr. Smith encouraged me and finally I finished my self-introduction. I believe I can surely spend the three years happily and gain much in this school. 【导语】本篇表达属于应用文,要求考生写一篇日记谈一谈自己进入高中这一阶段内的感受。 【详解】第一步:审题 体裁:应用文 时态:根据提示,时态应为一般过去时 要求:1. 新旧学校对比; 2. 给你留下印象最深刻的事。 第二步:列提纲 (重点词组) leave a deep impression; attract; nervous; embarrassed; encourage; self-introduction 第三步:连词成句 1. I believe the first week of our senior high left a deep impression on us all. 2. I was attracted by the large campus which is about three times larger than my former one. 3. I was asked to introduce myself in English, but I was too nervous to speak, which made me quite embarrassed. 4. Mr. Smith encouraged me and finally I finished my self-introduction. 根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步:连句成篇(衔接词) 1.表文章结构顺序:First of all Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last 2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including, 3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰, 第五步:润色修改 【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句,如:I was attracted by the large campus which is about three times larger than my former one.这句话运用了定语从句,I was asked to introduce myself in English, but I was too nervous to speak, which made me quite embarrassed.运用了非限制性定语从句,固定搭配运用了如leave a deep impression; attract; nervous; embarrassed; encourage; self-introduction等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。 4.(2025·湖北·阶段考)红星中学为了创建文明校园,促进和谐社会,举办题为 “Conflict Management” 的征文比赛。假定你是李林,请给校报投稿,你的文章需包括: 1)你亲身经历的最严重或令你最难忘的冲突; 2)你对处理冲突的反思或从中学到的经验教训。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 As the saying goes “where there are people, there are rivers and lakes as well”, conflict is inevitable. Two months ago, arguing with my parents seemed natural. My arrogance, as well as my rebelliousness, was constantly represented by me, so my loving mother and father had to stop smiling at me and began to crack down on me. I went from being a little afraid to ignoring my parents, and with that came a growing conflict. The moment I stepped out of the house, I felt the urge to say goodbye forever. A gust of autumn wind blew, and I seemed to calm a lot. I was the one who started the conflict. My parents did nothing wrong. The endless arguments kept the conflict going every time it ended. It was I who reignited the conflict. After that I came to realize conflict is a natural part of life, and that it is an opportunity to create a better understanding. 【分析】 本篇书面表达属于夹叙夹议文,要求考生给给校报投稿,参加学校举办的题为 “Conflict Management” 的征文比赛。 【详解】第一步:审题 体裁:夹叙夹议文 时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时。 结构:总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求:1. 介绍你亲身经历的最严重或令你最难忘的冲突;2. 你对处理冲突的反思或从中学到的经验教训。 第二步:列提纲 (重点词组) as the saying goes;arguing with; as well as; crack down on me; keep doing; an opportunity to do 第三步:连词成句 1.Two months ago, arguing with my parents seemed natural. 2.My arrogance, as well as my rebelliousness, was constantly represented by me, so my loving mother and father had to stop smiling at me and began to crack down on me. 3.I went from being a little afraid to ignoring my parents, and with that came a growing conflict. 4.The moment I stepped out of the house, I felt the urge to say goodbye forever. 5.A gust of autumn wind blew, and I seemed to calm a lot. 6.I was the one who started the conflict. 7.My parents did nothing wrong. 8.The endless arguments kept the conflict going every time it ended. 9.It was I who reignited the conflict. 根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)(供参考) 1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last 2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including 3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰, 【点睛】[高分句型1]I was the one who started the conflict. (我是开始冲突的那个人。)运用了定语从句。 [高分句型2]It was I who reignited the conflict.(是我再次引发冲突。)运用了强调句。 [高分句型3]with that came a growing conflict. (随之而来的是一场日益激烈的冲突。)运用了倒装句。 5.(2025·江苏苏州·阶段考)假如你是李华,高中生活即将结束,你的英国笔友 Tom 写信给你,想了解你高中时期一次难忘的经历, 请你给他写一封回信,要点如下: 1. 描写一次难忘的经历; 2. 谈谈这次经历对你的影响。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 Dear Tom, Nice to hear from you. Knowing from your last letter that you are curious about one of my unforgettable experiences in high school, I am writing to share one with you. When I was in Senior II, I got a chance to study in your country -- the UK for three months as an exchange student. What impressed me most was the various activities in and after class. We had group discussions and played games with classmates to enjoy the cultural diversity. I developed a deep friendship with many UK students from varied backgrounds, which helped me understand the country better. Through the three months’ study, not only did I get to know the cultural differences, but I also learned how to co-operate with others. Looking forward to your early reply and sharing your unforgettable experience. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生以书信形式向外国笔友描述一次高中时期的难忘经历及其影响。 【详解】 词汇积累 难忘的:unforgettable → memorable / impressive 机会:chance → opportunity 多样的:various → diverse / a wide range of 理解:understand → comprehend / appreciate 合作:co-operate → collaborate / work jointly 深厚的:deep → profound / strong 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句:I got a chance to study in the UK. This was when I was in Senior II. 拓展句:It was during my Senior II year that I was fortunate enough to study in the UK. (运用强调句型,突出时间要素,增强表达效果) 【点睛】 [高分句型1] Knowing from your last letter that you are curious about one of my unforgettable experiences in high school, I am writing to share one with you. (运用现在分词短语作状语,自然地引出写信目的,同时体现了书信的交际功能) [高分句型2] What impressed me most was the various activities in and after class. (运用主语从句开头,突出强调“最印象深刻”的内容,句式新颖有变化) [高分句型3] I developed a deep friendship with many UK students from varied backgrounds, which helped me understand the country better. (运用which引导的非限制性定语从句,补充说明友谊带来的额外收获,使表达更丰富) [高分句型4] Through the three months’ study, not only did I get to know the cultural differences, but I also learned how to co-operate with others. (运用“not only... but also...”倒装结构,清晰地列举了经历带来的双重收获,增强了语言的节奏感和表现力) 6.(2025·江苏苏州·阶段考)假设你是某一中学的学生李华,你校为丰富学生课余生活,营造英语学习氛围,决定开展一次有关传统节日的英语征文活动。为积极响应学校号召,你准备写一个最让你难忘的节日,内容包括: 1、该节日的简单介绍; 2、你最难忘的场景。 注意: 1、词数:100左右; 2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 As is known to us, the Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the major Chinese traditional festivals, which family members spend together laughing and chatting. The last Mid-Autumn festival is the most unforgettable one in my life. It seems that it had happened yesterday. On that day, led by our headmaster, we went to the Xiyang nursing home, which housed many elderly people. Their adult children, mostly migrant workers, couldn’t keep them company. First, we swept the floor, cleaned dinner tables with cloths. Then we instructed the elderly techniques involving how to order goods online and use smart phones skillfully. Finally, we chatted cheerfully while eating moon cakes and admiring the moon together. Tired as we were on that day, we were delighted at the sight of the smiles on their faces. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“最难忘的节日”为主题,介绍一个传统节日并描述难忘场景,参与学校英语征文活动。 【详解】 词汇积累 重要的:major → significant / important 一起:together → collectively / in company 难忘的:unforgettable → memorable / enduring 熟练地:skillfully → proficiently / with ease 高兴的:delighted → overjoyed / thrilled 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句:We went to the Xiyang nursing home. It housed many elderly people. 拓展句:We went to the Xiyang nursing home, which housed many elderly people. (运用which引导的非限制性定语从句,将两个简单句合并,使句子结构更紧凑,信息更连贯) 【点睛】 [高分句型1] As is known to us, the Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the major Chinese traditional festivals, which family members spend together laughing and chatting. (运用了“As is known to us”非限制性定语从句开头,以及which引导的定语从句,既点明节日地位,又生动描绘了节日氛围,句式丰富) [高分句型2] On that day, led by our headmaster, we went to the Xiyang nursing home, which housed many elderly people. (运用了过去分词短语“led by our headmaster”作状语,以及which引导的非限制性定语从句,清晰地交代了活动的组织者和地点特征) [高分句型3] Tired as we were on that day, we were delighted at the sight of the smiles on their faces. (运用了“形容词 + as + 主语 + 谓语”的倒装让步状语从句,突出了尽管身体疲惫,但内心愉悦的强烈对比,增强了情感的感染力) 7.(2025·九省·联考)假定你是李华,假期你去留学生Tom的家乡游玩时受到了他的热情款待。请你给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括: 1. 表示谢意; 2. 回忆难忘的瞬间。 注意:1.写作词数应80左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Dear Tom, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks again and I’m looking forward to seeing you in China soon! Yours, Li Hua 【范文】 Dear Tom. I have just arrived home. Thank you very much for the hospitality I have received during my stay at your home! I’ll remember forever the time we spent together. I’m particularly impressed by the local dishes you prepared for me. Their flavors are still lingering in my mouth! I’m also grateful for your showing me around the town, which has given me a deeper insight into the local culture and history. It is your warmth and thoughtfulness that has made my travel such an unforgettable experience! Thanks again and I’m looking forward to seeing you in China soon! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封电子邮件,对朋友的热情款待表示感谢,并回忆共度的难忘时光。 【详解】 词汇积累 款待:hospitality → kindness / generous reception 印象深刻:impressed by → struck by / moved by 感激:grateful → thankful / appreciative 周到:thoughtfulness → consideration / attentiveness 难忘的:unforgettable → memorable / enduring 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句:You showed me around the town. This gave me a deeper insight into the local culture. 拓展句:I’m also grateful for your showing me around the town, which has given me a deeper insight into the local culture. (运用which引导的非限制性定语从句,将两个简单句合并,使感谢的原因更加明确,逻辑更紧密) 【点睛】 [高分句型1] I’m particularly impressed by the local dishes you prepared for me. (运用了省略关系代词that/which的定语从句“you prepared for me”,简洁明了地修饰dishes,突出了对方的用心) [高分句型2] I’m also grateful for your showing me around the town, which has given me a deeper insight into the local culture and history. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句,补充说明陪同游览带来的深远影响,拓展了感谢的深度) [高分句型3] It is your warmth and thoughtfulness that has made my travel such an unforgettable experience! (运用了“It is... that...”的强调句型,突出对方品质是旅程难忘的根本原因,情感表达更加强烈和真挚) 8.(2025·浙江·月考)假设你是李华,你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以“人生中难忘的一次经历”为主题,写一篇短文。内容包括: 1.经历过程;                2.个人感受。 注意: 1.词数80左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 An Unforgettable Experience in My Life ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 An Unforgettable Experience in My Life Never will I forget the splendid days when I escaped the stress of high school and went on a 3-day trip to Beijing with my best friends without parents or teachers. We acted clumsily at first since the instructions from the adults were all absent. Gradually we learned how to arrange for a satisfactory schedule, including tourist attractions, like the Great Wall as well as the Forbidden City. Another highlight was the most magnificent starry night. Freezing cold as the weather was, we trembled and stayed outside to witness the wonder of nature.    What makes the first trip so special is that it shows my growth in independence and records the unique memories among life-long friends. I will surely bear the trip in heart forever. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“人生中难忘的一次经历”为主题,描述经历过程和内心感受,参与校英语作文比赛。 【详解】 词汇积累 难忘的:unforgettable → memorable / enduring 笨拙地:clumsily → awkwardly / inexpertly 安排:arrange → plan / organize 壮丽的:magnificent → splendid / breathtaking 独立:independence → self-reliance 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句:We learned how to arrange a schedule. The schedule included tourist attractions. 拓展句:Gradually we learned how to arrange for a satisfactory schedule, including tourist attractions... (运用现在分词短语作状语,将两个简单句合并,使表达更加简洁流畅) 【点睛】 [高分句型1] Never will I forget the splendid days when I escaped the stress of high school and went on a 3-day trip to Beijing with my best friends without parents or teachers. (运用否定词开头的倒装句式,强烈表达难忘之情,同时用when引导定语从句具体说明难忘时光的内容) [高分句型2] Freezing cold as the weather was, we trembled and stayed outside to witness the wonder of nature. (运用“形容词+as+主语+谓语”的倒装让步状语从句,突出天气严寒与坚持观星形成的对比,体现执着精神) [高分句型3] What makes the first trip so special is that it shows my growth in independence and records the unique memories among life-long friends. (运用“What”引导的主语从句和“that”引导的表语从句,深刻揭示这次经历的特殊意义,从成长和友谊两个层面进行总结) 9.(2025·北京·月考)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友 Jim 给你发邮件和你分享了最令他难忘的一件事,并询问你最难忘的一件事是什么。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括: 1. 你最难忘的一件事;2. 说明难忘的原因。 注意:1. 词数 100 左右;2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数 Dear Jim, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【范文】 Dear Jim, Thanks for sharing your unforgettable experience with me. It really made me think about my own.  For me, the most unforgettable thing was when I won the school’s science competition last year. It was a big surprise for me because I had never thought I could do it. I spent a lot of time preparing for it, studying hard and doing experiments. When I heard the news, I was so happy and proud of myself.  This experience taught me that hard work really pays off. It gave me more confidence in myself and encouraged me to try harder in everything I do. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友回信,分享自己最难忘的一件事并说明原因。 【详解】 词汇积累 难忘的:unforgettable → memorable / enduring 惊喜:surprise → astonishment / shock 准备:preparing for → getting ready for / working towards 回报:pays off → bears fruit / is rewarded 信心:confidence → self-belief / assurance 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句:I won the school’s science competition last year. This was the most unforgettable thing for me. 拓展句:Winning the school’s science competition last year remains the most unforgettable achievement for me. (运用动名词短语作主语,将两个简单句合并,使表达更加简洁有力) 【点睛】 [高分句型1] Thanks for sharing your unforgettable experience with me. It really made me think about my own. (开篇自然承接对方来信内容,运用"make me think about"地道的表达,自然过渡到自己的经历) [高分句型2] For me, the most unforgettable thing was when I won the school’s science competition last year. (运用"when"引导的表语从句,清晰地引出核心事件,句式富有变化) [高分句型3] This experience taught me that hard work really pays off. (运用"that"引导的宾语从句,直接点明经历带来的深刻启示,语言简洁而富有哲理) [高分句型4] It gave me more confidence in myself and encouraged me to try harder in everything I do. (运用"and"连接两个平行谓语,从"树立信心"和"激励行动"两个层面阐述影响,使内容更加充实完整) 10.(2025·广西南宁·月考)假如你是李华,你的朋友Tom 来信询问你的一次旅游经历。请你根据下面提示给他回一封80词左右的电子邮件。要点包括: 1.由学生会组织。 2.山上美丽的风景让人难以忘怀。 3.感受:这次旅游增进了友谊,提高了关心自然环境的意识。 注意:1.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Tom, How happy I am to receive your letter. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua 【范文】 Dear Tom, How happy I am to receive your letter. Now I will tell you something about the trip organized by our Students’ Union. Some of us preferred to take a bus while others were fond of walking, and finally we were persuaded to cycle. When we got there, we were greatly impressed by its beautiful view. All kinds of butterflies were flying freely in the valley, the entire mountain was covered with beautiful flowers,and the air there was pleasant to breathe;as a result, we couldn’t wait to walk into nature. Though we were tired, it was the trip that improved our friendship and raised our awareness to care about the environment. Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友回信,描述一次由学生会组织的旅游经历,包括过程、风景和感受。 【详解】 词汇积累 组织:organized → arranged / conducted by 喜欢:preferred → favored / were inclined to 说服:persuaded → convinced / encouraged 印象深刻:impressed → amazed / struck by 提高意识:raised our awareness → enhanced our consciousness 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句:The entire mountain was covered with beautiful flowers. The air there was pleasant to breathe. 拓展句:The entire mountain was covered with beautiful flowers, and the air was so fresh that we couldn’t wait to take deep breaths. (运用"so...that..."结构,将景物描写与心理感受自然衔接) 【点睛】 [高分句型1] Some of us preferred to take a bus while others were fond of walking, and finally we were persuaded to cycle. (运用"while"对比结构和"and"连接的并列句,生动展现同学们的不同偏好和最终决定,画面感强) [高分句型2] All kinds of butterflies were flying freely in the valley, the entire mountain was covered with beautiful flowers, and the air there was pleasant to breathe; as a result, we couldn’t wait to walk into nature. (运用分号连接并列句和"as a result"引出结果,多角度描绘自然美景,句式富有层次感) [高分句型3] Though we were tired, it was the trip that improved our friendship and raised our awareness to care about the environment. (运用"Though"引导让步状语从句和"It was...that..."强调句型,突出此次旅行的深远意义,升华主题) 4 / 19 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $ 高频话题16 难忘的事 近五年考情分析 年份 卷区 体裁 话题 命题形式 2025年 全国一卷 建议信 对外交提出的“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项做出选择 提纲类 全国二卷 咨询信 咨询外交介绍加拿大体育运动的文章进展 提纲类 浙江卷1月 发言稿 发表关于在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象的演讲稿 提纲类 北京卷 建议信 给参加联合国倡议征集活动的好友提建议 提纲类 天津卷 推荐信 在论坛交流上围绕“人类文明音像资料收录”提出推荐 提纲类 2024年 新高考I和II卷 告知信 分享在公园上了一堂美术课经历 提纲类 全国甲卷 发言稿 以Development of Transport in China为题的发言稿 图标类 北京卷 建议信 对好友介绍中国的发展成就提出建议 提纲类 天津卷 发言稿 “低碳校园,从我做起”英语主题的演讲稿 提纲类 浙江卷1月 征文投稿 推荐一项适合课间开展的运动 提纲类 上海卷 安慰信 在“排忧解难”专栏回复校友父母不容许自己做饭 提纲类 2023年 新高考全国卷 建议信 提出随机分组存在的问题并给建议 提纲类 全国甲卷 征文投稿 以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿 提纲类 全国乙卷 征文投稿 用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历,及从中获得的体验和感受 提纲类 浙江卷1月 报道 报道“认识我们身边的植物”活动 提纲类 北京卷 建议信 为以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动提供建议 提纲类 天津卷 申请信 申请参加“中国工坊” 活动 提纲类 2022年 新高考全国卷 邀请信 邀请外教做访谈 提纲类 浙江卷 邀请信 校图书馆新开设“小组学习室” 邀请外国留学生一同体验 提纲类 浙江卷 (1月) 回忆经历 回忆中国-爱尔兰文化节 提纲类 全国甲卷 征文投稿 世界海洋日为主题,举办英语征文比赛 提纲类 全国乙卷 征文投稿 英语学习方式图标的调查投稿 提纲类 北京卷 邀请信 邀请好友做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流 提纲类 天津卷 视频文字稿 用英语为社团纳新活动录制一段短视频 提纲类 2021年 新高考全国卷 征文投稿 庆祝英文报创刊十周年投稿 提纲类 浙江卷 宣传稿 宣传学生国画作品展 提纲类 浙江卷 (1月) 发言稿 欢迎新西兰学生访校致辞 提纲类 全国甲卷 咨询信 咨询国外友人对中国传统文化的看法 提纲类 全国乙卷 发言稿 以 Be smart online learners为题的发言稿 提纲类 北京卷 道歉信 你因故不能赴约周末一起外出 提纲类 天津卷 征文投稿 介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方 提纲类 语料表达 1. 通用词汇和句式 通用核心词汇 表达难忘 unforgettable / memorable: 难忘的 impressive: 令人印象深刻的 enduring: 持久的,耐久的 indelible: 无法抹去的 remarkable: 非凡的,显著的 表达经历 experience: 经历 event / incident: 事件 memory: 记忆 adventure: 冒险,奇遇 journey: 旅程 (可用于比喻) 表达感受 moved / touched: 感动的 grateful / thankful: 感激的 delighted / overjoyed / thrilled: 高兴的,兴奋的 proud: 自豪的 inspired: 受鼓舞的 confident: 自信的 表达影响 influence / impact: 影响 shape my character: 塑造我的性格 change my perspective: 改变我的看法 teach me a lesson: 给我上了一课 leave a deep impression on me: 给我留下深刻印象 become a turning point: 成为一个转折点 万能句式 开篇点题,引出经历 句型: Never will I forget the day when... (我永远不会忘记那一天...) 例句: Never will I forget the day when I first stood on the stage and gave a speech. 句型: Among countless memories, one particular experience stands out. (在无数记忆中,一次特别的经历尤为突出。 句型: Looking back on my ... (e.g., high school years), one thing that I will forever cherish is... (回顾我的...,有一件事我将永远珍视...) 描述经历,突出细节 句型: What impressed me most was... (最让我印象深刻的是...) 例句: What impressed me most was their selfless dedication. (范文1 精神) 句型: ... as if it happened yesterday. (……仿佛就发生在昨天。) 句型: The moment ..., I ... (当……的那一刻,我……) 例句: The moment I heard the news, I was so happy and proud of myself. (范文9) 阐述感受与影响 句型: This experience taught me that... (这次经历让我明白了……) 例句: This experience taught me that hard work really pays off. (范文9) 句型: It was ... that ... (正是……才……) 【强调句】 例句: It was your warmth and thoughtfulness that has made my travel such an unforgettable experience! (范文7) 句型: Not only did I ..., but I also ... (我不仅……,还……) 【倒装句】 例句: Not only did I get to know the cultural differences, but I also learned how to co-operate with others. (范文5) 句型: Though we were tired, we were delighted at the sight of ... (尽管我们很累,但看到……我们非常高兴。) 【情感对比】 例句: Though we were tired, we were delighted at the sight of the smiles on their faces. (范文6) 总结升华,展望未来 句型: I will surely bear ... in heart forever. (我定将……永远铭记在心。) 句型: This unforgettable experience will continue to inspire me to ... (这段难忘的经历将继续激励我去……) 句型: The memory of ... will serve as a constant reminder that ... (关于……的记忆将不断提醒我……) 2. 实用范文片段 克服挑战类 (学习/竞赛) · The weeks I spent preparing for the English speech contest were among the most challenging yet rewarding of my life. Countless hours were spent polishing my pronunciation and gestures in front of a mirror. What seemed impossible gradually became manageable. This journey taught me that sweat and perseverance are the true keys to unlocking one's potential. 我为准备英语演讲比赛所花费的数周,是我人生中最具挑战性也最有收获的时光。无数个小时在镜子前打磨我的发音和手势。曾经看似不可能的事,逐渐变得可以掌控。这段经历让我明白,汗水与坚持才是激发个人潜能的真正钥匙。 团队协作类 (活动/项目) · Our group project on environmental protection initially got stuck due to conflicting ideas. However, through open communication, we learned to channel our individual strengths toward a common goal. The moment we presented our work, the shared sense of accomplishment was unforgettable. It was this experience that brought home to me the power of teamwork. · 我们关于环保的小组项目最初因意见冲突卡住了。但通过开放的沟通,我们学会了将个人优势导向一个共同的目标。当我们展示成果的那一刻,那份共同的成就感令人难忘。正是这次经历让我深刻体会到团队合作的力量。 情感触动类 (志愿服务) · Volunteering at the local nursing home shifted my entire perspective on happiness. I spent an afternoon listening to an elderly gentleman's life stories. His wrinkled face lit up with a smile as he spoke, and in that moment, I realized that the greatest gift we can offer is often simply our time and attention. This profoundly moving encounter taught me more about compassion than any textbook could. · 在本地敬老院的志愿服务彻底改变了我对幸福的看法。我用了一个下午聆听一位老爷爷的人生故事。他说话时,布满皱纹的脸上绽放出笑容。在那一刻,我意识到我们能给予的最好的礼物,往往只是我们的时间和关注。这次深刻的动人经历教会我的关于同情心的一切,是任何教科书都无法比拟的。 文化体验类 (旅行/交流) My first solo trip to a historical city was a major step out of my comfort zone. Walking through the complicated ancient streets and interacting with locals, I gained a tangible sense of history and culture that no documentary could provide. This adventure fostered in me a spirit of independence and a curiosity about the world that continues to drive me today. 我的第一次历史名城独自旅行,是迈出舒适圈的一大步。在错综复杂的古老街道中穿行并与当地人交流,我获得了一种纪录片无法提供的、对历史与文化的真切感受。这次冒险培养了我的独立精神与对世界的好奇心,这至今仍推动着我前进。 必背满分范文 1.(2025·安徽马鞍山·月考)假定你是李华,高三的生活即将结束,亲情、友情、师生情弥足珍贵。请你给你的父母、同学或老师写一封信,要点如下: 1. 写信的目的; 2. 你们之间难忘的事情。 注意: 1. 词数80左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 2.(2025·四川·月考)你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Take the stage, play our role 为题写一篇发言稿参赛。内容包括: 1.选择一个近来发生的让人振奋的事件说起,让你联想到祖国发展,青年一代所要肩负的责任和使命。 2.结合自身,如何实践理想报效祖国。 注意: 1.词数 80 左右; 2.题目和首句已为你写好。 Take the stage, play our role China is rising on the world stage notably. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3.(2025·宁夏·月考)假定你是李华,在英语课上,外教Smith要求每位同学写一篇周记,谈一谈自己进入高中这一阶段内的感受。请你根据以下要点,用英语完成你的周记。 1. 新旧学校对比; 2. 给你留下印象最深刻的事。 注意: 1. 词数80左右; 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4.(2025·湖北·阶段考)红星中学为了创建文明校园,促进和谐社会,举办题为 “Conflict Management” 的征文比赛。假定你是李林,请给校报投稿,你的文章需包括: 1)你亲身经历的最严重或令你最难忘的冲突; 2)你对处理冲突的反思或从中学到的经验教训。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5.(2025·江苏苏州·阶段考)假如你是李华,高中生活即将结束,你的英国笔友 Tom 写信给你,想了解你高中时期一次难忘的经历, 请你给他写一封回信,要点如下: 1. 描写一次难忘的经历; 2. 谈谈这次经历对你的影响。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6.(2025·江苏苏州·阶段考)假设你是某一中学的学生李华,你校为丰富学生课余生活,营造英语学习氛围,决定开展一次有关传统节日的英语征文活动。为积极响应学校号召,你准备写一个最让你难忘的节日,内容包括: 1、该节日的简单介绍; 2、你最难忘的场景。 注意: 1、词数:100左右; 2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7.(2025·九省·联考)假定你是李华,假期你去留学生Tom的家乡游玩时受到了他的热情款待。请你给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括: 1. 表示谢意; 2. 回忆难忘的瞬间。 注意:1.写作词数应80左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Dear Tom, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks again and I’m looking forward to seeing you in China soon! Yours, Li Hua 8.(2025·浙江·月考)假设你是李华,你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以“人生中难忘的一次经历”为主题,写一篇短文。内容包括: 1.经历过程;                2.个人感受。 注意: 1.词数80左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 An Unforgettable Experience in My Life ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9.(2025·北京·月考)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友 Jim 给你发邮件和你分享了最令他难忘的一件事,并询问你最难忘的一件事是什么。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括: 1. 你最难忘的一件事;2. 说明难忘的原因。 注意:1. 词数 100 左右;2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数 Dear Jim, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 10.(2025·广西南宁·月考)假如你是李华,你的朋友Tom 来信询问你的一次旅游经历。请你根据下面提示给他回一封80词左右的电子邮件。要点包括: 1.由学生会组织。 2.山上美丽的风景让人难以忘怀。 3.感受:这次旅游增进了友谊,提高了关心自然环境的意识。 注意:1.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Tom, How happy I am to receive your letter. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes. 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