Unit6 Section Ⅶ Writing（课件PPT）-【步步高】2024-2025学年高二英语选择性必修第二册学习笔记（外研版）

该高中英语课件聚焦“生存”主题记叙文写作，涵盖六要素交代、三部分结构（危险地点、经过与摆脱、感受），通过常用表达、分步演练（审题谋篇到组句成篇），构建从词汇、句式到篇章的学习支架，帮助学生掌握写作逻辑。 其亮点在于融合语言能力（提供开头结尾表达、句式升级练习）、思维品质（分步演练中审题分析与句式创造）、学习能力（步骤化写作策略指导），以火灾逃生为例，通过任务型教学落实写作方法。学生能提升叙事表达与逻辑组织能力，教师可借助系统流程高效开展写作教学。

Section Ⅶ Writing Survival Unit6 本单元的写作项目是写一个有关生存的故事。该类作文以叙述事件为主，写作时要注意把记叙文的六要素：时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、经过和结果交代清楚。文章的末尾可以发表自己的感想。 写作指导 1.开头 It has been the worst...in the past decade/ten years. 这是过去十年来最糟糕的一次……。 The disasters have killed...and destroyed...，causing... 灾难已经夺去了……摧毁……，造成了…… It is reported that the heavy rainfall caused rivers to break their banks，washing away bridges. 据报道，暴雨导致河流决堤，冲毁桥梁。 常用表达 2.主体 The rescue work is going on/is still under way. 救援工作正/仍在进行中。 In the meantime，people nationwide are taking an active part in...for disaster areas. 与此同时，全国人民正在积极为灾区……。 It was estimated that the economic losses were more than... 据估计，经济损失超过……。 3.结尾 Earth is our only home planet. 地球是我们唯一的家园。 It is urgent for us to...，and do our best to protect it and make it a lovely place suitable to live in. 我们迫切需要……，并尽最大努力保护它，使它成为一个宜居之地。 Only with joint efforts，will we... 只有共同努力，我们才会…… 分步演练 假定你是李华，前几天你市的一座山上发生了一次严重的火灾，请你用英语向你的朋友描述这次突发灾难的经历。 第一步　审题谋篇 审题 写作要求是写一篇记叙文，向朋友介绍火灾逃生的经历。写作时应注意下面几点： 1.确定体裁：记叙文——描述这次突发灾难的经历； 2.主体人称：第三人称为主，第一人称为辅； 3.主体时态：文章应以一般过去时为主。 谋篇 第一段：交代火灾的地点； 第二段：主要叙述火灾的发生、经过及结果； 第三段：发表感想、愿望等。 ____________ ______ _____________ ____________ _________ ______________________ _______ ________ 第二步　遣词造句 核心词汇(含本单元词汇) 1.一次严重的火灾 2.恶劣的；极端的 3.受伤 4.与……斗争 5.应对 6.成为废墟 7.救援 8.破坏 a terrible fire fierce be/get injured fight against cope with be in ruins/fall into ruins rescue destroy 连词成句(含本单元句型) 1.我很遗憾地告诉你，昨天我们市的一座山上发生了一场可怕的火灾。 I’m so sorry to tell you that in a mountain in our city yesterday. 2.火势非常大。 The fire . 3.大火持续了5个小时。 The big fire . a terrible fire broke out was very fierce lasted five hours 4.一半的森林被大火烧毁了。 Half of the forest . 5.更糟糕的是，两个人受了重伤。 What’s worse，two persons . 6.直到消防员妥当地来处理，火势才得到控制。 The fire wasn’t controlled until ___________________________________ . 7.毫无疑问，我们每个人都应该为保护家园发挥自己的作用。(doubt) each of us should play our own part in protecting our home. was destroyed by the fire were badly injured the firefighters came to cope with it properly There is no doubt that 第三步　句式升级 1.将句2和句3用so...that...结构连成一句。 The fire was it lasted five hours. 2.用not only...but also...把句4和句5连成一句。 was half of the forest destroyed by the fire， two persons were badly injured. 3.将句6升级为not...until置于句首引起的倒装句。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ so fierce that Not only but (also) Not until the firefighters came to cope with it properly was the fire controlled. 第四步　组句成篇 用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80个词左右的英语短文。 参考范文 I’m so sorry to tell you that a terrible fire broke out in a mountain in our city yesterday. The fire was so fierce that it lasted five hours.The electricity was cut off.To our sorrow，not only was half of the forest destroyed by the fire，but (also) two persons were badly injured.Not until the firefighters came to cope with it properly was the fire controlled. The accident warns us that preventative measures must be taken to stop such things happening again.There is no doubt that each of us should play our own part in protecting our home. 本课结束 $