考前押题10 写作满分必背范文（期中专项训练）七年级英语上学期新教材沪教版五四学制

考前押题10 写作满分必背范文 （Units1-3，期中专项训练） 基础入门训练5篇 1 进阶拓展训练5篇 8 能力综合实践3篇 15 基础入门训练5篇 1．(24-25七上·上海浦东新区·期中)Write a passage of at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境，写一篇不少于60词的短文， 标点符号不计入词数。) 假设你有一个兼职 (part-time job) 机会，可以选择做理发师 (hairdresser)，裁缝 (tailor)，厨师等传统职业，也可以选择做摄影师 (photographer)，艺术家，演员等艺术类职业，还可以选择做软件工程师 (software engineer)，人工智能工程师 (AI engineer)，环境科学家 (environmental scientist) 等现代新兴职业。你会选择做什么? The following questions are for your reference: 1. Which part-time job would you like to do? 2. Why do you want to try this job? 3. What do you need to do at this job? 注意： 文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息， 否则不予评分。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．(24-25七上·上海建平实验中学·期中)Write at least 60 words according to the given information.（根据以下材料，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。） 生活中，每个人都会遇到烦恼，但只要我们积极面对，都能迎刃而解，我们也能获得成长。请分享一个你类似的经历，以The lesson I’ve learnt为题，写一篇文章。 1. What happened and how did you feel? 2. How did you deal with it and then how did you feel? 3. What have you learnt from it? The lesson I’ve learnt _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．(24-25七上·上海闵行区·期中)Write a passage of at least 60 words based on the situation below. 生活中，每个人都会遇到各种各样的挑战和问题，只要我们积极面对，一切问题都能解决，我们也能从中得到成长。请以“My problem (我的问题)”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。 (注意：文中不得出现人名、班级等个人信息，否则不予评分) Suggested questions: 1. What problem did you have？ 2. When did it happen? 3. What did you do to solve the problem? 4. How did you feel? My problem __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．(24-25七上·上海徐汇区位育中学·期中)Write an article of at least 60 words to describe your past experience of trying a new thing. (请写一篇60字的文章来描述你过去的一段尝试一样新事物的经历) Suggested questions: What did you try? How did you make it? What did you learn from it? _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．(24-25七上·上海实验学校西校·期中)Write at least 60 words on the topic “A model student around me” (以“我身边一位模范生”为题，写一篇不少于60个单词的短文，要求内容适切，意思连贯，标点符号不占格。) (注意：作文中不得出现考生的中文姓名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) Suggested questions:(以下内容仅供参考) Who is a model student around you? Why is he/she a model student? (Give at least two reasons) What can you learn from him/her? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 进阶拓展训练5篇 6．(24-25七上·上海普陀区·期中)生活中，每个人都会遇到一些令人不开心或烦恼的事，但只要我们积极面对，一切问题都能解决，我们也能从中得到成长。请以An unforgettable experience为题，分享一个令你难忘的经历，说说发生了什么事，在事情发生的过程中你的感受是什么，你从这段经历中学到了什么。 要求： （注意：短文中不得出现个人任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。） An unforgettable experience _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．(24-25七上·上海新中初级中学·期中)Write at least 50 words according to the given situation（根据以下情境写一篇不少于50个词的短文，标点符号不占格）。 你所在班级近期拟召开一次职业规划的主题班会，请大家畅谈自己的职业理想和为之奋斗的打算。请你准备一份发言稿。 须包含以下内容： （1）你的梦想职业，并说出你喜欢该职业的理由。 （2）你觉得从事该职业时可能会碰到怎样的困难，该如何从现在开始做好准备？ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．(24-25七上·上海青浦区·期中)Write at least 60 words on the topic “________ makes me more confident”. Think about what activity or experience makes you more confident. Complete the title and give at least one examples to support your idea. 请以“________使我更加自信”为题，写一篇不少于60个单词的短文，说说什么活动或者经历让你更加自信？补全题目并至少用1个例子来支撑你的观点。 注意： ●文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分； ●照抄试卷中内容不得分。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．(24-25七上·上海西延安中学·期中)Write at least 60 words according to the given topic “A wonderful job in my eyes”. (以“我眼中的一份了不起的职业”为题写话，词数不少于60个，标点符号不占格。) Using the following points as a guide. (短文须包含下列要点） ● What is a wonderful job in your eyes? ● What do people do in this job? ● Why is it a wonderful job? _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．(24-25七上·上海奉贤区·期中)Write at least 60 words on the topic “ _________(sth./doing sth.) makes me a better person” (以“_____成就更好的自己”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 在成长的道路上，常常会有一些事情(竞赛、读书、交友、失败、争吵等等)，使我们一步步成就更好的自己。请描述一个具体的例子和你的成长。请补全标题。 (注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。) Guiding questions: 1. What makes you a better person? 2. What happened? 3. How did you feel? 4. What do you learn from it? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 能力综合实践3篇 11．(24-25七上·上海黄浦区·期中)从上文花木兰的故事中，我们学到了她许多美好的品质。在成长的道路上，每个人都会遇到一些困难，这些困难可能是自身的不足或缺陷，也可能是一些挑战性任务。面对这些困难，我们要积极思考，寻找解决问题的方法，用智慧和勇气去克服每一个难关。这样，我们不仅能够成长和进步，还能在人生的道路上，像花木兰一样，成为真正的英雄。请以“How I become better at being better (我如何成为更好的自己)”为题，分享你的经历和感受。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．(24-25七上·上海第一中学·期中)请以“我的决定”为题，写一篇不少于50词的短文。 在学习生活遇到困难时，我们会做出许多决定，有时你会庆幸自己直面困难，成就了更强大的自己。有时也会为错误的决定而懊恼后悔，这些决定都会让我们有所感悟，请结合你的经历并谈谈你的感受。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．(24-25七上·上海浦东新区建平南汇实验教育集团（五四制）·期中)Write a passage of at least 50 words on the topic “A wonderful job in your eyes”. 请以 “我眼中的好职业”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文。 注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、班级及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 注意涵盖以下信息： 1. What is the wonderful job in your eyes? 2. What do people do in the job? 3. What wonderful skills do they have? 4. How important is the job? _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 考前押题10 写作满分必背范文 （Units1-3，期中专项训练） 基础入门训练5篇 1 进阶拓展训练5篇 8 能力综合实践3篇 15 基础入门训练5篇 1．(24-25七上·上海浦东新区·期中)Write a passage of at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境，写一篇不少于60词的短文， 标点符号不计入词数。) 假设你有一个兼职 (part-time job) 机会，可以选择做理发师 (hairdresser)，裁缝 (tailor)，厨师等传统职业，也可以选择做摄影师 (photographer)，艺术家，演员等艺术类职业，还可以选择做软件工程师 (software engineer)，人工智能工程师 (AI engineer)，环境科学家 (environmental scientist) 等现代新兴职业。你会选择做什么? The following questions are for your reference: 1. Which part-time job would you like to do? 2. Why do you want to try this job? 3. What do you need to do at this job? 注意： 文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息， 否则不予评分。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： I would like to have a part-time job as a photographer. I want to try this job because I enjoy taking pictures and capturing beautiful moments. It makes me feel happy and fulfilled. As a photographer, I need to learn how to use different cameras and lenses, understand lighting, and edit photos to make them look their best. I hope to improve my skills and maybe even one day have my own photo exhibition. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，旨在表达个人对于兼职职业选择的想法； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”，因为描述的是个人的选择和想法，这些想法和选择是现在的、当前的； ③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括想要做的兼职工作、选择该工作的原因以及在该工作中需要做的事情。考生应围绕这三个方面进行阐述，并确保内容完整、条理清晰。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。可以通过简单提及有多种兼职机会供选择，然后直接点明自己会选择哪种兼职工作来引出下文； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。明确指出想要做的兼职工作；阐述选择该工作的原因；描述在该工作中需要做的事情； 第三步，书写结语。表达对未来兼职工作的期待和热情。 [亮点词汇] ①part-time job兼职工作 ②capture捕捉 ③make sb feel happy and fulfilled使某人感到快乐和满足 ④have one’s own拥有某人自己的 [高分句型] ①I would like to have a part-time job as a photographer, which allows me to pursue my passion for photography.（which引导的非限制性定语从句） ②I hope to improve my skills and eventually achieve the goal of having my own photo exhibition one day.（动词不定式作宾语，同时使用了“eventually”来强调未来的期望） 2．(24-25七上·上海建平实验中学·期中)Write at least 60 words according to the given information.（根据以下材料，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。） 生活中，每个人都会遇到烦恼，但只要我们积极面对，都能迎刃而解，我们也能获得成长。请分享一个你类似的经历，以The lesson I’ve learnt为题，写一篇文章。 1. What happened and how did you feel? 2. How did you deal with it and then how did you feel? 3. What have you learnt from it? The lesson I’ve learnt _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The lesson I’ve learnt The lesson I’ve learnt is about overcoming my fear of public speaking. Once, I had to present a project in front of my class, and I was extremely nervous. My hands were shaking, and I felt anxious. To deal with it, I practiced repeatedly and sought advice from my teacher. He told me to take a deep breath at the start of the presentation and then concentrated on the speech. After the presentation, I felt relieved and proud. I learned that preparation and seeking help can conquer fear and build confidence. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己曾经遇到困难的经历，可适当发挥，注意语义连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍当时发生的情景； 第二步，具体介绍困难发生时的解决方法和感受； 第三步，表达自己从中学到了什么。 [亮点词汇] ①deal with处理，解决 ②take a deep breath深呼吸 ③concentrate on集中注意力于 [高分句型] ①I learned that preparation and seeking help can conquer fear and build confidence. (that引导的宾语从句) 3．(24-25七上·上海闵行区·期中)Write a passage of at least 60 words based on the situation below. 生活中，每个人都会遇到各种各样的挑战和问题，只要我们积极面对，一切问题都能解决，我们也能从中得到成长。请以“My problem (我的问题)”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。 (注意：文中不得出现人名、班级等个人信息，否则不予评分) Suggested questions: 1. What problem did you have？ 2. When did it happen? 3. What did you do to solve the problem? 4. How did you feel? My problem __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My problem Once I had a problem with my math homework. It happened last week when I was trying to solve a difficult problem. I felt confused and didn’t know what to do. To solve the problem, I decided to ask my mom for help. She explained the steps to me patiently. I listened carefully and tried to understand. After that, I practiced similar problems on my own. I felt happy and relieved when I finally solved it. It made me realize that if I face problems positively, I can overcome them and learn from them. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，描述个人经历； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”，因为讲述的是过去发生的事情； ③提示：写作要点已给出，包括遇到的问题、发生的时间、解决问题的方法以及解决后的感受，考生应注意不要遗漏这些要点，并适当添加细节来丰富文章内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引入话题。指出自己遇到的问题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。按照以下四个方面详细描述：What problem did you have?（遇到的问题是什么）；When did it happen?（问题发生的时间）；What did you do to solve the problem?（如何解决问题的）；How did you feel?（你的感受）； 第三步，书写感受。描述在解决问题后的心情和收获。 [亮点词汇] ①have a problem with在……方面有问题 ②try to do sth. 尝试做某事 ③explain sth. to sb. 向某人解释某事 ④overcome them 克服困难 [高分句型] ①It happened last week when I was trying to solve a difficult problem.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②I felt happy and relieved when I finally solved it.（when引导的时间状语从句） ③It made me realize that if I face problems positively, I can overcome them and learn from them.（that引导的宾语从句，其中包含if引导的条件状语从句） 4．(24-25七上·上海徐汇区位育中学·期中)Write an article of at least 60 words to describe your past experience of trying a new thing. (请写一篇60字的文章来描述你过去的一段尝试一样新事物的经历) Suggested questions: What did you try? How did you make it? What did you learn from it? _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文     Last month, I tried cooking a new recipe for homemade pizza. First, I gathered all the necessary ingredients, including dough, cheese, tomato sauce, and various toppings. I followed an online tutorial closely, ensuring that each step was executed properly. Although I made a few mistakes, the pizza turned out delicious. From this experience, I learned the importance of patience and carefully following instructions when trying something new. It was a rewarding and enjoyable process. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，整体说明尝试了什么新事物——做披萨，确定了短文的中心； 第二步，具体阐述做披萨的步骤。 第三步，最后表达从中学到了什么——新事物可以是有趣和值得的，体现了尝试新事物带来的收获。 [亮点词汇] ①turn out结果发现 ②made a few mistakes犯了几个错误 ③including包括 [高分句型] ①First, I gathered all the necessary ingredients, including dough, cheese, tomato sauce, and various toppings. (including用法） ②Although I made a few mistakes, the pizza turned out delicious. (状语从句） 5．(24-25七上·上海实验学校西校·期中)Write at least 60 words on the topic “A model student around me” (以“我身边一位模范生”为题，写一篇不少于60个单词的短文，要求内容适切，意思连贯，标点符号不占格。) (注意：作文中不得出现考生的中文姓名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) Suggested questions:(以下内容仅供参考) Who is a model student around you? Why is he/she a model student? (Give at least two reasons) What can you learn from him/her? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A model student around me In my view, everyone in my class is very good, but Mary is the model student. She works very hard and always gets high marks. Although she is busy with her studies, she often gives classmates a hand when they meet difficulties. How friendly she is! From her, I know that being hard-working is really important to us. What’s more, I should also be friendly to the people around me. In brief, being a friendly and hard-working student is not easy, but I will make every effort to study hard and try to be a model student like her. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据写作要点介绍身边的模范生，要求内容适切，意思连贯，表述完整。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍身边的模范生是谁； 第二步，说明他/她是模范生的原因； 第三步，表达自己从他/她身上学到了什么。 [亮点词汇] ①be friendly to sb对某人友好 ②be busy with忙于…… ③make every effort to do尽一切努力做 [高分句型] ①Although she is busy with her studies, she often gives classmates a hand when they meet difficulties.（although引导让步状语从句，when引导时间状语从句） ②How friendly she is!（how引导感叹句） ③From her, I know that being hard-working is really important to us.（that引导宾语从句） 进阶拓展训练5篇 6．(24-25七上·上海普陀区·期中)生活中，每个人都会遇到一些令人不开心或烦恼的事，但只要我们积极面对，一切问题都能解决，我们也能从中得到成长。请以An unforgettable experience为题，分享一个令你难忘的经历，说说发生了什么事，在事情发生的过程中你的感受是什么，你从这段经历中学到了什么。 要求： （注意：短文中不得出现个人任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。） An unforgettable experience _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 An unforgettable experience I once had an unforgettable experience that taught me a valuable lesson. It happened during a group project at school. Our team faced many challenges, and I felt down and nervous. However, I decided to stay positive and work hard with my teammates. We communicated effectively and supported each other. Finally, we completed the project successfully. This experience taught me the importance of teamwork. I learned that facing difficulties with a positive attitude can lead to personal growth and success. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我有个难忘的经历”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“经历、感受、领悟”几个方面重点介绍； 第三步，书写结语。总结从中学到的经验和教训。 [亮点词汇] ①communicate effectively 有效沟通 ②personal growth 个人成长 [高分句型] I learned that facing difficulties with a positive attitude can lead to personal growth and success.（动名词作主语） 7．(24-25七上·上海新中初级中学·期中)Write at least 50 words according to the given situation（根据以下情境写一篇不少于50个词的短文，标点符号不占格）。 你所在班级近期拟召开一次职业规划的主题班会，请大家畅谈自己的职业理想和为之奋斗的打算。请你准备一份发言稿。 须包含以下内容： （1）你的梦想职业，并说出你喜欢该职业的理由。 （2）你觉得从事该职业时可能会碰到怎样的困难，该如何从现在开始做好准备？ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. I’m very happy to share my career planning with you. First, let me tell you about myself. I’m an outgoing and creative person, I love drawing and solving puzzles. My friends say I’m a good team player, too! Thinking about my future, I dream of becoming a designer. I believe my art skills and love for problem-solving will make me excellent in these fields. I want to design beautiful and useful houses that bring joy to people’s lives. To achieve my dream, I plan to focus on art and math in school. I’ll also join art clubs to improve my skills. Learning and practicing will help me grow into a successful designer! I hope I can get your support on my journey! Let’s do it together. Thank you. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇发言稿； ②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般将来时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的职业规划，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题，从性格、爱好和特长中至少两个方面介绍你自己； 第二步，介绍你的职业理想； 第三步，介绍为了你的职业理想，接下来打算怎么做。 [亮点词汇] ①dream of梦想 ②focus on集中注意力 [高分句型] ①Thinking about my future, I dream of becoming a designer.（现在分词作状语） ②I want to design beautiful and useful houses that bring joy to people’s lives.（that引导的定语从句） ③To achieve my dream, I plan to focus on art and math in school.（动词不定式作目的状语） 8．(24-25七上·上海青浦区·期中)Write at least 60 words on the topic “________ makes me more confident”. Think about what activity or experience makes you more confident. Complete the title and give at least one examples to support your idea. 请以“________使我更加自信”为题，写一篇不少于60个单词的短文，说说什么活动或者经历让你更加自信？补全题目并至少用1个例子来支撑你的观点。 注意： ●文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分； ●照抄试卷中内容不得分。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文： Public Speaking Makes Me More Confident   Public speaking makes me more confident. I used to be very shy and afraid of speaking in front of others. However, I decided to join the debate club at school. At first, I was nervous and stumbled over my words. But with practice and encouragement from my teammates, I improved. I learned how to organize my thoughts and present them clearly. Winning my first debate was a turning point. It showed me that I could overcome my fears and succeed. Now, I feel more confident not only in public speaking but also in other areas of my life. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应结合自身经历，说明某活动或经历如何增强自信。 [写作步骤] 第一步，补全题目，点明主题； 第二步，介绍具体的活动或经历，并说明其如何增强自信； 第三步，总结提升自信的影响。 [亮点词汇] ①public speaking演讲 ②overcome克服 [高分句型] ①I used to be very shy and afraid of speaking in front of others. (used to结构) ②Winning my first debate was a turning point. (动名词作主语) 9．(24-25七上·上海西延安中学·期中)Write at least 60 words according to the given topic “A wonderful job in my eyes”. (以“我眼中的一份了不起的职业”为题写话，词数不少于60个，标点符号不占格。) Using the following points as a guide. (短文须包含下列要点） ● What is a wonderful job in your eyes? ● What do people do in this job? ● Why is it a wonderful job? _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文     A wonderful job in my eyes is being a doctor. Doctors are responsible for diagnosing illnesses, prescribing treatments, and caring for patients. They work tirelessly to save lives and improve people’s health. This job is wonderful because it requires a high level of skill and dedication, and it has a profound impact on individuals and communities. Doctors bring hope and healing, making a significant difference in the world. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是材料作文； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写作意图。借用“在我眼里，一份很棒的工作就是当一名医生。”来引出重点介绍的内容。 第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——眼里完美的工作、工作职责以及工作神圣的原因等均要一一阐述。 第三步：书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①be responsible for对……负责 ②care for照顾 ③save lives挽救生命 [高分句型] ①They work tirelessly to save lives and improve people’s health. (动词不定式表目的） ②This job is wonderful because it requires a high level of skill and dedication, and it has a profound impact on individuals and communities. (Because引导的原因状语从句) 10．(24-25七上·上海奉贤区·期中)Write at least 60 words on the topic “ _________(sth./doing sth.) makes me a better person” (以“_____成就更好的自己”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 在成长的道路上，常常会有一些事情(竞赛、读书、交友、失败、争吵等等)，使我们一步步成就更好的自己。请描述一个具体的例子和你的成长。请补全标题。 (注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。) Guiding questions: 1. What makes you a better person? 2. What happened? 3. How did you feel? 4. What do you learn from it? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Friendship makes me a better person Last year, I made a new friend at school. His name is not important, but his kindness is. We were both new in class, so we became friends quickly. One day, I forgot my lunch at home, and he shared his with me. I felt very thankful and happy. That day, I learned about sharing and caring from my friend. Now, I try to be like him and help others when they need it. Friendship has taught me about being generous and thoughtful, making me a better person inside. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，描述什么使你成为更好的人； 第二步，描述自己的感受； 第三步，描述学到了什么。 [亮点词汇] ①share sth. with sb.和某人分享某物 ②try to do sth.努力做某事 [高分句型] Friendship has taught me about being generous and thoughtful, making me a better person inside.(现在分词作伴随状语) 能力综合实践3篇 11．(24-25七上·上海黄浦区·期中)从上文花木兰的故事中，我们学到了她许多美好的品质。在成长的道路上，每个人都会遇到一些困难，这些困难可能是自身的不足或缺陷，也可能是一些挑战性任务。面对这些困难，我们要积极思考，寻找解决问题的方法，用智慧和勇气去克服每一个难关。这样，我们不仅能够成长和进步，还能在人生的道路上，像花木兰一样，成为真正的英雄。请以“How I become better at being better (我如何成为更好的自己)”为题，分享你的经历和感受。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How I become better at being better Everyone will meet difficulties in their lives. So do I. The biggest problem in my life is that I am very shy. My spoken English used to be very poor. I dared not answer questions in class because I was so shy. One day, Miss Li encouraged me to speak more. Her friendly smile melted my heart. Then, I began to communicate more with my classmates in English, joined the English corner after class, and talked with foreign friends in my neighborhood to practice even more. And my spoken English improved a lot. From then on, I believed that when we face trouble, like Mulan, we should be brave. This way, we can solve problems and get better. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：写作要点提示已给出，考试应注意要求中的内容，充实细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引入话题，介绍自己遇到的困难； 第二步，具体阐述自己曾经的困境，如何面对、解决和进步的； 第三步，表达自己对于成长经历的感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①used to过去常常，曾经 ②encourage鼓励 ③melt融化 ④communicate交流 ⑤improve提高 [高分句型] ① I dared not answer questions in class because I was so shy. (原因状语从句) ② From then on, I believed that when we face trouble, like Mulan, we should be brave. (宾语从句，时间状语从句) 12．(24-25七上·上海第一中学·期中)请以“我的决定”为题，写一篇不少于50词的短文。 在学习生活遇到困难时，我们会做出许多决定，有时你会庆幸自己直面困难，成就了更强大的自己。有时也会为错误的决定而懊恼后悔，这些决定都会让我们有所感悟，请结合你的经历并谈谈你的感受。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 A decision I made Our lives are the sum of all our decision. The decisions we make today may play an important role in our future. When I was thirteen, my mother wanted me to be a girl who was good at school work. However, I was keen on playing the drum a lot and didn’t like study at all. As a result, we quarreled with each other a lot. As time passed by, I gradually found that one should be knowledgeable, no matter what he would be in the future. I decided to work hard and regarded playing the drum as my hobby. I think the decision I’ve made must be a wise one. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括自己如何克服困难及从中的感悟等。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总体指出做出的决定对未来有影响； 第二步，具体介绍自己的亲身经历； 第三步，总结收获和感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①play an important role in对……起重要作用 ②quarreled with与……争吵 ③gradually逐渐 [高分句型] ①When I was thirteen, my mother wanted me to be a girl who was good at school work.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②I think the decision I’ve made must be a wise one.（宾语从句和定语从句） 13．(24-25七上·上海浦东新区建平南汇实验教育集团（五四制）·期中)Write a passage of at least 50 words on the topic “A wonderful job in your eyes”. 请以 “我眼中的好职业”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文。 注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、班级及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 注意涵盖以下信息： 1. What is the wonderful job in your eyes? 2. What do people do in the job? 3. What wonderful skills do they have? 4. How important is the job? _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： A wonderful job in your eyes A wonderful job in my eyes is being a doctor. Doctors diagnose and treat patients, helping them recover from illnesses. They possess wonderful skills such as medical knowledge, precision, and empathy. This job is crucial because it saves lives and improves the quality of life for many people. Doctors work tirelessly to ensure the health and well-being of their patients, making it a truly noble profession. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍你眼中的好职业是医生； 第二步，具体阐述医生的工作内容和技能； 第三步，说明医生职业的重要性。 [亮点词汇] ①diagnose and treat诊断和治疗 ②medical knowledge医学知识 ③quality of life生活质量 [高分句型] Doctors work tirelessly to ensure the health and well-being of their patients, making it a truly noble profession.(现在分词作状语) / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $