内容正文:
Unit 2 School life单元主题写作
一、话题分析
本单元的话题是“学校生活”。此类话题常见的写作角度涉及:①校园设施与环境;②介绍学习与活动;③写改善学校生活的建议信。写这类文章时常用一般现在时,以描述及表达观点为主。
二、好句积累
1)开头句
1. I am writing (this letter) to make suggestions on how to improve/make...
2)中间句
2. First, I’d suggest that our school offer students more chances to practice hands-on abilities.
3. First, I would like to suggest that our school should provide more..., so we can take part in...
4. Second, I think we should have more... because it is a great way for us to ...
5. What’s more, we can set up/hold/organize more activities to help students develop their talents and express themselves creatively.
6. Moreover, we need more computers in the library so that it is easier for us to search online.
7. Moreover, it would be a good idea to star t a school club for students who love science, such as...
3)结尾句
8. I hope you will find my suggestions helpful and consider making changes to school activities.
9. I hope you will find my suggestions useful and improve the school in some of these ways.
4)名言警句
1. School is a foretaste of life. 学校是人生的预演。
2. Teachers are the engineers of the human soul. 教师是人类灵魂的工程师。
3. School is a place where you learn not only about subjects but also about yourself and the world around you. 学校是一个你不仅可以学习学科知识,还能了解自己和周围世界的地方。
5)高频短语
1.get closer to nature 亲近大自然
2、work well in a team 善于团队合作/3.open one’s eyes 使某人长见识
4.what’s more 而且,另外
三、写作任务
假定你是李华,你校校报正在征集关于如何让校园生活更有趣的稿件。请根据下面表格的内容提示,写一封建议信给班主任张老师投稿。
如何让校园生活更有趣
户外活动
徒步、露营等;好处:亲近自然、增强体质、培养团队协作
兴趣俱乐部
摄影、书法等俱乐部;好处:兴趣相投者交流互学
文化交流活动
邀请外校或外国学生;好处:拓宽文化视野
要求: 1. 词数不少于90;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【写作大纲】
1)引出话题——表明写信意图
2)具体描述——礼貌提出自己的建议,并说明原因
3)总结概括——做总结,表达希望
Dear Mr Zhang,
I’m writing this letter to give some suggestions on how to make our school life more interesting.
First, I’d suggest our school organize more outdoor activities, like hiking and camping.These activities can help us get closer to nature.Also, they can make us stronger and teach us how to work well in a team. Second, I think it’s a good idea to start more interest clubs. For example, we could have a photo-taking club or a handwriting club. Students who like the same things can join these clubs. They can share what they know and learn from one another.
What’s more, we should hold cultural exchange activities regularly. We can invite students from other schools or even from other countries. This can help us learn about different cultures and open our eyes.
I hope you’ll find my suggestions useful and make our school life more colorful.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
四、写作实践
假如你是Alice,你校正在开展一项关于改善学校生活的征文活动,邀请你校学生投稿。请你就如何改善学校的环境,给负责此次活动的王老师写一封9 0 词左右的建议信,表达自己的想法。
要点:1. 多种花草树木,使校园更美;
2. 增加垃圾箱,鼓励学生保持清洁;
3. 组织一月一次的清洁日,大家一起打扫学校。
Dear Mr Wang,
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Yours sincerely,
Alice
参考范文
I am writing to make suggestions on how to improve our school environment.
First, I would like to suggest that our school should plant more trees and flowers around the campus. This will make our school more beautiful and help us relax during breaks. Second, I think we should add more rubbish bins in the hallways and playground. This will encourage students to keep the school clean. Moreover, it would be helpful to organize a monthly clean-up day where everyone can work together to tidy up the school.
I hope you will find my suggestions useful and consider carrying out some of these ideas.
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