专题07 书面表达（期中真题分类汇编，天津专用）九年级英语上学期

专题 书面表达 材料作文 Passage 1 （23-24九年级上·天津宁河·期中）根据下面的提示，以“Yuan Longping”为题目写一篇短文。 提示如下： Fact box: Yuan Longping Now Is helping many countries of the world grow more rice than before 2004 Won World Food Prize 1980s Travelled around the world and gave advice about growing rice 1974 Developed a new kind of rice 1964 Made a special study of rice 1950-1953 Studied in Southwest Agricultural College 1930 Was born in Beijing （1）词数：80-100； （2）开头已给出，不计入总词数； （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Yuan Longing Yuan Longping was born in Beijing in 1930. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 （23-24九年级上·天津河东·期中）假如你是学校校报英语专栏的小记者，请根据以下要点写一篇短文，描述你校学生李华的一次难忘经历。 1. 李华在暑假期间去甘肃参加了文化交流活动，并向当地学生讲述了天津的历史和自然奇观。 2. 他分享了自己独自在家的经历，照顾好自己，做简单的饭菜，有麻烦时给家长发短信。 3. 他与很多学生成为朋友并保持联系。 4. 你认为…… 参考词汇：文化交流活动 cultural exchange activities；名胜古迹 places of interest 要求： 1. 词数：80~100个。 2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 3. 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Li Hua, a student of our school, went to Gansu to...__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 3 （22-23九年级上·天津滨海新·期中）在抗击新型冠状病毒肺炎的这场战役中，我国出现了很多英雄。请以“我敬仰的英雄钟南山”为题写一篇文章。内容如下： (1) 我的英雄是钟南山，他是一名84岁的医生； (2) 喜欢做各种运动，例如跑步、游泳，认为做运动可以保持健康； (3) 他是中国最伟大的医生之一； (4) 勇敢对抗疾病，尽全力救治病人，从不放弃； (5) 在我看来…… 要求： (1) 80 词以上，可以适当增加细节，使文章流畅。 (2) 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My hero Zhong Nanshan There are many civil heroes working hard to fight against COVID-19. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 1电子邮件 （24-25九年级上·天津和平·期中）节日对大多数人来说意味着团聚与欢乐。然而却有这样一群人——他们在假日不能休息，默默坚守在自己的岗位上。他们为了大多数人的平安幸福而无私奉献，值得我们尊敬与学习。请根据以下提示，介绍一位我们身边的榜样。 (1)张健职业：警察；年龄：50；爱好：读书； (2)对于张健，节日(festivals)意味着更多工作； (3)节日意味着挑战，因为有更多的人需要帮助； (4)他很少有时间和家人在一起，但是他从不后悔成为一名警察； (5)有一次，他不得不连续工作20个小时，没有休息； (6)我认为…… 参考词汇：challenge 挑战 写作要求： (1)不得使用真实姓名和学校名。 (2)包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 (3)字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清楚。 (4)词数80词左右。(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Zhang Jian is a policeman. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 （24-25九年级上·天津·期中）假设你是李华，你的笔友Tony转入另一个城市的一所初中。他在与新同学相处的过程中遇到困难，请你给他写一封邮件，根据以下提示，给他提出建议。 （1）主动问候同学，课间和同学交谈； （2）课上参与小组讨论，表达自己的想法； （3）关心他人，帮助有困难的同学； （4）参加班级活动和学校社团； （5）保持冷静，有问题及时沟通； （6）你希望…… 参考词汇：小组讨论group work    表达express 要求：（1）词数：80～100个。 （2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear Tony, I have learned about your problems. I think _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Li Hua 书信 Passage 1 （24-25九年级上·天津红桥·期中）假如你即将在学校英语兴趣小组的活动中发言，题目是“我心目中的英雄”。请根据以下要点提示，介绍你心目中的英雄——“时代楷模”，“七一勋章”获得者张桂梅。 (1)张桂梅1957年出生于黑龙江省。 (2)17岁时和姐姐搬到云南，26岁时成为一名教师。 (3)1996年在丈夫去世后，她来到华坪县教书，发现很多女孩辍学在家。 (4)2008年筹建了华坪女子高级中学，现已帮助约2,000名山区女孩考上大学。 (5)你认为…… 要求： (1)词数：80~100。 (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 参考词汇：县 county    辍学 drop out of school    山区 mountain areas       华坪女子高级中学 Huaping Girls’ High School My hero It’s my honor to speak here. Today I’m going to talk about my hero—Zhang Guimel. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for listening! Passage 2 （23-24九年级上·天津南开·期中）假设你是李平，要在本周班会课上发言，主题为“独自在家注意事项”。根据下面表格的内容，用英语写一篇发言稿。 安全 在家和外出要锁好房门用火和用电时注意安全 饮食 学习做简单的饭菜 多喝水，吃新鲜的蔬菜水果 时间管理 按时起床，上学不迟到放学回家后先完成作业 其他 ……(补充一点) 参考词汇：electricity 电 要求： (1) 词数：80—100个。 (2) 短文的开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear classmates, When we are home alone, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 3 （23-24九年级上·天津西青·期中）前段时间同学们观看了“天宫课堂”之后，纷纷表示要向三位宇航员学习，成为一名有理想，有抱负的青少年。请你根据以下内容提示，以“How to be a better teenager?”为题，在下周的主题班会上发言。 内容提示： (1)努力学习，积极锻炼，养成健康的生活习惯； (2)尊敬长辈，乐于助人； (3)学会做家务； (4)热爱中国文化，培养各种兴趣爱好； (5)感想…… 要求： (1)词数：80～100个。 (2)短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 参考词汇：积极锻炼actively exercise 尊敬respect 乐于做be willing to 文化culture How to be a better teenager? Hello, everyone! Today I’d like to share my ideas about how to be a better teenager. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you! 通知 Passage 1 （23-24九年级上·天津滨海新·期中）你邀请了几个外国朋友到合肥的博物馆来参观，请你用英语写一份入馆须知，汉语提示已经给出。 要求：80词左右，要点提示必须写上，其它可适当发挥。 注意：书写规范。 入馆须知：欢迎来到我市博物馆参观，请遵守以下规则： 1. 开放时间：8:00-16:00：周一到周五； 2. 禁止在展馆内吸烟；禁止拍照； 3. 保持展馆内安静，禁止大声喧哗；不得触摸展品； 4. 保持展馆内清洁卫生； 5. 如果想了解展品的详细情况，请咨询工作人员； 6. 你的想法…… exhibits 展品             ask the staff 询问职员 Welcome to our city museum _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope you have a good time in the city museum. 话题作文 Passage 1 （23-24九年级上·天津和平·期中）每个时代都有自己的偶像，青少年们在成长中也一定有榜样的力量在指引。例如：航天英雄杨利伟，奥运冠军苏炳添，抗疫英雄钟南山等等。其实，只要用心观察，平凡的生活中也有我们的偶像。他们陪伴我们成长，指引我们前行，给予我们力量。 请根据以下提示，以“My hero”为题，讲述一位平凡生活中的偶像。 (1)偶像：妈妈   年龄：40多岁   职业： 医生   爱好：读书 (2) 生活中照顾我；遇到困难给我建议； (3)经常花很多时间工作，目的是帮助更多的人； (4)两年前，去贫困地区当志愿者，培训年轻医生并且帮助建立医院； (5) 我认为……。 写作要求： (1) 不得使用真实姓名和学校名。 (2)包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 (3)字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清楚。 (4)词数80词左右。(开头已给出，不计入总词数。) My hero My hero is my mother and ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 材料作文 Passage 1 （24-25九年级上·天津河东·期中） 我的英雄是塞梅尔维斯。他是十九世纪住在匈牙利的一名医生。他在一家产科医院工作。 当时，因为医院很脏，新妈妈们经常发烧生病，甚至死亡。塞梅尔维斯对此非常不满，所以他仔细检查了医院的做法，试图找到一种方法来阻止新妈妈们生病。最终，他想出了一个简单的防止发烧的方法——他让同事们洗手。塞梅尔维斯的方法非常有效，挽救了医院里许多年轻母亲的生命。 今天，塞梅尔维斯被人们铭记为“母亲的救世主”。 参考词汇：塞梅尔维斯 Semmelweis  匈牙利 Hungary  产科医院 a hospital for mothers with new babies  同事们 colleagues  有效的 effective  救世主 saviour 写作要求：内容须完整，可适当发挥，字数80—100。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 （23-24九年级上·天津东丽·期中）几乎每个人的心目中都有自己喜欢和崇拜的榜样。假如你心目中的榜样是中国乒乓球运动员孙颖莎，请根据以下提示内容，写一篇短文来介绍一下孙颖莎。 1. 2000年出生于河北省石家庄； 2. 5岁时为了锻炼身体开始练习乒乓球； 3. 对自己严格要求，刻苦训练，15岁时进入国家队； 4. 2021年参加东京奥运会，获得一枚金牌，一枚银牌，为人所熟知； 5. 现在她成为了一名成功的乒乓球运动员； 6. 我认为…… 注意：1. 短文应包含提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 80词左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：the national team国家队； the Tokyo Olympic Games东京奥运会； be well-known to为……所熟知 My hero is Sun Yingsha. She is a talented Chinese table tennis player. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 3 （22-23九年级上·天津津南·期中）假设你是李华，上周你和父母一起去西安完成了一次旅行。请你根据以下中文提示，写一篇英语短文，向大家介绍一下西安这座城市。要求80词左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 要点如下： (1)西安位于陕西省的中部，是中国最古老的城市之一； (2)古时候，西安曾作为13个朝代的首都，时间超过1140年； (3)西安有很多名胜古迹。最出名的是秦始皇陵遗址博物馆，西安还有中国最古老的城墙； (4)可适当自由发挥。 参考词汇：capital n.首都；dynasty n.朝代；the Emperor Qinshihuang’s Mausoleum Site Park秦始皇帝陵博物院 Have you ever been to Xi’an? _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 4 （24-25九年级上·天津滨海新·期中）我市深入开展了“学习雷锋精神，共创文明城区”的活动，在10月11日重阳节这天，你校组织志愿者去天津敬老院开展“学雷锋，送温暖”活动。请根据以下要点，用英语写一篇日记。 活动时间 10月11日 活动地点 天津敬老院 (Tianjin Nursing Home) 参加人员 学校志愿者 (volunteer) 活动形式 1.送去鲜花和水果 2.帮助打扫卫生 3.陪老人聊天 (chat with sb) 、唱歌、跳舞 4.送去美好祝愿 …… 活动感想 关爱老人、尊重老人 要求： 1.短文应包括表中所有要点，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息； 3.词数80~100，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：老人 the elderly people; 尊重 respect; 重阳节 Double Ninth Festival Oct.11, 2024     Fine On Double Ninth Festival our teacher took us volunteers to Tianjin Nursing Home. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope more people can join us. Passage 5 （24-25九年级上·天津·期中）假如你叫李华，你在房间写作业时使用手机，妈妈看到后很生气。请你根据以下要点写一篇短文描述事情发生的经过。 (1)你利用手机搜索英语单词。 (2)妈妈进来后发现你在用手机，认为你在刷短视频，很生气。 (3)你向妈妈做了解释。 (4)妈妈要求：使用手机应征求家长的许可，并且控制好时间…… (5)你认为…… 参考词汇：搜索 search for    刷短视频 browse short-form videos    许可 permission 要求： (1)词数：80~100个。 (2)开头已给出，不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Last Saturday evening, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 6 （23-24九年级上·天津北辰·期中）英语课上，老师要求学生就“如何与人相处”的话题展开小组讨论，请你根据以下你们小组讨论的结果，以“How to get on well with others”为题，写一篇英语短文。 (1) 要尊重他人，学会理解他人； (2)要诚实，要礼貌待人； (3)当他人处于困境时，要主动帮助； (4)当你犯错误时要主动道歉； (5)你认为…… 参考词汇：尊重respect 要求： (1)词数： 80～100个。 (2)开头已给出，不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 How to get on well with others As we know, good relationship (关系) can make us happy and comfortable. But how do we get on well with others? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 电子邮件 Passage 1 （23-24九年级上·天津河西·期中）假如你是Dave，昨天收到了好朋友Jim的邮件，他在邮件中向你倾诉了他的烦恼。请你根据邮件中提到的问题，用英语回一封邮件，给他提出一些建议。以下是 Jim提出的烦恼： (l) 父母不了解自己，偷看自己的日记； (2) 自己喜欢踢足球，但花费太多时间导致成绩下降，感到非常苦恼； (3) 晚上熬夜写作业，第二天上课非常困。 要求：(l) 词数：80~100个；        (2) 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；        (3) 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Jim, I’m glad to hear from you and I’m sorry to hear that you are in trouble with your parents and study.   __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Good luck! Yours, Dave Passage 2 （23-24九年级上·天津河北·期中）假如你是李华，你父母上周出差，因此你独自在家一周，请给你的英国笔友Peter写封电子邮件，和他分享你上周的生活。 内容要点： (1)这是你第一次独自在家，起初有点儿兴奋。 (2)每天照顾自己，按时起床，吃完早餐，骑车上学。 (3)放学到家，先写作业，然后收拾房间、照顾宠物。 (4)父母回家后，他们感到…… 要求： (1)词数：80～100词。 (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear Peter， How is everything going? I’m writing to share a special week with you. Last week ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours Li Hua 1 / 2 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 专题 书面表达 材料作文 Passage 1 （23-24九年级上·天津宁河·期中）根据下面的提示，以“Yuan Longping”为题目写一篇短文。 提示如下： Fact box: Yuan Longping Now Is helping many countries of the world grow more rice than before 2004 Won World Food Prize 1980s Travelled around the world and gave advice about growing rice 1974 Developed a new kind of rice 1964 Made a special study of rice 1950-1953 Studied in Southwest Agricultural College 1930 Was born in Beijing （1）词数：80-100； （2）开头已给出，不计入总词数； （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Yuan Longing Yuan Longping was born in Beijing in 1930. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Yuan Longping was born in Beijing in 1930. He studied in Southwest Agricultural College from 1950 to 1953. In 1964, he made a special study of rice. And ten years later, he developed a new kind of rice. He traveled around the world and gave advice about growing rice in the 1980s. He won World Food Prize in 2004. Yuan devoted himself to the agriculural research. Although he is 90 years old, he is still working hard. He is helping many countries of the world grow more rice than before now. 【详解】[总体分析] 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； 时态：时态为“一般过去时和一般现在时”； 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示”中的提示要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，按照时间顺序叙述，首先写袁隆平什么时候出生； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从求学和取得的具体成就等方面来介绍袁隆平； 第三步，书写总结。 [亮点词汇] ①be born in出生于 ②from…to…从……到…… ③travel around the world周游世界 ④give advice about给出关于……的建议 ⑤help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事 [高分句型] ①Although he is 90 years old, he is still working hard.（Although引导的让步状语从句） Passage 2 （23-24九年级上·天津河东·期中）假如你是学校校报英语专栏的小记者，请根据以下要点写一篇短文，描述你校学生李华的一次难忘经历。 1. 李华在暑假期间去甘肃参加了文化交流活动，并向当地学生讲述了天津的历史和自然奇观。 2. 他分享了自己独自在家的经历，照顾好自己，做简单的饭菜，有麻烦时给家长发短信。 3. 他与很多学生成为朋友并保持联系。 4. 你认为…… 参考词汇：文化交流活动 cultural exchange activities；名胜古迹 places of interest 要求： 1. 词数：80~100个。 2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 3. 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Li Hua, a student of our school, went to Gansu to...__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Li Hua, a student of our school, went to Gansu to take part in the cultural activities during the summer vacation. I’m glad to share his experiences with all of you. First of all, he introduced both the history and natural wonders of Tianjin to the local students. Secondly, he shared his own experience of being alone at home with them. For example, he was able to look after himself well, and cooked simple meals on his own. It was also important to send a text message to parents when he got into trouble. At last, he made friends with quite a few students and they still kept in touch all the time. In my opinion, it is a meaningful experience. It’s necessary for us to take part in all kinds of activities. We can not only learn some useful cultural knowledge but also make friends with others. Activity is a good way to open our mind and improve our skill. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，不要遗漏信息，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接书信开头，引出话题； 第二步，详细地介绍李华的经历； 第三步，书写结语，表达自己的观点。 [亮点词汇] ①take part in参加 ②look after照顾 ③got into trouble陷入麻烦 ④all kinds of各种各样的 [高分句型] ①It was also important to send a text message to parents when he got into trouble. (when引导时间状语从句) ②We can not only learn some useful cultural knowledge but also make friends with others. (not only...but also连词) Passage 3 （22-23九年级上·天津滨海新·期中）在抗击新型冠状病毒肺炎的这场战役中，我国出现了很多英雄。请以“我敬仰的英雄钟南山”为题写一篇文章。内容如下： (1) 我的英雄是钟南山，他是一名84岁的医生； (2) 喜欢做各种运动，例如跑步、游泳，认为做运动可以保持健康； (3) 他是中国最伟大的医生之一； (4) 勇敢对抗疾病，尽全力救治病人，从不放弃； (5) 在我看来…… 要求： (1) 80 词以上，可以适当增加细节，使文章流畅。 (2) 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My hero Zhong Nanshan There are many civil heroes working hard to fight against COVID-19. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My hero Zhong Nanshan There are many civil heroes working hard to fight against COVID-19. My hero is Zhong Nanshan, who is an 84-year-old doctor. He enjoys doing various sports, such as running and swimming, because he believes that doing sports can keep him healthy. I think he is one of the greatest doctors in China! He not only bravely fought against diseases and did his best to treat patients, but also never gave up. In my opinion, I admire him not only for what he has done to the country but also for his courage. I will study hard from now on and become a person like him. He is a true hero in my heart. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要求已给出，学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍你的英雄是钟南山以及他的年龄； 第二步，介绍英雄钟南山喜欢的运动及精神； 第三步，谈谈你的想法。 [亮点词汇] ①such as例如 ②not only…but also…不仅……而且…… ③fought against对抗 ④In one’s opinion在某人看来 [高分句型] ①My hero is Zhong Nanshan, who is an 84 year old doctor.（定语从句） ②I think he is one of the greatest doctors in China!（宾语从句） Passage 1电子邮件 （24-25九年级上·天津和平·期中）节日对大多数人来说意味着团聚与欢乐。然而却有这样一群人——他们在假日不能休息，默默坚守在自己的岗位上。他们为了大多数人的平安幸福而无私奉献，值得我们尊敬与学习。请根据以下提示，介绍一位我们身边的榜样。 (1)张健职业：警察；年龄：50；爱好：读书； (2)对于张健，节日(festivals)意味着更多工作； (3)节日意味着挑战，因为有更多的人需要帮助； (4)他很少有时间和家人在一起，但是他从不后悔成为一名警察； (5)有一次，他不得不连续工作20个小时，没有休息； (6)我认为…… 参考词汇：challenge 挑战 写作要求： (1)不得使用真实姓名和学校名。 (2)包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 (3)字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清楚。 (4)词数80词左右。(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Zhang Jian is a policeman. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文     Zhang Jian is a policeman. He is 50 years old and he likes reading very much. We all respect him because he has dedicated over half of his life to serving and protecting others as a police officer.     For him, holidays mean more work and challenges because there may be more people need help during holidays. Even though he seldom gets time to spend with his family, he never regrets becoming a policeman. On one occasion, he had to work for 20 hours without break.       I think that Officer Zhang Jian is a shining example in our everyday lives. His actions remind us of the importance of serving others. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本题是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文用一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：介绍一位我们身边的榜样，需要遵照所给要求，信息覆盖全面，适当补充细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍张健的职业，年龄，爱好，引出下文； 第二步，具体描述张健警官在假日的生活和工作，注意遵照所给提示，细节充分，三观正确； 第三步，表达自己对于张健警官的感情，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①dedicate 奉献 ②on one occasion 有一次 ③remind…of… 让某人想起某事 [高分句型] ①For him, holidays mean more work and challenges because there may be more people need help during holidays.（原因状语从句） ②Even though he seldom gets time to spend with his family, he never regrets becoming a policeman.（让步状语从句） Passage 2 （24-25九年级上·天津·期中）假设你是李华，你的笔友Tony转入另一个城市的一所初中。他在与新同学相处的过程中遇到困难，请你给他写一封邮件，根据以下提示，给他提出建议。 （1）主动问候同学，课间和同学交谈； （2）课上参与小组讨论，表达自己的想法； （3）关心他人，帮助有困难的同学； （4）参加班级活动和学校社团； （5）保持冷静，有问题及时沟通； （6）你希望…… 参考词汇：小组讨论group work    表达express 要求：（1）词数：80～100个。 （2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear Tony, I have learned about your problems. I think _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Tony, I have learned about your problems. I think you should try to be friendly to your new classmates, like saying hello to them when you arrive at school every morning and talking with them at break. In class, you can take an active part in the group work about your lessons and be brave to express your ideas. Besides, you can let your classmates know about your hobbies and advantages by joining in different kinds of school club activities, sports meetings as well as singing competitions. At last, stay calm and communicate on time if there are any problems. I’m sure you will be included in their circle of your new classmates soon. Best wishes, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封邮件； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容给笔友一些建议，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，根据提示内容详细给出自己的建议； 第三步，表达希望。 [亮点词汇] ①take an active part in积极参加 ②know about了解 ③different kinds of不同种类的 [高分句型] I think you should try to be friendly to your new classmates, like saying hello to them when you arrive at school every morning and talking with them at break. (宾语从句，时间状语从句) 书信 Passage 1 （24-25九年级上·天津红桥·期中）假如你即将在学校英语兴趣小组的活动中发言，题目是“我心目中的英雄”。请根据以下要点提示，介绍你心目中的英雄——“时代楷模”，“七一勋章”获得者张桂梅。 (1)张桂梅1957年出生于黑龙江省。 (2)17岁时和姐姐搬到云南，26岁时成为一名教师。 (3)1996年在丈夫去世后，她来到华坪县教书，发现很多女孩辍学在家。 (4)2008年筹建了华坪女子高级中学，现已帮助约2,000名山区女孩考上大学。 (5)你认为…… 要求： (1)词数：80~100。 (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 参考词汇：县 county    辍学 drop out of school    山区 mountain areas       华坪女子高级中学 Huaping Girls’ High School My hero It’s my honor to speak here. Today I’m going to talk about my hero—Zhang Guimel. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for listening! 【答案】例文 My hero It’s my honor to speak here. Today I’m going to talk about my hero—Zhang Guimei. Zhang Guimei was born in Heilongjiang Province in 1957. At the age of 17, she moved to Yunnan with her sister, and became a teacher at the age of 26. After her husband passed away in 1996, she went to teach in Huaping County, where she noticed many girls dropping out of school. In 2008, she founded Huaping Girls’ High School. Since then, she has helped about 2,000 girls from mountain areas to enter college. I believe she is a true role model, dedicated to education and changing lives. Thank you for listening! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇发言稿； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，文章开头已给出； 第二步，介绍张桂梅的出生信息、职业生涯和成就； 第三步，最后表达表达出对她的敬佩。 [亮点词汇] ①at the age of在……岁时 ②pass away过世 ③dedicated to致力于 [高分句型] ①After her husband passed away in 1996, she went to teach in Huaping County, where she noticed many girls dropping out of school.（时间状语从句；定语从句） ②I believe she is a true role model, dedicated to education and changing lives.（宾语从句） Passage 2 （23-24九年级上·天津南开·期中）假设你是李平，要在本周班会课上发言，主题为“独自在家注意事项”。根据下面表格的内容，用英语写一篇发言稿。 安全 在家和外出要锁好房门用火和用电时注意安全 饮食 学习做简单的饭菜 多喝水，吃新鲜的蔬菜水果 时间管理 按时起床，上学不迟到放学回家后先完成作业 其他 ……(补充一点) 参考词汇：electricity 电 要求： (1) 词数：80—100个。 (2) 短文的开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear classmates, When we are home alone, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear classmates，      When we are home alone, we need to pay attention to many things.      First of all, we should pay attention to the safety. Don’t forget to lock the door when we go out. Pay attention to safety when using fire and electricity. Second, we also need to learn how to cook simple meals. We need to drink more water and eat fresh vegetables and fruit. Last but not least, we need to get up on time and can’t be late for school. After school, we need to finish our homework first. What’s more, when a stranger knocks at the door, we cannot open it. We need to know how to call the police.     In a word, we should keep ourselves healthy and safe when we are alone at home. 【详解】［总体分析］ ① 题材：本文是一篇发言稿； ② 时态：用一般现在时； ③ 提示：阐述独自在家时的注意事项，需要遵照所给要求，要点涵盖全面，适当补充细节。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，概括独自在家时的整体原则，为文章确定基调； 第二步，分条陈述需要注意的具体事项，要注意理由充分合理，价值观正确； 第三步，总结观点，得出结论。 ［亮点调汇］ ①pay attention to 注意 ②last but not least 最后但并不是最不重要的 ③in a word 总而言之 ［高分句型］ ①When we are home alone, we need to pay attention to many things.（时间状语从句） ②Don’t forget to lock the door when we go out.（祈使句） Passage 3 （23-24九年级上·天津西青·期中）前段时间同学们观看了“天宫课堂”之后，纷纷表示要向三位宇航员学习，成为一名有理想，有抱负的青少年。请你根据以下内容提示，以“How to be a better teenager?”为题，在下周的主题班会上发言。 内容提示： (1)努力学习，积极锻炼，养成健康的生活习惯； (2)尊敬长辈，乐于助人； (3)学会做家务； (4)热爱中国文化，培养各种兴趣爱好； (5)感想…… 要求： (1)词数：80～100个。 (2)短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 参考词汇：积极锻炼actively exercise 尊敬respect 乐于做be willing to 文化culture How to be a better teenager? Hello, everyone! Today I’d like to share my ideas about how to be a better teenager. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you! 【答案】One possible version: How to a better teenager? Hello, everyone! Today I’d like to share my ideas about how to be a better teenager. First of all, we should study hard and actively exercise to develop healthy living habits. A strong body and a sharp mind are necessary for achieving our goals. Secondly, we must respect the elderly and be willing to help others. Thirdly, learning to do housework is important. It helps us become more independent and responsible. Additionally, we should love Chinese culture and develop various hobbies. This can enrich our lives and broaden our horizons. Although it is not easy to be a better teenager, we should always strive to improve ourselves. Only in this way can we contribute to a stronger and better country. That’s all. Thank you! 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇发言稿； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，根据所给内容提示具体描述如何成为一个更好的青少年； 第二步，表达自己的感想。 [亮点词汇] ① develop healthy living habits养成健康的生活习惯 ② be willing to do乐意做 ③ strive to do尽力做 [高分句型] ①Thirdly, learning to do housework is important.（动名词作主语） ②Although it is not easy to be a better teenager, we should always strive to improve ourselves（让步状语从句） ③Only in this way can we contribute to a stronger and better country.（部分倒装） 通知 Passage 1 （23-24九年级上·天津滨海新·期中）你邀请了几个外国朋友到合肥的博物馆来参观，请你用英语写一份入馆须知，汉语提示已经给出。 要求：80词左右，要点提示必须写上，其它可适当发挥。 注意：书写规范。 入馆须知：欢迎来到我市博物馆参观，请遵守以下规则： 1. 开放时间：8:00-16:00：周一到周五； 2. 禁止在展馆内吸烟；禁止拍照； 3. 保持展馆内安静，禁止大声喧哗；不得触摸展品； 4. 保持展馆内清洁卫生； 5. 如果想了解展品的详细情况，请咨询工作人员； 6. 你的想法…… exhibits 展品             ask the staff 询问职员 Welcome to our city museum _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope you have a good time in the city museum. 【答案】例文 Welcome to our city museum. Here are some rules you need to follow: First, the opening hours are from 8:00 to 16:00 from Monday to Friday. Second, smoking and taking photos are forbidden in the exhibition halls. Third, keep quiet in the museum. Don’t shout or make any noise. Also, don’t touch the exhibits. Fourth, please keep the museum clean and tidy. Fifth, if you want to know more details about the exhibits, you can ask the staff for help. Finally, I hope everyone can have a great time and learn something meaningful during the visit. Hope you have a good time in the city museum. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，是一份通知写作。 ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。 ③提示：写作要点要明确，需要按照要求列出了博物馆的开放时间、禁止事项、注意事项等，不要遗漏相关内容，并适当添加了希望大家能在参观中有所收获的内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。开头欢迎大家来到博物馆参观，并说明需要遵守相关规则。 第二步，具体阐述各项规则，包括开放时间、禁止吸烟和拍照、保持安静、不触摸展品、保持清洁、咨询工作人员等。 第三步，书写结语，希望大家能在博物馆度过愉快的时光。 [亮点词汇] ①follow the rules遵守规则 ②make noise 制造噪音 [高分句型] ①If you want to know more details about the exhibits, you can ask the staff for help.（if引导的条件状语从句） ②I hope everyone can have a great time and learn something meaningful during the visit.（宾语从句） 话题作文 Passage 1 （23-24九年级上·天津和平·期中）每个时代都有自己的偶像，青少年们在成长中也一定有榜样的力量在指引。例如：航天英雄杨利伟，奥运冠军苏炳添，抗疫英雄钟南山等等。其实，只要用心观察，平凡的生活中也有我们的偶像。他们陪伴我们成长，指引我们前行，给予我们力量。 请根据以下提示，以“My hero”为题，讲述一位平凡生活中的偶像。 (1)偶像：妈妈   年龄：40多岁   职业： 医生   爱好：读书 (2) 生活中照顾我；遇到困难给我建议； (3)经常花很多时间工作，目的是帮助更多的人； (4)两年前，去贫困地区当志愿者，培训年轻医生并且帮助建立医院； (5) 我认为……。 写作要求： (1) 不得使用真实姓名和学校名。 (2)包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 (3)字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清楚。 (4)词数80词左右。(开头已给出，不计入总词数。) My hero My hero is my mother and ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My hero My hero is my mother and she is forty years old. She is a doctor and enjoys reading. My mother takes care of me in life and gives me some advice whenever I meet difficulties. She often spends a lot of time working to help more people. Two years ago, she volunteered in poor areas, trained young doctors, and helped found hospitals. I believe that my mother is great. When I grow up, I also want to become someone like my mother and make contributions to the country and people. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，根据开头提示，介绍妈妈的年龄、职业和爱好； 第二步，介绍妈妈在生活中照顾我；遇到困难给我建议； 第三步，介绍妈妈经常花很多时间工作，目的是帮助更多的人； 第四步，介绍两年前，去贫困地区当志愿者，培训年轻医生并且帮助建立医院； 第五步，发表观点。 [亮点词汇] ①enjoy doing sth.喜欢做某事 ②take care of 关心 ③grow up长大 ④make contributions to为……作出贡献   [高分句型] ①My mother takes care of me in life and gives me some advice whenever I meet difficulties.（whenever引导的时间状语从句） ②She often spends a lot of time working to help more people.（spend time／money (in) doing sth. 花费时间(金钱)做某事） ③I believe that my mother is great.（that引导的宾语从句） ④When I grow up, I also want to become someone like my mother and make contributions to the country and people.（when引导的时间状语从句） 材料作文 Passage 1 （24-25九年级上·天津河东·期中） 我的英雄是塞梅尔维斯。他是十九世纪住在匈牙利的一名医生。他在一家产科医院工作。 当时，因为医院很脏，新妈妈们经常发烧生病，甚至死亡。塞梅尔维斯对此非常不满，所以他仔细检查了医院的做法，试图找到一种方法来阻止新妈妈们生病。最终，他想出了一个简单的防止发烧的方法——他让同事们洗手。塞梅尔维斯的方法非常有效，挽救了医院里许多年轻母亲的生命。 今天，塞梅尔维斯被人们铭记为“母亲的救世主”。 参考词汇：塞梅尔维斯 Semmelweis  匈牙利 Hungary  产科医院 a hospital for mothers with new babies  同事们 colleagues  有效的 effective  救世主 saviour 写作要求：内容须完整，可适当发挥，字数80—100。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文： My hero is Semmelweis. He was a doctor living in Hungary in the nineteenth century. He worked in a hospital for mothers with new babies. At that time, because hospitals were very dirty places, new mothers often fell sick with fever, and even died. Semmelweis was very unhappy about this, so he examined practices in his hospital carefully to try to find a way to stop the mothers from getting sick. Eventually, he figured out a simple way to stop fever—he told his colleagues to wash their hands. Semmelweis’s method was very effective and saved the lives of many young mothers at his hospital. Today, Semmelweis is remembered as “the saviour of mothers”. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般过去式态”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，注意行文连贯、逻辑清晰、无拼写和语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明主题，阐述你心目中的英雄是塞梅尔维斯，并且介绍他的个人情况； 第二步，展开阐述，描述十九世纪当时的医院的情况，并且详细描述塞梅尔维斯的事迹，可以适当发挥。 第三步，书写结语，升华主题，展示对英雄塞梅尔维斯崇敬之情。 [亮点词汇] ①try to do sth.尽力去做 ②stop from doing sth.禁止做某事 ③tell sb. to do sth.告诉某人去做某事 [高分句型] ①At that time, because hospitals were very dirty places, new mothers often fell sick with fever, and even died.（原因状语从句) ②Semmelweis was very unhappy about this, so he examined practices in his hospital carefully to try to find a way to stop the mothers from getting sick.（结果状语从句） Passage 2 （23-24九年级上·天津东丽·期中）几乎每个人的心目中都有自己喜欢和崇拜的榜样。假如你心目中的榜样是中国乒乓球运动员孙颖莎，请根据以下提示内容，写一篇短文来介绍一下孙颖莎。 1. 2000年出生于河北省石家庄； 2. 5岁时为了锻炼身体开始练习乒乓球； 3. 对自己严格要求，刻苦训练，15岁时进入国家队； 4. 2021年参加东京奥运会，获得一枚金牌，一枚银牌，为人所熟知； 5. 现在她成为了一名成功的乒乓球运动员； 6. 我认为…… 注意：1. 短文应包含提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 80词左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：the national team国家队； the Tokyo Olympic Games东京奥运会； be well-known to为……所熟知 My hero is Sun Yingsha. She is a talented Chinese table tennis player. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】        My hero is Sun Yingsha. She is a talented Chinese table tennis player.         She was born in 2000 in Shijiazhuang, Hebei province. She started playing table tennis for good health when she was 5. And she was strict with herself and trained hard. Ten years later, she went into the National Team. After so many years’ hard-working effort, she finally got her first gold medal and silver medal in the Tokyo Olympic Games in 2021, then she quickly became well-known to us all. Now, she became a successful table tennis player.         It’s amazing that she can do the best at such a young age and we are all proud of her. I think she was a good model for us. We should learn a lot from her and study hard enough to make our own dreams come true. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，需要注意写作时包含提示的所有内容，可适当增加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，先简单介绍孙颖莎的出生时间和出生地以引出下文； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“身份、参赛经历、所获奖项”等方面重点介绍孙颖莎； 第三步，书写结语。总结孙颖莎的成就，简述对她的看法，谈谈自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①be strict with对……严格 ②become well-known to被熟知 ③at a young age在年轻时 [高分句型] ①She started playing table tennis for good health when she was 5.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②It’s amazing that she can do the best at such a young age and we are all proud of her.（it作形式主语） Passage 3 （22-23九年级上·天津津南·期中）假设你是李华，上周你和父母一起去西安完成了一次旅行。请你根据以下中文提示，写一篇英语短文，向大家介绍一下西安这座城市。要求80词左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 要点如下： (1)西安位于陕西省的中部，是中国最古老的城市之一； (2)古时候，西安曾作为13个朝代的首都，时间超过1140年； (3)西安有很多名胜古迹。最出名的是秦始皇陵遗址博物馆，西安还有中国最古老的城墙； (4)可适当自由发挥。 参考词汇：capital n.首都；dynasty n.朝代；the Emperor Qinshihuang’s Mausoleum Site Park秦始皇帝陵博物院 Have you ever been to Xi’an? _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Have you ever been to Xi’an? It’s in the center of Shanxi Province, China. It’s also one of the oldest cities in China. In ancient times, it was the capital of 13 dynasties with more than 1,140 years. Xi’an has lots of places of interest. Have you visited the Emperor Qinshihuang’s Mausoleum Site Park? It’s so great and unbelievable! Xi’an also has one of the oldest Chinese city walls. If you want to learn about the culture and history of China, just go to Xi’an. I think you’ll have a nice trip there. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：根据要点提示介绍西安这座城市，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，表述清晰。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍西安的位置； 第二步，介绍西安的历史； 第三步，介绍西安的旅游景点； 第四步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①the capital of……的首都 ②places of interest名胜古迹 ③learn about了解 [高分句型] ①It’s also one of the oldest cities in China.（one of the+形容词最高级+名词复数“最……之一”） ②If you want to learn about the culture and history of China, just go to Xi’an.（if引导的条件状语从句） Passage 4 （24-25九年级上·天津滨海新·期中）我市深入开展了“学习雷锋精神，共创文明城区”的活动，在10月11日重阳节这天，你校组织志愿者去天津敬老院开展“学雷锋，送温暖”活动。请根据以下要点，用英语写一篇日记。 活动时间 10月11日 活动地点 天津敬老院 (Tianjin Nursing Home) 参加人员 学校志愿者 (volunteer) 活动形式 1.送去鲜花和水果 2.帮助打扫卫生 3.陪老人聊天 (chat with sb) 、唱歌、跳舞 4.送去美好祝愿 …… 活动感想 关爱老人、尊重老人 要求： 1.短文应包括表中所有要点，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息； 3.词数80~100，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：老人 the elderly people; 尊重 respect; 重阳节 Double Ninth Festival Oct.11, 2024     Fine On Double Ninth Festival our teacher took us volunteers to Tianjin Nursing Home. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope more people can join us. 【答案】例文 Oct.11, 2024  Fine    On Double Ninth Festival our teacher took us volunteers to Tianjin Nursing Home. As soon as we arrived, we were warmly welcomed. We brought some flowers and fruits to the elderly people. We helped clean the windows and swept the floor. We sang and danced, bringing joy to everyone. Following that, we chatted with them and offered our best wishes. The elderly were very happy, and when it was time to leave, they expressed deep gratitude. This activity taught us the importance of caring for and respecting the elderly. I hope more people can join us. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。根据文章已给出的开头，引出主题； 第二步，具体阐述去敬老院开展的活动； 第三步，书写结语，表达活动感想。 [亮点词汇] ①As soon as一……就…… ②chat with聊天 ③express deep gratitude表示深深的谢意 ④the importance of……的重要性 [高分句型] The elderly were very happy, and when it was time to leave, they expressed deep gratitude. (when引导的时间状语从句) Passage 5 （24-25九年级上·天津·期中）假如你叫李华，你在房间写作业时使用手机，妈妈看到后很生气。请你根据以下要点写一篇短文描述事情发生的经过。 (1)你利用手机搜索英语单词。 (2)妈妈进来后发现你在用手机，认为你在刷短视频，很生气。 (3)你向妈妈做了解释。 (4)妈妈要求：使用手机应征求家长的许可，并且控制好时间…… (5)你认为…… 参考词汇：搜索 search for    刷短视频 browse short-form videos    许可 permission 要求： (1)词数：80~100个。 (2)开头已给出，不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Last Saturday evening, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Last Saturday evening, I was doing my homework in my room. I used my phone to search for some English words. When my mother came in and saw me using the phone, she thought I was browsing short-form videos and got very angry. I explained to her what I was doing. She then told me that I should ask for permission before using the phone and control the time well. I think she is right and I will follow her advice in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山。点明事情发生的时间。（开头已给出） 第二步，具体阐述。根据提示的要点，结合参考词汇，描述事情发生的经过。 第三步，书写结语。表达感悟。 [亮点词汇] ① see sb. doing sth. 看见某人正在做某事 ② come in 进来 ③ get angry 生气 ④ in the future 将来 [高分句型] ① When my mother came in and saw me using the phone, she thought I was browsing short-form videos and got very angry.（when引导时间状语从句） ② She then told me that I should ask for permission before using the phone and control the time well.（that引导宾语从句） Passage 6 （23-24九年级上·天津北辰·期中）英语课上，老师要求学生就“如何与人相处”的话题展开小组讨论，请你根据以下你们小组讨论的结果，以“How to get on well with others”为题，写一篇英语短文。 (1) 要尊重他人，学会理解他人； (2)要诚实，要礼貌待人； (3)当他人处于困境时，要主动帮助； (4)当你犯错误时要主动道歉； (5)你认为…… 参考词汇：尊重respect 要求： (1)词数： 80～100个。 (2)开头已给出，不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 How to get on well with others As we know, good relationship (关系) can make us happy and comfortable. But how do we get on well with others? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How to get on well with others As we know, good relationship can make us happy and comfortable. But how do we get on well with others? First, we should respect others and try to understand them. Everyone has their own ideas and feelings, so we need to be considerate. Second, honesty is very important. We should always be honest and treat others politely. Third, we should offer to help others when they are in trouble. Helping others can not only make them feel good, but also make us feel happy. Fourth, when we make mistakes, we should take the initiative to apologize. This shows that we are responsible and can earn the trust of others. In addition, I think that being patient and understanding is key to getting along with others. We should learn to listen to others and try to see things from their perspective. Also, we should be willing to compromise and find solutions that are beneficial to everyone. In a word, getting on well with others requires our efforts and sincerity. Only by treating others with kindness and respect can we build good relationships and live a happy life. 【详解】［总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。 ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。 ③提示：写作要点要明确，需要按照题目要求，围绕“如何与人相处”展开论述，包括尊重他人、理解他人、诚实礼貌、帮助他人、主动道歉等方面，并适当添加自己的观点，不要遗漏相关内容。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，表明写作意图。开头点明良好的人际关系能让人快乐舒适，进而引出如何与人相处的话题。 第二步，具体阐述与人相处的方法，如尊重他人、诚实礼貌、帮助有困难的人、犯错误时主动道歉等。 第三步，书写结语，总结与人相处需要努力和真诚，只有善待他人才能建立良好关系，过上幸福生活。 ［亮点词汇］ ①offer to help 主动帮助 ②take the initiative 主动 ③in a word 总之 ［高分句型］ ①We should offer to help others when they are in trouble.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②I think that being patient and understanding is key to getting along with others.（that引导的宾语从句） 电子邮件 Passage 1 （23-24九年级上·天津河西·期中）假如你是Dave，昨天收到了好朋友Jim的邮件，他在邮件中向你倾诉了他的烦恼。请你根据邮件中提到的问题，用英语回一封邮件，给他提出一些建议。以下是 Jim提出的烦恼： (l) 父母不了解自己，偷看自己的日记； (2) 自己喜欢踢足球，但花费太多时间导致成绩下降，感到非常苦恼； (3) 晚上熬夜写作业，第二天上课非常困。 要求：(l) 词数：80~100个；        (2) 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；        (3) 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Jim, I’m glad to hear from you and I’m sorry to hear that you are in trouble with your parents and study.   __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Good luck! Yours, Dave 【答案】例文： Dear Jim, I’m glad to hear from you and I’m sorry to hear that you are in trouble with your parents and study. As your best friend, I’d like to give you some advice. First, I think you’d better talk with your parents about your life and your feelings. They want to know more about you, so they read your diaries. They do this because they care about you. If you talk with them, they won’t worry about you. I know that you love to play football. However, don’t spend too much time on it, or you’ll have less energy to study. Finally, why not finish your homework as early as you can and make sure to go to bed before ten? I hope that my advice can help you. Good luck! Yours, Dave 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：结合好友Jim邮件中提出的问题，给他恰当的建议，避免语法错误，确保行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步；关于父母偷看自己的日记，介绍你的观点； 第二步：因为踢足球，Jim成绩下降，为此提出你的建议； 第三步：由于熬夜写作业，导致Jim第二天上课犯困，为此给出帮助Jim的建议； 第四步：希望这些建议能给Jim带来帮助。 [亮点词汇] ①talk with 与……交谈 ②as early as you can  尽可能早…… ③make sure 确保 [高分句型] ①They do this because they care about you. (because引导原因状语从句) ②I know that you love to play football. (宾语从句) Passage 2 （23-24九年级上·天津河北·期中）假如你是李华，你父母上周出差，因此你独自在家一周，请给你的英国笔友Peter写封电子邮件，和他分享你上周的生活。 内容要点： (1)这是你第一次独自在家，起初有点儿兴奋。 (2)每天照顾自己，按时起床，吃完早餐，骑车上学。 (3)放学到家，先写作业，然后收拾房间、照顾宠物。 (4)父母回家后，他们感到…… 要求： (1)词数：80～100词。 (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear Peter， How is everything going? I’m writing to share a special week with you. Last week ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Peter， How is everything going? I’m writing to share a special week with you. Last week my parents were on a business trip, so I stayed at home alone for a week. It was my first time at home alone and I was a little excited at first. Because I could do what I like to do. I took care of myself every day. I got up on time, had breakfast and went to school by bike. When I got home from school, I did my homework first. Then I cleaned my room and took care of my pet. Although I was busy every day, I was very happy. When my parents came home, they felt very happy. Yours Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍写邮件的目的； 第二步，具体阐述了自己独自在家的经历； 第三步，写了父母的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①at first最初 ②took care of照顾 ③on time按时 [高分句型] ①When I got home from school, I did my homework first. (when引导的时间状语从句) ②Although I was busy every day, I was very happy. (although引导的让步状语从句) 1 / 2 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $