Unit 4 Exploring poetry 诗歌鉴赏（单元应用文写作精练）英语译林版2020选择性必修第一册

Unit 4 Exploring poetry ( 写作主题 识 )应用文写作精练(解析版) 主题：诗评 写作框架： 第一段 开门见山，引出话题。简单介绍诗歌。 第二段 具体介绍诗歌流行的原因。 第三段 个人对诗歌感受和评价。 写作词汇短语： (1)内容 image　　　　　　 意象 sound 语音 rhythm 节奏 rhyme 韵律; 节律 pattern 模式 poet 诗人 poem 诗歌 inspiration 灵感 (2)评价 impressive 给人印象深刻的 influential 有影响力的 inspiring 激励人心的 touching 感动人的 hidden 内含的 moral 寓意, 道德上的 inspire 激励, 鼓励 bring out 使显现 写作句型： 【开头句】 (1)通用写作手法 ①The poet compares his sweet heart to a red rose and sweet music. 诗人把他的心上人比作红色的玫瑰花和悦耳的音乐。 ②The poet uses simile to express the strong affection which cannot be controlled. 诗人用明喻来表达难以控制的强烈的爱。 ③The poet uses repetition to intensify his emotion. 诗人用重复来加强他的感情。 ④The writer indicates the changes of seasons using unique techniques. 作者使用了独特的技巧来表现季节的变化。 ⑤The poem shows the truth that all real and beautiful things will disappear gradually. 这首诗揭示了一切真切而美好的事物最终定会逐渐消失的哲理。 (2)通用表达感想 ①The poem is so impressive that I will remember it forever. 这首诗使人印象深刻, 所以我会永远记住它。 ②The poem has touched my heartstring so I can have a better understanding of it. 这首诗触动了我的心弦, 所以我能更好地理解它。 ③What the poet wants to tell us is that we should have a positive attitude towards life. 诗人想告诉我们的是, 我们应该有一个积极的生活态度。 写作模板： The writer comes upon…. The writer ends….   This poem is about…. It is popular because every reader can….   I think the poet is telling us that….   举一反三： 下面是唐朝诗人李绅的名作《悯农》(Sympathy on the Farmers)节选。请你就这首诗写一篇诗歌评论。 Sympathy on the Farmers At noon, a farmer is weeding, Down the field, sweat is dripping, Who knows rice on a dish, Every grain is full of moiling? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Here is a poem which is titled “Sympathy on the Farmers” by Li Shen in the Tang Dy­nasty. In the poem, we can learn a lot from the farmers as well as their hard work. Hot as it is outside at this summer noon time, the farmers are still working in the fields. They are sweating all over, and fre­quently their sweat falls into the soil, where the crops grow. Should we only think of the farmers’ hard work according to the poem? I think it’s espe­cially important that the young generation to­day should treasure every grain on our dish. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生就《悯农》这首诗写一篇诗歌评论。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 经常：fre­quently → constantly 尤其，特别：espe­cially → particularly 重要的：important → significant 珍惜：treasure → cherish 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：In the poem, we can learn a lot from the farmers as well as their hard work. 拓展句：In the poem, we can see that we can learn a lot from the farmers as well as from their hard work. 【点睛】 [高分句型1] Here is a poem which is titled “Sympathy on the Farmers” by Li Shen in the Tang Dy­nasty. (运用了which引导的限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] They are sweating all over, and fre­quently their sweat falls into the soil, where the crops grow. (运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句) Passage 1 假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter在你校为留学生举办的中文诗歌大赛中获奖。请你给他写 一封邮件,告知获奖事宜，并对他表示祝贺。内容包括： 1.祝贺获奖； 2.评价诗歌内容； 3.期待更多作品。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Peter, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】One possible version: Dear Peter, I'm writing to inform you that your poem in Chinese has won the first place in the International Students, Chinese Poem Competition held by our school. Congratulations! I have read your poem, which not only reflects your knowledge of Chinese language and your love for Chinese culture, but is also full of unique and creative thinking. Therefore, the first time I read your poem, I was deeply impressed by the inspirational lines and I read it three times in a row. Additionally, I hear that all the award-winning poems will be included in our school's Excellent Poetry Collection. You are indeed a great poem writer, and I sincerely hope you can create more poems for us to read. Best regards! Yours, Li Hua 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国朋友Peter写封邮件，告知他在为留学生举办的中文诗歌大赛中获奖事宜，并对他表示祝贺。 【详解】 第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时和现在完成时。 结构：总分总法 要求： 1.祝贺获奖； 2.评价诗歌内容； 3.期待更多作品。 第二步:列提纲 (重点词组) win the first place； not only…but also…；be full of ；be deeply impressed by；in a row 第三步：连词成句 1. I'm writing to inform you that your poem in Chinese has won the first place in the International Students, Chinese Poem Competition held by our school. 2. I have read your poem, which not only reflects your knowledge of Chinese language and your love for Chinese culture, but is also full of unique and creative thinking. 3. Therefore, the first time I read your poem, I was deeply impressed by the inspirational lines and I read it three times in a row. 4. Additionally, I hear that all the award-winning poems will be included in our school's Excellent Poetry Collection. 5. You are indeed a great poem writer, and I sincerely hope you can create more poems for us to read. 根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇(衔接词) 1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second(供参考) 2.表并列补充关系： Not only…but (also), Additionally 3.表因果关系： Therefore 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰， 【点睛】 [高分句型1]I'm writing to inform you that your poem in Chinese has won the first place in the International Students, Chinese Poem Competition held by our school.(that引导宾语从句) [高分句型2]I have read your poem, which not only reflects your knowledge of Chinese language and your love for Chinese culture, but is also full of unique and creative thinking. (which引导非限制性定语从句) Passage 2 你校英文报正在开展以“传承中华优秀文化”为主题的诗歌评论征集活动。请你写一则诗评投稿，内容包括： 1. 诗歌简介； 2. 诗歌赏析； 3. 个人感受。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: “Thoughts on a Tranquil Night” is a masterpiece written by Li Bai, one of the most celebrated poets in Chinese history. The poem vividly describes the poet’s melancholy mood as he gazes at the bright moon on a tranquil night. At the beginning, the imagery creates a serene and peaceful atmosphere, making the reader feel as if they are there with the poet, experiencing the beauty of the night. As the poem progresses, the poet reveals his inner turmoil, expressing his longing for his homeland and his sadness at being far away. This poem shows the poet’s deep sense of nostalgia and homesickness, which is a common theme in Chinese poetry. In my opinion, this poem is so beautiful and poignant that it is a timeless classic. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。题目要求考生选择一首中国古诗写一则诗评，需包括诗歌简介、诗歌赏析和个人的感受。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 著名的：celebrated→eminent, prestigious, distinguished 描述：describe→narrate, recount, relate 首先：at the beginning→to begin with, at first 似乎：as if→as though 经历：experience→undergo, encounter, meet 展示：reveal→show, disclose, uncover, display 在我看来：in my opinion→from my perspective, as far as I am concerned 令人沉痛的：poignant→touching, moving, miserable 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：“Thoughts on a Tranquil Night” is a masterpiece written by Li Bai, one of the most celebrated poets in Chinese history. 拓展句：“Thoughts on a Tranquil Night” is a masterpiece written by Li Bai, who is one of the most celebrated poets in Chinese history. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】The poem vividly describes the poet’s melancholy mood as he gazes at the bright moon on a tranquil night.(运用了as引导时间状语从句) 【高分句型2】At the beginning, the imagery creates a serene and peaceful atmosphere, making the reader feel as if they are there with the poet, experiencing the beauty of the night.(运用了现在分词短语作状语和as if引导方式状语从句) 【高分句型3】This poem shows the poet’s deep sense of nostalgia and homesickness, which is a common theme in Chinese poetry.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句) Passage 3 请给唐朝诗人李绅的《悯农》写一篇诗歌评论，写出这首诗的大意，并说明诗中所蕴含的作者的思想。 悯　农 唐/李绅 锄禾日当午，汗滴禾下土。 谁知盘中餐，粒粒皆辛苦。 Sympathy on the Farmers At noon, farmers are weeding, Down the field, sweat is dropping. Who knows rice on a dish, Every grain is full of moiling? 注意：1.结合短诗的内容，适当展开想象； 2. 突出短诗的主题，结构完整，语义连贯； 3. 词数80左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Here is a poem titled “Sympathy on the Farmers” by Li Shen who is popular with Chinese readers. It goes like this: Hot as it is outside at this summer noon time, the farmers are still weeding in the fields. They are wet all over with their sweat frequently falling into the soil, where the crops grow. But who knows exactly all our foods, the delicious dishes on our table, come from the hard work of the farmers? Li Shen wrote this poem in order to remind people of the importance of the farmers’ hard work. I think it’s of great importance that the young generation today should understand the poem and treasure every grain. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放作文。要求考生写一篇关于唐朝诗人李绅的《悯农》的诗歌评论。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 确切地：exactly→definitely 为了：in order to→so as to 重要的：be of great importance→be greatly important 珍惜：treasure→value 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Li Shen wrote this poem in order to remind people of the importance of the farmers’ hard work. 拓展句：Li Shen wrote this poem in order that it could remind people of the importance of the farmers’ hard work. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】Here is a poem titled “Sympathy on the Farmers” by Li Shen who is popular with Chinese readers.(运用了who引导的限定性定语从句) 【高分句型2】I think it’s of great importance that the young generation today should understand the poem and treasure every grain.(运用了it作形式主语，that从句为真正的主语) Passage 4 假定你是李华，你的留学生朋友Tom在你市举办的中国诗词大赛(Chinese Poetry Contest)国外友人专场中获得一等奖。请你给他写一封邮件。内容包括： 1.写信目的； 2.表示称赞； 3.期待交流。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Tom, I'm writing to congratulate you with all my heart on your winning first prize in the Chinese Poetry Contest. I'm amazed at your extraordinary achievement since it's difficult for a foreigner to have such a good command of Chinese poetry. You have been working hard in the past few years. It's your devotion and diligence that contribute to your success. And I'd like to have an online discussion with you sometime, where we can share each other's experience of learning Chinese poetry. I hope it could help both of us make more progress in the future. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，你的留学生朋友Tom在你市举办的中国诗词大赛(Chinese Poetry Contest)国外友人专场中获得一等奖。请你根据以下要点给他写一封邮件。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 惊叹：be surprised at→be amazed at 伟大的：fantastic → extraordinary 促进：lead to→contribute to 奉献：sacrifice→ devotion 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I'm writing to congratulate you with all my heart on your winning first prize in the Chinese Poetry Contest. 拓展句：I'm writing to congratulate you with all my heart because you won first prize in the Chinese Poetry Contest. 【点睛】 [高分句型1]It's your devotion and diligence that contribute to your success.(强调句型) [高分句型2]And I'd like to have an online discussion with you sometime, where we can share each other's experience of learning Chinese poetry.(where引导的非限制性定语从句) Passage 5 你的美国朋友Tom对中国唐诗感兴趣，并请求你介绍一位你最喜欢的唐代诗人。请你给Tom回信，内容包括诗人简介及你喜欢他的原因。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Tom, I’m glad to hear from you. I feel proud knowing you are interested in Tang poems. As for my favorite poet, it must be Li Bai. Living in a golden age of Chinese poetry, Li Bai is best known for his rich imagination and striking imagery in his poetry, as well as for his great love for liquor. Many of his poems will remain today. Li Bai is regarded as the greatest romantic poet of the Tang Dynasty. What I appreciate most are his landscape poems, which are clear and natural in words with profound messages. They convey his strong love for nature, friends and the people. Best wishes. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生美国朋友Tom介绍一位唐代诗人。其内容包括：诗人简介及你喜欢他的原因。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 高兴的：glad → delighted 丰富的：rich → abundant 欣赏：appreciate → admire 风景：landscape → scenery 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句： As for my favorite poet, it must be Li Bai. 拓展句：The poet who I like most is definitely Li Bai. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】Living in a golden age of Chinese poetry, Li Bai is best known for his rich imagination and striking imagery in his poetry, as well as for his great love for liquor. (运用了现在分词作状语) 【高分句型2】What I appreciate most about him is his landscape poems, which are clear and natural in words with profound messages. (运用了What引导的主语从句及which引导的非限制性定语从句) ( 8 / 10 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 4 Exploring poetry ( 写作主题 识 )应用文写作精练(原卷版) 主题：诗评 写作框架： 第一段 开门见山，引出话题。简单介绍诗歌。 第二段 具体介绍诗歌流行的原因。 第三段 个人对诗歌感受和评价。 写作词汇短语： (1)内容 image　　　　　　 意象 sound 语音 rhythm 节奏 rhyme 韵律; 节律 pattern 模式 poet 诗人 poem 诗歌 inspiration 灵感 (2)评价 impressive 给人印象深刻的 influential 有影响力的 inspiring 激励人心的 touching 感动人的 hidden 内含的 moral 寓意, 道德上的 inspire 激励, 鼓励 bring out 使显现 写作句型： 【开头句】 (1)通用写作手法 ①The poet compares his sweet heart to a red rose and sweet music. 诗人把他的心上人比作红色的玫瑰花和悦耳的音乐。 ②The poet uses simile to express the strong affection which cannot be controlled. 诗人用明喻来表达难以控制的强烈的爱。 ③The poet uses repetition to intensify his emotion. 诗人用重复来加强他的感情。 ④The writer indicates the changes of seasons using unique techniques. 作者使用了独特的技巧来表现季节的变化。 ⑤The poem shows the truth that all real and beautiful things will disappear gradually. 这首诗揭示了一切真切而美好的事物最终定会逐渐消失的哲理。 (2)通用表达感想 ①The poem is so impressive that I will remember it forever. 这首诗使人印象深刻, 所以我会永远记住它。 ②The poem has touched my heartstring so I can have a better understanding of it. 这首诗触动了我的心弦, 所以我能更好地理解它。 ③What the poet wants to tell us is that we should have a positive attitude towards life. 诗人想告诉我们的是, 我们应该有一个积极的生活态度。 写作模板： The writer comes upon…. The writer ends….   This poem is about…. It is popular because every reader can….   I think the poet is telling us that….   举一反三： 下面是唐朝诗人李绅的名作《悯农》(Sympathy on the Farmers)节选。请你就这首诗写一篇诗歌评论。 Sympathy on the Farmers At noon, a farmer is weeding, Down the field, sweat is dripping, Who knows rice on a dish, Every grain is full of moiling? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 1 假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter在你校为留学生举办的中文诗歌大赛中获奖。请你给他写 一封邮件,告知获奖事宜，并对他表示祝贺。内容包括： 1.祝贺获奖； 2.评价诗歌内容； 3.期待更多作品。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Peter, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Passage 2 你校英文报正在开展以“传承中华优秀文化”为主题的诗歌评论征集活动。请你写一则诗评投稿，内容包括： 1. 诗歌简介； 2. 诗歌赏析； 3. 个人感受。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 3 请给唐朝诗人李绅的《悯农》写一篇诗歌评论，写出这首诗的大意，并说明诗中所蕴含的作者的思想。 悯　农 唐/李绅 锄禾日当午，汗滴禾下土。 谁知盘中餐，粒粒皆辛苦。 Sympathy on the Farmers At noon, farmers are weeding, Down the field, sweat is dropping. Who knows rice on a dish, Every grain is full of moiling? 注意：1.结合短诗的内容，适当展开想象； 2. 突出短诗的主题，结构完整，语义连贯； 3. 词数80左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 4 假定你是李华，你的留学生朋友Tom在你市举办的中国诗词大赛(Chinese Poetry Contest)国外友人专场中获得一等奖。请你给他写一封邮件。内容包括： 1.写信目的； 2.表示称赞； 3.期待交流。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 5 你的美国朋友Tom对中国唐诗感兴趣，并请求你介绍一位你最喜欢的唐代诗人。请你给Tom回信，内容包括诗人简介及你喜欢他的原因。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 1 / 5 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $