Unit3 Writing How to get on well with your parents课件 2025-2026学年沪教牛津版（广州深圳沈阳通用）九年级英语上册

Writing Karida Unit 3 Family life 2025 09 16 Learning objectives 1. Master some practical writing skills; 2. Learn about how to get on well with your parents; 3. Write an article about the topic; 4. Share and corect your article with your classmates. Discussion What kind of problem do you face with your parents in your daily lives? How do you solve the problem? How can we get on well with our parents? Before-writing 书面表达 根据媒体报道，当前许多家庭问题越来越突出。有的孩子跟父母在电子产品使用上有矛盾，有的孩子和父母在思想观念上有鸿沟。针对这些问题，你们学校的英文校报开展主题为“How can we get on well with our parents?”的征文大赛。请你根据下面的内容要点，写一篇短文参加此次征文比赛,内容包括： 1. 列出2-3点当下孩子与父母相处的常见难题; 2. 根据矛盾，给出父母和谐相处的建议（至少3点）： 3. 号召同学们参与构建幸福的家庭。 注意： 1. 词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥; 3. 不得出现真实姓名和校名; 4. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。 参考词汇：privacy n. 隐私 electronic device 电子产品 压力 n. pressure/stress usage n. 使用 人称： 第三人称（children and parents) 、第一人称复数(we) 时态: 一般现在时、现在完成时等 Step 1 审题 写作指导 Part 1: 问题综述（列出2-3点当下困境） * One one hand, many children have difficulty in ... * On the other hand, ... Part 2: 过渡段（点出与父母和谐相处的重要性） * The relationship between children and parents is very important. *The followings are some of my suggestions. Step 2 谋篇布局 Part 3: 解决方案 合理借鉴More Practice部分观点 * To begiin with... * Besides … * Last but not least... Part 4: 号召共建和谐家庭 Let’s do all the things above to... 写作指导 Step 2 谋篇布局 1.说明相处现状：有的孩子跟父母在电子产品使用上有矛盾；有的父母在学习上给孩子过多压力；有的父母不尊重孩子隐私。 Presentation Nowadays, a few children have problems with family life.______ Para.1 have trouble doing sth. so+adj.+that put pressure on... It’s +adj. for sb. to do sth. Presentation 2.父母孩子关系的重要性及引出本文的目的： Para.2 The relationship between A and B is ... Here are some of my suggestions. Presentation Para.3 介绍3条父母孩子相处的建议： (1)我们应该减少电子产品的使用; (2)我们应该增加和父母的沟通交流; (3)...... Brain storming How can we get on well with our parents? Nowadays, a few children have problems with their parents. While-writing 15mins 互评时间 满分：15分 内容全面，无要点遗漏：6分 语法正确，句式丰富：6分 逻辑连贯，衔接流畅：3分 When you have written something, you should check your work to make sure the spelling, grammar and punctuation are all correct. Don’t forget to improve your work! Possible version Nowadays, a few children have problems with their parents. For instance（例如）, many children are complaining that their parents excessively（过度地） limit the usage of their electronic devices. It irritates（激怒） them to some extent（在某种程度上）. What’s more, a lot of children consider that their parents have put too much pressure on them to study, which makes them exhausted（精疲力尽的）. And it is well known that the privacy of children is not respected by their parents. Para.1 罗列问题 However, the relationship between children and parents is very important. So how can children get on well with their parents? The followings are some of my suggestions. Para.2 父母孩子关系的重要性及引出本文的目的 Para.3 介绍3条与父母相处的建议 To begin with, for the sake of（出于...的利益） our health and study, we should spend less time on electronic devices. Besides, it’s beneficial（有益的） for us to talk and share with our parents more often, so that they may understand your study pressure and try to be sensible（理智的）. Last but not least, part of growing up is learning to live with disagreements. Therefore, we should learn to understand our parents’ way of looking at things, for they may want to be closer to us through discovering our privacy. Para 4 号召同学们构建幸福家庭 If we do all the things above, we’ll have a family full of love and happiness. Nowadays, a few children have problems with their parents. For instance, many children are complaining that their parents excessively limit the usage of their electronic devices. It irritates them to some extent. What’s more, a lot of children consider that their parents have put too much pressure on them to study, which makes them exhausted. And it is well known that the privacy of children is not respected by their parents. However, the relationship between children and parents is very important. So how can children get on well with their parents? The followings are some of my suggestions. To begin with, for the sake of our health and study, we should spend less time on electronic devices. Besides, it’s beneficial for us to talk and share with our parents more often, so that they may understand your study pressure and try to be sensible. Last but not least, part of growing up is learning to live with disagreements. Therefore, we should learn to understand our parents’ way of looking at things, for they may want to be closer to us through discovering our privacy. If we do all the things above, we’ll have a family full of love and happiness. Thank you! $