Unit 1 单元主题写作过关讲练 2025-2026学年仁爱科普版（2024）八年级英语上册

Unit 1 单元主题写作过关讲练 内容概况 1、单元写作主题分析 2、过关练 · 职业选择、职业规划 · 职业探索、职业认知 · 兴趣与职业 单元写作主题分析 本单元的标题是“My Dream Job”，主题是“职业认知，职业选择，职业规划”，具体在内容上涉及到“了解各种不同的职业，探索不同职业的工作内容和特点”，以及“不同的职业选择，如何进行良好的职业规划和职业实现”。 通过本单元的学习，要求同学们能够用所学的知识来讲述“你对某种职业的认知和理解，描述你梦想的职业以及如何进行职业选择和规划”。 过关练 主题一：职业选择、职业规划 1．你对未来职业的憧憬是什么? 请你以 “I want to be a/ an _________” 为题写一篇短文。词数: 100词左右 (已给出的部分不计入总词数)，可适当发挥。 提纲 回答 What is your dream job? Which motto (座右铭) encourages you most? Why do you like this job? How will you get your future dream job? I want to be a/ an _________ I have a dream. I want to be ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假如你是李华，你的外国笔友Peter最近给你来信，希望你能分享对于未来职业的想法。请你给他回信，内容需包括： 1. 你的理想职业是什么； 2. 你选择该职业的理由（①兴趣爱好；②……）； 3. 你为实现职业目标的计划。 要求： 1. 词数为80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Peter, How’s everything going? I’m writing to share my dream job with you. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ What about your dream job? I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 3．梦想，犹如一座灯塔，为人生航船指明方向。为了帮助同学们更好地探索这份宝贵的指引，找到属于自己的未来，学校英语广播站特举办“My Dream Job”征文比赛。请根据要点提示，完成征稿。 要点：1. What’s your dream job? 2. Why do you want to be a...? 3. How do you make your dream come true? 要求：1.要点齐全，可适当拓展。 2.行文连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名； 4.字数不少于80词 (文章开头已给出，不计入总词数) My Dream Job Everyone has his/her own dream. My dream job is ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．2025年贺岁电影《哪吒2》热播，哪吒精神“若前方无路，我便踏出一条路 (If there is no path ahead, I will create one! )”极大鼓舞了很多人。假如你是李雷，观看完这部影片后，感触颇深，立志好好学习，健康生活，完善自我，请根据下面提示，写一篇英语短文，谈谈自己的理想和打算。 What do you think of the movie Ne Zha 2? What can you learn from it What’s your dream in the future? How are you going to do that? 要求： 1. 词数不少于70词，开头已给出，不计入总词数，书写认真规范； 2. 短文应包括表格内容，不要逐字翻译，语句通顺，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和校名。 My Dream I watched the exciting movie Ne Zha 2. Among all the things in it, the line “If there is no path ahead, I will create one!” deeply touched me. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．假如你是李华，你要给笔友美国朋友Tom写一封电子邮件。 内容要点如下： 1.我的爱好与梦想职业； 2.为什么是我梦想的职业； 3.如何实现梦想的职业。 注意： 1.要点齐全，适当拓展； 2. 行文连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名； 4.100词左右。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 主题二：职业探索、职业认知 6．在本单元的学习中，同学们已经探讨了部分因科技进步已经消失和即将逐渐消失的职业。然而，科技进步同样会催生众多新兴职业。现在，我们诚挚地邀请同学们放飞想象，构想一个你认为未来可能崭露头角的新职业，并描绘其特点与前景。期待你们的创意与见解。文章不少于50个词。 Suggested questions: 1. What new job do you think will appear in the future? 2. What kind of job will it be? 3. Why do you think so? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．为提高同学们的英语口语水平，学校决定举行以“If I become a teacher”为主题的演讲比赛。假如你是李华，请写一篇演讲稿参加此次比赛。 要求： 1. 80词左右。开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 短文应语句通顺，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 4. 有卷面分。（1）书写正规　（2）卷面整洁 If I become a teacher Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. If I become a teacher, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you! 8．请根据下面信息，写一篇短文，介绍你的未来： 我将来要成为一个优秀的医生。我将在一所大医院工作。每天我都在帮助病人恢复健康 (help patients to return to health)，给他们提供治疗 (give treatment to)，给他们提供健康建议 (give... some advice on health)。我还会去老人院 (the Old Home) 为老人服务 (work for the old) …我喜欢我的工作，因为我是一个有责任心的人 (a person with responsibility)。 要求： 1. 内容须包含所提供的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2. 书写认真，句子通顺； 3. 词数：不少于65词 (开头已给出，但不计入总数)。 I will become a better doctor in the future. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 主题三：兴趣与职业 9．今天英语课上我们学习了关于职业的话题， 了解了兴趣的重要性，老师给我们布置了写作任务，以“My hobby and my career”为题，用英文写一篇不少于70 词的短文。短文要包含以下内容： 1. 你有什么兴趣爱好？ 2. 你是怎样培养你的爱好的？ 3. 是否想把你的兴趣爱好变成你将来的职业？ My hobby and my career __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 1 单元主题写作过关讲练 内容概况 1、单元写作主题分析 2、过关练 · 职业选择、职业规划 · 职业探索、职业认知 · 兴趣与职业 单元写作主题分析 本单元的标题是“My Dream Job”，主题是“职业认知，职业选择，职业规划”，具体在内容上涉及到“了解各种不同的职业，探索不同职业的工作内容和特点”，以及“不同的职业选择，如何进行良好的职业规划和职业实现”。 通过本单元的学习，要求同学们能够用所学的知识来讲述“你对某种职业的认知和理解，描述你梦想的职业以及如何进行职业选择和规划”。 过关练 主题一：职业选择、职业规划 1．你对未来职业的憧憬是什么? 请你以 “I want to be a/ an _________” 为题写一篇短文。词数: 100词左右 (已给出的部分不计入总词数)，可适当发挥。 提纲 回答 What is your dream job? Which motto (座右铭) encourages you most? Why do you like this job? How will you get your future dream job? I want to be a/ an _________ I have a dream. I want to be ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I want to be a lawyer I have a dream. I want to be a lawyer. Never give up, and great things will happen. This motto always cheers me up. I am drawn to being a lawyer because I want to help people get justice. It’s cool to use laws to protect the weak. Also, I love arguing and finding solutions to problems. To make my dream come true, I’ll study hard, especially in subjects like politics and history. After class, I can read books about laws. Besides, I’ll try to take part in speech competitions to improve my speaking skills. I believe I can make it with hard work one day. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，包括梦想职业、座右铭、喜欢该职业的原因以及如何获得未来梦想职业，考生应注意不要遗漏这些要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“I have a dream. I want to be...”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“梦想职业是什么、鼓励自己的座右铭、喜欢该职业的原因以及如何获得该职业”几个方面重点介绍自己对未来职业的憧憬； 第三步，书写结语。可总结自己的梦想，或表达实现梦想的决心等。 [亮点词汇] ①be drawn to被……吸引 ②come true实现 ③take part in参加 ④make it成功 [高分句型] I am drawn to being a lawyer because I want to help people get justice.（原因状语从句） 2．假如你是李华，你的外国笔友Peter最近给你来信，希望你能分享对于未来职业的想法。请你给他回信，内容需包括： 1. 你的理想职业是什么； 2. 你选择该职业的理由（①兴趣爱好；②……）； 3. 你为实现职业目标的计划。 要求： 1. 词数为80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Peter, How’s everything going? I’m writing to share my dream job with you. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ What about your dream job? I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】参考范文： Dear Peter, How’s everything going? I’m writing to share my dream job with you. I dream of becoming an English teacher when I grow up and guide students to explore the wonderful world of language. I am eager to be an English teacher because I have a deep love for English. Reading English books and watching English movies allow me to explore different cultures. In addition, my English teacher, Ms. Brown, has greatly influenced me. Her classes are always lively and interesting. I hope to be a teacher like her and inspire students to fall in love with English. I have clear plans to reach my goal. First, I’ll work tirelessly to study English and improve my knowledge. Besides, I plan to join the English Club and practise speaking English every week. What about your dream job? I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：需包含理想职业、理由、计划等；语句通顺，无语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明自己的理想职业——英语老师； 第二步，阐述选择该职业的理由； 第三步，阐述为实现职业目标的计划。 [亮点词汇] ①grow up长大 ②be eager to渴望做某事 ③allow sb to do sth允许某人做某事 ④fall in love with爱上 [高分句型] ①I am eager to be an English teacher because I have a deep love for English.（because引导原因状语从句） ②Reading English books and watching English movies allow me to explore different cultures. （动名词短语作主语） 3．梦想，犹如一座灯塔，为人生航船指明方向。为了帮助同学们更好地探索这份宝贵的指引，找到属于自己的未来，学校英语广播站特举办“My Dream Job”征文比赛。请根据要点提示，完成征稿。 要点：1. What’s your dream job? 2. Why do you want to be a...? 3. How do you make your dream come true? 要求：1.要点齐全，可适当拓展。 2.行文连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名； 4.字数不少于80词 (文章开头已给出，不计入总词数) My Dream Job Everyone has his/her own dream. My dream job is ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Dream Job Everyone has his/her own dream. My dream job is to be an animal doctor. Because I want to help them when they are sick or hurt. I think animals should be treated with kindness, just like people, and I want to spend my life taking care of them. To make my dream come true, I will study hard in school, especially in science. I also help out at a local animal shelter on weekends to learn more. I read books and watch videos about animals and how to take care of them. I believe that by working hard, my dream will come true. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍梦想的工作是什么； 第二步，介绍想当兽医的原因； 第三步，阐述自己如何实现梦想。 [亮点词汇] ①take care of 照顾 ②come true 实现 [高分句型] ①My dream job is to be an animal doctor. (动词不定式作表语) ②I believe that by working hard, my dream will come true. (that引导宾语从句) 4．2025年贺岁电影《哪吒2》热播，哪吒精神“若前方无路，我便踏出一条路 (If there is no path ahead, I will create one! )”极大鼓舞了很多人。假如你是李雷，观看完这部影片后，感触颇深，立志好好学习，健康生活，完善自我，请根据下面提示，写一篇英语短文，谈谈自己的理想和打算。 What do you think of the movie Ne Zha 2? What can you learn from it What’s your dream in the future? How are you going to do that? 要求： 1. 词数不少于70词，开头已给出，不计入总词数，书写认真规范； 2. 短文应包括表格内容，不要逐字翻译，语句通顺，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和校名。 My Dream I watched the exciting movie Ne Zha 2. Among all the things in it, the line “If there is no path ahead, I will create one!” deeply touched me. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Dream I watched the exciting movie Ne Zha 2. Among all the things in it, the line “If there is no path ahead, I will create one!” deeply touched me. I like it very much because in the movie when Ne Zha faces difficulties, he always tries his best. He tries to save his parents even if they disagree. From the movie, I can learn that we should try our best to face any difficulties. As for me, I want to be a doctor in the future. When I become a doctor, I will try my best to help the sick people. To make my dream come true, I’m going to make three resolutions. Firstly, I’m going to study hard to get good grades so that I can go to a medical university. Secondly, I’m going to improve myself. For example, I will read more books on medicine in my free time to learn more about medicine. Finally, I’m going to play sports to keep healthy. It’s a good way to start an exercise program and eat less fast food. I hope my dream can come true. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：文章应该包括四个方面的提示要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，由电影《哪吒 2》中的台词及哪吒面对困难的态度，引出应尽力面对挑战的感悟； 第二步，表明自己未来想成为医生，帮助病人的梦想； 第三步，列出实现医生梦想的三个计划——努力学习、提升医学知识、保持健康； 第四步，表达对梦想成真的期盼。 [亮点词汇] ①come true 实现 ②in one’s free time 在某人空闲时间 [高分句型] ①He tries to save his parents even if they disagree. (even if引导的让步状语从句) ②When I become a doctor, I will try my best to help the sick people. (when引导的时间状语从句) 5．假如你是李华，你要给笔友美国朋友Tom写一封电子邮件。 内容要点如下： 1.我的爱好与梦想职业； 2.为什么是我梦想的职业； 3.如何实现梦想的职业。 注意： 1.要点齐全，适当拓展； 2. 行文连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名； 4.100词左右。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文 Dear Tom, How are you? I’m excited to share my hobbies and dream job with you. My greatest passion is playing the piano, and I dream of becoming a professional pianist. Music brings me joy, and I love expressing emotions through melodies. The reason I want to pursue this career is that music connects people across cultures. I hope to inspire others and spread happiness through my performances. To achieve my dream, I practice daily and take music lessons. I also listen to famous pianists to learn from them. Hard work and perseverance will help me succeed. Looking forward to your reply! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：一般现在时为主； ③提示：内容要点已给出，考生应按要求进行写作，需包含爱好与梦想职业、选择原因及实现路径三部分，不可遗漏任何信息提示，适当添加细节，注意行文连贯，表述完整并突出重点。   [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇问候并引入主题（爱好与梦想职业）； 第二步，详细说明梦想职业的原因； 第三步，阐述实现梦想的具体行动（练习、学习、坚持）； 第四步，用期待收到回复结尾。   [亮点词汇] ①dream of梦想 ②want to pursue想要追求 ③achieve my dream实现我的梦想 ④listen to听 ⑤learn from向……学习 [高分句型] ①The reason I want to pursue this career is that music connects people across cultures.（表语从句）   主题二：职业探索、职业认知 6．在本单元的学习中，同学们已经探讨了部分因科技进步已经消失和即将逐渐消失的职业。然而，科技进步同样会催生众多新兴职业。现在，我们诚挚地邀请同学们放飞想象，构想一个你认为未来可能崭露头角的新职业，并描绘其特点与前景。期待你们的创意与见解。文章不少于50个词。 Suggested questions: 1. What new job do you think will appear in the future? 2. What kind of job will it be? 3. Why do you think so? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】For reference: “A sustainable energy architect” might be a hot new job. These professionals will design systems that blend renewable energy sources like solar and wind with smart home technology. They’ll ensure buildings and houses are energy-efficient to reduce carbon footprints and save money for people. With the world focusing on climate change, this job could lead the way in green living solutions. Or: In the future, I think there will be a new job that might become very popular, and it’s called a genetic counsellor. A genetic counsellor’s job is to help people understand their genetic information. When we do genetic tests, we get a lot of data about our bodies, but it’s often hard to understand. Genetic counsellors are experts who can help us understand these data. For example, if you want to know if you or your family have a risk of getting a certain genetic disease, a genetic counsellor helps you understand those risks and tell you how to prevent or deal with them. They also share a lot of knowledge about genes and how they affect our health. This way, you can make healthier lifestyle choices based on your genetic information. I think this amazing job will help us understand our health better and protect ourselves and our families for the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，需构想未来可能的新职业并描绘其特点与前景； ②时态：时态为“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已通过问题形式给出，考生需围绕未来新职业的名称、性质及存在原因展开想象，适当添加细节，突出职业的创新性与时代关联性。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“科技进步催生新职业”的背景引出核心构想； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“职业名称、具体职责、存在必要性”三个维度描绘未来新职业的独特性； 第三步，书写结语。表达“期待该职业改善人类生活”的愿景。 [亮点词汇] ①a lot of 许多 ②for example例如 ③deal with 处理 ④focus on关注 [高分句型] ①With the world focusing on climate change, this job could lead the way in green living solutions. (with的复合结构作状语) 7．为提高同学们的英语口语水平，学校决定举行以“If I become a teacher”为主题的演讲比赛。假如你是李华，请写一篇演讲稿参加此次比赛。 要求： 1. 80词左右。开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 短文应语句通顺，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 4. 有卷面分。（1）书写正规　（2）卷面整洁 If I become a teacher Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. If I become a teacher, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you! 【答案】例文 If I become a teacher Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. If I become a teacher, I will make friends with my students. I will be friendly to them. If they are in trouble, I will try my best to help them. If I become a teacher, I will teach my students well and be always there to help them with their schoolwork. If I become a teacher, I will keep on studying and improving myself so that my students can get more from me. Becoming a teacher is my dream. I believe my dream will come true. That’s all. Thank you! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：一般将来时； ③提示：写作开头已给出，考生可以结合自己的实际情况展开文章内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己成为一名老师后会如何与学生相处、帮助学生及如何自我提升； 第二步，表达期待，梦想成真； 第三步，结束语，表达感谢。 [亮点词汇] ①make friends with my students和我的学生交朋友 ②in trouble处在麻烦之中 ③keep on继续 [高分句型] ①If I become a teacher, I will keep on studying and improving myself so that my students can get more from me.（目的状语从句） ②I believe my dream will come true.（宾语从句） 8．请根据下面信息，写一篇短文，介绍你的未来： 我将来要成为一个优秀的医生。我将在一所大医院工作。每天我都在帮助病人恢复健康 (help patients to return to health)，给他们提供治疗 (give treatment to)，给他们提供健康建议 (give... some advice on health)。我还会去老人院 (the Old Home) 为老人服务 (work for the old) …我喜欢我的工作，因为我是一个有责任心的人 (a person with responsibility)。 要求： 1. 内容须包含所提供的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2. 书写认真，句子通顺； 3. 词数：不少于65词 (开头已给出，但不计入总数)。 I will become a better doctor in the future. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I will become a better doctor in the future. I’ll work in a big hospital where I can help patients to return to health every day. My job includes giving treatment to sick people and giving them some advice on health. Besides hospital work, I’ll also go to the Old Home to work for the old. I truly love my job because I’m a person with responsibility. Making others healthy makes me happy. To achieve this dream, I’ll study medicine hard from now on. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文。 ② 时态：时态主要为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”。 ③ 提示：根据提示写作。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步：承接给出的开头，介绍自己的工作地点； 第二步：介绍自己的工作内容以及想成为医生的原因； 第三步：介绍为了成为医生要做的努力。 [亮点词汇] ①sick people病人 ②Besides hospital work除了医院工作 ③makes me happy使我快乐 ④achieve this dream实现这个梦想 ⑤from now on从现在开始 [高分句型] ①I’ll work in a big hospital where I can help patients to return to health every day. (where引导的限制性定语从句) ②I truly love my job because I’m a person with responsibility. (because引导的原因状语从句) 主题三：兴趣与职业 9．今天英语课上我们学习了关于职业的话题， 了解了兴趣的重要性，老师给我们布置了写作任务，以“My hobby and my career”为题，用英文写一篇不少于70 词的短文。短文要包含以下内容： 1. 你有什么兴趣爱好？ 2. 你是怎样培养你的爱好的？ 3. 是否想把你的兴趣爱好变成你将来的职业？ My hobby and my career __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My hobby and my career Different people have different hobbies. My hobby is playing basketball. When I was young, my family lived next to a stadium. My father used to take my sister and me to play basketball on weekends. From then on I began to love playing basketball. I spend all my free time playing basketball because I want to be a player in the future. I know teamwork is the most important in basketball games, so I have to practice hard. It is important to follow our interests, so I want to turn my interest into my career. And I will love it forever. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ② 时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生写作时应注意紧扣题目要求，涵盖爱好是什么、如何培养爱好、是否想转化为职业等要点，根据实际情况可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。    [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点明不同人有不同爱好，引出自己的爱好是打篮球； 第二步，讲述因小时候家邻体育场，父亲周末带自己和姐姐打球，从而培养出对篮球的热爱，以及为未来成为球员，利用空闲时间练习篮球，深知团队合作重要性并努力训练； 第三步，结尾表明遵循兴趣将爱好转化为职业的决心，强调会永远热爱。    [亮点词汇] ① different hobbies 不同爱好 ② used to 过去常常 ③ from then on 从那时起 ④ spend ... doing sth. 花费……做某事 ⑤ turn ... into ... 把……变成……    [高分句型] ① When I was young, my family lived next to a stadium. (含时间状语从句的复合句) ② I know teamwork is the most important in basketball games, so I have to practice hard. (含宾语从句和结果状语从句的复合句) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $